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Utsu-P feat.Kagamine Rin - Tokyo Teddy Bear [OsuMania]

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Evening
somehow ended up becoming so bored

[Gen]

Would recommend hp 7 minimum for all diffs ( uhh maybe )

[SHD]
02:56:941 (176941|1,176941|0,177016|2,177091|1,177166|2,177241|1,177316|2,177391|1,177466|2,177541|1) - This is one of my disliked patterns in this map, would rather you just do a pattern without an LN or just simplify it, the LN and the constant 1/2 is kinda uhuhuhuqhwei

[SC]
01:12:705 - Probably missed a finisher | Add to all diffs.
01:17:505 - Not sure about the whistles being absent here in this diff specifically

[MX]
00:57:480 (57480|2,57555|1,57630|0) - Change all into claps
01:29:355 (89355|0,89355|3) - would recommend a hand for the finish OR 01:31:305 (91305|1,91305|3) - change this to a single noter to signify there's no finish or something, personally would choose the former
01:36:255 (96255|3,96255|0) - same for these 01:34:155 (94155|3,94155|0) -

[HD+]
00:44:055 (44055|2,44130|3,44205|1,44280|0,44355|2,44430|3) - you can probably do a pattern that will probably feel less awkward than this roll for the drums
00:47:805 (47805|0,47880|2,48105|0,48180|2) - Maybe add some claps here or something for the drums
01:12:705 (72705|0) - finisher
01:17:505 - Might want to go for a softer hitsound if you are just mapping the vocals only

[HD]
00:17:505 (17505|3,17505|0) - can probably go with a finisher
00:47:655 (47655|3,47730|2,47805|0,47880|1,47955|3,48030|2,48105|0,48180|1,48255|3) - same as HD+ you can probably throw in some claps here
00:57:405 (57405|1,57630|2,57705|1) - This drum beat sounds weird lol, change it to something else
01:12:705 (72705|2) - Finisher
01:17:505 - Might want to go for a softer hitsound if you are mapping the vocals
02:36:541 (156541|0,156541|3,156766|2,156766|1,156991|0,156991|3) - Think that hammering on 1 and 4 would be better as the player might get tricked that this is 1/2 due to the patterns before it
02:54:241 (174241|1,174316|2,174391|3) - 432 looks nicer idk, 02:54:541 (174541|0,174616|1,174691|2) - i guess it needs some variance from this else it feels too smooth

[NM]
00:15:105 (15105|0,15405|2,15705|1,16005|3,16305|1,16605|2,16905|0) - you can probably extend to a 1/2 LN to have the release of the LN signify the rides in the song, just a suggestion
00:57:405 (57405|0,57480|1,57555|2,57630|3,57705|0) - "This drum beat sounds weird lol, change it to something else"
01:07:005 (67005|0,67080|3,67305|0,67380|3) - I honestly think this is a really bad idea, NM players would just chord this, it is a really awkward grace for me anyways, would highly recommend changing this to a 1/2 beat
01:17:505 - uhh same thing, change to something less boom boomish xd
01:55:005 (115005|3) - well if you plan to or want to simplify this, shorten this by 1/1
02:05:441 (125441|2,125441|1) - same idea, idk about NM players handling LNs lol. Suggesting to change this to 34, where 4 is the LN | and move this note of course 02:05:941 (125941|3) -
02:28:966 (148966|2,149041|1) - to be kinder to NM players, make this 23

[EZ]
00:19:905 (19905|0) - Move to 3 for simplification if you wanna
00:47:655 (47655|0) - I'm kinda thinking that EZ would use a vocal cue instead of the instrumental for this, I highly suggest to start the LN on 00:47:805 -
00:48:405 - would suggest another note here for rhythm but euhuehue idk how you gonna do it
02:04:005 - I assume you're mapping the synth here, add another note on 3 then
02:45:841 (165841|3,165841|0,166141|1,166291|2,166591|3,166591|1) - yeaaa idk about LNs and Notes at the same time at this density for EZ at all, i think it's best to not have the LN

just do a offline pm or online pm to ask me for the bubble or someshit

uh have a star for no reason,( imma bubble this later anyways ( ? _ ? ) )

