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Hollow Wings wrote:
as your reqGeneral
- only one tag? i think you can add more...
Expert
- 00:03:543 (3) - how about remove this note? double tapping can have more fun than triple one here imo. some kind of same to 00:06:318 (3) - and even maybe 00:05:798 (5) - . it's up to you thou.
- 00:55:739 (3) - piano beats are really heated here even with big jumps at 00:55:393 (1,2) - , so i think you should replace this repeating slider with 1/3slider+note rhythm with a jump as well, otherwise it'll play a bit odd.
- 01:43:688 it'll be really strange to ignore this really heavy beat and follow other light beats nearby, i think you really need to reconsider the rhythm style from this part.
- 01:48:110 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern's so hard to read, maybe move 1 and 3's slider ends to down side.
- generally good map, but still don't agree with the rhythm setting at the last part. that electrical drum beat track is too obvious to notice, idk if crashed your style but that's just my opinion.
Urushi's Insane
- 01:54:006 (1) - you can just spread a note out at the end tick, that'll play better imo.
- good map, star.
Hard
- 00:52:272 (2,1,2) - don't overlap the arrow, this is a must fix.
- and with same rhythm doubt at last part as well.
Normal
- 00:24:873 (1) - note necessary to set nc here imo.
- 01:02:676 (4) - maybe you need to set 2/3 slider here.
- so much 1/2 objs... thou rhythm is simple enough.
well... really good map, but for the rhythm style in top and hard diff, and difficulty in lower diff, i expect you need to do a bit more work.Easy
- 00:35:277 (1,1) - leave a 4/1 gap after spinner in easy diff, this is a must fix.
- not that recommend you set series note only patterns like the part from 00:48:110 (1) - or 01:23:832 (1,2,3,4,5) - , that maybe too hard to noobs or beginners.
if you think your map's ok to me, you can still poke me later, with things i've mentioned all fixed thou.
good luck.
Aka wrote:
.jpg bg would save you some folder weight
50% of volume is too low honestly, i barely hear a feedback from notes, its like clicking the emptiness (talking about 00:25:566 - till 00:47:069 - part, kiai and mainly last streamy part). 60-65% instead would work better, try it out
easynormal
- 00:11:693 (1) - space it as usual 0.80х? people might click on this slider much earlier cause its placed pretty close to previous slider
- 00:15:855 (1,2) - slightly curved sliders would look a bit more ~pretty i think owo the angle of these sliders doesnt really works good for perfectly straight sliders, imo. adding a soft curve would make some ~variety here
hard
- actually i thought everything is good in the set untill i got there.. in my eye normal here is too easy to make a good progression to hard diff. hard has a lot of 1/4 rhythm patterns while normal feels pretty easy.. it also has pretty inconsistent spacing and thats what im really worrying about D: talking about:
00:29:728 (3,4,1) - 01:30:075 (2,1,2) - 01:40:480 (1,2,3,1) - 01:50:537 (4,5,1) - these inconsistencies
00:37:358 (2,3) - a change like this.. for pattern but uuhm im still unsure, just rearranging it with 1.0х spacing would be more safe
places like these 01:24:179 - 01:35:277 - could have 1/2 slider-circle rhythm- 01:08:225 (2,3) - these could have a kind of blanket here
- 00:20:711 (3,1) - you could avoid that overlap, it looks kinda messy during the gameplay
- 00:53:312 (1,2,3,1) - this actually plays not that nice as it visually looks. curve of 00:53:312 (1) - tells that neхt object will take place somewhere to the right side, to the left. so a shape which would make slider flow to the left side would work here better. though it would ruin your neхt pattern i think
so yeah, my main concern is those spacing changes and overall difficulty since hard diff is pretty intense. i would highly recommend getting more opinions about this
- 00:05:624 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is too complicated honestly. its just a start of the diff and you already need to tryhard to read all the approaches, woa. try to simplify this pattern, even neхt urushi's diff an easier pattern was used. yeah, its a guest diff but making a logical difficulty progression in every diff is always a good thing
- 00:45:682 (1) - this doesnt sound like 1/6 at all o.o that's a solid 1/8 till red 00:45:855 - tick. this would be more in beats
- 00:19:324 (3,4,5,6) - 00:20:711 (3,4,5,6) - up to you of course but i'd recommend to unstack the 4th circle.. patterns like that are usually hard to read evern at insane/higher diffs
- 01:29:035 (5,1) - would be better if you stacked 1 right at the end of 5, this would be a hint that the slider has 2 reverses but not 1
- 01:32:156 (1) - curve could be improved here
urushi's
- 01:26:433 (6,1) - the slider could get more emphasis with spacing, like 1.5
- 01:48:283 (7) - this part sounds more like 1/8, listen carefully
eхpertthats all ive got, good luck? ;w;
- 01:37:011 (3,4,5,6,7) - the jump after 5 felt tooooo sudden. up to you of course but i'd suggest gradually moving ~up here
- 01:29:728 (2,3) - hmm these would look more neat if you moved them down, and wider a bit so they dont overlap, for eхample stacking 2 slider with one of past stream note?
18:56 Kloyd: hi
18:56 Ichigaki: hello
18:56 Kloyd: r u free to mod?
18:57 Ichigaki: a bit
18:57 Ichigaki: I'll try it
18:57 *Kloyd is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/648443 DJ TOTTO vs TOTTO - Vajra]
18:57 Ichigaki: Vajra :3
18:57 Kloyd: thanku
18:57 Ichigaki: irc?
18:58 Ichigaki: or forum post?
18:58 Kloyd: anything u want
18:58 Ichigaki: IRC then
18:58 *Ichigaki is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/648443 DJ TOTTO vs TOTTO - Vajra [Expert]]
18:58 Kloyd: ok
19:02 Ichigaki: 00:23:139 (3,4) - this jump kinda too hard imo, maybe try it to move 00:23:139 (3) - to x:160 y:336 (triangle 00:22:792 (1,2,3) - )
19:03 Kloyd: how about 200:290
19:04 Kloyd: ah no
19:04 Kloyd: urs better
19:07 Ichigaki: 00:57:474 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - why this different with the others like 00:59:208 (2,3,4) - ,01:00:595 (2,3,4) - 01:01:983 (2,3,4) - ?
19:08 Kloyd: obviously different phase begins here 00:58:861 -
19:08 Kloyd: but i thought i should change that for playabiliyt
19:08 Kloyd: ty
19:11 Kloyd: http://puu.sh/iqTMu/48ed000409.jpg
19:11 Ichigaki: seems nice
19:11 Ichigaki: :3
19:11 Kloyd: 00:58:399 (2,3) - and i gonna make this more easier and playable
19:11 Kloyd: wait
19:11 Kloyd: http://puu.sh/iqTOC/8473e17924.jpg
19:12 Ichigaki: make (2) closer would be good imo
19:12 Kloyd: http://puu.sh/iqTRv/087b99d504.jpg
19:13 Ichigaki: nice
19:14 Ichigaki: 01:28:341 (2) - move this to about 56:248 so 01:27:994 (1,2,3) - will be have a good spacing
19:15 Kloyd: and i felt smth strange only unstacking this one 01:27:821 (6,7,1) -
19:16 Ichigaki: hmm, ok
19:16 Kloyd: done
19:17 Ichigaki: 01:29:728 (2) - this overlap kinda hard to read due to similar combo colour with this streams 01:28:948 (4,5,6,7,8) - , so make 01:29:728 (2,3) - closer with 01:30:075 (1) - will be better imo
19:18 Kloyd: ? http://puu.sh/iqU5T/52877ada23.jpg
19:18 Ichigaki: yes
19:18 Kloyd: ok
19:21 Ichigaki: 01:49:324 - add a note here for missing sound?
19:22 Kloyd: then i'd better change that circle 6 into kickslider
19:23 Kloyd: fixed
19:24 Ichigaki: 01:50:884 - add a note here too?
19:26 Kloyd: oh it can be messy
19:26 Kloyd: plz wait ill do my best
19:26 Kloyd: ok
19:26 Kloyd: http://puu.sh/iqUra/6b80718eca.jpg
19:27 Ichigaki: seems okay, but is 01:50:884 (7,1) - okay?
19:28 Kloyd: changed path http://puu.sh/iqUwP/5b36c9b6b9.jpg
19:29 Ichigaki: should be fine now
19:29 Ichigaki: anyway, you seems checked widescreen support, right?
19:30 Kloyd: yea
19:30 Ichigaki: is that okay?
19:30 Kloyd: it that can be a problem?
19:30 Kloyd: is\
19:30 Ichigaki: well, actually not really
19:30 Ichigaki: but all diffs should be the same
19:31 Kloyd: same already
19:31 Ichigaki: oh ya, just checked
19:31 Ichigaki: okay
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/322526 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋhandsome wrote:
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Fast bubble, yes!Priti wrote:
reboob
caren_sk wrote:
always nice job
I think it doesn't matter how it's spelled tbh.Kloyd wrote:
small one is right one.Kuo Kyoka wrote:
One map is: Varja
Then other map is: varja
LOL?
Anyway, standard finally came out, love this <3 congratulations