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Len

Beatmap Nominator

2,817 posts

Joined June 2012

Len 2015-07-29T13:54:42+00:00

awesome

byfar

1,186 posts

Joined July 2014

byfar 2015-07-31T18:08:54+00:00

hi dad. sexy hitsounds =w=

Asahina Momoko

1,008 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Asahina Momoko 2015-08-03T07:10:33+00:00

Fast wrote:
awesome

thanks Fast~

byfar wrote:
hi dad. sexy hitsounds =w=

arigatou xdd

Gamu

Elite Mapper

2,606 posts

Joined December 2010

Gamu 2015-08-05T16:11:25+00:00

really amazing map

Asahina Momoko

1,008 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Asahina Momoko 2015-08-06T01:31:48+00:00

Gamu wrote:
really amazing map

thanxxx

Meg

1,619 posts

Joined August 2012

Meg 2015-08-08T13:53:37+00:00

　

Asahina Momokoの伝説が今、始まる―――

Asahina Momoko

1,008 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Asahina Momoko 2015-08-08T14:31:54+00:00

Meg wrote:
　

Asahina Momokoの伝説が今、始まる―――

(´◔　‸◔`)(´◔　‸◔`)(´◔　‸◔`)

Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2015-08-08T14:52:02+00:00

I'm sad, there's no loli voice ;w;

Kathex

200 posts

Joined September 2014

Kathex 2015-08-08T15:06:06+00:00

general
02:18:575 - to the end= reduce volume and soft hitsounds
Beginner
Good
Normal
00:30:875 (3,4,1) - hard if you were a newbie, remove the slider, or do another thing
00:57:575 (3,4,5) - same^
01:07:025 (2) - remove?
Hard
Great
Hyper
00:34:400 (8) - strange, maybe u can do another rithmy
01:17:375 (4) - curve it
01:44:525 (5) - ^
Another
Execellent, no mods need
Lunatic
00:17:075 (1) - make it end at 00:17:225 and the aparence same that 00:15:575 (3) -
00:29:675 (1) - curve it to follow stream curve
00:38:675 (1,2) - - that jump can be longer
00:59:225 - and 00:59:300 - add more 2 hits to make a triple- following the song
01:31:175 (3) - until 01:45:275 (5) - u dont use stream, its great xd, but i recommend reduce snap distance between 01:32:375 (4,5) -; 01:33:275 (4,5) - ;01:34:175 (4,5) - ;01:37:775 (4,5) - ; 01:39:575 (4,5) -
02:18:575 - to the end use soft hitsounds and reduce volume
Good luck for rankind

5hiki

5hiki 2015-08-08T16:42:32+00:00

[Beginner]

01:20:075 (4) - wistleよりfinishの方が個人的にいいかな～って思う。後ろもじゃ～ん！！！って伸びてる音だしwistleだとちょっと物足りなく感じる

[Normal]

00:50:375 (3,4) - ctrl＋g 　この方が音的に合ってるかな～ってのとリズム的にいいと思うんだけどどうかな？

00:54:875 (1,2) -

2/1スライダーに変更しませんか？　00:55:157に音があるから1/1スライダーにするのも理解できるけどNormalなのでここはメロディーを拾って2/1にするのもいいかなって思います！

00:57:125 (2) - 　00:57:575 (3) - 　00:58:175 (5) - 　00:58:475 (1) - 　00:59:075 (2) -　 00:59:375 (3) - add finish , wistleとclapだけじゃ物足りなく感じるのと後ろの音が結構強めなので演出としてfinishを入れたあげた方がいいかな～って個人的に思います。

[Hard]

01:55:175 (2,3) -

音的にこの方が曲に合ってるかなって思うけどどうかな？

[Hyper]

01:06:575 (1,2) - ここの音取りをこんな感じしない？

01:06:575 (1,2) - の白線から音が始まってるからってのと01:07:175 (3) - から単発の方が曲に合ってるかな～って思います

[Another]

awesome

[Lunatic]

00:33:725 (3,4) - ctrl＋gした形の方が流れ的にいいのとこっちの方が窮屈な感じがしなくてやりやすいかな～って思います

01:06:575 (1,2) - Hyperと同じです

02:09:575 (1) - add nc

this map is sooo good i really hope you get it ranked

Asahina Momoko

1,008 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Asahina Momoko 2015-08-08T19:05:10+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
I'm sad, there's no loli voice ;w;

Ogura Yui should sing this ;w;w;w;

suricate1

suricate1 wrote:
general
02:18:575 - to the end= reduce volume and soft hitsounds　applied
Beginner
Good
Normal
00:30:875 (3,4,1) - hard if you were a newbie, remove the slider, or do another thing
00:57:575 (3,4,5) - same^
01:07:025 (2) - remove? these are stuffs thought on difficulty gap, so probably keep them is fine imo
Hard
Great
Hyper
00:34:400 (8) - strange, maybe u can do another rithmy
01:17:375 (4) - curve it hmm keep it, prefer current form
01:44:525 (5) - ^ ^
Another
Execellent, no mods need
Lunatic
00:17:075 (1) - make it end at 00:17:225 and the aparence same that 00:15:575 (3) - oh youre right, but hesitate to change because i like this slider shape.. so consider to change!
00:29:675 (1) - curve it to follow stream curve
00:38:675 (1,2) - - that jump can be longer hmm i dont think so
00:59:225 - and 00:59:300 - add more 2 hits to make a triple- following the song following "pi" sound, so dont put here
01:31:175 (3) - until 01:45:275 (5) - u dont use stream, its great xd, but i recommend reduce snap distance between 01:32:375 (4,5) -; 01:33:275 (4,5) - ;01:34:175 (4,5) - ;01:37:775 (4,5) - ; 01:39:575 (4,5) - this section is a bit hard, but possible to singletapping them :)
02:18:575 - to the end use soft hitsounds and reduce volume
Good luck for rankind

no commented = fixed, thanks suricate1!!

