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Within Temptation - Iron [Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Raiden

OzzyOzrock wrote:

DEM SIR SON

Bubbled!
you cant live if your ON FIRE
Surono
dem tako, still confucyaaaaaaaatt., dem mepping mapshut. ew comeon fayer
JUDYDANNY
Talked with creator , changed some. (checked the over plots and lack of kats on kiai).
Let's go to final Ironer (¦3[___]
Topic Starter
Raiden
SPOILER
13:42 JUDYDANNY: :3
13:42 Raiden: (¦3[___]
13:42 Raiden: i love the emoji ^
13:43 JUDYDANNY: (¦3[___]
13:43 JUDYDANNY: ٩(๑>◡<๑)۶
13:43 Raiden: :D
13:43 Raiden: aaaaah still have to wait
13:44 Raiden: how are you bakajudy
13:44 Raiden: (¦3[___]
13:46 JUDYDANNY: I'm okay. ╭( ・ㅂ・)و
13:46 JUDYDANNY: May I ask you about Iron?
13:46 Raiden: (¦3[___] yes (¦3[___]
13:46 JUDYDANNY: or stil have to wait?
13:47 JUDYDANNY: yeaahhh.
13:47 JUDYDANNY: (¦3[___]
13:47 Raiden: wait for BN I mean
13:47 Raiden: until Loctav logs ;w;
13:47 JUDYDANNY: ahhh, I got it.
13:47 Raiden: baka map
13:47 *JUDYDANNY is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/772457 Within Temptation - Iron [Inner Oni]]
13:47 *Raiden is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/772457 Within Temptation - Iron [Inner Oni]]
13:48 JUDYDANNY: IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIrooOOOOOOOOOon
13:48 Raiden: you cant live if youre on FIREEEEEEEE
13:48 JUDYDANNY: [*]00:20:530 (69) - remove ? feel the early 5plot that makes a over power imo.
13:48 Raiden: hmmm
13:48 JUDYDANNY: and, similer as above suggestion , [*]00:53:257 - remove? 8plot is not good , makes over sounds pressure.
13:49 Raiden: ok first part i agree
13:49 Raiden: should be different from 2nd
13:49 Raiden: deleted 00:20:530 -
13:49 Raiden: ah the 8plet
13:49 Raiden: ozzy told me to do long pattern to lead vocals
13:49 Raiden: but i can delete 1 note
13:50 Raiden: done (¦3[___]
13:50 JUDYDANNY: 2nd is no change?
13:50 Raiden: no no
13:50 Raiden: eys change
13:50 Raiden: deleted
13:50 Raiden: 00:53:257 -
13:50 JUDYDANNY: sure~
13:51 Raiden: yes*
13:51 JUDYDANNY: [*]01:22:348 - move to 01:22:499 - ?
13:51 JUDYDANNY: similer as (ry
13:52 Raiden: hmmm
13:52 Raiden: better to delete
13:52 Raiden: i think kdd breaks flow
13:52 Raiden: (¦3[___]
13:52 JUDYDANNY: breaks seem also good.
13:52 JUDYDANNY: np :3
13:52 Raiden: deleted then
13:53 JUDYDANNY: [*]03:21:515 - change to k….? Guess, plays cool....?
13:53 Raiden: aaaah yes lack of k
13:53 Raiden: changed (¦3[___]
13:53 JUDYDANNY: try to play with 1st, 2nd kiai.
13:53 JUDYDANNY: lol
13:53 Raiden: <- baka
13:53 Raiden: 03:30:605 (379) - changed to k too
13:54 JUDYDANNY: uumm...?
13:54 JUDYDANNY: 01:39:545 (545,546,547,548,549) - same?
13:54 Raiden: it was ddddk
13:55 Raiden: 01:39:696 (544,545) - changed to k
13:55 Raiden: why am i so baka
13:56 Raiden: 03:18:333 (304,305,306,307,308,309) - aaah bad flow..
13:57 Raiden: moved 03:18:408 (305) - to 03:18:257 -
