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Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on samedi 14 mai 2011 at 14:20:25

Artist: Snowkel
Title: Namikaze Satellite (TV Size)
Source: Naruto
Tags: lepidopodus fartownik naruto
BPM: 190
Filesize: 13959kb
Play Time: 01:19
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,97 stars, 95 notes)
  2. fartownik (5 stars, 296 notes)
  3. Hard (4,54 stars, 168 notes)
  4. lepidon! - Taiko Oni (4,8 stars, 289 notes)
Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size)
Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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4th Beatmap !

Naruto -
Snowkel - Namilaze Satellite ( TV Size )
==========================

Special thanks to Lepidopodus and Fartownik.
Timing by blissfulyoshi.
Thanks.

Difficulty :

lepidon! - Taiko Oni by lepidopodus - 100%
Fartownik by Fartownik (Insane) - 100%
Hard by Slanox - 100%
Easy by Slanox - 100%

Edit :

5/14 : Hard remapped.
5/14 : Xero'diff deleted.

Modding :

1- gdeath Mod
2- Cyborg Mod
3- Shinde Mod
4- fartownik Mod
5- Kurai_ Mod
6- frost-b-spec Mod
7- sonnyc Mod
8- Roganis Mod
9- Vikon Mod
10- Lizbeth Mod
11- Zekira Mod
12- eee Mod
13- Djpop Mod
14- Takuma Mod
15- dvorak Mod
16- Colin Hou Mod
17- Pokie Mod
18- [DBF] Mod
19- Lissette Mod
20- Orioncomet Mod
21- Xgor Mod
22- Doomsday93 Mod
23- Lokamp Mod
24- Derekku Mod
25- James Mod


Enjoy !
Colin Hou
Tell me when you finish all the diffs and get a better timing.

I mod only pendings :3
Furawa
try this hitsound style?normal clap is not fit for this song I think?
timing im not sure but i think is off XD
sorry for my poor eng :o

Download: Snorkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [test].osu
Inozuma
Timing is off.
Try these, still pretty sure it's not right. Better, though.

In your .osu file:
[TimingPoints]
5730,315.789473684211,4,2,0,100,1,0
15835,324.324324324324,4,2,0,100,1,0
26213,315.789473684211,4,2,0,100,1,0
59055,307.692307692308,4,2,0,100,1,0
66439,315.789473684211,4,2,0,100,1,0
76544,324.324324324324,4,2,0,100,1,0
Armin
Timing request accepted!
Bpm: 95,25
offset: 710
Starred :D
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks you, but i prefer bpm by h31kru.
lepidopodus
There's taiko authentic map of this song as I know. I can get if for you if you want.
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Yeah Ok ^^
lepidopodus
Ok, finally you uploaded properly.

The file is uploaded properly, but I don't know why normal diff don't show up in beatmap information page... I suggest to contact BAT about this. (Before contact to BAT, try standard sumbit.)

This map has dynamic BPM and can't be timed with one BPM and offset setting.
My timing isn't perfect so you can change it as you want.

Well, one bad news it you have to snap all the notes with your self cause you once snapped with wrong timing.

(timing setup backup)
SPOILER
553,314.13612565445,4,1,0,100,1,0
5579,315.789473684211,4,1,0,100,1,0
8107,317.460317460317,4,1,0,100,1,0
10646,314.13612565445,4,1,0,100,1,0
15672,322.58064516129,4,1,0,100,1,0
18252,327.868852459016,4,1,0,100,1,0
20874,324.324324324324,4,1,0,100,1,0
23468,322.58064516129,4,1,0,100,1,0
26048,319.148936170213,4,1,0,100,1,0
31154,320.855614973262,4,1,0,100,1,0
33720,312.5,4,1,0,100,1,0
36220,320,4,1,0,100,1,1
38780,314.13612565445,4,1,0,100,1,1
41293,315.789473684211,4,1,0,100,1,1
56450,314.96062992126,4,1,0,100,1,1
58969,315.789473684211,4,1,0,100,1,1
61495,314.96062992126,4,1,0,100,1,1
64014,314.13612565445,4,1,0,100,1,1
66527,312.5,4,1,0,100,1,1
74027,314.13612565445,4,1,0,100,1,1
76540,333.333333333333,4,1,0,100,1,0
79206,303.030303030303,4,1,0,100,1,0

EDIT: You shouldn't give kudosu for this post cause I've already got one. It will be denied by BAT.

