Sangzin wrote:

Hello! From your request!
스토리보드 취한다 부럽네 어떻게하심 가르쳐주셈 처음 하는거라 쪼금 이상하네요 ㅋㅋ

[General]

• 
  콤보컬러가 없군요? 안넣으려고 한거면 알겠습니다만......일단 콤보컬러 깜빡하신거면 넣어주세요
  No combo color? If you want to......anyway, If you forget to add combo colors, Add.

[Insane]

• 
  00:01:845 (3) - Finish는 빼는게 좋을 것 같네요 넵
  00:02:782 (2) - ^ 넵
  00:08:220 (1,2) - 각각 Ctrl+G? 디스턴스 망해짐 ;;
  00:13:845 (7) - ^ 익;
  00:15:157 (4) - ^ 넵
  00:26:595 (2,3,4) - 이렇게? 지금께 약간 괜찮으거 같은데;; 나중에 다시 불께염!
  00:34:282 (3,5) - 겹친게 조금 이상해보이네요. 넵
  01:06:720 (1,2) - 각각 Ctrl+G 음;
  01:18:532 (5) - 위쪽으로 배치하는 것도 나쁘지 않을 듯? 디스턴스땜에 더 내림 ㅋㅋ
  01:28:844 (6,7,8,9,1) - 좌우반전해서 배치하는게 좋아보이네요 넵

[Easy]

• 
  00:11:220 (1) - 이지에서 스피너 후에 간격은 4비트여야합니다. 00:12:720에서 끝내거나 슬라이더를 삭제해야 언랭이 안됩니다. 전차추천 네, 고첬습니다!
  00:17:595 (2,3) - 이렇게 엇박(?)으로 되어있으면 헷갈리지 않을까요? 아, 이런건건 괜찮아요!
  01:06:720 (3) - 슬라이더 폼이 이상해보이네요.이런걸로 충분할 듯 하네요 고쳤습니다!
  01:17:970 (2) - 앵커 포인트 너무많이 쓰신 것 같네요. 그냥 하나로도 충분합니다. 고쳤습니다!

아니 뭔 키스씬이 이렇게 많아욬ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 두개밖애 없어요!!!
GL! 고맙습니다!

Sangzin wrote:

[Manul's Normal]

• 
  00:25:470 (5,6,1) - As far as I know, normal also use same DS. Sometimes they make like this, but this pattern is too many!!! Maybe it will dangerous. I prefer change these patterns.
  I just tell you this problems. maybe you'll change many patterns. Actually I don't know what to mod. Sorry

fuyuyu- wrote:

from my queue

Unrankable
Highly recommend
Suggestion

General

1. Artist:Kawada Mami It's Mami Kawada! Haha (THE SOURCE AND STUFF)

Easy

1. AR+1 ehh
2. 00:24:720 (1,2) - Switch NC ok
3. 01:17:970 (2) - is this clap necessary? yes
4. 01:51:345 (2) - Add clap on slider's start and end? sounds better imo. ok
5. 01:52:470 (3) - Same as above, Remove clap on slider's start and add clap on slider's end. ok
6. 02:05:407 (1) - moves the spinner's end 02:09:720? this spinner is not suitable for Easy diff imo. ok

Insane

1. 00:14:220 - duplicate green line ok
2. 00:38:220 - ^ ok
3. 00:13:001 (2) - Remove note? I feel it unnaturally. no
4. 00:35:595 (1) - is this NC necessary? ok
5. 00:56:970 (5) - Add clap on slider's end? ok
6. 01:10:095 (2) - Remove clap ok

Nがアカン
GL~

[ Seni ] wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue.

Nothing to say about Insane. Except maybe even out 00:11:220 (1,2,3) - with distance snap. Thanks!!
Also, what ever this is, don't think it matters though:


I fixed it anyways!



Great map, gl.

Darcsol wrote:

Mod request


[General]

1. (UNRANKABLE) Why is Insane the only diff that uses custom colors? Please include custom colors to all diffs. FIXED
2. Normally I'm against different BGs in diffs, but at least they're consistent and they're used on the storyboard.

[Storyboard]

