1. Easy (1.32 stars, 99 notes)
2. Gaia's Hard (2.73 stars, 213 notes)
3. Insane (3.65 stars, 257 notes)
4. Normal (1.57 stars, 128 notes)

Crier wrote:

1st

(EASY GETTING REWORKED)

Easy

1. 00:11:071 (1,2,3,4,5) - why don't you change into sliders?
2. 00:13:680 (1) - extend until 00:14:550 as you did it at normal diff

Normal

Very clear diff, but there's too small gap between Easy and Normal, that i can even found harder patterns than Normal diff in Easy diff.
You would be better reduce circles and 1/2rythm at Easy diff because current gap of normal-hard diff is appropriate.

Hard Yea you are totally right I will go remap my easy with significant value.

1. 
   
   [notice]Insane
   
   1. 00:00:638 (1,2,3) - i don't really recommend high jump at the beginning. you can try this I like it
      
   2. 00:09:985 (6) - for nice flow, place at 282||332 and 00:10:203 (7) - 216||289, 00:10:637 (8) - 355||366 (or 356||352)
   3. 00:31:072 (6) - 245||275 YES TO ALL FLOW CHANGES, BUT MOVED SOME AROUND TO FIT MY STYLE
   4. 00:38:029 (7,8) - consider switching them I'll keep it the same, it creates a counter clockwise rotation that fits well despite how close it may seem
   5. 00:51:724 (3) - ctrl+g or do something to increase distance between 00:51:290 (2,3). it's really confusing to catch 1/4 rythm because 00:51:290 (2,3,1,2) have same distance you know. I think you are right on this
   6. 00:52:811 (1) - kibb's slider lol Really? I just threw random crap in there
   7. 01:08:464 (4) - better rythm suggestion
      

Ok did something similiar

overall all diffs are clear so that my suggestions aren't must be fixed. Good luck :3

monstrata wrote:

