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Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-08-03T04:49:29+00:00

-Sh1n1- wrote:
Taiko mod

About

d is don note
k is kat note
D is finish don note
K is finish kat note

Nardo's Futsuu

00:16:575 (36,37,38) - 00:17:879 (39,40,41) - should be k k d, because don follow voice better at 00:17:227 - 00:18:531 - As vocal pitch is increasing, d d k would fit well.
00:19:836 (45) - should be k because 00:19:510 (44,45) - have the same sound and for previous advice. Similar to ^ , I mapped the pitch drop there.
00:23:422 (54,55) - Ctrl+G to follow voice better, 00:24:074 (56,57,58) - this is Ok to keep consistency with 00:21:466 (48,49,50) - but 00:23:748 (55) - should be k to mark the change of voice ( 00:23:748 (55,56) - ) on this pattern 00:23:422 (54,55,56,57,58) - same as ^
00:27:009 (64,65,66) - should be k k d same as first point, and consistency with 00:28:313 (67,68,69) - same as 00:16:575 (36,37,38) -
00:49:999 (119,120) - I'm not agree with this, kk is Ok at 00:54:401 (132,133) - because they have the same sound but 00:50:162 - high, 00:49:999 - low, it's up you, dk is Ok imo. No, the vocal pitch is the same.
00:52:607 (125,126) - 01:00:434 (149,150) - 01:03:042 (155,156) - 01:10:869 (179,180) - same as above. same as ^

Best of Luck guys :3 *-*/

Thanks for your mod~

toara_fict

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Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2015-08-04T21:12:34+00:00

-Eternal Love- wrote:
Hi~ Mod request. Sorry for the long delay...

Muzukashii
00:31:412 - add d? Sure
00:48:695 (167,168) - d? k is better

Oni
00:09:564 (35) - d? k
00:35:325 (181,182,183,184) - d k d K? not follow vo

good luck!

[_Chichinya_] wrote:
HI \o

M4M req made by me

[General]

- Nothing

[Muzukashiii]

- is nice

[Oni]

- is ok

[Coments]

- well this is very nice i like it all diff are very good :3 i hope you ranke it Good luck

thanks :3

-Sh1n1- wrote:
Taiko mod

About

d is don note
k is kat note
D is finish don note
K is finish kat note

Muzukashii

00:05:325 (12) - delete, calm part finish at 00:05:814 -, you were following simples sounds like 00:01:250 (2,3) - 00:04:510 (10) -, if you want to add more emphasis to the next part I think 00:05:488 (13) - is enough and follow voice nice. okay.
00:38:423 (124) - move to 00:38:586 - follow voice better nope. not follow vo part
00:36:140 (114) - delete I can't hear anything. kk
00:45:270 (152,153,154,155,156) - 00:47:879 (163,164,165,166,167) - why you didn't keep consistency with 2nd and 3th kiai? feels weird okay.add
01:02:716 (229) - move to 01:03:042 - and them delete 01:03:368 (232) - fix
01:13:069 (280) - totally unnecessary. remove this note. okay.
01:23:585 (319) - delete same as first point ^

Toara's ~~amazing~~ Oni

00:08:178 (26,27) - unnecessary, delete keep.
00:23:830 (111) - move to 00:23:667 - and change to d Change
00:27:499 (135,136) - same sound, why you didn't make like 00:28:803 (142,143,144) - O.o? differs a little. keep

Best of Luck guys :3 *-*/

Thanks :3v Update ~

Charlotte

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Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2015-08-05T09:59:41+00:00

xtrem3x wrote:
Request via ... a delay PM

_____________________________________________________

General:

don = d
kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

_____________________________________________________

Charlo's Kantan:

01:00:596 - ctrl+g with 01:01:901- (if follow vocal sound is better) no change.because,I changed d-k-d

01:04:510 - Change to K (high vocal sound) fixed.

_____________________________________________________

and that's all .-.

