Timing is off.
Try these, still pretty sure it's not right. Better, though.

In your .osu file:

[TimingPoints]
5730,315.789473684211,4,2,0,100,1,0
15835,324.324324324324,4,2,0,100,1,0
26213,315.789473684211,4,2,0,100,1,0
59055,307.692307692308,4,2,0,100,1,0
66439,315.789473684211,4,2,0,100,1,0
76544,324.324324324324,4,2,0,100,1,0

Timing request accepted!
Bpm: 95,25
offset: 710
Starred

Thanks you, but i prefer bpm by h31kru.

There's taiko authentic map of this song as I know. I can get if for you if you want.

Yeah Ok ^^

Ok, finally you uploaded properly.

The file is uploaded properly, but I don't know why normal diff don't show up in beatmap information page... I suggest to contact BAT about this. (Before contact to BAT, try standard sumbit.)

This map has dynamic BPM and can't be timed with one BPM and offset setting.
My timing isn't perfect so you can change it as you want.

Well, one bad news it you have to snap all the notes with your self cause you once snapped with wrong timing.

(timing setup backup)

EDIT: You shouldn't give kudosu for this post cause I've already got one. It will be denied by BAT.

EDIT2: Almost forgot, please add some lead-in.

Thanks you ! ^^

Overall :
Pls take noted try dont put any note on the blue line when you map a song,especially one is not as much as experience he has.
i've already pointed some of them as blew.

[Easy]
00:05:579 --->> 00:08:742 thythm will be more stable if you can try replacing circles with sliders.
00:10:960 --->> 00:15:043 ^
00:18:171 (1,2) - remove 2 notes
00:18:171 (1) - put a slider start on 00:18:091 and end on 00:18:579
00:31:074 (1) - make it 1/4 later
00:31:474 (2) - make the end of slider 1/4 earlier

[Hard+]
00:27:244 (1) - make it 1/4 later
00:28:202 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:30:516 (7) - make it 1/4 earlier
00:32:357 (5) - make it 1/4 later
00:33:720 (6,7,8) - make them 1/4 later
00:33:399 (x) - add a note
00:46:582 (4,5,6,7,8) - make them 1/4 later
00:48:714 (1) - make it 1/4 earlier
00:56:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make them 1/4 later
01:00:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make them 1/4 later
01:06:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make them 1/4 later
01:04:799 (1) - make it 1/2 later
01:11:292 (2) - make it 1/4 later
01:17:123 (1,2,3,4) - make it 1/4 later
01:19:509 (1) - make it end on 01:20:418

[Insane]
hmm...the same problem as other diffs.
pls fix them by yourslef following my first sentence.
i dont take more examples anyway.

At last,i think this map need more mods before it get ranked.
Star~

Thanks

- Easy fixed

Something really bad happened when you resnapped the notes. They're all off, you'll need to fix them manually by yourself. Remember next time, you must be careful when you change things like timing. I'll mod this one when everything is sorted out.

Fixed all manually

Thanks.

[Insane]

00:05:736 (1) - move back to the white tick.(00:05:579) end on white tick.(00:05:894)
00:06:368 (2) - move back to the white tick.(00:06:210)
00:06:684 (3) - move back to the white tick.(00:06:526) and spacing~
00:07:000 (4,5,6,7,8) - move back to the white tick.(8) end on red tick?(00:08:900)
00:10:803 (5) - move back to the white tick.(00:10:646) and new combo.
00:11:745 (9) - move forward to the white tick.(00:11:902)
00:17:607 (7) - spacing~
00:20:383 (9) - ^
00:22:819 (6) - ^
00:44:766 (1) - end on white tick.(00:45:714)
00:54:082 (1) - end on white tick.(00:55:503)
00:58:969 (8) - like this.
01:04:692 (5) - end on red tick.(01:05:113)
01:14:498 (1) - end on white tick.(01:15:597)
01:16:068 (1) - move back to the white tick.(01:15:911)
01:16:225 (2) - move back to the red tick.(01:16:068)
01:16:383 (3) - move back to the white tick.(01:16:225)
01:19:509 (1) - move forward to the white tick.(01:20:418) end at (01:30:115)? silent end plz~x:
01:19:509 (x) - add circle.
01:19:660 (x) - ^
01:19:812 (x) - ^
01:19:963 (x) - ^

