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Beuchi

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Beuchi 2010-05-26T07:08:28+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 09 de junio de 2010 at 4:06:57

Artist: Susumu Hirasawa
Title: Shiroi Oka - Maromi no Theme
Source: Paranoia Agent
Tags: Starrodkirby86
BPM: 75
Filesize: 6834kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:

Easy (0,69 stars, 67 notes)
Hard (4,02 stars, 142 notes)
KIRBY Mix (4,8 stars, 193 notes)
Normal (2,51 stars, 109 notes)

Download: Susumu Hirasawa - Shiroi Oka - Maromi no Theme
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8th map!!

Paranoia Agent's ending theme.
Short, cute, relaxing, a nice storyboard and an awesome KIRBY Mix... Should I say more? Enjoy!!

Thanks for playing, modding, starring and all that ^_^
Special thanks to LuigiHann for giving the idea for Fail/Pass Storyboard.

EDITS:
May 26 (22:16): Fixes by Fuuko. Added a silent soft-sliderslide.
May 27 (6:33): Fixes by fartownik.
May 28 (0:10): Fixes by Louis Cyphre.
May 28 (21:24): Fixes by Garven.
May 29 (1:27): Fixes by Gladi.
May 29 (11:10): Added some missing whistles on Easy.
May 30 (4:59): Updated Kirby's diff.
Jun 4 (10:45): Added a little Fail/Pass layer Storyboard.
Jun 4 (17:24): Fixes by osuplayer111.
Jun 6 (21:21): Fixed Kirby's diff. Added a custom clap sound.
Jun 9 (1:05): Fixes by Gens. Changed offset.

Last edited by Beuchi 2010-06-09T02:07:17+00:00, edited 13 times in total.

Starrodkirby86

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Starrodkirby86 2010-05-26T07:09:33+00:00

Mmmmm I love eating Maromi for dinner

Nachy

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Nachy 2010-05-26T07:23:22+00:00

soulfear

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soulfear 2010-05-26T07:51:38+00:00

can't find any problems.
star.
I like this kind of song.

Fuuko

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Fuuko 2010-05-26T20:16:40+00:00

Irc mod. <3
Go, Beunyan, go.

@Kirby

I HATE THE CLAPS, YEAH.
*runs before getting killed*

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2010-05-26T20:20:47+00:00

IRC Mod Log:

SPOILER

21:52 <Fuuko> : First, silence the slider-slide.
21:52 <Fuuko> : Because it sounds horrible.
21:52 <Fuuko> : Second, nice sb. <3
21:54 <Fuuko> : Easy:
21:54 <Fuuko> : 01:18:030 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Isn't this a bit harsh for an easy
21:54 <Fuuko> : ? *
21:55 <Beuchi-chan> : mayybe, I thought it wouldn't be that bad because the whole song is slow and all that but idk xP
21:55 <Fuuko> : I still think it is.

21:56 <Beuchi-chan> : okay

21:57 <Fuuko> : Normal:
21:57 <Fuuko> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10951
21:57 <Fuuko> : Uh...explanations
21:57 <Beuchi-chan> : oh that
21:58 <Beuchi-chan> : fixing it xD
21:58 <Beuchi-chan> : fixed <3
21:59 <Fuuko> : <3
22:01 <Beuchi-chan> : also
22:02 <Beuchi-chan> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10952 easy enough? o.o
22:03 <Fuuko> : Looks better.
22:03 <Fuuko> : Though you could probably space it a bit more, to look more neat.
22:03 <Beuchi-chan> : sure~
22:04 <Beuchi-chan> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10953 maybe?
22:04 <Fuuko> : Hard:
22:04 <Fuuko> : You know, there's this pattern I dislike.
22:04 <Fuuko> : 00:54:030 (1,2,3,4,5) - This.
22:05 <Beuchi-chan> : how come :<
22:06 <Fuuko> : I dislike how the (3) is overlapped by the slider. ;-;
22:06 <Fuuko> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10954
22:06 <Beuchi-chan> : :/
22:06 <Fuuko> : Maybe?
22:08 <Beuchi-chan> : and the stream still stacked, right?
22:08 <Fuuko> : Yes.
22:08 <Fuuko> : And make it symmetrycal like you always do. <3
22:09 <Beuchi-chan> : Done <3
22:10 <Fuuko> : I dislike the claps at Kirby's...but I guess there's nothing I can do.
22:10 <Beuchi-chan> : xD
22:11 <Beuchi-chan> : the file name is "slider-slide"?
22:11 <Fuuko> : soft-sliderslide
22:11 <Beuchi-chan> : thank you <3
22:11 <Fuuko> : And you'll have to change your sections to CO1
22:11 <Fuuko> : Custom Override 1.
22:12 <Beuchi-chan> : okay, doing it~
22:13 <Fuuko> : Also, add more tags.
22:13 <Beuchi-chan> : done <333
22:13 <Fuuko> : Like Maromi, and whatnot.
22:13 <Beuchi-chan> : maromi is on the title xP
22:13 <Fuuko> : Folder looks clean.
22:13 <Fuuko> : Guess that's all. <3

