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yuikonnu - Souzou Forest

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Len
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Len

Enon wrote:

인세인에서 01:00:343 (1) - 이거 스냅좀 ㅋㅋ
아쒸발ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ ㄹㅇ이네
Beomsan
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Beomsan
정말 오랜만에 다시 들어와보는 스레드... 그새 플맵셋 됐네요
첫 모딩은 역시 극혐인득

랭크되는거 꼭 보고싶네요 ~_~
Len
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Len
ㅋㅋ 귀찮음
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
Imagination:
01:57:760 (2) - Maybe map the stream like this, to follow the song a bit better


02:59:510 - Add a not here to make this part a triple similar to how you have in this section (see 02:55:427, 02:56:760, 03:00:760, etc.)


Insane Collab:
01:32:927 (2) - Maybe remove this note, since you're following vocals (and ending off on a long vocal slider 01:32:093 (1)) have the next note after the slider at 01:33:093 where the current repeat slider is
01:59:593 (7) - Instead of this slider in the stream, maybe its better to follow the stream in the song, such as this rhythm
Len
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Len

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Imagination:
01:57:760 (2) - Maybe map the stream like this, to follow the song a bit better ok fixed!


02:59:510 - Add a not here to make this part a triple similar to how you have in this section (see 02:55:427, 02:56:760, 03:00:760, etc.) now, no idea ; 3; 02:54:177 - same.. so, keep it for now
thanks!!!!!!!
Doyak
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Doyak
저 이 맵셋 오랫동안 잊고 있었는데 그동안 노말 콜랍 제 파트 단 한 번도 모딩 온 적 없었나요 ㄷㄷ
Len
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Len

Doyak wrote:

저 이 맵셋 오랫동안 잊고 있었는데 그동안 노말 콜랍 제 파트 단 한 번도 모딩 온 적 없었나요 ㄷㄷ

모딩을 구하러 다닌적이 없어서 모르겠습니다 (?
DeletedUser_1574070
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인세인만한다
보컬끼어있는데는 가급적이면 3타 안넣는게 여러모로 좋음
솔직히 느낌차인데 02:11:593 (3,4,5) - 랑 03:16:927 (3,4) - 의 차이는 딱 들어도 알듯.

00:30:843 - 3타 너무많아서 뻔함
00:31:343 - 궂이 없어도될듯
00:38:260 (3) - 여기만 보컬안따라간건 왜인지 궁금
00:43:093 - http://puu.sh/jSSdU/818a2f19f1.jpg
00:46:593 (1,2,3) - 걍 슬라이더 1개로
00:48:677 - 여기말고
http://puu.sh/jSShw/0d25d71a3f.jpg
다른데 소리 있는데 오히려 저기다 노트붙이니까 읽기힘듬
01:21:843 (2) - 빼셈
01:56:510 - ^
02:12:677 - ^
02:31:927 (2,1) - 이거 두개 음 전개 방식이 같으니까 앞에 서클 킥슬라이더로 바꿔도될듯 안바꿀거면 02:32:093 (1) - 를 좀더 02:31:927 (2) - 쪽으로 붙이셈
03:15:927 (3,4) - 컨쥐
Len
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Len
1갠가 2개빼고 다수정함 ㄳㄳ
Sky Future
Sky Future
빢쓰모띵

Insane Collab
00:22:927 (1,2,3) - 삼각형 배치로 x248 y228 요게 더 어울릴듯
00:28:927 (3,4) - 플레이 하는쪽으로 봐선 노트가 서로 가까운거같아 3슬라를 위로 조금 올려주세요
00:50:593 (3) - 2슬라 말고 4슬라랑 가까이 해놓는건 어때요
01:15:927 (4) - 4슬라를 2슬라 끝에 겹쳐놓는건 어떠심
01:46:260 (4) - x7 y260 여기다 배치하는게 깨끗함
03:37:260 (5) - x285 y325 이렇게 두는게 자연스럽네요

다른 난이도는 너무 잘만드신거같아
감히 제가 건들 수 없을것 같네요
없는거 지어낸거같은 내용이였습니다
Len
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Topic Starter
Len
all fixed instead of collab mappers. thanks alot
Karen
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Karen
senpai notice me!

General

  1. fine.

Easy

  1. 00:43:593 (3,1) - the spacing of rhythm is weird in an Easy diff, i mean you'd better extend 00:43:593 (3) - this slider to a repeat slider to replace 00:44:593 (1) - this note, it will reduce the difficulty of reading. And also, adding finish on a slider tail is weird as well.
    SPOILER
  2. 01:26:760 - i suggest to end 01:25:927 (3) - the slider here to follow the sound in bgm
  3. 02:08:093 (1,1) - too close as an Easy diff
  4. 03:13:427 (1,1) - ^ this is totally unacceptable.

Normal

  1. the gap of ar between Normal and Hard is too huge, i suggest to use ar 5 on Normal and ar 7 or 7.5 on Hard.
  2. delete all unused green lines
  3. 00:01:594 - increase the volumn on the red line to at least 60% o.o
  4. 00:42:927 (4,5) - try this flow, this is much better imo
    SPOILER
  5. 01:27:593 - missing finish
  6. 01:25:593 - ^
  7. 02:19:260 (2) - ctrl+j this for better flow and try this on the objects after it
    SPOILER
  8. 02:26:593 (4,5,6) - try this rhythm, it will match the vocal better
    SPOILER
  9. 02:30:093 (2,3) - try this rhythm to follow the vocal better
    SPOILER
  10. 02:31:760 (5,6) - try this rhythm:
    SPOILER
  11. 03:15:927 - feel quite empty here, please add a note
  12. 03:16:260 (1,2) - avoid such kind of stack, its confusing
  13. 03:31:593 (4,1,2) - bad flow, try this
    SPOILER
  14. This diff needs a lot of work on hitsounding, you use clap sound too much and randomly, it's unfit in lower difficulties because lower difficulties have much fewer objects than higher difficulties, if you add clap on every white line, it would be too noisy, adding 24 clap and 13 whistle is enough, like the Hard in this mapset

Hard

  1. the gap of ar between Normal and Hard is too huge, i suggest to use ar 5 on Normal and ar 7 or 7.5 on Hard.
  2. 00:59:927 (4,1) - do this overlap like you did at 00:57:260 (6,1) -
  3. 01:02:427 (6) - ctrl+j for better flow with 01:02:760 (1) -
  4. 01:23:260 (4) - what are these 3 red points on the slider, please remove them
  5. 01:56:093 (4,1) - it's not acceptable to stack sliders in Hard diffs, please avoid it
  6. 02:13:260 - add a note here, this blank is really weird and not consistent with 01:07:760 (1,2,3) - 03:18:427 (1,2,3) -
  7. 02:31:927 (7) - the reverse arrow is nearly hidden, please make it clear for safety
  8. 03:11:427 (2,3,4) - i think it's better to stack them perfectly instead of overlapping here.
  9. 03:14:760 - end the spinner here to follow this sound like other diffs

Insane

  1. 03:03:593 (3) - why a reverse slider here, it follows nothing, i suggest to just add a circle 03:03:593 - here to make a anti-jump with 03:03:927 (4) -
  2. 03:03:927 (4) - remove the clap on the slider's tail
  3. 03:09:260 (5,1) - this anti-jump doesnt fit at all imo, because there is a vocal 03:09:427 - here, and 03:08:927 (3,5) - this should be an anti-jump, the proper rhythm is like this
    start at 03:08:927 -
  4. 02:58:260 (3,4,5) - ^
  5. 03:02:260 (3,4,5) - ^

Imagination

  1. no need to use ar 9.3 in my opinion, ar 9 is enough, 9.2 also fine, 9.3 too fast o.o
  2. 00:25:593 (1,2) - the rhythm you used here isnt fit, try use this instead to emphasis 00:25:593 - this sound
    start at 00:25:593 -
  3. 00:38:927 (1,2) - this spacing is too big here because 00:39:093 (2) - this note doesnt emphasis anything, the jump is unreasonable, please reduce the spacing here
  4. 01:40:093 (1,2) - it would be nicer if you do something like this lol
    SPOILER
  5. 01:58:260 (2,1) - too huge spacing, it's like a 1/2 spacing, i suggest to use a circle to replace 01:58:260 (2) - this 1/4 slider like you did at 00:52:427 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2) -
  6. 02:21:927 (4,5) - try this for a better flow
    SPOILER
  7. 02:45:093 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - there is no enough 1/4 sound for you to use such a crazy stream and the spacing change of this stream is also hard to play, try this rhythm
    start at 02:45:093 -
  8. 02:49:593 (1,2) - i cant understand why you suddenly reduce the spacing here, try use the same spacing with 02:49:260 (1,2,3,4) - , it'll fit the music better.
  9. we have already discussed the rest stuff via IRC so not much to say here o.o
time to sleep, i'll continue the mod tmr
call be back after hitsounds on Normal Collab gets improved.
yuikonnu <3
Len
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Topic Starter
Len
i will re-place hitsounds in normal cuz i used hitsound copier lmao
other things will fix when i free thanks!
Akiyama Mizuki
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Joined March 2009
Akiyama Mizuki

Karen wrote:

Hard

  1. the gap of ar between Normal and Hard is too huge, i suggest to use ar 5 on Normal and ar 7 or 7.5 on Hard. - I'd go for 7.7, 7 ~ 7.5 seems way too low.
  2. 00:59:927 (4,1) - do this overlap like you did at 00:57:260 (6,1) - done
  3. 01:02:427 (6) - ctrl+j for better flow with 01:02:760 (1) - Done
  4. 01:23:260 (4) - what are these 3 red points on the slider, please remove them - Done
  5. 01:56:093 (4,1) - it's not acceptable to stack sliders in Hard diffs, please avoid it - umm okay
  6. 02:13:260 - add a note here, this blank is really weird and not consistent with 01:07:760 (1,2,3) - 03:18:427 (1,2,3) - done
  7. 02:31:927 (7) - the reverse arrow is nearly hidden, please make it clear for safety - I thought I'd better just add note xdd weeell, yeah fixed
  8. 03:11:427 (2,3,4) - i think it's better to stack them perfectly instead of overlapping here. - Done
  9. 03:14:760 - end the spinner here to follow this sound like other diffs - Done.
remapped last kiai
http://puu.sh/jZxQX/c9611a167e.osu
Tenseki
803 posts
Joined November 2013
Tenseki
nooooooooooooooooooo
gorank
Len
2,812 posts
Joined June 2012
Topic Starter
Len
all fixed except normal things. i will fix all normal things asap if i can !!!!zzzzzzzz
[ Zzz ]
1,296 posts
Joined June 2011
[ Zzz ]

Karen wrote:

senpai notice me!
[notice]

General

  1. fine.

Easy

  1. 00:43:593 (3,1) - the spacing of rhythm is weird in an Easy diff, i mean you'd better extend 00:43:593 (3) - this slider to a repeat slider to replace 00:44:593 (1) - this note, it will reduce the difficulty of reading. And also, adding finish on a slider tail is weird as well.
    SPOILER
  2. 01:26:760 - i suggest to end 01:25:927 (3) - the slider here to follow the sound in bgm ( I think no problem. :3 )
  3. 02:08:093 (1,1) - too close as an Easy diff
  4. 03:13:427 (1,1) - ^ this is totally unacceptable.
All Done~ Thanks~ karen !

Done
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Enon
Beatmap Nominator
2,690 posts
Joined November 2012
Enon

Karen wrote:

senpai notice me!

Normal

  1. the gap of ar between Normal and Hard is too huge, i suggest to use ar 5 on Normal and ar 7 or 7.5 on Hard.
  2. delete all unused green lines
  3. 00:01:594 - increase the volumn on the red line to at least 60% o.o
  4. 00:42:927 (4,5) - try this flow, this is much better imo
    SPOILER
  5. 01:27:593 - missing finish
  6. 01:25:593 - ^

    ✔ All fixed! Thanks :D
Doyak
osu! Alumni
2,621 posts
Joined November 2012
Doyak

Karen wrote:

Normal

  1. 02:19:260 (2) - ctrl+j this for better flow and try this on the objects after it Fixed.
    SPOILER
  2. 02:26:593 (4,5,6) - try this rhythm, it will match the vocal better I think now is better and for the vocals no need to click 02:27:260 -
    SPOILER
  3. 02:30:093 (2,3) - try this rhythm to follow the vocal better Similar to above, well...
    SPOILER
  4. 02:31:760 (5,6) - try this rhythm: Fixed.
    SPOILER
  5. 03:15:927 - feel quite empty here, please add a note Fixed.
  6. 03:16:260 (1,2) - avoid such kind of stack, its confusing Fixed.
  7. 03:31:593 (4,1,2) - bad flow, try this Fixed.
    SPOILER
Thanks for mod!