[Hard+]
I think that Hard is better~

00:02:280 (4) - end on white tick.(00:02:751)
00:18:252 (6) - new combo.
00:33:720 (6) - ^
00:39:015 (1) - move back to the red tick.(00:38:937) end at (00:40:350)
00:44:135 (1) - end on white tick.(00:45:398)
00:46:661 (4) - spacing~
00:48:871 (1) - end on white tick.(00:50:766)
00:51:082 (1) - end on white tick.(00:51:398)
00:59:126 (1) - end on white tick.(01:00:547)
01:09:495 (1) - end on white tick.(01:10:902)
01:19:509 (1) - same as insane

[Easy]

00:05:579 (1) - end on white tick.(00:06:210)
00:06:684 (2) - move forward to the white tick.(00:06:842) end at (00:07:473)
00:07:789 (3) - move forward to the white tick.(00:18:105)
00:09:694 (1) - remove new combo.
00:10:960 (2) - move back to the white tick.(00:10:646) end at (00:11:274) and new combo.
00:12:216 (3) - move back to the white tick.(00:11:902) end at (00:12:530)
00:13:316 (4) - move back to the white tick.(00:13:159) end at (00:13:787)
00:14:415 (x) - add circle.
00:48:240 (5) - end on white tick.(00:48:871)
00:54:240 (1) - end on white tick.(00:55:187)
00:57:709 (1) - end on white tick.(00:59:600)
01:05:898 (x) - add circle.
01:19:206 (1) - end on white tick.(01:20:418)

Thanks !

- Hard fixed

- Easy fixed

- Insane fixed

General
Timing is kinda wrong, it's.. playable but it would be a chore to 99+ acc Insane just due to upper OD and timing being off. Note placement on the time line is also very off. Confusing spacing and patterns. Overuse of claps IMO. Since it's a TV-Size map with no video, you could use a higher quality mp3. Also, the combo colours fit the BG, but I'm not so fond of the black on black at times, a lighter gray might work better, or perhaps a yellow/blue scheme.

I don't think you need ALL of those red lines. If you really want to map this however, I suggest asking Cyclone/Lybydose etc. for timing help.

Insane
00:02:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These notes don't fit the song's beat at all.
00:05:422 (7,1) - This sound transition is very unfitting. It goes from loud claps to like silence softsamples in 0 seconds flat.
00:08:424 (8) - Bad slider. =[
00:12:452 (1) - Wrong tick. Please go through the entire song and all difficulties and ensure your notes are on the right beat.
00:20:711 (1) - Note here IMO.
00:22:009 (4,5) - Note Timing
00:23:468 (1,2,3) - ^
00:28:441 (5,6,7) - ^
01:20:115 (5,6,7) -
00:31:795 (2,3) - Spacing
00:38:460 (1,2,3,4) - Note Timing + Mini-stream doesn't fit
00:36:220 (1) - to 01:16:540 (4) - Giant block of Kiai is bad and doesn't fit at all.
01:20:569 (1) - Fade out volume + Extend spinner.

To save on redundancy, go through the entire song, listen to where the beats are, and space them properly. Go through AiMod and make sure any 'spacing errors' were intentional things, and not just sloppy/lazy spacing. I suggest reducing your use of claps considerably, adjusting some volume levels so certain areas aren't incredibly loud and others very silent. Also, having a volume/timing panel right ON a note's tick is bad, as if someone hits early, the new change won't play properly. Place panels slightly before volume/sample changes.

While this song is.. Somewhat playable, there are many, many errors that you should fix before getting more mods. Try to fix spacing/note timing so that that map plays decently, then ask someone really good for help with timing. After that, make adjustments and make sure all your notes are correct and in-place again, and then start asking for regular modders.

Due to the sheer amount of timing/etc. changes that are going to need done, modding Hard and Easy would mostly be a waste atm as I think you get the idea.

Good luck to you.

Firstable - You didn't change everything, there's still much not fitting and ugly sounded beats. For example (on [Insane]): 00:02:594 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - Does it sound good for you? I don't think so. You also have full of spacing issues, like this: 00:01:495 (2,3). Please, check all of the difficulties CAREFULLY with Distance Snap turned on one more time for issues.

