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ZLOdeuka-

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ZLOdeuka- 2010-06-12T05:20:07+00:00

[General]
Мне кажется нужно поставить сетку поудобнее - View-> Grid Level.Думаю сойдёт 2 =)

[Abyssal]

00:22:733(2,3) - spacing
00:44:440(3,4) - ^

[Normal]

00:05:599(4) - spacing
00:07:184(2,3) - ^
00:07:550(3,4) - ^
00:22:550(2,3) - ^
00:37:001(3,4) - ^
00:40:660(4,5) - ^
00:43:830(3,4) - ^
00:24:318(1,2,3) - сделай слайдеры длинее на 1шкалу.

[Hard]

Есть проблемы с выравниванием , нужна сетка получше.Выше писала.

00:06:513(1,2,3) - размести с одинаковым расстоянием друг от друга.

00:24:318(1,2,3) - можно сделать 2 слайдер громче 1,а 3 громче их обоих ))

[Abyssal - и сказать то нечего.Это пусть просматривают высшие -_-]

Вобщем...Просматри карту и не ленись.КАК СЛЕДУЕТ!реши проблемы с выравниванием,сеткой.

пока звезду не даю...мне она не нравится из-за балагана в ней )

очень уж всё просто так понатыкано =)

удачи ~

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Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-12T11:06:37+00:00

Исправил.

Mastodonio

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Mastodonio 2010-06-12T15:18:06+00:00

Молодец!

Xgor

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Xgor 2010-06-12T18:42:11+00:00

[General]
Why the hell call it (TV Sized) when all the other maps calls it (TV Size).
Change to that. (Also read this before you change)

Backgrounds are too big crop/resize it to 1024x768 for the backgrounds and 800x600 for j7t5fykq9t.png

There is almost no hitsounds (Only some at Abyssal) and the volume setting doesn't make it better.
Add more and raise the volume.

All the tags are pointless except for Clare if Clare mapped a difficulty for this.
Remove them.

416 as a offset makes the offset makes the metronome sound much better

You can follow more that just the vocals 100% precise , The map is awful due to that.

Generally it's a good idea to not use 1/4 exept for streams imo.

[Newbie]
1/4 in a easy, seriously! 1/4 is not that easy and not recommended for an easy
I guess some follow the vocals but I don't think newbies will know that... There is even some that don't even fit, like these.
00:24:684 (2) - Move 1/4 forward on the time line.
00:25:294 (3) - Make 1/4 longer
00:26:269 (4) - ^

Also short repeating slider is zzZZZzzz and half of the map is that...

[Normal]
This is just Newbie with some part changed and improved a tiny bit.
It's still boring.

[Hard]
Better than Newbie and Normal but still are plagued of the stuff I pointed out in General.

00:32:367 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Why does this have so much smaller spacing, why!
00:54:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why does this have so much bigger spacing, why!

[Abyssal]
It might be just me but I hate those patterns like this 00:04:562 (1,2)

Why only kiai on this one?

The SB at the end is just annoying :<

00:21:635 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Wth is up with this spacing.

Ok, I can't stand modding this map anymore.... way to much I dislike with it.... (Why did I mod this in the first place)

Vikon

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Vikon 2010-06-15T10:02:00+00:00

[General]
1) your 3 BGs are 1228x768, better to find a 1024 x 768 instead.

[Newbie]
start a hitobject at blut tick is not suitable for a newbie to play, try to start a hitobject only at red and white tick in this diff.
00:24:318 (1,2,3,4) increase the volume of these notes (what is the meaning of hitting some slience note?)
00:32:245 (1) start at 00:32:367
00:37:245 (3,4) new combo?

[Normal]
the volume is too loud?
00:11:147 (1) add soft-finish on the start and the end of this slider?
00:18:464 useless timing section? or you forgot to make changes?
00:24:318 (1,2,3) increase the volume..?
00:35:538 (2) add clap on every 2 white tick ,start from this note? (e.g. 00:35:538 (2,2) - 00:37:489 (4),00:38:464 and on and on and on..) (you may apply this hitsound pattern on other diff)
00:39:440 if you use the "clap suggestion, add a note with clap here.
00:42:367 (6) add finish Only
00:48:221 (4,5) spacing? (jump is not suitable in [Normal])
00:49:318 (1) finish?