1. 00:13:563 - This position of the BG should be the first thing you see it on 00:13:376 . Move it back so you could avoid the awkward zoom motion. Fixed
2. 00:16:610 - I'm not sure what the purpose of this jump motion for? When you do these type of effects, it's meant to show emphasis, not just to the song but to the BG as well. Add a point of interest on the BG. FIXED
3. 00:19:657 - The sudden transition to the girl's face is creepy. Add a transition like the others. I like it though :c
4. 00:19:657 - I highly recommend editing"flashh.png" to cover the entire screen instead of the bottom. No
5. 00:22:657 - ^ No
6. 00:22:891 - There's an awkward pause here. Why is the transition slower here than in 00:20:032 or 00:26:063 ? FIXED
7. 00:25:657 - The transition to "0045_2DJ_00042.jpg" should start from the top or bottom of the screen instead of the left again. Look fine to me
8. 00:35:126 - The motion on "1007_2DJ_01004.jpg" should go to the same direction 00:32:220 but a bit slower instead. same direction seem weird
9. 00:37:282 - The motion on "0080_2DJ_00077.jpg" to the points of interest are too fast. Add tiny pauses on 00:37:423 and 00:37:610 for clearer emphasis. Current is fine
10. 00:39:532 - The "flashh.png" effect is not necessary. I like it with it
11. 00:39:720 - The transition to "0037_2DJ_00034.jpg" should be reversed to the right instead.
12. 00:44:407 - The point of interest to the Pocky is waaay too fast. Add a tiny pause on 00:44:384 for clearer emphasis or don't bother the Pocky at all. FIXED
13. 00:44:829 - I think it's better to replace the "flashh.png" with a "white.jpg" instead. dynamically better with black.
14. 00:44:970 - The motion on "0071_2DJ_00068.jpg" should be slightly faster. Fixed
15. 00:47:407 - Avoid this motion. Go straight to the girl's face instead for better emphasis. I like this
16. 00:47:970 - The motion of this BG should be the same direction as before, a pan to the left instead of an awkward slow pan going down. Fixed
17. 00:53:126 - The transition to "0028_2DJ_00025.jpg" should start on the right instead, emphasizing the girl's jump to the MC(?). current is fine, as next time i show this picture will be the way you meant!
18. 00:56:829 - The transition to "0151_2DJ_00148.jpg" should start on the left instead, emphasizing the girl's direction to the MC(?). girl moves towards where MC is. this movement should be sufficient as your way is going opposite :s
19. 00:56:970 - In addition to above, the motion should also slowly zoom up to the girl's face for further emphasis. Slowly zooming seems quite weird to me. I'll have to figure out what you are trying to say :l
20. 00:59:829 - The motion on "0194_2DJ_00191.jpg" should go to the same direction as 00:59:220 . Current one matches better!
21. 01:08:595 - Why is there no transition here? It's too sudden and harsh on the eyes. Fixed
22. 01:08:970 - Try to make the motion less "bouncy". lessened the movements
23. 01:09:532 - ^ lessened the movements
24. 01:10:095 - Remove this point. The motion should not slow down. :l
25. 01:12:720 - The motion must continue to the next transition. Fixed
26. 01:12:954 - Remove the "White.jpg". It's unnecessary. Ehhh
27. 01:14:079 - A "White.jpg" can fit here. Ehhh
28. 01:16:048 - Instead of a transition-to-black, make it a transition-to-white using "White.jpg" instead. black gives more impact!
29. 01:31:282 - Slow down on the rotation. Fixed
30. 01:33:485 - The motion on "0198_2DJ_00195.jpg" should be the same direction as 01:32:126 . going opposite direction is much better. I tried that mod ur mod, and didn't look quite as nice x)
31. 01:38:782 - Why the transition from the right again? Transition from the top instead. directions are reversed after vertical transition. More symmetric!
32. 01:39:157 - Instead of an awkward "jump" motion, the BG should not move. Instead, on 01:39:345 - have a small but sudden zoom-in to the vicinity around the girl's face. I'll come back to that!
33. 01:44:220 - "0158_2DJ_00155.jpg" should have the same transition as 01:43:376 . current one fits better, changing up too much on these kinds of scene seems weirid
34. 02:03:720 - Transition-to-white instead. black gives more dynamic. I already used white flashes and white glow through entire map
35. 02:06:345 - I don't know why this transition is there. Remove it. makes it more interesting though rather than just moving image for long time.
    
    Honestly, I recommend adjusting the storyboard so you wouldn't have to display the epilepsy warning. There really shouldn't be strobe-inducing effects on these types of songs. flash gives better feel to the SB in my opinion. thus epilepsy warning has to be turned on.

[Easy]

1. 00:01:470 (1) - Why is the slider shaped like that? Never in the diff there is a slider like that. Clean it up. LOL OKAY!
2. 00:02:220 (2) - ^ Slightly enhanced, i like the way it looks tho
3. 00:05:220 (3) - An ugly slider. Clean it up. I like the slider tho :l
4. 00:24:345 (3,4) - Are these two finish hitsounds necessary? Fixed
5. 00:38:220 (2) - New combo? applied, but I don't know if is ok
6. 00:57:907 (3) - Why is the slider's tail's hitsounds different from 00:45:907 (3) ? Fixed

[Insane]

