1. Treasure (2.6 stars, 564 notes)

Garden wrote:

来支持一下

Narcissu wrote:

臣妾沒精力了，需要補魔……

Hello- wrote:

Hello =w=!
i'm not well modding. but, i'm hope my modding is helpful for you.

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General
1.Timing -8~-12? …… i think it should +10 Orz , timing not by me
2.HP Drain +1~1.5 so low. lol …… ok , HP6
2.Delete .osb……fix
3.Turn off Widescreen Support…… fix

Treasure
00:28:527 - 00:33:982 - 00:39:437 - 00:44:891 - add whistle. …… i just add 13 whistle and 24clap …… not follow music Orz
00:33:641 (2) - add clap
00:36:027 (3) - try move 148/324? i think better set with 00:34:664 (1) - last head. / or rotate 4, stack 00:30:573 - ?
00:47:277 (4) - add finish.…… fix
00:47:618 (5) - Ctrl+G? ……
01:20:346 - change finish?…… ok
01:31:937 (1) - blanket to 01:32:959 (2) - ……it's blanket too ??
01:42:164 (5) - Ctrl+G?
01:44:209 (3) - move 296/312 last head? …… ??
01:48:130 - maybe looks better add circle?…… i all 1/2 …… 1/4 a bit abrupt
01:56:482 (1) - blanket to 01:57:505 (2) - …… fix
02:25:459 (2) - change finish, off additions.…… fix
02:31:937 - no hear finish sound. you can off finish.…… e ……
03:57:846 (3) - reduce 03:58:187 - …… ok
03:48:130 - same 01:48:130 -
04:14:550 (6) - off finish.…… fix
04:23:755 (1) - change normal(additions) finish.…… fix
04:25:459 (6) - change finish, off additions.…… fix
04:46:909 (6) - NC.…… ok
05:12:025 (5) - ^……8note same color better ?
05:15:355 (1) - off NC?…… ok

veeeeeeeeeeeeeery good song! …… ::>_<::
good luck~

Kalibe wrote:

Hello, as requested in-game.

general:

nothing~

[Treasure]

00:53:755 (1) - expecting a jump here D: …… ok
01:01:596 (5) - try to avoid overlap? x: 168 y: 348 maybe... ? …… i think move more comfortable ;w;
01:15:573 (1) - moar spacing please ;w;…… i can't jump all download , it's a bit dull Orz
01:26:482 (1) - ^ same……
01:30:573 (3,4,5,6) - spacing here is weird for me, because i hear white tick is stronger than red so 5>4 in spacing imo. So maybe try this? : …… i prefer use my beautiful layout Orz https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4040247
01:37:391 (1) - x: 208 y: 188 ? ……ok
01:52:732 (4) - clap here is weird. I have idea : remove it and change sampleset to Drum, sounds better imo …… i don't think so - -
02:01:937 (6) - NC mayb? …… no nc better read ?
02:18:300 (1) - spacing is too small for me.
03:09:437 (5) - add clap with normal addition?…… fix
03:52:008 (3) - sounds off dude. It's snap on 1/16 lel ? …… you are right …… but i want to use 1/2……: http://puu.sh/lCiIu/bbadc809fe.jpg
04:01:937 (7) - also, maybe NC? it will be nice imo :3
04:25:459 (6) - with clap i hear finish too.……fix

Ok, that's all. Good map and really nice song tho :3

Have a starr (／・ω・)／ ⋆

Kyle Y wrote:

2.6 星的慢歌你想我摸什喵啦
給你星星好了

moonlightleaf wrote:

[Treasure]

00:09:777 - note……因为人声有蓝线所以从头到尾都没跟

00:20:687 扔3连?……放连打就没有干净的感觉了……

00:31:937 (1) - 漏了00:32:959 很难受……因为口琴有蓝线所以从头到尾都没跟

02:25:118 (5,6) - 没平行好难受 …… 唔……

04:42:138 (4) - ctrl+h的样子……因为是finish所以和正常的地方不一样……

05:46:513 - 3连?……为何……

摸不出啥...太水了orz

1. All clear.

1. 01:30:573 (3,4,5,6,1) - This star pattern's movement can catch player's off-guard, due to the first one having a different kind of movement(by first one I mean 01:08:755 (3,4,5,6,1) - ). And on top of that, I do not really like the movement of this pattern when looked over it individually, as the movement between the notes are getting suddenly bigger then smaller then bigger etc., personally I like the movement in the first star pattern than this.
2. 01:41:482 (3,4,5) - This is my personal opinion, but reducing the distance on (5) that much when (3) and (4) were basically 'far' jumps may have a negative effect on the movements of the player. Yes, this breaks off the consistency, but it reflects the instrument's 'mood' in this part when (5) is moved a bit more far apart.
3. 02:25:459 (6) - You might as well give a little bit more spacing on this note, as this is having the same cymbals like 02:24:437 (3) - . It feels a little bit weird to have the same distance like 02:25:800 (7) - this did, as in the other parts, 02:25:800 (7) - this note had a lower distance than any other notes in the same type of rhythm.
4. 02:41:482 (3) - Any reason why is there a normal addition on the head of this slider? I mean, there wasn't any in the other parts, but I don't see a specific reason for this to be here.
5. 05:41:025 (4,5) - Something similar like the movement point made above, this doesn't necessarily have to be under 05:39:695 (6) - , it just doesn't really reflect the mood of the song in this part(the stanza being the most intense one here). Instead, you could blanket 05:39:695 (6) - this note instead with these notes, which may give a better emphasis to the song's mood.

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Heya! Mod as requested in-game~

• Unrankable issues

1. My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
2. Small suggestions/nazi

[General]

1. All clear.

[Treasure]

1. 01:30:573 (3,4,5,6,1) - This star pattern's movement can catch player's off-guard, due to the first one having a different kind of movement(by first one I mean 01:08:755 (3,4,5,6,1) - ). And on top of that, I do not really like the movement of this pattern when looked over it individually, as the movement between the notes are getting suddenly bigger then smaller then bigger etc., personally I like the movement in the first star pattern than this.
   
   ……it‘s mean all star pattern like 01:08:755 (3,4,5,6,1) - ?? i prefer random jump , reasonably ≈ dull imo
2. 01:41:482 (3,4,5) - This is my personal opinion, but reducing the distance on (5) that much when (3) and (4) were basically 'far' jumps may have a negative effect on the movements of the player. Yes, this breaks off the consistency, but it reflects the instrument's 'mood' in this part when (5) is moved a bit more far apart.
   
   …… same as above , random jump have fun XD , i prefer to do lively not logic
3. 02:25:459 (6) - You might as well give a little bit more spacing on this note, as this is having the same cymbals like 02:24:437 (3) - . It feels a little bit weird to have the same distance like 02:25:800 (7) - this did, as in the other parts, 02:25:800 (7) - this note had a lower distance than any other notes in the same type of rhythm.
   ……ok,
4. 02:41:482 (3) - Any reason why is there a normal addition on the head of this slider? I mean, there wasn't any in the other parts, but I don't see a specific reason for this to be here.
   
   add jump when download ?? maybe it's a bit different with others ……
5. 05:41:025 (4,5) - Something similar like the movement point made above, this doesn't necessarily have to be under 05:39:695 (6) - , it just doesn't really reflect the mood of the song in this part(the stanza being the most intense one here). Instead, you could blanket 05:39:695 (6) - this note instead with these notes, which may give a better emphasis to the song's mood.
   
   ……e .. you are right , but looks very complicated ...

Overall a really good map, with great song and hitsounds. They are beautiful
GL!