13:57 Raiden: 03:25:151 (345) - changed to k
13:58 JUDYDANNY: 3:18:333-
13:58 JUDYDANNY: consistency with 01:58:333 (661,662,663) - 1/4 triplet begins.
13:58 JUDYDANNY: not bad.
13:58 JUDYDANNY: (imo)
13:59 Raiden: oh
13:59 Raiden: then i use the next for flow
14:00 JUDYDANNY: 04:19:242 -
14:00 Raiden: oh
14:00 Raiden: baka stream
14:01 Raiden: that should be d?
14:01 Raiden: hmm
14:01 JUDYDANNY: I just asked tasuke, he said It's not consistency with "3/1" proper barlines put (you make put the 1st k,
14:01 Raiden: hmm?
14:02 JUDYDANNY: 04:17:424 - , 04:17:878 - , 04:18:333 - , 04:18:787 - , 04:19:242 -
14:02 JUDYDANNY: yes.
14:02 JUDYDANNY: but.
14:02 Raiden: I follow guitar there
14:02 Raiden: not percussions
14:02 Raiden: on the whole stream
14:02 JUDYDANNY: 04:19:696 - is d, flow sudden changed. and I'd already suggested you to change k (follow the snare.
14:02 Raiden: well
14:03 Raiden: the guitarist is a bit slow at some points
14:03 JUDYDANNY: but this is his suggestion , I explained instead of him.
14:04 Raiden: hmmmmmmmm
14:04 Raiden: so you want 04:19:696 (107) - k?
14:04 JUDYDANNY: no, if changed this you may have to change 04:20:151 - k also.
14:05 Raiden: yeah :c
14:05 Raiden: the problem is guitarist
14:05 Raiden: he struggles to keep 1/6
14:05 Raiden: but it is 1/6 in the end
14:05 Raiden: and suddenly stop following guitar notes to follow snare is not a good idea for me :/
14:06 JUDYDANNY: sure.
14:06 Raiden: r-really? ;w;
14:08 JUDYDANNY: this is your map. I cant , and wont force you to change if you dont want. ;w;
14:09 Raiden: "jepen persun" (¦3[___] best persun
14:09 Raiden: i kno its my map
14:09 JUDYDANNY: :3:3:3
14:09 Raiden: but i also dont want to force to icon/bubble something you dont agree
14:09 Raiden: ;w;
14:09 JUDYDANNY: 04:20:454 - change to k , 04:20:908 - change to d?
14:09 Raiden: blame guitarist
14:10 Raiden: 04:20:454 (117) - changed to k yes
14:10 JUDYDANNY: emphasized to 04:20:605 - , 04:21:060 - sounds different from them.
14:10 Raiden: has different pitch from 118
14:10 Raiden: hmmm
14:10 Raiden: reasonable
14:11 Raiden: 04:20:908 (123) - changed to d
14:12 Raiden: (¦3[___]
14:12 JUDYDANNY: sure.
14:14 JUDYDANNY: checking the hard that stream ;_;
14:14 Raiden: ;w;
14:17 JUDYDANNY: 04:22:802 (146) -
14:17 JUDYDANNY: move to ?04:22:499 - ?
14:17 JUDYDANNY: 04:22:802 (146) - and 04:22:499 - sounds the same volume on the guitar.
14:18 JUDYDANNY: Guess, It makes kindly the flow?
14:18 Raiden: ahhh
14:18 Raiden: (¦3[___]
14:19 Raiden: nice flow
14:19 Raiden: (¦3[___](¦3[___](¦3[___]
14:22 JUDYDANNY: stream the end.
14:22 *JUDYDANNY is checking last kiai.
14:22 Raiden: finally (¦3[___]
14:22 Raiden: that baka stream (¦3[___]
14:22 JUDYDANNY: 05:03:333 -
14:22 JUDYDANNY: k?
14:22 JUDYDANNY: 05:06:969 - ^
14:22 Raiden: aaaaaaaaaaa
14:22 Raiden: <- BIG BAKA
14:22 JUDYDANNY: 05:12:424 - ^ lol
14:23 Raiden: fixed all
14:23 JUDYDANNY: okay, please update~ :3
14:24 Raiden: updated
14:24 JUDYDANNY: sure.