quick irc

17:19 monstrata: now np map and i'll give it a quick check
17:20 *Kocari is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/746533 mimimemeMIMI - sentimental love]
17:21 monstrata: Insane
17:21 monstrata: lets go
17:21 monstrata: 00:17:594 (10) - Oh, a drum-clap on the slider-end would be coool
17:21 Kocari: lol
17:21 Kocari: K
17:22 Kocari: YE
17:22 Kocari: NICE NICE
17:22 monstrata: 00:20:855 (6) - too 
17:22 Kocari: GIVE ME GIVE ME
17:23 monstrata: 00:48:898 (10) - Here too i guess, drum clap rather tha normal
17:24 Kocari: YES GIVE IT TO ME
17:24 monstrata: 01:07:811 (2,3) - Uh here kinda feels too strong cuz theres a jump + flow break
17:24 monstrata: better to have emphasis from 3>4
17:25 Kocari: What emphasis do you mean
17:25 monstrata: Well i associate jumps + flowbreaks with emphasis
17:25 monstrata: but right now 2>3 uses both 
17:26 Kocari: Ok I'll just keep this part hella basic
17:26 monstrata: okay xD
17:26 monstrata: 01:11:942 (1,2,3,4,1) - This NC intentional?
17:26 monstrata: 01:12:811 (5) - Cuz if it is, would make sense to NC here too
17:27 Kocari: Anyway is fine
17:27 Kocari: I was just utilizing the strong beats in there but fuck it
17:27 Kocari: lets go with you
17:27 monstrata: ah
17:27 Kocari: LETS DO YOU BOO
17:27 monstrata: 01:18:898 (5) - I would put a drum-finish on the head but that's just me lol. maybe you got a better idea tho
17:28 Kocari: I was actually looking for something there, I seemed it to be dead tbh
17:28 monstrata: ya
17:28 Kocari: but didn't know what to go with
17:28 monstrata: 01:20:637 (1) - Hmmm I feel like Ctrl+G'ing it makes a lot more sense
17:29 monstrata: 01:18:898 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Cuz the flow you set up here is going clockwise
17:29 monstrata: 01:21:724 (2) - Also a jump onto 2 doesn't make too much sense for me
17:30 monstrata: 01:26:507 (3) - And I guess you can make this a drum sampleset instead of Auto for that drum sound in the back
17:30 Kocari: YEP
17:30 Kocari: Wait but for the jump on (2)
17:31 Kocari: HMMM
17:31 monstrata: ya idk about the jump i feel like its not necessary
17:31 Kocari: Where should it go then
17:31 monstrata: 2 is on a red tick too usually you'd put jumps on whites unless there was a specific rhythm you were  following
17:31 Kocari: right back into the blanket?
17:31 monstrata: Oh
17:31 monstrata: nono iwas
17:31 monstrata: just giving reasons for
17:31 monstrata: 01:20:637 (1) - Ctrl G'ing this
17:31 monstrata: if you Ctrl+G it it solves all the problems
17:32 Kocari: Yea Ctrl G there is good
17:33 monstrata: okay
17:33 Kocari: ima update YE?!
17:33 monstrata: lemme check hard
17:33 Kocari: fuck hard
17:33 monstrata: you can make minor changes right?
17:33 Kocari: thats for pussies
17:34 Kocari: why not
17:35 monstrata: k done checking hard nwo normal
17:35 Kocari: LOL
17:35 Kocari: nice nice
17:35 monstrata: you could probably apply the hitsound things i mentioned onto normal :D
17:35 Kocari: perfect perfect
17:35 Kocari: ye
17:35 Kocari: copy pasterino
17:35 monstrata: ok xD
17:35 Kocari: But I did
17:35 Kocari: already
17:35 Kocari: =)
17:35 Kocari: I thought of it on normal
17:37 monstrata: looks fine to me
17:38 monstrata: Easy tho
17:38 monstrata: 00:49:333 (3) - 
17:38 monstrata: I think you should NC this lol
17:38 monstrata: for NC pattern
17:39 Kocari: Yea yea got it
17:39 Kocari: he should allow it because he's a greaser
17:39 monstrata: Okay back to Normal
17:39 Kocari: OK
17:39 monstrata: 01:01:507 (1) - Remove NC
17:39 monstrata: 01:03:246 (4) - NC should be here
17:39 Kocari: RIP MY ASSHOLE A NEW ONE
17:39 monstrata: omg ur NC's
17:40 monstrata: im a recheck ur nc's again
17:40 monstrata: lol
17:40 Kocari: I actually don't care about NC
17:40 Kocari: I just yolo it
17:40 Kocari: and let other people tell me
17:40 Kocari: I could try to do better
17:40 Kocari: but meh
17:40 Kocari: too much work
17:40 Kocari: to look at colors
17:40 monstrata: okay 
17:40 Kocari: since Im color blind
17:40 Kocari: =))
17:40 monstrata: let me just do them for you
17:40 monstrata: Insane again
17:40 Kocari: This is why we love you
17:40 monstrata: your pattern seems to be NC"ing every measure... i would do that for Insane anyways so
17:40 monstrata: 00:05:855 (4) - NC
17:40 monstrata: 00:09:333 (5) - NC
17:41 monstrata: 00:16:290 (6) - NC
17:41 monstrata: gmm
17:41 monstrata: verse section you switch to every 2 measures
17:42 Kocari: what? me
17:42 monstrata: I guess every two measures is fine too
17:42 monstrata: yea
17:42 Kocari: who knew
17:42 monstrata: for Insane
17:42 monstrata: 00:47:594 (6) - I'd NC cuz the next measure sounds quite different its like a "reply" to the first
17:42 monstrata: 00:50:855 (6) - and then NC here too
17:42 Kocari: Yea you right
17:43 monstrata: 00:52:268 (1) - Oh what why is this on ablue tick lol
17:44 Kocari: Because magic
17:44 Kocari: you don't see it
17:44 monstrata: 00:51:724 (8) - You could make this a 1/2 slider to fit the other two sliders and then
