1. Sequence Break (5.57 stars, 1342 notes)

WildOne94 wrote:

Hey.

Just so you know it's not very wise to take everything me and dorothy used like Combo colours and our background since we are going for ranked.
You should find you own before asking for mods as it can lead to thieved work if we didn't allow you to use it.
If dorothy3242 did offer it you then i will have a word with her but it's kind of a problem at the minute and is a bit annoying :/.

Please change. But please by all mean you can map the song if you want i won't stop you there

DreaM117er wrote:

From #modreqs

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1. I think no need to use AR9.3, AR9.0 is very suitable for this song
   This is my suggestion: I love to make space like your diff's 00:01:175 - to 00:20:414 - . so my suggestion is this period all use circles to follow piano. I love to see reducing HP (coz I'm evil). And every circle you can use many jumps (But you fix this, you should open HR and AUTO to tset map, make sure HP don't get zero)
   00:20:495 (1,2,3) - This too over to play (don't make 1/12 jumps, no one can play), this is better one: http://puu.sh/inojq/573c48e14d.jpg
   00:21:636 - add circle here to get crazy
   00:51:718 (3,4) - too close, make like this: http://puu.sh/inoxn/d7673d47dd.jpg
   01:04:598 - add circle, same 01:05:903 -
   01:08:348 (3) - move to 01:08:185 - , and 01:08:674 - add circle
   01:18:457 (3) - change 2 circles more better than slider, if you want
   01:19:435 (1,2,3) - too hard to play. Get close more nature
   01:21:392 - add circle
   01:23:674 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this is I heard: http://puu.sh/inpdM/f5894a4998.jpg
   01:25:794 (3,1) - too close, make 2.0x more good for me
   01:50:414 (8,9) - move to 268|344 and 01:50:577 (9) - move to 308|204. To make a good look
   01:56:446 (4,1) - too close
   02:04:272 (2,3,4,5,6) - Don't use this stream here, coz first I think you follow piano, but it is no follow anything
   02:07:370 (9,10) - these are too far, 02:07:533 (10) - move to 408|96 more better
   02:07:859 (1) - spinner end 02:09:490 - more better
   02:18:566 (3,1) - too far, get close please
   02:25:305 (4,1) - ^, and I think this is too over , same 02:27:180 (5,6) -
   02:52:696 (2,3) - I know this part you follow vocal, but make 3 circles you can follow vocal and drum.
   03:09:571 (8,1) - Don't use this jump space, it's not funny, too over. Same 03:30:767 (4,1) - 03:39:571 (3,4) - 03:47:968 (4,1) - 03:49:272 (2,1) - 03:50:577 (4,1) - 03:59:707 (4,1) - 04:35:740 (5,6) - 05:14:055 (4,1) - 05:16:664 (4,1) -
   03:10:386 - you can add a spinner end 03:11:609 - . If you like
   03:35:577 (4) - this have high chance to be DQ, it's a freaking slider, very hard to read and play
   03:36:229 (2) - -1 reverse
   03:37:370 (5,1) - too far
   03:54:816 (4) - no need this circle, it's not follow anything
   04:02:153 (2,1) - use 1/2 slider + a circle + 1/2 slider more better
   04:03:783 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - make like this: http://puu.sh/inrr4/09c46539bc.jpg. let space more far
   04:11:283 (3,4,1,2,3) - make a nice star?? Ctrl+Shift+D
   04:33:376 - and 04:33:539 - add circles, follow piano??
   05:04:109 (1) - change 2 circles on 1/3 line
   05:19:924 - to end - same suggestion as 00:01:175 - to 00:20:414

This is your first map, right??
I give you some suggestion for mapping.
1. You can use jumps, but jumps must be suitable for playing. (Also, you can FC your map, what I say is shit)
2. Notice 1/3, 1/6, 1/8 and 1/12 space jump you used

But your set is cool for me, I love this one 03:09:164 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1) -
and you can choose you like for my mod, maybe next time I can get back to fix your sounds or NCs