Thank you so much Fuuko <3 *Kudosu*

fartownik

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fartownik 2010-05-26T20:50:11+00:00

[Hard]

01:24:430 (1) - Silent this spinner? (It's already silenced in beatmap audio options, but the Finish is still hearable, you'll need to add a blank custom hitsound to do it [or just delete the Finish]). Do the same in [Normal] and [Easy].
01:02:830 - Add a break.

[Kirby]

00:33:830 (6,1) - Nothing major, but this spacing change (from 0,9x to 0,7x) feels a little weird.
00:34:830 (3,4) - ^

There's something... mysterious in this song, which makes me like it.
Cool mapset and the SB. +star

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2010-05-27T04:41:41+00:00

fartownik wrote:
[Hard]

01:24:430 (1) - Silent this spinner? (It's already silenced in beatmap audio options, but the Finish is still hearable, you'll need to add a blank custom hitsound to do it [or just delete the Finish]). Do the same in [Normal] and [Easy]. I deleted the finishes xP
01:02:830 - Add a break. o_o wtf how did this dissapear? xD

There's something... mysterious in this song, which makes me like it. It's maromi's power 8D

Rhank you~ *kudosu*

Louis Cyphre

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Louis Cyphre 2010-05-27T17:42:44+00:00

[Easy]
00:23:630 - distance
00:24:430 - ^
00:25:230 - ^
00:26:030 - ^
00:30:830 - ^

[Normal]
00:18:830 - one grid left
00:45:230 - distance
00:46:030 - ^
00:50:030 - ^
00:50:830 - ^
00:59:630 - ^
01:00:430 - ^
01:01:230 - ^
01:08:430 - ^

[Hard]
Fine~

[KIRBY Mix]
:3

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2010-05-27T22:09:57+00:00

Louis Cyphre wrote:
[Easy]
00:23:630 - distance I don't see any spacing issue here ._.
00:24:430 - ^ I don't think it's THAT bad... It's totally readable imo
00:25:230 - ^ Same
00:26:030 - ^ It has the same spacing as the other circles >:
00:30:830 - ^ As I said... is totally readable :/

[Normal]
00:18:830 - one grid left Uh, okay ._.
00:45:230 - distance Well, I don't think is so hard to click... =x
00:46:030 - ^ Same
00:50:030 - ^ Same
00:50:830 - ^ Same
00:59:630 - ^ Same
01:00:430 - ^ Same
01:01:230 - ^ Same
01:08:430 - ^ Moved (2)... :/

Geez... you nazi... *kudosu*

Garven

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Garven 2010-05-28T09:12:25+00:00

All but KIRBY Mix: The end spinner feels a little long compared to the song, but it's not hurting anything either... meh.

[Easy]
01:18:430 (2,3) - I'm kind of reluctant to have something like this in an easy just because a newbie may not really have a good sense of knowing quite when a repeating slider like this will end, but it does go with the music quite well... and it's a really slow bpm... I dunno. :/

[KIRBY Mix]
Those claps don't fit this song at all, and the finishes are iffy. I'd stick to whistle only.
I'd also remove the whistle on slider slide (it sounds terrible normally, and it sticks out really bad when you silence the sliderslide).

SPOILER

00:36:430 (1) - Whistle on sliderslde~
00:38:830 (1) - ^
01:09:230 (1,2) - ^
01:11:630 (1,2) - ^
01:14:030 (1,2) - ^
01:16:430 (1,2) - ^
01:20:630 (4) - ^

Eh, I've found nothing here. Good stuff~

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2010-05-28T19:21:55+00:00

Garven wrote:
All but KIRBY Mix: The end spinner feels a little long compared to the song, but it's not hurting anything either... meh. Well, it's a slooow song and it isn't that hard so yeah I don't think it will hurt anyone xP

[Easy]
01:18:430 (2,3) - I'm kind of reluctant to have something like this in an easy just because a newbie may not really have a good sense of knowing quite when a repeating slider like this will end, but it does go with the music quite well... and it's a really slow bpm... I dunno. :/ I'll get a second opinion about this

[KIRBY Mix]
Those claps don't fit this song at all, and the finishes are iffy. I'd stick to whistle only. I kinda agree with you, but I'll leave the decision to Kirby xD
I'd also remove the whistle on slider slide (it sounds terrible normally, and it sticks out really bad when you silence the sliderslide).
00:36:430 (1) - Whistle on sliderslde~ Fixed.
00:38:830 (1) - ^ Fixed.
01:09:230 (1,2) - ^ Fixed.
01:11:630 (1,2) - ^ Fixed.
01:14:030 (1,2) - ^ Fixed.
01:16:430 (1,2) - ^ Fixed.
01:20:630 (4) - ^ Fixed.