EDIT2: Almost forgot, please add some lead-in.
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks you ! ^^
gdeath
Overall :
Pls take noted try dont put any note on the blue line when you map a song,especially one is not as much as experience he has.
i've already pointed some of them as blew.

[Easy]
00:05:579 --->> 00:08:742 thythm will be more stable if you can try replacing circles with sliders.
00:10:960 --->> 00:15:043 ^
00:18:171 (1,2) - remove 2 notes
00:18:171 (1) - put a slider start on 00:18:091 and end on 00:18:579
00:31:074 (1) - make it 1/4 later
00:31:474 (2) - make the end of slider 1/4 earlier

[Hard+]
00:27:244 (1) - make it 1/4 later
00:28:202 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:30:516 (7) - make it 1/4 earlier
00:32:357 (5) - make it 1/4 later
00:33:720 (6,7,8) - make them 1/4 later
00:33:399 (x) - add a note
00:46:582 (4,5,6,7,8) - make them 1/4 later
00:48:714 (1) - make it 1/4 earlier
00:56:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make them 1/4 later
01:00:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make them 1/4 later
01:06:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make them 1/4 later
01:04:799 (1) - make it 1/2 later
01:11:292 (2) - make it 1/4 later
01:17:123 (1,2,3,4) - make it 1/4 later
01:19:509 (1) - make it end on 01:20:418

[Insane]
hmm...the same problem as other diffs.
pls fix them by yourslef following my first sentence.
i dont take more examples anyway.

At last,i think this map need more mods before it get ranked.
Star~
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks

- Easy fixed
fartownik
Something really bad happened when you resnapped the notes. They're all off, you'll need to fix them manually by yourself. Remember next time, you must be careful when you change things like timing. I'll mod this one when everything is sorted out.
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Fixed all manually

Thanks.
Aenna
[Insane]

00:05:736 (1) - move back to the white tick.(00:05:579) end on white tick.(00:05:894)
00:06:368 (2) - move back to the white tick.(00:06:210)
00:06:684 (3) - move back to the white tick.(00:06:526) and spacing~
00:07:000 (4,5,6,7,8) - move back to the white tick.(8) end on red tick?(00:08:900)
00:10:803 (5) - move back to the white tick.(00:10:646) and new combo.
00:11:745 (9) - move forward to the white tick.(00:11:902)
00:17:607 (7) - spacing~
00:20:383 (9) - ^
00:22:819 (6) - ^
00:44:766 (1) - end on white tick.(00:45:714)
00:54:082 (1) - end on white tick.(00:55:503)
00:58:969 (8) - like this.
01:04:692 (5) - end on red tick.(01:05:113)
01:14:498 (1) - end on white tick.(01:15:597)
01:16:068 (1) - move back to the white tick.(01:15:911)
01:16:225 (2) - move back to the red tick.(01:16:068)
01:16:383 (3) - move back to the white tick.(01:16:225)
01:19:509 (1) - move forward to the white tick.(01:20:418) end at (01:30:115)? silent end plz~x:
01:19:509 (x) - add circle.
01:19:660 (x) - ^
01:19:812 (x) - ^
01:19:963 (x) - ^

[Hard+]
I think that Hard is better~

00:02:280 (4) - end on white tick.(00:02:751)
00:18:252 (6) - new combo.
00:33:720 (6) - ^
00:39:015 (1) - move back to the red tick.(00:38:937) end at (00:40:350)
00:44:135 (1) - end on white tick.(00:45:398)
00:46:661 (4) - spacing~
00:48:871 (1) - end on white tick.(00:50:766)
00:51:082 (1) - end on white tick.(00:51:398)
00:59:126 (1) - end on white tick.(01:00:547)
01:09:495 (1) - end on white tick.(01:10:902)
01:19:509 (1) - same as insane

[Easy]

