Fookiezi wrote:

preety cool

01:43:690 (3) - meh slider
01:45:871 (5) - ^
01:48:190 (5) - i think its not allowed to do that where the slider start circle is on the slider itself
01:52:417 (4) - imo try make it not symetrical
02:31:826 (1,2,3,4) - i dont realy like the distance on this you will like it i think
02:34:962 (11) - try putting it lower like x364 y56 i will keep this because i want to put distance jump ascension here
02:53:235 (4,6) - fix blanket
03:18:317 (3) - i think the slider ends a little too early? yeah idk with this, its follow Finish sound then follow some sound there
03:23:153 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - these beats are unhearable preety much idk if its ok, probably because of drain time lol but it should start at like 03:35:251 (1) - from the first bum sound
04:36:402 (1,2,3) - increase distance? i will keep it since im use Constant spacing at 1-2 previous Pattern combo

for more drain time you can ask someone to reverb the end so you can make a longer spinner kay im on it!

StarForYou wrote:

Awesome
Fort Marry me please

Deppyforce wrote:

This Is Awesome. Take My Star :3

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20:06 riktoi: 00:29:780 (2) - 
20:06 riktoi: this slider seems out of place
20:06 Fort: blanker?
20:07 Fort: fix
20:07 riktoi: do you want me to screenshot what i would do
20:08 Fort: sure
20:09 riktoi: sec
20:09 riktoi: it's taking so long to upload
20:10 riktoi: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3383493
20:11 riktoi: you might want to place them differently
20:12 Fort: is that doublet?
20:12 Fort: on 3 4?
20:12 riktoi: yeah
20:13 Fort: but i didnt put doublet at overall pattern
20:13 riktoi: hmm
20:14 riktoi: it should be fine if you just connect it to the stream
20:14 riktoi: add one more hitcircle after 4
20:15 Fort: okay
20:18 Fort: fix
20:19 riktoi: what is the spacing you are using
20:19 Fort: various
20:20 riktoi: 00:30:190 (7,8,9) - 
20:20 riktoi: for these
20:20 Fort: 1.2
20:20 Fort: 1.0
20:20 Fort: 1.1
20:20 riktoi: okay
20:21 Fort: especially for stream distance that is not my problem if i put various distance
20:22 riktoi: 00:29:644 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
20:22 riktoi: are we done with this part
20:22 Fort: ye
20:23 Fort: it will same with 00:38:371 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
20:23 riktoi: oh yes
20:24 Fort: but i hitsounded it properly
20:24 Fort: so you will not follow Drum sound anymore
20:28 riktoi: don't see anything wrong after that
20:28 Fort: nice
20:29 riktoi: cool map

Squarey wrote:

From Queue

1. 00:53:371 (6) - Remove one of the red points on the slider It seems weird with that little edge on it im gonna fix this instead remove red points

2. 00:59:644 (3,4,5,6) - Maybe make this more symmetrical fix jump overlap, too hard put symetrical thing for me

3. 01:14:917 (6) - Add a red point of this slider so it looks like 01:14:644 (5) - It would make the blanket look better but i like various sliders, this will be interesting haha

4. 01:24:190 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Make these jumps a bit bigger it seems like they are smaller than the ones before it and these patters just keep getting bigger in this area of the map so i think it would flow better okay

5. 02:03:053 (3) - Curve this a little bit more (Not sure about it though) it might be fine the way it is

6. 02:31:280 (3) - Feels a little weird since it comes right off a slider that ended on a blue tick maybe lower the distance

7. 02:31:690 (5) - ^ now imput distance ascension on here, so it will not be confusion anymore

8. 03:27:316 (4) - reduce the dip in the slider so it plays longer instead of just holding your cursor on it

9. 03:55:632 (2) - Make the bend on this slider more in the middle maybe something like this that slider sample a bit to edgy i think, so i made slider like that to give smooth movement for this low edge slider

10. 04:19:496 (1,2,3,4,5) - Seems to play a little weird maybe change it? maybe next time since this one is cool pattern for me

11. 04:34:496 (7) - change the shape of this slider? but if i change this, the slider will gonna be longer and distance between 04:34:496 (7,1) - more harder, so i keep this shape like this, interesting right? xD

Great map, Osu! needs more ranked T+Pazolite maps GL:D ty for this :3

moph wrote:

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii o/

[General]

1. I think you should find a cooler bg :3 thisssss?
2. BG is the wrong size anyway, I can re-size it for you if you need it. okay im resize it

The following hitsounds are unused:

1. normal-hitclap-1lama.wav
2. soft-hitfinish4.wav

all deleted

[~Xiao Mei~]

