Overall :
关于难度名，通常一般都写成[Another][Hyper]
只有首字母是大写的。

[Beginner]
有些微小的spacing问题，以下指出一些部分
(小声的问下，你谱图的时候使用distance snap功能么？使用这个功能下note的话，他会自动按照等时间，
等距离的下note)
01:43:495 (4) - move 2 grid to the left(level 3)
01:45:774 (7,8,1) - spacing problem,set the same spacing as 01:45:014 (6,7)
01:57:736 (6) - make it end on 01:58:116
02:42:546 (1) - set the 1.5 spacing as 02:41:597 (1,2)

[Normal]
00:33:622 (4,5) - set the double spacing as 00:34:761 (5,6)
00:42:736 (1,2) - 尽量吧slider设在白线上，这样节奏比较稳定。你这里slider的尾端放在了蓝线上，
如果能放在白线上比较好。如果你修改了，记得也要同时修改spacing
00:46:723 (3,4) - 吧这两个slider的尾端放在红线上。现在处于蓝线和红线的中间,这样节奏上就不太好了xD
00:57:926 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 全部吧slider的尾端设在白线上会比较好
01:05:521 (3,4,1,2,3) - ^
01:10:078 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^
怎么那么多slider的尾端都没有放在线上？（是不是你修改过Slider Volocity了？还是说故意这么做的？)
后面也有很多slider都有这样的情况，我就不再累赘。
01:46:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - spacing有些微小的混乱，因为节奏上是相同的，所以建议下成完全
同样的间隔

[HYPER]
sound better if you use sliderticke 1.0(suggestion)
00:15:774 (2,3) - set the same spacing as 00:15:394 (1,2)
01:10:458 --->>01:14:445 这一段的spacing和节奏有点混乱
使用distance snap功能来下note会比较好(suggestion)
02:42:356 (1) - 设条绿线，使这个spinner完全静音，听起来会更好

[ANOTHER]
00:48:622 (7) - 不要让slider头和尾重叠，这是unrankable的式样。
01:00:964 (1) - 重叠，unrankalbe式样,一些老图这种式样是被允许的，因为规则已经改变，所以这种
式样全部都不允许了。建议修改
02:30:014 (1) - spinner太短了。auto也只能转1000分
规则规定auto至少可以转2000分才是rankable式样，建议修改 ^^
02:42:356 (1) - 设条绿线，使这个spinner完全静音（和Hyper同样的建议xD)

Star!

>>>小声的问下，你谱图的时候使用distance snap功能么？使用这个功能下note的话，他会自动按照等时间

不太熟習所以沒開distance snap

>>>怎么那么多slider的尾端都没有放在线上？（是不是你修改过Slider Volocity了？还是说故意这么做的？)
后面也有很多slider都有这样的情况，我就不再累赘。

沒改Slider Volocity,只是以前的Beat snap divisor是1/6,後來改成1/4,所以部份slider的尾端變成没放在線上


以上問題大至上已經修改,感謝指導=]

star, one favorite song.

well add " ROOTS26S " to tag, this song first out at spinoff-drama-cd of beatmania.
beatmania IIDX spin-off drama ROOTS26S[suite] Vol.1 if I remember correctly.

gl!

dvorak wrote:

star, one favorite song.

well add " ROOTS26S " to tag, this song first out at spinoff-drama-cd of beatmania.
beatmania IIDX spin-off drama ROOTS26S[suite] Vol.1 if I remember correctly.

gl!

thank , yes it is beatmania IIDX spin-off drama ROOTS26S[suite] Vol.1 ,

i will add "ROOTS26S" tag now

NI HAO

Ah, a game from Konami

[General]
Add "konami" in tags, since this game from Konami

[Breaks]
00:50:236 ~ 00:57:546 (B) - Map this break for all diff
02:03:907 ~ 02:10:457 (B) - ^
02:30:964 ~ 02:36:280 (B) - ^

[Kiai]
There's some kiai doesn't fit at all for all diff except Another, delete this part in Timing Setup
01:28:305 ~ 01:41:122
02:36:660 ~ end (including Another diff)

And then add a part with kiai
01:40:837 ~ 02:04:856

[Beginner]
00:09:698 (1) - Cut short this slider to 00:10:267 in timeline
00:11:217 (2) - This slider is not following rhythm or music, IMO. Try move backward to red tick in timeline and cut short this slider to white tick in timeline
00:14:635 (4) - Move 2 grid right + 1 grid down?
00:16:913 (1) - No new combo here
00:18:432 (1) - ^
00:24:508 (1) - ^
00:26:027 (3) - New combo here
01:50:584 (1) - Not snapped in timeline, snap this spinner to red tick and then cut short this spinner to 01:52:609 in timeline
02:12:356 (1) - No new combo here
02:15:394 (1) - ^
02:26:027 (1) - ^
02:38:179 (1) - ^