One more thing - the timing is off. Ask someone good at the timing to adjust it.

Yeah, I know that timing isn't perfect. All I did was setting timing to make this 'mappable', cause it had totally wrong timing.
Timing seems kinda unstable so pretty hard to set, and actually I think I overtimed this one.

Well, give me another chance (actually one of my pending map has unstable BPM), or just find some other experts.

I'll adjust my timing untill expert arrives.

EDIT: try this, ctrl+C&P to .osu file.

550,313.561536451529,4,1,0,100,1,0
5566,319.318786588611,4,1,0,100,1,0
8120,313.807531380753,4,1,0,100,1,0
10630,315.208825847124,4,1,0,100,1,0
15673,324.324324324324,4,1,0,100,1,0
18267,327.064595257563,4,1,0,100,1,0
20883,323.014804845222,4,1,0,100,1,0
23467,322.58064516129,4,1,0,100,1,0
26047,319.318786588611,4,1,0,100,1,0
31156,322.234156820623,4,1,0,100,1,0
33733,312.5,4,1,0,100,1,0
34983,309.278350515464,4,1,0,100,1,0
36220,320,4,1,0,100,1,1
38780,314.13612565445,4,1,0,100,1,1
41293,315.789473684211,4,1,0,100,1,1
56450,312.5,4,1,0,100,1,1
58950,316.622691292876,4,1,0,100,1,1
61482,316.622691292876,4,1,0,100,1,1
64014,313.31592689295,4,1,0,100,1,1
74040,313.31592689295,4,1,0,100,1,1
76546,333.333333333333,4,1,0,100,1,0
79212,303.030303030303,4,1,0,100,1,0

BPM seems to keep changing, so it can't be defined as some fine uninherited section as I think.
(Or just I'm too inexperienced about this...)

Bien que je hais naruto, c'est bien parceque c'est Snorkel qui a fait l'OP.
Il est plus courant de voir Snorkel que Snowkel aussi... donc si tu pouvais changé :3

[Easy]
00:02:274 (3) - 1/2 plus tard
00:08:120 (3) - 1/1 plus tard
00:09:061 (4) - 1/2 plus tard
00:15:358 (1) - Etant en faisant en sorte que la fin du slide soit a 00:16:645
00:20:719 (1) - Etant de 1/4

Hu... j'ai pas le temps de terminer, je finirais demain sorry

Thanks.

Mais le vrai nom c'est Snowkel

thx request
mod4mod XD

i think no good bpm and offset
but,i don't know...

[Easy]
0:02:117(3) - move 0:02:274
0:03:058(4) - return 0:03:528(end 0:03:999)
0:08:904(4) - move 0:08:747
0:15:358(1) - return 0:15:997(end 0:16:545)
0:31:156(1) - end 0:31:478
1:14:040(1) - end 1:15:293

[Hard]
0:11:418(1) - move 0:11:575(end 0:11:890)
0:12:127(2) - move 0:12:206(end 0:12:521)
0:12:994(3,4) - move 0:13:151
0:34:670(4) - end 0:35:292

[Insane]
0:02:980(1,2,3) - move 0:03:058
0:28:601(6,7) - delete circle. move slider 0:28:601(end 0:29:240)
0:38:701(4) - move 0:38:780 and add circle.
1:03:856(3) - move 1:04:014 and add circle.

Thanks ! ^^

All diffs fixed.

Hi, modded by request~
(Naruto ^^)

Easy
- Somewhat hard as an Easy. Rename to Normal?

00:03:528 (6) - End at 00:03:999, Delete finish on the end
00:15:358 (1) - IMO, since there is a timing change, I prefer to make a note, and make a new slider on 00:15:673
01:19:212 (1) - End at 01:20:348?

Hard
00:08:276 (2) - Move to 00:08:433
00:08:590 (3) - Delete
00:43:503 (6) - Delete Finish
01:03:698 (7,8) - 1 Grid left

Insane
00:01:961 (3) - Bad jump to me..
00:06:843 (4) - Distance
00:22:013 (4) - End at 00:22:175
01:20:272 (6) - Add Finish
01:20:424 (7) - Delete

Good Luck

Thanks ^^

All diffs fixed.

