Lenfried- wrote:

Will mod, but the mod for EXH wasn't applied yet. PM me when the mod is applied and I'll start right away (well that is if i get the PM today or tomorrow).

DrawdeX wrote:

hi
sorry for the delay :v
requested mod via pm ~

4K = |1|2|3|4|

[box=Everything modded][NOVICE]
• 00:09:894 - Add a note, it still has the piano sound
• 00:11:191 (11191|1) - Move to 3, for hand balance
• 01:03:083 ~ 01:05:353 - I recommend moving those notes on the red lines, it's too awkward to tap on the white lines when hearing the hi-hat

[ADVANCED]
• 00:00:813 (813|1) - Move to 1? For hand balance
• 00:11:191 - Add a note, for the cymbal sound
• 01:23:353 (83353|2) - Move to 4, to balance with 01:23:515 (83515|0) -
• 01:26:029 (86029|0) - Move to 4, since they have the same e-guitar and cymbal sound on 01:25:785 -
• 01:34:542 (94542|2) - Move to 2, for hand balance

That's all ~
Good luck

jakads wrote:

Hi sherrysina! Requested from my queue!

I'm only supposed to mod over 4 stars map, but I'll mod ADVANCED also
Column: 1|2|3|4

[Overall]
How about adding new uninherited timing point at 01:34:867 -? still thinking about this timing section

[ADVANCED]

00:22:056 (22056|3) - Can't hear what's this following
00:24:650 (24650|1) - ^
00:25:137 (25137|0) - ^
00:26:110 (26110|3) - ^
00:26:921 (26921|2,27245|0) - ^
00:28:542 (28542|3) - ^
00:29:353 (29353|2,29840|2) - ^
-------------------------------^ e-guitar

From 00:42:326 (42326|0,42326|1) - to 00:52:623 (52623|1) - Make double->single

00:46:867 (46867|3) - Remove this and add notes at 00:46:867 (46867|2) - and 00:47:029 (47029|1) - no

00:55:299 (55299|3) - Extend until 00:56:272 (56272|1) - re-arranged

01:27:245 (87245|1,87407|2) - Delete these and 01:27:326 (87326|1,87326|2) - add 2,3

01:27:731 (87731|2) - What's this following? faint unindetified sound. maybe i should delete it

01:28:380 (88380|1,88380|0,88542|3,88623|2,88704|0,88867|3,88948|2,89029|0,89029|1) - How about changing like this?:


GL!!

Shinzo- wrote:

MOD READY

Mod by Request
Requested by sherrysina

4K

[1|2|3|4]

Mod Inside

[General]

AiMod

1. No Problem

Timing

1. No Problem

Difficulty

1. Fine

Hitsound

1. No Problem

Metadata/Song Setup

1. Turn Off widescreen support
2. Change the Tags II to 2 since II is already on the source

File/BG/etc.

1. Clear

[ADVANCED]

00:31:867 - you can add a note here, feel like missing
00:46:867 (46867|3) - change to normal note and 00:47:029 - add note here for piano
00:42:975 (42975|1,44272|2,45569|1) - this kind of sound is should be longer
00:52:542 (52542|2,52704|0) - move to 1 4 to make it more fit to the song, and better play
00:57:164 (57164|1) - move to 00:56:840 - cuz i hear kick on 00:56:840 - but didn't on 00:57:164 - you can see bangke's diff as refrence for this
01:05:677 (65677|0,65677|3) - delete one of it please, it just same like 01:04:542 (64542|1,64704|2,64867|3,65191|1,65353|3) - tho it has no cymbal it has drum, for now i keep that
01:12:164 - add note on 4 for consistency with 01:12:812 (72812|0,72812|2,72975|1,72975|3) -
01:23:434 - 01:23:758 - is this missing or what ? lol missing @@ added notes
01:28:461 - 01:28:785 - missing note pls
01:40:218 (100218|3,100218|0) - delete one of it, no snare keep
01:46:218 (106218|3) - move to 1, at least it's more readable
01:48:488 (108488|0,108488|3) - delete one of it, since it's diffrent with 01:47:840 (107840|2,107840|1) - and has no kick keep, cymbal has two notes
01:51:164 (111164|2,111164|1) - here too ^

ok gua ngemod dalem mobil [ ._.] lol XD
Good Luck mba nurul >w<

[ A v a l o n ] wrote:

chit chat

2015-10-31 21.21 sherrysina: ada waktu untuk IRC nggak? ;w;
2015-10-31 21.21 [ A v a l o n ]: i will do fast
2015-10-31 21.21 sherrysina: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/780899 DOUBLE HELIX - Our Faith (Faithful MTL Remix)]
2015-10-31 21.21 [ A v a l o n ]: lah keknya udah di mod map itu o.o
2015-10-31 21.22 sherrysina: karena sepi mod dan rasanya udah hampir putus asa nyari moderator...
2015-10-31 21.22 sherrysina: lebih milih IRC sekarang ;w;
2015-10-31 21.24 [ A v a l o n ]: p/4515044
2015-10-31 21.24 [ A v a l o n ]: masih kurang neng XD ?
2015-10-31 21.24 [ A v a l o n ]: klo mau di mod lagi jg gpp sih owo
2015-10-31 21.25 sherrysina: masih...
2015-10-31 21.25 sherrysina: rasanya kurang sreg
2015-10-31 21.25 sherrysina: yang diff ADV terutama ;w;
2015-10-31 21.25 [ A v a l o n ]: sebenarnya males bgt ini ngemod 2x ;w;
2015-10-31 21.25 [ A v a l o n ]: tp gapapa lah
2015-10-31 21.25 [ A v a l o n ]: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/780733 DOUBLE HELIX - Our Faith (Faithful MTL Remix) [NOVICE]]
2015-10-31 21.25 sherrysina: ehh
2015-10-31 21.25 sherrysina: gapapa nih beneran?
2015-10-31 21.26 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:05:921 - 1/4 gpp ini
2015-10-31 21.26 [ A v a l o n ]: masih fine
2015-10-31 21.26 sherrysina: okay..
2015-10-31 21.27 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:29:677 (29677|1,30002|0) - ctrl G
2015-10-31 21.27 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:30:326 - add note di kolom 1
2015-10-31 21.27 [ A v a l o n ]: soalnya drumnya udah nge roll disana
2015-10-31 21.28 sherrysina: hoo iya ya
2015-10-31 21.28 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:41:677 (41677|1,41840|0,42002|2,42164|3) - saran w diganti sama LN aja buat 1/6 drumnya
2015-10-31 21.28 [ A v a l o n ]: LN disini 00:41:677 - dan 00:42:002 -
2015-10-31 21.30 sherrysina: okay re-arranged
2015-10-31 21.31 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:02:110 (62110|2,62272|1,62434|0,62596|1,62758|2,62921|3) - ini juga kasi LN bisa kok
2015-10-31 21.31 [ A v a l o n ]: sama kerjanya mod kek diatas
2015-10-31 21.32 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:16:056 (76056|2,76218|1) - ctrl G for better flow ?
2015-10-31 21.32 sherrysina: oke added
2015-10-31 21.33 sherrysina: oke owo
2015-10-31 21.34 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:23:677 (83677|1) - delete ?
2015-10-31 21.34 [ A v a l o n ]: udah ilang drum party nya :v
2015-10-31 21.34 [ A v a l o n ]: stop disini sebenarnya 01:23:515 -
2015-10-31 21.35 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:24:488 - konsistensi 2 note nya udah ilang mulai dari sini owo
2015-10-31 21.35 sherrysina: 01:23:515 - sampe 01:23:840 - boleh add LN?
2015-10-31 21.36 [ A v a l o n ]: bisa
2015-10-31 21.36 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:42:650 - delete 1 note, no cymbal like 01:40:056 -
2015-10-31 21.37 sherrysina: 01:42:650 - berarti cuma 1 note ya..
2015-10-31 21.37 [ A v a l o n ]: ya
2015-10-31 21.38 sherrysina: oke owo
2015-10-31 21.38 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:49:299 (109299|1) - delete, ga ada drumnya ini
2015-10-31 21.38 [ A v a l o n ]: lalu 01:49:461 (109461|3,109623|2,109785|1,109948|0,110110|2,110272|3) - ubah jadi LN
2015-10-31 21.38 [ A v a l o n ]: sama kek sebelumnya
2015-10-31 21.38 [ A v a l o n ]: sebenarnya sih klo diff yg rendah buat suara2 /6 kek gini lebih cocoknya pke LN
2015-10-31 21.38 [ A v a l o n ]: *1/6
2015-10-31 21.39 sherrysina: hooo LN ya
2015-10-31 21.39 sherrysina: oke oke owo
2015-10-31 21.40 [ A v a l o n ]: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/780899 DOUBLE HELIX - Our Faith (Faithful MTL Remix) [ADVANCED]]
2015-10-31 21.41 sherrysina: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/780899 DOUBLE HELIX - Our Faith (Faithful MTL Remix) [ADVANCED]]
2015-10-31 21.41 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:10:867 - http://puu.sh/l4kcO/5fe2544325.jpg
2015-10-31 21.43 sherrysina: applied
2015-10-31 21.43 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:24:164 - mulai dari sini kok "flow" nya brubah ya ._.
2015-10-31 21.43 [ A v a l o n ]: w coba sih rada2 aneh XD
2015-10-31 21.44 sherrysina: nah iya...
2015-10-31 21.44 sherrysina: bingung how to fix nya ;w;
2015-10-31 21.44 [ A v a l o n ]: ;w; ini susah juga nih
2015-10-31 21.44 [ A v a l o n ]: soalnya kebanyakan ;w;
2015-10-31 21.45 [ A v a l o n ]: wait w baca alur dlu o.o
2015-10-31 21.45 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:24:164 (24164|3) - delete
2015-10-31 21.45 sherrysina: hweee ;w;
2015-10-31 21.45 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:25:137 (25137|2) - delete
2015-10-31 21.45 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:26:921 (26921|2) - delete juga