[Normal]
00:17:673 (3) - Clap doesn't suite here, remove clap and add a clap at 00:18:052 (4)
00:18:432 (1) - Clap doesn't suite better too, remove clap and add a finish
00:42:356 (x) - Add note here?
01:07:040 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This slider doesn't stack perfectly, remap this and make sure stack perfectly
01:08:559 (3) - Extend this slider to white tick in timeline
01:28:305 (1,2) - This slider doesn't stack perfectly, remap this and make sure stack perfectly
01:31:343 (4,5) - ^
01:33:242 (6,1) - ^
01:43:875 (5,6) - ^
01:49:192 (1) - Move the new combo to 01:49:571 (2)?
01:55:647 (5) - New combo here?
01:58:685 (10) - ^
02:11:597 (1,1,1) - No new combo here
02:14:635 (1,1) - ^
02:26:027 (3,4) - This slider doesn't stack perfectly, remap this and make sure stack perfectly
02:36:660 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - ^
02:42:641 (1) - Silence this spinner suite better

[Hyper]
00:22:230 (3) - Maybe, add 1 repeating slider here?
00:42:736 (4) - Extend this slider to white tick in timeline
00:43:495 (5) - ^
00:58:685 (1,1,1) - Remove the new combo please, combo spammer LOL
01:39:698 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) - Spacing error here
02:30:014 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have a bonus at least 2000 (current 0)) I suggest you to replace this spinner to slider

[Another]
Some pattern are boring, about replace 2 notes into slider? You can replace 2 notes into slider if 2 notes are unnesecary. And then, check the spacing please
00:15:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Don't stack please
00:26:976 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have a bonus at least 2000 (current 1000)) I suggest you to replace this spinner to slider
00:41:407 (7) - Extend this slider to white tick in timeline
00:57:926 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Combo spammer! Remove the new combo if unnescesary
01:00:841 (1) - Unsnapped in timeline
01:04:002 ~ 01:14:635 (K) - This kiai doesn't fit at all, remove it?
01:04:002 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Don't stack please
01:38:748 (6) - This slider is overlapped themself, remove this or replace to parallel slider?
02:10:837 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Combo spammer! Remove the new combo if unnescesary
01:40:837 (1) - Cut short this slider to red tick

Please fix this, and I recheck it
Nice song
STAR

fix this now , please recheck thank


>>02:03:907 ~ 02:10:457 (B) - Map this break for all diff
[Another] must add too?

owl13 wrote:

>>02:03:907 ~ 02:10:457 (B) - Map this break for all diff
[Another] must add too?

Yes

Recheck time

[General]
1) Check the spacing for all diff
2) You forgot to fix about breaks

[Beginner]
00:11:217 (2) - Move backward to red tick in timeline
01:46:533 (8) - New combo
01:47:293 (1) - Remove new combo

[Normal]
No BPM Adjustment is 2x, it could be difficult for Beginner Player
00:28:305 (2) - Extend this slider to white tick in timeline
00:29:065 (3) - ^
00:29:824 (4) - ^
02:00:394 (4) - Cut short this slider to red tick in timeline

[Hyper]
00:26:976 (1) - Still unrankable, delete this spinner, and then, make a slider

[Another]
01:02:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This 1/8 stream are unrankable, use 1/4 stream
01:51:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^

Thank

i'm Alreadyfix it

now [Normal] i edit the slider velocity , fix to 1X now

i use Aimod check the [Beginner][Normal][Hyper] is no problems now , Perhaps need recheck

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

ok thank ,

Done , And i add the x2 warning for [Another] and [Hyper] now

General:

-- Black is a bad combo color please change it.
-- You need a hitcircle overlay.
-- Remove "IIDX Beatmania" from tags, not necessary.

Beginner:

-- Remove audio lead in.
-- Recheck spacing with "Distance snap" active.

00:12:356 (1,2,3) - Too close.
00:15:394 (1,2) - ^
00:25:267 (6,1) - ^
00:35:141 (2,3) - ^
00:46:343 (2,3,4) - Confusing notes for beginner.
01:00:964 (5) - New combo.
01:11:597 (3,4) - Too far.
01:13:116 (1,2) - ^
01:14:635 (3,4,5) - ^
01:28:305 (1,2,3) - ^ etc make sure to recheck spacing.
01:37:419 (5) - New combo.
01:40:837 - Start kiai here.
01:50:900 (1) - Add finish.
02:01:723 (1) - End at 02:04:761
02:24:508 (1,2,3,4) - Hidden slider ends might confuse new player.
02:42:546 (1) - Consider spinner here like [Normal]

Normal:

00:25:837 -- Raise overall volume from here. By 2 or 3 ticks.
01:10:078 (1) - Slider hidden by previous note.

Some hidden sliders but most play fine.

Hyper:

- Use same kiai as other difficulties.
- Please recheck all spacing, some is confusing to play.

00:15:394 (1) - Jump is hard to read.
01:13:780 (3) - Start on white tick (01:13:875)?
01:58:685 (1,2) - Spacing. Too close.
02:37:989 (5,1) - ^ Too far, hard to read.

