AKINO from bless4 & CHiCO with HoneyWorks - MIIRO vs. Ai no · forum

Nathan

Beatmap Nominator

Joined August 2014

Nathan 2015-07-29T22:32:34+00:00

VINXIS wrote:
fuycjk m4m thing lemur4tatoe

jawline
nice hitsounds dude
00:25:846 (1,2) - pRETTY SURE THIS IS SNAPPED WRONG FUCKIN SUKIINATHANRT RT oops
00:34:461 (1,2,3) - i get sued for using this and then u go ahead and use it ejtgsdfkgdskfv. Anyway problem is spcacing emphasis. the spacing between 00:34:461 (1,2) - is MUCH larger than 00:34:923 (2,3) - while 3 has a stronger sound to it than the slider head of 2 does. Also how close slider 2 is to slider 3's head is ugly af like me irl slider leniency
00:57:858 (1,5) - y donot u stak tdhius omar gfsdsggod the slider shape is sscreaming for it imo meh I don't want 4 and 5 to be so close together
01:13:358 (3,4,5,2,3,4,5,6) - not evn using shape grids 3268934532/0 pls wasn't inteded
lol fuk me

jinhang_ang wrote:
[Nathan's Insane]
This diff is also awesome enough. Great jumps can you teach me how to map them correctly like you <33
1. 00:45:538 (1,2,3) - This slowdown seems to be a little too strange and sudden. How about a slow triangle? seems perfectly fine for me, it might be sudden but the longer gaps are enough time to react

Fuccho wrote:
M4M from your modding queue! I'll start from the first insane, since I don't have much understanding on the easier difficulties, and I probably wouldn't be of much help.
Nathan's Insane
Dude, you need to end the kiai. Add an inherited timing point at the end. oops
00:28:153 (1) - Remove clap. why? there is a snare on that beat o.o
... There's not much else I can say with this good a map, except for good job!

pinataman wrote:
[Nathan's Insane]

00:44:307 (1) – Minor, but consider making this anti-flow like http://puu.sh/jhCML/f86970b770.jpg . I think breaking the circular flow here goes well with the high-pitched vocals. seems quite harsh and sudden in a slow part for me

To whomever made the hitsounds:

Similar issues with hitsounds pointed out in Sharkie's Insane

00:22:153 – It's a shame you can't put a whistle here

00:23:230 (1) – whistle on the head? did both myself

ty for the mods

code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: tatoe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 6538
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:MIIRO
TitleUnicode:海色
Artist:AKINO from bless4
ArtistUnicode:AKINO from bless4
Creator:monstrata
Version:Nathan's Insane
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:sukinathan ktgster pishifat smoothie world walaowey toybot sheela901 yuii- Sharkie みいろ miiro tv size opening kantai collection kancolle fleet girls magic kaito 1412 ai no scenario chico with honeyworks まじっく快斗1412
BeatmapID:722968
BeatmapSetID:325158

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Monstrata 2015-07-29T22:55:12+00:00

jinhang_ang wrote:
Okay M4M request from t/274775/start=224

Some diffs (Beginner and Easy) don't have any kiai which is quite strange..? My bad

~~omg this diff list~~

So let me start.

[Yuistrata's Easy]
1. 00:03:692 (2) - I suggest removing the reverse and change it to something else instead, so that you can end the slider at 00:04:923 which makes it follow both the vocal and the violin. Nothing wrong with this rhythm tho D: it still follows the vocals well.
Dunno but pictures talk better than my descriptions anyway this is just a generic idea you may have something better in your mind
2. 00:35:538 (2) - Consider adding a sharp point at 00:35:846 so that when i goes and reverses the vocal will hit at the sharp point making it better to play. I was going for a blanket here, I think this is fine.

[Normal]
1. 00:07:230 (1) - Stacking this with the previous slider tail is strange to play, since it's not completely silence and the vocal that is really convincing to move the cursor. It's fine.

[Hard]
1. 00:15:538 (4,1) - I prefer an anti-jump technique here, it shows a slowdown instead of a stop (the latter works better for complete silence such as 00:16:769 (5,1) ) Nah, anti-jumps are just really painful to read, i dont like them lol. Especially on a Hard
2. 00:17:692 (2,3) - Please turn off DS to fix the spacing between these two notes. Stacking the latter makes it a whole lot closer to the previous one and it's ugly. Looks fine to me.
3. 00:52:923 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I would make this flow differ from 00:51:692 (1,2,3,4,5,6) because the final direction of cursor movement is different. I would make it like the one in the picture. You might not like it but just a suggestion of flowing to the slider better. I like the current flow, it's a nice circular flow that leads into the loop slider really well.
My own bad suggestion please find your own one please ;;

I don't think I can mod anything onwards as they are too hard for me to play or even observe ;; sorry for that.

P/s: A great thanks for mappers that gave me feedback on my mod This is a really nice mapset and most of what i have written are just suggestions.

UndeadCapulet wrote:
From your queue:
General
Missing combo colours in all diffs except Tatoe and Kyshiro. Omg thanks I forgot loool

I think you should consider revising the mp3 so Miiro's "tatoe" chorus plays at the very end (without mapping it), and set the preview point there. Seems kinda lame for this entire meme set to not actually have the meme it was inspired by (the tatoe preview points). Ahhh, yea thats a good idea definitely, but it's going to be sooo random when ppl finish playing the map and suddenly hear the miiro tatoe playing in the bg for like 5 seconds during the results page lmao.

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Tatoe
00:01:076 (1) - You could just do this to map all of the piano keys. Meh, it's fine xD.
00:03:692 (1) - hentai sv >//<
00:05:538 (2,3,1,2) - Hmm, I think these tight angles make this whole pattern really hard to properly snap to; the 00:05:846 (1,2) - motion especially is really hard to hit while also hitting everything else. Idk maybe I'm just bad but I could never get this part right. Perhaps try something along the lines of These triangles play just fine for me. I'm really going for an up/down motion here with some horizontal movement in there to avoid any overlaps.this?
00:16:461 (5,6,7,8,1) - Mapping the vocal doesn't really give enough time for the violin jump to linger, in my opinion. The violin sound echoes all the way up to the downbeat, but you're intruding on that by having us play the vocal. I know individually, mapping all these parts makes sense, but when combined together the overall experience is weakened. I'm kinda forcing the player to click on the vocal too. I think it works fine, I NC'ed it anyways. It's a bit different from other Miiro's that leave the vocal unmapped, and I think this works fine.
00:24:461 (3) - This repeated slider is making the 00:25:846 (1,2) - repeats lose a lot of impact. It's a longer slider, so the player is holding their key down longer, so it feels stronger than the sliders that were placed deliberately to feel strong. A rhythm like this maps the vocals just as well while keeping the power properly balanced. Well, i didn't really map those repeats with the intention of making them impactful. Maybe I should reconsider that but ehh, I already did that on Extra xD.
00:55:692 (1) - I feel like you should slow this slider down, 1.0x SV is pretty weird imo Yea you're right, i'll use a lower SV.

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Extra
Check AIMod wow k

00:25:846 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Yo this is fkin awesome why didn't you do this in Tatoe lol lol idk.
00:27:076 (1) - I think it'd be better for this to be closer to 00:26:871 (1) - , idk I think it'd play smoother, you already have a flow change by pointing in the opposite direction, I don't think a jump is needed. I think this is fine, more impact hehe.

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Ehh ran out of stuff to talk about..