God luck

Anxient wrote:

ayy lmao

22:56 Side: ok who wants to look at the first 2 minutes of my map and tell me if theres anything wrong there?
22:56 Anxient: welp. im dead. night guys
22:56 Arcubin: you always do something intentionally dude
22:56 Arcubin: kek
22:56 Gray Veyron: no, pieces
22:56 -Kanzaki: piece
22:56 Side: yes? awesome
22:56 *Side is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/712278 Camellia - controlled dive [Sequence Break]]
22:56 Anxient: cya. see ya in another life. and veyron just delete the pm i sent you
22:57 Anxient: i dont like the whistles side ;w;
22:57 Gray Veyron: delete PM?! wat?
22:57 Side: yeah I suck at hitsounding
22:57 Side: I give you 1 whole kds if you hitsound it :3
22:57 Anxient: 00:38:674 (5,1) - thats some unconfortable jumping
22:57 Gray Veyron: I read it, but i don't reply unless it's major
22:57 Anxient: yeah its something about bubbling
22:57 Arcubin: at least they following something particular
22:57 Anxient: but disregard it
22:58 Anxient: but could be better arcu
22:58 Gray Veyron: it's funny people never reads userpages ;p
22:58 Gray Veyron: read*
22:58 Anxient: dude
22:58 Anxient: i actually read it
22:58 Anxient: uwot
22:58 Arcubin: i just try to be easy
22:58 Arcubin: to insane people
22:58 Arcubin: like you
22:58 Anxient: 00:41:283 (3,1) - ctrl g individually
22:58 Gray Veyron: okay
22:58 Anxient: flows tons better
22:59 Anxient: 00:42:588 (1,2,3,4,1) - collide with hp bar maybe?
22:59 Anxient: also i dont think you need a jump THIS big
22:59 Arcubin: noh not my style :'(
23:00 Anxient: side you there?
23:00 Side: yeah I'm listening
23:00 Anxient: 01:31:664 (2,4) - overlappu
23:00 Anxient: dun pl0x
23:01 Anxient: 01:32:805 (7,8) - missread as a stream much?
23:01 Side: ok fixed that but the overlap is intentional
23:01 Anxient: 01:40:305 (1,2) - ctrl+g individually
23:01 Side: shouldve looked like this
23:01 Side: http://puu.sh/iw79b/611eeaf9c9.jpg
23:01 Anxient: looks ugly tho
23:01 *Arcubin is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/662964 Draper - Pressure [Hard]]
23:01 Arcubin: who ask for timing for this song earlier?
23:01 Anxient: looks ugly ;w;
23:02 Side: yeah I dont like ctrl g there :/
23:02 Anxient: for the ctrl+g mod its so it flows better :L
23:02 Anxient: but meh okay den xD
23:03 Anxient: 01:51:718 (1,2) - ctrl+G individually. jumps shorter. also idk why you need a jump like this when sliderbeaks its like 300% gonna happen
23:03 Anxient: 02:04:924 (8,1) - you couldve blanket'd this!
23:04 Side: I tried ;_;
23:04 Anxient: 02:07:859 (1) - 02:07:778 - start here
23:04 Anxient: ;w;
23:04 Arcubin: sorry i dc'ed
23:04 Anxient: done checking
23:04 Side: messes with the spacing pattern I have there
23:04 Anxient: is this a mod now xD
23:04 Side: I can savelog it if you want
23:05 Anxient: go do that
23:05 Side: dont bother with the rest cuz I still haven't cleaned it up yet
23:05 Anxient: should i like forum post r smth

RikiH_ wrote:

Here is my m4m, sorry for the delay, I was very busy >_>

Your map is incredibly good, so I will just give some suggestions

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01:07:370 (4,2) - Weird overlap Fixed. Stacked under 01:09:001 (1).
01:24:653 - Add a note here? A 4-notes stream is a bit weird, and a note here also sounds well. Lol ok everyone suggested a note here so I'll add it.
01:41:609 (1,2,3) - I don't like this overlap, especially in play mode Changed the combo altogether. I think it looks nicer now :3
01:43:973 - A note here should be added in my opinion, since this gap sounds really empty without it Actually I relistened to this and the triplet didn't feel right here so I ended up removing a note on 01:44:136 - so now its just 1/2 notes. Also moved them around a bit.
01:44:218 (1,2,3) - I don't like the way these are spaced, 3 should be further, I guess True. I moved them all around to have a more consistent spacing.
02:36:066 (4) - Is the clap in the end of tis slider intentional? Yup. Did the same for 02:34:761 (4). I think it sounds nice since this is like a trippy version of verse 1 if that makes sense, so the hitsounding is a little less conventionally structured if that also makes sense .
02:58:240 (7,8,1) - These are not spaced well in my opinion, they should have the same distance Fixed. Also added nicer symmetry to the other notes :3
03:55:957 (1,2) - It would be nice if the SV was slower here I can see why however the way I see this section is just a quieter buildup to the upcoming chorus. It's not so much a slowdown section. Also thats why I had the little kiais to indicate things are about to get less comfy.
03:59:707 (4,1) - I don't like this overlap. I want the small slider to kind of point to the slider head of the next slider to give it like a visual drop-off effect so thats why the slider is pointing down into the slider. I did make it look a bit cleaner though.
04:41:446 (4,1) - ^ Fixed
05:00:685 (1,3) - ^ Fixed
05:06:392 (1) - This is ust ugly, but maybe it's just me Changed slider