Just go and find some better experts of timing. It still needs to be adjust.
(Or at least specify where is wrong)

Okay.

+Star :)

Taiko

00:15:673 -> 00:24:757 : Boring ...
00:50:608 : You should add more of these streams.
00:54:556 : In taiko there's no break time.
01:19:212 : Just a spinner ? Let's add a final stream

This taiko map is nice, but personally I think it's too easy ...

Star~

Thanks ^^

WAHOW

Tes maps sont super
La hard est trop bien

Le Meilleur est lapidon Taiko Oni
Moi qui deteste le taiko sur osu je me le suis tapé au moins 6fois.

C'est Super

STAR

Roganis wrote:

Taiko

00:15:673 -> 00:24:757 : Boring ...
00:50:608 : You should add more of these streams.
00:54:556 : In taiko there's no break time.
01:19:212 : Just a spinner ? Let's add a final stream

This map is FULL AUTHENTIC so let's leave this as authentic, ok?
(I know it's kinda.... boring too you, but sorry ;;)

Merci Agent

Hai, here comes... timing help...?

I'm pretty sure you don't need all those non-inherited timing sections...
I'm not a timing expert. You need to get Cyclone or someone who is really an expert on timing.

Oh Okay.

Thanks.

Great song
This was a song I planned on submitting a long time ago just forgot to map it. Good thing someone did. Star

Thanks ^^

[General]
1) remove "anime" from tag ( it will be stated in the genre)
2) for the preview time, 00:36:601 is better than 00:33:733 ?
3) the volume is too loud? 70% is enough.

[Easy]
00:11:890 (2) the end of the slider is unsnapped
00:20:719 (1) end at 00:21:206 ?
00:34:983 (1,1) being a [Easy], the slider starts too near the spinner.
00:49:187 (1,1) ^
01:03:065 (1) end at 01:04:953 ?

[Hard]
00:34:670 (4) end at 00:35:292 ?
00:35:910 (2,3,4,5) too many finish...?
00:39:251 (1) end at 00:40:350 ?
00:44:293 (7) slience the slidertick and end at 00:45:398 ?
00:59:266 (9) end at 00:59:899 ?
01:19:515 (1) end at 01:20:348 and add finish?

[Insane]
00:22:336 (5,6) spacing?
00:23:305 add a note here?
00:23:628 (2) delete this note?
00:59:899 (1) end at 01:00:533 ?but it will become a unrankable spinner, use others to instead?
01:04:640 (6) end at 01:04:953 ?
01:20:575 (1) slience this spinner?

yes, you should check the timing, it is unusual to use so many red timing section.
and here is my star, good luck~

Thanks.

Fixed.

polp~

[Easy]
00:07:801 (3) - 1/1 plus loin

[Hard]
Rien~

[Insane]
00:14:727 (8) - Mal placé :O
00:20:392 (9) - Supprime
01:08:087 (1) - New combo

Star~

Thanks.

Fixed.

star!

Clare wrote:

star!

SPOILER

sorry i just mod pending map(rule 1),if this map is pending repost my queue,i'll mod it

Okay.

Thanks for your star

Remove naruto from tags, is already in source
add "lepidopodus" to tags in All diffs

Well here's my modding, kinda late I know, but I was busy
Anyway, this are mostly suggestions to improve your map, are just things I notice while playing the map, and some rhythm adjustments.
hope is useful for you =3
Any questions, send me to pm, or if you want a recheck, send me to Pm as well.

Insane
00:08:433 (8) - shorten by 1/2 beat, the add not at 00:08:904
00:10:630 (1) - i think is too far from prev. combo, kinda unpredictable
00:12:521 (1) - move 1/2 beat later
00:38:460 (1) - why this new combo?
00:40:664 (1,2,3) - these are to close together... seems like a a half beat while playing, confusing imo
00:41:924 (3,4) - this are correctly spaced =D
01:00:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same here, this suddenly change of spacing is kind of random, seems like 1/2 beat notes

Hard
00:44:135 - add note here, sounds better in my opinion
00:53:293 (6) - remove 2 repeats, and start the next spinner at 00:54:635
00:58:950 (8) - you could separate this a bit more from 7 =D
01:10:280 (9) - is this a jump? kinda weird, maybe add new combo?