1. HP5? I played with HP7 and it felt fine to me considering this since some testplayers make me to put low HP since it has very hard part at ending
2. 04:40:220 - unsnapped kiai
3. 00:19:280 (3) - I think you should keep these the same as before with 2 reverses, maybe place 00:19:553 (4) - under (3) like how you did it before and keep (5) as is for a jump? I don't think that fourth beat should be ignored and for consistency sake, same for the following sliders. yeah i think you right but i prefer put 1/2 jumps here instead put reverse for easier beat
4. 00:23:644 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl+g this? better flow imo
5. 00:33:735 (8) - shorten this by 1/4? Melody changes pitch here and there also are drums where as theres nothing here 00:33:940 - i put this sliders as epic transition music change. 3/4 slider in here very interesting
6. 00:34:758 (5) - pretty sure this is 1/6 here, try this oh god but this beat at gameplay treated like a 1/4
   
   example

   
7. 00:43:485 (3) - same i will considering this, since i dont want to put any 1/6 at this beatmap since they are very hard to read and hit
8. 00:47:644 - you totally should map the HAIIYAAA :3 but i follow upbeat only on that part D:
9. 00:55:008 (2) - another repeat here to match the sound?
10. 01:31:826 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - cool thanks :3
11. 01:35:780 - 01:36:053 - idk i think singles there would fit nicely, seems a bit empty there atm as the song is pretty intense since i follow melody on previous pattern i think it's fits perfectly like that
12. 02:08:917 (1) - shorten by 1/2 and add 2 1/4s after? I think the song has built up enough to have more complex rhythms by now, 02:09:190 - really think this should be clickable as the melody changes here and drums looks 1/4 too dense on here, i change to 1/2 patterning here :3
13. 02:11:099 (1) - nice spinners hue, that part so epic you should map it :3 if not 02:17:644 - new spinner here imo, 02:18:735 - should end here as well imo, or a new one get ready for kiai hahahahaha (i keep this because this bridge part looks good if you put spinners there
14. 02:22:485 - should be a note here, 02:22:280 (2,3,4,1) - turn into a 5 note stream? im already put this one but lot of misses here, so i put triplets there, but i will change this patterning if somebody say it so
15. 02:25:144 (5) - maybe shorten this by 1/4, sounds weird overextending this past 02:25:280 - even if you are following the melody there is a strong beat there and the melody changes there, so shouldn't be ignored imo
16. 02:33:871 (5,6) - same (play at like 50% speed to hear properly), if not at least silence the slider ends?
17. continuing onto ^ 02:38:644 (1) - sounds ok as the the beat on 02:38:780 - is a lot more minor than something like this 02:34:008 - i didnt fix this since this 3/4 slider didnt skip very strong downbeats, so this will be good
18. 02:57:735 (3) - move this back by 1/2 to fit the music better im following drum pattern, so rhythm change in there will not being noticed on gameplay, since this pattern very consistant with previous pattern
19. 03:00:462 (6,7) - 1/2 sliders here instead? i will keep this because why not
20. 03:54:064 (5) - 1/6 here again lol considering this
21. 03:58:768 (1,2) - try this here instead, same with 03:59:314 (1,2) - etc. idk rhythm could be a bit more interesting here yeah it looks good but i prefer make this pattern like this because im follow drum sound there, and it really nice to hit imo
    
    example

    
22. 04:05:450 (2) - hmm idk about this one, same thing as before, try shorten by 1/4 and then add a 1/4 in between sliders? it will became very hard and not really support music
23. 04:09:814 (2) - same, idk these might not be so noticeable while playing
24. 04:12:609 (6) - 1/6 again yeah, but this hat sound has 1/4
25. 04:21:337 (5) - same

Cool map o/ ah thanks
Good luck!

Side wrote:

Woo here we go!

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Epic Diff Name

00:19:280 (3) - This is fine but you could consider adding one more reverse arrow like the instrument does. Same for 00:21:462 (3) - If you do decide to change it. i fix some flow here, but i didnt add 1/4 reverse here, maybe soon

00:26:780 (3,4,5,6,7) - If this is intentional it's fine otherwise consider cleaning up the stream. Either to an increasing/decreasing distance spacing or to a more consistent DS like this sort of. If you do decide to clean up the notes then you should also do the same for 00:28:008 (3) - (that note only), 00:28:962 (4,5) - (these two notes or probably just 4), 00:31:144 (4,5,6,7,8) - The rest of the streams all look pretty clean so

00:59:644 (3,4,5,6) - Looks a bit sloppy. Unless I'm not seeing a pattern, I can see 5 and 6 being cleaned up a bit Since I can see synergy with 2,3 and 4 but not with 5,6 and any other notes. Just an example consider moving 5 and 6 up slightly 00:59:917 (5) - to 212/288 and 01:00:053 (6) - to 276/60 which makes good synergy with 4 and even makes a good synergy with 01:00:326 (2) - sort of like this doing similiar

01:34:417 (1,2) - CTRL+G feels better because the low jump (antijump?) feels better going back down like how it started with 01:34:008 (1,2) - Idk I can't really explain it lol it feels better starting down instead of up.

01:34:826 (1,2) - CTRL+G also feels better here because then you have a non-jump after this with 01:35:235 (1) - Which feels much better for a 12 12 pattern also dont know how to explain this lol if this doesn't makes sense plz msg me and I'll try to explain it. im put 1/1 distance spacing on here just make player can read this pattern easily, but your suggestion looks good, maybe i will considering this one

01:52:417 (4) - Move these nodes a little so it looks nicer like this. Make sure to resnap 01:53:917 (1) - after that.