1. The approach rate feels artificial. Reduce it slightly to 8.5 Suzono's insane is AR9, it would be fine with AR9 on mine as well
2. 00:23:595 (2,3) - I'm not a fan that smaller sliders goes away from the larger sliders. I recommend adjusting that, but it's an Insane diff. It's fine, but it's up to you. I actually fixed that with short streams
3. 01:16:095 (2) - The circle should move away from the slider a bit further. Fixed
4. 02:05:970 (5) - The circle should be on x:224 y:120? Fixed
5. 02:07:845 (8,9) - Is the jump necessary? There isn't a jump on 02:06:157 (6,7) . Fixed
6. 02:11:313 (1) - This is the second longest spinner in all the diffs. Keep them consistent by reducing it to 02:17:220 . Fixed

[Suzuno's Insane]
Applying the mod for Suzuno as he is away for more than 4 days

1. 00:48:532 (4,6) - Clean up these sliders. Done
2. 02:11:313 (1) - Why is this spinner is the longest in all the diffs? Keep them consistent by reducing it to 02:17:220 . Done
   
   While the diff is fine, it is the least polish of all of them. Please go over your diff and polish it up.

I never thought I payed more attention to the storyboard; there were a bunch of minor stuff that bugged me. I really liked that you went over SB in such detail, I really appreciate it! Never thought you would actually mod the SB haha.

Good luck

fuyuyu- wrote:

FreeSong's Hard

1. HP+1 sure
2. 01:30:532 (6) - add NC? fixed!
3. 01:33:532 (5) - ^ fixed!
4. 01:36:532 (5) - ^ fixed!

Darcsol wrote:

[FreeSongs' Hard]

1. 00:01:470 (1,2) - What of slider shapes are these? No where in the diff the sliders look like that. Clean them up. Changed into another shape. Hope its better now ><
2. 00:12:532 (2) - I recommend removing the repeater, then move 00:12:813 (1) to where 00:12:813 is. I kind of want the beat to be hitsounded ;w;
   Since the spinner start can not give any sound, I would prefer mine
3. 02:05:032 (3) - ^ ^

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Wings of Courage.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 76376
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 13470,27532
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.700001

[Metadata]
Title:Wings of Courage -Sora o Koete-
TitleUnicode:Wings of Courage -空を超えて-
Artist:Mami Kawada
ArtistUnicode:川田まみ
Creator:BetaStar
Version:FreeSongs' Hard
Source:蒼の彼方のフォーリズム
Tags:Ao no Kanata no Four Rhythm Shudaika opening Beyond the sky into the firmament Suzuno Kamduki FreeSongs DerXello YellowManul
BeatmapID:749364
BeatmapSetID:329949

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"1003_2DJ_01000.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"1003_2DJ_01000.jpg",320,240
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 F,0,0,720,1,0
 S,0,0,720,0.8952727
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo3 : 0,0,255
Combo4 : 255,128,128
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312,144,101220,6,0,L|412:136,1,70,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,68,101595,2,0,P|424:120|464:216,2,140,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,24,102532,2,0,B|332:56|332:56|288:48|240:72|232:108,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,176,103095,2,0,B|220:252|220:252|248:296,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,103470,2,0,P|200:304|96:320,1,140,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,208,104032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
67,208,104220,6,0,B|72:216|68:240|68:240|44:264|32:296|40:340,2,140,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,136,105157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
12,136,105344,1,10,0:0:0:0:
120,136,105532,2,0,B|164:124|164:124|188:68|160:4,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,60,106095,2,0,P|296:64|368:44,1,105,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,20,106470,2,0,B|444:48|444:48|464:112,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,140,106845,2,0,P|436:196|456:252,1,105,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,280,107220,6,0,B|368:288|368:288|324:320,2,140,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,200,108157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,140,108345,1,10,0:0:0:0:
444,140,108532,2,0,P|388:148|276:136,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,76,109095,2,0,P|280:56|328:56,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,152,109470,2,0,B|160:116|160:116|160:60,1,105,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,44,109845,2,0,P|60:40|0:96,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,128,110407,5,2,0:0:0:0:
40,208,110595,2,0,B|40:248|40:248|16:272|16:316,1,105,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,348,110970,2,0,P|92:344|132:348,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,364,111345,2,0,P|236:344|256:260,1,105,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,248,111720,2,0,P|240:208|248:168,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,124,112095,2,0,L|420:116,1,105,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,112,112470,1,2,0:0:0:0:
512,204,112657,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,252,112845,1,10,0:0:0:0:
424,252,112938,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,252,113032,1,2,0:0:0:0:
372,164,113220,6,0,B|316:156|280:172|280:172|252:216,1,125.999996154785,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,248,113595,2,0,P|196:256|128:240,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,180,113970,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,120,114157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
161,251,114345,1,10,0:0:0:0:
32,189,114532,6,0,P|112:186|161:251,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,264,115095,2,0,L|92:120,1,125.999996154785,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,88,115470,2,0,B|52:96|52:96|-8:84,1,83.9999974365235,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,52,115845,2,0,B|240:44|240:44|300:56,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,188,116220,6,0,B|316:188|316:188|340:136|328:92|280:40,1,167.999994873047,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,140,116782,2,0,P|220:200|228:236,1,83.9999974365235,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,368,117157,2,0,P|300:308|292:272,1,83.9999974365235,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,260,117532,6,0,B|152:280|192:296|192:296|231:265|271:265|296:286,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,369,118095,2,0,B|389:353|389:353|430:278,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,209,118470,2,0,B|270:242|270:242|314:316,1,83.9999974365235,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,212,118845,2,0,B|427:193|427:193|342:195,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,208,119220,6,0,P|208:196|188:80,2,167.999994873047,6|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,148,120157,1,2,0:0:0:0:
356,148,120345,1,10,0:0:0:0:
264,72,120532,6,0,B|248:156|248:156|220:188|184:200|152:188,1,167.999994873047,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,92,121095,2,0,L|196:4,1,83.9999974365235,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,144,121470,2,0,P|92:216|112:248,1,83.9999974365235,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,364,121845,2,0,B|180:316|180:316|156:264,1,83.9999974365235,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,264,122220,6,0,L|85:280,3,41.9999987182618,6|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
125,296,122595,2,0,L|173:280,3,41.9999987182618,10|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,264,122970,2,8,L|260:280,3,41.9999987182618,2|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,296,123345,2,0,L|348:280,3,41.9999987182618,10|2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,264,123720,1,6,0:0:0:0:
155,155,124282,5,2,0:0:0:0:
315,99,124657,1,2,0:0:0:0:
287,263,125032,2,0,L|303:303,2,35,2|0|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,125313,12,0,131220,0:0:0:0:
256,192,131313,12,0,137220,0:0:0:0:

Gaia wrote:

idk why i did this but i did, description box if u dont use pls!!11!!1!11!! xdd

http://puu.sh/jvIFQ/bb9a6dce0b.zip

1. 00:11:220 (1) - Shorten this spinner by 1 beat. The recovery time for the player is too low currently
2. 00:20:220 (1,2) - The flow here is not that great. Move (2) more to top left (like 420:148) and make it like this
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:01:470 (1,2,3,1) - Such a high spacing in an incredibly calm pat feels really out of place. Please lwoer it
2. 00:08:220 (1,2,3) - Why does (1,2) have a lower spacing then (2,3)? It makes no sense, as they are all of same power (beats)
3. 00:10:095 (3) - 2 circles would work better here. It feels awkward having a slider to follow the vocals, while usually circles and sliderstars (not the ends) are used for that
4. 00:13:282 (1,2,3) - This is incredibly overdone, there is only the aaaaa~~~in the vocals, not a single thing which implies the usage of 1/4 sldierjumps. Also, the finishes feel really out of place and should be deleted
5. 00:14:595 (2,3) - Why a stack? It feels really out of place, a jump is much better, same applies to most other 1/2 stacks (for example 00:20:595 (2,3) - ). 1/1 stacks are fine, but 1/2 are really weird
6. 00:19:095 (2,3,4,5,6) - Such patterns usually play pretty badly
7. 00:26:782 (3,4) - Both of these sldiers play pretty badly. These are so-called upbeat slider. They start on a red tick, and end on the following white one. As usually the strong sound is at the white tick, you need to let go at the strong sound instead of clicking which makes it feel really weird
8. 00:30:533 (1) - ^^
9. 00:33:532 (1,2,3) - ^^ etc. (Oh, the ones in the kiai are fine)
10. 00:57:532 (7,1) - The distance between these 2 really implies 1/2, instead of 1/1. Please reduce the spacing to +- 0.3 so it feels more as 1/1
11. 01:04:845 (5,3) - A rather bad overlap, please space them a little
12. 01:07:470 (3,4,5,6) - Please even out the distance here, it feels much better
13. 01:13:751 (6,3) - Due to this overlap, (3) is nearly unreadable. Please blanket them
14. 02:05:032 (3) - Snap to 1/8 please

1. 00:13:282 (5) - Add new combo? Because the combo goes too high compared to the rest of the map and it is kinda awkward.
2. 01:17:032 (3) - Add new combo, as there is a slight break at that part. It should look like FreeSong's Hard if you do so.
3. Spacing and the map overall is pretty ok other than that.

1. Bravery's AudioLeadIn is in conflict with all other difficulties. Unify them.

1. I've got to really give credits to this mapper, pleasant rhythm to follow But there are some pattern issues.
2. Currently the star rating doesn't really fit into the spread, all of these suggestions will be aimed on making this difficulty bit harder while keeping the good rhythm.
3. Check for DS, most of them are not constant.
4. 00:11:220 (1) - Instead of a spinner which emphasizes vocal, you can try to emphasize the instrument here, like this :
   
   
5. 00:14:220 - For the remaining 2 beats, just use a 1/1 slider to fit with the rhythm. After that remove NC from 00:14:970 (1) - then add it at the newly added 1/1 slider.
6. 00:29:220 (1) - Normally this slider would go in the middle of 00:27:720 (3,4) - these 2 notes.
7. 00:32:220 (1,2) - This pattern seems bit untidy.
8. 00:44:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Whistle + Finish + Clap combo seems really awkward, and some of them are not really in the right place. To sound more 'natural', just using claps would fit, and placing them on the following places would feel nicer :
   00:44:220 (1) - 's tail 00:44:970 (2) - 's tail 00:45:532 (3) - 00:45:907 (4) - 's tail 00:46:282 (5) - 's head and 00:46:845 (6) - . Do the similar thing to the next combo.
9. 00:49:095 - You would want to have a circle here, its a pretty strong beat.
10. 00:53:220 (1) - Similar thing I mentioned in 00:29:220 (1) -.
11. 00:56:220 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Do the similar thing like 00:44:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -.
12. 01:11:220 (1,3) - These are overlapping.
13. 01:27:720 (4,5) - These 2 finishes doesn't seem to fit.
14. 01:41:220 (1) - You don't need to use a spinner here; in fact you can just follow the drum beat.
    
    
15. 02:05:220 (1,1) - Again, you don't need a spinner here. Instead here you can follow the instrument (don't make a stream) :
    

1. 00:13:845 (10) - Make this look in the middle of 00:13:750 (9,1) - these 2 notes. Aesthetically that looks better.
2. 00:14:220 (1) - This should be having the same DS like the stream previously. Placing this around x=360 y=80 should be fine.
3. 00:40:938 - Don't leave the instrument here blank, this calls for a obvious triplet.
4. 00:52:938 - ^^
5. 02:06:813 (2) - This note doesn't fit; there is no instrument here.
6. 02:09:814 (2) - As well as this one.
7. 02:10:845 (9) - Just a circle is fine, since there are no instruments at 02:10:938 - and 02:11:032 - .
8. Not experienced at modding Extra, but I can see that some patterns are off-place (example : 00:16:282 (3,4,5,6) - (6) is a bit out of place, rather make this symmetrical).

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hello there~ NM as requested in my queue~
Man I love this song

1. Unrankable issues
2. My opinion which I highly recommend changing it
3. Just small suggestions/nazi :/

[General]

1. Bravery's AudioLeadIn is in conflict with all other difficulties. Unify them. FIXED!!

[Bravery]

1. 00:13:845 (10) - Make this look in the middle of 00:13:750 (9,1) - these 2 notes. Aesthetically that looks better. Fixed!
2. 00:14:220 (1) - This should be having the same DS like the stream previously. Placing this around x=360 y=80 should be fine. Fixed!
3. 00:40:938 - Don't leave the instrument here blank, this calls for a obvious triplet. Applyed! But I'll check as I get more mods!
4. 00:52:938 - ^^ Applyed! But I'll check as I get more mods!
5. 02:06:813 (2) - This note doesn't fit; there is no instrument here. Fixed!
6. 02:09:814 (2) - As well as this one. Fixed!
7. 02:10:845 (9) - Just a circle is fine, since there are no instruments at 02:10:938 - and 02:11:032 - . Fixed!
8. Not experienced at modding Extra, but I can see that some patterns are off-place (example : 00:16:282 (3,4,5,6) - (6) is a bit out of place, rather make this symmetrical). Fixed!

That is all from me. GL!

GabCM wrote:

Well, as requested in my modding queue, here I come!

[General]

1. Very nice storyboard! It could've been the official music video with some touch-ups at this point. Thank you!

[Bravery]

It seems I don't have enough experience to enjoy Insane/Extra maps just yet. I should remove those difficulties from my modding queue for the time being. Anyway, my modding will be mostly based on what I've seen from an automatic play. I'm sorry if it doesn't meet your expectations.

1. 00:46:657 (4) - It looks mispositionned compared to the slider right before. Actually remapped this area haha
2. 01:22:282 (3,5) - I would prehaps place those two a bit higher, and in a more symmetrical manner. Slightly moved up with rest of it
3. 02:11:220 (1) - Once again, that circle looks like it could hinder a chance to gain more points from that spinner ??.

Whew! That was my first time modding. As I've already said, my Bravery map modding probably isn't that good. I hope I helped you at all! Good luck!

1. 00:09:720 (3,4) - consider moving to (330:162) and (394:262) to improve flow slightly (it also forms a cute ass triangle)
2. 00:19:470 (4) - this could use a curve as the flow into the next slider feels really forced
3. 00:37:095 (1) - rather have this as 1/1 + note to emphasize the really strong beat with a click, plays much better
4. 00:40:095 (3) - really not a fan of this repeat, you miss the start of the next measure here. Consider this:
   
5. 01:13:095 (5) - NC
6. 01:23:220 (1) - delete clap
7. 01:28:470 (4) - better as a 1/1 + note again, you miss the snare in the middle white tick and this ends on a strong beat

1. 00:57:532 - add a note, this rhythm is the same 00:59:970 (2,3) -
2. 01:16:470 (1,2) - blanket is a bit poor

1. 00:20:032 (9,10) - quite overmapped for a hard, there's not even really anything to map on the red tick, there's actually a pretty distinct pause in the music here (which can be used to emphasize the start of the next measure instead of this triple)
2. 00:37:095 (3) - add clap on head, remove from tail
3. 01:36:532 (1) - this looks...so much better as a regular curve

1. 01:28:845 (6) - how come this is snapped to 1/8 when it's clearly a 1/4 rhythm here?

1. 00:12:720 (1,2) - rhythm here is wrong, it goes like this (do what you want with it)
   
2. 00:36:860 (1) - this doesn't start until the red tick
3. 01:00:907 (1) - you miss a strong white tick with this 1/1, i recommend this rhythm
   
4. 01:27:532 (6,7) - remove finishes
5. 01:28:095 (7,3) - - add clap
6. 01:29:220 (5) - add finish
7. 01:39:157 (7) - overmapped, there's nothing on the blue tick, leave this as a 1/2 or two notes
8. 02:02:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - random 0.1 changes in spacing throughout this stream, keep it equal

1. 00:37:282 (2,3,4,5,1) - rearrange this pattern so that 5 lands on 1, there really shouldn't be any movement here. Alternatively, make 5 a 3/4 slider with increase velocity
2. 00:40:844 (5,6,7) - interesting that you decided to make this a triple but you didn't place a note at 00:42:626
3. 00:54:063 (4) - delete this, it sounds wrong and there's nothing on the blue tick
4. 01:23:220 (1,3,1,3,1) - these finishes are not necessary
5. 01:26:595 (2,3,4) - rhythm is incorrect, it's like this:
   
6. 01:31:470 (5,6,7,8) - give these more spacing or a more distinct pattern since there's actual vocals that represent these compared to 01:30:720 (1,2,3,4) -
7. 01:39:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - pretty large spacing/lots of movement and high density for such a calm, slow part imo

Synpoo wrote:

Hi, as requested from my queue.

[Easy]

1. 00:09:720 (3,4) - consider moving to (330:162) and (394:262) to improve flow slightly (it also forms a cute ass triangle) LOL oh yes!
2. 00:19:470 (4) - this could use a curve as the flow into the next slider feels really forced Bent it!
3. 00:37:095 (1) - rather have this as 1/1 + note to emphasize the really strong beat with a click, plays much better Appled
4. 00:40:095 (3) - really not a fan of this repeat, you miss the start of the next measure here. Consider this:
   Applied
5. 01:13:095 (5) - NC Applied
6. 01:23:220 (1) - delete clap Applied!
7. 01:28:470 (4) - better as a 1/1 + note again, you miss the snare in the middle white tick and this ends on a strong beat Applied

[Bravery]

1. 00:37:282 (2,3,4,5,1) - rearrange this pattern so that 5 lands on 1, there really shouldn't be any movement here. Alternatively, make 5 a 3/4 slider with increase velocity Changed to 3/4 slider!
2. 00:40:844 (5,6,7) - interesting that you decided to make this a triple but you didn't place a note at 00:42:626 Fixed!
3. 00:54:063 (4) - delete this, it sounds wrong and there's nothing on the blue tick Fixed!
4. 01:23:220 (1,3,1,3,1) - these finishes are not necessary Fixed!
5. 01:26:595 (2,3,4) - rhythm is incorrect, it's like this: Fixed!
   
6. 01:31:470 (5,6,7,8) - give these more spacing or a more distinct pattern since there's actual vocals that represent these compared to 01:30:720 (1,2,3,4) - Fixed!
7. 01:39:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - pretty large spacing/lots of movement and high density for such a calm, slow part imo Scaled down!

GL with this nice set!