Alycesan

Alyce wrote:
[Beginner]

01:20:075 (4) - wistleよりfinishの方が個人的にいいかな～って思う。後ろもじゃ～ん！！！って伸びてる音だしwistleだとちょっと物足りなく感じる　確かに！でも落ち着いたところだしピアノ音なのでここはwhistle使いたいところ・・・！

[Normal]

00:50:375 (3,4) - ctrl＋g 　この方が音的に合ってるかな～ってのとリズム的にいいと思うんだけどどうかな？　了解！

00:54:875 (1,2) -

2/1スライダーに変更しませんか？　00:55:157に音があるから1/1スライダーにするのも理解できるけどNormalなのでここはメロディーを拾って2/1にするのもいいかなって思います！　ここら辺は1/1スライダー＋単発の形を基本にしておいたのでこのままで！(easyよりむずかしくするために；；)

00:57:125 (2) - 　00:57:575 (3) - 　00:58:175 (5) - 　00:58:475 (1) - 　00:59:075 (2) -　 00:59:375 (3) - add finish , wistleとclapだけじゃ物足りなく感じるのと後ろの音が結構強めなので演出としてfinishを入れたあげた方がいいかな～って個人的に思います。　入れました

[Hard]

01:55:175 (2,3) -

音的にこの方が曲合ってるかなって思うけどどうかな？　おｋ！

[Hyper]

01:06:575 (1,2) - ここの音取りをこんな感じしない？　ここはワルツっぽく3つずつで固めたいかな～

01:06:575 (1,2) - の白線から音が始まってるからってのと01:07:175 (3) - から単発の方が曲に合ってるかな～って思います

[Another]

awesome

[Lunatic]

00:33:725 (3,4) - ctrl＋gした形の方が流れ的にいいのとこっちの方が窮屈な感じがしなくてやりやすいかな～って思いますおおお！ナイス！！

01:06:575 (1,2) - Hyperと同じです　　上に同じく！

02:09:575 (1) - add nc

this map is sooo good i really hope you get it ranked

modありがとううううおうおうおおお

sionKotori

648 posts

Joined September 2011

sionKotori 2015-08-09T03:22:04+00:00

[General]

Artist, "LeaF"だけでいいんじゃないかなって思います。
https://soundcloud.com/leaf-7/wizdomiot (音雲)
http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cg ... &event=102 (東方音弾遊戯7 公式エントリーページ)
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm26533232 (BGA)
これらすべてがLeaFで統一されてるので。

[Hard]

00:06:275 (1,2,3,4) - 平行四辺形よりひし形のほうが綺麗に見える(個人的な考え)
code貼っておきますが綺麗なひし形になってる自信が全くないのでもし採用されるようでしたらそちらで微調整をお願いします。
SPOILER
CODE
```
450,348,6275,5,2,0:1:0:0:
309,269,6575,1,2,0:1:0:0:
451,187,6875,1,2,0:1:0:0:
310,108,7175,2,0,L|174:122,1,130.000000596046,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
```
01:04:775 (2,3,4,5) - ここも！
5をもうちょい左にするとひし形っぽくなって見栄えがいいと思います
SPOILER

02:14:975 (3) - ここ以降なんですけど、一番盛り上がってほしいところでノーツが抜けてる感があるので配置の提案です
とりあえずcode貼っておくのでそちら見るほうが手っ取り早いと思います。SV変えてる箇所もあるのでtiming pointと一緒に

CODE

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Combo2 : 136,255,255
Combo3 : 243,253,159
Combo4 : 130,130,0
Combo5 : 0,0,255

[HitObjects]
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262,351,137675,1,4,0:1:0:0:

(個人的にはこの配置めっちゃ好きなのでぜひ採用してもらいたい！)

[Hyper]

00:25:025 (4,5,6,7,8) - それぞれ少しでも隙間空けたほうが見やすくはなるかも。他のところも同じ。
01:06:575 (1,2,3,4,1) - 1-2-3-4-1で段々スペーシングが開いていく配置とかいいと思います
SPOILER
01:38:525 - ノーツほしい… 01:41:975 (2) - こっちも同じフレーズなのにノーツが置いてあるから統一してもいいかな～

[Another]

00:10:475 (3,4) - Ctrl+g, 00:10:775 (1,2) - と組み合わせて意図的に配置しているならスルーで！
00:31:475 (1,2) - 鳴ってる音的にこっちの方が自然かと思います
SPOILER
ちょこっと配置も考えてみたのでよかったら！
SPOILER
01:47:075 (1,2,3) - 自分だったら離す(完全に好みの問題)
02:12:875 (6) - これCtrl+gするとものすごくフィットすると思いまうｓ・・・

[Lunatic]

00:49:175 (1) - Ctrl+g(これも略)
01:09:275 (1) - これを 01:08:300 (2,3,4) - の中心に置きません？

†アーメウ†

Asahina Momoko

1,008 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Asahina Momoko 2015-08-09T04:10:31+00:00

sionKotori wrote:
[General]
Artist, "LeaF"だけでいいんじゃないかなって思います。
https://soundcloud.com/leaf-7/wizdomiot (音雲)
http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cg ... &event=102 (東方音弾遊戯7 公式エントリーページ)
http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm26533232 (BGA)
これらすべてがLeaFで統一されてるので。
了解！変えときまするるる