Another:

-- Make kiai the same.
-- Recheck all spacing! Lots are too far others too close. This difficulty is really confusing to play.
-- x2 slider velocity does not suit this song imo.

00:22:989 (1,2,3,4) - Unrankable. Slider returns and notes are hidden D:
00:31:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing?
00:33:622 (8,9) - ^ too close.
00:33:622 (8) - Ends on yellow tick make it land on white tick.
00:34:192 (9) - Ends on yellow tick make it land on white tick.
00:38:179 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slider returns are completely hidden. [Unrankable]
00:41:407 (7,1,2,3) - Spacing.
01:02:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - Stream doesn't fit anything in the music.
01:41:217 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Confusing rhythm, and spacing again.
02:13:875 (1) - Unexpected slowdown.
02:42:356 (1) - Make this spinner longer.

The easier difficulties were more fun. Keep working on it

ok, thanks , i will Edit it ,

Now I'm fixed spacing note as [B][N][H] diff,

[A] i need some time to recheck it , i will keep working it =]

Hi

Beginner
01:43:495 (4) - Hitsound clap
01:45:014 (6) - Hitsound clap
01:47:293 (2) - Hitsound clap
01:48:812 (4) - Hitsound clap
01:50:331 (6) - Hitsound clap

Normal
01:35:521 (2) - Hitsound clap
01:37:040 (1) - Hitsound clap
01:40:457 (7) - Hitsound Finish
02:13:875 (5) - New combo here
02:30:204 (4) - Add a beat here

Hyper
00:15:014 (6) - 1 grid down, 1 grid right
00:18:432 (1) - New combo here
01:00:964 (5) - New combo here
01:35:331 (2,3) - Hitsound clap
01:35:331 (2,3) - Fix spacing
01:36:850 (5,6) - Hitsound clap

Another
General : re-check general spacing
00:34:192 (9,1) - This is rhythm out
01:52:609 (17) - Hitsound finish or clap

k starr*

thank you , i fix this now =]

[Beginner]
02:43:495 - long and empty, maybe add break time?

[Hyper]
02:14:635 (2) - new combo?
02:41:470 (2) - snap this note with 1/4 on blue tick

^w^)/☆

orioncomet wrote:

[Beginner]
02:43:495 - long and empty, maybe add break time?

[Hyper]
02:14:635 (2) - new combo?
02:41:470 (2) - snap this note with 1/4 on blue tick

^w^)/☆

o my god....save before note to fall back o_o

done.

thank =]

Beginner
00:09:698~00:15:204 这段音量略小些?

01:40:837(x) - note,hitsound finish
01:46:154(x) - note

Normal
00:12:356~00:15:014 试试逐渐加强的音量?

00:15:014(8) - 结束处加finish
00:27:546(x) - note

Hyper

00:09:698~00:15:204 音量略小些?

Another
00:26:407(3) - 这个spacing有问题

最后,kiai最好统一一下吧...

starrr~

thank ,已修改KIAI

Sorry for the delay

[General]
- Hmm... the spinner circle and pass section still have some choppy edge, better smooth them so it'll look neat
- The pass section is cool, but the fail section is not good, try searching for another pic
- Make the kiai time of all diff in a same time (Beginner have a different kiai time in 02:24:508)

[Beginner]
- Consider decreasing the HP and OD -2 cause this diff is for novice
00:48:242 (1) - move this forward to 00:48:622 and end it at 00:50:711
01:58:685 (1,2,3,4) - add hitsound in this section plz
02:10:837 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - ^
02:40:457 (2) - confusing cause there are 5 sliders before this that only have 1 repeat
Combo mod

[Normal]
00:48:052 (1) - forward this to 00:48:622 and end it at 00:50:711
02:42:356 (1) - end the spinner at 02:48:812
Combo mod

[Hyper]
- Increase HP drain by 1
- A hard diff that have a lower slider velocity than normal is kinda strange, well I see you used a 2x bpm speed but still....I'm not sure
- Combo color 1 and 2 is to similar, you should change 1 of them
02:42:356 (1) - end the spinner at 02:48:812
Combo mod

[Another]
Increase HP drain by 4
Combo mod

I can see some room for improvement
Good Luck~
Star

Give Kudosu to Shulin because you use his mod post

OMG ! I'm sorry very much to Shulin , i replyed forget Pressing down this


All Done ,but i need some time redo the skin , thank you ^^

•Overall•
HAAARG! Combo's colours (Gray and White) are hard to see!!! Change them or change the skin or change the BG.

•Another•
00:42:356 (2,3) - Wrong spacing.
00:46:723 (1,2) - ^
01:08:559 (1) - Make this slider more linear and symmetric.
01:38:369 (6) - Ugly slider.
01:47:293 (2,4,6) - Wrong spacing.
01:49:571 (8,10,11) - ^
02:01:154 (5) - Make this slider ends here 02:03:052
02:22:989 (1,2) - Huh? Strange.
02:27:926 (2) - Wrong spacing.

•Hyper•
00:26:027 (1,2,3,4) - Make this combo further from the previous combo.