Easy
seems like a normal @.@
00:02:274 (3,4,5) - confusing pattern... specially in an easy diff. maybe you could stack 3,4
00:08:747 (4) - lonely and out of rhythm note =( how about if you move it a beat earlier, then add note at 00:09:061?
00:18:105 (5) - shorten by 1/2 beat, and move it 1/2 later
00:20:719 (1) - same
00:23:305 (5) - same
00:28:441 (1) - shorten by 1/4 beat, the move it 1/2 beat later
00:37:827 - there is like a missing note here

star!!

Thanks.

Fixed.

Wait... this has an authentic? o_O

See this is why I should really have contact with the Taiko Arcades aaaaaaaaaa

Anyway... timing checking via Taiko method

Taiko run: 1x100



Insane run: 8x100



It actually looks fine already, but let's see if I can optimize it...

Secondary check: metronome checking...

Err, never mind, I edited quite some stuffs based on the current timing... this one consists of really few red lines compared to the previous ones, but there may be some sequences that sound a bit off :/

Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [Zekira's Red Lines].osu

Starring because it has a Taiko authentic hahahaha

Zekira wrote:

It actually looks fine already, but let's see if I can optimize it...

Though every one said 'wrong timing cause there's so much red lines' lol

Thanks very much, Zekira.

Though every one said 'wrong timing cause there's so much red lines' lol

Now that's just absurd... >_>

yes, you should check the timing, it is unusual to use so many red timing section.

It's like saying it's unusual to get the timing perfect >_>

Zekira wrote:

Though every one said 'wrong timing cause there's so much red lines' lol

Now that's just absurd... >_>

yes, you should check the timing, it is unusual to use so many red timing section.

It's like saying it's unusual to get the timing perfect >_>

Okay, Thanks ^^

Well?
This seems good ;_;

And good luck is the last sentence that I can say on this song ;_;

Good luck :3

Thanks Arken.

eeemod GO!!!
now let's see.
I'm not very good at timing, so I'm not very sure about this.
The section at 01:16:546 (76,546) should have a BPM of 181.
The final section should be BPM 188.
Again, that's just what I got, it could be completely off . I had no problem playing through the map with the first couple of sections.
Hmm, not sure anymore :X... well maybe the final section is off... I don't know anymore!!!

[Easy]
00:34:987 (1) - the end isn't snapped
00:52:340 (2) - 'tis a pretty huge jump for an [Easy]

[Hard]
Looks alright

[Taiko]
way too much combo numbers
straight lines make the map too linear
there are places in this map that make me wann..... wait a minute, this is a taiko... I DON'T MOD TAIKOS SORRY!!!

[Insane]
00:40:656 (1,2,3) - spacing tricked me (?) it's not THAT bad though
01:01:498 (4,5,6) - this one tricked me more than the above one
01:03:077 (8) - ^

that is all, not much of a mod
good luck on the timing too, most of it sounds good to me

Thanks.

Fixed.

C'est un map très bien!
Mod and diff. later .

Thanks.

done

Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [fartownik].osu

Thanks.

Uploaded.

As I said - make kiai sections as they are in my difficulty.

[Easy]

Lack of hitsounds? Where are them?

The beggining is also iffy, as in Hard.

00:18:267 (5,1) - Spacing.
00:20:862 (1,2) - ^
01:19:212 (1) - You should make this spinner longer (even on all difficulties), it's too short for an Easy.


[Hard]

The beggining is a bit iffy, you would map it better. Also the spinners are quite short.

Also: decrease HP Drain and Overall Difficulty by 1 tick?


[Insane]

00:03:688 (5,6) - These notes sound off. Delete them and add a note here 00:03:531.
00:04:158 (5) - This sounds off too.Move it 1/2 forward and add a note here 00:04:001.
00:45:708 - Add a note.
00:50:445 - ^
01:01:813 (6,7) - Spacing.
01:20:575 (1) - Finish hitsound doesn't fit here. A normal/whistle should be better.

Map is finished hitsounds will follow!

Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [HT!].osu

Thanks.

Uploaded.

+ Hitsounds

Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [HT!].osu

Thanks.

Uploaded.