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Couldn't find much, take a star for apologizing, and also because the map is good

1. 00:20:658 (2) - Just a suggestion but I'd rather Ctrl+g this slider and then place 00:20:767 (3) - in the good dirrection for the sake of readbility. If you do that you will also clearly see that (2) isn't symmetric with (1).
2. 00:42:588 (5,6,7,8) - Lower it; it touches the HP bar.
3. 01:02:153 (3) - I'd remove clap at the tail. Then add claps here 01:02:479 (1,3,5) - As it is right now, there's nothing in the music that gives feedback for that clap and it sounds lounder than the full beat of the new pattern which doesn't make that much sense to me.
4. 01:17:805 (3,1,3) - Same remark than previously for the hitsounds.
5. 01:18:783 - There's definetly a missing note here that you didn't miss here 01:03:131 (5) -
6. 01:21:718 (7) - no clap again. Iit covers the next Finish way too much.
7. 01:24:653 (5) - Sad you didn't map the next part.
8. 01:56:609 - I'd add a note here. It's pretty confusing the way you did it.
9. 02:09:490 - make the break starts here?
10. 02:46:827 (1) - A bit undermap huh
11. 02:48:946 (5) - ^
12. 03:05:740 (1) - Add whistle
13. 03:10:305 (1) - Well it doesn't touch the hp bar. But if you lower it it'd play better. This corner usually gives trouble to players. And add Drum as Additions
14. 03:35:414 (3) - Add NC for readability
15. 03:52:044 - Add note with finish + drum additions
16. 03:51:718 (1,2) - You're missing the beats at the next blue ticks
17. 03:55:957 (1) - The rythme is really not natural higher than 1/1, start on full beat beat but finish on half beat. And the way you're ignoring the music is a bit awkard
18. 04:02:153 (2) - Better reduce it for a 1/2 and add a note 04:02:397 - here stacked or almost stacked ~ with 04:02:479 (1) - So you won't undermap, and it won't cause that much readbility problem.
19. 04:35:740 (5) - NC cause new rythme
20. 04:45:522 (3,5) - NCs to improve readability?
21. 04:57:261 (3) - NC? It goes to a new pattern
22. 04:58:892 - Add note
23. 05:03:783 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - A bit hard lol; but it's fun, I like it
24. 05:15:359 (2,4) - NCs to prevent 1/8?
25. 05:16:664 (4) - ^

Yales wrote:

Hello,
M4M from my queue

[General]
Hitsounds are pretty loud I think 70% (?) sounds ok. And I find pretty sad you only used soft sampleset whenever there's lots of drum nuances in the music... And it would be cool if you bring your own hitsounds too; especially for a music like this.

I'm pretty new to hitsounding so I just used soft lol. I'll try and learn better ways to do it and look for good custom samples to use and change them then. Lowered volume and adjusted in some areas.

