tsuka wrote:

the custom hitsound is not fits the song"
try to back to the default one(soft clap)

and don't forgot silence the sliderslide on openning

nice work

nokds

Frans Niko wrote:

another Ani song o3o
same song with https://osu.ppy.sh/s/87594 o3o

Frans Niko wrote:

since irc mod o3o

Log

16:08 Frans Niko: let see
16:08 Yuki-kun: yes?
16:08 *Frans Niko is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/241297 Ani - Light Up My Love (feat. Moco)]
16:09 Frans Niko: another map maybe you can steal the title or bg (lol)
16:09 Yuki-kun: i have title base on Wiki and music database
16:09 Yuki-kun: xD
16:09 Yuki-kun: but i'm very confuse about artist
16:10 Yuki-kun: in database, they said Ani ft moco is singer
16:10 Frans Niko: did you forget about Letterbox during breaks?
16:10 Yuki-kun: huh?
16:10 Yuki-kun: ah yes
16:10 Yuki-kun: totally forgot it
16:11 Frans Niko: lets do from insane
16:12 Frans Niko: 00:15:526 - spinner end here and then add circles until kiai time start
16:13 Frans Niko: 00:17:894 - looks unsnapped
16:14 Yuki-kun: spinner is still good imo, i don't want follow bass here, and ok, fixed unsnap error
16:15 Frans Niko: 01:52:193 - move to the left (1 grid)
16:15 Frans Niko: 01:57:807 - ^
16:15 Yuki-kun: ok fixed
16:16 Frans Niko: for ~Hard~ now
16:17 Frans Niko: 01:02:544 - maybe make the SV lower ?
16:17 Frans Niko: and the sound lower
16:17 Yuki-kun: wait wait?
16:17 Yuki-kun: SV?
16:18 Yuki-kun: slider velocity?
16:18 Frans Niko: yup
16:18 Frans Niko: ya
16:18 Yuki-kun: you mean i should reduce speed that part?
16:18 Frans Niko: yup because its slow part
16:18 Yuki-kun: hmm
16:19 Yuki-kun: for now, it's ok with me, but i will consider about it, because current SV 1.4 slow enough for me
16:19 Yuki-kun: i will give it a try after your mod
16:21 Frans Niko: and for taiko diff please tell 0gre to don't use soft hitsound
16:21 Yuki-kun: ok i will tell him
16:22 Frans Niko: and maybe you can see Mako's Light Up My Love too
16:22 Yuki-kun: i watched it
16:22 Yuki-kun: (and stole some part)
16:22 Yuki-kun:
16:24 Frans Niko: so i post it?
16:24 Yuki-kun: of course, if you don't want to mod normal and easy :p

Jacob wrote:

sorry that i haven't gotten to your map yet. i will mod it as soon as possible.

Jacob wrote:

hello! m4m from my queue.

[General]
- why do the difficulty names have "~" before and after the actual name? a better idea would be to remove them due to it not making much sense. however, i think it would be cool to have the difficulty names match the title, such as "Easy!!", "Normal!!", "Hard!!", etc.
- add "taiko" (since there are taiko difficulties) and "iOS" (the game is released for iOS as well) into the tags.
- the Muzukashii difficulty is missing the "0gre" tag.
- the offset is inconsistent on both taiko difficulties; it should be 2895.
- if you would like, i could make the title text appear during the first break. it's a cool effect in my opinion since it's just after the most important part in the song (the chorus).
- the clap that you're using for this map is a bit too loud and lasts too long in my opinion. you should use this file as your clap and custom slidertick since it is much shorter and matches the music.
- please map out the last break. it feels awkward to have the map end with a break..


that's all i have. in my opinion, this map needs a bit more work to have it be ranked. currently, it's lacking in the fun-to-play factor and is overall a bit sub-par. however, you're making good progress. starred for now.

296,272,55877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,120,56579,6,0,P|256:104|176:120,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,216,58684,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,200,59386,2,0,P|198:233|320:322,1,320,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,61491,2,0,L|432:136,1,80,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

- IMHO, so it will look better and...

360,216,97631,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,296,97982,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,336,98333,6,0,P|211:351|131:335,2,160,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Satilast wrote:

I don't forgive myself if I don't mod on this song ^.^

Red = Fixes
Blue = Suggestions
Green = Comments

General
Fine. Sweet hitsounds and BG~

0gre's Muzu
00:52:543 (1,1) - K D
00:58:332 (1) - D
01:44:648 (2) - K
_____________________
I hope that you rank it
Good luck