Log for IRC check proof (¦3[___]

GEZO CHECK PAR- IRON
Myxo
i think this should be in pending darling
Yuzeyun

Desperate-kun wrote:

i think this should be in ranked/approved beatmaps darling

(just wait though)
Bara-
Please fix tags
Add: Sharon den Adel (main singer) The Unforgiving (Album) Gothic Metal (Genre, not supported by 'QAT-Genre', so better add to tags) Dutch (origin of Band)

Also, is there a need for Taiko in tags?
JUDYDANNY

Baraatje123 wrote:

Also, is there a need for Taiko in tags?
This isnt unrank issue, but I think it's better than nothing. Some Taiko mapsets have that in tags.
Topic Starter
Raiden
ok fixed tags `_J` btw it's SYMPHONIC metal not GOTHIC
Surono
`L_` dem son really enthusiasts of metal songs, Raydon kat!
Yuzeyun
i'm on bonefir
qualified
Topic Starter
Raiden
i can live if im oN FIRE
Nwolf
baka gz
Surono
[img]http://hargaproduk.com/sites/default/files/Kobe---BonCabe-Sambal-Tabur-Rasa-Ebi-Kriuk-22,5g.jpg[/im

bonchili, ew bonfaiyah moe from IOSYS nice. dem simponix song quali field war/t. gratz


EDIT:

forget to say Ngenyeahhhhhhhhh on 03:34:999 - here
thx map for ngenyeh. dem chilhud on my radio/ or idk
Bara-
CONGRATZ!!
YOU CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT THE FIRE
THE FIRE GEZO TURNED ON FOR YOU
Yuzeyun
the bonefir*
JUDYDANNY
Congratzヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"
Charlotte
Gratz :)
Mao
Within Temptation <3
Topic Starter
Raiden
Mao <3

Desperate-kun wrote:

i think this should be in pending darling
Myxo
I think this should be in Ranked/Approved Beatmaps lady
Topic Starter
Raiden
fite me

in bed

with no pants

:$
Trosk-
You can't live without the fire~

/me slaps Raiden.
Topic Starter
Raiden
;w;
Yuzeyun

Desperate-kun wrote:

I think this should be in Ranked/Approved Beatmaps lady

_Gezo_ wrote:

Desperate-kun wrote:

i think this should be in ranked/approved beatmaps darling
i call plagiarism desp. my ftfy was done before. :/
Bara-
LOOOL
GG Gezo
Myxo
You basically quoted me and changed the content (without explicitely mentioning it) which is not allowed
And then I just changed my own sentence a bit
And by accident it's pretty similar to yours
And now you are complaining about it even though it's entirely your fault
Because you have done illegal things I think you will go to prison
I also think this talk has nothing to do with the map at all, so it should probably stop
Also my post reads totally weird because of the missing interpunction
Topic Starter
Raiden
DakeDekaane
Alright. I'd like to point out a few concerns I had while checking this map and would like to be discussed before this moves forward.

The stream in the solo part can be improved by changing a few notes to fit more the guitar and have certain degree of consistency, which will result in a better play experience.

Having 04:19:242 (101,102,103,104,105) - as kkdkd and 04:19:696 (107,108,109,110,111) - as kkdkk will make a better connection between the mapping and the increasing intensity in the guitar, the first note being kat on both due having a very similar tone.
Something simiar happens with the next similar sound in the stream, 04:20:151 (113,114,115,116,117) - and 04:20:605 (119,120,121,122,123) - as dkdkd and dkdkk, respectively (though they sound pretty much the same for me, lol).

04:21:060 - 04:24:696 - If you listen carefully, there is a main 2/3 rhythm. So you should have some kats on those times too, to keep your structure on the guitar. The first two patterns fits accurately with this, but the last stream feels really out of place. I'd suggest changing 04:22:878 (147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159) - to keep a similar structure like previous streams, something like kkddkkdddk or similar would work nicely.

Let me know what you guys think before moving this back to Qualified.
Topic Starter
Raiden

DakeDekaane wrote:

Alright. I'd like to point out a few concerns I had while checking this map and would like to be discussed before this moves forward.