[Hard]
00:06:275 (1,2,3,4) - 平行四辺形よりひし形のほうが綺麗に見える(個人的な考え)
code貼っておきますが綺麗なひし形になってる自信が全くないのでもし採用されるようでしたらそちらで微調整をお願いします。
SPOILER
CODE
450,348,6275,5,2,0:1:0:0:
309,269,6575,1,2,0:1:0:0:
451,187,6875,1,2,0:1:0:0:
310,108,7175,2,0,L|174:122,1,130.000000596046,2|2,0:1|0:1,0:0:0:0:
01:04:775 (2,3,4,5) - ここも！
5をもうちょい左にするとひし形っぽくなって見栄えがいいと思います
SPOILER
02:14:975 (3) - ここ以降なんですけど、一番盛り上がってほしいところでノーツが抜けてる感があるので配置の提案です
とりあえずcode貼っておくのでそちら見るほうが手っ取り早いと思います。SV変えてる箇所もあるのでtiming pointと一緒に　参考にしつつ変えました！SVだけは変えたいのはやまやまだけどもhardだしおとなしくしときます～
CODE
[TimingPoints]
1775,300,3,2,1,50,1,0
2675,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
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[Colours]
Combo1 : 254,146,165
Combo2 : 136,255,255
Combo3 : 243,253,159
Combo4 : 130,130,0
Combo5 : 0,0,255

[HitObjects]
313,273,134075,6,0,P|357:256|426:309,1,130.000000596046,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
471,367,134525,2,0,L|474:211,1,130.000000596046,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,158,134975,2,0,P|402:142|376:144,1,65.000000298023,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
242,230,135275,2,0,P|279:218|325:225,1,74.7500017684696
432,327,135575,2,0,P|393:311|337:326,1,84.499996519327
191,295,135875,6,0,L|179:140,1,130.000000596046,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,277,136475,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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368,219,136700,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,219,136775,2,0,L|519:201,2,130.000000596046,6|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,351,137675,1,4,0:1:0:0:
(個人的にはこの配置めっちゃ好きなのでぜひ採用してもらいたい！)　
[Hyper]
00:25:025 (4,5,6,7,8) - それぞれ少しでも隙間空けたほうが見やすくはなるかも。他のところも同じ。　一応light insaneで隙間空けずにおいたほうがaimもしやすいかなと思うのでこれはこのままで！
01:06:575 (1,2,3,4,1) - 1-2-3-4-1で段々スペーシングが開いていく配置とかいいと思います　りょ！
SPOILER
01:38:525 - ノーツほしい… 01:41:975 (2) - こっちも同じフレーズなのにノーツが置いてあるから統一してもいいかな～　ここちょうどこのパートの折り返しで、ずっとノートある状態より一区切りつけた方がいいかなと思ってあえて置いてないのでkeepで！
[Another]
00:10:475 (3,4) - Ctrl+g, 00:10:775 (1,2) - と組み合わせて意図的に配置しているならスルーで！　00:10:625 (4,1) - の流れ考えるとたぶん今の方がいいのでこのままで～
00:31:475 (1,2) - 鳴ってる音的にこっちの方が自然かと思います　確かに！でも00:31:925 (3,4) - のピアノ音は3連で拾いたさあるのとhardとのギャップ考えてここ連打おきたいです！
SPOILER
ちょこっと配置も考えてみたのでよかったら！
SPOILER
01:47:075 (1,2,3) - 自分だったら離す(完全に好みの問題)　anotherだしはなしてもいっかｗｗ
02:12:875 (6) - これCtrl+gするとものすごくフィットすると思いまうｓ・・・　！！ナイス！！！
[Lunatic]
00:49:175 (1) - Ctrl+g(これも略)
01:09:275 (1) - これを 01:08:300 (2,3,4) - の中心に置きません？

†アーメウ†　†アーメウ†

ぴよさまmodありがとう～～！！！

CoLouRed GlaZeE

282 posts

Joined August 2013

CoLouRed GlaZeE 2015-08-09T05:24:20+00:00

Hi M4M~ poor English and poor mod.
[General]
fine...

[Beginner]
AR=3?
01:45:275 (1) - added a slider fold? and 01:47:075 (2) - this moved to x:256 y:192.

[Normal]
CS=3.5? 3.6 was a bit strange...
00:56:675 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here seems a bit of a mess 0.0 What about this slider end 00:56:675 (1) - moved to 00:57:125 - and removed this 00:57:125 (2) - , also these 00:57:725 (3,4) - too.
01:37:175 (2) - slider start addd sound finish
01:38:975 (2) - ^
01:40:775 (1) - added sound finish
01:42:575 (2) - slider start addd sound finish
01:44:375 (4) - ^
02:02:975 (2,3) - here used a slider replace them? because here was a bit difficult.

[Hard]
removed this 02:16:700 (4) -

[Hyper]
01:05:675 (4) - slider end removed sound whistle.

[Another]
00:50:600 - added a circle.
00:52:100 - ^

01:29:975 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - i like here!!!

[Lunatic]
Good stream!

Nice map and good luck~

Akiyama Mizuki

2,710 posts

Joined March 2009

Akiyama Mizuki 2015-08-09T07:19:36+00:00

ZUN remixed by LeaF -> LeaF? really? Damn, someone has to inform this to Muya

sionKotori

648 posts

Joined September 2011

sionKotori 2015-08-09T08:24:39+00:00

bbj0920 wrote:
ZUN remixed by LeaF -> LeaF? really? Damn, someone has to inform this to Muya

Are you saying add "ZUN remixed by" in front of composer's name? okay, Let's Rename ZUN remixed by UNDEAD CORPORATION, ZUN remixed by Halozy and ZUN remixed by Demetori. confirmed.