I dont think want change any for now but thx in advice

0gre wrote:

ummm I tryed move the bg down and changed few notes at Oni ~

http://puu.sh/2PTNT.zip

1. all notes are good and have good structure >w< i like the oni diff <3

1. 00:27:455 (1,1,1,1,1) - d d k k d?
2. 01:05:175 (2) - change d to be k? ?
3. 01:23:947 (1) - change to be K? but i think use k is good too it's up to you
4. 01:26:842 (2) - k? so, 01:26:753 (1,2,3) - are kkk make a bit stream
5. 01:32:456 (2) - ^
6. 01:37:894 (3) - ^
7. 01:40:877 (2) - ^
8. 01:43:333 (2) - ^

1. 01:05:175 (3) - same like muzu diff
2. 01:10:087 (1) - change to be k? i think it's better than d
3. 01:10:789 (3) - change to be k? ?
4. 01:16:403 (1) - ^
5. 01:23:947 (1) - k or K. two of them are good >w<

Parachute wrote:

Kirino's Hard!!
00:05:702 (1) - remove nc
00:06:052 (2) - add nc
00:07:456 (1) - remove nc
00:07:807 (2) - add nc
00:10:263 (1) - remove nc
00:10:438 (2) - add nc
00:11:316 (1) - remove nc
00:11:666 (2) - add nc
00:21:842 (6) - add nc
00:25:702 (4) - add nc
00:30:087 (3) - add nc
00:31:316 (6) - add nc
00:32:368 (1) - remove nc
00:33:070 (3) - add nc
00:36:930 (5) - add nc
00:37:807 (1) - remove nc#
00:51:842 (4) - add nc
00:52:193 (1) - remove nc
00:54:649 (4) - add nc
00:57:456 (6) - add nc
00:57:807 (1) - remove nc
01:24:298 - copy + paste.. so just look at the same things which i suggested at the first chorus...
01:56:930 (3) - this circle somewhere else because its really bad to see that the next circles are a jump.. make it somewhere more high

Hitsounds

00:05:702 (1) - ^
00:08:158 (3) - ^
00:11:316 (1) - ^
00:19:737 (4) - ^
00:21:140 (4) - ^
00:30:438 (4) - remove whistle at the beginning and add it on the end
00:33:772 (5) - add whistle
00:36:579 (4) - ^

mingmichael wrote:

hey yuki, here the mods that you requested
i hope those mods will help the taiko diffs >,<

[General]

1. all notes are good and have good structure >w< i like the oni diff <3

[muzu]

1. 00:27:455 (1,1,1,1,1) - d d k k d?
2. 01:05:175 (2) - change d to be k? ? ✔ yes ><!
3. 01:23:947 (1) - change to be K? but i think use k is good too it's up to you ▲ fmm.. maybe Ill see what other says ~
4. 01:26:842 (2) - k? so, 01:26:753 (1,2,3) - are kkk make a bit stream ✖ I thought bit too hard
5. 01:32:456 (2) - ^
6. 01:37:894 (3) - ^
7. 01:40:877 (2) - ^
8. 01:43:333 (2) - ^

[oni]

1. 01:05:175 (3) - same like muzu diff ✔ thx
2. 01:10:087 (1) - change to be k? i think it's better than d ✔ done !
3. 01:10:789 (3) - change to be k? ? ✔ fix !
4. 01:16:403 (1) - ^
5. 01:23:947 (1) - k or K. two of them are good >w<

Megurine Luka wrote:

[K's H]

Can you try to eliminate your sliderslide sound? Sounds weird for me hmm, true.
00:12:544 (3) - x=412 y=88 looks better Fixed~

00:26:052 (2) - make something like Fixed~ I guess...
00:33:772 (3) - put it on the end of slider 3? nah, I think it's fine. no change.
00:34:824 (3) - ctrl+g for better flow and rearrange the following circles Fixed~
00:44:649 (3,4) - one grid left (grid level 4 most precise) oops, fixed~
00:49:912 (1,2) - ^ Fixed~
01:01:316 (1,2,3,4) - this spacing is too sudden Fixed~
01:07:456 (1) - uhh what? no change.
01:17:631 (3) - x=335 y=256 Fixed~
01:33:420 (2) - x=152 y=284 Fixed~
01:41:140 (3) - same as previous Nope, also.
01:54:824 (5) - if you make this spacing intentionally, please use new combo to indicate. Fixed~
01:57:807 (4) - 1 grid up Fixed~

Loli Cjj wrote:

=Kirino's Hard!!=
1. This diff is the only std diff that has white border. Yuki-kun should fix general things such as this lol.
2. 01:04:649 (1,3) - Ew the shape. made changes
3. ... no change for number 3. /me runs

Loli Cjj wrote:

To be honest, the circle is quite bugging me. The overlay is too visible so the color is ruined. Maybe reduce the opacity?

Also why black border (wTTATT)w

=0gre's Muzu=
1. 00:16:754 - Move to 00:16:930 (Timing) ✔

=0gre's Oni=
1. 00:06:754 (1,2,1) - Why not kdk like before? The vocal's note is same, so k on the end is really in. ▲ I thought 00:03:947　00:09:561 are same and 00:06:754 is odd one out
2. 00:16:754 - Move to 00:16:930 (Timing) ✔

Remember that most of my mods are suggestion.
Good luck.

