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GL for rank dude, and PM me if you have any questions !
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General Check
First of all, sorry to say that but your MP3 quality sucks ... I mean, listen at some parts like 00:20:961- , the sound is just horrible.
I know it's hard to find good MP3 of SDVX musics, but ewww...
/!\ There is a slowdown of the BPM at the end, change the BPM (I can help you if you want, PM me <: )
The metadata seems good !
I know it's hard to find good MP3 of SDVX musics, but ewww...
/!\ There is a slowdown of the BPM at the end, change the BPM (I can help you if you want, PM me <: )
The metadata seems good !
NOVICE
00:10:867 (10867|3) - Add a note ?
00:28:218 (28218|2,28380|1) - CTRL + H Looks cool with this pattern
00:55:137 (55137|0,55218|1) - Move to 1 2 ?
01:10:867 (70867|2,71029|3,71191|1,71353|2,71515|0,71677|1,71840|2,72002|3) - CTRL + H and change the end of the pattern, looks better.
01:43:948 (103948|2,104272|1,104596|0) - Add one note to each one ?
00:28:218 (28218|2,28380|1) - CTRL + H Looks cool with this pattern
00:55:137 (55137|0,55218|1) - Move to 1 2 ?
01:10:867 (70867|2,71029|3,71191|1,71353|2,71515|0,71677|1,71840|2,72002|3) - CTRL + H and change the end of the pattern, looks better.
01:43:948 (103948|2,104272|1,104596|0) - Add one note to each one ?
ADVANCED
00:09:245 (9245|0) - The start of this LN is at 00:08:921- (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3823371 you did it in the other diff lol)
01:10:867 (70867|2,70948|3,71029|2,71110|1,71191|0,71272|1,71353|2,71434|3,71515|2,71596|1,71677|0,71758|1,71840|2,71921|3,72002|2,72083|1,72164|0) - You have the same drum roll pattern 10 secondes ago, change it for something like this
01:13:785 (73785|3,73867|2,73948|1,74029|0,74110|2,74191|1,74272|0,74353|3,74434|2,74515|1,74596|3,74677|2,74758|1,74840|0,74921|1,75002|3,75083|2,75164|1,75245|3,75326|2,75407|1,75488|0) - There is seriously too much descending patterns, fixe the section pls.
01:28:542 (88542|2,88704|0,88867|3,88948|2) - a little bit undermapped imo
01:43:785 (103785|2) - move to 3
You really need to look at some ranked stream patterns to give you idees (Like the empress SC), your stream style is really weird/not accurate.
01:10:867 (70867|2,70948|3,71029|2,71110|1,71191|0,71272|1,71353|2,71434|3,71515|2,71596|1,71677|0,71758|1,71840|2,71921|3,72002|2,72083|1,72164|0) - You have the same drum roll pattern 10 secondes ago, change it for something like this
01:13:785 (73785|3,73867|2,73948|1,74029|0,74110|2,74191|1,74272|0,74353|3,74434|2,74515|1,74596|3,74677|2,74758|1,74840|0,74921|1,75002|3,75083|2,75164|1,75245|3,75326|2,75407|1,75488|0) - There is seriously too much descending patterns, fixe the section pls.
01:28:542 (88542|2,88704|0,88867|3,88948|2) - a little bit undermapped imo
01:43:785 (103785|2) - move to 3
You really need to look at some ranked stream patterns to give you idees (Like the empress SC), your stream style is really weird/not accurate.
BANGKE's EXHAUST
00:30:002 (30002|1,30002|0,30083|2,30083|3,30164|1,30164|0) - hum, change the pattern for something like 0 2 - 1 3 - 0 2
00:32:272 (32272|3,32272|2,32353|1,32353|0,32434|3,32434|2) - ^
00:44:272 (44272|3) - For all theses "ending of pattern notes" (like at 00:45:569 (45569|3) - and all the others after) maybe LN or add another note ?
00:50:758 (50758|3) - add another note ?
01:08:110 (68110|3,68110|2,68191|1,68191|0,68272|3,68272|2) - change the pattern for something like 0 2 - 1 3 - 0 2
01:10:704 - add a note
(your jumpstream part before the kiai is really good btw)
01:33:731 (93731|2,93731|0,93894|3,93894|1,94056|0,94056|2) - not the same sound, change the pattern
01:50:353 (110353|2) - seems really tricky to hit, maybe change the pattern or remove it ?
00:32:272 (32272|3,32272|2,32353|1,32353|0,32434|3,32434|2) - ^
00:44:272 (44272|3) - For all theses "ending of pattern notes" (like at 00:45:569 (45569|3) - and all the others after) maybe LN or add another note ?
00:50:758 (50758|3) - add another note ?
01:08:110 (68110|3,68110|2,68191|1,68191|0,68272|3,68272|2) - change the pattern for something like 0 2 - 1 3 - 0 2
01:10:704 - add a note
(your jumpstream part before the kiai is really good btw)
01:33:731 (93731|2,93731|0,93894|3,93894|1,94056|0,94056|2) - not the same sound, change the pattern
01:50:353 (110353|2) - seems really tricky to hit, maybe change the pattern or remove it ?
GL for rank dude, and PM me if you have any questions !