17:44 Kocari: YOU DUN SEE IT
17:44 monstrata: 00:52:159 - Start something here on a red tick so its easier
17:44 monstrata: lol
17:44 monstrata: ppl don't like polarity shifts on low bpm apparently
17:45 monstrata: 01:11:942 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Imentioned earlier but now considering your pattern
17:45 monstrata: I'd remove NC from 01:12:377 (1) -  and just NC 01:12:811 (5) - 
17:46 monstrata: so thers a NC for stream and one for kicksliders
17:46 monstrata: 01:27:159 (1) - Also this NC seems kinda random lol i'd remove it
17:46 monstrata: 01:27:594 (2) - But NC'ing the last note is nice if you want
17:46 Kocari: yea that was pretty random
17:46 monstrata: okay that should be all let me know when ur done applying all xD
17:47 Kocari: time to change the 1/2 and I'm done
17:47 monstrata: okay
17:47 monstrata: uh hang on your
17:47 monstrata: difficulty setttings are really weird
17:47 monstrata: lol
17:48 monstrata: Insane is fine
17:48 monstrata: Gaia's AR could probably be lowered to 6.5 for a better spread cuz Normal's AR ia 4.5
17:48 monstrata: and then BJ's AR is way too high lol. I don't even go past 3.5 for 190 bpm maps so i'd highly recommend moving AR to like 3 or 2.8 or something
17:49 monstrata: As for HP, spread is 3/3/5/6 so you might wanna make the HP for Normal 4
17:49 Kocari: Yea I'll tell him Ima change it
17:50 monstrata: also OD is 3/3/5/6.5 so... 2/3.5/5/6.5 would be better
17:50 monstrata: yea you better. ppl gotta realize these 160-180 bpm AR settings aren't gonna work on 138 bpm loool
17:51 monstrata: SIIIIGHHHHH
17:52 monstrata: 00:00:638 - Easy and Normal. you can remove the green line here cuz theyre useless
17:53 monstrata: o rip did you get my msg about the green lines
17:53 monstrata: internet died
17:53 Kocari: no I didn't
17:53 monstrata: 00:00:638 - on Easy a nd Normal
17:53 monstrata: the green line is useless
17:53 monstrata: Also no custom combo colors?
17:53 monstrata: well i guess they work
17:54 Kocari: What colors are they to you?
17:54 monstrata: red green blue yello
17:54 monstrata: defaults
17:54 monstrata: http://puu.sh/kgb4I.png
17:54 Kocari: wtf....
17:54 Kocari: http://puu.sh/kgb71/29b9d25964.png
17:57 monstrata: wtf my internet
17:57 monstrata: anyways just update when ur done
17:57 monstrata: i'll redl and hopefully it'll show up
17:57 Kocari: ok
17:57 Kocari: Ima upload it now
17:57 monstrata: kk
17:57 Kocari: LETS HOPE I MADE RIGHT CHANGES
17:57 Kocari: BEFORE I DIE OF CANCER
17:58 Kocari: ok updated
17:58 monstrata: o i see the colors now
17:58 Kocari: O
17:58 Kocari: yea these are the colors I wanted
17:58 Kocari: LEL
17:58 Kocari: I didn't check custom colors
17:59 monstrata: Normal's HP could be 3.5 instead of 4
17:59 Kocari: WTF
17:59 Kocari: I THOUGHT I DID
17:59 monstrata: cuz Easy is 2
17:59 monstrata: lol
17:59 Kocari: oh hp
17:59 Kocari: KK
18:00 monstrata: Insane:
18:00 monstrata: 00:51:290 (2) - whaaaa
18:00 Kocari: I said no ideas
18:00 Kocari: LOL
18:00 monstrata: remove the repeat and add another slider pls <3
18:00 Kocari: fuck it
18:00 Kocari: it works
18:00 monstrata: okay lemme try
18:00 Kocari: I was gonna make them all line up and be like you
18:01 Kocari: but I was like duh hell is dis
18:02 monstrata: try a triangle pattern instead? ;o
18:03 monstrata: http://puu.sh/kgbGS.jpg
18:03 monstrata: idk
18:03 monstrata: ahhh whatever if you dont wanna change its fine
18:03 monstrata: missed opportunity imo but mehh everything else is good
18:03 Kocari: actually that's not bad
18:03 Kocari: but it may feel outta place
18:03 Kocari: but YOLO
18:03 Kocari: YOLO
18:05 monstrata: Oh
18:05 monstrata: tried something else see if you like this
18:05 monstrata: http://puu.sh/kgbQv.jpg
18:06 monstrata: 1 and 2 are in the same position, just stacked 4 under the slider-end of 1 and put a 1/2 slider where 3 used to be
18:07 Kocari: I actually did that but then realized the spacing difference was too big
18:07 Kocari: but this might work if I move everything over
18:07 monstrata: wait really?
18:07 Kocari: yea
18:07 Kocari: I did that way
18:07 Kocari: and vertically
18:07 monstrata: i dont see a problem with spacing tbh lol
18:07 monstrata: if you stack the 1/6 repeat on the head everything else is like warranted
18:09 monstrata: http://puu.sh/kgc3W.jpg
18:09 Kocari: `Yea? http://puu.sh/kgc49/13e2c58d46.jpg
18:09 monstrata: better image
18:09 monstrata: yaaaa
18:09 monstrata: maybe point the repeat downward or something
18:09 monstrata: i mean it plays the same, but better visual flow 
18:10 Kocari: yea that will work
18:10 Kocari: Ok I did it
18:10 Kocari: time to update
18:10 monstrata: okay niiice
18:10 monstrata: that flow plays really well and also emphasizes the vocals + drums nicely
18:11 Kocari: what is flow
18:11 Kocari: my definition
18:11 Kocari: its the movement of random bullshit that people like to pick on
18:11 Kocari: =))
18:11 monstrata: flow is inertia :D
18:11 Kocari: you right
18:11 monstrata: okay looks good :D