•Normal•
Reduce the Overall difficulty and the HP Drain Rate to 4.
Good.

•Easy•
Reduce the Overall difficulty and the HP Drain Rate to 3.
Good.

Nice map, good song~
Star~

All Done

thank you =]

[General]:

1. 你需要hitcircleoverlay.png来使得这个map可以被rank

[Beginner]:

1. 无问题

[Normal]:

1. 00:01:723 (1) - 这个在offset前的spinner不知道行不行...
2. 01:51:090 (5) - Orz 换个造型吧

[Hyper]:

1. spinner同Normal
2. 00:13:875 (1,2,3) - spacing
3. 00:17:673 (2,3,4) - ^

[Another]:

1. BG和Combo Color搭配的不是很好 太暗了
2. 01:34:951 (2) - 这个关掉Grid Snap来放 类似情况也一样
3. 01:57:356 (2,4) - 可以放更远点
4. 建议把结束时间改成和其他难度相同

star~

嗯,搞好了 , THANK

offset直接弄前

Hmm...
[:]You can change
[>>]Need to change

General
:Offset 1.710

Normal
>>2:41:584 This isn't acceptable, you can't start a spiner and a slider at the same time.

Everything seems okay...

thank you, fixed now

[Another]
01:40:837 (1) - sound some strange...

just.

dksslqj wrote:

[Another]
01:40:837 (1) - sound some strange...

just.

thank you , yes this is strange

Hi OWL~~
見到係日文歌，於是趁wmf未發現之前過左黎mod先 XD
我唔係專業，但希望幫到你啦 (想搵專業ge，或者去M群搵wmf啦~)

[General]
你改左offset，但仲未resnap all notes, 4個難度都係。

[Beginnner]
頭3個timing section，不如加audio漸大效果?
頭2個timing seciion可以唔駛咁大聲，特別係頭一個....我完全被第一個slider果種尖叫嚇親
00:16:140 (2) 加finish
00:17:673 (1) 同 00:16:140 (2) 平行?
00:19:178 (1) 加finish, 最好加埋落2同3到，不然有d唔完整ge感覺..
00:42:736 (1) 加FINISH,取消whistle
00:43:482 (2) 取消finish
00:44:431 (3) 將第2個back 由finish改做whistle
00:48:608 (1) 用finish會唔會好d?
01:00:204 (4) 拉返佢落黎少少好d.
01:08:559 (1) beginner級, 係spinner後面加個1/1 note，新手應該九成會miss ：
或者考慮下將spinner 在01:08:545終止， 然後個slider取消back， 係01:09:304開始?
01:10:823 (2) new combo? and remove rew combo at 01:11:583 (1)
01:12:342 (2) ^
01:13:861 (2) new combo
01:29:824 (2) 拉成對稱，好睇d
01:31:330 (1) 拉圓d，而家有d起角
01:35:887 (3) 拉右一grid，令到佢同(2)成直線
01:36:646 (4) 拉右同上一grid，同(3)成直線
01:37:406 (1) 左一grid，同(4)成直線
01:39:318 (2) 拉成對稱
02:04:742 (1) 用finish好d?
02:19:937 (1) ^
02:28:672 (2) 你漏左個clap
02:36:646 既然你係上一段用clap，咁今次不如用whistle?
例如 02:36:646 (1) 在開始同結尾果2個位加whistle
之後個4個slider都係~
02:41:203 (1,2,3) 加finish?
02:48:703 (1) silence左呢個spinner佢? (加個靜音檔係file入面，然後係呢個timing section 用 custom override，再將spinner的hitsound調做該靜音檔)

一mod完呢個diff，發覺你更新左-_-，希望我講果d野無變啦

[Normal]
00:01:710 (1) 又被嚇了一次 ,Background太靜，audio太大
頭5個timing section都可以考慮加漸進
........
第2至4個原來你加左-_-，但我深信唔會有人聽得出的，可以加得明顯d
(而且都係果句... 係00:15:00之前呢part，audio唔駛咁大聲的....好嘈, 用Normal Audio調較到最大聲，都係太嘈了, 可以考慮下較細d)
00:09:698 (3) 可以拉圓d
00:25:823 呢個timing section做咩.. 呢段唔駛轉soft吧?
00:26:97 ^
00:28:305 (2,3,4) 拉得貼服d?
00:38:165 timing section, 原本以為你想係呢4個notes到玩漸進audio, 但原來唔係..
呢一段唔駛突然細細聲, 但若你想的話，都可以係呢4個notes玩漸進，但要係(5)果度回復返原本ge audio
00:44:146 (3) normal audio, 同時用whistle 加finish 囧, 你之前果堆notes 無乜加過hitsound，呢度突然咁多hitsound會嚇親人。
呢4個位用whistle應該就夠
00:50:697 (1) finish?
01:14:621 (3) 一樣，用whistle就夠，唔駛finish
01:10:064 至01:13:861 這段，每2條白線就加1個whistle? (好似前一part咁)
01:51:090 (5) 拉成對稱?
01:59:636 (3) ^
02:48:798 (1) silence呢個spinner?

