Alright, let's see then.
First, here's the log (just in case you forgot something or whatever xD)
And here is the rest of it :3
That's all, good luck ~
Btw, try to make your NCs more consistent, since you seem to use them a bit randomly here and there
First, here's the log (just in case you forgot something or whatever xD)
IRC
2015-09-05 11:49 Yohanes: Hello MrSergio
2015-09-05 11:49 MrSergio: Hi~
2015-09-05 11:49 Yohanes: can I ask for a testplay?
2015-09-05 11:49 MrSergio: Sure
2015-09-05 11:49 Yohanes: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/769831 Lia - Bravely You]
2015-09-05 11:50 Yohanes: I'm a bit worried about the spacing
2015-09-05 11:51 MrSergio: damn, it crashed xD
2015-09-05 11:51 Yohanes: uu~
2015-09-05 11:52 MrSergio: Alright, everythingàs fine now xD
2015-09-05 11:52 MrSergio: -np
2015-09-05 11:57 MrSergio: Ranomd misses lol
2015-09-05 11:57 MrSergio: I should fix my tablet
2015-09-05 11:57 Yohanes: xD
2015-09-05 11:57 MrSergio: Anyway, nice map
2015-09-05 11:58 Yohanes: thanks =w=
2015-09-05 11:58 MrSergio: There were a couple things which seems a bit weird, but modding will fix them
2015-09-05 11:58 Yohanes: okay..
2015-09-05 11:58 Yohanes: for example
2015-09-05 11:58 Yohanes: ?
2015-09-05 11:58 MrSergio: Like... when you use a triplet stacked at the end of a slider
2015-09-05 11:59 MrSergio: For the most part, you use triplets all alone )without any slider=
2015-09-05 11:59 MrSergio: Wait
2015-09-05 11:59 MrSergio: Let me open the editor
2015-09-05 11:59 Yohanes: ~
2015-09-05 12:00 MrSergio: 00:27:012 (1,2,3) - This is the first one which feels uncomfortable
2015-09-05 12:00 MrSergio: The reason is:
2015-09-05 12:00 MrSergio: 00:07:612 (2,3) - 00:10:812 (2,3) - 00:14:012 (2,3) -
2015-09-05 12:01 MrSergio: See what those patterns have in common
2015-09-05 12:01 MrSergio: Basically, you are using a single note after 1/1 sliders almost everywhere, but not there
2015-09-05 12:01 MrSergio: circle*
2015-09-05 12:01 MrSergio: I'll give you another example of what feels good instead
2015-09-05 12:01 MrSergio: 00:09:412 (3,4,5) - This
2015-09-05 12:01 Yohanes: Yeah, I'm a bit aware that, those part plays quite awkward
2015-09-05 12:02 MrSergio: Unfortunately, there are also other few patterns like the first I mentioned
2015-09-05 12:02 MrSergio: Where the triplet after the slider doesn't really fit
2015-09-05 12:02 Yohanes: 00:09:412 (3,4,5) - This is a "good example" or?
2015-09-05 12:02 MrSergio: Yes
2015-09-05 12:03 MrSergio: That one feels good to play
2015-09-05 12:03 MrSergio: Because of the drum
2015-09-05 12:04 Yohanes: So basically, there are some triplets after 1/1 slider that doesn't really fit?
2015-09-05 12:04 Yohanes: *feels nice to play
2015-09-05 12:04 MrSergio: Yes, but there are also a couple of 1/2 slider + triplet after it
2015-09-05 12:04 MrSergio: I was trying to find them
2015-09-05 12:04 MrSergio: 01:05:412 (1,2) - Sldier ends not properly stacked :^)
2015-09-05 12:04 MrSergio: (just a side note xD)
2015-09-05 12:05 MrSergio: 01:13:212 (4,1) - I'd increase spacing from 4 to 1. There is a lot more emphasis imo and you should make it noticible
2015-09-05 12:05 Yohanes: that's usual editor's glitch as far as I know :3 xD
2015-09-05 12:05 MrSergio: Like...
2015-09-05 12:05 MrSergio: Yeah, it can be xD
2015-09-05 12:06 MrSergio: Try moving 01:13:612 (2) - on top of 01:13:412 (1) - and move 01:13:412 (1) - to around 248:212 or 400:192
2015-09-05 12:07 MrSergio: This way you keep the emphasis you had for the purple pattern, but you also put more emphasis on the transition yeallow combo > purple combo
2015-09-05 12:07 MrSergio: 01:14:812 (2,3) - Wow man, this felt really awkward xD
2015-09-05 12:07 Yohanes: I'm using this instead http://puu.sh/k0zjo/58a3d15432.jpg
2015-09-05 12:07 Yohanes: will that work?