Topic Starter
puxtu

Evening wrote:

[MX]
01:29:355 (89355|0,89355|3) - would recommend a hand for the finish OR 01:31:305 (91305|1,91305|3) - change this to a single noter to signify there's no finish or something, personally would choose the former don't you see the doubles are for snare sound?
01:36:255 (96255|3,96255|0) - same for these 01:34:155 (94155|3,94155|0) -
[NM]
00:15:105 (15105|0,15405|2,15705|1,16005|3,16305|1,16605|2,16905|0) - you can probably extend to a 1/2 LN to have the release of the LN signify the rides in the song, just a suggestion 1/2 ln? ahahaha, no.
can't update the map until next week lol
mwc mappool thingy
Arzenvald
fuk u pe <3 im going to nazi mod this... for sure.. this mod is really nazi you even don't want to change it


[SHD]
00:48:705 (48705|1) - 00:49:905 (49905|2) - 00:51:105 (51105|3) - 00:52:305 (52305|2) - 00:53:505 (53505|2) - 00:54:705 (54705|0) - 00:55:905 (55905|2) - 00:57:105 (57105|3) - 00:58:305 (58305|0) - and other notes that placed in downbeat until 01:05:505 (65505|2) - aren't actually have sound cue to layer.. remove them..
01:46:305 (106305|1) - ^ goes to 2nd kiai..
02:17:941 (137941|1) - 02:19:141 (139141|0) - 02:20:341 (140341|2) - 02:21:541 (141541|3) - 02:22:741 (142741|0) - 02:23:941 (143941|2) - 02:25:141 (145141|2) - etc etc ^
patokannya garis putih besar
02:28:891 (148891|0,148966|1,149041|0) - 121
02:31:291 (151291|3,151366|2,151441|3) - ^ 434
02:37:966 (157966|2,157966|1,158041|3,158041|0,158116|2,158116|1,158191|3,158191|0) - http://puu.sh/k8svf.jpg
02:38:791 (158791|1,158791|0,158866|3,158866|2,158941|0,158941|1,159016|2,159016|3,159091|0,159091|1,159166|3,159166|2,159241|0,159241|1) - http://puu.sh/k8swF.png
02:39:541 (159541|0) - 02:40:741 (160741|2) - dan seterusnya...
02:51:541 (171541|2) - 02:52:741 (172741|1) - dan seterusnya

apply these on other diffs, then call me back
Topic Starter
puxtu
oh gampang mah kalo cuma ngilangin ghost notes
Arzenvald
oh right, mwc mappool
Topic Starter
puxtu
iya hari senin baru bisa gw update
nih update-an gw kalo lo ga mau nunggu


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Arzenvald
de fak good enough lah <3
Surono
tokiyo tedi ber
Evening
' w'
Okoratu
as far as i know this is not abstract nonsense
Kyousuke-
o nice krazy map
hope the pp not so underrated lol

btw i love how you made the SC diff
Akasha-
congratulations <3
CookChefSteak
gratzzzz <3
Topic Starter
puxtu
lol it's not over yet. wait until it's ranked
Kelsier
Really good map! Good Job!
SpectorDG
Congratz PXT ~ <3
Niks
i like this song!

thanks for make
[Valkyrie]
R.I.P 鬱-P 最高 :cry: :cry: :cry:
Topic Starter
puxtu
tbh I have the official mp3 but zenx ....lol....
jajamaru26
Nice job i enjoy this map a lot !
IamKwaN
You guys have to chill down a bit.

Take this as a warning.
Topic Starter
puxtu
its hot
Topic Starter
puxtu
lol kwan you're so cute
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KyoEvanR
wkwkwkwkwk gw pemula guys :D :D
Zura-_old
Itu orang matanye sharinggan njeeng
Shadowtail117
I swear this is an Inkling on the vocals.
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