[Hyper]
00:01:710 (1) 被嚇第3次
如果可以，開頭d audio都可以考慮下執執佢.
00:29:051 (2,3,4) 拉得貼服d，or相同形狀
01:30:574 (6) 對稱
01:51:077 (1) 對稱...同埋小心唔好去到太長同太下，最好保持係grid入面
02:30:950 (1) finish?
02:48:798 (1) silence?

[Another]
終於無被嚇到了(淚目
00:16:330 (5) 頭尾加 whistle
00:16:889 至 00:25:823 這段近乎沒有hitsound
00:35:507 (5) 頭尾都加finish，為左同(4)產生回響
00:44:051 (7) 都係果個問題，只要whistle就ok了
00:50:317 (1) finish?
01:16:140 (1) ^
01:47:673 (3) new combo
之後果3個都係
01:50:697 (9) new combo
02:23:748 (2) ^
02:26:013 (4) ^
02:48:798 (1) silence?
02:28:292 (3) ^

嘩-_-，好少寫到咁長，最後，star了-_-

終於搞掂-V- THX

[overall]
seems need re-snapping for the first minute (timing)

[another]
0:09:684 (3) up 1 grid
0:28:482 (3) down 1 grid
0:31:330 (8) up 1 grid
1:03:988 (s) add a note here then spinner 1/4 beat later?
1:10:918 (6,7) spacing different from (3,4)
1:42:342 (7) spacing
1:32:861 (2) right 1 grid
2:41:773 (3) spacing different from (1,2)
end kiai before song ends

[hyper]
0:26:013 (1) spacing
0:28:292 (2) ^
0:37:975 (3) spacing different from (3,4,5,6,7...)
1:12:722 (5) spacing different from (3,4)
2:38:545 (2) right 1 grid

[Normal]
I believe you can manually (slightly) re-snap your notes which makes the spacing to hold the max. error under 0.5 grids, such as
0:13:482 (4) down 1 grid
0:16:520 (3) left+down 1 grid
0:18:039 (4) up 1 grid
...

[Beginner] ok

star~

除了[E]

全部重排-v-

Done ><.



Download: 13133 Naia - Roots of My way!.zip

[General]
If possible, delete .osb file plz ;_; [Don't forget uploading full-submit after delete file]
Umm... Where's 2x.png ???
Also... If you wanna 2x SB, why don't you check about this? 'Which diffs are using 2x part or not? :3'

[Beginner]
00:11:203 (2) - How about move 1 grid right?
00:16:140 (2) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
00:25:254 (2) - [Suggestion] If possible, try to off 2nd clap hitsound ;_;
00:32:089 (2) - Make it more symmetric ;_;
00:38:165 (3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
00:43:482 (2,3) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
01:36:646 (4) - How about move 1 grid right?

[Normal]
00:14:241 (2,3,4) - [Suggestion] Little spacing problem ;_;
00:24:494 (1,2,3) - ^
00:27:153 (4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
00:35:507 (2,3,4,5) - [Suggestion] Little spacing problem ;_;
01:52:596 (1,2,3,4) - ^ [Prefer to move (1,2,3) imo]
01:55:634 (1,2,3) - [Suggestion] Little spacing problem ;_;
02:16:140 (4) - How about move 1 grid left?

[Hyper]
[Hard criteria: Overall difficulty 6 is greater than 5.]< Don't listen to this AIMod's saying :3
00:24:874 (2) - orz at 1 grid thing ;_; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9795
01:08:545 (1) - [Suggestion] How about move little left to make like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9796 [Tick is on center line XD]
01:10:823 (4,5,6) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid right?
01:38:545 (4) - Start = 01:38:450 // End = 01:38:830
01:44:241 (4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
01:41:963 (4) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid down?
01:55:254 (5) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid left?
01:55:634 (6) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
02:13:102 (4) - How about move 1 grid up?
02:14:621 (1) - How about move 1 grid right?

[Another]
Seems okay but stream ;_;

[youngdow's Taiko Traning]
Add tag 'youngdow' plz



Umm...
Seems nice song anyway.
[Except BG ;_;< Little dangerous for me]
Anyway, good luck :3

>youngdow

Re Added .


>arien666

done. thank you

2x.png

i thank is me...

