Kibbleru wrote:

Somebody should make me a cool storyboard for this :X

-[Koinuri] wrote:

Kibbleru wrote:

Somebody should make me a cool storyboard for this :X

aaa I wish I didn't have bunch of requests to do, I love this song ;_;

Maybe if this wasn't ranked after March/April and no one offered to sb before me

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

I tried to mod but I had no idea what was going on x_x
but I think soft-hitlcap.wav is counted as 5ms delay
http://puu.sh/eVEvl/56507443b2.png
maybe?
and the BG size ww
tag add 初音ミク? I don't have much ideas

Kibbleru wrote:

-[Koinuri] wrote:

aaa I wish I didn't have bunch of requests to do, I love this song ;_;

Maybe if this wasn't ranked after March/April and no one offered to sb before me

ill wait forever <3

Gaia wrote:

you better wait, Koinuri is the best >////<

Sonnyc wrote:

[Farewell]
00:16:412 (3) - 3/4 felt really weird here... It's like extending 00:19:187 (1) by 1/4. yeah k ur right
01:28:519 (2,1) - The jump is too big. You should think of a way to make this spacing more natural. ok :3
02:07:519 - 02:08:852 - 02:10:185 - 02:12:852 - 02:14:185 - Highly suggested to add notes. I know there was an instrument you were willing to follow, but leaving the obvious bell sounds which is louder than your selected instrument unmapped makes playing this part really confused. If you don't agree, then at least remove 02:15:519 (4) for consistency. yeah.. originally i did map those out but that made it even more consuing x.x i think for just a section with just circles, it would be better to follow a straightforward melody
03:33:769 (4) - I believe this clap is a mistake. yes lol
03:46:852 (1,2) - Start the combo from 03:47:185 for a better readability. oh nice!
04:12:852 - 04:14:185 - Missing whistle. yea
04:35:352 (7,1) - 1/4 jump? Are you sure? yeah considering this one as well, if i find something that is better ill change.
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monstrata wrote:

Hi Kibbleru, for m4m?~ I really hope this helps .

[Farewell]

00:12:106 - I'm not a timing expert, but the vocals begin here, so I think the bpm is slightly off... Should double-check with a timing expert. yeah iplan to get this timing checked.
00:24:186 (1,2) - Make this a slider instead? 00:24:186 (1) - This note is held and I really can't hear anything that can be mapped to 00:24:352 (2) - . its okay :X
00:34:852 (1) - Ctrl+G? Better flow imo. this plays gud too
00:40:185 (1,2,3,1,2) - Try a pattern like this?: Image. Having a noticeably bigger jump from 00:40:519 (3,1) - than from 00:40:185 (1,2) - plays better. Also a fun jump imo. did some adjusting
00:55:519 - I think having a slider begin here would play better than having a slider-end... Rhythm like this?
01:02:519 (6) - I get that you are mapping the (drum?? what instrument??) beats in the background, so having a 3/4 slider here is justified since the beat is held, but I think the vocals are stronger here... Consider mapping something to 01:02:685 - ? i dont put alot of focus onto vocals
01:05:185 - Not going to map a note here? too feint of a sound
01:24:519 (2,3) - Strange that you would map these beats but leave it empty here? 01:25:185 - . There is a beat you could map too, though it's about as audible as 01:24:685 (3) - . ^
01:27:519 (4,2) - Stack? also Ctrl+G on 01:28:519 (2) - would have better flow, but up to you here, I get what you're trying to do. meh not noticeable and stacking doesn't look good imo lol
01:50:352 (4) - Consider making this repeat. pass
02:23:352 (2) - Make this a circle and add slider at 02:23:519 - ? nah this works too
02:37:685 (2) - You could improve the flow here by rotating this slider a bit so the repeat arrow is pointing in the direction of 3. i think hti is gud tho o-o
02:59:352 (1) - Try moving this slider to 02:59:519 - . and add circle to 02:59:352 - . ^
03:07:685 (5) - Ctrl+G? ^
03:14:852 (1,2) - Idk... I don't think the 2x repeats work here. You use these pairs of single repeat sliders a lot to map the particular rhythm here, so it feels strange to suddenly use 2x repeats. imo its readable
03:33:769 (4,1,2,3,4,1) - Is it just me or are these notes unevenly spaced... I understand you have different spacing for each combo, but the middle stream looks off. they are unevenly spaced i think it looks good lol
03:57:852 (2) - The song is quieting down and transitioning to a slower section, so unlike other parts on your map, I don't think breaking the flow here is a good idea... Ctrl+G? just the sliders are enough imo
04:07:519 - - 04:08:185 - I think you can capture more of the vocals here even though you are using simple rhythm here. Maybe use a repeat slider? focusing on instrument
04:20:685 (2,3) - Ctrl+G these two notes. Better flow. i think this flows well too though and i kinda like the small flowbreak
04:35:352 (7,1) - Jump is kinda... sudden.. Kind of awkward to play too. You could try increasing the spacing of the stream to make this jump less awkward. I would still recommend having the slider pointing away from the stream for better flow, like parallel to 04:35:602 (2) - maybe? Alternatively, you could try something like this where the 2nd last note (red tick) becomes part of a new combo with the 1/4th slider. This might play better since players usually use their dominant finger for red/white ticks. Might make the jump easier to catch since the jump is from blue-tick to red tick now. made it smaller, hopefully slider leniency will make up for it now
04:40:185 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Wooow. fun~
04:51:019 (2) - How about angling this slider in the same way you did for 04:51:852 (5) - ? its okay
04:54:852 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Fun jump~ but I think you could make the later jumps a bit more spaced rather than slowly decrease the spacing when the bpm decreases. i think the intensity decreases so i am decreasing spacing.
04:51:519 - Not mapping something here? nah too quiet
05:07:584 - I feel like there should be another timing section here since the "mi" she sings doesn't click right on the repeat. For me, the note is sung at 05:08:037 - . Should double-check with timing expert.

