Sorry for the delay
[General]
- Hmm... the spinner circle and pass section still have some choppy edge, better smooth them so it'll look neat
- The pass section is cool, but the fail section is not good, try searching for another pic
- Make the kiai time of all diff in a same time (Beginner have a different kiai time in 02:24:508)
[Beginner]
- Consider decreasing the HP and OD -2 cause this diff is for novice
00:48:242 (1) - move this forward to 00:48:622 and end it at 00:50:711
01:58:685 (1,2,3,4) - add hitsound in this section plz
02:10:837 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
02:40:457 (2) - confusing cause there are 5 sliders before this that only have 1 repeat
Combo mod
[Normal]
00:48:052 (1) - forward this to 00:48:622 and end it at 00:50:711
02:42:356 (1) - end the spinner at 02:48:812
Combo mod
[Hyper]
- Increase HP drain by 1
- A hard diff that have a lower slider velocity than normal is kinda strange, well I see you used a 2x bpm speed but still....I'm not sure
- Combo color 1 and 2 is to similar, you should change 1 of them
02:42:356 (1) - end the spinner at 02:48:812
Combo mod
[Another]
Increase HP drain by 4
Combo mod
I can see some room for improvement
Good Luck~
Star
Give Kudosu to Shulin because you use his mod post
[General]
- Hmm... the spinner circle and pass section still have some choppy edge, better smooth them so it'll look neat
- The pass section is cool, but the fail section is not good, try searching for another pic
- Make the kiai time of all diff in a same time (Beginner have a different kiai time in 02:24:508)
[Beginner]
- Consider decreasing the HP and OD -2 cause this diff is for novice
00:48:242 (1) - move this forward to 00:48:622 and end it at 00:50:711
01:58:685 (1,2,3,4) - add hitsound in this section plz
02:10:837 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
02:40:457 (2) - confusing cause there are 5 sliders before this that only have 1 repeat
Combo mod
SPOILER
00:24:508 (5) - NC
00:26:027 (1) - remove NC
00:31:343 (3) - NC
00:36:660 (3) - ^
00:42:736 (4) - ^
01:12:356 (4) - ^
01:13:116 (1) - remove NC
01:31:343 (3) - NC
01:43:495 (5) - ^
01:49:571 (5) - ^
01:55:647 (3) - ^
00:26:027 (1) - remove NC
00:31:343 (3) - NC
00:36:660 (3) - ^
00:42:736 (4) - ^
01:12:356 (4) - ^
01:13:116 (1) - remove NC
01:31:343 (3) - NC
01:43:495 (5) - ^
01:49:571 (5) - ^
01:55:647 (3) - ^
[Normal]
00:48:052 (1) - forward this to 00:48:622 and end it at 00:50:711
02:42:356 (1) - end the spinner at 02:48:812
Combo mod
SPOILER
00:32:103 (7) - NC
00:32:483 (1) - remove NC
00:35:141 (6) - NC
01:00:964 (5) - ^
00:32:483 (1) - remove NC
00:35:141 (6) - NC
01:00:964 (5) - ^
[Hyper]
- Increase HP drain by 1
- A hard diff that have a lower slider velocity than normal is kinda strange, well I see you used a 2x bpm speed but still....I'm not sure

- Combo color 1 and 2 is to similar, you should change 1 of them
02:42:356 (1) - end the spinner at 02:48:812
Combo mod
SPOILER
00:32:103 (7) - NC
01:43:875 (1) - remove NC then add NC on 01:45:014 (12)
02:26:027 (1) - remove NC then add NC on 02:27:546 (7)
01:43:875 (1) - remove NC then add NC on 01:45:014 (12)
02:26:027 (1) - remove NC then add NC on 02:27:546 (7)
[Another]
Increase HP drain by 4
Combo mod
SPOILER
Sorry can't find this diff pattern
I can see some room for improvement
Good Luck~
Star
Give Kudosu to Shulin because you use his mod post