Don't need to set kiai in taiko map same as standard ones. kiai in standard is just for showing, but in taiko there's 20% score bonus in kiai time so you need to be careful.

deleted some unnessasary timing sections and adjusted kiai.

Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu

Thanks.

Uploaded.

Don't place timing sections exactly on the notes.


~Easy~
00:37:498 (2,3,4) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:52:656 (3) - move the tail down a bit
00:55:813 (1) - make it more symmetrical
01:19:212 (1) - end on 01:20:348

~HT!~
00:07:995 (1) - start on blue tick
00:11:110 (2) - end on left red tick

~Hard~
01:18:546 (5,1) - end with normal hitsound
01:19:515 (1) - end on left blue tick

~Insane~
00:43:182 (6) - end on white tick
00:48:235 (2,3,4) - wrong spacings
00:53:287 (3,4) - too close
01:20:121 (5) - delete
01:20:272 (5) - move 1/4 right
01:20:575 (1) - silence it & make it longer

~fartownik~
Too many hitfinishes.
01:24:818 - silence it


+Star

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Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [fartownik].osu

Thanks Djpop.

Fixed.

heeello. i won't be checking the taiko difficulty.

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[Easy]
00:31:795 (2) - inconsistent spacing.
00:55:813 (1) - extend to white tick.
01:19:212 (1) - missing a finish?

[HT!]
00:07:798 (1,2) - what? just move the (2) on the red tick.

[Insane]
00:06:851 (4) - random clap is lol. remove it please? if you want claps, then place them on every other white tick to match the drum beat. if you need help, i can do the hitsounds for you and just upload the file.
00:58:340 (6) - inconsistent spacing.

[fartownik]
00:26:051 (1) - change the beginning to a finish, and the end to a clap. from here on, you have all the claps messed up. they should be placed on every other white tick to match the drums.
00:35:625 (5) - BPM change is tricky to catch. perhaps you could at least change it into a new combo?
00:43:813 (1,2,3,4) - okay, no. this is a dick move, lol. fix this please.
01:00:077 (10) - ^ errrgghh

i can't really say i like the jumps in this difficulty. the spacing seems all over the place to me.

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overall, the maps are good. some new combos are unreasonable however, and since i have to leave shorty i can't name them all. but please look over them and consider changing some. take a star.

Thanks you.

Timing atm is playable for me but I cant say is it absolutely accurate since I still feel s little weird.

btw map is good so starred.

Thanks for your star.

Star~~
PM for mod

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Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [fartownik].osu

Thanks.

Uploaded.

Takuma wrote:

[HT!]
00:07:798 (1,2) - what? just move the (2) on the red tick.

I think Slanox accidently did this ^^'.

Updated (Some new Spacing and useless Timing Points removed, please contact me before changing again ^^'.)

Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [HT!].osu

Okay xD.

Thanks, uploaded.

Star

Thanks.

Timing is a bit weird for me.

But it's playable.

Mapset is fine for me (except timing).

Star.

Okay :3

Thanks.

I said I will check timing and was busy, here is result of my 1hour.

bpm // offset

191.200 / 550
190.200 / 5590 ←×
184.800 / 15673
189.000 / 27360
191.250 / 28629
184.400 / 31138
185.400 / 32439
188.200 / 33733
190.000 / 36235
189.200 / 38761
192.200 / 47640
190.400 / 50163
190.600 / 51423
190.800 / 52682
191.000 / 53939
191.200 / 58965
191.400 / 61475 ←×
183.000 / 63982 ←×
192.700 / 65293 ←×
192.600 / 66535
191.400 / 71519
176.000 / 76534
184.000 / 77897

fin

gl

Thanks for your star ! ^^

fix red lines and kiai sections on all diffs

Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [fartownik].osu

Thanks.

Uploaded.

Lol that timing is weird. I'm fairly sure that it's wrong D:

I'll just star it

oops some mistake there, not sure why
wait a min gonna add here

190.200 / 5590 > 190.200 // 4315
add 189.000 // 5576
add 191.200 // 10654
191.400 / 61475 >> 190.400 // 61475
183.000 / 63982 >> 183.400 // 63996
192.700 / 65293 >> 194.400 // 65304

seems I wrote down old data ...

