Frey wrote:

無限大な夢のあとの!!!

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1. 这首曲子是你自己剪辑的吗？我听了下，这应该是2分钟的ピアノヴァージョン(Piano Version)和4分钟的full ver合并后的版本。应该官方没有出过这个版本的Butter-Fly，所以我认为你不应该在标题里面加上Mix（还是加到Tag里吧），除非你有办法证明你的这个后缀是可信的。 好的，歌名改回叫Wada Kouji - Butter-Fly了
   
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2. HP6，因为你的整体难度偏向Insane，用一个Normal难度经常用的HP值明显不合理 前面2分鐘的鋼琴段物件太少了，HP6的話加上HR的時候血量從未滿過，幾乎都在一半多點左右，難以回血，所以才用HP5
3. 00:01:515 - Whistle 因为这里钢琴是重音 其他例子：00:06:056 - 00:10:597 (4) - 00:15:138 (4) - 之前隨便加了點，現在全部加上了√
   
   
4. 00:23:937 (3) - 加whistle，这里开始是清唱段落，音效跟的音轨肯定是钢琴，所以这里因为钢琴是重音，所以要加Whistle。如果你不加，打起来完全就没反馈感。其他例子：00:40:966 (1) - 00:42:953 (4) - 00:46:643 - 00:49:765 - 00:51:184 (2) - 00:56:576 - 01:00:266 (2) - 01:01:117 - 01:05:659 - 01:20:701 (2) - 01:21:553 (3) - 01:29:783 (2) - 01:30:635 (3) - 01:38:866 (2) - 01:39:717 (3) - 01:41:136 (2) - √
   
   
5. 02:21:653 - 和 02:21:835 (3,4) - 可以使用 Addtion=Drum 的 Finish 音效，基本上是一致的。好
6. 02:22:199 (1) - 加finish √
7. 02:29:108 (5) - Ctrl+J，这样到02:29:471 (1) - 之间的路径更好 好
8. 02:33:653 (4) - 这里并没有像02:31:471 (2,3,4) - 这样的吉他声，对比02:28:017 (1) - 和02:30:926 (1) - 。这里并不需要Whistle √
9. 03:08:744 (1) - 加Finish √
10. 个人的意见，类似这个02:45:471 (1) - 的折返滑条最好都改成一个1/1滑条，这里根本听不出1/2,不论是鼓声还是吉他，这里都是1/1，因为后面这样的还有很多：02:57:108 (1) - 03:58:199 (1) - 04:09:835 (1) - 可以，不過我想保留02:57:108 (1) - 和04:09:835 (1) - ，所以現在是兩個1/1兩個1/2折返
11. 03:25:108 (2) - 如果想弄日本流的话，这里就Ctrl+G，我觉得之后更好。 這個我還是覺得原本的好點，因為逆flow滑條用的太多了
12. 03:32:744 (3) - Ctrl+G 然后 Ctrl+G 03:33:108 (4,5) - 。这样的话03:32:017 (1,2,3) - 的flow更流畅。如果改了注意修改音效 好主意
13. 04:21:471 (1) - 加finish √
14. 04:49:835 (5,6,7) - 我不建议这里用3连，因为事实上背景音的3连是1/3...我建议这里和之前保持一致，删掉04:49:926 (6) - 放1/2。其中5的位置不变，04:50:017 (6) - 放到x296 y148 我改成了1/3折返
15. 05:08:017 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1) - 这一段随便放点音效都好啊，不管你是跟吉他还是跟鼓都可以选择啊？ 加了點音效
16. 05:19:471 - 缺了clap fixed
17. 05:30:926 (2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,1) - 这一段随便放点whistle会更好，完全不放虽然有理由，因为这里是清唱所以没必要放，但是反过来。玩家打这一段的时候，游戏体验是相当的差的。其实我的建议是删掉前面一小段作为第二个break time 音效加了，其實之前就是放了break，但是覺得效果不好，這段solo空了不太好
18. 06:30:926 (1) - 加Finish √

真诚的祝你好运，我们ranked曲见

Karen wrote:

General

1. 加2000 audioleadin √
2. BG还是用标准尺寸比较好。逼死强迫症系列 改了

Butter-Fly

1. 这diff名有点low，想个高端大气上档次的吧 暫時還沒想到啊
2. 01:30:645 - 这里的节奏这样不是很适合表现音乐，像这种拖了1/1的vocal后面可以用下面这种，因为01:30:930 - 这是vocal比较重的地方，用滑条比较合适，这样打击感才比较强：（光标位置01:29:791 - ）
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   這個01:31:215 (1) - 有比較重的鋼琴音，所以不改
3. 01:47:951 - 同理，用长滑条好，并且01:48:236 - 这里没有vocal也没用piano，为什么用滑条来表现呢。 這個說得對，改了
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4. 01:54:795 (2,3,4,5,1) - 我知道你想做一个overlap的结构，但是看起来这视觉上没有达到预期的效果，看上去挺丑的，主要是因为01:56:231 (1) - 你用这个滑条的尾巴去做了，并没有什么*用，所以还是干干净净避免overlap比较好改了
5. 02:00:165 (3) - 换成一个圈？ 好
6. 04:26:744 - 加个圈？ 不太好
7. 04:36:926 (5,6,7) - 这个flow有点直， 04:37:290 (7) - 移到239,77左右试试，后面的话试试这样：（1,3stack） 這個直點不怕，又可以強調vocal
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8. 04:42:744 (6) - 放到122,142左右做个六边形啊，flow又好，美观又好 之前也打算用六邊形的，現在改了
9. 05:10:926 - 这滑条头没在音上啊，折返意义不明，干脆就不要跟那个音了 換了音效，折返那裡是有音的
10. 05:18:926 - 这4个音非常适合做跳的感觉 好
11. 05:20:017 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这部分的snapping乱七八糟的，一会1/3一会1/4的，不过只要滑条头snap对就行了，所以05:20:017 (2,3,4,5) - 把这4个做成折返滑条混过去。 聽了下好像還真有1/3，改成了折返滑條了
12. 05:31:290 - 这里开始没有什么小节的分界了，一句歌词一个NC比较合适。 好主意
13. 05:41:835 - 像这种音我个人就不喜欢放滑条尾巴上。。太别扭，试试这节奏： 好
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14. 剩下的1/2spam就没什么好说的了==

continue tmr

sodarose wrote:

02:21:835 (3,1) - 听说你喜欢Stack？ 你說的好對，我改了
04:03:835 (1,4) - 听说你喜欢Stack？ 你說的好對，我改了
03:54:562 (4,1) - 听说你喜欢Stack？ 你說的好對，我改了
03:55:290 (1,5) - 听说你喜欢Stack？ 你說的好對，我改了

Xinely wrote:

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  General

1. you can add "all of my mind" in tags as the album's name http://wadakoji.blog87.fc2.com/blog-category-3.html okay, added

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  蝴蝶

1. 00:06:475 (3) - whistle on head pls.. the piano sounds SO strong added
2. 00:03:501 (2) - ^ √
3. 00:17:124 (2) - ^ √
4. 00:23:952 (3) - 00:28:493 (3) - ^ √
5. 00:53:185 (2) - ^ if u want but i prefer add since piano sounds quite strong √
6. 00:56:307 (3) - ^ (yep i prefer add it.. the piano sounds SOOO strong wtf) √
7. 00:58:010 - 00:58:862 - 01:05:673 - 01:07:093 - 01:07:944 - ^ √
8. 01:03:687 (1) - 01:03:970 - this time piano sounds quite strong, it's weird to skip it really, you can keep follow vocal with music with change this to circle and 1/2 slider this i prefer to keep vocal
9. 01:18:163 (1,1,1) - unnecessary NC, they look as spam here actually. everybody can read 1/1 jumps :C yea, fixed
10. 01:31:498 (2,3) - i would spam the whistle here i mean that i remove from tail and add to circle, it emphasizes better from both vocal or piano you are right
11. 01:34:329 - probably add whsitle here.. yep the piano is fucking strong okay
12. 01:55:645 (5) - 144,120 for 01:54:795 (2,3,4,5) - have consistent spacing, dont look from 1,3x but see the bpm changes :C you are right, but i move to 137,134, it is accurately place
13. 01:59:316 (2) - 02:03:870 (2) - 02:08:417 (2) - whistle for piano pls √
14. 02:19:290 (1) - i'd use soft-finish here for consistent with 02:22:199 (1) - okay
15. 02:24:017 (3,5) - personal taste that may add clap for them because the drums. if you do it, i would suggest 02:23:835 (2,4) - sampleset drum too for emphasize more good idea
16. 02:33:835 (1) - i'd say use soft-finish instead on head. the cymbal </3 fixed
17. 02:45:471 (1) - finish on head because cymbal √
18. 02:48:199 (1) - cymbal mapped with slider tail ISNT very recommended because strong part mostly better map with something clickable object like circle or slider, i'd say change 02:48:199 (1,2) - to http://puu.sh/jq85B.jpg fixed
19. 03:11:653 (1) - can add finish on head too because the cymbal √
20. 03:24:562 (8) - same as 02:48:199 (1) - but you may keep it since it's just according my personal taste for this time so this i will keep
21. 03:36:380 (1) - can add finish here coz cymbal √
22. 03:58:199 (1) - finish on head √
23. 04:24:380 (1) - ^ √
24. 04:00:926 (1,2) - same as 02:48:199 (1) - √
25. 04:37:290 (7) - same as above √
26. 04:47:290 (5) - the transititon flow from this slider to next slider isnt smooth to play imo, i'd say ctrl+h it and keep stack on circle good idea
27. 04:55:835 - delay the break pls :C http://puu.sh/jq8zs.jpg okay
28. 05:17:835 (1) - same as same as 02:48:199 (1) - (this sound 05:18:199 - is part of cymbal actually) i want keep it
29. 05:28:380 (1,2,3) - imo the rhythms still can improved and mapped harder if you follow the drums here for me. a bit undermapped. i'd say like http://puu.sh/jq8JM.jpg okay
30. 05:30:926 (2) - finish clap on head for consistency with other similar parts? okay
31. 06:26:561 (1,2,3,4) - very undermapped when the drums sound for 1/4 stream here. http://puu.sh/jq8WV.jpg (can be variation with circle slider combination) i don't want a long stream, so always change to slider :3
32. 06:29:834 (4) - can be a triplet circle too here okay