The stream in the solo part can be improved by changing a few notes to fit more the guitar and have certain degree of consistency, which will result in a better play experience.

Having 04:19:242 (101,102,103,104,105) - as kkdkd and 04:19:696 (107,108,109,110,111) - as kkdkk will make a better connection between the mapping and the increasing intensity in the guitar, the first note being kat on both due having a very similar tone. agreed
Something simiar happens with the next similar sound in the stream, 04:20:151 (113,114,115,116,117) - and 04:20:605 (119,120,121,122,123) - as dkdkk and dkdkd, respectively (though they sound pretty much the same for me, lol). changed both to dkdkd

04:21:060 - 04:24:696 - If you listen carefully, there is a main 2/3 rhythm. So you should have some kats on those times too, to keep your structure on the guitar. The first two patterns fits accurately with this, but the last stream feels really out of place. I'd suggest changing 04:22:878 (147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154,155,156,157,158,159) - to keep a similar structure like previous streams, something like kkddkkdddk or similar would work nicely. Tried something here

Let me know what you guys think before moving this back to Qualified.
i can't map guitar solos
Yuzeyun
desp ily2 bby
qoot8123
Just have some suggestions on guitar solo part.

04:18:636 (93) - this part is almost same as 04:17:727 (81) - ,try to use k would be more consistent

04:18:787 (95,96,97,98,99) - try to make consistent with 04:17:878 (83,84,85,86,87) - (kkddk)

04:19:166 (100,101) - consider the guitar on 04:19:242 (101) - is not as powerful as 04:19:696 (107) - , you can reverse them, it also can make more consistent with 04:17:424 (77,78,79,80,81) -

04:19:999 (111) - the guitar's pitch is almost same as 04:19:545 (105) - so use d would be more suitable imo.

04:20:151 (113) - consider using k to emphasize the guitar more precisely

04:20:605 (119) - ^

04:23:030 (149,151) - try to reverse them to follow the guitar's accent by using kat on 04:23:181 (151) -

04:23:257 (152,154) - ^

04:23:560 (156,157) - ^


That's would be all from me.

good luck ! :)
Topic Starter
Raiden

qoot8123 wrote:

Just have some suggestions on guitar solo part.

04:18:636 (93) - this part is almost same as 04:17:727 (81) - ,try to use k would be more consistent I actually think the guitar note is less stressed at 04:17:727 (81) -. Besides, it's very similar to 92 and 94

04:18:787 (95,96,97,98,99) - try to make consistent with 04:17:878 (83,84,85,86,87) - (kkddk) Made kdkkd, fits more guitar imo

04:19:166 (100,101) - consider the guitar on 04:19:242 (101) - is not as powerful as 04:19:696 (107) - , you can reverse them, it also can make more consistent with 04:17:424 (77,78,79,80,81) -

04:19:999 (111) - the guitar's pitch is almost same as 04:19:545 (105) - so use d would be more suitable imo.

04:20:151 (113) - consider using k to emphasize the guitar more precisely then 04:20:227 (114) - would lose the emphasis :/

04:20:605 (119) - ^ same as above with the next note

04:23:030 (149,151) - try to reverse them to follow the guitar's accent by using kat on 04:23:181 (151) - dkkddkkd sounds about right to me, the guitar makes 2 clear hihats which follow that pitch imo. Maybe I could variate second from first, but not a good idea in the end I think

04:23:257 (152,154) - ^ what i said above

04:23:560 (156,157) - ^ the 3rd hihat sounds very similar but this note 04:23:636 (157) - is less stressed than the ones before, hence i used d


That's would be all from me.

good luck ! :)
Thanks a lot for the opinions and feedback qoot!! (I didn't expect a mod O_o)

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(RIP SR down from 5,47 to 5,30 :cry: )
Topic Starter
Raiden
I JUST NOTICED



ILLOOMINARTYI?!?!?!?!?!?1'1'1'1'?
Surono
Iluminatu dezuu... 5.30.. have thre..*doorrrrrr*