드디어 수정함!
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TitleUnicode:想像フォレスト
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ArtistUnicode:ゆいこんぬ
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378,202,175260,1,8,0:0:0:0:
362,103,175593,2,0,P|384:84|404:72,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,120,176093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,92,176260,6,0,P|224:72|172:88,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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108,256,177593,2,0,P|84:248|56:244,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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262,280,179927,2,0,L|198:280,2,50,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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436,192,180927,2,0,P|456:200|484:196,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,132,181593,6,0,P|300:124|264:144,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,184,182093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,232,182260,2,0,P|196:284|156:284,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,260,182927,2,0,P|40:244|12:240,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,192,183593,2,0,L|96:96,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,72,184260,6,0,L|248:40,2,50,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,136,184927,2,0,P|324:172|368:168,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,144,185427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,176,185593,2,0,L|424:276,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,304,186260,2,0,P|276:312|240:348,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,332,186760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,300,186927,6,0,L|56:288,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,212,187593,2,0,L|223:223,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,204,188093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,180,188260,2,0,P|352:184|368:192,2,50,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,84,188927,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,120,189260,2,0,L|140:116,1,50,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,128,189593,6,0,P|60:176|64:220,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,200,190260,2,0,P|209:199|248:229,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,296,190927,2,0,P|120:300|72:312,2,100,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,320,191760,2,0,L|272:328,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,304,192093,2,0,L|364:312,1,50,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,280,192593,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,192,192927,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,100,193260,2,0,P|444:84|416:72,1,50,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,193593,12,8,194760,0:0:0:0:
423,288,195927,5,8,0:0:0:0:
436,189,196260,6,0,L|400:89,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,128,196927,2,0,P|316:188|304:240,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,264,197427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,236,197593,2,0,L|216:184,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,88,198093,2,0,P|128:136|120:208,1,150,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,240,198760,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,288,198927,6,0,P|112:324|60:336,2,100,4|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,292,199927,2,0,B|304:296|320:328|356:312,2,100,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,204,200927,2,0,P|232:160|272:128,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,116,201427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,128,201593,6,0,B|416:196|352:216|372:256|380:344,1,200,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,312,202593,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,296,202760,2,0,B|180:276|128:296|128:296|96:244,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,176,203593,1,2,0:0:0:0:
84,112,203927,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,80,204260,6,0,P|216:52|272:52,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,148,204927,2,0,P|301:148|340:118,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,192,205593,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,272,205927,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,243,206260,2,0,P|206:262|177:302,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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160,232,208260,2,0,L|201:204,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,212,208760,2,0,P|280:136|212:108,1,150,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,112,209427,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,136,209593,6,0,P|76:168|56:216,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,232,210260,2,0,P|203:255|228:298,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,296,210927,2,0,L|424:248,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,152,211593,2,0,L|322:196,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,117,212260,6,0,L|255:67,1,50,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,164,212927,2,0,P|152:220|200:248,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,220,213427,2,0,B|328:208|328:208|316:280,1,150,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,316,214260,2,0,P|184:332|128:324,1,100,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,264,214927,6,0,L|44:160,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,128,215593,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,160,215760,2,0,P|248:184|320:144,1,150,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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428,304,217260,2,0,L|420:368,1,50,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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아니.....

Zzz's Easy
  1. 00:23:260 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 이건 룰이아닌 가이드라인부분에가까운부분인데, 너무 poor한 히트사운딩도 언랭사유가될수있어서 가능하면 잠재적인부분들 싹 잡아다 가고싶은데 00:33:593 - 여기 이후로 클랩넣듯이 00:23:260 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 요 노트들에도 넣어주시는게 좋을듯
  2. 01:02:760 (1,1) - BPM자체가 빠르기때문에 이지같은경우에는 노말과는 살짝다르게 1박을 풀로 밀어주셔야안전합니다. 이점고려해서 노트를 중앙에 둔건 잘한건맞는데 문제가될수도있기때문에 고쳐줍시다. 02:08:093 (1,1) - 이런식으로해도좋을듯
  3. 02:38:593 (1) - 뉴콤
  4. 04:10:927 - 스피너끝 20%하지말고 5% 줄여주는게 좋을듯
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  1. 03:13:593 (1,1) - 여기오는 03:15:927 (1) - 사이가 완전히 풀박도아니고 이거 서클을 좀 센터에 배치를해두는게 좋을꺼같네요. 꼭 그렇다는건아닌데 비슷한 유형의 언랭사유를봐서 그뭐지 이지난이도나 노말난이도에서 스피너이후 나오는노트에대해서 스피너처리이후 다음노트를 캐치하기쉽게 플레이필드 중앙에 노트를 배치하면 좀더 초보자들이 플레이하기좋지않을까... 하는
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  1. 00:54:427 (4,1) - 01:59:760 (3,1) - 첫번째꺼는 좀 괜찮다치더라도 두번째 01:59:760 (3,1) - 이건 하드난이도에서는 매우 부적합해보이는 패턴이네요. Guy도 http://puu.sh/kosgh/6c572b83f6.jpg 라고했고 저역시 같은 의견입니다. http://puu.sh/koshr/cb883838e0.jpg 이런식으로 둬서 좀더 리딩이되게끔하고 이게 확실히 1/4다 라는 암시도주고, 괜히 리핏슬라하고 다음오는슬라 겹쳐서 애매모호하게만드는것보단 훨 좋아보이네요. 가능하면 모양맞추려 새로운 패턴을 시도하려 어렵게만들려 라는 것보다는 하드라면 하드난이도답게 적절하게 만들어주는게 좋다고생각합니다. 그리고 혹시모를일에대비해 안전하잖?
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카렌이 모딩다고치고나면 아마 리법줄꺼에요, 리법받고 불러주세요.
아니면 다고쳤으니까 버블달라고하면될듯
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