01:57:871 - I know you want to make this a 1/1 single tap section but I think adding a note here sounds good and feels natural even with all the single tap. i want singletap 1/1 D:

02:11:099 (1,1,1,1,1) - Idk this section feels like it would be much better mapped with notes instead of spinners. Can follow the 1/4 synth or even the bass synth. Especially this one 02:15:530 (1) - This section sounds so much better mapped and then if you still want spinner you could start it at 02:17:644 - I think mapping this section is better buildup for the next section. ~Get ready for Epic Kiai time!~ (yeah i keep this to improve sense on here, i think this one is better than map with circle or slider

02:59:099 (1) - This sounds better as a 1/1 slider and note at 02:59:644 - Since the long slider isn't following anything atm and the rest of these parts all have that sound anyway. i like how slider tick works there, it's very cute :3

04:57:678 (3) - I think this is fine but you could probably move it to 252/76. did something similiar


Map is really fun. I can't play it unless my hand is really warmed up but it's really challenging but readable and is a very fun fast-paced map! Hope this gets ranked it's really good! Good luck! (Short mod so no KDS if you want) Thank you for this :3

NewIpas wrote:

Let me start to give something ..

[The Legend of the Dragon Kung-fu Empire ~Story of Xiao Mei~]

1. 00:24:190 (1,1) - These two is like connected each others but I feel like the stopping momentum must be filled by an object besides spinner since the spinner replaced some big sounded rhythm to emphasise a long rhythm on 00:24:190 - ( Nah, this have same case with 00:43:826 (1) - , but the sound that has been replaced by 00:43:826 (1) - doesn't that big like the first one ) o_0
2. 00:32:917 (1,2,3,4) - The placement of the objects is bad if being compared with 00:35:099 (1,2,3,4) - . The cursor movement from the first noticed objects doesn't create what players said "Fun" imo . However, you still can rearrange that mentioned objects and make it similar with the second mentioned objects
3. 02:03:326 (4) - I don't know why but I think this slider plays awkwardly even that I know the reason why you skip this downbeat { 02:03:462 - } didnt change because i put this slider 02:03:053 (3) -, yeah that slider kinda hiding downbeat thing on gameplay so it will be didnt noticed at your play i guess
4. 02:53:508 (6,7) - Looks like a bad overlap for me . The best flow I can point out to avoid the overlap at this situation is place 02:54:190 (7) - on the upper side after the end of 02:53:508 (6) - and it'll looks like this . But, the current one reflects your own style, your own creativity, so you can be sure to deny it if it doesn't like what do you want im sure this overlap is useful because i prefer stupid misses while you hit slider arrow you can clearly see that object , and when you're going back it can be easily hit without got misses
   
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[]
Overall, nice diff~
I'm sorry If my English is bad .-. I can't handle English T^T its okay, i cant read english too lmao

1. 01:27:462 (1) - finish
2. 02:51:462 (1) - ^
3. 02:52:553 (1) - ^ (head)
4. 02:53:099 (3) - ^
5. 04:22:768 (1) - ^
6. 04:26:041 (1,3) - ^ (head)

-Hakurei- wrote:

hmmm? spertinya ada yg minta request untuk mod ini

[Xiao Mei 2015]

1. 01:27:462 (1) - finish
2. 02:51:462 (1) - ^
3. 02:52:553 (1) - ^ (head)
4. 02:53:099 (3) - ^
5. 04:22:768 (1) - ^
6. 04:26:041 (1,3) - ^ (head)

w sih g yakin dgn hitsound lain, coba cek lagi untuk tu. GL!

Asahina Momoko wrote:

hi Fort, sorry for late

SINGLETAPING 420 220 BPM

1. 00:40:553 (1,2) - i felt they should have more spacing, because there has strong sound and maybe a bit tight to play each other 00:40:280 (8,1,2) -
2. 00:50:508 (1,1) - exchange them and put 00:50:780 (1) - right makes good flow imo but i like this movement, maybe i can fix placement a bit for this :3
   
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3. 01:05:917 (2,4) - a bit ugly overlapping, try to adjust them okay
   
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4. 01:15:326 (1) - add NC is better ummm... maybe later, bacause i didnt have idea for this one
5. 01:35:508 (1,2) - how about ctrl+g? but its already stacked right? xD
6. 02:29:508 (7) - add NC this combo already consistant, so dont worry :3
7. 02:31:417 (4,5) - might occur 100 on 1/16 slider for big spacing, so for safe, make them closer is better but it's 1/4 jump D:, ah okay will considering this
8. 02:34:553 (8) - add NC? lol i didnt NC this one 02:52:008 (4) -, and follow point looks epic for me haha
9. 02:54:190 (7) - ^
10. 04:27:609 (2) - i think remove this note is fine to play i like overmap that part, looks cool. maybe will fix this if somebody say so

omg this BG is 10/10 so moe cuteeee >3<

good luck~!!

D3LTA wrote:

Finally i good beatmap of this song
I love it, will give you star : )

10nya wrote:

THAT BG 69/10 OMG

[ Madoka ] wrote:

Can't mod this because it's some quality work but, I found several mistakes

http://puu.sh/j6Oq2.png delete the 2 highlighted timing points as they don't change anything.

http://puu.sh/j6Ous.png as well as these.