1. 00:29:220 (1) - I don't think claps is suitable for this slider head
2. 00:30:720 - Remove clap and finish here, also remove clap on 00:31:095 - . They sounded over-hitsounded for me
3. 00:34:470 - With the same reason as above, remove clap
4. 00:35:970 (6) - Movement from this slider to this slider 00:37:095 (7) - might be kinda harsh for this diff . Maybe try to use a curve slider and direct it to next slider here 00:37:095 (7) - , like this
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:59:220 - I would like to see this downbeat appears as a clickable note . Rearrange this slider 00:58:845 (1) - to a simple 1/1 pattern like this
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:23:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Combo here is a bit strange with the previous . How about try my suggestions over here : 01:26:220 (6,1) - Swap new combo and also do it here too 01:29:220 (5,1) - , to match it with the rhythm precisely
7. 01:34:470 (1,2) - Well, you don't need to add a new combo here 01:34:470 - because this slider is more capable to have it 01:35:220 (2) -
8. 02:05:407 (1,1) - I feel a bit aware for those spinners . I think beginners can't catch "1000" points from they, actually . I tried to spin like them, and just got 300 without score

1. 00:01:470 (1) - Use 1/2 rhythm as a starter might be kinda too sudden here, although they're following the vocal here . I would rather to play them as a 1/1 slider, or delete them
2. 00:03:720 (3) - Fix spacing
3. 00:18:720 (3) - Harsh transition from here to 00:19:470 (4) - for me . It has less indication to 00:19:470 (4) - . I suggest you to change the slider direction to other direction, except on the right side . Play it as a straight slider to upper side is fine too
4. 00:28:470 (4) - Goes same here, try not to direct it to the left side
5. 00:41:220 (1) - This slider shouldn't start here, honestly . it must be started out here 00:41:032 - , to emphasis the long sound at here . If you're intend to follow my suggestion, make sure you keep it ends on the same place, 00:41:595 -
6. 00:52:470 (4) - Same as fourth point (You overdid it, if you're intended to fix it, try to realize it yourself)
7. 00:57:532 - Keep it emptied isn't not a good idea here . You haven't tried to empty it beforehand, because there's a same beat that appears every measure in entire sequences and should be capable to emphasized . I strongly recommend you to keep the pattern consistent with 00:45:532 (3) - and 00:48:532 (3) - , to provide a nice rhythm towards the song
8. 01:01:095 - It should be emphasized for me . Try to make it map it by a clickable or non-clickable object here, because the beat is sound rather loud
9. 01:13:470 (4) - End this slider at 01:13:845 - . The current end isn't match perfectly with the song here, because the vocal is rather loud here 01:13:845 - for being emphasized than 01:13:751 -
10. 01:47:970 (2,4) - Nazi, overlap looks bad for me, they looks untidy, try to avoid it

1. 00:36:907 (1,2,3) - It should be 1/8 snap . Use 1/8 slider to replace them is a nice way to go (it's okay to keep them if you don't want make it more complicated)
2. 00:46:845 (4,1) - Stack 3/4 pattern isn't really a good choice for me . I'd rather to make it spaced like this 00:49:845 (4,1) - so that players could easily notice it
3. 01:17:032 (1,1) - They should be 1/8 too . You can see the reason above why I mention this point
4. 01:32:220 (1,2) - Same as 2nd point
5. 01:53:126 - Beat that appears on this section should be filled too, because the rhythm still connected each others from 01:52:845 (9,10,11) - , so leave it emptied sounded somehow strange
6. 02:05:126 - Start on this, it should be 1/8 snap . See the same reason above

1. 00:03:532 (1) - Shouldn't jump appears on this for more better accentuation?
2. 00:14:032 (8) - Let this slider snapped 1/8 is fine because this is an Insane, so please consider it
3. 00:25:657 (2,3,4) - I don't feel right about this anti-jump . I guess you still can make a jumpy flow here, because the things still need more accentuation
4. 01:17:032 (3) - Same as 2nd point
5. 01:26:220 (1) - I think you need some movement to this slider for more better accentuation . It appears has the more louder vocal than the vocal here 01:21:532 -

1. 00:20:595 (2) - Looks more better if you could unify the blanket here . It goes same for here 00:21:532 (6) -
2. 01:17:220 (3) - I think you need new combo here, as beat is loud at start out new stanza
3. 01:20:032 (4) - The jump is too much for beat here, as it sound doesn't even strong at all to be placed by a jump like this . Consider to reduce the spacing a bit, maybe try to place it on 324|316
4. 01:34:845 (6) - Missing clap here
5. 02:10:938 (8) - I'm pretty sure there's nothing here, please delete the circle . If you're intended to place that long sound with this, you need to fill 02:11:126 - , but it sounded more better if you could delete that (8)

1. 00:22:845 - I would like to see this appears as a clickable object here, for more better accentuation and keep your rhythm consistent in entire sequences here 00:16:845 (6) - , 00:19:845 -
2. 00:38:782 - Whistle here feels really out of place for me, better to remove it
3. 01:12:907 (2) - I'm pretty sure there's nothing here, better to remove this circle

VocaloidTACU wrote:

안녕하세요 한국분 맞으시죠? 한국어로 모딩 드리겠습니다.

Just suggestion
Unrankable
Should be fixed


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별다른 문제는 없네요 네



[Bravery]

00:07:470 (3,4) - 어울리지않는다고 해야할까 보기이상한 패턴입니다

시도해 보세요

00:09:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - 너무 서클이 응집해있습니다. 1,2,3,4 는 슬라이더로 바꿔주세요. ㄴㄴ 이게 바꾼거에요. BN이 슬라는 맞지안다고 앴어요.