Good luck~ Love this song, and Choucho's version is the best imo :3

Owntrolf wrote:

Rip me- probably my longest mod

I dont really like those sliders around the beginning like 00:38:019 (3) -
Check your sliders since it feels like most of them sound better on white ticks

I don't map to vocals and sometimes i do alot of passive sliders to be creative, so most of the rhythm things are denied lol

00:35:519 (1) - I think you should ctrl+g it or make it end downwards nah
00:42:519 (5,1) - Should probably change 5 into something like

SPOILER

00:43:935 (6) - You dont really need this, it takes away the impact from 00:44:019 (7,8,1) -
00:52:685 (2,3) - Swap in timing
00:54:019 (3) - Should probably move it to the white tick in the middle
00:54:519 (4) - Similar thing here to moving to the large white tick
00:56:685 (3,4) - Swap in timing
00:58:852 (1,2,3) - Another similar thing to ctrl+g
01:01:519 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe change to

SPOILER

01:03:352 (2) - Maybe change to 2 circles
01:04:852 (5,6) - More time swap ctrlg magic

---01:11:185 - Not really sure about the doubles starting from here meh ill ask around

01:18:019 (4,5) - ctrl g time swap magic

---From 01:18:852 - to about 01:21:519 (1) - do something so that the sliders start on white ticks since they sound better that way

01:25:352 (5,6,1) - Maybe space further away from the previous
01:39:352 (1) - Maybe do something f@ncy with this and replace the slider with 2 1/4s and one 1/1
01:41:352 (1,2) - Maybe remove 2 and make 1 a repeat slider
01:44:685 (3,4) - These are perfectly fine as 1/2s
01:45:519 (1,2,3) - Maybe remove 1 and add 2 circles and move 2 and 3 back to the white ticks
01:51:352 (2,3,4,5) - ctrl+g magic \o/

===02:06:852 - to 02:16:185 - is confusing since you completely change what sound you're following its fine imo

02:21:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe change to something like

SPOILER

02:23:352 (2) - Replace to 2 circle yyy
02:26:185 (2,3,1,1,2) - Maybe change to

SPOILER

-=-02:39:019 - Lazy to comment about changing the red tick start sliders to white tick ones im emphasizing the kick drums here

02:44:852 (3) - This should probably be 1/1 drumsss asfsadsafds

-=-02:48:185 - Maybe map the part where they say "Nano" by putting a circle here 02:48:852 -

02:54:352 (6,7) - Swapperinos ctrl+g

-=-03:16:685 - From here to 03:18:685 - add circles in the red tick spaces and then remap the section a bit so that it makes it flow

03:21:519 (1,2) - Replace with 1/1 slider and put a circle on the red tick after it

=--=03:48:185 - Possible klai? ill play around with this, don't really think its strong enough tho

04:01:185 - missing note
04:01:519 (1,2,1) - Sounds a bit weird
04:10:019 (2,3) - Maybe replace both for 4 circles in 1/2
04:25:019 (5,6) - Ctrl+g swapperino
04:30:019 (1) - This should probably bet 1/2 since theres a note on the white tick
04:35:435 (1,2,3) - Sounds weird change it somehow?
04:41:852 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - Maybe change to