00:05:579 (1) - end on white tick.(00:06:210)
00:06:684 (2) - move forward to the white tick.(00:06:842) end at (00:07:473)
00:07:789 (3) - move forward to the white tick.(00:18:105)
00:09:694 (1) - remove new combo.
00:10:960 (2) - move back to the white tick.(00:10:646) end at (00:11:274) and new combo.
00:12:216 (3) - move back to the white tick.(00:11:902) end at (00:12:530)
00:13:316 (4) - move back to the white tick.(00:13:159) end at (00:13:787)
00:14:415 (x) - add circle.
00:48:240 (5) - end on white tick.(00:48:871)
00:54:240 (1) - end on white tick.(00:55:187)
00:57:709 (1) - end on white tick.(00:59:600)
01:05:898 (x) - add circle.
01:19:206 (1) - end on white tick.(01:20:418)
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks ! :D

- Hard fixed

- Easy fixed

- Insane fixed
Shinde
General
Timing is kinda wrong, it's.. playable but it would be a chore to 99+ acc Insane just due to upper OD and timing being off. Note placement on the time line is also very off. Confusing spacing and patterns. Overuse of claps IMO. Since it's a TV-Size map with no video, you could use a higher quality mp3. Also, the combo colours fit the BG, but I'm not so fond of the black on black at times, a lighter gray might work better, or perhaps a yellow/blue scheme.

I don't think you need ALL of those red lines. If you really want to map this however, I suggest asking Cyclone/Lybydose etc. for timing help.

Insane
00:02:987 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - These notes don't fit the song's beat at all.
00:05:422 (7,1) - This sound transition is very unfitting. It goes from loud claps to like silence softsamples in 0 seconds flat.
00:08:424 (8) - Bad slider. =[
00:12:452 (1) - Wrong tick. Please go through the entire song and all difficulties and ensure your notes are on the right beat.
00:20:711 (1) - Note here IMO.
00:22:009 (4,5) - Note Timing
00:23:468 (1,2,3) - ^
00:28:441 (5,6,7) - ^
01:20:115 (5,6,7) -
00:31:795 (2,3) - Spacing
00:38:460 (1,2,3,4) - Note Timing + Mini-stream doesn't fit
00:36:220 (1) - to 01:16:540 (4) - Giant block of Kiai is bad and doesn't fit at all.
01:20:569 (1) - Fade out volume + Extend spinner.

To save on redundancy, go through the entire song, listen to where the beats are, and space them properly. Go through AiMod and make sure any 'spacing errors' were intentional things, and not just sloppy/lazy spacing. I suggest reducing your use of claps considerably, adjusting some volume levels so certain areas aren't incredibly loud and others very silent. Also, having a volume/timing panel right ON a note's tick is bad, as if someone hits early, the new change won't play properly. Place panels slightly before volume/sample changes.

While this song is.. Somewhat playable, there are many, many errors that you should fix before getting more mods. Try to fix spacing/note timing so that that map plays decently, then ask someone really good for help with timing. After that, make adjustments and make sure all your notes are correct and in-place again, and then start asking for regular modders.

Due to the sheer amount of timing/etc. changes that are going to need done, modding Hard and Easy would mostly be a waste atm as I think you get the idea.

Good luck to you.
fartownik
Firstable - You didn't change everything, there's still much not fitting and ugly sounded beats. For example (on [Insane]): 00:02:594 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - Does it sound good for you? I don't think so. You also have full of spacing issues, like this: 00:01:495 (2,3). Please, check all of the difficulties CAREFULLY with Distance Snap turned on one more time for issues.

One more thing - the timing is off. Ask someone good at the timing to adjust it.
lepidopodus
Yeah, I know that timing isn't perfect. All I did was setting timing to make this 'mappable', cause it had totally wrong timing.
Timing seems kinda unstable so pretty hard to set, and actually I think I overtimed this one.

Well, give me another chance (actually one of my pending map has unstable BPM), or just find some other experts.

I'll adjust my timing untill expert arrives.

EDIT: try this, ctrl+C&P to .osu file.
550,313.561536451529,4,1,0,100,1,0
5566,319.318786588611,4,1,0,100,1,0
8120,313.807531380753,4,1,0,100,1,0
10630,315.208825847124,4,1,0,100,1,0
15673,324.324324324324,4,1,0,100,1,0
18267,327.064595257563,4,1,0,100,1,0
20883,323.014804845222,4,1,0,100,1,0
23467,322.58064516129,4,1,0,100,1,0
26047,319.318786588611,4,1,0,100,1,0
31156,322.234156820623,4,1,0,100,1,0
33733,312.5,4,1,0,100,1,0
34983,309.278350515464,4,1,0,100,1,0
36220,320,4,1,0,100,1,1
38780,314.13612565445,4,1,0,100,1,1
41293,315.789473684211,4,1,0,100,1,1
56450,312.5,4,1,0,100,1,1
58950,316.622691292876,4,1,0,100,1,1
61482,316.622691292876,4,1,0,100,1,1
64014,313.31592689295,4,1,0,100,1,1
74040,313.31592689295,4,1,0,100,1,1
76546,333.333333333333,4,1,0,100,1,0
79212,303.030303030303,4,1,0,100,1,0
BPM seems to keep changing, so it can't be defined as some fine uninherited section as I think.
(Or just I'm too inexperienced about this...)
Kurai
Bien que je hais naruto, c'est bien parceque c'est Snorkel qui a fait l'OP.
Il est plus courant de voir Snorkel que Snowkel aussi... donc si tu pouvais changé :3

[Easy]
00:02:274 (3) - 1/2 plus tard
00:08:120 (3) - 1/1 plus tard
00:09:061 (4) - 1/2 plus tard
00:15:358 (1) - Etant en faisant en sorte que la fin du slide soit a 00:16:645
00:20:719 (1) - Etant de 1/4

Hu... j'ai pas le temps de terminer, je finirais demain sorry
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.

Mais le vrai nom c'est Snowkel ;)
frost-b-spec
thx request
mod4mod XD

i think no good bpm and offset
but,i don't know...

[Easy]
0:02:117(3) - move 0:02:274
0:03:058(4) - return 0:03:528(end 0:03:999)
0:08:904(4) - move 0:08:747
0:15:358(1) - return 0:15:997(end 0:16:545)
0:31:156(1) - end 0:31:478
1:14:040(1) - end 1:15:293

[Hard]
0:11:418(1) - move 0:11:575(end 0:11:890)
0:12:127(2) - move 0:12:206(end 0:12:521)
0:12:994(3,4) - move 0:13:151
0:34:670(4) - end 0:35:292

[Insane]
0:02:980(1,2,3) - move 0:03:058
0:28:601(6,7) - delete circle. move slider 0:28:601(end 0:29:240)
0:38:701(4) - move 0:38:780 and add circle.
1:03:856(3) - move 1:04:014 and add circle.
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks ! ^^

All diffs fixed.
Sonnyc
Hi, modded by request~
(Naruto ^^)

Easy
- Somewhat hard as an Easy. Rename to Normal?

00:03:528 (6) - End at 00:03:999, Delete finish on the end
00:15:358 (1) - IMO, since there is a timing change, I prefer to make a note, and make a new slider on 00:15:673
01:19:212 (1) - End at 01:20:348?

Hard
00:08:276 (2) - Move to 00:08:433
00:08:590 (3) - Delete
00:43:503 (6) - Delete Finish
01:03:698 (7,8) - 1 Grid left

Insane
00:01:961 (3) - Bad jump to me..
00:06:843 (4) - Distance
00:22:013 (4) - End at 00:22:175
01:20:272 (6) - Add Finish
01:20:424 (7) - Delete

Good Luck ;)
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks :D ^^

All diffs fixed.
lepidopodus
Just go and find some better experts of timing. It still needs to be adjust.
(Or at least specify where is wrong)
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Okay.
Ra-s
+Star :)
Roga-don
Taiko

00:15:673 -> 00:24:757 : Boring ...
00:50:608 : You should add more of these streams. :P
00:54:556 : In taiko there's no break time.
01:19:212 : Just a spinner ? Let's add a final stream :idea:

This taiko map is nice, but personally I think it's too easy ...