Good luck!

toybot wrote:

requested ingame

dude i can't play this wtf are you doing

tbh i feel you overuse spinners a bit too much, like 02:11:099 - 02:18:735 - could be mapped since there's a cool and distinct rhythm going on there

SINGLETAPING 420 220 BPM

1. 00:06:803 (1) - pls end this spinner a little earlier, like around 00:08:371 - , since ppl might get tired before intense intro, which would suck lol
2. 00:39:462 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps felt a bit too large compared to other patterns like this, shorten distance? this jump almost like 00:37:422 (2,3,4) - and i raise distance a bit for more jump pattern :3
3. 00:43:826 - circle here? there's a pretty solid thud on this downbeat ummm dont worry for this spinner like this, maybe i will considering this since i like to start spinner there
4. 01:15:735 (10) - NC? for consistency Very nice
5. 01:17:371 (1,2) - ctrl+g for nice back-and-forth movement with 01:17:508 (2,1,2) - , which that reverse slider even helps lol kinda reversal distance ascension, im already apply this one but people suggesting current pattern, so i will keep this lol
6. 01:19:690 (2,1) - hm, this jump right here feels awkward due to the angles of the separate pairs of jumps (01:19:553 (1,2) - ) and (01:19:826 (1,2) - ). how about changing the pattern 01:19:826 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - to this? should be more comfortable. i understand there are awkward jumps for reasons, but this one just kinda stood out i fix with effective way than this
   
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   the whistle slide doesn't really fit and sounds ugly, so you should just remove whistle from the whole slider and put whistle on head and tail separately for:
   
   1. 01:37:144 (5) -
   2. 01:39:462 (6) -
   3. 01:43:690 (3) -
   4. 01:45:871 (5) -
   5. 01:48:190 (5) -
   6. 01:50:508 (6) -
   7. 01:51:462 (1) -
   looks im gonna keep this sliderslide sound for a while because its on purpose im put that sound, for supporting BG sound on music
   
7. 01:43:690 (3) - uh, is it intentional for tail to land on 1/8? + kind of seems a bit meaningless
8. 01:44:917 (1) - remove finish, it's pretty loud for a calm section
9. 01:52:417 (4) - btw, odd that all of the sliders end on blue ticks, yet this one doesn't although 01:53:644 - is a super strong beat you will remember this slider :>
10. 02:10:417 (3) - change to circle + 1/2 slider instead of reverse? fits rhythm better
11. 02:22:962 (3) - maybe move this to the right so that it's more readable, like around x408 y200 looks break some flow movement, but dont worry this slider readable
12. 02:31:008 (2,4) - necessary for these to be on blue tick? lol it causes jerky movement and prob sliderbreak reduce Snapping from 1/16 to 1/8
13. 02:55:553 (3,4,5,6,7) - read as 1/4 xdddd i don't know if its a big problem though, so w/e lol you cant read this on AR9.6?
14. 02:59:099 (1) - just cover the 1/1 beats with a 1/1 slider and a circle 1/1 after, feels empty ah that slider is very cool, man. Because i covered 1/1 with slider tick. Very cool right? xD
15. 03:20:482 (1) - maybe end this spinner at 03:22:461 - , since theres silence after? and then remove green lines; it fits a lot more and drain won't punish you
16. 03:28:008 (1) - remove clap from reverse and put it on first beat for rhythmical sense this gonna confusing me since im already hitsound that sliders as you said
17. 03:35:823 (3,4,1) - lower the ds for these a bit, it makes cursor movement feel forced there
18. 03:54:950 (3,4,5,6) - make into small stream to be consistent?
19. 04:01:223 (1,2,3) - lol you should make these into a perfect triangle got it
20. 04:12:200 (2,3,4) - feels overmapped, you should just go with one circle instead
21. 04:19:223 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - cruel you need strong arm for this
22. 04:28:223 (1,3,5,7) - use normal sampleset + soft additions to make this a bit more beat heavy?
23. 04:58:223 (1) - use soft sampleset + normal additions to emphasize that finish without being too noisy lol, basically opposite of suggestion above use soft sampleset too soft, maybe im putting drum sampleset for balanced sound :3

awesome map, good luck! thanks toybot!

pkhg wrote:

hi

00:08:922 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - le copypaste andrea cant make pattern like this ahahahahah
00:27:467 (1,2) - blanket
02:43:490 (9) - i cant see this

dude nice thanks pkhg :3

Euny wrote:

as your request!♥

i just mod 00:46:149 (1) - ~01:18:467 (4) and 04:42:546 (1) - ~ end part.

• Xiao Mei 2015

1. 00:42:604 (1) - feels bit pity cause you ignore downbeat. how about change timeline?
   that pattern same like 00:40:695 (2) - but maybe i will thinking about this one
2. 00:52:285 - i think you should put note for here. its better for vocal, also you put slider on 00:56:649 (6) - this head. and 01:01:013 (7) - here too then you need to add note for here too imo.
3. 00:58:763 (5) - i cant hear any tempo for here. so..how about remove this note? or..actually, hope you change these for 1/2slider. cause, you did it for same parts. lets see..00:49:967 (8) - and 00:54:740 (1) - . just overmapping this one, looks good lol
   
4. 01:03:740 (2,3) - change this for 1/4 reverse like 00:55:013 (2) - this. or add note for 01:03:263 - here. tbh i follow melody there, so i put simple pattern (and change pattering too)
5. 03:17:850 (3) - this seems need to nc
6. 03:52:637 (3,4,5,6,7) - i know its your nice overlap. but...think its bit hard to reading. how about move 03:52:842 (4,5,6,7) - these bit?
   
