1. rename to Beyond Sexy

1. The gap between Basic and Advanced somewhat far, as you can see on Basic you mostly use 1/1 rhythm. 2/1 rhythm with little variation of 1/2 rhythm, in the other hand on Advanced the SV diffrences with Basic kinda too far, then the rhythm kinda more complicated which is use mostly 1/2 rhythm and some 1/4 rhythm. Maybe you should consider to add a diff to fill that gap
2. I guess hitsound file normal-hitclap.wav not in use, you can delete that, then soft-hitfinish.wav have delayed around 5ms

1. 00:17:620 (2) - You can consider add NC there or swap with previous (1), to have more readable anti jump
2. 01:46:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - You can readjust them somehow, so the reverse arrow on 01:47:106 (1) - more visible when play
   
   As for me there are some unclear slider path, watch out when using a slider in a crowded place

1. 00:09:563 (4) - 00:06:649 (3) - Maybe you can consider to add NC there? somewhat like you did on the reast similiar anti jump 00:10:763 (1) - 00:17:620 (1) - 00:21:735 (1) - to make it more consistent
2. 01:35:449 (3,4,5,6,1) - I can't see (1)'s slider path clearly, because that may cause misleading clicking when play

1. 00:09:220 (2,3,4) - The stacking kinda not neat
2. 01:02:192 (1,2,3) - Maybe you can consider to add nc on each of them? so the player well prepared with the 1/3 rhythm there

1. 00:19:678 (1) - Maybe you can improve the rhythm there by using this rhythm http://puu.sh/kqWgF/d425597404.jpg. Because that long slider repeat kinda too empty not represent anything imo

1. 00:23:449 (2,3) - Why not stacking them with (1)? to prevent them to have sudden anti jump. Because I still consider this one as a Normal

Mako Sakata wrote:

[Kotori's Extreme]

1. 00:09:563 (4) - 00:06:649 (3) - Maybe you can consider to add NC there? somewhat like you did on the reast similiar anti jump 00:10:763 (1) - 00:17:620 (1) - 00:21:735 (1) - to make it more consistent okay! added
2. 01:35:449 (3,4,5,6,1) - I can't see (1)'s slider path clearly, because that may cause misleading clicking when play no change cuz added NC so player can see imo but ofc they are invisible patterns

Mako Sakata wrote:

[mel's Another]

1. 00:09:220 (2,3,4) - The stacking kinda not neat its fine imo
2. 01:02:192 (1,2,3) - Maybe you can consider to add nc on each of them? so the player well prepared with the 1/3 rhythm there seems a bit pointless

Mako Sakata wrote:

Helloo, very small sugestion from me

[General]

1. The gap between Basic and Advanced somewhat far, as you can see on Basic you mostly use 1/1 rhythm. 2/1 rhythm with little variation of 1/2 rhythm, in the other hand on Advanced the SV diffrences with Basic kinda too far, then the rhythm kinda more complicated which is use mostly 1/2 rhythm and some 1/4 rhythm. Maybe you should consider to add a diff to fill that gap this is fine imo, if it becomes an issue, i might just raise the difficulty of the basic
2. I guess hitsound file normal-hitclap.wav not in use, you can delete that, then soft-hitfinish.wav have delayed around 5ms mmmm k second one is fine though, because it increases in sound, and is not meant to have a definitive beginning.

[Beyond Extreme]

1. 00:17:620 (2) - You can consider add NC there or swap with previous (1), to have more readable anti jump
2. 01:46:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - You can readjust them somehow, so the reverse arrow on 01:47:106 (1) - more visible when play
   
   As for me there are some unclear slider path, watch out when using a slider in a crowded place both fixed

[Advanced]

1. 00:19:678 (1) - Maybe you can improve the rhythm there by using this rhythm http://puu.sh/kqWgF/d425597404.jpg. Because that long slider repeat kinda too empty not represent anything imo done

[Basic]

1. 00:23:449 (2,3) - Why not stacking them with (1)? to prevent them to have sudden anti jump. Because I still consider this one as a Normal i like it like this because it emphasizes the "here we go" a lot more imo. ill change it if it becomes an issue though

[]
Good luck

mithew wrote:

holy shit

Grieviious wrote:

great map dude

target audience is sub 1k, it is sight readable by people at that level. also bj

Kroytz wrote:

Best map of 2015 coming Soon™?? Or will I have to wait another 22 years?!

Mel wrote:

http://prntscr.com/92n925
lmao

Nerova Riuz GX wrote:

Yeah, it's fun
But only fun.

Mel wrote:

General

• add "foot fetish gif" in the tags

hs

00:53:278 (181) - move to x:288 y:160
01:13:163 (229) - NC

gl with ranking
kds pls