Star~
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks ^^
AgentYous
WAHOW

Tes maps sont super
La hard est trop bien :)

Le Meilleur est lapidon Taiko Oni
Moi qui deteste le taiko sur osu je me le suis tapé au moins 6fois. :)

C'est Super ;)

STAR
lepidopodus

Roganis wrote:

Taiko

00:15:673 -> 00:24:757 : Boring ...
00:50:608 : You should add more of these streams. :P
00:54:556 : In taiko there's no break time.
01:19:212 : Just a spinner ? Let's add a final stream :idea:
This map is FULL AUTHENTIC so let's leave this as authentic, ok?
(I know it's kinda.... boring too you, but sorry ;;)
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Merci Agent :D
Tatsuo
Hai, here comes... timing help...?

I'm pretty sure you don't need all those non-inherited timing sections...
I'm not a timing expert. You need to get Cyclone or someone who is really an expert on timing.
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Oh Okay.

Thanks.
MMzz
Great song :D
This was a song I planned on submitting a long time ago just forgot to map it. Good thing someone did. Star
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks ^^
Vikon
[General]
1) remove "anime" from tag ( it will be stated in the genre)
2) for the preview time, 00:36:601 is better than 00:33:733 ?
3) the volume is too loud? 70% is enough.

[Easy]
00:11:890 (2) the end of the slider is unsnapped
00:20:719 (1) end at 00:21:206 ?
00:34:983 (1,1) being a [Easy], the slider starts too near the spinner.
00:49:187 (1,1) ^
01:03:065 (1) end at 01:04:953 ?

[Hard]
00:34:670 (4) end at 00:35:292 ?
00:35:910 (2,3,4,5) too many finish...?
00:39:251 (1) end at 00:40:350 ?
00:44:293 (7) slience the slidertick and end at 00:45:398 ?
00:59:266 (9) end at 00:59:899 ?
01:19:515 (1) end at 01:20:348 and add finish?

[Insane]
00:22:336 (5,6) spacing?
00:23:305 add a note here?
00:23:628 (2) delete this note?
00:59:899 (1) end at 01:00:533 ?but it will become a unrankable spinner, use others to instead?
01:04:640 (6) end at 01:04:953 ?
01:20:575 (1) slience this spinner?

yes, you should check the timing, it is unusual to use so many red timing section.
and here is my star, good luck~
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.

Fixed.
Kurai
polp~

[Easy]

00:07:801 (3) - 1/1 plus loin

[Hard]
Rien~

[Insane]

00:14:727 (8) - Mal placé :O
00:20:392 (9) - Supprime
01:08:087 (1) - New combo

Star~
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.

Fixed.
Clare
star!
SPOILER
sorry i just mod pending map(rule 1),if this map is pending repost my queue,i'll mod it
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji

Clare wrote:

star!
SPOILER
sorry i just mod pending map(rule 1),if this map is pending repost my queue,i'll mod it
Okay.

Thanks for your star :D
Lizbeth
Remove naruto from tags, is already in source
add "lepidopodus" to tags in All diffs

Well here's my modding, kinda late I know, but I was busy
Anyway, this are mostly suggestions to improve your map, are just things I notice while playing the map, and some rhythm adjustments.
hope is useful for you =3
Any questions, send me to pm, or if you want a recheck, send me to Pm as well.

Insane
00:08:433 (8) - shorten by 1/2 beat, the add not at 00:08:904
00:10:630 (1) - i think is too far from prev. combo, kinda unpredictable
00:12:521 (1) - move 1/2 beat later
00:38:460 (1) - why this new combo?
00:40:664 (1,2,3) - these are to close together... seems like a a half beat while playing, confusing imo
00:41:924 (3,4) - this are correctly spaced =D
01:00:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same here, this suddenly change of spacing is kind of random, seems like 1/2 beat notes

Hard
00:44:135 - add note here, sounds better in my opinion
00:53:293 (6) - remove 2 repeats, and start the next spinner at 00:54:635
00:58:950 (8) - you could separate this a bit more from 7 =D
01:10:280 (9) - is this a jump? kinda weird, maybe add new combo?