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7. 04:46:433 - add note or make 04:46:364 (7,8) - these are for 1/4 reverse. well im going to keep this because im focusing on upbeat patterning there, kinda hard if im put some reverse there
8. 04:51:478 - ^ add note for here ^ same on above

that's it
and sorry for late.

Kuron-kun wrote:

Hey!

Xiao Mei 2015

1. Even though there's a spinner on the beginning, I'd recommend you to put +1000ms of AudioLeadIn on the .osu file since the current AudioLeadIn is 195. sure
   
   
2. -10 Offset on the last timing point would fit more. Try listening at 25% not sure about timing, but i will talk to Charles again for this one

00:22:013 (1,2,3,4) - Since the previous sliders weren't having big jumps between them, I'd recommend to lower the DS between the repeat sliders a bit, for consistency reasons. Something like this would be nicer. do similiar thing

02:18:740 (1) - I don't know if it's just me but adding a Finish here would create a nice background soud effect x) legit

03:39:248 (8,1) - I'm not a huge fan of stacked 1/1 sliders right after a 1/4 stream. They're just flow breaking and combo breaking. Though, I don't know where else you should put (1)... i think i need to keep it because this breakcore effect so cool on this part, like take a break for a while and go nvm this one fixed

04:19:228 (1,2,3,4,1) - A bit nazi but what do you think about closing this star pattern?

04:27:614 (2) - Is this circle really necessary? It just makes the pattern harder and there's no sound to follow there... In my opinion, would be better to remove it.

04:31:637 (2,3) - Are you sure about this anti-jump? This section is really strong, and you should put a higher DS between them. x200 y160 would be a nice spot to place (3), and would be kinda 'symmetrical' with 04:31:910 (4,6) - . do something similiar

That's all! Nice diff (:

1. fine

1. 00:42:604 (1) - why not try this rhythm ?
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2. 00:46:149 (1,2,3,4) - it kinda sound weird to map strong white tick there for sliderend , you can move previous spinner a bit and make it end on red tick then start first slider on white tick , that work better imo
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3. 00:48:331 (1,2,3,4,5,8,9) - better make those white tick clickable , it plays a lots better , try this rhythm ?
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4. 01:09:467 (3,4) - this spacing might be a bit too much which will make flow not good imo and I would prefer to have bigger spacing here 01:09:876 (5,1) - xD , try move 01:09:467 (3) - to around x252 y60
5. 01:15:331 (8,9) - similiar to what I said above , maybe bigger spacing here 01:15:604 (9,1) - would be nice , try move 01:15:604 (9) - to around x369 y270
6. 01:37:695 (6) - might be good to nc so it easier to notice the spacing change here
7. 01:42:195 (6) - ,01:46:422 (6) -, 01:50:922 (7) - same ^
8. 01:49:149 (6,1) - stacking sound better imo
9. 02:55:558 (3) - nc for spacing change ? if you apply here , apply others too
10. 04:02:046 (1) - end spinner here 04:03:546 - instead , I think that make the next note easier to catch lol
11. 04:10:773 (1,2) - might be good to make spacing here bigger so flow will be nice imo , try move 04:10:773 (1) - to around x160 y184 ?
12. 04:16:228 (1,2) - similiar to what I said above , try move (2) to around x448 y208?
13. 04:22:637 (6,1) - spacing here should be bigger than 04:22:501 (5,6) - so it make sense with the song more since 04:22:773 (1) - sound more emphasized than 04:22:637 (6) - , try move 04:22:637 (6) - to around x344 y116
14. 04:23:864 (1,2) - similiar to what I said above , would be nice to make this spacing 04:23:864 (1,2) - bigger than 04:24:001 (2,3) - , try move 04:24:001 (2) - to around x224 y132
15. 04:24:819 (7,1) - why sudden lower spacing at emphasized beat that make flow here a bit weird imo , try move (1) to around x264 y32
16. 04:42:546 (1,2,3,4) - yea this one same as what I said here 00:46:149 (1,2,3,4) -
17. 04:45:273 (3,4,5,6,9) - a bit similiar to this 00:48:331 (1,2,3,4,5,8,9) - , try this rhythm ?
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18. 04:50:046 (6) - nc here instead of 04:50:183 (1) - ?
19. 04:51:137 (5) - nc here instead of 04:51:273 (1) - ?
20. 04:50:046 (6,1) - would be nice to make spacing here lower than 04:49:910 (5,6) - so it make sense with music a bit since 04:50:046 (6) - sound more emphasized than 04:50:183 (1) - , try move (6) to around x328 y116 ?
21. 04:52:092 (5) - sliderend here for downbeat sound not that good imo , try this rhythm ?
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22. 04:57:342 - there is no sound here so maybe change to this rhythm?
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CelsiusLK wrote:

[general]

1. fine

[xiao mei 2015]

1. 00:42:604 (1) - why not try this rhythm ? because it's a transition pattern and this 00:42:740 - part has low sound, so i put that pattern
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2. 00:46:149 (1,2,3,4) - it kinda sound weird to map strong white tick there for sliderend , you can move previous spinner a bit and make it end on red tick then start first slider on white tick , that work better imo yeah i think this sounds better but, for some reason i want to put downbeat patterning at 00:42:740 - because on here has bery strong downbeat sound since i put same SV on both part
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3. 00:48:331 (1,2,3,4,5,8,9) - better make those white tick clickable , it plays a lots better , try this rhythm ? same at here, tbh i put some upbeat patterning on here to make some different gameplay on this map, look various and didnt boring right?
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4. 01:09:467 (3,4) - this spacing might be a bit too much which will make flow not good imo and I would prefer to have bigger spacing here 01:09:876 (5,1) - xD , try move 01:09:467 (3) - to around x252 y60 okie
5. 01:15:331 (8,9) - similiar to what I said above , maybe bigger spacing here 01:15:604 (9,1) - would be nice , try move 01:15:604 (9) - to around x369 y270 a bit
6. 01:37:695 (6) - might be good to nc so it easier to notice the spacing change here okay re-setting combo on that part
7. 01:42:195 (6) - ,01:46:422 (6) -, 01:50:922 (7) - same ^
8. 01:49:149 (6,1) - stacking sound better imo hummm i didnt stack this but i set some combo there
9. 02:55:558 (3) - nc for spacing change ? if you apply here , apply others too 02:54:740 (1) - this SV change already known well as slow pattern and high AR on this map make that pattern easier to read so dont worry with this
10. 04:02:046 (1) - end spinner here 04:03:546 - instead , I think that make the next note easier to catch lol
11. 04:10:773 (1,2) - might be good to make spacing here bigger so flow will be nice imo , try move 04:10:773 (1) - to around x160 y184 ?
12. 04:16:228 (1,2) - similiar to what I said above , try move (2) to around x448 y208?
13. 04:22:637 (6,1) - spacing here should be bigger than 04:22:501 (5,6) - so it make sense with the song more since 04:22:773 (1) - sound more emphasized than 04:22:637 (6) - , try move 04:22:637 (6) - to around x344 y116
14. 04:23:864 (1,2) - similiar to what I said above , would be nice to make this spacing 04:23:864 (1,2) - bigger than 04:24:001 (2,3) - , try move 04:24:001 (2) - to around x224 y132 itz zigzag movement boyz
15. 04:24:819 (7,1) - why sudden lower spacing at emphasized beat that make flow here a bit weird imo , try move (1) to around x264 y32 okay a bit
16. 04:42:546 (1,2,3,4) - yea this one same as what I said here 00:46:149 (1,2,3,4) - maybe because im bored with downbeat i map like this, but this one quite fun
17. 04:45:273 (3,4,5,6,9) - a bit similiar to this 00:48:331 (1,2,3,4,5,8,9) - , try this rhythm ? yeah im already explained this thing, so let's try this one
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18. 04:50:046 (6) - nc here instead of 04:50:183 (1) - ?
19. 04:51:137 (5) - nc here instead of 04:51:273 (1) - ? im already put very consistant NC on here even i didnt put combo at downbeat, just like upbeat combo, so im gonna keep this one
20. 04:50:046 (6,1) - would be nice to make spacing here lower than 04:49:910 (5,6) - so it make sense with music a bit since 04:50:046 (6) - sound more emphasized than 04:50:183 (1) - , try move (6) to around x328 y116 ? 04:50:046 (6,1) - but i think distance on here very fits and very strong enough to emphazise pattern (especially for this one)
21. 04:52:092 (5) - sliderend here for downbeat sound not that good imo , try this rhythm ? oh sorry but i really like this one because http://puu.sh/jeHen/8ccfc1ed13.jpg (120 degrees pattern :3)
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22. 04:57:342 - there is no sound here so maybe change to this rhythm? that's why i put that slider like that, for interesting patterning and i think hitsound in that pattern can cover overmapping on that part, so i think this will be very nice ending[
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nice1

let me know afterward

Rukaru wrote:

oh it's bubbled already but...

here, mod as requested.
probably won't help much though. xD

[Custom Difficulty Name]
01:01:695 (3) - this would play better if you stack it on 01:01:831 (4)
02:46:285 (2,3,4) - try this rhythm (see timeline, ignore my placement) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3442703 this one can emphasize the music better than current rhythm. get something inspired lel
04:00:955 (1,2) - I believe this would be better if you change to slider. this is the starting point of 04:01:228 (1,2,3). it has the same sound. i believe it can be repetitive lol, that circle just for boom
04:02:046 (1) - shorten this spinner a bit to the red tick? done
[]
well that's all. very short mod for a 5 minutes song. lol

I cannot say I enjoy this map. how can player ranked 50k enjoy a super hard map anyway? xD
that was a joke. don't take it seriously.

no kd if this does not help. thank you.