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hello~ NM as requested~
And I love Cytus
Generally NC inconsistency is occuring for both diffs, check again~

Easy

1. 00:02:895 (1,2,3) - Generally, I think the flow here should be retained, so align them to be a smooth curve.
2. 00:05:000 (1,2,3) - ^^
3. 00:11:666 (2) - Rotate this 11 degrees, clockwise to the selection centre. Personally I think that looks better.
4. 00:20:087 (3) - To follow the strong vocals here, I think you should end this slider at 00:20:789, and then adding a cirlcle at 00:21:140.
5. 00:59:386 (3) - You followed the snares up until now, so why not do the same here? End this slider at 01:00:087. Then add a 2/1 slider at 01:00:789. After that add a circle at 01:01:842 with a finish.
6. 01:16:930 (4) - Well... Nazi mod but, moving this slider 1 grid to the left can improve the flow soo...
7. Pointing out NC consistency in kiai, so here goes.
8. 01:26:403 (1) - Remove NC,
9. 01:29:210 (3) - Add NC,
10. 01:32:017 (7) - Add NC,
11. 01:33:070 (1) - Then remove NC.
12. 01:41:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - I rather use two 1/1 slider and a circle, 5 circles in a row seems too hard for beginners.
13. 01:44:298 (2,3,4) - (4) is a curve, so why not apply at least a bit of a curve to (2) and (3)?
14. 01:57:807 - Well I know you are trying to give the fountain effects at the end, but I don't see how is that fitting...

Normal

1. 00:02:895 (1,2,3) - The flow is weird here. Players would move towards (3), because thats where the flow is going, but (2) is out of the flow, so players would have to cancel motion and move towards (2), which is bad for beginners. Change this up.
2. 00:06:052 (2,3,4,5) - Use sliders to express this, it would express the beat better.
3. 00:11:666 (3,4) - You can be following the vocals here, so I did this :
   
   
4. 00:19:035 (1,2,3) - It is always better to use sliders to express consecutive circles.
5. 00:19:737 (4,5,6,7) - ^^
6. 00:19:737 (4) - Add NC.
7. 00:22:894 (4) - Add NC
8. 00:29:210 (2,3,4,5) - Flow is weird here again, players would move towards to the right, but they will have to realize the notes are on the bottom side of the grid, which is no good for beginners. Fix the flow up.
9. 00:34:123 (1,2,3,4,1) - I strongly don't recommend you to have jumps in Normal, it is too hard for beginners.
10. 00:35:877 (2,3) - Improve blanket.
11. 00:37:807 (4,6) - ^^
12. 00:55:000 (4) - Add NC
13. 01:15:526 (4,1) - Improve blanket.
14. 01:38:684 (2,3,4,5,6) - There is a sharp curve at (5) to (6), you can fix this by making them a 1/1 slider.
15. 01:41:491 (2,3,4,5,1) - Same reason like 00:34:123 (1,2,3,4,1).

That is all from me, be sure to re-check all combos, they need some managements.
GL!

Euny wrote:

as your request! came from my queue♥

• Easy!!

1. looks really nice to me. i want to tell you just one. less slidertick. seems no need to '2' just '1' slidertick is fine.

2 for hitsound effect only. But i will consider about it later.

• Normal!!

1. 01:27:807 (3,5) - make these for same shape. >>> Fixed
2. 01:33:070 (2,1) - i think you can avoid this overlap. try this. if you have other nice patterns, take it. it just my suggestion.
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   >>> Yours still overlap? But okay, i've changed it a bit
   
3. 01:51:666 (4) - this reverse seems really harsh to newest players. also, you should keep beatsnap for normal diff imo. fix it like 00:49:912 (1,2,3) - this.
4. 01:57:280 (5) - ^ again..

>>> Fixed

• Hard!!

1. 00:24:649 (3,4) - this flow feels bit awkward when i play. i recommend this flow for you.
   
   SPOILER

   

>>> Fixed

• Insane!!

1. :o.. why you didnt put nc for every measure? for example, swap 00:04:298 (5,1) - these, and swap 00:05:702 (6,1) - these. hope you understand. and fix that for all diff.
   
   
   >>> Changed, but in another way
   
2. 01:16:052 (2,3) - looks bit ugly. make 01:16:052 (2) - this more curvy for better looks?
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   >>> Fixed
   
   
3. 01:32:719 (5,6) - i recommend to make these for same shape.
4. 01:41:140 (1,2) - why they are so close? hmm, keep ds1.5~. thats better for flow imo.
5. 01:47:105 (3,4,5) - i think you can make that more pretty. i hate 'blanket mod' but.. i found pity shapes in your diff. lets make that improve

>>> Fixed that's it
hope this is helpful...