2015-09-05 12:08 MrSergio: Let me see...
2015-09-05 12:08 Yohanes: 01:14:812 (2,3) - Yeah, I'm gonna change it
2015-09-05 12:08 MrSergio: The pointt is that basically 01:13:412 (1,2,3) - all of these have the same intensity, which means that you should use the same spacing for all of them
2015-09-05 12:09 MrSergio: But well... that's just my reasoning. The pattern you showed me isn't bad, but it isn't excellent either
2015-09-05 12:09 Yohanes: ahh~ okay, I'll play around with it
2015-09-05 12:09 MrSergio: Just yeah, play around with it xD
2015-09-05 12:10 Yohanes: Anything else maybe?
2015-09-05 12:10 MrSergio: 01:29:812 (4) - Imo, this is the start for a New Combo, so you should move it a bit further from 3
2015-09-05 12:11 MrSergio: And maybe switch the NC from 01:30:012 (1) - to 01:29:812 (4) -
2015-09-05 12:11 MrSergio: Even if, you can avoid putting a NC there probably
2015-09-05 12:11 Yohanes: I think I want to emphasize just this one 01:30:212 (2) -
2015-09-05 12:12 MrSergio: Yeah, you can do it without problems
2015-09-05 12:12 Yohanes: since the drum (?) there is the strongest
2015-09-05 12:12 MrSergio: It is, but there is a stronger beat also on 01:29:812 (4) - xD
2015-09-05 12:12 MrSergio: like... hear your hitsounds
2015-09-05 12:13 MrSergio: 01:29:812 (4) - Clap 01:30:212 (2) - Whistle (which is a grave sound, so it is basically another Clap)
2015-09-05 12:13 MrSergio: Anyway, That's up to you. I'll leave you thinking on that xD
2015-09-05 12:14 Yohanes: ahahah, alright~
2015-09-05 12:14 MrSergio: 01:49:212 (6,1) - This is readable instead, not like 01:14:812 (2,3) -
2015-09-05 12:14 MrSergio: Because of the NC probably
2015-09-05 12:14 MrSergio: So you can keep it, but I'd suggest using this pattern somwhere else to make it more consistent
2015-09-05 12:15 Yohanes: kay~
2015-09-05 12:16 MrSergio: 01:53:212 (2,3) - Those whistles on the heads ruin your hitsounding until now @.@
2015-09-05 12:16 MrSergio: Remove them and place a Normal Whistle on 01:53:212 (2) - 's tail
2015-09-05 12:16 MrSergio: (basically, keep the same hitsounding as before)
2015-09-05 12:17 MrSergio: 02:12:612 (4,5,6) - Ugh
2015-09-05 12:17 MrSergio: Another triplet xD
2015-09-05 12:17 MrSergio: While playing I litterally moved my finger to click on the slider's end
2015-09-05 12:17 MrSergio: >combo break
2015-09-05 12:18 MrSergio: 02:18:212 (1,3) - This doesn't look really nice, I mean, there isn't any particular shape which combines them therefore they look a bit random. See if you can do something (just aesthetics)
2015-09-05 12:20 Yohanes: DC
2015-09-05 12:24 MrSergio: God...
2015-09-05 12:24 MrSergio: I got like 15 DCs in a row
2015-09-05 12:24 Yohanes: lmao
2015-09-05 12:24 Yohanes: I saw your profile blinking
2015-09-05 12:24 MrSergio: lol
2015-09-05 12:24 MrSergio: I have no words, really
2015-09-05 12:25 MrSergio: Anyway, let's do like this: since I have to go to lunch now, I'll see if you're online later and we'll continue, otherwise I'll leave a couple of things in a post on the thread
2015-09-05 12:25 Yohanes: Okay, leave it at the thread instead...
2015-09-05 12:25 MrSergio: =w=b
2015-09-05 12:25 Yohanes: I need a rest tbh
2015-09-05 12:26 MrSergio: lol
2015-09-05 12:26 Yohanes: Umm, can we became mutual maybe? xD
2015-09-05 12:26 MrSergio: Done~
2015-09-05 12:26 Yohanes: Alright~
2015-09-05 12:27 Yohanes: Don't forget to post the irc =w=
2015-09-05 11:49 MrSergio: Hi~
2015-09-05 11:49 Yohanes: can I ask for a testplay?
