• • Source should be "FullMetal Alchemist: Brotherhood". Add FMA to the Tags
  • Add "WyndII" into Tags
  • Some SB images contains too much unnecessary transparency.
  • Spinner graphic spins slightly off centre, is that on purpose? Not a huge deal, though.

vytalibus wrote:

[WyndII Style]
01:21:464 (1,1) - Two successive long spinners? Unless you can justify why these should be by the ending, change the first spinner into something else.

sonnyc wrote:

Hello

WyndII
00:52:416 (4) - Symmetry
00:59:836 (x) - Add note

Sakura301 wrote:

[Garven's Easy]
00:42:319 (2,5,1) - Try to minimize the use of 1/2 timeline spaced notes like theese on easy, they can easily be replaced by sliders
00:48:319 (4,5,6,1,2) - Well i would avoid the use of 1/2 streams on an Easy (even on a Normal) not sure for a 95 bpm tho, u may want a 2nd opinion
00:53:371 (4,5,6,1) - ^
Note: to all of the above i personally didnt have a problem with them and i dont think they are a problem due to the BPM but i was just saying what i remember from other mods, considering the BPM is why im hesitant to mark them as real issues, so you may as well ignore them

Kurai_ wrote:

[Hard]
01:23:370 (Timing Section) - Remove de Kiai .

jockeytiyan wrote:

^^

WyndII's Butt Style: M----lol
:-bd

00:22:573 (4) - 'tol, new combo. yesz
00:22:889 (6) - Ampangit tingnan ng linear. XD ayan pinagitna ko ung center point para maging sym
00:41:994 (5) - New combo mo para hindi nakakalito kasi hindi siya parte ng jump. Tapos tanggalin mo yung combo sa 00:42:626 (1) - o puwedeng iwanan mo lang. yosh~


Adik sa 2x BPM sections. Tsk tsk tsk. Joke lang. ahahaa syempre naman XD

jockeytiyan wrote:

Garven's Easy:
Nothing much, but I'm kinda worried at about the 1/4 notes (example is 00:13:257 (3) - ) and the significantly large spacing which might throw the newbies off. I can only suggest compromising it with an even lower OD.

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Timing is wrong, too fast at the beginning, gets better at the end.
suggest better one!
-- Grey combo color can be hard to see with the video especially with the higher OA's.
hmm, ok, I'll change it.

Garven's Easy:

01:16:415 (4) - End 1/4 earlier?
hmm... k...
Normal:

Good.

WyndII Style:

-- My acc took a dive here.
-- Parts of this are too overmapped =/
-- High OA doesn't suit slow song. Reduce by 1 imo.

01:17:205 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Sounds awful and plays awful. What's the point in this stream?
:(
Hard:

-- High OA and Drain don't fit the song.
-- Should probably name it Insane with these settings.
k
01:01:573 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Stream doesn't fit at all =.="
X

SonicArena1 wrote:

Garven's Easy
23:099: Please make this go a bit more with the rhythm, not just in any order that will match the song.
Didn't see anything wrong with this slider
Didn't find any other problems otherwise.

strager wrote:

Garvin's Easy
All the 1/2 sliders are bad bad bad for Easy.
:|
Normal
Definitely too difficult for a Normal. Increase OD and make it a Hard.
Well, ok
I hate stubby 1/2 sliders.
I don't : D
WyndII Style
Lower HP drain?
no : )
01:02:847 - TOO FUCKING LOUD! Lower hitsound volume please!

Otherwise, it's a good map.

Insane
Lower HP drain.
no
Nice, solid map.

00:21:794 (3) - Hard to read the half speed because I'm already looking at the next note. If you move 00:21:794 (3,1) closer together, it'd be easier to read.
01:02:216 (5,6) - Make this a jump, or make (6) a triple 1/4 stack/stream by adding notes before it.
didn't see any problems here

1. I got offset: 2,212 (Just a little earlier than yours)
   2 of your combobursts are a little to big, Comboburst-0 and Comboburst-1. the minimum size for combobursts are the size of the standard skin combobursts (383x787), so you'll have to shrink your combobursts down to that size.