00:10:657 (6) - 왜 여기 1/2 리피트 슬라이더가 들어갔죠 전혀 어울리지 않습니다 다 서클로 바꿔주세요 보컬이랑 잘 맞습니다

00:11:782 (3) - 좀더 완벽한 S자가 되도록 해보세요 조금 움직였는데, 별로 차이가 없는듯 ;

00:12:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 확실한 오버매핑입니다 아니에요 ;; 가이야 인샌도 이랬는데, 괜찮은거였어요

00:40:844 (5,6,7) - 어울리지 않습니다. 1/2 슬라이더랑 서클하나로 바꿔주세요 저게 더 나은거 같은데;;

00:52:845 (5,6) - 마찬가지로 1/4 박자가 어울리지 않습니다 1/1 서클 하나만 놓아주세요 음...

01:23:032 - 서클 하나 추가해주세요 거기에 아무것도없어요 ;;

01:23:783 (3) - Ctrl + G 사용하시면 좀더 재미있을수도 있겠네요 바로 전에꺼랑 비슷하게 하는게 좋다고 생각하네요. 그리고 CTRL+G를 하면 거리가 또 망가져요

01:36:720 (1) - 전의 노트와 너무 가깝습니다 고쳐주세요 아니에요, 전에꺼는 1.18X 거리이고, 다음껀 1.19X 이에요.

01:38:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 오버매핑입니다. 아니에요

02:02:970 (1,2,3,4) - 좀더 둥글게 연타동선을 수정해보세요 고쳤습니다

02:03:720 (7,1) - 너무 가깝습니다 1을 저멀리 둬야 할거같아요. 스택했어요

02:11:220 (1,1) - 서클 지우시고 그냥 서클자리에서부터 스피너 시작해주세요 여기에 큰 마지막 노트가 그거인데;;






아직 랭크될 준비가 안된거같아요 맵퀄리티에 좀더 신경을 써주시고 다른 랭크맵을 보면서 점프패턴이나 연타동선을 공부하시는것이 좋아보입니다.

그냥 제 의견이예요 ~

화이팅! 모딩 감사합니다!

Ipas wrote:

Hello! I guess this mod is from my queue ...

[Easy]

1. 00:29:220 (1) - I don't think claps is suitable for this slider head I actually changed other HS quite a bit
2. 00:30:720 - Remove clap and finish here, also remove clap on 00:31:095 - . They sounded over-hitsounded for me^
3. 00:34:470 - With the same reason as above, remove clap ^
4. 00:35:970 (6) - Movement from this slider to this slider 00:37:095 (7) - might be kinda harsh for this diff . Maybe try to use a curve slider and direct it to next slider here 00:37:095 (7) - , like this Fixed
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:59:220 - I would like to see this downbeat appears as a clickable note . Rearrange this slider 00:58:845 (1) - to a simple 1/1 pattern like this Fixed, thanks!
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:23:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Combo here is a bit strange with the previous . How about try my suggestions over here : 01:26:220 (6,1) - Swap new combo and also do it here too 01:29:220 (5,1) - , to match it with the rhythm precisely Fixed!
7. 01:34:470 (1,2) - Well, you don't need to add a new combo here 01:34:470 - because this slider is more capable to have it 01:35:220 (2) - Fixed!
8. 02:05:407 (1,1) - I feel a bit aware for those spinners . I think beginners can't catch "1000" points from they, actually . I tried to spin like them, and just got 300 without score I think those are long enough :/

[Bravery]

1. 00:22:845 - I would like to see this appears as a clickable object here, for more better accentuation and keep your rhythm consistent in entire sequences here 00:16:845 (6) - , 00:19:845 - Fixed!
2. 00:38:782 - Whistle here feels really out of place for me, better to remove it Thanks!
3. 01:12:907 (2) - I'm pretty sure there's nothing here, better to remove this circle Fixed

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I feel like the mapset rhythmical pattern is good . All I can say is just try to improve the flow both on Bravery and Suzuno's
Good Luck! Thank you!

Nitrousdragon wrote:

random mod ^_^

[Bravery]
Only one suggestion (dunno why, I got here too late I guess )
00:49:563 (4,5) - Make this triple smoother.

I can't catch anything else, plus I want you to lengthen the spacing between some of the triples and the streams.

ByBy13 wrote:

Hello! You said to me to check the mapset.Well I testplayed it and here's my opinion:
The set looks fine but I think it will much better if you will find more mods for Suzuno's Insane and Bravery diff to polish the set much better.
Also,on 00:14:220- and on 00:38:220- on Gaia's Insane I found duplicate green lines

no kds for this post.Good Luck!