1. Afraid (4.25 stars, 205 notes)
2. Intro (0.88 stars, 112 notes)
3. Not Afraid (5 stars, 622 notes)

1. .osb文件没用到，删掉之后full submission
2. Not Afraid这张图没用到，应该删去
3. source里的Not Afraid删掉，因为歌名里面有了
4. 按F3，把你的map声音都调到7或8

LKs wrote:

哈eminem

general

1. .osb文件没用到，删掉之后full submission -删了
2. Not Afraid这张图没用到，应该删去 -删了
3. source里的Not Afraid删掉，因为歌名里面有了 -删了
4. 按F3，把你的map声音都调到7或8 -调整了

Easy

...按F4，进入difficulty，第一行和第三行都调到3的位置 -调整了

[01:08:364] ~ [01:27:202] finish加太多了，删掉一半比较好 -fixed
[01:18:829] clap -fixed
[02:20:837] 这里没必要提前 -fixed

Normal

按F4，进入difficulty，第一行和第三行都调到4或以上的位置 -fixed
这个难度音效加的不好，像easy一样按照歌曲加就好了，还有finish太多，显得很吵 --删了许多finish ._.

[00:41:154] 这里没有必要延长 -fixed

Hard

不得不说你的hard做的比N E好，还不错 -谢谢:D

+star

NatsumeRin wrote:

Shinxyn+Lesjuh...
Edit: modded in QQ.

Rolled wrote:

This is excellent o_O

23725 offset. -fixed

Hard:
Hitsounds are amazing. <3 -thx
00:39:771 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Pretty cluttered. Spread it out a bit, less stacking. -yea quite cluttered ._. if another person point it out i will change
01:17:970 (3,1) - The 4 has the same spacing (roughly) as the 1 and 2 behind it. You're either going to have to move it further, probably across the playfield, and respace everything.. or what I would personally suggest is add a hitcircle at 01:17:796. Stack it on top of the 3 and the 1. -to fit with the lyc i dont want to add that circle
01:46:750 (1,2,3) - Some of these 1/1 stacks get a bit confusing. The map is a pretty fast pace, and this throws an awkward loop into it. (more examples: 00:59:133 (1), ) -but its funny
02:01:227 (5,6,1) - ic what you did there. Overlapping like this is a pretty advanced mapping technique, and I really like how you did it. -thx
02:15:181 - Make kiai start here pls. -fixed
02:46:752 (3,4,5,1,2) - Make all this overlap a bit less. -hmm... maybe i will :3 but how to make this 0.5x part harder ._.

Seriously though, map's amazing. I would have never been able to map this song like you did. +++++ o_O

I didn't look too deep into normal or easy, but I'll note that there's a large difficulty gap in between them - and normal is a bit over the top, difficulty-wise. Probably could use some dumbing-down. i will change the name of diffs

Edit: also, I don't agree with not capitalizing Eminem's name. Whether it's accurate or not, it doesn't look good (and there's other eminem beatmaps on osu with it capitalized) -fixed

AngelHoney wrote:

All

插入preview point (Timing => Set Current Position as Preview Point
刪掉文件夾里的.OSB文件 然後full上傳 fixed

Hard

有幾處unsnaped >_> 按ctrl+shift+a 看Snapping項 就知道是那幾處了

00:33:479 - 放個note 或者00:33:654 (4) - new combo ? fixed
00:39:061 (1) - 去掉new combo fixed
00:40:107 (1,2,3,4,5) - 有點難讀(而且combo的顏色也不夠明顯>_> fixed
00:58:945 - 放個note no ._.
00:59:120 (1) - 稍微移開點? no
01:00:515 (4,5) - 5疊在4上面? fixed
01:13:771 (4) - 放在3的左邊?(4和下一組的間距有點大了O.O no
01:17:957 (3,1) - 互換new combo fixed
02:01:563 (1) - 這一段開始 後面的一些節奏有點亂?!O.O ._.
02:09:761 (1) - 移遠點 no
02:20:924 (1) - 移到左邊的紅線上? 然後02:21:622 - 放個note ? fixed
02:36:099 (3,1) - 互換new combo ? fixed
03:39:065 (1) - 移遠點 no
03:50:054 (4) - 和之前一處一樣 no
03:54:240 (3,1) - ^ fixed

Normal

Slider Tick Rate 0.5 感覺更好? o_O no

01:15:864 (2) - 移到右邊的白線上? fixed
02:13:947 (1,2,3,4) - 對於normal 最好別這樣?! 改了难度的名字 现在看起来更像hard了 ._.