Fuccho wrote:
Extra
00:17:230 (1) - This feels too close to 00:16:769 (2) Either make a bigger overlap or move them a bit away from each other. I think this is fine, cuz of the DS i'm using for this section, but i'll see if i can make it more flow-breaky for emphasis.
00:17:692 (2,1) - I don't like these long sliders, since they skip a vocal. It's you're call whether you want to change it or not. I want to keep them. Makes this section simpler, and different from other sections.
00:33:384 - Are you not going to emphasize this piano? Nah, its fine.
00:46:769 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel like you could improve the rhythm of this section. There's a clear rhythm in the vocals that you're completely ignoring. Just keeping a simpler rhythm here. You're correct, there is another rhythm i could have followed, but it's the rhythm most people will follow, and it's been used exhaustively in other miiro sets.
That's about it. Solid map with a looot of triangles.
Tatoe
00:07:230 (1) - Could you move this a bit down and a bit to the left? I don't like the way it goes straight through the end of 00:06:769 (4) Ahhh fixed.
00:47:384 (4) - Maybe curve this and blanket it on 00:47:076 (2) oooh nice
The rest seems really solid. I have no more to say.
I hope I was to at least some help, but it's difficult when the diffs are as good as they are. I ended up mostly coming with personal suggestions.
Either way, good luck with your map! I'll be awaiting my mod. Just take your time

EDIT: You probably want to move the preview point to 00:06:692 so you don't get that extra guitar or whatever before the vocals. Yea i'll try that. I don't like how the Preview Point doesn't actually align ih osu, and you have to put the point a bit before where you actuall want the preview lol.

pinataman wrote:
Hello everyone. I'm here for M4M from your queue. I think I modded enough difficulties to be fair, but if your mod is more helpful to me, I can come back and mod more. Hope this helps! I mention pacing a lot, and I'm sure you understand this, but in case you're looking for more context, or in case I start making no sense, or if you want to see an interesting video, here's a video that goes into greater detail: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LScL4CWe5E&t=0m19s

[General]

Having this many difficulties in a mapset is overwhelming. Players aren't going to want to sort through eighteen difficulties when they only play one or two. Please split this up into two mapsets and rank them separately. Noooo

Ultra Beginner is largely unnecessary since most new players will be able to do Super Beginner easily. Also personally, I think the lack of rhythm in Ultra Beginner makes it just a really strange and I just don't like it. It's just too slow and easy. For the lols.

Big issue:
In all of the difficulties I modded, the shift from 195 bpm to 180 bpm really hurts the pacing since it slows down the map when the song reaches a more intense section of the song. If I were to draw the intensity curve of the map it would look like this: http://puu.sh/jh8cg/ae23c0d707.png. You could argue that this is the pacing of the song, but that just means the song was poorly constructed and produces inherently problematic maps. In hindsight, it might have been better to choose to use Ai no Scenario as the beginning and Miiro as the end. But since that can't happen (at least in this mapset), reconsider the spacing, the use of 1/1 sliders, and especially the slider velocity in the kiai section to see if you can make it more intense to compensate for the slower bpm. Alternatively or in addition, reduce the intensity of what came before it (I realize I'm asking you to put a lot of work into changing this, but I think it would improve the map greatly. Alternatively, go map the song the other way around). Nooo lol. I don't think you understand the purpose of this set lol.

[Extra]

Same hitsounds as in Sharkie's Insane and Nathan's Insane.

00:17:230 (1) – until 00:25:846 (1) - , you use a lot less intense spacing and rhythm by using long sliders like 00:17:692 (2) - . I feel like this is undermapping the song relative to what you have mapped around it, and it would smooth out the pacing of the map by including more clickable notes in this section. 00:32:000 (1) - and 00:33:230 (1) – have a similar issue. I get that this is a rest, but you are too restful here. (Consider 00:36:923 (1) - . This is much much less intense section of the song (because no guitar), yet it feels too similar in intensity in the map) I have to disagree. I think the lack of intensity and simple rhythm is fine. Tbh i mapped this Extra to be very easy, with the majority of the difficulty coming from extended jump patterns. It's a different concept from other more conventional Extra's, but this mapset definitely has the spread to support this.

00:47:691 (4,2) – not the nicest overlap, try moving so it doesn't Tried.

00:51:692 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) – This section uses repetition of the counterclockwise flow to build a tension. This tension is more a result of the singer using a near constant pitch. So from my perspective, the release of the tension is best suited when the singer changes her pitch (moving up to a major note), which occurs at 00:53:538 (5) - . Since you continue the counterclockwise flow, it feels like is missing that exciting punch and instead just feels repetitive. I would like to see a clockwise flow start on (5) to better represent that, for example: http://puu.sh/jh417/6f3c5a9a7e.jpg But that would just paly weird rhythmically for me. I want the flow change to occur on a new measure, and 5 is part of a triangle pattern, changing it would just ruin the pattern I had going.

There are more instances where a change in direction fits nicely. I feel this way because some of my axioms for mapping are:
A line of music has a certain emotion attached to it.
A pattern in osu has a certain emotion attached to it that is directly related to the music it maps.
So by making a pattern the same as it was before, you are saying that the music has the same emotion as it did before. The following are instances where I think the music changes, which presents a contradiction to these axioms when you repeat the flow of the patterns:
00:11:076 (1,2,3) – A change in flow here goes well with the addition of the strings, so try making this a clockwise triangle instead of a counterclockwise one. I've captured that using spacing changes instead of flow...
00:26:461 (1) – This is a strong note, so a change could be used to make this set of notes more distinct to better signify the impact of the strong note. As an example: http://puu.sh/jh5js/43f1b82d96.jpg It's the same as all the other notes :S
00:44:307 (1) – The singer switches into the major octave here, which signifies a huge change in energy. I'd like to see something that doesn't continue the counterclockwise flow to show a release of that energy. I think you're focusing too much on directional flow when spacing is a much better indicator of energy change. Either ways, i don't think this is that big of a change and even if it were, this is still a calm section so I don't want to suddenly put a really big jump here when the other sections weren't mapped to something big.
01:04:025 (3,4,5,6) – and 01:04:691 (1,2,3,4) – should have different flows to signify the loss of the singer just like you change the flow at 01:06:025 (1) – when she comes back. I didn't change the flow for the singer tho D:. Also, this flows completely fine for me.
01:15:358 (1) – Is when the piano comes in, so a change in flow here feels better than repeating what you have. No...
01:16:691 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) – So the micro-flow (the linear aspect of every combo like 01:16:691 (1,2) -) is a good change, but the general flow of these four combos is still a counterclockwise circle. It might be better to not make the general flow counterclockwise to show a more distinct change in music. I really prefer showing changes in the music with spacing and emphasis over small things like clockwise/counterclockwise flow...
There are more, but I think I got the perspective across. If I don't make sense in any of these arguments, please message me in game and maybe I can explain it better. No, i simply disagree.
If you disagree with the suggestions, I'd really love to hear your perspective on how and why you mapped it this way since I think this could give me new insight on flow.

[Tatoe]

Some of the points made in Extra apply here.

00:09:538 (5,1) – The note on (1) seems pretty strong in the song. Try increasing the spacing of this jump to better reflect that. I think it's fine.

00:25:846 (1,2,3,4) – As far as spacing and rhythm goes, there isn't really a change to indicate a change of intensity between this and the previous section. If you were going for reducing the spacing/speed as a sign of increased intensity, the reduction in speed has to be very noticeable, which it really isn't here. I recommend using six circles here and just singletapping through it. Yea i'm considering doing that now that i think about it. This section is quite easy compared to others...