1. 00:34:013 (1,2,3,4) - Ini tergolong susah banget buat dibaca karena perbedaan spacing-nya yang cukup kentara di sini (mengingat (2,3) perlu gerakan yang jauh lebih cepat daripada (1,2) dan (3,4) tapi spacing-nya tampak sama aja).Kalau bisa sih spacing (1,2) dilebarin lagi, atau gabungin (2,3) jadi satu kick slider.
2. 01:03:808 - Ini ga sekalian di-map aja karena ada bunyi yang cukup... kedengeran di sini? Ya, bakal ngerusak pattern di sini sih emang...
3. 01:05:649 - 01:05:922 - Sama dengan saran di atas (dan sekali lagi bakal ngerusak pattern yang ada sih tapi bakal jauh lebih ngikutin musik).
4. 01:25:285 (1) - Gak ada apa-apa di 01:25:490 tapi ada bunyi keras yang bisa diikutin di 01:25:422. Tolong ini dibikin jadi slider 1/2. Slider ginian berpotensi ngebingungin pemain dan sama sekali gak ngikutin instrumen yang ada (dan slider seperti ini juga biasa jadi biang kerok DQ).
5. 01:46:422 (2,3,4,5) - mz spacing-nya ga konsisten
6. 02:22:013 (1) - IMO, daripada dibikin sepanjang 3/4 mending 1/2 aja sih. Saya khawatir pemain bakal kesulitan banget ngebaca ini lalu tau-tau pindah ke 02:22:285 (2,3,4) yang jaraknya cuma 1/4 ketukan karena gerakannya harus presisi banget.
7. 02:22:967 (3) - Ini jangan di-stack dong; somehow ngebingungin banget waktu dimainin (udah dites berkali-kali)... Flow-nya juga kerasa rusak kalau naruh kayak gini sih. Coba pindahin ke (401,288)?
8. 02:39:467 (1) - Sama dengan 02:22:013 (1).
9. 03:14:983 (1,1) - Ini spacing-nya tolong dikecilin biar lebih kebaca; coba pindahin 03:15:462 (1) ke (115,111)?
10. 03:17:032 (2,1) - Jauhin ke (94,289) biar offset shift di sini lebih terbaca?
11. 03:17:850 (1) - (193,121)? Alasan sama dengan dua usul di atas.
12. 03:26:975 (2) - Ubah ini jadi circle dan biarin 03:27:090 kosong? Jauh lebih ngepas sama musik yang ada di sini karena 03:27:090 sendiri kosong dari sananya.
13. 03:27:667 (5) - ^
14. 04:12:137 (2,3) - Mirip kasusnya dengan suggestion pertama di sini; disaranin cukup pake 1/4 kick slider karena ga ada yang perlu ditekanin di 04:12:273 sampai perlu pattern seperti ini, dan perubahan spacing di sini bisa dibilang sangat kerasa dan bisa membingungkan, apalagi mengingat musik yang ga kuat-kuat amat.

Hinsvar wrote:

*Bold = Unrankable atau sangat penting buat diperhatikan; merah = Patut dipertimbangkan karena dapat dikatakan bermasalah; hitam = Saran-saran kecil untuk membantu meningkatkan kualitas map