[Hard]
the volume is too loud?
00:05:294 (3,4) spacing?
00:22:611 (6) don't stack with (5) and start 00:22:855 (7) at 00:22:733 ? (it is easy to confuse players as the music is similar but the pattern is different)
00:33:342 (5,6) spacing?
00:38:952 (8) move to 00:38:830?
00:42:367 (5) change clap to finish?
00:48:474 (5) add 1 more back?
00:49:074 (6) move to 00:49:196?

[Abyssal]
1) This is the only diff without using countdown, try to unify it?
2) yes, this is insane, so I can see many notes hard to read (e.g. 00:06:513 (1,2,3,4,5,6) ) may be it is interesting, but I don't like them.
00:19:684 (2,3,4) - spacing?
00:21:635 (2,3,4) - ^
00:27:733 the volume change is a little bit small, it is hard to let players feel this changes.
00:38:952 (8) - move it to 00:38:830
00:40:660 (6,7,8) - spacing?
00:48:952 add a note here?
00:49:196 (11) start at 00:49:196

Star~

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-15T14:58:11+00:00

thanks~

Clare

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Clare 2010-06-15T20:08:25+00:00

Yo~~~~~~~~
my diff~
I love Claymore~
I love Clare~
>"<

Download: normal-hitclap.rar

Download: Nightmare - Raison d'etre (TV Sized) (Louis Cyphre) [Clare].osu

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Hamuko

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Hamuko 2010-06-15T20:35:45+00:00

Xgor wrote:
[General]
Why the hell call it (TV Sized) when all the other maps calls it (TV Size).
Change to that. (Also read this before you change)

THANKS :3

Clare

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Clare 2010-06-15T21:24:22+00:00

fix some note,
><"

Download: Nightmare - Raison d'etre (TV Sized) (Louis Cyphre) [Clare].osu

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-15T23:01:42+00:00

Difficulty Uploaded. Thanks Clare :: )

Hamuko

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Hamuko 2010-06-15T23:29:55+00:00

you are just ignoring the TV Sized problem because you don't wanna fix or 'cause me and Xgor didn't star your map? '-'

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-15T23:57:29+00:00

Oh. I didn't read his post. Because i didn't ask him to mod.
I'll remove "d" from title don't worry. I don't need star from you guys. May be you really don't like this map.

Hamuko

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Hamuko 2010-06-16T02:33:49+00:00

:3
sorry for being a pain in the ass X3

IceBeam

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IceBeam 2010-06-17T06:29:14+00:00

Well,I am too lazy to mod,so here you are~

Download: stuff.rar

Don't miss any file inside,please.

I have no idea what's the difficulty is it,probably hard,but well,name it whatever you want,just don't forget to add me to tags,and difficulty title must contain my nick,so,keep it up in mind.

Good luck =o

mikhe

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mikhe 2010-06-17T14:10:02+00:00

I have the diff man

, Mik'Easy :3
and.. this map is for ranked, not for approval not? xD (i remember that you said for approval lol)

Download: Nightmare - Raison d'etre (TV Sized) (Louis Cyphre) [Mik'Easy].osu

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Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-17T14:23:12+00:00

For ranked. It's TV-sized version.
After that Full version will be submitted for approval.
I wanna get this ranked, not approved :3
Thanks for difficulty mikhe and SadKangaroo. I'll add them.

mikhe

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mikhe 2010-06-17T14:38:28+00:00

Modding~

[General]
Change (Tv Sized) to (Tv Size)
Use this tutorial to change the title or artist: http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443

[Newbie]
No mistake i think

[Normal]
00:03:343 (1) - Better a slider like this...

SPOILER

00:22:733 (3) - Final it in 00:23:830 (white tick)

[Hard]
00:48:464 (4,5) - Please, less distance between both sliders (1 or 2 grid i think O_o)

[Abyssal]
So confusing @_@, but maybe this fact is because i'm an osu standard noob xD
No mistake i think

[Clare]
00:04:562 (1) - Delete this
00:23:586 (1,2) - Too close??
00:58:952 (6,7) - Fix spacing between both notes, too far.