2015-10-31 21.46 [ A v a l o n ]: nah, abis di delete yg tadi, coba sesuaikan dlu notenya
2015-10-31 21.46 [ A v a l o n ]: abis itu di test aja
2015-10-31 21.46 [ A v a l o n ]: itu sih flownya udah lumayan lah, klo udah diapus
2015-10-31 21.46 sherrysina: okay owo
2015-10-31 21.47 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:26:110 - delete juga ni XD
2015-10-31 21.49 [ A v a l o n ]: saran w sih kek ini http://puu.sh/l4kxh/013e8ea190.jpg mulai dari sini 00:24:326 -
2015-10-31 21.49 [ A v a l o n ]: test aja, bakalan beda "feel"nya XD
2015-10-31 21.50 [ A v a l o n ]: udah ?
2015-10-31 21.50 sherrysina: baru kebuka pic nya..
2015-10-31 21.51 sherrysina: sudah owo
2015-10-31 21.51 [ A v a l o n ]: test
2015-10-31 21.52 sherrysina: masuk :3
2015-10-31 21.52 [ A v a l o n ]: njer
2015-10-31 21.52 [ A v a l o n ]: maksud udah d tst blom ?
2015-10-31 21.52 [ A v a l o n ]: ;w;
2015-10-31 21.53 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:29:353 (29353|2,29840|2) - ini delete aja nih
2015-10-31 21.53 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:31:948 (31948|0) - no sound, delete it plz
2015-10-31 21.54 [ A v a l o n ]: eh ada
2015-10-31 21.54 [ A v a l o n ]: gajadi
2015-10-31 21.54 sherrysina: fixed
2015-10-31 21.54 sherrysina: hee
2015-10-31 21.55 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:32:434 (32434|2,32434|3,32596|1,32758|0,32758|2,32921|3) - eni sebenarnya bisa byk variasinya XD . . ga cuman kek bgini aja sih bntuknya
2015-10-31 21.55 sherrysina: oke otw re-arrange owo
2015-10-31 21.56 [ A v a l o n ]: nanti aja re-arrangenya XD
2015-10-31 21.56 [ A v a l o n ]: kita lanjut dlu owo
2015-10-31 21.56 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:42:975 (42975|0) - biar asek bisa di jadiin LN ini
2015-10-31 21.56 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:44:272 (44272|2) -
2015-10-31 21.56 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:45:569 (45569|1) -
2015-10-31 21.56 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:48:164 (48164|2) -
2015-10-31 21.56 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:49:461 (49461|3) -
2015-10-31 21.57 sherrysina: dulu udah loh jadiin LN ._.
2015-10-31 21.57 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:47:515 (47515|0) - delete aja ini ga ada piano yg sama dengan yg lain
2015-10-31 21.58 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:57:326 - add 1 note, loud drum
2015-10-31 21.59 sherrysina: oke oke
2015-10-31 21.59 [ A v a l o n ]: 00:59:299 - kasi aja note di kolom 2
2015-10-31 21.59 [ A v a l o n ]: soalnya 1/3 soundnya udah start disana
2015-10-31 22.00 sherrysina: oke owo
2015-10-31 22.00 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:00:272 (60272|0,60488|3) - move to 3 1
2015-10-31 22.00 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:00:650 (60650|0) - ini ke kolom 4
2015-10-31 22.01 sherrysina: oke owo
2015-10-31 22.01 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:01:867 (61867|2) - ke kolom 2
2015-10-31 22.01 [ A v a l o n ]: ini turunin aja ke 01:02:110 -
2015-10-31 22.01 [ A v a l o n ]: ^01:02:191 (62191|0) -
2015-10-31 22.01 [ A v a l o n ]: jadiin 2 note
2015-10-31 22.02 [ A v a l o n ]: saolnya 01:02:191 - udah kosong, ga ada drum
2015-10-31 22.03 sherrysina: oke
2015-10-31 22.03 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:13:461 - mulai dari sini saya udah ga bisa berbuat banyak XD
2015-10-31 22.04 sherrysina: hee kenapa...
2015-10-31 22.04 [ A v a l o n ]: tinggal kamunya aja lg memikirkan giman enaknya pattern tersebut
2015-10-31 22.04 [ A v a l o n ]: bnyk amat neng ;w;
2015-10-31 22.04 sherrysina: hmm oke
2015-10-31 22.04 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:26:758 (86758|1,86921|2) - ganti jadi 1/4 drum
2015-10-31 22.05 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:29:353 (89353|2,89515|1) - sama
2015-10-31 22.05 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:31:948 - contohnya ini
2015-10-31 22.06 [ A v a l o n ]: eee 01:43:785 (103785|3,103785|1) - drumnya udah ga ada lagi XD
2015-10-31 22.07 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:46:542 (106542|1) - di delete aja gpp kok
2015-10-31 22.07 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:47:515 (107515|2,107677|3) - ctrl G
2015-10-31 22.08 [ A v a l o n ]: abis tu 01:47:840 (107840|2,107840|1) - pindah aja (jadiin 3 note buat cumbal)
2015-10-31 22.08 [ A v a l o n ]: *cymbal
2015-10-31 22.08 sherrysina: oke owo
2015-10-31 22.08 sherrysina: oke
2015-10-31 22.09 [ A v a l o n ]: http://puu.sh/l4ls0/04d1d9fc37.jpg noh hasilnya XD
2015-10-31 22.11 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:49:461 - http://puu.sh/l4lza/3c9c9c004c.jpg
2015-10-31 22.12 [ A v a l o n ]: itu aja sih dari w buat diff mu owo
2015-10-31 22.12 sherrysina: applied owo
2015-10-31 22.13 sherrysina: oke makasih banyak sensei ><