Thank you Netteke

Thanks.

EDIT : Fixed.

[Easy]:

1. 01:18:223 (3,4,5,1) - use sosft hitsound fit better.

[HT!]:

1. 00:28:475 (1) - unsnapped note
2. 01:05:612 (T) - add a note here

[Hard]:

1. 00:15:361 (1,2) - they are fine. but still suggest move them to 00:15:673 and remove the note 00:16:647 (3)
2. 00:16:390 (2) - unsnapped
3. 00:28:316 (2) - ^
4. 01:18:223 (4,5,1) - use sosft hitsound fit better.

The other 2 Osu diffs are fine except the unsnapped notes.

Thanks.

Fixed.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!

All

01:19:212 - this timing is right ?!

fartownik

00:05:734 (1) - end at 00:08:115
00:10:655 (12) - move to 00:10:654
00:10:810 (1) - end at 00:13:164
01:05:141 (7) - end at 01:05:458
01:16:546 - what !!! 2 red lines ?!
01:20:424 (1) - remove whistle

Insane

00:27:361 (5) - move to 00:27:360
00:34:667 (1) - end at 00:35:944
00:50:137 (6) - move to 00:50:163
00:54:096 (1) - end at 00:55:509
01:09:503 (1) - ^
01:10:910 (1) - end at 01:11:832
01:16:534 - same as fartownik
01:16:534 (4) - move to 01:16:546 ?!
01:17:879 (1) - move to 01:17:879
01:19:201 (5) - ^

Hard

00:10:655 (2) - move to 00:10:654
01:03:680 (7) - end at 01:04:323
01:04:977 (1) - end at 01:05:921
01:15:124 (1) - end at 01:16:546
01:18:549 (5) - end at 01:19:212

HT!

00:08:115 (1) - end at 00:10:020
00:10:655 (1) - move to 00:10:654
00:27:361 (5) - move to 00:27:360
00:38:761 (1) - end at 00:40:029
00:53:625 (1) - ^
01:20:575 - this green is unnecessary ?

Easy

00:10:655 (1) - move to 00:10:654
00:28:312 (1) - end at 00:28:942

.......................................

if you point at 1:20:34? sound, it is on 1/2 of 4/4 in that section, not on end of 4/4.
but give me your opinion then I can make better offset and bpm.

Thanks.

AngelHoney wrote:

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!

All

01:19:212 - this timing is right ?!

fartownik

00:05:734 (1) - end at 00:08:115
00:10:655 (12) - move to 00:10:654
00:10:810 (1) - end at 00:13:164
01:05:141 (7) - end at 01:05:458
01:16:546 - what !!! 2 red lines ?!
01:20:424 (1) - remove whistle

Insane

00:27:361 (5) - move to 00:27:360
00:34:667 (1) - end at 00:35:944
00:50:137 (6) - move to 00:50:163
00:54:096 (1) - end at 00:55:509
01:09:503 (1) - ^
01:10:910 (1) - end at 01:11:832
01:16:534 - same as fartownik
01:16:534 (4) - move to 01:16:546 ?!
01:17:879 (1) - move to 01:17:879
01:19:201 (5) - ^

Hard

00:10:655 (2) - move to 00:10:654
01:03:680 (7) - end at 01:04:323
01:04:977 (1) - end at 01:05:921
01:15:124 (1) - end at 01:16:546
01:18:549 (5) - end at 01:19:212

HT!

00:08:115 (1) - end at 00:10:020
00:10:655 (1) - move to 00:10:654
00:27:361 (5) - move to 00:27:360
00:38:761 (1) - end at 00:40:029
00:53:625 (1) - ^
01:20:575 - this green is unnecessary ?

Easy

00:10:655 (1) - move to 00:10:654
00:28:312 (1) - end at 00:28:942

.......................................

EDIT : Fixed.

General

• - Disable all countdown
  - Use 00:35:624 (35,624ms) as preview point?
  - Still have some unsnapped notes, please resnap once again

Easy

• - OAD is too low D:..
  - Correct the lead-in seconds to 1500 (correct it on other diffs too)

01:20:575 - unused section


Not much to say :D
The mapset is fun, although I'm not a fan of Naruto :P

Thanks.

Fixed.