2x.png[make in ComputerA full-submit ] ,

but i Edit diff on [ComputerB] or full-submit , forget download 2x.png in ComputerB, so disappea this @@

hi~
In red maybe important, In blue suggetions

[Beginner]
-02:01:710 (1) finisht it in 02:03:608 and finish kiai time in 02:03:798

[normal]
-start kiai time here 00:21:456

Nice map ^^
Star~

Done , thanks =]

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
虽然这么说很那啥但是还是说了。如果以后你叫比较多无关紧要只是骗kud的人来mod（这个标准你大概有数？），我并不想mod这张图，因为花费的时间实在不值，或者我也愿意把一次mod拆成10次来说要你10个kud。失礼了。
当你想要在slider上加hitsounds的时候，请不要为了图省事而只选中slider就去点whistle/finish/clap，这会影响slider滑动的音效。请在各节拍上分别加入，下面不会再单独提出。

[Beginner]
00:15:380 (1) - 下一格与之前的2重叠会不会感觉好些？
00:21:456 (1) - 这里的绿线同时担任了kiai和加音量两个任务，这是不可行的，请在前面加入一条绿线来变更音量。

00:57:912 (1,2,3,4) - 这个形状有些奇怪，排直线或者弧线不好么？尤其是你又返回一次感觉更明显。
01:14:621 (2,3) - 根据音乐重音，用一个长3/4拍的折返slider代替怎么样？
02:26:013 (3) - 关了grid往右上挪一点，纵向上与2结尾对齐横向与1平行比较好。
02:41:203 (1,2) - 同1:14处。

[Normal]
00:16:520 (3,1,2) - 间距不等。
00:17:659 (3,4,1) - ^
00:26:013 (1,2) - 建议同Easy的3/4拍。
00:37:785 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - 我觉得排规矩点摆成正六边好些。
00:57:912 (1) - 调音量线不要踩note.
01:10:064 (1,2) - 这一串及之后的若隐若现的没叠好，但是没大差。
01:31:330 (4) - new combo
01:37:785 (4) - new combo，对应之前。
01:50:697 (4) - 右下一格好一些吧。
02:10:823 (1) - 这一串的四分感觉很无聊，有意义么。。。
02:29:051 (3) - 还是3/4拍建议。
后面的whistle和clap同用感觉略别扭。

[Hyper]
circle size大一号？这个比之前两个难度好很多
00:57:912 (1) - 又来了。这四分下的不知所云。。
01:59:621 (1) - remove new combo?
02:29:621 (3) - 做出点弧度来让头平行2尾平行1感觉更好。
02:37:406 (3) - 不是故意的话，右下一格，后面也随着调整

[Another]
……怎么突然就换了BG。要么每难度一张要么全难度一张感觉更好。
有相当不少的sliders are not snapped.是不是换过slider velocity。我觉得这个都没看到的modder吃kud有点很那啥。我地图炮，勿怪。至少这个fix后再找我要star。recheck就算了好么……这个问题把我弄的心情不太好。

[youngdow's Taiko Training]
all fine youngdow sensei.

NR:modder 的精神本該如此啊 咱們不才不貪kd

youngdow的fc得很痛苦 但比xxxxxxx和xxxxxx的好多了

>NR:
由於我還是作map新人一個,對於什麼時候該給kd什麼時間不該給,我其實還真的弄不清的=w=
我第一次弄map的時候,我兩個人給我mod了,我連kd都沒付,因為當時我根本不知道kd的存在,現在想給都給不了-w-
後來,第二個map的時候(也就是這map)
才發現在頭像下面有一個鍵,看了一看別帖,原來是用來感謝mod者的-w-
然後隨著時間過去,找來不小人來mod,對我這新人來說,看見符合規則的,然後就發請求了,當然這時候我也不知道會出現無關痛養的懶人,
而且我一直沒看見付kd的準則,於事,基本上只是知道請求過別人而又mod出一點東西都會給kd,
錯付kd我相信不小人在新人時候都會經歷的,這點還請體諒。

嘛~好吧我答應你,以後我對這方面多加注意一點好了

已經基本作出了些改,亦長見識了

至於那堆 sliders are not snapped , 其實我一早就看見的,亦克意沒修改,當時是依據1/8來弄的,
後來改1/4了,看似音效不錯,所以沒對這作出更改,因為拉後音效改變了 而且我也不知道這是不允許的

總之,還是要thank你的指導

主要是对于lazy modders很火大...抱歉...

NatsumeRin wrote:

主要是对于lazy modders很火大...抱歉...

我也明白,用心mod跟不用心mod都是一樣的kd.用心的會感到很不值.不用心的就那個了。。。不再隨便付好了

good...羊刀的那張不錯@_@賞顆星吧~

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3

[General]
Okay.

map is good but there are too many spacing errors on all diffs. Please check it.

I can't mod taiko.

thank




thank, ok i will try to check spacing

Hi~mod得有点长...



nice~

嗯-V-? BG怎麼啦?

[G]:Done

[B]:Done

[N]:Done

[H]:沒錯我是故意不加hitsound的-V- 不過好吧就加上點吧...Done

[A]:Done

[SB]:我覺得沒差,本來想弄一隻碟在按速度自轉的,但因技術問題沒弄到,2x SB是某人的意見 弄了照用沒關係吧 再不然轉成注意標誌好了0_0

thnak~

-----------

另外SKIN 更新了~

Star~

As your request...