SPOILER

---04:46:852 - Maybe another klai here and have it end around 04:57:965 - whats with u and kiais

04:50:019 - Missing note?
04:52:185 (1,2,3) - Swap so the slider is first then the 2 circles

Kibbleru wrote:

15:32 Gaia: what is life

Meyrink wrote:

Dafuq Gaia Lost his mind ? x)

1. 00:16:397 (3) - Ctrl+g this? Head could be more spaced away for the downbeat on 00:17:009 (1)
2. 00:30:852 (1,2) - Space these a bit more, feels awkwardly small to play
3. 00:31:852 (6) - Ctrl+H and a bit of rotation would accent the vocals more effectively while still keeping some flow
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:29:435 (8,1) - Add a small jump here? I just feel like it fits since you have some 1/4 jumps in other places plus you can emphasize the finish
5. 01:43:685 (4,5) - Made the pattern feel awkward to play for me, try placing 01:43:852 (5) around the tail of 01:44:019 (1)
6. 01:50:352 (4) - Try a 1/4 slider and a circle so the clap +finish is clickable, I can hear something on the blue tick too
7. 02:06:852 (1,2) - Increase spacing, these threw me off a bit from the previous 1/1 circles since they had the same spacing
8. 03:15:852 (1) - Shorten to 3/4 and add a circle for clickable finish? You did it in similar parts owo

sukiNathan wrote:

cute song ;w;

[Farewell]

1. 00:16:397 (3) - Ctrl+g this? Head could be more spaced away for the downbeat on 00:17:009 (1) i think this is okay, calm part so
2. 00:30:852 (1,2) - Space these a bit more, feels awkwardly small to play k
3. 00:31:852 (6) - Ctrl+H and a bit of rotation would accent the vocals more effectively while still keeping some flow mm wanted the flowbreak cuz they're cool i guess
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:29:435 (8,1) - Add a small jump here? I just feel like it fits since you have some 1/4 jumps in other places plus you can emphasize the finish uhh did more distance i guess
5. 01:43:685 (4,5) - Made the pattern feel awkward to play for me, try placing 01:43:852 (5) around the tail of 01:44:019 (1) i don't think its too bad
6. 01:50:352 (4) - Try a 1/4 slider and a circle so the clap +finish is clickable, I can hear something on the blue tick too would rather ruin my pattern :C
7. 02:06:852 (1,2) - Increase spacing, these threw me off a bit from the previous 1/1 circles since they had the same spacing k
8. 03:15:852 (1) - Shorten to 3/4 and add a circle for clickable finish? You did it in similar parts owo i think this one fits rather nicely

OPYoshi wrote:

Nice map. Like it

00:16:397 (3) - New Combo would be nice. Together with the following sliders too much imo

01:01:519 (1) - Not sure about this 1/4 note. Maybe slider till here? emphasizes vocals and the click

01:16:602 (2) - Too cloose to (1). Maybe short it 1/4 note. eh?

01:55:519 (1) - You can move this and the five following notes to the slider before them. Makes it more "flowing" ^

02:49:185 (2) - New One Hit Combo? as b4

03:58:852 (1) - It's a long song. Maybe you can add a small break here (Of course you can do it somewhere else, if you like) i need 5 minutes drain time for approval


Hope, it's helpful

-[Koinuri] wrote:

rip

Kibbleru wrote:

-[Koinuri] wrote:

rip

damn I got excited for a second there

Skystar wrote:

aw

handsome wrote:

SQURARES1

-[Koinuri] wrote:

magic ver. 1.0

Some things:
Needs widescreen support
delete "lyrics.txt" and "lyrics2.txt" in the sb folder. I think I forgot to remove them before uploading the last version.
I'm not sure if you need epilepsy warning, maybe ask QATs for opinions?

It should be done!

Gaia wrote:

Magic Maker Koinuri ヽ(*・ω・)ﾉ

[Storyboard]
favourite part: 00:00:000 - 05:19:348

asdf i love you so much koinuri ;w;w;w;w;