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1. 00:20:658 (2) - Just a suggestion but I'd rather Ctrl+g this slider and then place 00:20:767 (3) - in the good dirrection for the sake of readbility. If you do that you will also clearly see that (2) isn't symmetric with (1). I see what u mean. Changed.
2. 00:42:588 (5,6,7,8) - Lower it; it touches the HP bar. Fixed.
3. 01:02:153 (3) - I'd remove clap at the tail. Then add claps here 01:02:479 (1,3,5) - As it is right now, there's nothing in the music that gives feedback for that clap and it sounds lounder than the full beat of the new pattern which doesn't make that much sense to me. Sounds much better thanks!
4. 01:17:805 (3,1,3) - Same remark than previously for the hitsounds. Fixed
5. 01:18:783 - There's definetly a missing note here that you didn't miss here 01:03:131 (5) - Hmm...It's not really the same section as the example you are comparing. I decided to follow the drum so I had a non-jump on 01:18:946 (1) - after the slider. I moved the note closer to 01:18:457 (3) - for better readability.
6. 01:21:718 (7) - no clap again. Iit covers the next Finish way too much. Removed
7. 01:24:653 (5) - Sad you didn't map the next part. Prefer small break. I don't see adding a small stream here working well but I'm open to suggestions
8. 01:56:609 - I'd add a note here. It's pretty confusing the way you did it. I can see that. Fixed and adjusted notes a bit.
9. 02:09:490 - make the break starts here? Dragged break start here.
10. 02:46:827 (1) - A bit undermap huh This whole section is purposely mapped like this since this is like a wubby slowdown section (at least thats how I hear it) and mostly following the vocals for that reason
11. 02:48:946 (5) - ^ Don't worry it picks up again after this
12. 03:05:740 (1) - Add whistle Added
13. 03:10:305 (1) - Well it doesn't touch the hp bar. But if you lower it it'd play better. This corner usually gives trouble to players. And add Drum as Additions Lowered slightly. Added drum.
14. 03:35:414 (3) - Add NC for readability Added
15. 03:52:044 - Add note with finish + drum additions Well I left this silent intentionally because I did it on a lot of previous sections however I'll add the note because people have been suggesting to add notes in those silent sections and I don't mind.
16. 03:51:718 (1,2) - You're missing the beats at the next blue ticks So I wasn't too sure what I wanted to do there so I might just change it to a short stream for now.
17. 03:55:957 (1) - The rythme is really not natural higher than 1/1, start on full beat beat but finish on half beat. And the way you're ignoring the music is a bit awkard I've done this throughout the song. In slower sections or buildups I will follow the vocals and use longer sliders. I don't feel very comfortable mapping to the instruments when the vocals are just as strong and I want to accentuate them in these sections.
18. 04:02:153 (2) - Better reduce it for a 1/2 and add a note 04:02:397 - here stacked or almost stacked ~ with 04:02:479 (1) - So you won't undermap, and it won't cause that much readbility problem. I wanted the 3/4 slider here because there are two strong drums on 04:02:397 - and 04:02:479 - Also I'm still following the vocals. As for readability, I agree and I've slightly rotated the combo and moved 04:02:479 (1) - to the slider end of 04:01:827 (1) - I'll consider changing it to a 1/2 slider if this is suggested again though
19. 04:35:740 (5) - NC cause new rythme Added
20. 04:45:522 (3,5) - NCs to improve readability? Good point
21. 04:57:261 (3) - NC? It goes to a new pattern Okay
22. 04:58:892 - Add note Added.
23. 05:03:783 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - A bit hard lol; but it's fun, I like it Yay!
    
24. 05:15:359 (2,4) - NCs to prevent 1/8? Sure
25. 05:16:664 (4) - ^ Yup

There's some really cool ideas of patterns and rythme!
Good luck!

Fort wrote:

Hello M4M

[General]

1. remove all commas from your tags (for what commas?) I thought it was to separate words lol
2. is title name is originally text like that? Yep thats the original song title
3. 初音ミク is this title name?? That's miku in japanese letters for the japan people to search
4. i think stack leniency 5 better I don't mind this.
5. okay everything looks fine

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  Much overmapping ~

1. 00:20:740 - this should be mapped i think Yeah I can see why. I'll try it this way.
2. 00:57:914 (3) - hie slider like this looks didnt good idea i guess Moved a bit
3. 01:00:359 (3) - this hit HP bar a bit, move to down i think Moved down a little
4. 01:04:109 - to 01:11:609 -i dont have idea why you change rhythm pattern on here, im suggesting you to keep following instrumental pattern there for better gameplay since on this part it has lot of skipped strong beats, and i think you will missed it I wanted to follow vocals because theres a pattern in the lyrics and the way she sings this part. I want to keep this pattern since I use it a few more times later in the song but I guess I'll have to change it if more people don't like it.
5. 01:12:098 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this sudden overmap pattern really hard to hit, especially distance on this notes 01:12:424 (6,7) - Changed the 1/4 sliders to notes. It should make the distance feel better now I think
6. 01:12:914 (1) - i prefer to not skip 01:13:077 - as pattern, maybe change this slider to 1/2 slider I don't mind either. I like what I have because it makes clone of 01:13:403 (3,4) - but I don't mind changing this for now.
7. 01:19:435 (1,2,3) - not sure for this but i think just fix distance on here 01:19:680 (2) - (next:3.00x Prev:3.00x) It used to be like that but I forgot to fix after I changed a pattern.
8. 01:18:783 - why you didnt map this and continue your vocal patterning? transition like this looks hard to expect because at your previous patterning it has follow vocal and player this that is vocal pattern I see what you mean. I mapped01:18:457 (3,1) - like this to indicate that I am no longer following the vocals. I think like this it's fine like this for now but I'll change it if someone else suggests the same thing
9. 01:31:664 (2,4) - overlap here didnt looks good Fixed
   