Similar to Extra, these are a few examples of the many instances where a change in direction/flow would help. They're fine for me.
00:32:000 (1) -
00:35:538 (1) -
Somewhere in 00:38:153 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) -
00:44:307 (1) -
00:49:846 (4) -
00:53:538 (5) -

Alright well I hope this can help improve the map. Sorry if I came across as salty or abrasive. Good luck!

Thanks for the mods

. I'm expecting like 2 or 3 more mods incoming, and then I'll mod all the GD's myself and try to push this set forward hehe.

ghm12

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ghm12 2015-07-30T16:05:30+00:00

I don't think using white or light color is a good idea. At least I can't see the white notes that well when I'm playing. Maybe it's better changing it?
no kds isnt even a mod

Monstrata

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Monstrata 2015-07-30T20:10:03+00:00

Hmm... I'll get some more opinions. I can definitely change it to something else though! Thanks

ktgster

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ktgster 2015-07-30T20:25:29+00:00

VINXIS

VINXIS wrote:
00:18:000 (3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - rANDOM JUMPZqa. Anyway the problem is spacing emphasis and combo i ng. If you're mapping the guitar strums for emphasis the ncs sud actualyl b on 00:18:922 (1,1) - and not wot u hav rn. it looks random with ur way and unjustified or w./e OK - wut
00:25:846 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - space thes ese out mo r e it looks weird 4 them 2 be so close wen u had 1/2 spacing much larger than dis b4444 - I thnk is fine, s0ng is pretty calm n is cn't be tht hrd
lol @ ending

Atsuro

Atsuro wrote:
[ktgster's Insane]
00:17:230 (1) - The drum normals don't really fit here imo, they are too loud. Lower the volume or change them. - lowered volume
00:32:615 (3,4,5,1) - This pattern is a bit confusing, i always think 00:33:230 (1) - will start from the other side. (Or maybe it's just me?) - could be you, I had playtests where no one stumbled upon that part

I really liked this one - yay

pinataman

pinataman wrote:
[ktgster's Insane]

00:17:230 (1) – The hitnormal sounds a little too loud or intense for this section. Consider using a calmer hitsound to go with the calmer part of the song. - I just lowered the hitsound volume, there is no better sound suited for that part

00:18:000 (3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) – This pattern feels a little too intense for this part of the song. It rivals
00:14:769 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) – and 00:52:923 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - , but the music at these parts are much much more intense. Consider making 00:18:461 (1) – and 00:18:922 (2) – each a ½ slider to go with the high-pitched guitar and give some much need rest to this pattern. - considering there is a rest for the vocals, the emphasis goes on the guitar strums which is what this pattern is doing. The examples you listed have bigger patterns and focus more on angles than this

00:33:230 (1) – The spacing into this feels a little too big, try moving this to 00:32:615 (3) - 's slider end instead of the head. - which causes poor overlapping and ruins the design. I moved the circle before it as it was in a bad position

00:35:538 (1,2) – Why choose to make a 1/1 break instead of filling it with ½ slider? If I had to guess, is it because of the shortened vocal here? If so, 00:36:000 (3) – doesn't fit with that. Since the shortened vocal is even more stressed, we should have a 1/1 break here as well by the logic above. If you want the 1/1 break, then delete 3, otherwise make (1) and (4) a ½ slider. - because theres no need for a 1/2 slider. Your example is not the same as circle (1) and that note is hitting a snare which a slider cannot produce the same effect as I have. The song is not simply vocals

00:51:692 (1,2,3,4) – The spacing here could be bigger and/or could use different spacing instead of one constant DS since the song really starts to pick up in energy here. This sets you up to increase the intensity of 00:52:923 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - , which I am in favor for because this part of the song is imo the most intense part of the first half of the song. - it is a buildup to lead to the next patterns which are more intense. Considering that the player just played a calm part, a sudden jump to jumps is not what I want.

00:54:153 (1,2,3) – These repetitive sliders start to build up a tension. A good release of that tension would be to make the jump into 00:55:076 (4,5,6) – a lot bigger (in addition to the faster rhythm you have with the ¼ ). - except this part is pretty much constant throughout. There is no need to increase the spacing especially since a lot of this map is very structured based.

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Neil Watts

osu! Alumni

1,843 posts

Joined July 2013

Neil Watts 2015-07-31T10:38:15+00:00

TATOE

[General]
The hitsounding across all the maps is a bit weird imo, the claps are overused and inconsistent. It isn't bothering to play with though, I wonder if hitsounding can become a quality issue for ranking. Anyway, if you wanna change your hitsounding, learn to use the hitsound volume, which was the same during all maps I modded (http://puu.sh/jjWTc/9a1b5c2f1a.png), you can give a nice effect to your hitsounding with just changing the volume.
About the claps, just try to be consistent (generally, it works if you put a clap on every white tick).

Additional modding with AiBAT/quick checks:

Smoothie World's Extra
- 01:19:025 (1) - Very risky slider for ranking, don't take useless risks, make another slider
- No timing point for the kiai end (strictly unrankable)
- 00:17:023 - unsnapped green timing point

ktgster's Insane
-00:26:897 (6) - Unsnapped circle

toybot's Insane
00:51:692 (1) - 00:52:000 (2) - 00:52:461 (4) - 00:52:923 (1) - 00:53:230 (2) - Unsnapped end of sliders, there may be other cases

[Normal]
-00:06:153 (2) - This slider doesn't fit to the song. 00:04:923 (1) - It may sound better if you just put reverse arrows on this slider.
- 00:44:307 (1) - It would be nice if you shorten this slider a bit (4/2 -> 3/2)

[Walao's Advanced]
- 00:11:615 (3,5) - It would be nice to increase the space between these two, the distances are a bit short
- 00:15:076 (2,4) - Try something more fitting to the flow than these sliders without slider points ? I think this pattern would be a bit better, the (4) will follow the flow http://puu.sh/jjVUx/5ac6247e3a.jpg
- 00:17:692 (2,3) - You can improve the flow here, try a better use of slider points

- 00:22:461 (1) - This slider is too much curved imo
- 00:28:000 (3,1) - the claps are a bit overused imo, try to be consistent using claps
- 00:37:538 (2) - the normal hitsound at the end of this slider feels out of place
- 01:19:108 (1) - You should silence the end of this spinner
A lot of inconsistence in hitsounds (especially claps), you may have to recheck everything/remap the hitsounding.

[Hard]
- 00:18:461 (1,2) - A break in the gameplay feels weird here, mapping it would be nice
- 00:52:000 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern feels a bit copypasted, it would be nice to arrange it

Good luck!

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2015-07-31T18:49:16+00:00

jinhang_ang wrote:
Okay M4M request from t/274775/start=224

~~omg this diff list~~

So let me start.

