00:03:491 (1,2) - minor complain but (2) just feels too close to (1) seeing as how all the other slider are spaced fairly apart.
00:08:491 (2,1) - I guess the same can be said here too but both of these don't need to be fixed.
00:23:824 (2,3) - how come these are spaced but the other similar ones are stacked?
00:27:991 (3,4) - why (4) so close to touching (3)? ;;
00:28:491 (4) - space more for emphasis? maybe just move it down-right a little more so that slider leniency doesn't make this feel so under-powering. 00:29:991 (3,4) - like these two are spaced fine cuz SL doesn't really factor. idk, this all seems nit-picky tho lol
00:31:491 (2,3) - ^
00:34:491 (4) - repeat slider like you have here 00:36:491 (3) -
00:39:491 (1,2,3) - these could be 120° rotated something like:
http://puu.sh/l6pAn/d279d2eb01.jpg and then the (4) circle in the center
01:10:991 (4,1) - i'd rather see these two play out as a slider kinda like this
http://puu.sh/l6pHm/7abff15cb7.jpg but then youd have to move that curved slider elsewhere
01:55:491 (1) - seems kinda weird having another horizontal slider. maybe try different shapes with red points or make this another curve slider but not so horizontal
02:13:491 (1) - space for emphasis?
02:15:991 (1,2,3,4) - same here : x
02:39:552 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - dude, i love yummy streams
02:49:987 (1,2) - spacing here feels just a little off when you compare the relationships between all your current sliders.look at (8)->(1) and (2)->(3) and then you see (1)->(2) looks just a
taaad off. I'm sure it doesn't matter in the grand scheme of things but I think it can be slightly improved? idk lol
02:53:030 (3,4) - same here I think (4) can be spaced slight further or have a different direction or something. I understand if you don't change though cuz your ideas make sense too. These just my thoughts.
03:06:509 (5) - for this being an emphasizing beat I'd expect it to be emphasized tbh but the only emphasis I see is 03:06:726 (6,7) - when it's sort of dying down the voice already
03:13:465 (1,2) - emphasis like this is sugoi for the above
03:20:422 (4) - kinda weird spot I think because of the change in instrument. I think more emphasis would be better on the right side of the screen than so close to (3).
03:40:204 (8,9) - watch out for that spacing, looks rather high over here.
03:49:770 (1) - maybe curve slider a tiny bit more? ;;
04:00:856 (7) - i really like this section and especailly the stream leading to 04:03:900 (1) - nice
04:14:770 (4) - I think increasing the spacing here just a little more would be good cuz the spacing decrease is slightly too much from (3)->(4) coimpared to 1->2 and 2->3 (leniency)
04:32:161 (2) - y u no fast slider???? ;;;;;
04:39:770 (1) - i think the SVs in this section should be slightly tweaked throughout because it seems rather hard to read or may be inconsistent. I mean, 2.00 SV is quite high up there just saying. juuust sayin'. I'd go with 1.5 personally.
05:07:161 (1,2,3,4) - man this looks ugly yo, cant you just make it into a square?
06:01:509 (1) - man u should just cut the mp3 lol fuuuuk this boringass shit again xDDD
06:07:509 (1,2) - since you already have the square pattern from before, you can just copy pattern and rotate maybe 15° and make it bigger like a whirlwind or smth
06:24:009 (1,2,3,4,1) - could just make a star pattern already jeez xPP (a perfect star I mean)
I guess I was kinda nit-picky at first but it sort of came around once it got exciting.