good luck for rank this map

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

hello Mba Sherry ^^
Mod Req On Group Chat xD
*note
Semua Hanya Pendapat Pribadi saya Jadi Mohon Maklum Bila Terjadi Salah Paham
saya Juga Baru dalam Dunia Mapping :3 soo sorry If i made a Mistake
Dan Saya juga minta maaf bila ada salah kata

Okay Lets Go :3

NOVICE

Prefectttttt >< nyaaww thanks >w<

ADVANCED

-00:32:921 (32921|1) - Ini ngikutin apa ya .-. gak gitu Ngerti :3?? - kalau saran sih mending gini aja (?) http://s19.postimg.org/3q9cr9kkj/Saran.png
- dari 00:59:029 - sampai sini 01:00:488 - Adalah Favorit saya :3 Cocok Banget Buat player Stream :3 huhuhu ><
- Oh ya Banyak Bagian Yang menurut saya Masih bisa di kasih Note (itu bunyi Kick (maybe)) Kenapa Nga di Tambahin aja mba ?? .-.?? hanya menyeimbangkan spread

Cuma Ini aja Yang Bisa Saya Kasih :" Melihat sisanya yang sudah sangat Bagus (Hope It Will Ranked)
Mohon maaf kalau Tidak membantu sama sekali bantu kok~

sherrysina wrote:

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

hello Mba Sherry ^^
Mod Req On Group Chat xD
*note
Semua Hanya Pendapat Pribadi saya Jadi Mohon Maklum Bila Terjadi Salah Paham
saya Juga Baru dalam Dunia Mapping :3 soo sorry If i made a Mistake
Dan Saya juga minta maaf bila ada salah kata

Okay Lets Go :3

NOVICE

Prefectttttt >< nyaaww thanks >w<

ADVANCED

-00:32:921 (32921|1) - Ini ngikutin apa ya .-. gak gitu Ngerti :3?? - kalau saran sih mending gini aja (?) http://s19.postimg.org/3q9cr9kkj/Saran.png
- dari 00:59:029 - sampai sini 01:00:488 - Adalah Favorit saya :3 Cocok Banget Buat player Stream :3 huhuhu ><
- Oh ya Banyak Bagian Yang menurut saya Masih bisa di kasih Note (itu bunyi Kick (maybe)) Kenapa Nga di Tambahin aja mba ?? .-.?? hanya menyeimbangkan spread

Cuma Ini aja Yang Bisa Saya Kasih :" Melihat sisanya yang sudah sangat Bagus (Hope It Will Ranked)
Mohon maaf kalau Tidak membantu sama sekali bantu kok~

no reply = fixed.
thanks!

Executionist wrote:

sherrysina executed mod.exe

[box=doyouevencallthismod.exe]

Overall

It's almost complete, just needs two difficulties which is around 2.4* and 3.4*

That's all I have. Good luck mapping this!

i think its fine about all diff :/ it have a N icon, H icon and I icon

Executionist wrote:

sherrysina executed mod.exe

[box=doyouevencallthismod.exe]

Overall

It's almost complete, just needs two difficulties which is around 2.4* and 3.4*

That's all I have. Good luck mapping this!

ALfarris wrote:

halo kak sherry '_')/

mod req on group chat :'3

novice

00:10:542 - add ln? until 00:11:191 - no
00:11:840 - add note no
00:13:137 - ^ ^
00:17:029 - ^ ^
00:18:326 - ^ ^

advanced

00:28:299 - add note? loud sound here no
00:33:975 - ^ ^
00:34:299 - ^ ^
00:34:623 - ^ ^
00:35:596 - ^^

can't too much
feel free to reject dan aku masih belajar :') gapapa >w<

Xenophilius wrote:

From Findus' Modding Queue

Layouts:

4k: |0|1|2|3|

ADVANCED

1. 00:06:002 (6002|1) - Move to |3|, same reason for HEXAUST. mm.. keep
2. 00:09:245 (9245|0) - This sound start 00:08:921 - (as you can see in HEXAUST) consider to keep for now
3. 00:10:867 (10867|3,10948|1,11029|2,11110|0) - Why this pattern, I suggest a simple |3|2|1|0| keep
4. 00:21:569 (21569|1,21894|1) - Why? Always try to avoid this type of random jacks. 00:21:894 (21894|1) - move to |2|
5. 00:46:867 (46867|3,47029|0,47191|2,47353|1) - These four notes are descending and close this part of melody. Make them |3|2|1|0| as I suggested in HEXAUST also. keep
6. 00:53:840 (53840|0,53921|2,54002|3) - Seems tricy. 00:53:840 (53840|0) - to |3|?
7. 01:48:975 (108975|1) - Move to |3|. Pattern like |0|1|0| are better for this type of drum.

hmm keep

Xenophilius wrote:

From Findus' Modding Queue

Layouts:

4k: |0|1|2|3|

BANGKE HEXAUST

1. 00:05:840 (5840|2,5921|1,6002|0) - These 3 notes for piano are exatly the same. So why not jacking or something like |0|1|0|?
2. 00:26:677 - No 2nd note here? Like 00:25:623 (25623|3,25623|2,25704|1,25704|0,25785|2,25785|3) - 00:24:812 (24812|1,24812|0,24894|3,24894|2,24975|1,24975|0) - 00:28:218 (28218|1,28218|3,28299|0,28299|2,28380|1,28380|3) -
3. 00:46:218 (46218|0,46380|2,46542|1,46704|0,46867|2,47029|1,47191|0,47353|1) - This is a part of melody and 00:47:515 (47515|2,47677|0,47840|1,48002|3,48164|2) - This is another one. So I don't think 00:46:867 (46867|2,47029|1,47191|0,47353|1,47515|2) - Is a good patter here my suggestion is: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3923757
4. 00:51:407 (51407|1) - Move this to |3| for pitch reasons.
5. 00:56:434 - Add note in |1|. This is strong. Louder than 00:53:840 (53840|0,53840|1,55137|1,55137|0) -
6. 01:49:785 (109785|0,109948|1,110110|2,110272|1) - These guitar notes are descending, try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3923784
7. 01:53:515 (113515|0) - Move to 01:53:596 - . The sound here is really, really low and moving this note will give you a geat emphatyzed finish for your diff-

