hi, m4m from your queue
AR9 is rather low for one of these 5+ star crazy remix maps with streams and stuff everywhere. Higher AR here would make patterns easier to play. Obviously this kind of map isn't gonna be DTed so you don't have to worry about DT AR being too high or anything. Seeing as you love high OD you shouldn't be hesitant to put higher AR too.
00:01:377 (4,5,1) - This rhythm feels really weird; earlier you established rhythm of sliderhead on the high pitched sound on the red tick, which feels fine, but for this part you have circle and sliderend on the next two of those sounds. I'd use sliderheads for all of them.
00:04:120 (4,5,1) - ^
00:15:862 (3,5) - I get the feeling that you can only use similar futile reasoning in asymmetry to argue that these kinds of 5 note streams aren't overmapped
00:43:034 (1) - Not putting a 1/4 slider here is really inconsistent, I haven't ever seen another ranked map do this.
00:43:720 (1) - Spacing error huh? The object after it is 1/2 beat apart, could use bigger spacing
00:54:691 (3,4,5,1) - Really easy to misread as an unbroken stream, I'd stack 00:54:862 (5,1) -
01:30:005 (2,3,4) - This spacing is funny too
01:58:977 (3) - This is the only pattern around here where you have all 3 sliders overlapping, it's hard to see where the last one ends
02:36:177 (1) - 02:58:120 (1) - 05:12:520 (3) - Same spacing thing I pointed out earlier
02:57:434 (1) - Same inconsistency thing from before
04:00:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Isn't this entirely overmapped on the blue ticks? The audible 1/4 doesn't start until 04:01:891, so you should follow that.
04:50:577 (1,1,1,1) - Man this will come off as gimmicky and stuff imo, Garven really hates these. Like I get the sliders are slowing down a bit but NC spam doesn't make easier to read or anything
05:13:377 - No ending spinner??
yea
AR9 is rather low for one of these 5+ star crazy remix maps with streams and stuff everywhere. Higher AR here would make patterns easier to play. Obviously this kind of map isn't gonna be DTed so you don't have to worry about DT AR being too high or anything. Seeing as you love high OD you shouldn't be hesitant to put higher AR too.
00:01:377 (4,5,1) - This rhythm feels really weird; earlier you established rhythm of sliderhead on the high pitched sound on the red tick, which feels fine, but for this part you have circle and sliderend on the next two of those sounds. I'd use sliderheads for all of them.
00:04:120 (4,5,1) - ^
00:15:862 (3,5) - I get the feeling that you can only use similar futile reasoning in asymmetry to argue that these kinds of 5 note streams aren't overmapped
00:43:034 (1) - Not putting a 1/4 slider here is really inconsistent, I haven't ever seen another ranked map do this.
00:43:720 (1) - Spacing error huh? The object after it is 1/2 beat apart, could use bigger spacing
00:54:691 (3,4,5,1) - Really easy to misread as an unbroken stream, I'd stack 00:54:862 (5,1) -
01:30:005 (2,3,4) - This spacing is funny too
01:58:977 (3) - This is the only pattern around here where you have all 3 sliders overlapping, it's hard to see where the last one ends
02:36:177 (1) - 02:58:120 (1) - 05:12:520 (3) - Same spacing thing I pointed out earlier
02:57:434 (1) - Same inconsistency thing from before
04:00:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - Isn't this entirely overmapped on the blue ticks? The audible 1/4 doesn't start until 04:01:891, so you should follow that.
04:50:577 (1,1,1,1) - Man this will come off as gimmicky and stuff imo, Garven really hates these. Like I get the sliders are slowing down a bit but NC spam doesn't make easier to read or anything
05:13:377 - No ending spinner??
yea