Just my opinion =)
02:06:852 (1) to 02:15:685 (5) - is very hard to read due to the distance snapping which I can't help but feel they're not right. You go from position A to B and apply it to 2 different sets of beats (if that makes any sense at all)
02:09:519 (1,2) - You established a white tick distance snap beat here and then use it for a red-tick to white-tick beat 02:09:852 (2,3).
02:10:852 (1,2) - I think the start of these (1) to (2) patterns should also be distanced snapped away from its previous pattern. I'm clicking by eye in this whole duration.
02:10:852 (1,2,1,2) - This bit is particularly the most confusing bit. You use the same DS for 02:09:519 (1,2) (as I said earlier) and apply it to this pattern which is a completely different beat.
Awesome map; the
older version of this was one of my firsts ^^
[EDIT: Gah! It really is just that small bit, everything else is perfect (to me) xD And I'm reading this with EZ; that's saying something lol. Of course, don't write off that I could just be bad =P