[_Chichinya_] wrote:
HI \o

M4M req made by me

[General]

- Nothing

[Charlotte's Kantan]

- 00:37:770 (42,43) - ctrl + g i guess (because i think is better follow d k d k rhythm ) I think "d-d-k-k-d-k-d-k" is good flow.
- 00:59:618 (78,79) - ctrl + g because k k d sound better for me hmm...keep

[Coments]

- well this is very nice i like it all diff are very good :3 i hope you ranke it Good luck

-Sh1n1- wrote:
Taiko mod

About

d is don note
k is kat note
D is finish don note
K is finish kat note

Charlotte's Kantan

00:50:814 (65,66) - Ctrl+G, d feels better when you want to follow a vocal sound with echo, like 00:51:466 - fixed
01:01:249 (81,82) - same as above ^
00:53:423 (68,69) - Ctrl+G too because music is increassing and k k d will be nice fixed
01:03:205 (83,84) - Ctrl+G, music is increassing and strong beat is on 01:03:857 - fixed
01:07:118 (88) - should be d and 01:09:727 (93) - should be k as you did on previous kiais:00:46:249 (56,57,58,61,62,63) - 00:56:683 (72,73,74,77,78,79) - okay.chanegd ddk kdk
00:39:727 (45) - strong beat, add a break after that, 00:40:379 (46) - delete this note hmm...keep.I think 1/1 rhythm is good flow.

Best of Luck guys :3 *-*/

Thank you mod

Charlotte's Kantan

osu file format v14

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Title:Honey Come!! (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Honey♥Come!! (TV size)
Artist:Ogura Yui
ArtistUnicode:小倉唯
Creator:toara_fict
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JUDYDANNY

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Joined October 2011

JUDYDANNY 2015-08-07T15:07:08+00:00

Consider again about the offset. +8ms.
-　数人テストプレイヤーにプレイして確認しましたがやはり体感早いと思います。

明日元気があれば見る

toara_fict

1,319 posts

Joined July 2012

Topic Starter

toara_fict 2015-08-07T21:54:05+00:00

JUDYDANNY wrote:
Consider again about the offset. +8ms.
-　数人テストプレイヤーにプレイして確認しましたがやはり体感早いと思います。

明日元気があれば見る

青線引いてModするとこ決めてたりしたらアレなんでModと一緒に全難易度offset変えますね :3

JUDYDANNY

1,519 posts

Joined October 2011

JUDYDANNY 2015-08-08T10:16:21+00:00

WIP No Kudosu(alredy recieved from toara p4364301 )
~~Honey Come~~~~~ Judy Come~~~

[Timing]

00:44:944 - change to red line. Night Coreのmodsでつくズンチャズンチャの他に鳴ってるシンバル音がずれてるのでその補正にどうですか
Instrumental needs a double bar line, and Played with Night Core mods. Dat additional (effect) cymbals sounds misregistration.

[Kantan~Oni (Except for Lundle oni)]

About some finishers, It sounds noisy I guess, try to consider again.

00:00:597 - and 00:03:205 - , or only 00:03:205 – >> for emphasized to 01:25:379 sounds pressure.
00:11:031 - , 00:21:466 - , >> from00:09:727 (1,2,3,) - ,It sounds noisy to make the same finisher on00:11:031 – .
01:18:857 - and 01:21:466 – , or only 01:21:466 – >> same as Intro.

[Charlotte’s Kantan]

00:33:205 – change to d and 00:36:466 – add k? バスドラフォロー云々とアクセント部位の統一化
and. 00:37:770 - , 00:39:075 - remove?
00:42:336 (50,51,52,53) –強調までせずともリズムは難しいのでfinisherはなくてよいと思います remove the finishers?
and 00:42:336 – change to d? ここまでのddkkdkdkの流れから?
01:17:553 – 前回ここはkで提案したかもですが… kiaiが統一してddk-d-k- kdk-dkと一連の流れがあるのでdでいいかもしれません
パターンの統一化からはだいぶ外れる提案なので音合わせするかどうかの主観になりますが. 00:26:031 (29,30,31,32) – dkkdはどうですか?
1度目のdk 00:15:596 (18,19) –同様、加えて00:27:988 –のバスドラは1度目の部分、そして提案箇所周辺に比べなぜか低音がよく響いてますので fitすると思いました。
とてもよい仕上がりになってます, Qualifiedしたら多分フルモッドで粘るwww

