Razor Sharp
Razor Sharp wrote:
Mod for CLSW!
Since i cant mod cup -> platter, i will only mod Rain and up.GENERAL
Everything seems fine here.BLESS
Difficulty Name: Bless, this is ok, but what about Blessing? I think it sounds nice. Up to you tho! leeme think about more better name.
00:02:977 (1,2) - Would suggest you to curve them more, to create more movement, as it follows 00:06:053 (1,2) ! It is ok as it is, but just a suggestion, to create a better flow. I think it's okay to do with this.
00:17:303 (6,7) - Increase the distance between these? There is a "strong" guitar sound here, and i think this stream should follow it. Just to make it follow these points: 00:18:169 (6,1) 00:19:418 (4,5) 00:19:803 (8,1) 00:20:380 (6,7) 00:20:957 (4,5) done with (6) and (7) only.
00:38:746 (2) - Move to x256. Will make it fit the vocal pitch. Too long and borderline jump. I don't like them.
00:40:284 (2) - Would suggest to have the curve bend more to have more movement at this slider. done
00:53:746 (1,2,3) - There is crying for a hyper from (1) too (2), and (2) too (3). I think it would fit pretty good. Just using HDash for (3)'s end is enough.
01:01:438 (1,2) - What about making them like this? I presonally feel like this would make it more fun. Troll sliders, I won't touch it.
01:05:092 (2) - Moving this to the centre of the map will create a nice flow IMO. I wanted to make a long jump for 01:05:092 (2,3).
01:14:515 (3) - Make this into a hyper, as it hypers to (4). It cries for it. I think it's enough. This mapset isn't made for challenge, just a relaxing and calm.
01:27:111 (4,5,6,7,8) - Move to x159, then move 01:27:399 (7,8) to x432? Would make it interesting to play. And it is in the kiai after all. Oh no it's too much exaggerated, also it's really painful for beginners.
01:42:015 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Have this whole stream curve more, to make more movement. Feels kinda empty as it is. Same reason as 02:40:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
01:47:592 (1,2,3,4) - Increase distance on these. I feel like they are way to easy to hit as it is. But keep them not hyper. Done
02:40:669 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Bigger curve to make more movement. Feels empty. It's an enough usage.
02:50:284 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - Why not map after the vocals? This part feels kinda, straight forward. IMO it dont fit the map. So would suggest to make it different. I wanna try with something different for this part. This part was mapped with 1/1, and next part was mapped with full of 1/2.
03:14:803 (3,4,5,6,7) - Try to make this stream something like i suggested on 01:27:111 (4,5,6,7,8) No HDash for this.
03:33:746 (1,2) - This cries for a hyper. As I said below, I wanna make it easy. No HDash please.
03:34:515 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try to make this stream different. By that i mean, have different patterns than you usually use on this map for streams. Would make it much more interesting to play. The placements are really hard to decide. Actually, I already have thought a lot about the other variations of this part, and yea, I picked one of them before but afb just pointed out. There's no problem to using similar pattern and not worse than using random shapes and ruining whole flows.
04:02:207 (8,9) - Move (8) too x384 (remember to ctrl+h it). And then move (9) too x48. Would make it much better IMO. Hyperdashes? No, this map is aiming for relaxing and easy, useless forced 1/4 hyperjumps are not allowed for this mapset.
04:04:515 (1,2,3,4) - Try this? Simply copy paste and ctrl+h (1) and (2) and replace it by the (3) and (4). The anti-flow movements between (1) and (2) will ruin the flow, it isn't acceptable. I'd better to keep with mine.
04:22:784 (1,2) - Move the slider end more to the side, to make it curve more. Not really good choice. I think it's enough.
Thats all from me! Overall the map is to say perfect! Good luck on ranking!
Thanks for it!