2015-08-07 00:32 Chaoslitz: http://puu.sh/jrFaC/e669c88435.jpg
2015-08-07 00:32 Chaoslitz: 用番1366x768?
2015-08-07 00:33 Kencho: ok
2015-08-07 00:33 Chaoslitz: 都係irc應該少野改ww
2015-08-07 00:33 Kencho: www
2015-08-07 00:33 Chaoslitz: 02:32:926 (2) - 向上curve個flow好d 
2015-08-07 00:35 Kencho: 截個圖睇睇=.=？
2015-08-07 00:35 Kencho: 唔知彎幾多好
2015-08-07 00:35 Chaoslitz: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3495609
2015-08-07 00:36 Kencho: 哦，ok
2015-08-07 00:37 Chaoslitz: 03:12:744 (4,5,6,7,1) - 特登stack番03:12:017 (2) - 有d怪-.-
2015-08-07 00:38 Kencho: 0.0係咩
2015-08-07 00:39 Chaoslitz: 03:12:380 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - 呢度玩落唔係幾順
2015-08-07 00:40 Kencho: 咁樣呢
2015-08-07 00:40 Kencho: http://puu.sh/jrFMq/c06813d179.png
2015-08-07 00:40 Chaoslitz: 都係;w;
2015-08-07 00:42 Chaoslitz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3495646
2015-08-07 00:42 Chaoslitz: 類似咁
2015-08-07 00:42 Kencho: 哦原來係想呢個方向
2015-08-07 00:43 Chaoslitz: yup :3
2015-08-07 00:43 Kencho: http://puu.sh/jrG9q/c3340070aa.png
2015-08-07 00:43 Kencho: ;w;
2015-08-07 00:44 Chaoslitz: okok
2015-08-07 00:44 Chaoslitz: 03:14:199 (9) - 咁放番右d ww
2015-08-07 00:45 Chaoslitz: 03:22:744 (4,5) - 最好呢個都係
2015-08-07 00:45 Kencho: ok
2015-08-07 00:46 Kencho: ok
2015-08-07 00:48 Chaoslitz: 04:21:653 (2) - 我建議放上d
2015-08-07 00:49 Chaoslitz: 04:21:108 (4,1,2) - 個flow curve d易玩d
2015-08-07 00:50 Kencho: 其實04:21:653 (2) - 個尾係同04:22:744 (1) - stack
2015-08-07 00:50 Kencho: 04:21:108 (4,1,2) - 呢度我改改
2015-08-07 00:50 Chaoslitz: ok
2015-08-07 00:51 Chaoslitz: 04:26:926 (2,1) - 高d :33
2015-08-07 00:52 Kencho: ok fixed
2015-08-07 00:53 Kencho: http://puu.sh/jrGMt/14c0978301.png
2015-08-07 00:53 Kencho: 前面我咁樣
2015-08-07 00:54 Chaoslitz: ok
2015-08-07 00:58 Chaoslitz: 05:29:108 (6,7,8) - 高d
2015-08-07 00:59 Chaoslitz: 強迫症 (:3 [       ]
2015-08-07 00:59 Kencho: 好XD
2015-08-07 00:59 Chaoslitz: xd
2015-08-07 01:01 Chaoslitz: 05:42:199 (7,8) - 個jump建議唔好咁大
2015-08-07 01:02 Kencho: 好啦我縮小小，因為vocal很強嘛
2015-08-07 01:02 Chaoslitz: 因為冇咩bgm
2015-08-07 01:04 Chaoslitz: 改完update~~
2015-08-07 01:05 Kencho: 好，thanks very much;w;
2015-08-07 01:06 Chaoslitz: :3
2015-08-07 01:29 Kencho: 上傳左好多次都唔得
2015-08-07 01:29 Kencho: QAQ
2015-08-07 01:30 Chaoslitz: restart?
2015-08-07 01:30 Kencho: restart左好多次了
2015-08-07 01:30 Kencho: 不過奇怪係其他圖可以上傳
2015-08-07 01:34 Kencho: 重新down一次終於得左
2015-08-07 01:42 Chaoslitz: xd
2015-08-07 01:42 Kencho: xd
2015-08-07 01:44 Chaoslitz: wocao原來先12日
2015-08-07 01:44 Kencho: 其實我成個set整完先上傳
2015-08-07 01:45 Kencho: 之前都整做一個星期
2015-08-07 01:45 Chaoslitz: 神mapper友小八;w;
2015-08-07 01:45 Kencho: 10號就要afk一段時間了，所以想先飛
2015-08-07 01:45 Kencho: ;w;w;w
2015-08-07 01:45 Chaoslitz: okie
2015-08-07 01:46 Chaoslitz: 等位qualify =w=