Looks good to me now

Kibbleru wrote:

i suck at qualifying so ill just rebubbleru

Kocari wrote:

@Nanoka - You have to realize that this map took me 2 months to get to this state. I've shown this map to 10 other people prior but none of them actually posted irc mods. I'm sorry it's not on here, but I never intended it to be speed ranked or whatever. It's honestly your decision and your choice to make because I honestly want to map based on my preference. I honestly do not care what you or anyone else might think of how this went. You can ask

All The People Who Contributed :
Gaia
Ritzeh
Midge
guineaQ
Aerous
Vincent
Ipas
etc, and the other map testers. This is literally my 2nd map and I still don't have a single fucking clue what I'm doing. So think what you want, but without backstory there is no truth to that meaning I do apologize for asking you after being to this state so quickly, that is deeply my fault and mine alone. But everything else... Yea OK

Remaps Done - Insane 2
Normal - 1
Easy - 1

Reasons I don't map is because I don't like it in general, unless there is something I want to dedicate my time into

xxdeathx wrote:

Kocari wrote:

@Nanoka - You have to realize that this map took me 2 months to get to this state. I've shown this map to 10 other people prior but none of them actually posted irc mods. I'm sorry it's not on here, but I never intended it to be speed ranked or whatever. It's honestly your decision and your choice to make because I honestly want to map based on my preference. I honestly do not care what you or anyone else might think of how this went. You can ask

All The People Who Contributed :
Gaia
Ritzeh
Midge
guineaQ
Aerous
Vincent
Ipas
etc, and the other map testers. This is literally my 2nd map and I still don't have a single fucking clue what I'm doing. So think what you want, but without backstory there is no truth to that meaning I do apologize for asking you after being to this state so quickly, that is deeply my fault and mine alone. But everything else... Yea OK

Remaps Done - Insane 2
Normal - 1
Easy - 1

Reasons I don't map is because I don't like it in general, unless there is something I want to dedicate my time into

No matter what you claim here, it's still fishy when 9 of the 14 SP is your own stars and it got bubbled after 1 mod.

Kocari wrote:

That's one of the flaws

Kocari wrote:

That's one of the flaws

1. What is the purpose of extra space between Gaia to BJ and BJ to tv in the Tags?
2. Maybe put the Unicode source " 君のいる町 " at the Source then write down the romanised and English name for the source in Tags