I have already starred xD (kd~ :3)

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-17T17:24:49+00:00

Change (Tv Sized) to (Tv Size)

Fixed

About Normal difficulty. It is deleted and added SadKangaroo's normal difficulty. :3
Anyway thanks man ^_~

Kiddo-Kun

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Kiddo-Kun 2010-06-19T19:01:03+00:00

My Mod wrote:
[Mik'Easy]

Some Ugly Sliders In this Diff

00:39:684 (6) - NC

00:41:879 (1) - Remove NC

[SadKangaroo]

Fine.

[Hard]

Fine.

[Abyssal]

Fine.

[Clare]

00:54:928 (9) - NC

00:59:074 (7) - 1 Grid left

STAR

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-19T22:46:37+00:00

Bah. Nothing changed.
thanks for taking a look

Garven

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Garven 2010-06-20T18:18:12+00:00

As per your request:

[Easy]
00:14:562 (4) - You may as well move it to 00:14:399 (1/3) to go with the vocal. It feels wrong the way it is now.
00:29:928 (2) - Move to 1/3 again. Possibly use a slider for ease of rhythm.
00:32:367 (1,2) - I'd recommend against doing something like this due to a new player not being able to figure out quite when the slider is going to stop repeating.
00:45:294 (1,2) - ^
00:51:147 (1) - Too soon after the spinner. If anything, just delete this and extend the spinner to this point.

[SadK]
The difficulty kind of leaps around in this... it starts off super-easy, then throws jumps in all over the place later on. Maybe try to keep the difficulty a little more consistent? Otherwise, it's fine.

Why is this the only difficulty with the fade in storyboard?

[Hard]
It's so... quiet...
00:27:733 (1) - This would look better as bezier instead of linear.

[Abyssal]
Same comment for the linear slider.
Argh, flashies when I need to concentrate and aim! Ah well, I'd lose without the distraction anyway.

[Clare]
Flashies... I still suck anyway. Can't mod the harder diffs that well, sorry.

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-20T18:38:35+00:00

Thanks for modding :3

mikhe

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mikhe 2010-06-20T22:10:58+00:00

Garven wrote:
[Easy]
00:14:562 (4) - You may as well move it to 00:14:399 (1/3) to go with the vocal. It feels wrong the way it is now. Yeah, now sounds better, done.
00:29:928 (2) - Move to 1/3 again. Possibly use a slider for ease of rhythm. Done, but no slider
00:32:367 (1,2) - I'd recommend against doing something like this due to a new player not being able to figure out quite when the slider is going to stop repeating. fixed, but... really, new player can see the approach circle xD, but well, to do easier :3
00:45:294 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:51:147 (1) - Too soon after the spinner. If anything, just delete this and extend the spinner to this point. Oke...

Download: Nightmare - Raison d'etre (TV Size) (Louis Cyphre) [Mik'Easy].osu

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-20T22:52:59+00:00

Uploaded.

Bikko

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Bikko 2010-06-21T01:05:33+00:00

[Mik's Easy]

If you don't mind, use little more farther distance snap for some overapped cicles by 1/2 beat snap. It can makes more looks good note, and almost not effect its actual diffculty.

[SadKangaroo]

I think Its overall is little slower than flow of the note. Increase overall diffculty 1 tick please.

00:42:855 can you place here a note? I know started at 00:43:099 is matched with lyrics of the song, but It's little hard to start this combo exactly right timing if player has no idea about this song.

[Hard]

00:03:708 place here a note. I think It's very unnatural.

00:04:440 place here a note or makes slider 00:04:318 (4) to 00:04:440 if It was not intended. I think It's very unnatural.

00:49:074 (6) missplaced. there is no lyric, no beat. push it to 00:49:194. but end timing of slider is well.

00:50:660 place here a note. or it can be new end timing of slider on 00:49:194.

00:57:997 (2) as you know, melodys of the song on placed 00:57:997, 00:58:221, 00:58:464, 00:58:708. but this slider on 00:57:997 ~ 00:58:464. It's veeeeeery strange to me. I can not concentrate Abyssal and Clare diff. but I think there is same problem.

[Abyssal]

I can not any help this madness.

00:03:708 place here a note.

well.... grrr... I can not concentrate. sorry.

[Clare]

I don't have any motivation for this kind of note. Really sorry, but I'm serious. this note can kill me by heart attack. I can not concentrate.