[Nardo’s Futsuu]

00:42:499 – remove? guess it plays harder a bit.
Sounds clean to follow the pitch, good working ヾ(๑>◡<)ﾉ"

[Lundle’s Oni]

00:57:825 – ここkじゃないかな? 他のkiaiのとこ00:47:390 - ,01:08:260 - 同様に
01:04:346 – k? 01:03:857 –からの1/2ドカドカリズムで見たらkの方がボーカル意識で流れとしてよりよいかも
声がクソ伸びてるから微妙ですが, 00:50:162 –と01:00:596 - ここからノーツを減らしてみては?
http://puu.sh/jtMcX/6e9a112209.jpgかhttp://puu.sh/jtMAb/41bb4ccab3.jpgな具合かな?
少しクールダウンすることで00:51:466 (1,2,3,4) - の1/1音がよりハッキリと捉えられて緩急の緩の部分によりよいかなと思った
mod視点で久しぶりに見るな～さすが音域がよく取れてます, いいっすね～＾

[Muzukashii]

スネア鳴ってるとこを消す提案はあんましたくないんだけど…00:12:010 –トカ00:14:618 –トカAメロのとこ全部消してもいいんじゃない?
Aメロはそこまでｺﾞﾁｬｺﾞﾁｬしてもないから少し抑えた方が全体の抑揚づけにもなると思うし、00:46:086 (152,153,154) –こういった部分と同様に無視してもいい気がするんだな
もし消したなら00:12:173 – とかは全部kにしてもいいかもしれないsame as Nardo’s Futsuu , and 00:26:031 (78) –は変化意識音も上がってるのでkに。。。という感じかな?

[Oni]

~~モウチョトマッテクダサイ深夜か日曜に書くわ~~

00:34:265 – remove? 緩急的に3連をチャイム音のみに合わせた方がいいと思う
00:36:874 –^ 理由は上記に似た感じですがここのパートの部分での5連はライトユーザーに対してやさしくない気がするこういった5連を使うならもっと手前でも使える場面はあったと思う
00:49:673 (263,264,265,266,267,268) – ddkdk-d>>>ddk-kkd? 00:49:917 - d音が少し悪目立ちする気がしたのと, 00:50:080 –こっちにはノイズに近いけどはっきりとした粒が鳴ってもいますので切り方としては提案の方がいいかなと
00:53:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6)-は o-oooooよりもooooo-o(ddddk-k)の方がリズムが詰まらないと思います
01:03:857 (361,362,363,364,365,366) - same, kkddk-k かな?
01:10:787 – remove?　01:10:869 (410,411) –この二つに隣接1/4をなくすことで01:10:705 –までの流れと01:10:868 –からの流れとの違いがハッキリします

以下主観つよし
00:16:004 – remove? 00:15:923 –と00:16:086 –の間のノーツがピロピロ音に対して素直じゃないので削除推奨
00:12:988 (51,52,53,54,55) – 上記の削除をした場合 00:13:477 –を消して密度に変化を出すトカ, 00:12:988 (51,52,53,54) –のd-ddkをddd-kで変えるといったパターンの変化等をつけた方がよりメリハリもつくかと
00:23:423 (107,108,109,110) – もし上記の”パターン変更”をした場合は同じパターンにした方がよろし

Last edited by JUDYDANNY 2015-08-09T13:10:20+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Nardoxyribonucleic

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Nardoxyribonucleic 2015-08-08T10:55:12+00:00

JUDYDANNY wrote:
WIP No Kudosu(alredy recieved from toara p4364301 )
~~Honey Come~~~~~ Judy Come~~~

[Timing]
00:44:944 - change to red line. Night Coreのmodsでつくズンチャズンチャの他に鳴ってるシンバル音がずれてるのでその補正にどうですか
Instrumental needs a double bar line, and Played with Night Core mods. Dat additional (effect) cymbals sounds misregistration. This will be considered by toara.