1. 00:19:768 (3) - For aesthetics, I don't like how this slider placed . I'd rather to place it horizontally instead vertically like this, so better to use another shape for this slider
2. 00:22:811 (2) - I found this circle isn't very intuitive to follow, because it would be nice to follow if it's flow straightly from (1) to (3)
3. 00:53:681 (2,3) - Could I have a reason for using these two circles? They seems likely to be similar with the others in current sequence, and I can't find any important beat to emphasis like 00:43:681 (3) - . Maybe they will benefit to replace this slider 00:54:551 (4) - since at its head, there's rather loud beat and new vocal started out at its tail
4. 01:01:507 (3) - I think this 1/2 isn't really necessary, because you can simply follow the vocals in there, so it won't be too complicated . It also applied to 01:04:985 (3) -
5. 01:18:898 (3) - The tail of this slider isn't really clear at least for me, because the red node is almost reach the end of its ticks . Moving that red node to 01:19:768 - could be reasonable to emphasis the vocals in other ways, so consider this suggestion
6. 01:24:985 (2,3) - I feel bad about this overlap . Avoid this overlap would be nice, because there are many remain places to put this slider instead by overlapping it . My main concern is this overlap may slightly disturb players visibility while playing, especially this is an Easy
7. 01:25:855 (3) - I can't really think what do you want to follow here, but I guess keep the 1/1 will fits nicely with the song, especially for the drums . Maybe you can start by place 1/2 reverse slider like before here, then 1/1 slider here 01:26:724 - , and keep the last circle remain there
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:11:072 (1,2,3,4) - They're the most nicest way to have something harder because of the song, so why don't you try to use some sort of 1/2 instead?
2. 00:12:811 (5) - Normal sampleset for normal-hitnormal way too loud and doesn't suit well to this beat . Consider to having it same with the GD-ers, whistle on Auto sampleset
3. 00:14:551 - Why you made it non-clickable? This beat really deserve to be clicked since it's carry the rather strong beat on it
4. 00:34:551 (5) - Same as Easy, I don't like how this shape placed in this way
5. 01:03:246 - I can't hear cymbal on it, maybe remove the finish? There are few of similar places with the same case, I guess it's on purpose so I'm not going to mention it one by one
6. 01:17:159 (1,2) - What's wrong with this pattern? It feels a bit forced since you can simply replace it with clear 1/1 on it

1. I don't like some sort of stacks in this diff, yeah because the second object were stacked hold something that will nice to have it has more emphasis among them . Overall, nice diff!

1. 00:02:377 (1) - No this jump way too large for this part of the song, so better to Ctrl+G the slider to reduce its spacing
2. 00:09:116 (4) - Well, would like to see this circle appears beneath the (3) to follow it more intuitive, like this
   
   SPOILER

   
   1. If you are following the suggestion above, you can try to Ctrl+G this slider 00:09:333 (1) - , then place 00:09:985 (2) - to 00:08:464 (3) - 's head to make it blanket with, so it will be more intuitive to follow from the previous flow (Don't forget to match the DS too)
      
      SPOILER

      
3. 00:12:811 (1) - Same as Normal, better to use whistle with auto sampleset on this beat
4. 00:18:681 (3,4) - Don't stack them so that (4) will placed somewhere to get the right emphasis with it (Maybe place (4) around 245|278)
5. 00:40:855 (5,6,7) - Shouldn't the big jump appears on (6) to (7), not on (5) to (6)? The beat on (7)'s head really more stronger than (6)
6. 00:41:942 (8) - Same as previous suggestion above, to remove the stack to give the right emphasis
7. 00:45:311 (4,5,6,7,8) - Why I feel those circles isn't really suit with the song? Probably it just me, but it feels more better to use simple 1/2 which are pronounced more clearly than those 1/4 here
8. 00:49:007 - I tried to map this song as soon as I download this map, and there's a beat that could be emphasis here, so consider to fill this out . To make it more effective to follow, you can turn this slider 00:48:246 (3) - into 1/2 and start out a circle on 00:48:681 - to make a stream into 00:49:333 (1) -
9. 00:50:203 (3) - I feel nothing to this jump, so better to lower the spacing a bit
10. 00:50:637 (5,1) - Don't stack them please . (1) really needs spacing to have it emphasized correctly
11. 00:56:290 (1) - Would be more intuitive to follow if it's Ctrl+G-ed, so consider this suggestion and make changes to objects after this slider to match it with this slider direction
12. 01:06:724 (1,2,3,4) - Why reduce DS? It just a minor complaint so feel free to ignore it
13. 01:09:551 (5,6) - Again, (6) need some movement to have it emphasized, so don't stack them
14. 01:14:985 (3) - A jump to this circle will give the right emphasis for this beat
15. 01:18:246 (2,3) - Maybe wrong emphasis . The large spacing must be appears to (3), not to (2) instead
16. 01:20:203 (8,9,10) - You may want to check this out again since I can't hear anything on (9) and those claps were too loud
17. 01:24:768 (2) - Enlarge the spacing to this circle to support the vocals on it would be nice
18. 01:25:420 (4,5) - Do the simple 1/2 will suits nicely than these 1/4 for me
19. 01:27:159 (5) - Not planning to replace this slider by streams?