Histoire

482 posts

Joined December 2013

Histoire 2015-08-09T11:29:13+00:00

very bad mod ;w;

IRC

2015-08-09 18:23 Histoire: 00:12:575 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 
2015-08-09 18:23 Histoire: this part
2015-08-09 18:23 Histoire: is kill
2015-08-09 18:23 Histoire: especially if using HR
2015-08-09 18:23 Asahina Momoko: www
2015-08-09 18:24 Histoire: maybe set the distance just a little bit longer?
2015-08-09 18:25 Asahina Momoko: maybe that part with HR is ok through watching some HR testplaying
2015-08-09 18:25 Histoire: o ok
2015-08-09 18:25 Histoire: btw these are merely suggestion
2015-08-09 18:25 Histoire: im not pro like momoko xdxd so feel free to decline
2015-08-09 18:25 Asahina Momoko: no im not pro too xdd
2015-08-09 18:26 Histoire: 01:15:500 (2) - 
2015-08-09 18:26 Histoire: idk why i cant hit it everytime
2015-08-09 18:27 Asahina Momoko: hmm not on white tick? i guess
2015-08-09 18:27 Asahina Momoko: 1/4 before white tick
2015-08-09 18:27 Histoire: the other one is blue tick also
2015-08-09 18:27 Histoire: i dont think its the ticks lol
2015-08-09 18:27 Asahina Momoko: xd
2015-08-09 18:28 Histoire: maybe increase the distancing a little bit more?
2015-08-09 18:28 Histoire: further away from the slider
2015-08-09 18:30 Asahina Momoko: hmm then move 01:14:675 (1) - up
2015-08-09 18:30 Histoire: you could also move
2015-08-09 18:31 Histoire: the slider to x:39 y:320
2015-08-09 18:31 Histoire: its the same spacing as the 1st one
2015-08-09 18:32 Asahina Momoko: mm~ dont wanna break 01:15:500 (2,3,4) - placement tho xd
2015-08-09 18:33 Histoire: rip
2015-08-09 18:35 Asahina Momoko: rip
2015-08-09 18:35 Histoire: your lunatic diff
2015-08-09 18:35 Histoire: is really nice
2015-08-09 18:35 Histoire:  i dont think theres anything else i can mod it for LOL
2015-08-09 18:35 Histoire: maybe other diffs ww
2015-08-09 18:36 Asahina Momoko: www
2015-08-09 18:38 Histoire: http://puu.sh/juVFb/a574a398ce.jpg
2015-08-09 18:39 Histoire: 00:38:675 (1) -  the curve here ?
2015-08-09 18:39 Histoire: maybe curve it a little bit less
2015-08-09 18:40 Asahina Momoko: ah this one is
2015-08-09 18:40 Histoire: i understand you wanted the curve to make it sharp
2015-08-09 18:40 Histoire: at the point of the music
2015-08-09 18:40 Histoire: but maybe too curved? :x
2015-08-09 18:41 Asahina Momoko: this one has high sv
2015-08-09 18:41 Asahina Momoko: so if i put like
2015-08-09 18:41 Asahina Momoko: http://puu.sh/juVKp/81794b3a9d.jpg
2015-08-09 18:41 Asahina Momoko: can be cause of making 100
2015-08-09 18:42 Histoire: hmm
2015-08-09 18:42 Histoire: i guess it cant be helped ;w;
2015-08-09 18:42 Asahina Momoko: ;w;
2015-08-09 18:42 Histoire: `/np
2015-08-09 18:42 Histoire: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/754799 LeaF - Wizdomiot [Another]]
2015-08-09 18:43 Asahina Momoko: sorry crushed lol
2015-08-09 18:43 Histoire: nice 1 dad
2015-08-09 18:44 Asahina Momoko: www
2015-08-09 18:46 Histoire: http://puu.sh/juVRn/ce0cf4efcf.jpg
2015-08-09 18:46 Histoire: >crushed
2015-08-09 18:46 Asahina Momoko: literally
2015-08-09 18:46 Asahina Momoko: osu crushed lol
2015-08-09 18:47 Histoire: i think you mean crashed
2015-08-09 18:48 Asahina Momoko: o
2015-08-09 18:48 Asahina Momoko: yes loool
2015-08-09 18:49 Histoire: http://puu.sh/juW2l/2caf2c25c9.jpg
2015-08-09 18:49 Asahina Momoko: wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
2015-08-09 18:49 Asahina Momoko: you made just now?wwww
2015-08-09 18:49 Histoire: ya 
2015-08-09 18:49 Histoire: memes 4 days
2015-08-09 18:49 Histoire: ok ok back to modding
2015-08-09 18:49 Asahina Momoko: nicememe
2015-08-09 18:49 Histoire: LOL
2015-08-09 18:50 Asahina Momoko: wwww
2015-08-09 18:51 Histoire: http://puu.sh/juW8A/33bc915124.jpg
2015-08-09 18:51 Histoire: uhh green lines?
2015-08-09 18:51 Histoire: 00:20:075 - 
2015-08-09 18:52 Asahina Momoko: i copied lunatics hitsound so they're still there lol
2015-08-09 18:52 Histoire: o xdxd
2015-08-09 18:52 Asahina Momoko: not unrankable issue so didnt delete them because rude to do that ww
2015-08-09 18:53 Histoire: yeah but unnesccary ok watever xdxd
2015-08-09 18:53 Asahina Momoko: xdd
2015-08-09 18:53 Histoire: 00:22:475 (1) -  hmm, feels a bit off to use a repeat like that
2015-08-09 18:54 Asahina Momoko: hmm~
2015-08-09 18:54 Asahina Momoko: i put like that slide on higher diff xd
2015-08-09 18:55 Histoire: idk 
2015-08-09 18:55 Histoire: feels off for me 
