sukiNathan wrote:

blue cheese burrito

just got rid of a spinner in easy and normal that lacked recovery time

1. 01:07:784 (2,3) - Swap these two in timeline? Would flow a bit better going into 1 imo.
2. 01:09:509 (1) - Is there a reason for ending the spinner here? Ending on 01:09:509 (1) - sounds better imo since there's actually a sound you can hitsound the spinner's end to.
3. 01:46:484 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is quite misleading with this pattern. both 1/2's and 1/1's using basically the same spacing. One possible solution is NC'ing 01:46:934 (3) -
4. 01:47:234 (4) - This should be 1/3.
5. 01:50:234 (1,2,3) - Same here, but at least there is less overlap.
6. 02:13:859 (12,13,14,15,16,1) - Last part of this stream kinda lacks any shape. Meh, just pointing it out in case~
7. 02:46:259 (12,13,14) - This is seriously too sharp ;c. I liked what you did with 02:41:984 (3,4,5) - a lot better lol. You don't use something this 180 degree change anywhere else in your map .

1. 02:42:734 (1,2) - Wow this kills so much momentum :C you sure about this???

1. 04:08:384 (1) - Only thing I want to point out is the spinner begins on a red tick while on every other diff besides Easy/Normal the spinner is on 04:08:309 - . Maybe you want to change that for consistency? idk.

1. 01:08:909 (4,6) - These are really difficult to land without releasing off the 1/8 sliders too early and getting 100's xPP.
2. 02:28:034 (1) - This NC doesn't seem necessary imo. Beat doesn't pick up until 02:28:334 -

1. 01:47:434 (4,5) - Can you double-check snapping here for me?
2. 02:51:284 (1,2,3) - Larger jump from 2>3 would make more sense with the pitch increase.
3. 04:08:384 (1) - Same as RLC's Extra if you wanna start the spinner earlier on blue tick.

1. 02:39:734 (2,3,4) - Might want to space out the DS from 3>4 just a bit more, since there is a 3/4 gap in between
2. 03:49:634 (3,4) - ^

1. HP 6 is a jump from Normal. I think 5 would be better, considering toybot's Insane is also HP 6.
2. OD 7 is too high imo... I think 6 would function a lot better and provide better balance between Normal's OD4 and toybot's Insane's OD 7.
3. 01:09:509 (1,1) - If you changed something with the spinner in Four Dimensions, be sure to fix it here too.

1. Some parts are quite dense in Kiai time like say 02:46:034 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - . I think AR 5.5 would be better on this diff.

1. May want to move the AR to 3.5.

monstrata wrote:

[ktg's Extreme]

1. 02:42:734 (1,2) - Wow this kills so much momentum :C you sure about this??? - yes, I heard no complaints and the combo colours indicate the slowdown plus once you know, its not as bad

monstrata wrote:

[Frey's Extra]

1. 01:08:909 (4,6) - These are really difficult to land without releasing off the 1/8 sliders too early and getting 100's xPP.
   not really, I can fc this part, just think them two double clicks.
   
2. 02:28:034 (1) - This NC doesn't seem necessary imo. Beat doesn't pick up until 02:28:334 -
   well, I was told to NC with the Storyboard. So it make more sense if you play it with sb on

Thank for modding!

monstrata wrote:

[Four Dimensions]

1. 01:07:784 (2,3) - Swap these two in timeline? Would flow a bit better going into 1 imo. Sure!
2. 01:09:509 (1) - Is there a reason for ending the spinner here? Ending on 01:09:509 (1) - sounds better imo since there's actually a sound you can hitsound the spinner's end to. Hmm, sure
3. 01:46:484 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing is quite misleading with this pattern. both 1/2's and 1/1's using basically the same spacing. One possible solution is NC'ing 01:46:934 (3) - Talked in-game about this. Anyone who is capable of playing such a difficulty, they should be able to read that rhythm change due to the fast AR
4. 01:47:234 (4) - This should be 1/3. Fixed
5. 01:50:234 (1,2,3) - Same here, but at least there is less overlap. ^
6. 02:13:859 (12,13,14,15,16,1) - Last part of this stream kinda lacks any shape. Meh, just pointing it out in case~ Talked about this as well, it's just a copied ver. of the previous thingy
7. 02:46:259 (12,13,14) - This is seriously too sharp ;c. I liked what you did with 02:41:984 (3,4,5) - a lot better lol. You don't use something this 180 degree change anywhere else in your map . Ah talked about this one as well. I looked how ppl handle those bends, and most of the ppl who can play this can do it fine imo

[RLC's Extra]

1. 04:08:384 (1) - Only thing I want to point out is the spinner begins on a red tick while on every other diff besides Easy/Normal the spinner is on 04:08:309 - . Maybe you want to change that for consistency? idk. Fix

[RLC's Insane]

1. 01:47:434 (4,5) - Can you double-check snapping here for me? Checked and should be okay; slider starts on the melody, and ends on the strong, main beat
2. 02:51:284 (1,2,3) - Larger jump from 2>3 would make more sense with the pitch increase. Blankets tho
3. 04:08:384 (1) - Same as RLC's Extra if you wanna start the spinner earlier on blue tick. Yup fixed

[Hard]

1. HP 6 is a jump from Normal. I think 5 would be better, considering toybot's Insane is also HP 6.
2. OD 7 is too high imo... I think 6 would function a lot better and provide better balance between Normal's OD4 and toybot's Insane's OD 7.
3. 01:09:509 (1,1) - If you changed something with the spinner in Four Dimensions, be sure to fix it here too. Fixed everything

[Akaphyxia's Normal]

1. Some parts are quite dense in Kiai time like say 02:46:034 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - . I think AR 5.5 would be better on this diff. Sure!

[Easy]

1. May want to move the AR to 3.5. Done

hype hype hype

Haruru wrote:

03:34:334 (4) - missing hitsound?

toybot wrote:

toybot wrote: