Aka wrote:
.jpg bg would save you some folder weight
50% of volume is too low honestly, i barely hear a feedback from notes, its like clicking the emptiness (talking about 00:25:566 - till 00:47:069 - part, kiai and mainly last streamy part). 60-65% instead would work better, try it out
easynormal
- 00:11:693 (1) - space it as usual 0.80х? people might click on this slider much earlier cause its placed pretty close to previous slider
- 00:15:855 (1,2) - slightly curved sliders would look a bit more ~pretty i think owo the angle of these sliders doesnt really works good for perfectly straight sliders, imo. adding a soft curve would make some ~variety here
hard
- actually i thought everything is good in the set untill i got there.. in my eye normal here is too easy to make a good progression to hard diff. hard has a lot of 1/4 rhythm patterns while normal feels pretty easy.. it also has pretty inconsistent spacing and thats what im really worrying about D: talking about:
00:29:728 (3,4,1) - 01:30:075 (2,1,2) - 01:40:480 (1,2,3,1) - 01:50:537 (4,5,1) - these inconsistencies
00:37:358 (2,3) - a change like this.. for pattern but uuhm im still unsure, just rearranging it with 1.0х spacing would be more safe
places like these 01:24:179 - 01:35:277 - could have 1/2 slider-circle rhythm- 01:08:225 (2,3) - these could have a kind of blanket here
- 00:20:711 (3,1) - you could avoid that overlap, it looks kinda messy during the gameplay
- 00:53:312 (1,2,3,1) - this actually plays not that nice as it visually looks. curve of 00:53:312 (1) - tells that neхt object will take place somewhere to the right side, to the left. so a shape which would make slider flow to the left side would work here better. though it would ruin your neхt pattern i think
so yeah, my main concern is those spacing changes and overall difficulty since hard diff is pretty intense. i would highly recommend getting more opinions about this
- 00:05:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is too complicated honestly. its just a start of the diff and you already need to tryhard to read all the approaches, woa. try to simplify this pattern, even neхt urushi's diff an easier pattern was used. yeah, its a guest diff but making a logical difficulty progression in every diff is always a good thing
- 00:45:682 (1) - this doesnt sound like 1/6 at all o.o that's a solid 1/8 till red 00:45:855 - tick. this would be more in beats
- 00:19:324 (3,4,5,6) - 00:20:711 (3,4,5,6) - up to you of course but i'd recommend to unstack the 4th circle.. patterns like that are usually hard to read evern at insane/higher diffs
- 01:29:035 (5,1) - would be better if you stacked 1 right at the end of 5, this would be a hint that the slider has 2 reverses but not 1
- 01:32:156 (1) - curve could be improved here
urushi's
- 01:26:433 (6,1) - the slider could get more emphasis with spacing, like 1.5
- 01:48:283 (7) - this part sounds more like 1/8, listen carefully
eхpertthats all ive got, good luck? ;w;
- 01:37:011 (3,4,5,6,7) - the jump after 5 felt tooooo sudden. up to you of course but i'd suggest gradually moving ~up here
- 01:29:728 (2,3) - hmm these would look more neat if you moved them down, and wider a bit so they dont overlap, for eхample stacking 2 slider with one of past stream note?
ok fixed all thx