Easy
seems like a normal @.@
00:02:274 (3,4,5) - confusing pattern... specially in an easy diff. maybe you could stack 3,4
00:08:747 (4) - lonely and out of rhythm note =( how about if you move it a beat earlier, then add note at 00:09:061?
00:18:105 (5) - shorten by 1/2 beat, and move it 1/2 later
00:20:719 (1) - same
00:23:305 (5) - same
00:28:441 (1) - shorten by 1/4 beat, the move it 1/2 beat later
00:37:827 - there is like a missing note here

star!!
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.

Fixed.
Zekira
Wait... this has an authentic? o_O

See this is why I should really have contact with the Taiko Arcades aaaaaaaaaa

Anyway... timing checking via Taiko method

Taiko run: 1x100



Insane run: 8x100



It actually looks fine already, but let's see if I can optimize it...

Secondary check: metronome checking...

Err, never mind, I edited quite some stuffs based on the current timing... this one consists of really few red lines compared to the previous ones, but there may be some sequences that sound a bit off :/

Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [Zekira's Red Lines].osu

Starring because it has a Taiko authentic hahahaha
lepidopodus

Zekira wrote:

It actually looks fine already, but let's see if I can optimize it...
Though every one said 'wrong timing cause there's so much red lines' lol
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks very much, Zekira.
Zekira
Though every one said 'wrong timing cause there's so much red lines' lol
Now that's just absurd... >_>

yes, you should check the timing, it is unusual to use so many red timing section.
It's like saying it's unusual to get the timing perfect >_>
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji

Zekira wrote:

Though every one said 'wrong timing cause there's so much red lines' lol
Now that's just absurd... >_>

yes, you should check the timing, it is unusual to use so many red timing section.
It's like saying it's unusual to get the timing perfect >_>

Okay, Thanks ^^
arien666
Well?
This seems good ;_;

And good luck is the last sentence that I can say on this song ;_;

Good luck :3
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks Arken.
eee
eeemod GO!!!
now let's see.
I'm not very good at timing, so I'm not very sure about this.
The section at 01:16:546 (76,546) should have a BPM of 181.
The final section should be BPM 188.
Again, that's just what I got, it could be completely off :(. I had no problem playing through the map with the first couple of sections.

Hmm, not sure anymore :X... well maybe the final section is off... I don't know anymore!!!

[Easy]
00:34:987 (1) - the end isn't snapped
00:52:340 (2) - 'tis a pretty huge jump for an [Easy]

[Hard]
Looks alright :)

[Taiko]
way too much combo numbers
straight lines make the map too linear
there are places in this map that make me wann..... wait a minute, this is a taiko... I DON'T MOD TAIKOS SORRY!!!

[Insane]
00:40:656 (1,2,3) - spacing tricked me :( (?) it's not THAT bad though
01:01:498 (4,5,6) - this one tricked me more than the above one :x
01:03:077 (8) - ^

that is all, not much of a mod :(
good luck on the timing too, most of it sounds good to me
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.

Fixed.
-Xero-
C'est un map très bien!
Mod and diff. later ;).
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.
fartownik
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.

Uploaded.
fartownik
As I said - make kiai sections as they are in my difficulty.

[Easy]

Lack of hitsounds? Where are them?

The beggining is also iffy, as in Hard.

00:18:267 (5,1) - Spacing.
00:20:862 (1,2) - ^
01:19:212 (1) - You should make this spinner longer (even on all difficulties), it's too short for an Easy.


[Hard]

The beggining is a bit iffy, you would map it better. Also the spinners are quite short.

Also: decrease HP Drain and Overall Difficulty by 1 tick?


[Insane]

00:03:688 (5,6) - These notes sound off. Delete them and add a note here 00:03:531.
00:04:158 (5) - This sounds off too.Move it 1/2 forward and add a note here 00:04:001.
00:45:708 - Add a note.
00:50:445 - ^
01:01:813 (6,7) - Spacing.
01:20:575 (1) - Finish hitsound doesn't fit here. A normal/whistle should be better.
-Xero-
Map is finished hitsounds will follow!

Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [HT!].osu
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.

Uploaded.
-Xero-
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.