[About all diff]

I found totaly differnt placed note for same beat. attention 00:30:009(1/3 Beat snap) of Mik'easy diff and 00:30:050 of another diffs. (Clare diff is perfectly wrong on this part, you must modify it. and i think, Clare diff and Abyssal diff are not just hard. they are very unusual note or seriously wrong note. Autoplay of these Diffs are veeery weird on some parts.) one of you guys mistooks, but I'm not sure what is right.

EDIT: I think 00:30:050 is right. there is no reson to use 1/3 beat snap. also, actually I can hear a guitar beat from 00:30:050. not 00:30:009

EDIT: well.. I found it was by garven's modding.... well.... I'm really not sure... but.... I can not belive that is on 1/3. well... you can avoid my opinion. but... It's very hard to understand. hm...

Last EDIT : Probably I'm wrong. my acc is suck, It's mean I don't have talent of timing. but I'm just curious, why garven did not point out 00:30:050 of [SadKangaroo]? and 00:14:399 of [easy] is too... I think 00:14:440 is right. It's mean, just I'm poor noob of timing? If it's true, I really need garven's modding on my map ASSP. maybe terrible timming misses are there. oh my god...

I don't need kudosu. thx.

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-21T13:25:38+00:00

Thank you Bikko ^_^

IceBeam

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IceBeam 2010-06-21T16:30:56+00:00

Garven wrote:
[SadK]
The difficulty kind of leaps around in this... it starts off super-easy, then throws jumps in all over the place later on. Maybe try to keep the difficulty a little more consistent? Otherwise, it's fine. Yeah,I think so.But well,it was purposely to fill it with so little notes as it possible,but make it a bit fun.So,it's like a jumpy Normal.

Bikko wrote:
[SadKangaroo]

I think Its overall is little slower than flow of the note. Increase overall diffculty 1 tick please. I don't mind.Up to Loui.

00:42:855 can you place here a note? I know started at 00:43:099 is matched with lyrics of the song, but It's little hard to start this combo exactly right timing if player has no idea about this song. Same moment: 00:39:684 (1).Isn't it? Well,it's like Normal + or Hard,so I think it fits,thanks for suggestions!

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2010-06-21T19:23:55+00:00

Hi hi!!

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me

Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Timing is way off imo, might want to double check with someone good at timing =x
- Delete Nightmare and Raison d'etre of Tags.
- Max size for storyboard elements is 800x600px, you'll have to resize your images.
- Make kiai times the same on all diffs.
Skin:
- Just the score numbers? ._. I'd say to, at least, make a hitcircle, but if you're going to leave it like that force the default skin, it looks weird when using other skins.

~Mik's Easy~
- Map the WHOLE SONG. It's only a minute long...

00:22:855 (5) - Fix spacing.

~SadKangaroo~
- Map the WHOLE SONG. It's only a minute long...

00:26:147 (4) - I'd personally delete this note. Up to you, though.

~Hard~
- Add more hitsounds ._.

00:24:318 (1,2,3) - Why are these 3 sliders silent? It feels weird oxo
00:32:611 (2) - Fix Spacing.
00:49:074 (6) - Enlarge to the white tick.
00:53:099 (1) - Fix spacing.
00:54:440 (1) - ^
00:56:391 (1) - ^
00:59:074 (2) - I'd say to stack it under (1).

~Abyssal~
- White hitcircles are really hard to see on this background. Add Storyboard flashes and kiai and it will be a nightmare. Change it, please.
Storyboard:
- Those "flashes" are... ugh x.x. They're way too fast and those last 1/4 flashes are really annoying...

- The speed up warning is too fast, in fact, I didn't see it at all when I played it.

00:04:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ._.
00:14:440 (6) - Fix spacing.
00:30:660 (2,3,4) - ^
00:40:050 (2,3,4) - ^
00:42:855 (4) - ^
00:43:099 (1) - What? Fix spacing <_<
00:43:586 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Fix spacing.
From 00:51:147 (1) to 00:57:977 (9) - Fix the whole spacing here. Also, as I already said, the flashes doesn't help to it :/

~Clare~
- White hitcircles are really hard to see on this background. Add Storyboard flashes and kiai and it will be a nightmare. Change it, please.
Storyboard:
- Those "flashes" are... ugh x.x. They're way too fast and those last 1/4 flashes are really annoying...