[Kantan~Oni (without Lundle oni)]
About some finishers, It sounds noisy I guess, try to consider again.
00:00:597 - and 00:03:205 - , or only 00:03:205 – >> for emphasized to 01:25:379 sounds pressure. By considering the distance between finishes, 00:07:118 (11) - is already emphasized by 00:05:814 (9) - because of increased density of big notes. Therefore, I think it would be fine to keep that two finishes at the beginning.
00:11:031 - , 00:21:466 - , >> from 00:09:727 (1,2,3,) - ,It sounds noisy to make the same finisher on 00:11:031 – . -> As all of them are stressed, it would be more reasonable to use D imo.
01:18:857 - and 01:21:466 – , or only 01:21:466 – >> same as Intro. same as 00:00:597 - and 00:03:205 -
[Nardo’s Futsuu]
00:42:499 – remove? guess it plays harder a bit. I think DD in 1/2 would be suitable for Futsuu difficulty-wise.
Sounds clean to follow the pitch, good working ヾ(๑>◡<)ﾉ"

Thanks for your mod and comments JuDa~

Charlotte

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Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2015-08-09T15:30:00+00:00

JUDYDANNY wrote:
WIP No Kudosu(alredy recieved from toara p4364301 )
~~Honey Come~~~~~ Judy Come~~~

[Timing]
00:44:944 - change to red line. Night Coreのmodsでつくズンチャズンチャの他に鳴ってるシンバル音がずれてるのでその補正にどうですか
Instrumental needs a double bar line, and Played with Night Core mods. Dat additional (effect) cymbals sounds misregistration.

[Kantan~Oni (Except for Lundle oni)]
About some finishers, It sounds noisy I guess, try to consider again.
00:00:597 - and 00:03:205 - , or only 00:03:205 – >> for emphasized to 01:25:379 sounds pressure.
00:11:031 - , 00:21:466 - , >> from00:09:727 (1,2,3,) - ,It sounds noisy to make the same finisher on00:11:031 – .
01:18:857 - and 01:21:466 – , or only 01:21:466 – >> same as Intro.
[Charlotte’s Kantan]
00:33:205 – change to d and 00:36:466 – add k? バスドラフォロー云々とアクセント部位の統一化 fixed
and. 00:37:770 - , 00:39:075 - remove? fixed
00:42:336 (50,51,52,53) –強調までせずともリズムは難しいのでfinisherはなくてよいと思います remove the finishers? okay,fixed
and 00:42:336 – change to d? ここまでのddkkdkdkの流れから? fixed
01:17:553 – 前回ここはkで提案したかもですが… kiaiが統一してddk-d-k- kdk-dkと一連の流れがあるのでdでいいかもしれません fixed
パターンの統一化からはだいぶ外れる提案なので音合わせするかどうかの主観になりますが. 00:26:031 (29,30,31,32) – dkkdはどうですか?
1度目のdk 00:15:596 (18,19) –同様、加えて00:27:988 –のバスドラは1度目の部分、そして提案箇所周辺に比べなぜか低音がよく響いてますので fitすると思いました。パターンの統一化からは少し外れてるかもしれませんが、いい感じなので変更しました。
とてもよい仕上がりになってます, Qualifiedしたら多分フルモッドで粘るwww　Good luck
SV1.2→1.4 HPを7に変更しました。

Thank you recheck.

Charlotte's Kantan

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toara_fict

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toara_fict 2015-08-10T09:19:28+00:00

Update kantan.

toara_fict

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toara_fict 2015-08-11T12:16:01+00:00

JUDYDANNY wrote:
WIP No Kudosu(alredy recieved from toara p4364301 )
~~Honey Come~~~~~ Judy Come~~~ YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

[Timing]
00:44:944 - change to red line. Night Coreのmodsでつくズンチャズンチャの他に鳴ってるシンバル音がずれてるのでその補正にどうですか
Instrumental needs a double bar line, and Played with Night Core mods. Dat additional (effect) cymbals sounds misregistration. ようわからんけどここ赤線ひくいみあるの？？？　長い線ここに合ってるし