10. 01:43:403 (1,2) - its not necessary you put this 1/4 sliders like this, change to 1/2 slider or circle for better patterning or do like this 01:53:185 (4,1) - I didnt like the 1/4 sliders either but I think I rather have a 5 stream here
11. 01:58:484 (8) - is this 1/4? why the... (reduce distance please) It's 2.0 spacing like most of the song
12. 02:22:044 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/j34qj/a39c47f936.jpg I prefer the one I have here
13. 02:23:674 - why you didnt map 1/3 here? Good point.
14. 02:24:164 (5) - im suggesting you to remove this notes, because this part has lot of 1/3 so it can be reduce confusion on players After I mapped in 1/3 I changed 02:24:001 (4) - to a slider so it should be more readable now.
15. 02:28:566 - to 02:49:435 - i really very happy if you follow Instrumental here, but looks you follow vocal and skip much strong rhythm there (you skip upbeat and dubstep part so much on this part) Yeah I know what you mean. I couldn't think of a good way to map to the wub here so I decided to map to the vocals because they're still pretty notable and I could use this opportunity to use this as a slow section.
16. 02:32:642 (1) - change to 1/3 pattern please Wasn't too sure what you meant by this. 1/3 slider sounds a bit empty. I'll try 5/6 slider because it sounds better and follows the instruments closer to what you mean
17. 02:42:914 (6,1,2) - try this pattern http://puu.sh/j34Zm/88a4fe99a6.jpg Feels better
18. 02:50:903 - you need to map this, just put circle there. this just for consistency for your next patterning I'll try that. Moved some things around.
19. 03:09:571 (8,1) - is this necessary? but this part just like this one 01:23:674 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - D: The space feels fine to me and I didn't want to reuse the same pattern especially because this one doesnt immediately goto the chorus like the other one did.
20. 03:29:381 (4,1) - stack circle with slider head better I prefer the notes here
21. 03:32:886 (1,2,3) - oh just remove new combo there Okay
22. 03:39:571 (3) - put same distance please (Prev:1.70x Next:1.70x) I forgot to NC there actually. Spacing is fine but for the next section.
23. 03:46:827 (3,1) - oh please ;_; (put notes here please 03:46:990 - ) I wanted this to be non-jump and follow the vocals too
24. 03:54:816 - put breaks Actually drain is pretty low for break to be needed. I would also have to put breaks at 03:57:832 - and I don't really like that.
25. 03:55:957 (1) - change to 3/4 slider with 1 reeverse arrow sounds better But then I don't follow miku
26. 04:02:153 (2) - change to 1/2 slider put circle at 04:02:397 - can make this part more interesting Aww ok because someone else suggested already too
27. 04:03:783 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why you not put some jump stream on here since this beat is supporting for that? i guess some high distance on 04:05:006 (4,1) - can make more impact for this map, it can be good I used to have jump streams when I made this at first and map was 6 stars lol but I didn't like how it looked and was too hard for the ending of a marathon. I did space the last slider though it looks better
28. 04:14:544 (2) - move down a bit because this notes hit HP bar Okay
29. 04:27:261 (1) - ctrl+h then restack slider end, yeah better spacing Okay. Moved slightly to make it more consistent
30. 04:39:001 (1) - prefer increase distance on here because it has strong downbeat, yeah maybe this can help with other pattern like this Stacked to another note.
31. 04:46:011 (2,1,2) - ah this pattern just....... i bet some players will misses on here because this doublet is very hard to read since you put 04:45:196 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - on doublets patterning on music (fix this by change this 04:46:256 (1,2) - to 1/2 pattern and make them have reasonable distance, because this distance difference looks very questionable) I think I get what you mean. I had it like that but most people who playtested like that would miss because of that. I'll try it again but a little different hopefully its good.
32. 04:53:511 (1) - change to 2 circle, better follow piano sound Yeah good change
33. 05:03:783 (1,2,3) - this 1/3 + overlap + highspaced + hidden notes (im sure people will have shitmisses here lmao) So far playtesters get 100s but no misses but it's so evil and so right >:3
34. 05:09:490 (1) - what the.... (are you sure with this SV change because you didnt put any slow SV change on this part, and the music isnt supporting this), yeah this thing surprised me alot, it feels unexpectable I tested this part a lot and tried a lot of patterns but the jump distance, the curve of the slider and the speed are all nice enough for the SV drop to be noticeable but not enough to break. From what I've seen after I changed it like this people play this better and no one has missed at least not cuz of this slider >:3
35. 05:19:924 (1) - remove NC for consistency Removed
36. good map, this map a bit overmapped, but you can hitsound that overmap patterning, good job

Godd luck with map!

Yales wrote:

My kudosu