- The speed up warning is too fast, in fact, I didn't see it at all when I played it.

00:23:586 (1,2) - Space them out? It's a bit confusing x.x

Diff spread is a bit... dissapointing. SadKangaroo's diff is supposed to be a Normal but it isn't a Normal at all. And also you have 3 insanes on the mapset (yes, Hard plays like an Insane, the long kickstream isn't easy) so you'll have to remove one of your I or at least make it easier...
Good luck with the map :3

mikhe

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mikhe 2010-06-21T20:35:21+00:00

Bikko wrote:
[Mik's Easy]

If you don't mind, use little more farther distance snap for some overapped cicles by 1/2 beat snap. It can makes more looks good note, and almost not effect its actual diffculty. Thanks, but i think good now ;3, if some people say too.. i can consider to change

[About all diff]
SPOILER
I found totaly differnt placed note for same beat. attention 00:30:009(1/3 Beat snap) of Mik'easy diff and 00:30:050 of another diffs. (Clare diff is perfectly wrong on this part, you must modify it. and i think, Clare diff and Abyssal diff are not just hard. they are very unusual note or seriously wrong note. Autoplay of these Diffs are veeery weird on some parts.) one of you guys mistooks, but I'm not sure what is right.

EDIT: I think 00:30:050 is right. there is no reson to use 1/3 beat snap. also, actually I can hear a guitar beat from 00:30:050. not 00:30:009

EDIT: well.. I found it was by garven's modding.... well.... I'm really not sure... but.... I can not belive that is on 1/3. well... you can avoid my opinion. but... It's very hard to understand. hm...

Last EDIT : Probably I'm wrong. my acc is suck, It's mean I don't have talent of timing. but I'm just curious, why garven did not point out 00:30:050 of [SadKangaroo]? and 00:14:399 of [easy] is too... I think 00:14:440 is right. It's mean, just I'm poor noob of timing? If it's true, I really need garven's modding on my map ASSP. maybe terrible timming misses are there. oh my god...
Man... the same sound can be catched with a rythm different by different person, it's totally normal... and the change in my map are because Garven said, and i liked them ;3

Beuchi-chan wrote:
~All Diffs~
- Make kiai times the same on all diffs. Ejem... it isn't neccesary beuchi

~Mik's Easy~
- Map the WHOLE SONG. It's only a minute long... I dont want :3

00:22:855 (5) - Fix spacing. Beuchi... 1 grid distance .__., but fixed...

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Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-21T20:44:14+00:00

Skin:
- Just the score numbers? ._. I'd say to, at least, make a hitcircle, but if you're going to leave it like that force the default skin, it looks weird when using other skins.

I'll try to make hit circles :: )

Yes
No
O_o

00:04:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ._. - What's wrong? =/
0:14:440 (6) - Fix spacing.
00:30:660 (2,3,4) - ^
00:40:050 (2,3,4) - ^
00:42:855 (4) - ^
00:43:099 (1) - What? Fix spacing <_<
00:43:586 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Fix spacing.
From 00:51:147 (1) to 00:57:977 (9) - Fix the whole spacing here. Also, as I already said, the flashes doesn't help to it :/ <=---- i did it especially

00:24:318 (1,2,3) - Why are these 3 sliders silent? It feels weird oxo
00:32:611 (2) - Fix Spacing.
00:49:074 (6) - Enlarge to the white tick.
00:53:099 (1) - Fix spacing.
00:54:440 (1) - ^
00:56:391 (1) - ^
00:59:074 (2) - I'd say to stack it under (1).

- White hitcircles are really hard to see on this background. Add Storyboard flashes and kiai and it will be a nightmare. Change it, please.

White on Black. You can't see? O_o Oke. I'll what will others say ;; )

IceBeam

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IceBeam 2010-06-21T21:03:15+00:00

Beuchi-chan wrote:
~SadKangaroo~
- Map the WHOLE SONG. It's only a minute long... It's like...additional 8 seconds? Is it really that necessary?

00:26:147 (4) - I'd personally delete this note. Up to you, though. No,thanks.That's my favourite note.

IceBeam

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IceBeam 2010-06-21T21:04:31+00:00

Beuchi-chan wrote:
~SadKangaroo~
- Map the WHOLE SONG. It's only a minute long... It's like...additional 8 seconds? Is it really that necessary?