Uploaded.
lepidopodus
Don't need to set kiai in taiko map same as standard ones. kiai in standard is just for showing, but in taiko there's 20% score bonus in kiai time so you need to be careful.

deleted some unnessasary timing sections and adjusted kiai.

Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [lepidon! - Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.

Uploaded.
DJPop
Don't place timing sections exactly on the notes.


~Easy~
00:37:498 (2,3,4) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:52:656 (3) - move the tail down a bit
00:55:813 (1) - make it more symmetrical
01:19:212 (1) - end on 01:20:348

~HT!~
00:07:995 (1) - start on blue tick
00:11:110 (2) - end on left red tick

~Hard~
01:18:546 (5,1) - end with normal hitsound
01:19:515 (1) - end on left blue tick

~Insane~
00:43:182 (6) - end on white tick
00:48:235 (2,3,4) - wrong spacings
00:53:287 (3,4) - too close
01:20:121 (5) - delete
01:20:272 (5) - move 1/4 right
01:20:575 (1) - silence it & make it longer

~fartownik~
Too many hitfinishes.
01:24:818 - silence it


+Star
fartownik
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks Djpop.

Fixed.
Takuma
heeello. i won't be checking the taiko difficulty.

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[Easy]
00:31:795 (2) - inconsistent spacing.
00:55:813 (1) - extend to white tick.
01:19:212 (1) - missing a finish?

[HT!]
00:07:798 (1,2) - what? just move the (2) on the red tick.

[Insane]
00:06:851 (4) - random clap is lol. remove it please? if you want claps, then place them on every other white tick to match the drum beat. if you need help, i can do the hitsounds for you and just upload the file.
00:58:340 (6) - inconsistent spacing.

[fartownik]
00:26:051 (1) - change the beginning to a finish, and the end to a clap. from here on, you have all the claps messed up. they should be placed on every other white tick to match the drums.
00:35:625 (5) - BPM change is tricky to catch. perhaps you could at least change it into a new combo?
00:43:813 (1,2,3,4) - okay, no. this is a dick move, lol. fix this please.
01:00:077 (10) - ^ errrgghh

i can't really say i like the jumps in this difficulty. the spacing seems all over the place to me.

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overall, the maps are good. some new combos are unreasonable however, and since i have to leave shorty i can't name them all. but please look over them and consider changing some. take a star.
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks you.
deepsea
Timing atm is playable for me but I cant say is it absolutely accurate since I still feel s little weird.

btw map is good so starred.
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks for your star.
mekadon_old
Star~~
PM for mod

Yaay Naruto
fartownik
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.

Uploaded.
-Xero-

Takuma wrote:

[HT!]
00:07:798 (1,2) - what? just move the (2) on the red tick.
I think Slanox accidently did this ^^'.

Updated (Some new Spacing and useless Timing Points removed, please contact me before changing again ^^'.)

Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [HT!].osu
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Okay xD.

Thanks, uploaded.
Irato
Star :)
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.
kioukiou
Timing is a bit weird for me.

But it's playable.

Mapset is fine for me (except timing).

Star.
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Okay :3

Thanks.
dvorak_old
I said I will check timing and was busy, here is result of my 1hour.

bpm // offset

191.200 / 550
190.200 / 5590 ←×
184.800 / 15673
189.000 / 27360
191.250 / 28629
184.400 / 31138
185.400 / 32439
188.200 / 33733
190.000 / 36235
189.200 / 38761
192.200 / 47640
190.400 / 50163
190.600 / 51423
190.800 / 52682
191.000 / 53939
191.200 / 58965
191.400 / 61475 ←×
183.000 / 63982 ←×
192.700 / 65293 ←×
192.600 / 66535
191.400 / 71519
176.000 / 76534
184.000 / 77897

fin

gl
PSPDS Eddie
:)
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks for your star ! ^^
fartownik
fix red lines and kiai sections on all diffs

Download: Snowkel - Namikaze Satellite (TV Size) (Slanox) [fartownik].osu
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.