1. fine

1. 00:43:852 (5,6,7,8,1) - mmm I think ctrl+g stream here would make the flow 00:43:352 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - here somehow pretty much better
2. 00:46:519 (4) - add normal-addition clap ? I think it make hitsound nice and consistent with previous hitsound pattern
3. 01:06:352 (3,4) - give this a bit more spacing would be nice , it give a bit more impact to the beat here which will give nice effect to player so ya ,try move (3) to around x188 y88 ?
4. 01:17:685 (2,3,4) - rhythm here play a bit kinda weird which might be cause of weird 3/4 thing or w/e here , I would prefer to do something like what you did previously here 01:16:519 (2,3) - ,01:13:852 (2,3) - , it play better imo
5. 01:28:185 (1,2) - the way flow thing work here kinda make flow here 01:28:519 (2,1) - abit weird and awkward imo , would be good to ctrl+g 01:28:519 (2) - which make flow nice imo
6. 01:49:352 (5,1,2) - make spacing thing a bit more balance here would make flow here not so sudden much (?) at 01:49:519 (1,2) - imo , try move 01:49:519 (1) - to around x228 y304 ?
7. 02:17:019 (5,6) - make spacing there a bit more consistent with the previous spacing would make flow good , I guess lol
8. 02:27:352 (2,1) - the low spacing here I think it not works really well like 02:27:019 (2,1) - since it got a bit sudden impact feeling there somehow so maybe increase spacing there or give more sharp angle would make thing consistent with music , try move 02:27:519 (1) - to around x252 y48 ?
9. 03:14:685 (4,1) - spacing here should be bigger than 03:14:519 (3,4) - to make thing play a bit better imo since 03:14:852 - sound pretty much more emphasized than 03:14:685 - , try move 03:14:685 (4) - to around x240 y144 ?

CelsiusLK wrote:

ok dad hype

[general]

1. fine

[farewell]

1. 00:43:852 (5,6,7,8,1) - mmm I think ctrl+g stream here would make the flow 00:43:352 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - here somehow pretty much better
2. 00:46:519 (4) - add normal-addition clap ? I think it make hitsound nice and consistent with previous hitsound pattern
3. 01:06:352 (3,4) - give this a bit more spacing would be nice , it give a bit more impact to the beat here which will give nice effect to player so ya ,try move (3) to around x188 y88 ? eh, tried to adjust but imo moving it that much would make the pattern look bad
4. 01:17:685 (2,3,4) - rhythm here play a bit kinda weird which might be cause of weird 3/4 thing or w/e here , I would prefer to do something like what you did previously here 01:16:519 (2,3) - ,01:13:852 (2,3) - , it play better imo imo it's fine because the next circle is on a really strong beat musically so it's fairly obvious when the player should click
5. 01:28:185 (1,2) - the way flow thing work here kinda make flow here 01:28:519 (2,1) - abit weird and awkward imo , would be good to ctrl+g 01:28:519 (2) - which make flow nice imo did something different (tried to match slider with SB)
6. 01:49:352 (5,1,2) - make spacing thing a bit more balance here would make flow here not so sudden much (?) at 01:49:519 (1,2) - imo , try move 01:49:519 (1) - to around x228 y304 ?
7. 02:17:019 (5,6) - make spacing there a bit more consistent with the previous spacing would make flow good , I guess lol
8. 02:27:352 (2,1) - the low spacing here I think it not works really well like 02:27:019 (2,1) - since it got a bit sudden impact feeling there somehow so maybe increase spacing there or give more sharp angle would make thing consistent with music , try move 02:27:519 (1) - to around x252 y48 ? what i'm emphasizing here is more of the pair of notes so imo this is okay. also for consistency with the previous jumps
9. 03:14:685 (4,1) - spacing here should be bigger than 03:14:519 (3,4) - to make thing play a bit better imo since 03:14:852 - sound pretty much more emphasized than 03:14:685 - , try move 03:14:685 (4) - to around x240 y144 ?

d

Vertify wrote:

Just my opinion =)

02:06:852 (1) to 02:15:685 (5) - is very hard to read due to the distance snapping which I can't help but feel they're not right. You go from position A to B and apply it to 2 different sets of beats (if that makes any sense at all) well basically im trying to make you listen to the instrumentals here, i set up various NC so i don't think it's that hard to play if you listen carefully.

02:09:519 (1,2) - You established a white tick distance snap beat here and then use it for a red-tick to white-tick beat 02:09:852 (2,3).

02:10:852 (1,2) - I think the start of these (1) to (2) patterns should also be distanced snapped away from its previous pattern. I'm clicking by eye in this whole duration.

02:10:852 (1,2,1,2) - This bit is particularly the most confusing bit. You use the same DS for 02:09:519 (1,2) (as I said earlier) and apply it to this pattern which is a completely different beat. honestly this is perfectly readable with AR9 and i used NC to determine the 1/1


Awesome map; the older version of this was one of my firsts ^^

[EDIT: Gah! It really is just that small bit, everything else is perfect (to me) xD And I'm reading this with EZ; that's saying something lol. Of course, don't write off that I could just be bad =P