沒什麼大問題 只是new combo使用的太頻繁了... 在ez里面改

Easy

和normal一樣 有些地方new combo太過頻繁了>_> fixed


=w=/

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Add “Recovery” to tags. fixed
-- Delete the .osb and full submit. fixed
-- BPM is set to 171.995, change it to 172. fixed
-- I downloaded the video version but didn’t get a video, full submit? cuz the video is too big(32+M) i need some1 to help me ._.

Intro

-- Everything is unsnapped, resnap. fixed
-- Needs a preview point. fixed

00:38:376 (x) – Note? fixed
00:39:771 (x) - ^ fixed
00:46:748 (x) - ^ fixed
00:48:144 (x) - ^ fixed
00:49:539 (x) - ^ fixed
00:50:935 (x) - ^ fixed
00:57:912 (x) - ^ fixed
01:09:759 (1) – Remove new combo. fixed
01:12:550 (1) - ^ fixed
01:15:341 (1) - ^ fixed
01:20:935 (1) - ^ fixed
01:23:726 (1) - ^ fixed
01:26:504 (1) - ^ fixed
01:42:564 (x) – Note? fixed
01:56:518 (x) - ^ fixed
02:27:901 (1) – Remove new combo. fixed
02:30:692 (1) - ^ fixed
02:33:483 (1) - ^ fixed
02:38:380 – Delete all inheriting sections after this point. fixed

Yeah, parts seem undermapped, and the new combo spam isn’t necessary.

Afraid :

-- There are unsnapped notes, resnap please. fixed
-- Please map this to the same length as Hard. (Especially since [Intro] is longer than this.) = k i will make it
-- Needs a preview point. fixed

00:40:456 (1,2,3) – Overlaps with 00:39:061 (1) – might be hard to read for a Normal. fixed
00:43:247 (1) – Try to make the start more visible imo. fixed
01:02:433 (4) – Move from under the slider, hard to read for Normal diff. fixed
01:08:417 – Why the sudden increase in spacing? cuz kiai time
02:34:355 (2) – Is in an awkward position imo. fixed

Well the star rating is probably because you increased the spacing during kiai time. I didn’t really like the cluster, especially for a normal diff. Also you could work on the new combo’s but since it’s WIP I won’t post any suggestions about that XD. maybe its hard now =

Not Afriad:

-- There are unsnapped notes, resnap please. fixed
-- Needs a preview point. (Timing > Set Current Position as Preview (at a good point in the song) fixed
-- Overall Difficulty +1 no ._. i think 7 is beteer

00:40:107 (1,2,3,4,5) – Confusing, hard to read. fixed
02:38:018 – Insert break here. fixed
02:48:134 (1,2,1,2) – A bit clustered, maybe spread this out a little more? no ._.

Awesome difficulty, +1 overall difficulty makes it flow better imo ^_^

SadKangaroo wrote:

Hi.

[General]
01:07:330 - Maybe make a Preview Point from here? fixed

[Afraid]
02:22:856 (2) - Add a circle here,and the slider moves to 02:23:030. fixed
Delete all unused timing points.From this up to the end. fixed

Others seems fine.

Star~

wanhyrzh wrote:

HI~不算MOD的MOD.....实在是很抱歉，时间不是很充裕。
只是一些整体上的问题，而且个人喜好倾向比较严重
所以你基本可以无视~（被PIA飞

SPOILER

第一，可能是我比较偏执...不过我觉得很多SLIDER的对称性都不是很完美...
像这种就有点中心偏左的感觉
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嘛，这个不是什么大问题，个人喜好而已..（如果要改几乎每一个弯的SLIDER都要微调一下锚点....OTL）

第二，还有排列上的一些小毛病（个人感觉）….
1.譬如这种地方，CIRCLE7和SLIDER3叠在一起感觉就比较诡异…
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2.譬如这种地方，SLIDER1和整串COMBO的形状就不是很协调…SLIDER1向左下弯曲会比较美观.；还有SLIDER5也最好能够顺着3~4的方向来，现在感觉向突然右上突出了….
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3.排列显得有点拥挤….最快的一个方法就是CIRCLE SIZE全部都-1......

第三，感觉I的流畅度做得比较不错（尽管我还是觉得SLIDER稍微慢了一点），不过N和E就整体感觉慢了....特别是N，个人感觉NOTE的速度和SLIDER的速度真的不是很协调，其实我觉得SV最好能加到1.2，现在打起来有种粘滞感（就是滑SLIDER的时候明显感觉节奏变慢了），特别是你的DS1.2X算是整体有点跳的图了……

另外，建议在白和灰之间加多一种combo颜色...

嘛，听起来还是一张很舒服的图~音效我觉得还不错~
加油！STAR~