Eh, I've found nothing here. Good stuff~

Thank you!! *kudosu*

GladiOol

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GladiOol 2010-05-28T21:54:20+00:00

[General]

00:05:230 (Timing Section) - Decrease the volume of this timing section by 2 or 3 ticks.

Mèh D: Can't find anything wrong. Good map! (Don't kudosu my post.)
Star.

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2010-05-28T23:29:10+00:00

Gladi wrote:
[General]
00:05:230 (Timing Section) - Decrease the volume of this timing section by 2 or 3 ticks. Sure~
Mèh D: Can't find anything wrong. Good map! (Don't kudosu my post.) Okay ;x;

Thank you~ <3

maay

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maay 2010-05-29T08:41:18+00:00

Weird song... well, as expected from Susumu Hirasawa. Big Brother looks kinda diabolic imo, lmao

Anyway, I couldn't find anything odd and the maps look great, so have a star.

Starrodkirby86

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Starrodkirby86 2010-05-30T02:23:47+00:00

Updated.

Download: Susumu Hirasawa - Shiroi Oka - Maromi no Theme (Beuchi-chan) [KIRBY Mix].osu

sm0q

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sm0q 2010-06-03T23:20:23+00:00

Normal:
01:16:830 (5,6,7) - this 1/4 is strange IMO i think u should only let 7 to remain
01:02:430 (5,6,7) - ^ without saving 7
01:21:630 (1,2,3) ^ save 3
01:03:030 - i know that u should make break (its in rules), and there is no better place... but in this map it's REALLY unneeded
01:08:430 (3) - shorten slider and add note on 01:10:030

Easy is okay.
Hard... well... there are things that arent okay for me, but i think that i have to small experience to write about them

Dunno if you will use my suggestion but anyway there is tsar and PLEASE! MOAR SUSUMU HIRASAWA MAPS!

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2010-06-03T23:37:36+00:00

sm0q wrote:
Normal:
01:16:830 (5,6,7) - this 1/4 is strange IMO i think u should only let 7 to remain I think the map is easier enough already... xD
01:02:430 (5,6,7) - ^ without saving 7 ^
01:21:630 (1,2,3) ^ save 3 ^
01:03:030 - i know that u should make break (its in rules), and there is no better place... but in this map it's REALLY unneeded It doesn't fit so well if I map that part, as you saw, the same part on the beginning isn't mapped
01:08:430 (3) - shorten slider and add note on 01:10:030

Uhh sorry =(
Also, next time you mod a map, please put the time stamps in order, it makes it so confusing to check >.<

Andrea

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Andrea 2010-06-04T13:34:33+00:00

[Normal]

00:46:030 (3) - New combo.
00:50:830 (3) - ^

[KIRBY Mix]

HP Drain and Overall Difficulty are seriously too high for a slow song like this. Reduce both of them at least by 1 tick.

00:56:830 (7) - New combo.

I think claps sounds weird on a song like this... but this is your choice.

Beuchi

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Beuchi 2010-06-04T15:24:39+00:00

osuplayer111 wrote:
[Normal]

00:46:030 (3) - New combo. Done.
00:50:830 (3) - ^ Done too :3

I'll wait for Kirby for his diff :3 Thank you~ x3 *kudosu*

Sallad4ever

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Sallad4ever 2010-06-05T07:50:54+00:00

orz
How can I missed Susumu Hirasawa song
Forgive me Beuchi-chan
Forgive me Starrodkirby
Forgive me Susumu Hirasawa

Aww...Maromi is so cute

I think I can have a good dream after hearing this

~Star~

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Starrodkirby86 2010-06-06T18:58:07+00:00

Hope I didn't glitch anything 0.o

All right, I lowered HP Drain. I do agree with you that it's a bit high for a song this sparse. However, I am keeping the OD... I still felt that I wanted the quick-reflexes action and atmosphere to be there when playing this sort of map (A KIRBY Mix in general?), and OD's approach circle rate and such fulfilled that...I did try it on OD7 and, to my dismay, it wasn't as exciting. If we're still deadlocked about this, we can happily discuss this within osu! PM.