Uploaded.
Natteke
Lol that timing is weird. I'm fairly sure that it's wrong D:

I'll just star it
dvorak_old
oops some mistake there, not sure why
wait a min gonna add here

190.200 / 5590 > 190.200 // 4315
add 189.000 // 5576
add 191.200 // 10654
191.400 / 61475 >> 190.400 // 61475
183.000 / 63982 >> 183.400 // 63996
192.700 / 65293 >> 194.400 // 65304

seems I wrote down old data ...

Thank you Netteke :)
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.

EDIT : Fixed.
Colin Hou
[Easy]:
  1. 01:18:223 (3,4,5,1) - use sosft hitsound fit better.
[HT!]:
  1. 00:28:475 (1) - unsnapped note
  2. 01:05:612 (T) - add a note here
[Hard]:
  1. 00:15:361 (1,2) - they are fine. but still suggest move them to 00:15:673 and remove the note 00:16:647 (3)
  2. 00:16:390 (2) - unsnapped
  3. 00:28:316 (2) - ^
  4. 01:18:223 (4,5,1) - use sosft hitsound fit better.
The other 2 Osu diffs are fine except the unsnapped notes.
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.

Fixed.
AngelHoney
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!

All

01:19:212 - this timing is right ?!

fartownik

00:05:734 (1) - end at 00:08:115
00:10:655 (12) - move to 00:10:654
00:10:810 (1) - end at 00:13:164
01:05:141 (7) - end at 01:05:458

01:16:546 - what !!! 2 red lines ?!
01:20:424 (1) - remove whistle

Insane

00:27:361 (5) - move to 00:27:360
00:34:667 (1) - end at 00:35:944
00:50:137 (6) - move to 00:50:163
00:54:096 (1) - end at 00:55:509
01:09:503 (1) - ^
01:10:910 (1) - end at 01:11:832

01:16:534 - same as fartownik
01:16:534 (4) - move to 01:16:546 ?!
01:17:879 (1) - move to 01:17:879
01:19:201 (5) - ^


Hard

00:10:655 (2) - move to 00:10:654
01:03:680 (7) - end at 01:04:323
01:04:977 (1) - end at 01:05:921
01:15:124 (1) - end at 01:16:546
01:18:549 (5) - end at 01:19:212


HT!

00:08:115 (1) - end at 00:10:020
00:10:655 (1) - move to 00:10:654
00:27:361 (5) - move to 00:27:360
00:38:761 (1) - end at 00:40:029
00:53:625 (1) - ^

01:20:575 - this green is unnecessary ?

Easy

00:10:655 (1) - move to 00:10:654
00:28:312 (1) - end at 00:28:942


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dvorak_old
if you point at 1:20:34? sound, it is on 1/2 of 4/4 in that section, not on end of 4/4.
but give me your opinion then I can make better offset and bpm.
Topic Starter
Yuji Tokaji
Thanks.


AngelHoney wrote:

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!

All

01:19:212 - this timing is right ?!

fartownik

00:05:734 (1) - end at 00:08:115
00:10:655 (12) - move to 00:10:654
00:10:810 (1) - end at 00:13:164
01:05:141 (7) - end at 01:05:458

01:16:546 - what !!! 2 red lines ?!
01:20:424 (1) - remove whistle

Insane

00:27:361 (5) - move to 00:27:360
00:34:667 (1) - end at 00:35:944
00:50:137 (6) - move to 00:50:163
00:54:096 (1) - end at 00:55:509
01:09:503 (1) - ^
01:10:910 (1) - end at 01:11:832

01:16:534 - same as fartownik
01:16:534 (4) - move to 01:16:546 ?!
01:17:879 (1) - move to 01:17:879
01:19:201 (5) - ^


Hard

00:10:655 (2) - move to 00:10:654
01:03:680 (7) - end at 01:04:323
01:04:977 (1) - end at 01:05:921
01:15:124 (1) - end at 01:16:546
01:18:549 (5) - end at 01:19:212


HT!

00:08:115 (1) - end at 00:10:020
00:10:655 (1) - move to 00:10:654
00:27:361 (5) - move to 00:27:360
00:38:761 (1) - end at 00:40:029
00:53:625 (1) - ^

01:20:575 - this green is unnecessary ?

Easy

00:10:655 (1) - move to 00:10:654
00:28:312 (1) - end at 00:28:942


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EDIT : Fixed.
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