[Overall]
01:15:280 - end of KIAI.

[Easy]
Moments like 00:23:465 (1,2) and 00:55:823 (1,2) must be fixed. It's not danger, but be better if you fix it.

[Insane]
OD -1.

01:20:424 (6) - put this note on blue tick.
00:59:906 (10) - end in 01:00:534, and remove that note 01:00:534 (11).

Star~

Thanks.

Fixed.

Insane
00:28:475 (6) - new combo
00:29:570 (1) - remove new combo
00:59:984 (10) - move to prev white tick

Hard
00:28:312 (2) - isn't snapped

HT!
00:41:297 (1) - remove new combo
00:48:264 (1) - same
01:05:304 - add note

Easy
00:08:750 (4) - kind of confusing @.@ try moving one beat earlier

Star! ^^

[All difficulty]
- 01:16:619 - why here have 2 red timing selection | BPM 176.00 Offset 76,534 and BPM 180.00 Offset 76,546
- At 7th red timing have 2 selection at the same time | BPM 189.00 Offset 27,360 and BPM 188.20 Offset 27,360

[Hard]
01:19:515 (1) - end this spinner at blue tick like other diffs?

[Insane]
01:20:575 (1) - end this spinner at 01:26:484? and make it like fartownik's diff is better imo >_<

that's all for now! If possible I will let someone else re-check timing on this map again ~

Lissette wrote:

Insane
00:28:475 (6) - new combo
00:29:570 (1) - remove new combo
00:59:984 (10) - move to prev white tick

Hard
00:28:312 (2) - isn't snapped

HT!
00:41:297 (1) - remove new combo
00:48:264 (1) - same
01:05:304 - add note

Easy
00:08:750 (4) - kind of confusing @.@ try moving one beat earlier

Star! ^^

Thanks.

Fixed.

orioncomet wrote:

[All difficulty]
- 01:16:619 - why here have 2 red timing selection | BPM 176.00 Offset 76,534 and BPM 180.00 Offset 76,546
- At 7th red timing have 2 selection at the same time | BPM 189.00 Offset 27,360 and BPM 188.20 Offset 27,360

[Hard]
01:19:515 (1) - end this spinner at blue tick like other diffs?

[Insane]
01:20:575 (1) - end this spinner at 01:26:484? and make it like fartownik's diff is better imo >_<

that's all for now! If possible I will let someone else re-check timing on this map again ~

Thanks.

Fixed.

[All difficulites]
What's up with those random kiai fountains.
A lot of them doesn't even highlight a epic part in the song.
I suggest you only use 1 kiai fountains in this map, more of them is annoying here.

[Easy]
00:00:550 (1,2,3) - For being the easiest difficulty this rhythm is pretty hard as you need to know the song well to know how it goes. Maybe do something simpler with only 1/1 or make it into one long slider.

00:15:997 (2,3,4) - This sounds a bit weird as it is right now, I think it makes far more sense if you move all these beats 1/1 backwards on the timeline and make (4) 1/1 longer.

Please use more than just claps on the places when you used Normal sample set.

Remove the last timing section!

Feels more like an Normal for me right now with 3 stars decent fast sliders and lot's of 1/1 and even some 1/2.

[HT!]
00:06:528 - I strongly suggest you place a circle here.

Remove the last timing section!

Good normal although some later 1/2 felt like they wouldn't be needed until Hard or something.

[Hard]
00:15:673 - 00:36:235 - Why is there no hitsounds here? (Ok before 00:25:413 it fits pretty well to the song but after that it's just lame)
Also the hitsounding after that was just random claps :/ Add some finishes whistles and make the clap placement make more sense.

Remove the last timing section!

[Taiko]
Looks great, I don't know much about taiko mapping/modding but here's some suggestions
00:17:621- add red beat here
00:22:815 - add red beat here

Remove the last timing section!

[Insane]
This HP drain is brutal, I suggest you lower it.

Also, yet again.
A large portion of the maps only have weird clap placement and could use more of other hitsounds :/

[fartownik]
Haha pretty good difficulty (Too hard for me though )

Pretty good, hitsounding could have been better on your difficulites but it was pretty enjoyable otherwise.
*star*

Thanks.

EDIT : Fixed.