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

Star.

thank you

[G]:it is follow the old BG , So I Need some time to find new pic , my old comboburst.png is girl
[B]:Done , no it is Followed BeatmaniaIIDX diff name, In iidx [B]=[E]
[N]:i No want to Unstacked properly 0.0
[H]:The Unrankable. [!] ,It is me forget use 2X on this time......
-- Why does the slider velocity in this diff lower then the [Hyper] diff? It should be higher since this is a harder diff.
It diff is so Many 2x , and [N] diff is no 2x , so i not to set higher slider velocity
[Another]
02:27:532 (1,2) - The 2x SB is still appear in 0,5x time.[only 0.5s , so i skip fix this SB]
[oni]
add 1 tick , if people can see it , i think people replay 1 time can pass it spinner

OK ADD SKIN NOW , and i thank it comboburst is great

All fine to me~
Star it~

THANK

Hello

mod

Nice map~
star & gl

ok, i will fix some , thank

Sorry for delay~

[ Taiko ]

00:01:710 - This denden (spinner) is way to long. Shorten it to 00:02:849, then start mapping notes with that drum beat? I think it would sound nice and be fun then a long spinner spam.
00:51:836 -- 01:00:760 - What is with all these sliders? You might want to place notes there.
01:00:950 -- 01:37:026 - Remap this whole section. All the random spam is bad, kinda looks like you just threw in things to make it unnecessarily complicated.
01:40:634 -- 01:56:773 - Umm... Why is this one giant roll? >_>
02:03:798 -- 02:10:634 - Why more spinners?
02:10:823 -- 02:16:615 - Again with a giant roll?

*sigh* This is a really disappointing map coming from you youngdow all your other maps were very fun and nice. This one kinda feels like you made it so you can be #1 on it because you know all the long complicated rolls. (I'm sorry for my criticism, but this is a really bad map. IMO)

I modded about Taiko map in irc

star

Upload Please.

And Thank you samiljul

Download: Naia - Roots of My way! (owl13) [youngdow's Taiko Traning].osu

Uploaded

done....my diff!

Download: Naia - Roots of My way! (owl13) [Sharon's Hyper].osu

A catchy song... Well, I like it. And the skin is awesome!


(!) - Important!
(*) - Relevant
(?) - Suggestion

[General]
(!) Rename "hit100g.png" to "hit100k.png".
(*) Select "default" skin on the skinning preferences to avoid problems.
(?) On the last diffs, you use more often "2x" rather than "1x". So why don't you change the SB and assign a "0.5x" sign on the parts with the slower speed. (Let's assume "2x" is now normal speed)
(?) It's possible the offset should be 10 ms forward (more to the right). Please, confirm...

[Beginner]
(*) 00:32:089 (2) - 1 grid up and 1 grid right to center the slider.
(?) 01:35:127 (2,4) - Chance the finish sound for claps or nothing, maybe?
(*) 01:57:153 (3) - Add finish hitsound on all the slider.
(*) 02:41:203 (3) - 1 grid up and 1 grid left.

[Normal]
(*) 01:37:406 (1,3) - Add finish hitsound here.
(?) 02:41:203 (3) - Add (not change) finish sound?

[Hyper]
(!) Nothing to mod... Good job!

[Another]
(*) 00:45:950 (2) - Add finish sound at the final
(?) 01:40:823 (1) - Why don't you add finish sound at the start of the slider.
(*) 02:27:532 (1) - Don't cheat people with the "2x" sign

youngdow's Taiko Training
(!) 01:40:634 (243) - I HATE that part. It's a long stream. Can youngdow cut it on at least 2 or 3 parts?


Good job!

Also, sorry for my not-so-colorful mod...

THANK YOU

I made the 0.5 SB now , offset Fix now

Use some Suggestion , done

mod

[Sharon's Hyper]
- Sound
00:07:795 (11) - Finish
- Spacing
01:17:099 (3,4,5) - Spacing are wrong
- Combo
01:52:037 (8) - New combo

[Another]
- Combo
02:13:871 (1) - Remove new combo
02:14:631 (2) - New combo
- Other
Not really bad, but CRAZY

[Hyper]
- Sound
00:18:428 (1) - Finish
00:46:720 (5,6) - Remove new combo
00:46:340 (4) - Finish
01:32:859 (3) - Clap is wear

[All]
Not really fun ~.~
But it is a good map.
創意還未夠, 但是, 總體來說, 都是一張能rank的map.

STAR!

attatched

Download: Naia - Roots of My way! (owl13) [Sharon's Hyper].osu

Sharon is Saturio right? Put her in the tags too then if this is so.

[Another]

00:27:922 - Louder on this section please? Really quiet to me.
00:57:922 - Raise volume slowly on this section? You don't have to start too low, it's not that quiet but there is a slight elevation in volume here.

I think there's a lack of hitsounds on this map ._. You can use normal a bit more me thinks.


[Sharon's Another]

Ok I think

[Hyper]

I guess it's ok...