2015-08-09 18:55 Histoire: o well~
2015-08-09 18:56 Histoire: 00:38:675 (1) -  ctrlg? and then put 00:38:975 (2) -  like further distance
2015-08-09 18:56 Histoire: plays nice
2015-08-09 18:57 Asahina Momoko: 00:38:375 (6) - this arrow goes down so wanna put next head
2015-08-09 18:58 Histoire: mm ok
2015-08-09 18:58 Histoire: 01:17:375 (2,1) -  nazi blanket xd
2015-08-09 18:58 Asahina Momoko: o ok xd
2015-08-09 19:00 Histoire: 01:52:475 (1) -  more nazi
2015-08-09 19:00 Histoire: 01:54:275 (1) -  youd probably want to change this too if oyu are fixing the 1sty
2015-08-09 19:01 Histoire: i cant really find anything else in another T T 
2015-08-09 19:02 Asahina Momoko: ok fixed them
2015-08-09 19:02 Asahina Momoko: ;;
2015-08-09 19:02 Histoire: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/751747 LeaF - Wizdomiot [Hyper]]
2015-08-09 19:03 Histoire: 00:38:675 (1) -  maybe higher SV?
2015-08-09 19:04 Asahina Momoko: oh that's good
2015-08-09 19:05 Histoire: yay im helping (∩・▽・∩)
2015-08-09 19:06 Asahina Momoko: thx for good suggestion(∩・▽・∩)(∩・▽・∩)
2015-08-09 19:06 Histoire: let me try to find more
2015-08-09 19:06 Histoire: ww
2015-08-09 19:06 Histoire: i have to like listen through like 20 times first ;w;
2015-08-09 19:06 Asahina Momoko: www
2015-08-09 19:08 Histoire: 00:41:975 (1,1) - 
2015-08-09 19:08 Histoire: slider sex
2015-08-09 19:08 Asahina Momoko: wwwww
2015-08-09 19:09 Histoire: http://puu.sh/juWQD/8841fb08f1.jpg maybe rotate? idk ;w;\
2015-08-09 19:10 Asahina Momoko: hm~ its not my taste ;w;
2015-08-09 19:10 Histoire: o ok~
2015-08-09 19:10 Histoire:  ehhh 00:52:475 (5,6,7,8) - 
2015-08-09 19:12 Histoire: 00:52:775 (7) -  maybe keep the same spacing as 00:52:475 (5,1) - ?
2015-08-09 19:12 Histoire: like this
2015-08-09 19:12 Histoire: http://puu.sh/juWY2/d1097fbae0.jpg
2015-08-09 19:13 Asahina Momoko: oh ok
2015-08-09 19:13 Histoire: but adjust it so that it doesnt break your pattern :3
2015-08-09 19:14 Histoire: 01:36:425 (2) -  ww fix blanket
2015-08-09 19:14 Asahina Momoko: sure :33
2015-08-09 19:14 Asahina Momoko: o ok
2015-08-09 19:14 Histoire: 01:36:875 (3) -  same
2015-08-09 19:15 Asahina Momoko: sure~
2015-08-09 19:15 Histoire: i dont think i can spot anything bad 
2015-08-09 19:16 Histoire: the flow, aesthetics and structure are all really nice\
2015-08-09 19:16 Histoire: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/750097 LeaF - Wizdomiot [Hard]]
2015-08-09 19:17 Histoire: 00:30:125 (2) -  nazi blanket
2015-08-09 19:18 Asahina Momoko: ok :3
2015-08-09 19:18 Histoire: 01:02:075 (1) -
2015-08-09 19:18 Histoire: wait
2015-08-09 19:18 Histoire: let me check
2015-08-09 19:19 Histoire: http://puu.sh/juXgC/879ae4fd48.jpg wo almost lol
2015-08-09 19:19 Asahina Momoko: lol
2015-08-09 19:19 Histoire: maybe just to be safe, move elsewhere? :x
2015-08-09 19:20 Asahina Momoko: changed position
2015-08-09 19:20 Histoire: 01:19:175 (2) -  fix blanket
2015-08-09 19:21 Histoire: thats all i have ;w;
2015-08-09 19:21 Asahina Momoko: ok~
2015-08-09 19:21 Histoire: my easy and normal modding is bad
2015-08-09 19:21 Histoire: so im done i guess xdxd
2015-08-09 19:22 Asahina Momoko: sure so helpful :D
2015-08-09 19:22 Histoire: ;w; thank you
2015-08-09 19:22 Histoire: i think it was bad imo
2015-08-09 19:22 Histoire: a bad mod
2015-08-09 19:22 Asahina Momoko: nono
2015-08-09 19:22 Histoire: i couldnt really help you much T T
2015-08-09 19:22 Histoire: the map was so good already ;A;
2015-08-09 19:22 Asahina Momoko: yea, so nice mod >w<
2015-08-09 19:24 Histoire: ;w;
2015-08-09 19:24 Histoire: do you want me to post on thread?
2015-08-09 19:24 Asahina Momoko: oh yea
2015-08-09 19:25 Asahina Momoko: then i can give kds

bad mod please take star
(∩・▽・∩)

Asahina Momoko

1,008 posts

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Asahina Momoko 2015-08-09T11:54:44+00:00

bbj0920 wrote:
ZUN remixed by LeaF -> LeaF? really? Damn, someone has to inform this to Muya

sionKotori wrote:
bbj0920 wrote:
ZUN remixed by LeaF -> LeaF? really? Damn, someone has to inform this to Muya
Are you saying add "ZUN remixed by" in front of composer's name? okay, Let's Rename ZUN remixed by UNDEAD CORPORATION, ZUN remixed by Halozy and ZUN remixed by Demetori. confirmed.

i'm not sure about how the artist name of Muya's mapset should be, but apparently this mapset should have "LeaF" as Kotori's mod i guess

CoLouRed GlaZeE

CoLouRed GlaZeE wrote:
Hi M4M~ poor English and poor mod.
[General]
fine...