1. 00:34:013 (1,2,3,4) - Ini tergolong susah banget buat dibaca karena perbedaan spacing-nya yang cukup kentara di sini (mengingat (2,3) perlu gerakan yang jauh lebih cepat daripada (1,2) dan (3,4) tapi spacing-nya tampak sama aja).Kalau bisa sih spacing (1,2) dilebarin lagi, atau gabungin (2,3) jadi satu kick slider. -> 00:34:013 (1,2) - ini pattern mati (cocok untuk anti jump), 00:34:285 (2,3,4) - ini pattern melodi (ini menurut ane enak buat jumping, soalnya ngepas sama lagu), menurut ane ini gak apa" kok asal bisa baca pattern aja gampang ini
2. 01:03:808 - Ini ga sekalian di-map aja karena ada bunyi yang cukup... kedengeran di sini? Ya, bakal ngerusak pattern di sini sih emang... ->01:05:240 (4,5,6) - ane gk ngedenger suara drum sekeras ini sama 01:06:604 (6) -
3. 01:05:649 - 01:05:922 - Sama dengan saran di atas (dan sekali lagi bakal ngerusak pattern yang ada sih tapi bakal jauh lebih ngikutin musik). -> ane tetap konsisten ngikutin melodi yang ada disini, walau pun disana ada suara 1/4 pattern kayanya player bakalan kagok baca ini pattern soalnya disini ane prefer follow melody
4. 01:25:285 (1) - Gak ada apa-apa di 01:25:490 tapi ada bunyi keras yang bisa diikutin di 01:25:422. Tolong ini dibikin jadi slider 1/2. Slider ginian berpotensi ngebingungin pemain dan sama sekali gak ngikutin instrumen yang ada (dan slider seperti ini juga biasa jadi biang kerok DQ). -> tenang aja lah hins, konsistensi gk bakal bisa bikin map ini DQ, ane yakin kalau ane bikin pattern sama kaya 01:20:922 (1) - pasti player lain gk bakal ngerasain ini pattern kelewat atau enggak, dan ane prefer follow drum pattern sound, tapi ane perbaiki penempatan disini
5. 01:46:422 (2,3,4,5) - mz spacing-nya ga konsisten
6. 02:22:013 (1) - IMO, daripada dibikin sepanjang 3/4 mending 1/2 aja sih. Saya khawatir pemain bakal kesulitan banget ngebaca ini lalu tau-tau pindah ke 02:22:285 (2,3,4) yang jaraknya cuma 1/4 ketukan karena gerakannya harus presisi banget. Ane perbaiki penempatan disini
7. 02:22:967 (3) - Ini jangan di-stack dong; somehow ngebingungin banget waktu dimainin (udah dites berkali-kali)... Flow-nya juga kerasa rusak kalau naruh kayak gini sih. Coba pindahin ke (401,288)? nice1
8. 02:39:467 (1) - Sama dengan 02:22:013 (1). menurut ane kalau yg ini mah udah asik xD
9. 03:14:983 (1,1) - Ini spacing-nya tolong dikecilin biar lebih kebaca; coba pindahin 03:15:462 (1) ke (115,111)? justru lebih bingung lagi kalau spacing nya kecil soalnya pattern 03:15:462 (1,2) - spacing nya besar, tapi ane fix sedikit deh
10. 03:17:032 (2,1) - Jauhin ke (94,289) biar offset shift di sini lebih terbaca?
11. 03:17:850 (1) - (193,121)? Alasan sama dengan dua usul di atas. re-setting placement part
12. 03:26:975 (2) - Ubah ini jadi circle dan biarin 03:27:090 kosong? Jauh lebih ngepas sama musik yang ada di sini karena 03:27:090 sendiri kosong dari sananya. -> ini teh biar kerasa suara dug nya, sama ngurangin kemungkinan misshit, jadinya pakai slider aja lah
13. 03:27:667 (5) - ^_^
14. 04:12:137 (2,3) - Mirip kasusnya dengan suggestion pertama di sini; disaranin cukup pake 1/4 kick slider karena ga ada yang perlu ditekanin di 04:12:273 sampai perlu pattern seperti ini, dan perubahan spacing di sini bisa dibilang sangat kerasa dan bisa membingungkan, apalagi mengingat musik yang ga kuat-kuat amat. nah kalau ini versinya di perbesar distance nya supaya lebih greget xD

yes

Ipas wrote:

OMG Hinsvar that mod is awesome
Go Rank!

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Cherry Blossom wrote:

Spaghetti wrote:

never added me to the modders list on the map post better kms

monstrata wrote:

Double lines aren't unrankable when it's red + green tho... Only if its double red or double green. Unless of course, the sampleset/volume/SV etc... of the green line used was a mistake...

monstrata wrote:

Doesn't matter if the sampleset/volume is different. A green line will always override a red line so there can be no errors. Green Line > Red Line. Errors only appear when two red lines or two green lines are stacked because osu won't know what information to take. If there are double red lines, osu won't know which red line's information to prioritize, same with double green lines.

For example: if one green line says 40% volume and 1.2x SV multiplier, but another green line says 80% volume and 0.5x SV, the game might produce a section with 80% volume and 1.2x SV because it doesn't know which to prioritize. I'm unsure what occurs when both green lines have the same information, but errors still occur there too.

However in this case, the dq wasn't necessary.

Mackenzie wrote:

Requalification Notice

This has been requalified upon request by the mapper within 12 hours after disqualification. Please check the map nicely and then you are free to disqualify it.

###WTF QUALIFY CAP

monstrata wrote:

Doesn't matter if the sampleset/volume is different. A green line will always override a red line so there can be no errors. Green Line > Red Line. Errors only appear when two red lines or two green lines are stacked because osu won't know what information to take. If there are double red lines, osu won't know which red line's information to prioritize, same with double green lines.

For example: if one green line says 40% volume and 1.2x SV multiplier, but another green line says 80% volume and 0.5x SV, the game might produce a section with 80% volume and 1.2x SV because it doesn't know which to prioritize. I'm unsure what occurs when both green lines have the same information, but errors still occur there too.

However in this case, the dq wasn't necessary.

Spaghetti wrote:

Mackenzie wrote:

Requalification Notice

This has been requalified upon request by the mapper within 12 hours after disqualification. Please check the map nicely and then you are free to disqualify it.

###WTF QUALIFY CAP

someone could've used that to qualify it but u wasted it ;-;

monstrata wrote:

Qualify, then post .

baraatje123 wrote:

Spam the qualify button for 10+ minutes until it works
Then Post

monstrata wrote:

Double lines aren't unrankable when it's red + green tho... Only if its double red or double green. Unless of course, the sampleset/volume/SV etc... of the green line used was a mistake...

monstrata wrote:

However in this case, the dq wasn't necessary.

Azer wrote:

02:22:013 (1) - making this slider last so long really hurt the quality of this map, everyone broke on it, it's a huge jump and I personally expected it to be a regular 3 point return slider

Azer wrote:

02:22:013 (1) - making this slider last so long really hurt the quality of this map, everyone broke on it, it's a huge jump and I personally expected it to be a regular 3 point return slider

Fort wrote:

inb4 hvick FC lmao