Anima_Alumi-47 wrote:

Hi from queue

|1|2|3|4|

BANGKE's EXH

00:40:704 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3926991 ????? //ummm, i think nein

Great Map!

Good luck

Anima_Alumi-47 wrote:

Hi from queue

|1|2|3|4|

NOV

01:40:380 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3926952 re-arranged~

ADV

No change thanks >w<

Great Map! thank you!

Good luck

Critical_Star wrote:

Hi Sherry-nyan~ mod requested via pm~
just a suggestion here~feel free to reject!

column
1 2 3 4

NOVICE
00:52:623 - add a note for drum here, since u decided to follow these sound like u do at 00:55:218 (55218|1) - it won't make hard for novice diff :3
00:56:596 (56596|2,56758|1,56921|2,57083|3,57245|2,57407|1,57569|2,57731|3,57894|1,57894|2) - just a bit suggestion here, instead of following those drum sound how about follow those loud one only? like http://puu.sh/ldIOm/ace908e125.png it could be nice for novice diff :v
01:25:785 - add a note at 3? here should be double like 01:24:488 (84488|2,84488|1) -
01:27:245 (87245|1) - wrong column?xD move up to the blue line , i think u are trying to catch those drum sound at there and remove this 01:27:407 (87407|2) - since there isn't any main drum sound there that u are catching here :3
01:31:191 (91191|1) - whoops wrong snap! should be at the blue line~
01:46:218 (106218|0,106380|2,106542|3) - to make it easy i would suggest to use a hold note to emphysize those drum roll, something like http://puu.sh/ldJhl/ea0655d75f.png

ADVANCED
00:09:245 (9245|0) - this LN should end 00:10:461 - like in BANGKE diff~
00:09:894 - make double here? in Novice here u put double for this sound
00:42:326 - here should be double for crash, add a note at 2? keep
01:01:785 (61785|0,61867|1,61948|3,62029|2,62110|1,62272|0,62353|1,62434|2,62515|3,62596|2,62677|1,62758|0,62840|1,62921|2,63002|3) - hmm, how about something like http://puu.sh/ldK5Y/75b7f886d4.png ?
01:13:461 (73461|0,73542|3,73623|1,73704|2,73785|0,73867|3,73948|1,74029|2,74110|0,74191|3,74272|1,74353|2,74434|0,74515|3,74596|1,74677|2,74758|0,74840|3,74921|1,75002|2,75083|0) - it could be a little boring just only use 1-4-2-3 pattern for 1/4 stream maybe u can try to think out some other pattern~ re-arranged
01:25:785 (85785|3,85785|1,86029|3,86029|1) - these both double should be in different column between them since they are not the same sound~ decided to keep it for now

hope these could help~good luck!

Feerum wrote:

Requested Mod


Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |
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Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
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Hello sherrysina! You request to me this Map a few Days ago. Sorry that i didn't answer to you.
I take a quick look over your Mapset. it's good. But at this moment in my Eyes still not ready for Rank. I saw some wrong Snapped notes also some Parts that you need to Improve. Just let start!

General

Artist: Right
Title: Right
Source: Right
Tags: Right
AiMod: Right
Background: 1336x768 or 1024x786 is the best ratio for a BG. Your BG is NOT unrankable. But i made one in 1024x768 if you want you can replace it. BG
BPM/Offset: Right
Other: You don't need to Hitsound all Notes in a Chord. This is often to loud and unnecessary. It's not Unrankable but just let you know.