[Beginner]
AR=3? keep it
01:45:275 (1) - added a slider fold? and 01:47:075 (2) - this moved to x:256 y:192. i dont like to use multiple reverse in easier diff, so keep it

[Normal]
CS=3.5? 3.6 was a bit strange... oh i missed as if it was 3.5 lol fixed
00:56:675 (1,2,3,4,5) - Here seems a bit of a mess 0.0 What about this slider end 00:56:675 (1) - moved to 00:57:125 - and removed this 00:57:125 (2) - , also these 00:57:725 (3,4) - too. applied 00:56:675 (1) - suggestion
01:37:175 (2) - slider start addd sound finish probably its noisy if i add the hitsound anymore
01:38:975 (2) - ^
01:40:775 (1) - added sound finish
01:42:575 (2) - slider start addd sound finish
01:44:375 (4) - ^
02:02:975 (2,3) - here used a slider replace them? because here was a bit difficult. not so difficult imo, so keep ;w;

[Hard]
removed this 02:16:700 (4) - considering gap between normal and hyper, keep it

[Hyper]
01:05:675 (4) - slider end removed sound whistle. fixed!

[Another]
00:50:600 - added a circle. not sounds loudly so i didnt put here and made there jump
00:52:100 - ^ ok

01:29:975 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - i like here!!!　(∩・▽・∩)

[Lunatic]
Good stream!　(∩・▽・∩)(∩・▽・∩)

Nice map and good luck~

thx for mod !! no commented = fixed

Histoire

thx for mod and star!!

poltoid

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Joined May 2013

poltoid 2015-08-09T14:53:12+00:00

(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ Have star , This is a really really good map. I'll try to mod ;3. Beginner, Normal and Hard are all fine.

- Hyper
  1. 00:28:775 (5,6) - Crazy ~~sanic fast~~ spacing consider reducing it :3.
  2. 00:29:675 (1,2) - I think if you make this a slider you can get better ~~quality Mountain Dew~~ flow. This part feels awkward to play imo.
  3. 00:52:475 (5,7) - [OPTIONAL] Maybe move 00:52:775 (7) - a little to the left so it doesn't overlap with 5
  4. 01:17:375 (4,5) - ~~sanic~~ the spacing is crazy here consider reducing it o.O.

Another
1. 00:16:475 (5,1) - ~~3fast5me~~ Spacing too much 4 me ;w; Maybe I'm just bad.
2. 00:25:175 (6,1) - Maybe keep spacing to 1x inbetween these two it makes it a bit weird :s
3. 00:26:975 (6,1) - ^
4. 00:34:175 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:08:675 (3,1) - maybe stack 01:09:275 (1) over 01:08:675 (3) ?
6. 01:24:125 (2,1) - This spacing doe... maybe reduce it to 2x instead of 3x it's a bit ~~too dank~~ extreme imo
7. 01:47:075 (1,2) - ^

Lunatic
1. Perfect diff, RANK IT FASTER I WANT MY PEE PEE'S.

Asahina Momoko

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Asahina Momoko 2015-08-09T15:24:44+00:00

pLolz wrote:

(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧ Have star , This is a really really good map. I'll try to mod ;3. Beginner, Normal and Hard are all fine.
Hyper
00:29:675 (1,2) - I think if you make this a slider you can get better ~~quality Mountain Dew~~ flow. This part feels awkward to play imo.
Another
01:24:125 (2,1) - This spacing doe... maybe reduce it to 2x instead of 3x it's a bit ~~too dank~~ extreme imo

thanks for mod and star, fixed these ones!!
about spacing i didnt fixed, i think it's playable and works well

HappyRocket88

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Joined May 2014

HappyRocket88 2015-08-09T18:42:41+00:00

Hai! From my queue

[General]

This folder's size is 28,2 MB, which is greater than the allowed size of 20.0 MB with video. Are you sure you tried to reduce the weith of each element?
I'm not sure of the cohesive idea for naming the diffs. If the Beginners isn't named as "Easy", why should be a normal? Normal should be replaced by "Standard"; same goes to Hard by "Advanced".
Lunatic can be named with other awesome and impressive name that fits with the song, I mean what about "Terror" or "Crisis" might work.

[Lunatic]

There is only 1775 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms. To fix this you go to .osu file and put in Audio Lead-in 2000.
There's an unsnapped inherited point section at 00:20:222 should be snapped to 00:20:225 .
You should put the stack lenuency at 3 as the Another's diff, because having 2 as a stack leniency could lead to problems.

[Another]

There's an unsnapped inherited point section at 00:20:222 should be snapped to 00:20:225 .

[Hyper]

There's an unsnapped inherited point section at 00:20:222 should be snapped to 00:20:225 .
Maybe AR -0.3 or 0.5 to don't have the same AR among the mapset.

[Hard]

Opinion: You must teach me how to maked the hard diffs as this one.

There's an unsnapped inherited point section at 00:20:222 should be snapped to 00:20:225 .

