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This is your first map, right??
I give you some suggestion for mapping.
1. You can use jumps, but jumps must be suitable for playing. (Also, you can FC your map, what I say is shit)
2. Notice 1/3, 1/6, 1/8 and 1/12 space jump you used
But your set is cool for me, I love this one 03:09:164 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) -
and you can choose you like for my mod, maybe next time I can get back to fix your sounds or NCs
God luck
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- I think no need to use AR9.3, AR9.0 is very suitable for this song
This is my suggestion: I love to make space like your diff's 00:01:175 - to 00:20:414 - . so my suggestion is this period all use circles to follow piano. I love to see reducing HP (coz I'm evil). And every circle you can use many jumps (But you fix this, you should open HR and AUTO to tset map, make sure HP don't get zero)
00:20:495 (1,2,3) - This too over to play (don't make 1/12 jumps, no one can play), this is better one: http://puu.sh/inojq/573c48e14d.jpg
00:21:636 - add circle here to get crazy
00:51:718 (3,4) - too close, make like this: http://puu.sh/inoxn/d7673d47dd.jpg
01:04:598 - add circle, same 01:05:903 -
01:08:348 (3) - move to 01:08:185 - , and 01:08:674 - add circle
01:18:457 (3) - change 2 circles more better than slider, if you want
01:19:435 (1,2,3) - too hard to play. Get close more nature
01:21:392 - add circle
01:23:674 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this is I heard: http://puu.sh/inpdM/f5894a4998.jpg
01:25:794 (3,1) - too close, make 2.0x more good for me
01:50:414 (8,9) - move to 268|344 and 01:50:577 (9) - move to 308|204. To make a good look
01:56:446 (4,1) - too close
02:04:272 (2,3,4,5,6) - Don't use this stream here, coz first I think you follow piano, but it is no follow anything
02:07:370 (9,10) - these are too far, 02:07:533 (10) - move to 408|96 more better
02:07:859 (1) - spinner end 02:09:490 - more better
02:18:566 (3,1) - too far, get close please
02:25:305 (4,1) - ^, and I think this is too over , same 02:27:180 (5,6) -
02:52:696 (2,3) - I know this part you follow vocal, but make 3 circles you can follow vocal and drum.
03:09:571 (8,1) - Don't use this jump space, it's not funny, too over. Same 03:30:767 (4,1) - 03:39:571 (3,4) - 03:47:968 (4,1) - 03:49:272 (2,1) - 03:50:577 (4,1) - 03:59:707 (4,1) - 04:35:740 (5,6) - 05:14:055 (4,1) - 05:16:664 (4,1) -
03:10:386 - you can add a spinner end 03:11:609 - . If you like
03:35:577 (4) - this have high chance to be DQ, it's a freaking slider, very hard to read and play
03:36:229 (2) - -1 reverse
03:37:370 (5,1) - too far
03:54:816 (4) - no need this circle, it's not follow anything
04:02:153 (2,1) - use 1/2 slider + a circle + 1/2 slider more better
04:03:783 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make like this: http://puu.sh/inrr4/09c46539bc.jpg. let space more far
04:11:283 (3,4,1,2,3) - make a nice star?? Ctrl+Shift+D
04:33:376 - and 04:33:539 - add circles, follow piano??
05:04:109 (1) - change 2 circles on 1/3 line
05:19:924 - to end - same suggestion as 00:01:175 - to 00:20:414
This is your first map, right??
I give you some suggestion for mapping.
1. You can use jumps, but jumps must be suitable for playing. (Also, you can FC your map, what I say is shit)
2. Notice 1/3, 1/6, 1/8 and 1/12 space jump you used
But your set is cool for me, I love this one 03:09:164 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) -
and you can choose you like for my mod, maybe next time I can get back to fix your sounds or NCs
God luck