00:26:147 (4) - I'd personally delete this note. Up to you, though. No,thanks.That's my favourite note.

Sorry for double post Dx my net was glitching

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mikhe

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mikhe 2010-06-21T22:43:26+00:00

Lol, sadkangaroo, double post x3

Louis, please, resubmit my diff... this ;3 (i did minimal changes in sliders.. i think now it has better looking :3)

Download: Nightmare - Raison d'etre (TV Size) (Louis Cyphre) [Mik'Easy].osu

Tatsuo

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Tatsuo 2010-06-21T23:00:07+00:00

Oh bah, this would have more than 15 SP when I get to it =(
I'm sorry for my slowness >< But I don't mod anything over 15 SP

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-22T11:09:37+00:00

Oh bah, this would have more than 15 SP when I get to it =(
I'm sorry for my slowness >< But I don't mod anything over 15 SP

It was 15 when i wrote in your queue ._.

Mik's Difficulty reUploaded. Thanks mikhe ^_~

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mikhe 2010-06-22T11:20:04+00:00

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:
Oh bah, this would have more than 15 SP when I get to it =(
I'm sorry for my slowness >< But I don't mod anything over 15 SP

And you can see, this map has 13 stars... his current priority is +17 ><
Oke i know you refer the current priority xD

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Gens 2010-06-25T00:24:33+00:00

[General]

What is the point of including artist and title in tags?
Tags are not the same on all difficulties.
Resize black.JPG to 640x480. That'll cover the whole playfield and run better.

[Abyssal]

The warning isn't really well deployed. It appears so suddenly and is unreadable at first sight...

00:04:562 - Really unsure about the sliders in this section... they're so confusing, and don't follow the music much, at least for me.

[Clare]

The same thing I said about the warning applies here too.

00:58:952 (6) - Small thing: New combo?

Yeah.

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-25T11:16:25+00:00

[General]

* What is the point of including artist and title in tags?
* Tags are not the same on all difficulties.
* Resize black.JPG to 640x480. That'll cover the whole playfield and run better.
All fixed ^ ^

[Abyssal]

* The warning isn't really well deployed. It appears so suddenly and is unreadable at first sight...
Check now ^_^

00:04:562 - Really unsure about the sliders in this section... they're so confusing, and don't follow the music much, at least for me. I like hard confusing constructions =P

[Clare]

* The same thing I said about the warning applies here too. all done

00:58:952 (6) - Small thing: New combo?

Yeah.

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Gens 2010-06-25T17:11:31+00:00

Can you use this as your warning image instead? You'll notice the difference while playing.

Also, the "confusing sliders" might be better if they started at the white tick instead (00:04:308). There's something about those sliders that I just don't like, hopefully that will be enough...

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-25T17:48:57+00:00

all done :3

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Gens 2010-06-25T21:52:18+00:00

[Abyssal]

00:27:723 - Wait, wasn't this supposed to be 1x?

Also, offset might need rechecking... bliss was pretty confused with it. D=
And I'm still aware of the starting sliders but I think they're more acceptable now.

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-25T22:57:17+00:00

00:27:723 - Wait, wasn't this supposed to be 1x?
It is already 1x ._.

Also, offset might need rechecking... bliss was pretty confused with it. D=

3:

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jericho2442 2010-06-26T09:39:30+00:00

ok just to let you know, your current offset makes your song start on a stanza in the middle of the bar rather than it starting at the first beat of the bar

only things i can say is these suggestions
[Clare]

00:23:586 (1,2) - the spacing being so close on these notes makes it very iratating to play, i think it would play better if you either stacked or spaced these better

00:54:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - and how do you read this without trial and error? i can stream pretty much everything but even for me this was a complete blind note part, REALLY could be done better this part

anyway its in mapping terms a sound map so have a star, i do think that stream part though is lil silly >_>

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-26T11:16:49+00:00

Thanks jericho.
Well i can't calculate right offset, bcz current offset seems to me absolutly right =/

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Gens 2010-06-26T17:22:58+00:00

Try using 3,336 for the offset.

And yes, apparently the slider IS 1x. Just make sure to readjust it after the offset change (which is what I didn't do). >.>;

EDIT: It really was 2x. ^_^

Anyhoo, bubbled.

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-26T18:09:18+00:00

OUENDAN!!!