01:22:075 - The break here is 700 ms long, which is shorter than the recommended 750 ms. I'd rather go for removing because it doesn't make too much change in the diff.
01:34:775 (2) What about using a curve slider as you did with this 01:35:075 (3)

[Normal]

Opinion: I LOVE THIS DIFF!! Get ranked this map, please.
There's an unsnapped inherited point section at 00:20:222 should be snapped to 00:20:225 .

00:30:875 (3,4) I might say this is the only stacked pattern in this diff, what changes the polarity of the unstacked notes.
00:38:675 (3) I'd rather go to follow the slider's end of this 00:37:775 (2) to set the (3) here 252|228.
01:11:975 (2) ^ 256|140
01:33:575 (3,1) This blanket can be improved at the section end.

[Beginner]

Opinion: Overall it's a weird slider-shaped Beginner but it flows veryy good. Congratulations.
There's an unsnapped inherited point section at 00:20:222 should be snapped to 00:20:075 .

00:27:875 (1) What about setting this circle here 204|288 to keep the lineal flow?
00:35:075 (1) ^ 216|312
00:29:675 (1) Just a minor detail with that slider shape. http://puu.sh/jvgUx/3db429ec16.jpg
01:46:625 I highly suggest to add a note here. It seems to be a empty section that doesn't flow good.
02:11:375 (3) Put it here to keep the curvy pattern 88|144.

Good luck with the mapset!

Meg

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Meg 2015-08-09T23:42:05+00:00

呼ばれて(呼ばれていない)飛び出てジャジャジャジャ～ン

General

Widescreen Supportが入ってるゾ～　多分いらないはずです
LeaFさんって00:58:475 - ここから鳴ってるﾃﾃﾃｰﾃｯﾃｰみたいな音好きだよね(どうでもいい)

Beginner

01:10:775 (5,1) - Easyなら無難にsliderにした方が良いかと。全体的に単発が多くて100出やすくなってる
01:14:375 (2,3) - ^ こっちはどっちでもいいです

Normal

01:06:575 (1,2,3) - 普通に1/2 sliders ×3の方が合ってる気がしたけどこっちもいいですね。わかりません
01:39:875 (3,1) - おそらく今までのNCの入れ方で行くとここのNC逆です。見た目を取るか統一性を取るかですね
01:45:275 (1,2) - 何とかして01:44:375 (4) - を綺麗に囲むブランケットにしたい"想い"がありますが少々厳しそうですね・・・

Hard

00:56:675 (1,2) - 3/4 sliderじゃダメですか？
01:21:875 (1) - 何かしらhitsoundが欲しい・・・独立してるcircleで音がついてないのは寂しい

Hyper

01:36:425 (2) - stackずれてます
いいね

Another

これに関してはHyperとの区別をわかりやすくつけるためにAR9.1とか9.2とか使っても問題ないと思います
00:46:775 (3) - 1/2 sliders ×2の方がスムーズなaimを実現することができます
00:51:575 (2) - これを00:50:675 (3) - とちゃんとスタックさせてないのはわざと？

ASAHINA MOMOKO’S WORLD(Lunatic)

00:27:125 (3) - ここにキック入れるのはあまり音にはまってない感じがしますが・・・修正が難しそうですね。個人的には13連の方がいいと思いました
00:59:075 - 5連打で良くね？ダメ？
01:30:875 (1) - こういうところにはしっかりシンバルのhitsoundが欲しいです。このパートで他にもありますが多分わかると思うので省きます
01:45:275 (5) - ここはあえてキックにしてない感じですか？

Asahina Momoko

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Asahina Momoko 2015-08-10T00:55:04+00:00

HappyRocket88

HappyRocket88 wrote:
Hai! From my queue

[General]
This folder's size is 28,2 MB, which is greater than the allowed size of 20.0 MB with video. Are you sure you tried to reduce the weith of each element?　yea actually it has huge file size, but all hitsounds, mp3 and video has reduced much;;
I'm not sure of the cohesive idea for naming the diffs. If the Beginners isn't named as "Easy", why should be a normal? Normal should be replaced by "Standard"; same goes to Hard by "Advanced". this song is made for BMS(another rhythm game), and used like Beginner, Normal, Hard and so on. there're another ranked map that has same difficulty name.
Lunatic can be named with other awesome and impressive name that fits with the song, I mean what about "Terror" or "Crisis" might work. considerd it, but i decided to make it as simple name

[Lunatic]
You should put the stack lenuency at 3 as the Another's diff, because having 2 as a stack leniency could lead to problems. this is my taste for highest diff, so let me use that;;

[Hyper]
Maybe AR -0.3 or 0.5 to don't have the same AR among the mapset. probably insane which has high BPM like this one shouldnt have lower AR

[Hard]
01:34:775 (2) What about using a curve slider as you did with this 01:35:075 (3) hmm i like current flow ;w;

[Normal]
00:30:875 (3,4) I might say this is the only stacked pattern in this diff, what changes the polarity of the unstacked notes. there are another stacked objects in this diff
00:38:675 (3) I'd rather go to follow the slider's end of this 00:37:775 (2) to set the (3) here 252|228. avoid overlapping with 00:36:875 (1) - , changed 00:37:775 (2) - tail.
01:11:975 (2) ^ 256|140 keep it, current one is ok imo

[Beginner]
00:27:875 (1) What about setting this circle here 204|288 to keep the lineal flow? next slider put on the right, so keep it
00:35:075 (1) ^ 216|312 hmm current place is best i think
00:29:675 (1) Just a minor detail with that slider shape. http://puu.sh/jvgUx/3db429ec16.jpg adjusted

Good luck with the mapset!