NOVICE

From 00:30:326 - to 00:42:326 - this part will be exhausting and hard to play for beginner. You have over 12 Seconds only 1/2 Stream. I highly recommend to make it a bit easier with little breaks of this long 1/2 Stream. Maybe with LN's or something else. I will give you some suggestions.
00:33:245 (33245|0,33407|1) - CTRL + G for better balance.
00:33:894 -

1st Suggestion

keep..
Here we break the long 1/2 stream with two LN's that fit's great to the Music because of the Guitar. Also it gives some variety to the Pattern
00:39:731 -

2nd Suggestion

Here we take another Break with 4 1/1 Beat LN's they also fit good to guitar. I would even add more to follow the Guitar until end. But its up to you
I highly recommend to accept at least on of these suggestions to make it easier for New player.

00:59:191 (59191|0) - This note is Wrong Snapped. When you try to Map the Drum move it 1/6 Beatline down to 00:59:137 -
00:59:353 (59353|1) - This note is Wrong Snapped. Again you didn't catch the drum with this one. Move it 1/6 Beatline up to 00:59:407 -

All Drums from 00:59:407 - to 01:00:488 - are 1/3 Snapped! All! You can keep it 2/3. Means Map every 2nd 1/3 Beatline. Then you have to move 01:00:042 (60042|1,60245|2) - to the next 1/3 Beatline! Also when you map only every 2nd Drum you need to delete 00:59:515 -
Try it out. Its up to you to map all 1/3 or just every 2nd. But please Check the Snapping here!
Overall not Bad but the Kiai is again an exhausting part just with 1/2 and some short Jumpstream. Don't know. Try to add some good fit LN's to give new player a little Break and some variation.

ADVANCED

00:24:650 (24650|1) - i can't hear what you mapped here? Theres no drum. No vocal. The Guitar don't change. I recommend to delete this one.
00:31:785 (31785|1,31867|0,31867|2,31948|1) - iegh (<- Some strange word thats no word but it should show you once..) i don't like these pattern! These are really hard to play for a advanced Diff. I recommend to change it to something like this:

Screen

re-arranged
To avoid confusing. I also rearranged some following pattern for better flow!
Oh yeah if you accept my suggestion you will see here 00:32:434 (32434|3,32596|3) - a little 1/2 Jack. Don't worry its for the guitar and fit awesome!

00:54:002 - Whoops. Looks like i didn't notice something in your NOVICE Diff. You have a Snapping conflict with ADV and NOV. Take a look

Screen

Left = ADV/ Right = NOV. The Notes in ADV are right so you need to fix the NOV diff please!.

00:56:272 (56272|1) - this you should also fix in the NOV diff. Different LN's are no no :c
01:12:164 (72164|0) - This LN has a different length then the LN in NOV. Fix this please.

Allright. Done. Hope i could help you. A bit different mod this time. Not everytime "add add delete move" thing :3

Edit cuz me Baka have forget to add some timings xD

hikikuman wrote:

Column: 1 | 2 | 3 | 4

NOVICE

00:29:677 (29677|1,30002|2) - ctrl J
00:54:002 - loud sound. add note at 2 no. it'll break the consistency
00:56:596 - ^3 added for cymbal
01:02:110 - add note at 3 for what?
01:30:975 - - 01:31:461 - it's a single note. change to double note so looks like at 01:25:785 (85785|2,85785|1,86029|0,86029|3,86272|1,86272|2) - and 01:29:677 (89677|2,89677|0,89921|1,89921|3,90164|0,90164|2) - it'll break the consistency. besides, there's no cymbal sound.

ADVANCED

00:31:299 (31299|0) - DELETEdelete, not a loud sound. *sorry caps from box title :p
00:42:218 (42218|3) - move to 2
00:42:326 - add note at 4
01:05:677 (65677|0,65677|3) - it's not a loud sound. choose one to delete. i suggest 1
I suggest you to make it like this↓ but if you didn't like it just ignore:)
01:24:488 (84488|1,84975|3) - move to 1
01:25:299 (85299|2) - move to 2
01:25:461 (85461|3) - move to 1
01:25:785 (85785|1) - ^
01:26:272 (86272|0) - move to 4
01:26:596 (86596|2) - ^
01:26:758 (86758|3) - move to 2
01:29:921 (89921|0) - move to 3
01:30:164 (90164|3,90164|2) - move 2 to left

01:32:758 (92758|3) - delete
01:52:299 - add note at 4
01:52:704 - ^2
01:53:110 - ^3
01:53:596 - ^3

-----------------------------------------------------------^^^^ All rejected. the reasons are: break the consistency, hand balance, and comforatble

Good Luck. Have a nice day:3