[Walao's Advanced]
1. 00:52:923 (1,2,3) - The flow seems a little awkward. fixed it with my way, i leave (2) there and fix (3) instead
I don't know if this is a good suggestion but at least it flows better in my mind and more consistency with previous square
2. 01:18:858 (4,1) - I don't like that stack. It should have some cursor movement as second note is quite convincing for a jump (where it doesn't fit in an Advanced it should at least command some cursor movement) remove stacking.

thanks for the mod xD

Neil Watts wrote:
TATOE TAAATOOEEEEEE~~

[Walao's Advanced]
- 00:11:615 (3,5) - It would be nice to increase the space between these two, the distances are a bit short I'm not sure which one though..is it the slider (1)? . bcoz i cant see any note (5) there. if its the slider (1), then yeah, i add a little spacing there.
- 00:15:076 (2,4) - Try something more fitting to the flow than these sliders without slider points ? I think this pattern would be a bit better, the (4) will follow the flow http://puu.sh/jjVUx/5ac6247e3a.jpg fix (4) only
- 00:17:692 (2,3) - You can improve the flow here, try a better use of slider points fixed, hope its ok now >w<
- 00:22:461 (1) - This slider is too much curved imo fixed
- 00:28:000 (3,1) - the claps are a bit overused imo, try to be consistent using claps
- 00:37:538 (2) - the normal hitsound at the end of this slider feels out of place
- 01:19:108 (1) - You should silence the end of this spinner
A lot of inconsistence in hitsounds (especially claps), you may have to recheck everything/remap the hitsounding. about hitsounding..my diff hitsound was copied from monstrata tatoe diff lol :v.. so about hitsound, its better to ask monstrata xD

Good luck!

thanks for the mod xD

asdadadff

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: tatoe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 6538
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:MIIRO
TitleUnicode:海色
Artist:AKINO from bless4
ArtistUnicode:AKINO from bless4
Creator:monstrata
Version:Walao's Advanced
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:sukinathan ktgster pishifat smoothie world walaowey toybot sheela901 yuii- Sharkie みいろ miiro tv size opening kantai collection kancolle fleet girls magic kaito 1412 ai no scenario chico with honeyworks まじっく快斗1412
BeatmapID:724337
BeatmapSetID:325158

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Avena

2,158 posts

Joined December 2012

Avena 2015-08-05T14:35:36+00:00

delete this please

Zweib

579 posts

Joined November 2011

Zweib 2015-08-05T16:13:18+00:00

Osu needs more ~~TATOE~~ MIIRO!

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Cherry Blossom

3,185 posts

Joined October 2011

Cherry Blossom 2015-08-05T17:20:37+00:00

Hello, M4M from my queue.
Please, reply to this mod and tell me why you didn't change without saying "it's my style" or "there are already ranked maps with the same kind of pattern" or other reasons like this.

Ready to fight. OH LOL THIS REMIX AND BG.
I skipped Super/Ultra beginner diffs.

Yuistrata's Easy

00:18:307 (2) - This slider sounds weird, imo, it shouldn't really end on 00:18:923 - because you didn't follow this tick 00:18:461 - which is the same sound. Try to find a solution that avoids the inconsistency in rhythm.

Normal

00:09:076 (4) - Here you're following the melody, so this slider should end 00:09:384 - . Assume it was your intention because you didn't hitsound this tick 00:09:538 -
01:06:025 (1) - I don't really think a 1/2 gap between this zigzag slider and 01:07:358 (1) - is a good idea, this long slider could be stressful for beginners. And it could be better for them if you give some recovery time, so, you could make it shorter and end it here 01:07:025 - which is a downbeat more powerful than the red tick your followed.

Walao's Advanced

00:31:076 (2,3) - It could be better if you unstack them, QATs could be really annoying concerning different stacks on patterns. You just only stacked 1/2 objects, no 1/1 objects, so it could be better if you keep consistency with what you did before and after.

Hard

Check aimod, you have unsnapped objects.
00:25:846 (1,2) - There should be more distance between these sliders because the gap is different (3/4 and 1/2) but the distance with objects is the same visually, and this could be a little misleading.

sheela's Very Hard

00:18:923 (2,3,4,1) - Here, the motion could be changed to be more comfortable to play, it looks more logical to have something like this instead, up to you to change :
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Sharkie's Insane

Nothing important to mention.

toybot's Insane

00:56:692 - (timing points) they don't have the same sampleset and volume, fix that.

Nathan's Insane

00:13:538 (1,2,3,4) - This is a little weird to play, this shape looks irregular and a little ugly, and the player needs much aim to be able to play this pattern properly, i guess you want to make a triangle and then a jump between 00:13:846 (3,4) - ? A better solution could be a kind of trapeze instead
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ktgster's Insane

00:22:000 (6,1,2) - This is really difficult to play, the antijump on a straight line is like flow breaking here and it was really difficult to handle. The player needs much aim to play this pattern correctly. Try something else with angles, and not a straight line here, or just, avoid this antijump or this long jump.

Extra

00:57:858 (1,2,3) - This is a little broken here because it is a straight motion with a different distance between 00:58:358 (2,3) - and 00:57:858 (1,2) - , it could be more comfortable to play if you move this circle 00:58:358 (2) - downward in order to make an angle, and make this pattern more comfortable to play.

Kyshiro's Extra

00:08:615 (1,2) - they look too close compared to the whole map, when i testplayed it, I just hit this circle too early but i was enough accurate to get a 300 here. But this can be a little bothering for players. So there should be a little more distance between 00:08:615 (1,2) - .

Smoothie World's Extra

00:14:000 (2,3) - This isn't really a good idea to stack this circle on the sliderend here, because stacking an object = slowdown, and there is a difficult jump pattern after this stacked circle and that could be surprising or just more difficult to start the jump pattern because of this slowdown. Also, the motion between 00:14:461 (3,1,2,3,4) - is difficult because it is nearly straight and the distance between objects are not the same, so it could be better if you unstack this circle 00:14:461 (3) - from the sliderend.

pishi's Extra

00:24:769 (2) - Let's talk about "emphasis" (because people like to talk about this lol), I don't really understand why there is a different spacing between the previous and the next object, the intensity is the same here, and it looks/sounds wrong that there is a different distance. There should be the same distance between these objects.
00:34:076 - Difficult to judge, but there is nothing enough powerful on this tick (I said powerful. i can hear the drum's echo but i don't really find it enough powerful to be mapped), so, the circle you placed it sounds out of place. Not like 00:33:769 (4) - which is enough audible or 00:34:384 - too. There are enough emphasis on this part.

Tatoe

00:52:923 (1,2,3) - Here is missed when i was testplaying, after analyzing my replay, i concluded that there is too much distance between 00:53:076 (2,3) - and that makes this jump pattern a little too much difficult. It plays better if there is an equal distance between 00:53:076 (2,3) - and 00:52:923 (1,2) - because that won't force the player to do a larger motion here.
00:54:153 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This looks really overdone and QATs won't really approve this pattern. Note that 1/4 sliders are not really easy to handle and aim because there is something called "flow" and all directions are opposite and that make this pattern more difficult. And it does not really make sense.
And same for 01:16:691 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -

Uuuh that was long.
Good luck ~

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-08-05T19:40:28+00:00

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Atsuro wrote:
[pishifat's Extra]
00:40:000 (3) - Remove whistle not really seeing why?
00:41:538 (3) - I think drum finish sounds better than whistle here. the custom whistle expresses the same bass thing as a drum finsh without being super loud so ya

UndeadCapulet wrote:
pishi's Extra
00:25:846 (1,2,3,4) - Personally I think stacking the circles underneath the sliderheads is making the slidertails seem really weak; since the player is cutting away from the tails via slider leniency, the full effect of lifting up on the tails is lost. If you stack the circles underneath the tails, I think the emphasis works out better. id want some sort of movement from slider to circle, whcih doesnt really happen when it's stacked on the tail. when stacked on the head tho it actually does (even if just barely)
00:41:538 (3,1) - Hmm, just an idea, but how about shifting these so they overlap, similar to 00:19:692 (1,2) - . It would make these two feel more connected by the quiet guitar strum in the background. (Something like this, with other objects rearranged accordingly, idk it'd be cool) overlapping stuff at different offsets is like antistructure. better to have them all the same (at least tahts what i think while doing stuff). there's also an overlap with 00:41:846 (1,3) - already so putting another object on that makes things super cramped
01:02:025 (1,2) - Maybe rework your NC's so they line up more with the vocals? Swapping NC would be better imo, it would be consistent with the NC's at 01:00:525 (1) - and 01:11:191 (1) - . Applies to all similar sections. yes

Fuccho wrote:
Pishi's Extra
00:09:692 (1) - Maybe remove the second white point, and move the second red point a bit to the right? i have really dumb aesthetic preferences ;-;
00:16:307 (3,4,5,6,7) - I feel like this is a bit too curved. I think it'd flow better if you straightened it out just a bit. very possible
00:26:256 (2,4) - I think it'd give a nice effect if you moved these two a bit out of the way. (2) a bit to the right and (4) a bit to the left or whatever floats your boat. awesome
00:32:000 (1) - Could you rotate this a bit clockwise and move it slightly closer to 00:31:692 (5) ? I think it'd look better. same
That's it. The rest seems good.

pinataman wrote:
[pishi's Extra]

00:04:923 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) – please please please put strong hitsounds here. whistle spam B))))))

00:15:692 (3) – In the song, this note acts as a rest. The way you map it does not give enough rest to the player here. The effect of this is that you take away the exciting emphasis the song puts on 00:15:846 (4) - . So I would recommend reducing the spacing or changing the rhythm to be more restful at 00:15:692 (3) – to make the map more exciting. that idea is expressed through spacing already so ya

00:25:846 (1,2,3,4) – As far as spacing and rhythm goes, there isn't really a change to indicate a change of intensity between this and the previous section. If you were going for reducing the spacing/speed as a sign of increased intensity, the reduction in speed has to be very noticeable, which it really isn't here. Please increase the intensity here or in the past section of the music. what im trying to do is make the random 1/3 possibly readable, so using higher/lower slider velocities or spacing would just make things more difficult than intended

00:51:692 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This section uses repetition of the counterclockwise flow to build a tension. This tension is more a result of the singer using a near constant pitch. So from my perspective, the release of the tension is best suited when the singer changes her pitch (moving up to a major note), which occurs at 00:53:538 (1) - . Since you continue the counterclockwise flow, it feels like is missing that exciting punch and instead just feels repetitive. I would like to see a clockwise flow start on (1) to better represent that, for example: http://puu.sh/jhPWE/53b954ce93.jpg maybe it's just different interpretation or something but when the vocals stop being active at 00:54:153 (1) - is where i change it and that fits really well to me

01:18:525 (1,2,3) – Increasing the spacing here could give a more climactic ending to the map. (also fits better with pacing so that 00:51:692 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) – isn't the most intense part of the map (although it still would be, but this makes it less noticeable)). the end of the miiro section was supposed to be the most intense part of the map tho. as for spacing, increasing it goes against pitch stuff so rather not do that

Cherry Blossom wrote:
did both

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osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:海色
Artist:AKINO from bless4
ArtistUnicode:AKINO from bless4
Creator:monstrata
Version:pishi's Extra
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:sukinathan ktgster pishifat smoothie world walaowey toybot sheela901 yuii- Sharkie みいろ miiro tv size opening kantai collection kancolle fleet girls magic kaito 1412 ai no scenario chico with honeyworks まじっく快斗1412
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sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-08-06T16:12:15+00:00

jinhang_ang

jinhang_ang wrote:
Okay M4M request from t/274775/start=224

Some diffs (Beginner and Easy) don't have any kiai which is quite strange..?

~~omg this diff list~~

So let me start.

[sheela's Very Hard]
1. 00:08:615 (1,2) - I see no reason to jump. However if you have your own reason and would like to keep it please tell me so that i can improve my modding skills :3 // I don't know too lol. I switched the head and tail to 00:08:615 (1) .
2. 00:25:846 (1,1) - Other diffs make this the same NC. Perhaps you would like to keep it for epicness though i don't know about your choice. // The new combo fits there because of the beats.
3. 00:54:769 (4) - I think a jump fits. Perhaps Ctrl+G? // Alright.

P/s: A great thanks for mappers that gave me feedback on my mod This is a really nice mapset and most of what i have written are just suggestions.

Thank you for the mod, jinhang_ang!

Cherry Blossom

Cherry Blossom wrote:
sheela's Very Hard
00:18:923 (2,3,4,1) - Here, the motion could be changed to be more comfortable to play, it looks more logical to have something like this instead, up to you to change : // It does make the flow better. Arranged similar to the screenshot.
SPOILER
Thanks for the mod, Cherry Blossom!

http://puu.sh/jrDTW/98c95ac04a.osu

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Monstrata 2015-08-07T02:40:48+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello, M4M from my queue.
Please, reply to this mod and tell me why you didn't change without saying "it's my style" or "there are already ranked maps with the same kind of pattern" or other reasons like this.

Ready to fight. OH LOL THIS REMIX AND BG.
I skipped Super/Ultra beginner diffs.

Yuistrata's Easy
00:18:307 (2) - This slider sounds weird, imo, it shouldn't really end on 00:18:923 - because you didn't follow this tick 00:18:461 - which is the same sound. Try to find a solution that avoids the inconsistency in rhythm.A mistake on my end probably, sorry Yuii- lol. I extended the slider by 1/2 a beat because I think that's much more straightforward lol.

Normal
00:09:076 (4) - Here you're following the melody, so this slider should end 00:09:384 - . Assume it was your intention because you didn't hitsound this tick 00:09:538 - That was my bad. I hitsounded the tick instead xD. Keeping the slider as-is would be more consistent with the rhythm that I follow.
01:06:025 (1) - I don't really think a 1/2 gap between this zigzag slider and 01:07:358 (1) - is a good idea, this long slider could be stressful for beginners. And it could be better for them if you give some recovery time, so, you could make it shorter and end it here 01:07:025 - which is a downbeat more powerful than the red tick your followed.You're right. reduced the length of the slider to the downbeat you mentioned.

Hard
Check aimod, you have unsnapped objects. lol fixed
00:25:846 (1,2) - There should be more distance between these sliders because the gap is different (3/4 and 1/2) but the distance with objects is the same visually, and this could be a little misleading.I actually think this is fine... The gap is actually 2/3 vs 1/2, not 3/4 and 1/2 since the sliders here are 2/3 repeats not 3/4's. I think this pattern, visually, is still straight forward. All clicks also occur on white ticks so players will still be "playing" to 1/1 rhythm.

Extra
00:57:858 (1,2,3) - This is a little broken here because it is a straight motion with a different distance between 00:58:358 (2,3) - and 00:57:858 (1,2) - , it could be more comfortable to play if you move this circle 00:58:358 (2) - downward in order to make an angle, and make this pattern more comfortable to play. You're right, I wanted to have a jump here, but the angle would be far too linear because players will naturally use slider leniency on slider 1 to play this pattern, but that ends up making the motion very linear. Fixed!

Tatoe
00:52:923 (1,2,3) - Here is missed when i was testplaying, after analyzing my replay, i concluded that there is too much distance between 00:53:076 (2,3) - and that makes this jump pattern a little too much difficult. It plays better if there is an equal distance between 00:53:076 (2,3) - and 00:52:923 (1,2) - because that won't force the player to do a larger motion here. I agree, I used this pattern before and people seemed to have trouble with it. I've completely remapped this pattern with uniform spacing in mind now. The jumps are just too big for players to appreciate minor changes in spacing so i'll keep those for smaller jump patterns.
00:54:153 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This looks really overdone and QATs won't really approve this pattern. Note that 1/4 sliders are not really easy to handle and aim because there is something called "flow" and all directions are opposite and that make this pattern more difficult. And it does not really make sense. My thought process when making these kick-slider jumps was that because slider-heads are much easier to acc than circles due to the hit leniency on sliders, even though this pattern is difficult to aim, it will be easy to play. Nonetheless, after changing up the pattern you mentioned before, I decided to remake this pattern as well. Funny how turning the kick-sliders into circles ended up buffing the diff to over 6 stars.
And same for 01:16:691 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I would like to keep this pattern if possible though. I think the slider-spam works well here because lower bpm, and there are also less jumps leading into the pattern so I think the whole jump sequence as a whole won't be over-done unlike the miiro one (which had 25 jumps in a row lol).

Uuuh that was long.
Good luck ~

Thanks CB!

Also, updated everyone's diffs (so far).

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Topic Starter

Monstrata 2015-08-07T02:44:58+00:00

Fixed the tags/source/title for you sheela~

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-08-07T03:45:14+00:00

monstrata wrote:
Fixed the tags/source/title for you sheela~

Oh thanks! Weirdly, the unicode characters turn into bizarre characters when I update.

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

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Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Monstrata 2015-08-07T06:02:36+00:00

Updated all diffs again, with a new set of custon hitsounds. Actually these were the original hitsounds Yuii- used when he did the hitsounding, I just didn't import the custom hitsounds in cuz im stupid lol.

[Spread Balancing]
Here's the proposed difficulty-settings balance for every diff. Please let me know if you have any objections. Most of the values are just small decimal movements anyways, they are done to accomodate the amount of Insane/Extra's in the set. Anything that requires an over 1.0 change has been bolded. Everything else should be minor. I will apply all these changes after all GD'ers have responded to all mods. Feel free to apply them yourself though <3

Tatoe: HP 6.5 | AR 9.5 | OD 9
pishi's Extra: HP 6.1 | AR 9.4 | OD 8.9
Smoothie World's Extra: HP6 | AR 9.3 | OD 8.8
Kyshiro's Extra: HP 6 | AR 9.2 | OD 8.7
Extra: HP 6 | AR 9.1 | OD 8.6
ktgster's Insane: HP 5.8 | AR 9 | OD 8.4
Nathan's Insane: HP 5.5 | AR 9 | OD 8
toybot's Insane: HP 5.5 | AR 8.7 | OD 7.5
Sharkie's Insane: HP 5.5 | AR 8.5 | OD 7
sheela's Very Hard: HP 5.5 | AR 8 | OD 6.5
Hard: HP 5 | AR 7.3 | OD 6
Walao's Advanced: HP 4.5 | AR 6.8 | OD 5.3
Normal: HP 4 | AR 5.5 | OD 4.5
Yuistrata's Easy: HP 3 | AR 3.5 | OD 3
Beginner: HP 2 | AR 2 | OD 2
Super Beginner: HP 1 | AR1 | OD 1
Ultra Beginner: HP 0 | AR 0 | OD 0.

[Tatoe]

Wow! I have nothing to say, this diff is amazing!

[pishi's Extra]

No complaints here too!

[Smoothie World's Extra]

Tbh, Tick-rate 1 is better for this song.
00:14:000 (2,3) - Hmm, I guess this works... but imo putting a jump would be better for the drum. Up to you~
00:17:000 - Snap this green line?
00:48:000 (6) - I think NC'ing every measure would be better, since the drums pick up again after the slow section.
00:50:461 (6) - NC here too?
01:01:025 (2,3) - This jump didn't make tooo much sense for me because 3 isn't really a strong note.

[Kyshiro's Extra]

00:55:076 (4,5,6) - I think you could move this triplet up a bit to make it a bit more of a jump from 3.

[Extra]

Remap please.

[ktgster's Insane]

00:18:000 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Even for me, this is a surprising amount of single tapping for a section that's supposed to be calmer/less intense.
00:26:897 (6) - Are you trying to get this set DQ'ed??~!?
00:32:615 (3,4,5,1) - This was really difficult to read cuz of the overlap...

[Nathan's Insane]

Good job!

[toybot's Insane]

00:51:692 - You ahve a bunch of unsnapped sliders here, can you fix them?

[Sharkie's Insane]

Check AIMod~
00:03:384 (4,1) - Mind rotating slider 1 just like a few degrees to avoid that overlap with 4's head?
01:00:525 (5,6,1) - I much prefer if you used automatic stacking. But if not, can you fix this? If you notice, 5>6 is 0.10x spacing but 6>1 is 0.15x spacing so it looks a bit weird in gameplay because they aren't the same distance.
01:03:191 (5,6,1) - Here too. I think you should stick with 0.15x. It looks cool without making the circles all crammed. Also, the majority of your triplets follow 0.15x anyways.
01:08:191 (4,5,6) - Same here, mind just making it 0.15x?

[sheela's Very Hard]

00:12:153 (1,2) - Wouldn't hurt to blanket this. Up to you ;o.

Other than that, really clean mapping!

[Hard]

Tatoe

[Walao's Advanced]

00:02:153 (3,1,1) - How come these 3 sliders use 1.0x SV when 00:01:538 (2) - is 0.75 :S
00:25:846 (1,2) - Mind making these flow a bit better into each other?
00:48:615 (3) - Any way you can make this a 1/2 repeat slider instead to map 00:48:615 (3) - ?
01:06:525 (3,4) - Not really great to have these 1/2 sliders begin on red ticks.

Try this rhythm? Add a circle in there and move the 1/2 slider forward 1/2 a beat

01:15:858 - Nice piano sound you could have mapped~

Alternative rhythm you could try

[Everything Else]

Tatoe

ktgster

Elite Mapper

482 posts

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ktgster 2015-08-07T06:53:12+00:00

Cherry Blossom

Cherry Blossom wrote:
ktgster's Insane
00:22:000 (6,1,2) - This is really difficult to play, the antijump on a straight line is like flow breaking here and it was really difficult to handle. The player needs much aim to play this pattern correctly. Try something else with angles, and not a straight line here, or just, avoid this antijump or this long jump. - stacked

HI SUBMITTER

monstrata wrote:
[ktgster's Insane]

00:18:000 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Even for me, this is a surprising amount of single tapping for a section that's supposed to be calmer/less intense. - k made it simpler
00:26:897 (6) - Are you trying to get this set DQ'ed??~!? - maybe
00:32:615 (3,4,5,1) - This was really difficult to read cuz of the overlap... - fixed

the map

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Also add difficulty settings.

pishifat

osu! Paragon

3,802 posts

Joined August 2013

pishifat 2015-08-07T07:13:59+00:00

those hitsounds uhhhhh maybe dont

some qat on a different map wrote:
Remove dripping and slurping hitsounds at all (all hitnormals), as they don't fit the clear tune music provides. What made you think using hitsounds from popular skins is a good idea?

the oriental bamboo something hitsound would probably be included too

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2015-08-07T08:13:41+00:00

Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello, M4M from my queue.
Please, reply to this mod and tell me why you didn't change without saying "it's my style" or "there are already ranked maps with the same kind of pattern" or other reasons like this.

Walao's Advanced
00:31:076 (2,3) - It could be better if you unstack them, QATs could be really annoying concerning different stacks on patterns. You just only stacked 1/2 objects, no 1/1 objects, so it could be better if you keep consistency with what you did before and after. fixed

Uuuh that was long.
Good luck ~

Thanks for the mod xD

monstrata wrote:
Updated all diffs again, with a new set of custon hitsounds. Actually these were the original hitsounds Yuii- used when he did the hitsounding, I just didn't import the custom hitsounds in cuz im stupid lol.

[Walao's Advanced]

00:02:153 (3,1,1) - How come these 3 sliders use 1.0x SV when 00:01:538 (2) - is 0.75 :S lol , didnt notice this xDD, fixed anyway
00:25:846 (1,2) - Mind making these flow a bit better into each other? fixed
00:48:615 (3) - Any way you can make this a 1/2 repeat slider instead to map 00:48:615 (3) - ? I wont add it for now lol, it increases the star rating a lot lol
01:06:525 (3,4) - Not really great to have these 1/2 sliders begin on red ticks. fixed
Try this rhythm? Add a circle in there and move the 1/2 slider forward 1/2 a beat
01:15:858 - Nice piano sound you could have mapped~ yeah, you're right, I've mapped it now xD
Alternative rhythm you could try

Thanks for the mod xD

sdasfaff

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: tatoe.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 6538
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.8

[Metadata]
Title:MIIRO
TitleUnicode:海色
Artist:AKINO from bless4
ArtistUnicode:AKINO from bless4
Creator:monstrata
Version:Walao's Advanced
Source:艦隊これくしょん -艦これ-
Tags:sukinathan ktgster pishifat smoothie world walaowey toybot sheela901 yuii- Sharkie みいろ miiro tv size opening kantai collection kancolle fleet girls magic kaito 1412 ai no scenario chico with honeyworks まじっく快斗1412
BeatmapID:724337
BeatmapSetID:325158

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"miiro_no_scenario.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 128,0,255
Combo4 : 192,192,192

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toybot

1,050 posts

Joined June 2013

toybot 2015-08-07T08:56:00+00:00

fixed all except from jinhang_ang's, i really like how the pattern builds up with the triangle and i feel it'd kinda mess it up

thanks!

https://0paste.tk/7770.txt

Xilver15

Former osu! Champion: 2015

510 posts

Joined August 2013

Xilver15 2015-08-07T21:48:54+00:00

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Last edited by Xilver15 2019-08-15T21:23:33+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

-Visceral-

644 posts

Joined August 2012

-Visceral- 2015-08-10T04:21:59+00:00

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Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Monstrata 2015-08-10T04:26:48+00:00

Thanks Xilver

Alright all diffs updated. W'ere just waiting on Sharkie and Kyshiro now lol.

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-08-10T09:02:41+00:00

[Ultra Beginner]

OMG Very slow SV...

00:25:846 - The finish is so awkward Delete.
01:19:025 - Note here?

[Super Beginner]

00:51:846 (1) - Spiner Finish 00:55:230 - here.
01:02:025 (1) - 01:07:358 (1) - 01:12:691 (1) - Head add finish better.
01:19:025 - Note.

[Extra]

00:55:692 (1) - Please lower the volume. Maybe 30% is appropriate.

Call me.

sheela

2,651 posts

Joined October 2011

sheela 2015-08-10T19:41:56+00:00

@monstrata: Thanks for the mod! I applied the HP and blanket things.

sheela's Very Hard

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Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Monstrata 2015-08-11T01:52:24+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
[Ultra Beginner]

OMG Very slow SV...

00:25:846 - The finish is so awkward Delete. k
01:19:025 - Note here? I prefer not to. Just to keep it easy xD. Also the rhythm is 3/1 which is too fast (lol) because i'm using 4/1 rhythm on this difficulty.

[Super Beginner]

00:51:846 (1) - Spiner Finish 00:55:230 - here. oooo ya thanks
01:02:025 (1) - 01:07:358 (1) - 01:12:691 (1) - Head add finish better. yaaa okay added all
01:19:025 - Note. same as ultra beginner, prefer not to D:

[Extra]

00:55:692 (1) - Please lower the volume. Maybe 30% is appropriate. I think this is fine. besides, the HS volume is copied onto almost every difficulty.

Call me.

thanks Habi <3

HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2015-08-11T02:08:01+00:00

Bubbled

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Monstrata 2015-08-11T02:22:38+00:00

Thanks again Habi

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[Shiny]

153 posts

Joined June 2014

[Shiny] 2015-08-11T04:32:31+00:00

The spread in this TATOE is real

Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-11T16:10:23+00:00

Wow
Seriously bubbled
Niceee
Prepare for the easiest difficulty ever ranked

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Monstrata 2015-08-12T04:20:31+00:00

get your osu! drills ready! #1 on that Ultra Beginner is literally spin to win xD.

meii18

3,577 posts

Joined October 2013

meii18 2015-08-12T06:47:54+00:00

monstrata wrote:
get your osu! drills ready! #1 on that Ultra Beginner is literally spin to win xD.

╭( ･ㅂ･)و

Frim4503

2,067 posts

Joined July 2013

Frim4503 2015-08-12T06:50:50+00:00

i will try to get "D" on that ultra begeniner

A Mystery

868 posts

Joined April 2013

A Mystery 2015-08-12T07:19:18+00:00

Tatoe: 00:08:923 (2) - clap
00:28:461 (2) - ^slider end

no kds, just fix pls

Monstrata

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

4,642 posts

Joined May 2013

Topic Starter

Monstrata 2015-08-12T07:23:39+00:00

Its going to be harder to get a D than an S on Ultra beginner lol.

A Mystery - thanks, will apply when next BN comes around (tmr hopefully)

Bara-

11,955 posts

Joined April 2013

Bara- 2015-08-12T07:28:48+00:00

Why?
Just let go of all sliders (early) and they'll be seen as 100

walaowey

952 posts

Joined March 2012

walaowey 2015-08-12T18:48:15+00:00

I've train my finger to singletap your tatoe

btw, 00:12:615 (2,1) - blanket this two properly

Edit : Its in Hard diff, my mistake xDD

Last edited by walaowey 2015-08-13T10:50:16+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Seijiro

osu! Alumni

3,438 posts

Joined April 2013

Seijiro 2015-08-13T00:50:29+00:00

Rofl

Great idea ahahahahahaha

Frim4503

2,067 posts

Joined July 2013

Frim4503 2015-08-13T07:41:53+00:00

pop this pls
the lowest diff is too hard for newbie player like me
the SV is too fast and i cant play it properly

Milan-

1,473 posts

Joined August 2011

Milan- 2015-08-13T09:06:38+00:00

popped cuz Frim4503 cant play the lowest difficulty

general
-add kyshiro to tags
-normal-hitclap57.wav and soft-hitclap2.wav has some weird delay, it may be rankable but weird since the wave start after 0.005
-u said you used mp3 from ranked version and mixed them on an music program. You should be able to get a 192kbps version if the other 2 mp3 are 192 as well. In case u used audacity

tatoe
-00:06:769 (1) - you may want to use soft samp on tail too xd
-00:25:846 (1,2) - what you did on extra is funnier ;w; and since this is the hardest diff would be cool if change it to a more harder pattern
-Also the finish on 00:26:461 (2) - head is so annoying to hear on this pattern. You could have used another kind of hitsound such as normal samp to give the same effect but sound better.
-00:27:076 - from here you decided to use clap only on the 4th beat, which doesn't sound too good imo. 2-4 sounds better as it matches the bgm of the song in additon that you already used that pattern at the beginning and this part is basically the same.
-00:49:076 (7) - should add finish. Since you used one here 00:48:769 (5) - which is the same sound and even more prominent.
-00:57:858 (1) - this is the only 1/1 on the kiai even tho there are similar spots where you used 1/2 rhythms like 01:00:525 (1,2) - or even 01:13:858 (6,1) - . You should use 1/2 on this one as well. it doesnt sound very well as 1/1 xd
-01:06:775 (7) - pretty much overmap to me. There' nothing worth here
-01:07:358 (1) - finish sounds cool here. same 01:12:691 (1) - 01:02:025 (1) - and maybe others
-would be nice if you add a silenced sliderslide. Those slow parts are so annoying right now. Specially in lower diffs

sw extra
-00:16:923 (1) - soft samp on tail ty
-00:29:384 (5,1) - you could ctrl+g this rhythm in order to follow vocals better if you want
-00:35:384 (9,1) - flow here isn't too good. You change between clockwise and anti clockwise from 00:34:461 (3) - in a not so confortable way. Try doing something like this http://puu.sh/jzL0J/eee337b0c5.jpg or just rotating (1) so the slider body feels more natural to play
-00:37:384 - i'd add a note here, you can hear vocals starting from this point.
-00:48:769 (5) - tail should really be clickable it's a really strong beat. Try using 1/2 slider and circle instead.
-00:51:230 (5) - 00:53:692 (6) - these should be changed too, mostly cuz you ignore drums and also kills the momentum of this section ;w;
-01:06:274 (5) - the beat you're trying to map here is way to weak. I really suggest you to remove it
-01:08:025 (3,4) - similar to before, ctrl g'ng makes the rhythm sound better. vocals are more prominent here 01:08:358 -
-01:17:691 (7) - i suggest you using just 1/2 here. using extended slider feels so not-natural when the music is on its peak.
-01:19:025 (1) -

RC wrote:
Every slider must have a clear and visible path to follow from start to end. Sliders which overlap themselves in a way that makes any section unreadable or ambiguous (including "burai sliders") cannot be used. This is so that no slider has an appearance that is confusing or impossible for the player to read. Additionally, the slider borders must never be covered up from the slider being packed in too tightly. However, sliders that cross over themselves are fine as long as the borders are clearly visible.

just dont go around a unclear border. like this clear is better (altho a bit excessive example..)

kyshiro ex
-the way you map makes me think you follow vocals mostly. So why do you ignore 00:49:384 - ?:w:
-01:06:025 (1) - add finish?
-01:09:525 (4,5,1) - you should distance 5-1 more than 4-5 for proper emphasis

extra
-00:17:692 (2) - uhh why do you ignore 00:18:000 - . You should map it for vocals and guitar too. Same with 00:21:076 (1) -
-00:23:230 (4,1,3) - NCs?
-00:26:871 (1,1) - i'd try to place them on a more natural way. If you move 00:27:076 (1) - to somewhere else like x384y251 feels much better imo
-01:02:025 (1) - try moving more apart from 01:01:858 (5) - cuz the clear cymbal there
-01:06:025 (1) - ^
-01:06:774 (7) - same as tatoe. It's a really weak sound you're trying to map...
-01:11:191 (6,1,2) - try to follow vocals as the rest of the map? ctrl g'ng the rhythm should do it
-01:19:025 (1) - would be cool if this note was farther apart. Just to give like a dramatic ending xd

ktgster
-00:09:538 (5,1) - move 1 more apart. It's a really strong beat which should be emphased by distance aswell. Same on these spots 00:31:384 (5,6,7,1) - 00:46:461 (3,1) - 01:01:858 (5,1) - 01:12:525 (5,1) -
-00:26:897 (6) - snap properly
-00:36:000 (3) - this pattern would play better without this note. Following just vocals feels better

toybot
-01:01:525 (4,5) - sounds much better if u ctrl g.. the sound here 01:01:858 - is somewhat stronger than the others imo. in addition that covers vocals better
-01:19:191 (1) - you could've started it 1/4 earlier if that matters something to you xd

sharkie
-00:03:384 (4) - this should end on 1/2. Both, vocals and instruments end on that spot. There's no real reason to use extended slider, in addition that this whole spacing 00:02:769 (2,3,4,1) - is confusing due to it.
-00:25:846 (1,2) - what you're trying to map should be snapped in 1/3. Not 1/4... Even if you tried to map vocals they are in 1/2.
-00:28:153 (4,1,2) - try using offbeat sliders instead to cover vocals much better, which is the only thing that stand out here
-00:29:538 (1,2) - here you could try using this for example http://puu.sh/jzPdu/2fa2cf840a.jpg
-01:08:275 (5) - 01:09:608 (5) - this is just overmap. There's nothing worth to map there
-01:17:858 (7,1) - if you check the whole map, you dont use high distance on jumps, except here. Just use 2.0x ~ and will be fine.

sheela
-hs.. copy again lmao

hard
-00:08:615 (1) - 00:13:538 (1) - you could use 1/1 + circle instead. It sounds a bit weird now
-00:17:692 (2,3) - space these more. Auto-stack make it look not so good. Similar here 00:25:692 (4) -
-00:48:615 (3,4) - try using ctrl g.. you ignore 00:48:769 - which is a really important beat...
-00:49:846 (3) - this could be 1/1. 01:06:025 (5) - this too. 01:15:858 (6) - too, so there isn't too much 1/2 spam
-01:11:358 (5) - this sounds bad.. like not mapping something in concrete. Try using offbeat maybe http://puu.sh/jzQ8C/9a0cc7bc4d.jpg

walao
-00:11:538 (2) - you may want to move it somewhere else like x432y283: looks and plays better
-00:21:846 (6,1) - i dont agree with the distance used here. Your map is mostly constant and this just make everything a bit harder to read.
-00:36:461 (4) - the way that the red nodes are set makes the slider move weirdly and slowdown it a bit. It would be really nice if you make it less sharp
-00:39:384 (1,1) - i just u wanted to stack
-01:02:024 (1,2,3) - try something like this? http://puu.sh/jzQAs/65d639ac4f.jpg sounds much better . similar for 01:03:359 (1,2,3) - 01:12:692 (1,2,3) - 01:14:025 (1,2,3) -
-01:19:108 (1) - your diff is the only one that finish on that spot xd others finish at 01:20:691 - . Not really necessary to change i guess, but weird and lonely it is.

normal
-00:14:307 (5) - try 1/2 repeat? i feel like the beat at 00:14:461 - is part of the melody you're trying to map, and ignoring it is a bit weird
-00:15:384 (2,3) - this sounds more like this tbh http://puu.sh/jzQQ8/3c75a3cb9e.jpg
-00:17:230 (1,2,1,2) - not sure what you're trying to map here.. specially when you do more dense rhythm afterwards for similar music. Try mapping vocal here too, not ignoring 00:18:307 - for example.
-00:48:769 - dont ignore this beat? ;w;

easy
-00:14:769 (1,2) - this makes more sense http://puu.sh/jzR7K/01c3b711d6.jpg
-00:35:538 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/jzRhf/87086f6490.jpg or whatever that maps 00:36:153 - . In addition, don't use different kind of stacking at this level.
-00:48:615 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/jzRnf/027b838ecd.jpg downbeat isn't relevant here
-00:51:076 (1) - this newcombo feels lonely ):
-00:52:923 (2) - i'd extend it 1/2 more to cover drums and vocals more properly
-01:06:358 (3,4) - fix stack
-i'd prefer if you avoid using stacks so often at this level but hummm

beginner and super beg
-the idea when you map beginners is be extremely friendly to new players, thus using overlaps as often as these map use them should be avoided. Check lanturn's diff if you need an example, like here http://osu.ppy.sh/b/693911

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