03:34:924 - ngenyeaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

ew can me mad mod nub.
  1. 00:09:545 (2,3,4,5) - dem.. dem!1!! Dung tak tak tak tak Dung!1!, bcus tak 00:10:605 - similiar with this `L,,,` plis shir dem nice tak..... .. ikr this nub, ignore
  2. 00:23:181 -dem... is dummmmm. okay finisher or kat, ignore thiz..
  3. 00:42:878 - 00:50:151 -want gib finisher? on 2nd - 3rd bookmarks.. this nice bcus have nice emphasize music *00:42:878 - that tss, but on second part not have.. but flow vocal is wow.. so want this?(i know, this nub)*
  4. 04:19:242 - reverse guitar ;_; oh noo~... but dem `L__`(thats why is dem taco guitar pitch hueheh)
  5. okay, on here.. i gib some nub cat to suggest.. 04:02:878 (1) - 04:04:242 (6,7) - 04:05:605 - *k, kk, k*
  6. 04:07:878 (24,25) - 04:11:515 (43,44) - 04:12:878 (50,51) - 04:04:242 (6,7) - * kat kat, and kat kat again.. or me nub*
  7. 04:03:787 - `L,,,,` Inconsistent don.. this kat and other is don... * 04:07:424 - yeah
dem me make war coming!1!! Oh deeeeemm!1
Yuzeyun
suronopls(´_ゝ`)
Akiyama Mizuki
Requalify please
Topic Starter
Raiden

Surono wrote:

Iluminatu dezuu... 5.30.. have thre..*doorrrrrr*


03:34:924 - ngenyeaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh

ew can me mad mod nub.
  1. 00:09:545 (2,3,4,5) - dem.. dem!1!! Dung tak tak tak tak Dung!1!, bcus tak 00:10:605 - similiar with this `L,,,` plis shir dem nice tak..... .. ikr this nub, ignore
  2. 00:23:181 -dem... is dummmmm. okay finisher or kat, ignore thiz..
  3. 00:42:878 - 00:50:151 -want gib finisher? on 2nd - 3rd bookmarks.. this nice bcus have nice emphasize music *00:42:878 - that tss, but on second part not have.. but flow vocal is wow.. so want this?(i know, this nub)* you can see the finisher structure I use :P not changing any
  4. 04:19:242 - reverse guitar ;_; oh noo~... but dem `L__`(thats why is dem taco guitar pitch hueheh) ????
  5. okay, on here.. i gib some nub cat to suggest.. 04:02:878 (1) - 04:04:242 (6,7) - 04:05:605 - *k, kk, k* prefer the transition from only dons -> progressively more kats to announce the upcoming guitar solo
  6. 04:07:878 (24,25) - 04:11:515 (43,44) - 04:12:878 (50,51) - 04:04:242 (6,7) - * kat kat, and kat kat again.. or me nub* same as above
  7. 04:03:787 - `L,,,,` Inconsistent don.. this kat and other is don... * 04:07:424 - yeah
dem me make war coming!1!! Oh deeeeemm!1
lol thanks

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Yuzeyun
Topic Starter
Raiden
Argent = silver..........................???!???!??!?!'1'1
Surono
`L_` u know, i am just breathink. with smuk wid
Bara-
Gratz
Good luck with ranking!
JUDYDANNY
OzzyOzrock
I GOT THAT HEAT, AND YOU GON' LISTEN
BOUGHT A NEW FERRARI WITH THE NOTES THAT I AM MISSIN'
BOUT TO APPROVE THIS SHIT AND YOU KNOW I'M NOT A LIAR
you can live if your on FIRE
Trosk-
*insert "it's happening" gif here*
Bara-
Regratz!
THE FIRE (Okay Gezo, THE BONEFIR) IS BACK
AND BRIGHTER THEN EVER
Yuzeyun
siete mil taiko mapas grats raiden `_J`
7000
Topic Starter
Raiden
duhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Trosk-
Yeahhhh congrats! ^^
Topic Starter
Raiden
The fire is ranked

jeje
Bara-
THE FLAME WILL NEVER DIE
SO WE'LL ALL LIVE ENDLESSLY <3
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