Thanks~

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mikhe 2010-06-27T21:55:09+00:00

Gens wrote:
Anyhoo, bubbled.

Not rankeable yet!!!

Louis_cyphre... You resnaped my map!! and i used 1/2 and 1/3 rythm....
I fixed the diff and put 1/6, add quickly
00:14:392 (4) - This beat used 1/3 rythm...
00:30:002 (2) - ^

This is the reason why i said you advise me ALWAYS xD
Remember dont RESNAP if a diff use different rythm (1/2 and 1/3 for exmaple)

I added a SB using Black.jpg, 1 spinner, 1 slider and 1 beat at the begining x3
Of course... i MUST to readjust my SB because i have a black.jpg with 1024x764.... and you changed.. and i CANT download xD
Seriusly.. wait louis x3

Download: Nightmare - Raison d'etre (TV Size) (Louis Cyphre) [Mik'Easy].osu

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-27T23:26:30+00:00

Okey ^_^

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Licnect 2010-06-28T07:20:14+00:00

☆

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-28T07:35:19+00:00

Thanks ^_~

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Alace 2010-06-28T07:44:47+00:00

<Abyssal>
00:04:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - parts like this are really hard to read,i need to get other BATs to check this
plz hold on

btw i got some people to play that diff,they have the same problem

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-28T08:20:49+00:00

Okey. ^_^

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Alace 2010-06-28T16:16:19+00:00

OK you are so pro
you killed 7+ TOP 100 players, no one can read those patterns that i point out lol

<Abyssal>
this song is not that hard, but this diff is super hard,ithey don`t really dit the song well IMO
00:04:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - this part is pretty hard to read,
00:47:482 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is totally unrankable fix it
Final part has super large spacing, it`s fine for me, but i think you can decease the spacing slightly

EDIT:I am a player/mapper, i don`t think you have listen to me because my name is red... but
As a player, i don`t think this map is fun, it`s confusing and lacks nice beat feeling
As a mapper, i think we guys should make maps fitting the songs, it is silly to just make pretty hard map
After you fixing the red line, i will give your bubble back, this is my BAT job

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Louis Cyphre 2010-06-28T17:42:41+00:00

Fixed =(

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Alace 2010-06-28T17:51:39+00:00

It`s your bubble

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IceBeam 2010-07-02T11:26:08+00:00

No way for ranking.

[My difficulty]
Have you resnapped all notes?
Also,Timing Points are messed,why didn't you fixed them?

00:22:604 (4) - It was 0.5x here.Why it's messed now?

Urgh..change to following one

Download: Nightmare - Raison d'etre (TV Size) (Louis Cyphre) [SadKangaroo].osu

I'm sorry for popping bubble request,but it's really messed.Hope Alace could restore it.

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Louis Cyphre 2010-07-02T11:52:27+00:00

No sry man. You are absolutly right.
Yes. Fixed.

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Alace 2010-07-02T13:08:07+00:00

repair

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Louis Cyphre 2010-07-02T15:58:59+00:00

thanks Alace

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Lunah_old 2010-07-07T18:50:57+00:00

<3

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andysun_old 2010-07-08T09:25:19+00:00

lol lol lol

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-07-08T09:26:08+00:00

Thanks guys :3

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Stake 2010-07-08T10:00:12+00:00

Star~ :3

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minyeob 2010-07-08T12:17:12+00:00

Well, I think that Sand's diff is too hard.
There's already 3 insanes and Sand diff is too close from 『Insane』
At least I suggest less jumps <_<
Well it's just my opinion before ranking

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DJPop 2010-07-08T12:51:06+00:00

Offset: 410

~Mik'Easy~
00:14:433 (4) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:30:409 (3) - move left & down 2 grids (Lv3)
00:49:189 (1) - add hitfinish

~SadKangaroo~
Fine.