2015-09-05 11:49 MrSergio: Sure
2015-09-05 11:49 Yohanes: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/769831 Lia - Bravely You]
2015-09-05 11:50 Yohanes: I'm a bit worried about the spacing
2015-09-05 11:51 MrSergio: damn, it crashed xD
2015-09-05 11:51 Yohanes: uu~
2015-09-05 11:52 MrSergio: Alright, everythingàs fine now xD
2015-09-05 11:52 MrSergio: -np
2015-09-05 11:57 MrSergio: Ranomd misses lol
2015-09-05 11:57 MrSergio: I should fix my tablet
2015-09-05 11:57 Yohanes: xD
2015-09-05 11:57 MrSergio: Anyway, nice map
2015-09-05 11:58 Yohanes: thanks =w=
2015-09-05 11:58 MrSergio: There were a couple things which seems a bit weird, but modding will fix them
2015-09-05 11:58 Yohanes: okay..
2015-09-05 11:58 Yohanes: for example
2015-09-05 11:58 Yohanes: ?
2015-09-05 11:58 MrSergio: Like... when you use a triplet stacked at the end of a slider
2015-09-05 11:59 MrSergio: For the most part, you use triplets all alone )without any slider=
2015-09-05 11:59 MrSergio: Wait
2015-09-05 11:59 MrSergio: Let me open the editor
2015-09-05 11:59 Yohanes: ~
2015-09-05 12:00 MrSergio: 00:27:012 (1,2,3) - This is the first one which feels uncomfortable
2015-09-05 12:00 MrSergio: The reason is:
2015-09-05 12:00 MrSergio: 00:07:612 (2,3) - 00:10:812 (2,3) - 00:14:012 (2,3) -
2015-09-05 12:01 MrSergio: See what those patterns have in common
2015-09-05 12:01 MrSergio: Basically, you are using a single note after 1/1 sliders almost everywhere, but not there
2015-09-05 12:01 MrSergio: circle*
2015-09-05 12:01 MrSergio: I'll give you another example of what feels good instead
2015-09-05 12:01 MrSergio: 00:09:412 (3,4,5) - This
2015-09-05 12:01 Yohanes: Yeah, I'm a bit aware that, those part plays quite awkward
2015-09-05 12:02 MrSergio: Unfortunately, there are also other few patterns like the first I mentioned
2015-09-05 12:02 MrSergio: Where the triplet after the slider doesn't really fit
2015-09-05 12:02 Yohanes: 00:09:412 (3,4,5) - This is a "good example" or?
2015-09-05 12:02 MrSergio: Yes
2015-09-05 12:03 MrSergio: That one feels good to play
2015-09-05 12:03 MrSergio: Because of the drum
2015-09-05 12:04 Yohanes: So basically, there are some triplets after 1/1 slider that doesn't really fit?
2015-09-05 12:04 Yohanes: *feels nice to play
2015-09-05 12:04 MrSergio: Yes, but there are also a couple of 1/2 slider + triplet after it
2015-09-05 12:04 MrSergio: I was trying to find them
2015-09-05 12:04 MrSergio: 01:05:412 (1,2) - Sldier ends not properly stacked :^)
2015-09-05 12:04 MrSergio: (just a side note xD)
2015-09-05 12:05 MrSergio: 01:13:212 (4,1) - I'd increase spacing from 4 to 1. There is a lot more emphasis imo and you should make it noticible
2015-09-05 12:05 Yohanes: that's usual editor's glitch as far as I know :3 xD
2015-09-05 12:05 MrSergio: Like...
2015-09-05 12:05 MrSergio: Yeah, it can be xD
2015-09-05 12:06 MrSergio: Try moving 01:13:612 (2) - on top of 01:13:412 (1) - and move 01:13:412 (1) - to around 248:212 or 400:192
2015-09-05 12:07 MrSergio: This way you keep the emphasis you had for the purple pattern, but you also put more emphasis on the transition yeallow combo > purple combo
2015-09-05 12:07 MrSergio: 01:14:812 (2,3) - Wow man, this felt really awkward xD
2015-09-05 12:07 Yohanes: I'm using this instead http://puu.sh/k0zjo/58a3d15432.jpg
2015-09-05 12:07 Yohanes: will that work?