I don't really get why you used all those 2x BPM sections but fine

[Normal]

02:29:821 (4) - Okay this is super nazi but I think Normals shouldn't have any reports from AIMod, so would you mind moving this 1 grid right? Sorry for shitty useless picking I just like look at a perfect Normal ._. You can ignore this if you'd like

[Beginner]

02:41:213 (3) - Same crappy picking, move this down a grid so this one has no reports from AIMod either, again sorry :p

OK,THANK YOU ,

I use more hitsond on Another now

And, i fix some note now

[Sharon's Another]<---- Sharon's Hyper-=,= not Another-,-

Ok I think

ok

Star~
接著

接著




SKIN UPDATA!

Youngdow's map is not training at all. Just a bunch of spam. Or i'm not understanding his perspective of "training".

Remap 01:40:644 - 01:56:783 Now.
And don't call it training.

Ok, Done

Remapped, Removed that giant roll.

Please Re-upload.

Special Thanks to DJ KRZY ^.^

Download: Naia - Roots of My way! (owl13) [youngdow's Taiko Training].osu

OK ~ DONE NOW

Hi~
Here is my random Taiko mod~

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[youngdow's Taiko Training]
Just curious, why is it called a Training? Actually I can't tell the difference between Training and normal taiko diff

The total combo is 769, consider changing it to 765? This is only my suggestion, you are free to change or not~

This diff has a lot of long 1/2 + 1/4 groups such as 00:27:542~00:44:061 and 01:41:213~01:56:973. I think these long groups are not so good because it doesn't really match the music~ Consider dividing these groups into 2 or more smaller groups? eg: Delete the notes at 01:46:720, :814, 01:52:321, :416 to split the group 01:41:213~01:56:973 in 3~

00:01:720 (1) Consider move the staring point of this spinner to 00:03:238 so that it matches the music?

02:10:833 (1~63) This 1/4 stream is much more difficult than other streams because the red and blue pattern are quite complicated. ( The difficulty of this stream is much higher than the rest of the song ) Consider simply this stream a bit?

No errors found~

Nice map overall~
Star and good luck~

Ok, Fixed ^_^

Thanks to mod aabc271~

Download: Naia - Roots of My way! (owl13) [youngdow's Taiko Training].osu

UPLOAD

Ok, the taiko diff is Better, it's rankable for sure! :3

Just one little thing, turn the volume up all the way for the hitsounds x3.
I grant you a start now.

star

thank you


YD say skip the volume up , thank =]

[General]
Good beat. Like the song ^-^. One thing tho...[Another] difficulty? could you come up with another name? or am I missing something. Also you may want to [Sharon's Hyper] to [Sharon's Another] since it's harder than your [Another]

[Hyper]
I like how you make it more of a challenge by speeding up certain parts but...The timing of them feels kinda awkward.

02:25:074 (x) Add a note to go with the beat better?
02:26:593 (x) ^
02:28:112 (x) ^

Other than that I've got no qualms with this map!

thank , i add a note now , and i like it

about [Sharon's Hyper] diff name , she say no want up name to [Sharon's Another] , so i can not up name this diff

Nice picture, nice song Star!

General;

00:03:428 - Having a break here so soon at the start of a difficulty is completely unneccessary.

Beginner;

00:48:618 (1) - End this at 00:51:846.
02:01:720 (1) - End this at 02:04:757.

Normal;

00:26:023 (1) - 1/4 shorter?
00:48:618 (1) - End this at 00:51:846.
01:08:555 (1) - Too soon after the spinner.
01:48:808 (6,7) - I don't like the way these go back on the 3 and 4, it's confusing to read.
02:03:238 (1) - Too soon after the spinner.
02:10:833 to 02:15:770 - I don't think 1/4 repeating sliders like this are very suitable for a Normal.
02:22:985 (1,2) - ^

Hyper;

Uh I don't like the way 2x sections are used here. Why don't you make the slider speed faster, and use 1.5x sections or something instead?
01:46:909 (1) - I'm not sure what these are snapped to. Why not make it 1/4 long and remove a repeat?

Another;

00:26:213 (2) - Move 1/4 forward...
00:26:403 (3) - ...and delete this.
01:00:960 (1) - Warning or not, this is unrankable. You can't have 2 sliders the same length with different speeds next to each other.
01:28:682 (2,3,4,5) - What are these following?
01:30:201 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:38:555 (3) - Move this 1/4 back and end on the red tick.
02:13:871 (9) - How about just a circle here?
02:27:542 (1) - Same comment about slider speeds.

Sharon's Hyper;

Map to where the other difficulies end.

Taiko;

^

Thank you for mod .

General;
Yes , i will all delete

Beginner;
Fix end

Normal;
Edit done

Hyper;
Edit some , About 2X , i will try edit it

Another;
Edit done

Sharon's Hyper;
Taiko;
I think will not

because reduce diff amount

Today , I decision delete my [Hyper] diff

Now [Another] will rename to [Hyper]

And [Sharon's Hyper] will rename to [Sharon's Another] now

Taiko Training is a wonderful one
Even if those spins are a little bit annoying :3

revived

star for all people from the roots 26

i like this song
star~

Sorry for my poor English

thank

i think the artist is spelled wrong, it's supposed to be Nyah (Voiced by Masumi Asano), not Naia.

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