Doomsday93 wrote:

1. I got offset: 2,212 (Just a little earlier than yours)
   2 of your combobursts are a little to big, Comboburst-0 and Comboburst-1. the minimum size for combobursts are the size of the standard skin combobursts (383x787), so you'll have to shrink your combobursts down to that size.

I don't think that 383 is minimal width for combobursts
I dunno, but I think this map is crying out for a Normal. I just think that its odd having an Easy, but not a Normal :/. Yeah, Hard used to be Normal, but that doesn't mean that there shouldn't be a real normal.
Hard = Normal :> At least it was named Normal at beginning
[GARVEN'S EASY]

Very Nice. I couldn't see anything wrong.

[HARD]

Looks about right

[WYNDII STYLE]

I don't think this map needs the 2x bit, feels somewhat overmapped at that point. I doubt that you would remap that bit though. It isn't too bad, but I think it would have worked well if you kept it at 1x bpm throughout.
/me dies
01:15:637 (1) - This spinner feels odd. It just comes out of nowhere. Perhaps you could map something else here? It would make more sense imo.
idk D:
01:26:531 (x) - Remove these unused green sections?
They are not unused
[INSANE]

Looks good. Can't see any issues worth talking about

Overall, this is a pretty well done map. Well structured-ish and pretty fun. My favourite KIA map probably
lol thx XD
Starred

Slanox wrote:

Hey,

Few suggestions ^.^

[Garven's Easy]

Replace timing section : 83 373 => 83 369

- 00:04:738(3) : 1 grid up ? It does not matter
- 00:06:001(4) : Spacing. (If you change grid)
- 01:09:790(1) : Finish instead of clap ? k
- 01:10:422(3) : Finish on the end ? k

[Normal+]

- 00:48:633(5) : 1 repeat ?k
- 00:49:264(1,2,3,4,5) : Spacing. (If you add repeat )k

[WyndII Style]

Great !

[Insane]

Okay !


That's it.
Star !

jockeytiyan wrote:

Re-mod. (lol 4 months)

Somehow, I found some things that needed to be pointed out. I wonder why I never got to see them when I first modded it. XD


Garven's Easy:

SPOILER

00:19:896 - (timing section) Move it to the next 1/4 tick since I've already been warned to not put timing sections that changes hitsound sets or volume at the same place with the target note in it.
00:29:369 (3) - soft whistle + normal hitsound + soft hitsound doesn't sound right, IMO.

Normal+:

SPOILER

00:57:790 (2) - lol nazi. The overlap doesn't look right for me. 1 grid to the right shall do it. If you follow this, remember to stack (4) too.
01:18:001 (2) - ^
01:05:527 - (timing section) Place it at the end of the slider. I think this can cause a bug in the .osu AND apparently, this isn't rankable.
01:15:475 (2) - ^

WyndII Style: (I promise. This mod is in English. :3)

SPOILER

I swear something weird is in this diff. I only find mistimed beats here. :<

General: IMO, some of the soft finish hitsounds in the kiai sections could use the clap custom hitsound.

00:19:264 (5,6) - The jingling sounds weird here. Either delete both of them, or just place the hitsound in one of the notes.
00:22:264 - (timing section) Volume sounds a bit high. Try reducing it at around 1-2 ticks.
01:09:475 (5) - Sounds empty for me...
01:22:738 (1,2) - Volume is too loud

Insane:

SPOILER

00:20:843 (1) - No need to change this, but it sounds better in 1/4 than 1/8.
01:23:369 - (timing section) Move back by 1/4 tick. Go check the mod for Garven's diff if you wanna know what I mean.

~

rust45 wrote:

[Normal +]
I feel the overall diff should be lowered by 1, it feels just a tad too fast for a normal +. X
01:05:369 (3) - I don't agree with this, it just doesn't feel right IMO X
01:15:475 (2,3) - ^ this is worse as you have a slow slider and then a normal one. fixed

[Insane]
00:06:633 (1,2,3,4,5) - Doesn't go with the music at all. X
00:11:685 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ X

I suppose I should star this, the maps aren't half bad.

KIA wrote:

Authentic is so authentic D:

SliderBorder : 0,0,0

Mafiamaster wrote:

default-dot, percent, and x aren't needed in the folder. Delete them!