[Kantan~Oni (Except for Lundle oni)]
About some finishers, It sounds noisy I guess, try to consider again.
00:00:597 - and 00:03:205 - , or only 00:03:205 – >> for emphasized to 01:25:379 sounds pressure.
00:11:031 - , 00:21:466 - , >> from00:09:727 (1,2,3,) - ,It sounds noisy to make the same finisher on00:11:031 – .
01:18:857 - and 01:21:466 – , or only 01:21:466 – >> same as Intro.　他ヂッフかえてないっぽいしkeep :^)

[Muzukashii]
スネア鳴ってるとこを消す提案はあんましたくないんだけど…00:12:010 –トカ00:14:618 –トカAメロのとこ全部消してもいいんじゃない?
Aメロはそこまでｺﾞﾁｬｺﾞﾁｬしてもないから少し抑えた方が全体の抑揚づけにもなると思うし、00:46:086 (152,153,154) –こういった部分と同様に無視してもいい気がするんだな

もし消したなら00:12:173 – とかは全部kにしてもいいかもしれないsame as Nardo’s Futsuu , and 00:26:031 (78) –は変化意識音も上がってるのでkに。。。という感じかな?

00:26:031 (82) - ここはFix ~~あとはnoかな・・・　削りたくない~~削った
[Oni]
~~モウチョトマッテクダサイ深夜か日曜に書くわ~~
00:34:265 – remove? 緩急的に3連をチャイム音のみに合わせた方がいいと思うぉぃっすへんこう

00:36:874 –^ 理由は上記に似た感じですがここのパートの部分での5連はライトユーザーに対してやさしくない気がするこういった5連を使うならもっと手前でも使える場面はあったと思う　かしこまり！

00:49:673 (263,264,265,266,267,268) – ddkdk-d>>>ddk-kkd? 00:49:917 - d音が少し悪目立ちする気がしたのと, 00:50:080 –こっちにはノイズに近いけどはっきりとした粒が鳴ってもいますので切り方としては提案の方がいいかなと　変更

00:53:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6)-は o-oooooよりもooooo-o(ddddk-k)の方がリズムが詰まらないと思います
01:03:857 (361,362,363,364,365,366) - same, kkddk-k かな?
01:10:787 – remove?　01:10:869 (410,411) –この二つに隣接1/4をなくすことで01:10:705 –までの流れと01:10:868 –からの流れとの違いがハッキリします　ここ全部かえたヨ

以下主観つよし
00:16:004 – remove? 00:15:923 –と00:16:086 –の間のノーツがピロピロ音に対して素直じゃないので削除推奨　ok

00:12:988 (51,52,53,54,55) – 上記の削除をした場合 00:13:477 –を消して密度に変化を出すトカ, 00:12:988 (51,52,53,54) –のd-ddkをddd-kで変えるといったパターンの変化等をつけた方がよりメリハリもつくかと

00:23:423 (107,108,109,110) – もし上記の”パターン変更”をした場合は同じパターンにした方がよろし

ddd k deleteでChangeやんな

Last edited by toara_fict 2015-08-12T10:47:00+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Lundlerol

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Lundlerol 2015-08-11T12:33:13+00:00

JUDYDANNY wrote:
WIP No Kudosu(alredy recieved from toara p4364301 )
~~Honey Come~~~~~ Judy Come~~~

[Lundle’s Oni]
00:57:825 – ここkじゃないかな? 他のkiaiのとこ00:47:390 - ,01:08:260 - 同様に　done
01:04:346 – k? 01:03:857 –からの1/2ドカドカリズムで見たらkの方がボーカル意識で流れとしてよりよいかも done.
声がクソ伸びてるから微妙ですが, 00:50:162 –と01:00:596 - ここからノーツを減らしてみては?
http://puu.sh/jtMcX/6e9a112209.jpgかhttp://puu.sh/jtMAb/41bb4ccab3.jpgな具合かな?
少しクールダウンすることで00:51:466 (1,2,3,4) - の1/1音がよりハッキリと捉えられて緩急の緩の部分によりよいかなと思った前半だけ採用
mod視点で久しぶりに見るな～さすが音域がよく取れてます, いいっすね～＾

thx mod

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240,192,87743,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,192,87825,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,192,87988,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,176,88477,1,12,0:0:0:0:

toara_fict

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toara_fict 2015-08-11T13:12:46+00:00