2015-09-05 12:08 MrSergio: Let me see...
2015-09-05 12:08 Yohanes: 01:14:812 (2,3) - Yeah, I'm gonna change it
2015-09-05 12:08 MrSergio: The pointt is that basically 01:13:412 (1,2,3) - all of these have the same intensity, which means that you should use the same spacing for all of them
2015-09-05 12:09 MrSergio: But well... that's just my reasoning. The pattern you showed me isn't bad, but it isn't excellent either
2015-09-05 12:09 Yohanes: ahh~ okay, I'll play around with it
2015-09-05 12:09 MrSergio: Just yeah, play around with it xD
2015-09-05 12:10 Yohanes: Anything else maybe?
2015-09-05 12:10 MrSergio: 01:29:812 (4) - Imo, this is the start for a New Combo, so you should move it a bit further from 3
2015-09-05 12:11 MrSergio: And maybe switch the NC from 01:30:012 (1) - to 01:29:812 (4) -
2015-09-05 12:11 MrSergio: Even if, you can avoid putting a NC there probably
2015-09-05 12:11 Yohanes: I think I want to emphasize just this one 01:30:212 (2) -
2015-09-05 12:12 MrSergio: Yeah, you can do it without problems
2015-09-05 12:12 Yohanes: since the drum (?) there is the strongest
2015-09-05 12:12 MrSergio: It is, but there is a stronger beat also on 01:29:812 (4) - xD
2015-09-05 12:12 MrSergio: like... hear your hitsounds
2015-09-05 12:13 MrSergio: 01:29:812 (4) - Clap 01:30:212 (2) - Whistle (which is a grave sound, so it is basically another Clap)
2015-09-05 12:13 MrSergio: Anyway, That's up to you. I'll leave you thinking on that xD
2015-09-05 12:14 Yohanes: ahahah, alright~
2015-09-05 12:14 MrSergio: 01:49:212 (6,1) - This is readable instead, not like 01:14:812 (2,3) -
2015-09-05 12:14 MrSergio: Because of the NC probably
2015-09-05 12:14 MrSergio: So you can keep it, but I'd suggest using this pattern somwhere else to make it more consistent
2015-09-05 12:15 Yohanes: kay~
2015-09-05 12:16 MrSergio: 01:53:212 (2,3) - Those whistles on the heads ruin your hitsounding until now @.@
2015-09-05 12:16 MrSergio: Remove them and place a Normal Whistle on 01:53:212 (2) - 's tail
2015-09-05 12:16 MrSergio: (basically, keep the same hitsounding as before)
2015-09-05 12:17 MrSergio: 02:12:612 (4,5,6) - Ugh
2015-09-05 12:17 MrSergio: Another triplet xD
2015-09-05 12:17 MrSergio: While playing I litterally moved my finger to click on the slider's end
2015-09-05 12:17 MrSergio: >combo break
2015-09-05 12:18 MrSergio: 02:18:212 (1,3) - This doesn't look really nice, I mean, there isn't any particular shape which combines them therefore they look a bit random. See if you can do something (just aesthetics)
2015-09-05 12:20 Yohanes: DC
2015-09-05 12:24 MrSergio: God...
2015-09-05 12:24 MrSergio: I got like 15 DCs in a row
2015-09-05 12:24 Yohanes: lmao
2015-09-05 12:24 Yohanes: I saw your profile blinking
2015-09-05 12:24 MrSergio: lol
2015-09-05 12:24 MrSergio: I have no words, really
2015-09-05 12:25 MrSergio: Anyway, let's do like this: since I have to go to lunch now, I'll see if you're online later and we'll continue, otherwise I'll leave a couple of things in a post on the thread
2015-09-05 12:25 Yohanes: Okay, leave it at the thread instead...