others fixed, thanks for mod~!

iMegu--

Meg wrote:
呼ばれて(呼ばれていない)飛び出てジャジャジャジャ～ン hiイマゲニキ

General
LeaFさんって00:58:475 - ここから鳴ってるﾃﾃﾃｰﾃｯﾃｰみたいな音好きだよね(どうでもいい)　せやねんな　なんかこれcalamity fortuneの対の曲として作ったみたいな事かいてたから意識したんじゃないかな(適当)
Beginner
01:10:775 (5,1) - Easyなら無難にsliderにした方が良いかと。全体的に単発が多くて100出やすくなってる　01:11:075 (1) - をスライダーの終わりにしたくないのでこれはこのままで
01:14:375 (2,3) - ^ こっちはどっちでもいいです　上に同じく
Normal
01:06:575 (1,2,3) - 普通に1/2 sliders ×3の方が合ってる気がしたけどこっちもいいですね。わかりません　うーん01:07:475 (1) - に向けてあげてく感じにしたいけどそれもいいしちょっと考えるンゴ・・・
01:45:275 (1,2) - 何とかして01:44:375 (4) - を綺麗に囲むブランケットにしたい"想い"がありますが少々厳しそうですね・・・　その"想い"すごいわかるけどうまいことできないもんかねこれ
Hard

全修正
Hyper

全修正
Another
これに関してはHyperとの区別をわかりやすくつけるためにAR9.1とか9.2とか使っても問題ないと思います　うーんそれ考えたけどぎりinsaneだしここは９でいきたいかなぁ
00:51:575 (2) - これを00:50:675 (3) - とちゃんとスタックさせてないのはわざと？アッ・・・
全修正
ASAHINA MOMOKO’S WORLD(Lunatic)
00:27:125 (3) - ここにキック入れるのはあまり音にはまってない感じがしますが・・・修正が難しそうですね。個人的には13連の方がいいと思いました　うーん個人的にこの3連最後キック好きだからこのままでｗ
01:45:275 (5) - ここはあえてキックにしてない感じですか？　ここはあえてキックにしてないですね～～
いいね

サンクス！消してあるのに関しては全部直した

added one hitsound and changed artist name from
ZUN remixed by LeaF ⇒ LeaF

Silky

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Joined October 2014

Silky 2015-08-13T11:22:35+00:00

はーい
遅くなりました

Unrankable
Highly recommend
Suggestion

General

02:15:875 - duplicate green line
全Diffっぽいです・・・
00:59:675 - ここHitsound欲しいですねあえて付けて無い感じですか？

Beginner

00:35:975 (2) - 00:36:275こっちにClapな気がするんですがどうでしょう
01:32:675 (3) - 私ならNC入れます

Normal

01:48:875 (1,2) - Switch NCで他のDiffとNCを合わせてもいいかもしれません
01:56:975 (3) - Reverseのところ Whistle消してClapの方がいいと思います

Hard

00:56:675 (5) - Add NC?
これより難しいDiffにも言えるんですが01:06:275の音量下げませんか?-10%くらいしてもいいと思います
01:21:875 - ここのBreak無理に入れなくてもいいと思います

Hyper

00:21:575 (1) - 私はCtrl+Gした方が好きですね
Good

Another

01:45:725 (1,2,3) - 01:45:800 01:46:250 01:46:700の音量-20%しませんか？
01:46:625 (3) - 物凄い細かいですけどY-3くらいすると完全に綺麗な並びになりますね

Lunatic

クリアできません

01:45:725 (1,2,3) - same as Another

nice map

Asahina Momoko

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Asahina Momoko 2015-08-13T14:15:52+00:00

fuyuyu- wrote:
はーい
遅くなりました

Unrankable
Highly recommend
Suggestion

General
02:15:875 - duplicate green line
全Diffっぽいです・・・ oh・・・・やらかしてましたね、消します！
00:59:675 - ここHitsound欲しいですねあえて付けて無い感じですか？後ろのカシャって音聞いてほしいかなーと思って他のdiffもここつけてないのです

Beginner
01:32:675 (3) - 私ならNC入れます　代わりの部分でNCパターン調整しました

Normal
01:48:875 (1,2) - Switch NCで他のDiffとNCを合わせてもいいかもしれません　01:48:875 (1,2) - の距離そこそこ離れてるのでここはこのままで！

Hyper
00:21:575 (1) - 私はCtrl+Gした方が好きですね　うーんこれすきなのでこのままで！
Good

nice map

modありです、助かりました～！！

他のとこは全部直しておきました！

toybot

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Joined June 2013

toybot 2015-08-13T16:35:02+00:00

have a star i can't mod this

Asahina Momoko

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Asahina Momoko 2015-08-13T17:19:09+00:00

toybot wrote:
have a star i can't mod this

thanks ;w;

Akiyama Mizuki

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Joined March 2009

Akiyama Mizuki 2015-08-13T23:36:53+00:00

sionKotori wrote:
bbj0920 wrote:
ZUN remixed by LeaF -> LeaF? really? Damn, someone has to inform this to Muya
Are you saying add "ZUN remixed by" in front of composer's name? okay, Let's Rename ZUN remixed by UNDEAD CORPORATION, ZUN remixed by Halozy and ZUN remixed by Demetori. confirmed.

Never meant that way, tho

SyraxAxoJaxco

190 posts

Joined March 2014

SyraxAxoJaxco 2015-08-15T04:24:50+00:00

The video offset is still wrong. I think 592 ms is the perfect one..

(Too) simple mod, right?

Asahina Momoko

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Asahina Momoko 2015-08-15T07:52:39+00:00