JUDYDANNY wrote:
Consider again about the offset. +8ms.
-　数人テストプレイヤーにプレイして確認しましたがやはり体感早いと思います。

All diff offset +8 ( change 597 -> 605 )
一応スナップしてプレビューポイントとかサイショのノーツとかも手動でスナップしておいたんで大丈夫なはず。

All diff fix.

JUDYDANNY

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Joined October 2011

JUDYDANNY 2015-08-12T11:52:05+00:00

Changed things

@Futsuu > changed hp 5 to 6.
@Muzukashii Talked with creator and changed some about enhanced the spread

はにかむ～　ヾ(๑>◡<)ﾉ"
Bubbled.

toara_fict

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toara_fict 2015-08-12T11:54:13+00:00

JUDYDANNY wrote:
Changed things
@Futsuu > changed hp 5 to 6.
@Muzukashii Talked with creator and changed some about enhanced the spread

はにかむ～　ヾ(๑>◡<)ﾉ"
Bubbled.

-Sh1n1-

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-Sh1n1- 2015-08-14T20:11:43+00:00

GO GO :33 xDDD

PatZar

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PatZar 2015-08-16T04:48:08+00:00

crim

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crim 2015-08-17T14:57:38+00:00

Labyr

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Labyr 2015-08-18T18:36:12+00:00

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Julie

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Julie 2015-08-25T15:24:51+00:00

Had my 1st irc on taiko with toara-san o///o! http://puu.sh/jO2uj.jpg *laugh*
Only fixed this : 00:22:941 (103,104) - ctrl+g, since you been putting d for bass and k for that clap sound before? Also can follow the vocal pitch? xD

[Charlotte's Kantan]

01:04:518 (84) - remove this finisher to keep it consistent with 00:54:083 (68) - , since you didn't put a finisher for that cymbal.

[Lundle's Oni]

01:11:691 (395,396,397) - kkd like this 01:11:039 (390,391,392) - and 01:12:344 (400,401,402) - , for the vocal and for the instrument sound to make these 2 01:11:854 (397,398) - different.

Only a few small thing to point out, since the whole mapset is pretty much consistent owob

go go go, before (|3[__] ~

Charlotte

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Joined December 2013

Charlotte 2015-08-25T15:37:30+00:00

Julie wrote:
Had my 1st irc on taiko with toara-san o///o! http://puu.sh/jO2uj.jpg *laugh*
Only fixed this : 00:22:941 (103,104) - ctrl+g, since you been putting d for bass and k for that clap sound before? Also can follow the vocal pitch? xD

[Charlotte's Kantan]

01:04:518 (84) - remove this finisher to keep it consistent with 00:54:083 (68) - , since you didn't put a finisher for that cymbal. okay.fixed

Thank you mod

Lundlerol

651 posts

Joined May 2011

Lundlerol 2015-08-25T15:39:41+00:00

Julie wrote:
Had my 1st irc on taiko with toara-san o///o! http://puu.sh/jO2uj.jpg *laugh*
Only fixed this : 00:22:941 (103,104) - ctrl+g, since you been putting d for bass and k for that clap sound before? Also can follow the vocal pitch? xD

[Lundle's Oni]

01:11:691 (395,396,397) - kkd like this 01:11:039 (390,391,392) - and 01:12:344 (400,401,402) - , for the vocal and for the instrument sound to make these 2 01:11:854 (397,398) - different.

Only a few small thing to point out, since the whole mapset is pretty much consistent owob

go go go, before (|3[__] ~

sry no change..
thx mod

toara_fict

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toara_fict 2015-08-25T15:41:33+00:00

All Update :3

Julie

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Joined March 2013

Julie 2015-08-25T15:47:02+00:00

One more thing, can you one line on Lundle's Oni?