2015-09-05 12:25 MrSergio: =w=b
2015-09-05 12:25 Yohanes: I need a rest tbh
2015-09-05 12:26 MrSergio: lol
2015-09-05 12:26 Yohanes: Umm, can we became mutual maybe? xD
2015-09-05 12:26 MrSergio: Done~
2015-09-05 12:26 Yohanes: Alright~
2015-09-05 12:27 Yohanes: Don't forget to post the irc =w=
And here is the rest of it :3
[Insane]
- {General} First of all, now that I notice, you should change the name of this diff to "Marathon", or add it into tags (but I suggest using it as the name for the diff)
- 02:43:612 (7,1) - {Aesthetics} This overlap is a bit... you know... that xD
- 03:17:012 (6) - {Pattern} Seeing the hitsound on the head, I'd do a Ctrl + J on it and move the head on top of 03:16:412 (3) -
- 03:09:012 (4) - {Aesthetics} Why this is the only straight slider among this combo? All the others are curved somehow
- 03:10:412 (3,4,5) - {Pattern} I'd suggest to create a triangle using these circles. Keep 3 where it is and make it go clockwise, like this
- 03:20:212 (4) - {Hitsound} Missing normal whistle on the end of this slider
- 03:23:812 (3) - {Hitosund} Turn the soft whistle on the head of this into a normal whistle to make it match with above suggestion ^
- 03:27:612 (1) - {Hitsound} Switch the normal whistle from the head to the tail of this slider
- 03:30:212 (1) - {Flow} I'd put like a drop on this slider since there is a high pitch vocal on its head. My suggestion is to move a bit 03:29:812 (4,5) - around without stacking them again
- 03:36:212 (5,1) - {Aesthetics} These 2 are really too close imo. You used a blanket for 03:35:612 (2,5) - and another blanket for 03:36:612 (1,2) - , but the 2 I highlighted are just there for nothing lol. See if you can give this a better shape/reasoning
- 03:46:212 - {Flow} I'd add a circle at around 352:28, then I'd do a ctrl + G on 03:46:012 (2,3) - (I added the new circle to make this link) and remove the NC on 03:46:412 (1) - since it's pretty useless for a single object, right? As for the first 2 suggestions, they are just there to cover the background sounds of the music and to not let the player get bored while waiting there
- 03:47:412 (2,3,4) - {Pattern} I do not hear the triplet at all in the music so remove the central note. Also, keeping those circles stacked it's another waste of rhythm, so try to create a drop on 03:47:812 (1) - using 03:47:412 (2,4) -
- 03:50:412 (5,6,7) - {Flow} Do you remember what we talked in PM about slider + triplet at the end? This is one of those
- 03:51:012 (1,2,3) - {Pattern} 03:52:212 (3) - is kinda wasted as it is, so what about creating a giant triangle using all the sliders? Like this maybe
- 03:55:412 (3,1) - {Flow} I'd rather use the same pattern you used for 03:56:012 (2,3) - , so maybe move 03:55:412 (3) - at around 400:8
- 04:03:812 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - {Pattern} There is a huge difference between this and 04:10:212 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - . Imo you should use 1/2 notes constantly for all this part and use the DS to give a different feeling for those different parts you created
- 04:15:012 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - {Flow} First, why do you use NCs every 2 notes? Second, why the spacing between 04:15:212 (2,1) - is small, while the spacing between 04:15:612 (2,1) - is more large? (The second spacing is fine imo) I guess that a square pattern can work well here
- 04:35:712 (8) - {Pattern} This circle isn't necessary, because it ruins the finish on 04:35:812 (9) - . You should remove 8 and move 9 somewhere else from there
- 04:36:012 (1) - {Hitosund} Do you need this soft whistle?
- 04:38:412 (1) - {Pattern} One (among the many) useless NC here
- 04:41:412 (1) - {Pattern} This should be stacked under the previous stack for a better start of the stream
- 04:41:612 (3) - {Hitsound} What about turning this normal whistle into a soft clap?
- 04:57:612 (1,2) - {Flow} Maybe a Ctrl + G here?
- 05:01:412 (1,2,3) - {Pattern} Same as for 03:51:012 (1,2,3) - but this time I guess it is fine
- 05:14:212 (4) - {Flow} This tiny jump is practically a rhythm killer. Move it more far away: all the combo has a higher DS too
[General]
- Even if it is related to this anime, I guess that tags like "Jun Maeda" (author of the story) or "Key" (visual novel production agency linked to the designer of the anime) are way too generic to be put. "P.A. Works" should be fine and if you keep it you should also add "Aniplex" (producer)
- Do you hate AR9? xD
- Your BG size isn't one of the recommended ones. Here's a 1366x768 version: http://puu.sh/k0CWq/3c7c8dd4fe.jpg
That's all, good luck ~
Btw, try to make your NCs more consistent, since you seem to use them a bit randomly here and there