~Hard~
00:57:970 (2) - add hitfinish on last note
00:58:945 (1,2) - add hitfinish

~Insane~
00:14:799 (1) - make it more symmetric
00:49:189 (7) - end on white tick
00:57:970 (9) - add hitfinish & clap on last note

~Clare~
00:58:457 (3) - add hitfinish
00:58:945 (1,2) - add hitfinish & clap

+Star

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Louis Cyphre 2010-07-08T13:37:02+00:00

Well, I think that Sand's diff is too hard.
There's already 3 insanes and Sand diff is too close from 『Insane』
At least I suggest less jumps <_<
Well it's just my opinion before ranking

SadKangaroo's difficulty is Normal+, not hard.
Hard is just Hard
Insane and Clare are [Insane]. So there are ENHII. Not rankable? =/

Thanks DJPop :3

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lepidopodus 2010-07-08T14:05:32+00:00

minyeob wrote:
Well, I think that Sand's diff is too hard.
There's already 3 insanes and Sand diff is too close from 『Insane』
At least I suggest less jumps <_<
Well it's just my opinion before ranking

Even I could pass both hard and sadkangaroo's diff in first try, and I'm over #15000 lol
Hard seems Hard, and sandkangaroo's diff seems Normal or Hard so it's ENHII or EHHII. I think it's rankable.

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minyeob 2010-07-08T14:57:43+00:00

Have a bubble, then.

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Mogsy 2010-07-08T23:48:07+00:00

My opinion?

-Hard and Insane should probably have at least one spinner. Just so the scores can be varied due to the spinner.
-I'm not fond of the storyboard, but if others are, fine, leave it.
-SadKangaroo is not enough of a description for a difficulty name.

Insane:

00:24:311 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - These "deathsliders" feel incredibly out of place and, to be quite honest, flow-breaking and unnecessary.

Clare:

00:24:311 (1,2,3) - Like I mentioned before, these "deathsliders" feel incredibly out of place.
00:53:092 (5) - New Combo mark goes here. Be consistent with your New Combo marks.
00:55:043 (9) - ^
00:56:994 (5) - ^
00:58:945 (1,2) - I do not like this spacing, I do not like it one bit.

Otherwise, it's competent. What I mentioned is all just trying to help, remember this.

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Mizu_banned 2010-07-10T07:41:31+00:00

Звезду няше :3

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Louis Cyphre 2010-07-10T07:59:25+00:00

-Hard and Insane should probably have at least one spinner. Just so the scores can be varied due to the spinner.

I wanna see how people add one more mod to beat 1st place

And i love maps without spins

00:24:311 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - These "deathsliders" feel incredibly out of place and, to be quite honest, flow-breaking and unnecessary.

u r first who said that X: I don't want to change, sry 3:

Well. Thanks for help Mogsworth. I don't want to change anything =( sry.
But for help thanks :: )

Thanks BattorA : )

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Mafiamaster 2010-07-10T17:53:45+00:00

Mogsworth wrote:
Clare:

00:53:092 (5) - New Combo mark goes here. Be consistent with your New Combo marks.
00:55:043 (9) - ^
00:56:994 (5) - ^

This is mandatory. Change these combos for readability.

[Insane]
00:08:092 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - Distance snap these properly with 1.0x distance snapping. They should all be touching each other a little bit.

[SadKangaroo]
00:43:092 (1,2) - You call these jumps a normal+? I recommend reducing the spacing on every jump mainly in the Kiai section of the map.

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Louis Cyphre 2010-07-10T18:27:34+00:00

fixed

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Mafiamaster 2010-07-10T18:31:31+00:00

Much better. Rebubbled~

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Louis Cyphre 2010-07-10T21:03:19+00:00

thanks for bubble. :3

Thanks -Orz for star :: )

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Mogsy 2010-07-13T04:11:32+00:00

Louis Cyphre wrote:
00:24:311 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - These "deathsliders" feel incredibly out of place and, to be quite honest, flow-breaking and unnecessary.
u r first who said that X: I don't want to change, sry 3:

Well. Thanks for help Mogsworth. I don't want to change anything =( sry.

Just because I'm the first one to mention it doesn't mean it feels absolutely perfect. Let me explain myself.
The deathsliders don't make sense due to where you've placed them in the song. Sure, those are chorded vocals, but they don't feel significant enough to change the slider velocity.

Since this belief of yours exists, I guess there's no sense in me trying to change it any further.

Good enough to be ranked.

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Haneii 2010-07-13T05:06:56+00:00

Yay Ranked! Congrats!

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Louis Cyphre 2010-07-13T05:23:04+00:00

Well. I should say gratz to mikhe, this is his first ranked difficulty : )

Thank you guys)

Andrea