Come[Back]Home wrote:

Normal

01:09:679 (3) I think that letting (3) overlap more with 01:08:822 (2) would look better than now :3 Move (3) too 472/124 and maybe youll like it~ hmm overlap that much is hard to read to beginner imo
01:22:536 (2,3) They are a bit too close to each other which doesnt look nice imo it's ok ><
01:26:822 (4) I think this one could be a 1/2 to fit with the vocal here 01:27:036 I think it's already fine :3 1/2 reverse is really fit with that part imo.
01:47:179 (3) The drums here sound more like 1/3 and not 1/2 to me, maybe you should just skip this beat since i think it might be a bit confusing for beginners here. interesting suggestion here but let's look for a bit more opinion :3

Cool Normal :3

Hard

00:52:536 (1) This could be a 1/1 slider sicne the beat is really strong there and theres a soft beat here 00:52:965 so i think its better that way the rhythm you mentioned is same as mine imo but I think mine is more.. playable i guess. the way player hit the note.
That Ending with the sliders is Awesome :O
Really cool hard, its freaking awesome! ^_^

Insane

01:40:965 (2) ^ I think not for this one.
02:00:893 (5) Better delete that one, sudden 1/4 is really really weird, i dont think you should do that. Map plays better without that one move this note to 1/6 instead
02:29:250 You could add a Clap here and 02:29:679 here. Somehow it sounds awesome hm I tried but it sounds weird imo >_>


This Mapset is just awesome. I love your hitsounding, its totally fits!
Take my Star

1. I think drum-hitclap2 is not used here o3o

1. 01:45:107 (1) - Stack with (2) maybe? Same here 03:07:393 (1) -
2. 02:21:250 (1,2) - These NCs should be swapped imo lol
3. 03:21:965 (5,1) - Same here
4. 03:28:822 (4,1) - Same

1. Current OD doesn't fit with the song imo, especially because OD in Hard is kinda low, I'd reduce this one too for balance settings o3o
2. 01:07:750 - I miss something there, currently sounds weird for me but maybe it's even more weird rearranging this...

Inyuschan wrote:

[Hard]

1. 01:45:107 (1) - Stack with (2) maybe? Same here 03:07:393 (1) - if stack will make hidden harder imo.

[Insane]

1. Current OD doesn't fit with the song imo, especially because OD in Hard is kinda low, I'd reduce this one too for balance settings o3o they have 2.5 consistency gap to each diff so I think it's fine 0.0
2. 01:07:750 - I miss something there, currently sounds weird for me but maybe it's even more weird rearranging this... the gap between those beat still 1/3 so I think it's fine because I tried add note (1/6 slider reverse) on that red tick and it's kinda play weird.

The rest should be fine at least for me, you can call me again of course.

no mention = fix, thanks inyu chan o/

1. you are missing some skin files: lighting.png, sliderfollowcircle.png, sliderscorepoint.png, sliderb.png, talked with bakari and seems that those files are necessary.
2. Letterbox during breaks make the video looks bad imo, maybe turn it off?

1. I'll use HP 6 is more player friendly, also map is really calm.
2. 00:40:965 (2,3) - this overlap can looks a bit better, try to move them like:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:46:107 (2,3) - this jump was really weir to play, I did hit 100 at 3 cuz the spacing did increase without any reason o.o, same here, since those patterns looks like they where different snap, but is the same, atleast add NC on the circle pattern?
4. 01:42:250 add whistle? (apply to every diff)
5. 01:54:965 (3) - same as 00:46:107 - just add NC at those patterns
6. 01:13:536 (1,2) - weird combo pattern I'll just swap NC there, mainly cuz vocals end at 01:13:536 - but start again at 01:13:822 -, same apply here 02:22:107 (1,2) -
7. 03:24:536 (2) - snap here is really weird lol

1. 00:22:965 (5) - the repeat slider sounds really bad, use a single slider like you did at insane diff
2. 00:54:536 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - make this rhythm simple? is kinda uncomfortable for a hard diff, also is actually the same as the insane diff, for better spread I think a slider pattern will be better
3. 02:14:822 (1,2) - there are alot of parts where the rhythm is harder than the one at the insane diff, maybe explain why

1. 00:21:679 (4) - There are alot of repeat sliders like this where the repeat land on nothing in the music, I'll suggest you to use rhythms like at those places:
   
2. use some more 1/2 patterns like 02:00:679 (2,3) - for better spread, actually this looks like 1/1 map and the hard is full of 1/3

Natsu wrote:

Pani.


General:

1. you are missing some skin files: lighting.png, sliderfollowcircle.png, sliderscorepoint.png, sliderb.png, talked with bakari and seems that those files are necessary.
2. Letterbox during breaks make the video looks bad imo, maybe turn it off?

Insani:

1. 00:40:965 (2,3) - this overlap can looks a bit better, try to move them like: dude no, your 2 is too sexy.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:46:107 (2,3) - this jump was really weir to play, I did hit 100 at 3 cuz the spacing did increase without any reason o.o, same here, since those patterns looks like they where different snap, but is the same, atleast add NC on the circle pattern? imo no NC is more readable? because 2>3 still has the same spacing is 1>2. maybe add NC is make it more confusing.
3. 01:42:250 add whistle? (apply to every diff) sounds cute but let's try ahahaha
4. 01:54:965 (3) - same as 00:46:107 - just add NC at those patterns same
5. 01:13:536 (1,2) - weird combo pattern I'll just swap NC there, mainly cuz vocals end at 01:13:536 - but start again at 01:13:822 -, same apply here 02:22:107 (1,2) - interesting, I tried.
6. 03:24:536 (2) - snap here is really weird lol wa..mhmm wew.

Hardi:

1. 00:54:536 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - make this rhythm simple? is kinda uncomfortable for a hard diff, also is actually the same as the insane diff, for better spread I think a slider pattern will be better mhmm I used stack instead.
2. 02:14:822 (1,2) - there are alot of parts where the rhythm is harder than the one at the insane diff, maybe explain why

Normali:

1. 00:21:679 (4) - There are alot of repeat sliders like this where the repeat land on nothing in the music, I'll suggest you to use rhythms like at those places:
   
2. use some more 1/2 patterns like 02:00:679 (2,3) - for better spread, actually this looks like 1/1 map and the hard is full of 1/3

talk me in game once you get online!!

Inyuschan wrote:

Should be fine ;_;

P A N wrote:

Inyuschan wrote:

Should be fine ;_;

thanks so much for your effort ;w;