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Ani feat. Moco - Light Up My Love!!

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Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, May 14, 2020 at 10:56:28 PM

Artist: Ani feat. Moco
Title: Light Up My Love!!
Source: Cytus
Tags: Rayark Games Android 0gre iOS Taiko DJNightmare Kirino Kousaka
BPM: 171
Filesize: 3710kb
Play Time: 01:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy!! (1.67 stars, 112 notes)
  2. Hard!! (3.62 stars, 293 notes)
  3. Insane!! (4.64 stars, 372 notes)
  4. Kirino's Hard!! (3.26 stars, 248 notes)
  5. Normal!! (2.18 stars, 163 notes)
Download: Ani feat. Moco - Light Up My Love!!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ready for modding~
Random song when i play cytus on my Android <3
Thanks everyone for checking offset for me :3
Last edited by Yuki-kun , edited 132 times in total.
Meru
1,615 posts
Joined March 2012
Meru
hi
finally someone mapped it xD

tought just a little suggestion
[General]
  1. 01:23:765 - Set current position as preview point, it is really recommended ;)
  2. Offset is fine but IMO +5 by current offset, IMO ofc
[~ Insane ~]
  1. 00:05:695 (6,1) - Merge it into reverse slider? only try to follow the voice and it's surprising me since the AR is high lol\
  2. 00:17:887 - Put a note here? since the next pattern you also apply pattern like this
  3. 01:25:958 - ^
  4. HP 7 is quite killer here lol try 6 at least lol
may next time I'll full mod it lol
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Matoryoshika wrote:

hi
finally someone mapped it xD

tought just a little suggestion
[General]
  1. 01:23:765 - Set current position as preview point, it is really recommended ;) [b]>> Fixed in another way[/b]
  2. Offset is fine but IMO +5 by current offset, IMO ofc >> I will find some BAT/MAT for it xD
[~ Insane ~]
  1. 00:05:695 (6,1) - Merge it into reverse slider? only try to follow the voice and it's surprising me since the AR is high lol >> For now, i think it's fine but i will notice if another modder say i need to change.
  2. 00:17:887 - Put a note here? since the next pattern you also apply pattern like this >> Fixed
  3. 01:25:958 - ^ >> Fixed
  4. HP 7 is quite killer here lol try 6 at least lol >> Fixed
may next time I'll full mod it lol
Sr for late reply.
Thanks for the mod. I will check it tonight xD

Ok done for checking
Updated~
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka
Hello~
Timing Check from In-game~

BPM: 171
Offset: 2883 (-5)

That's what I found :3
hope you feel like it :3
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Here goes your timing check.

BPM: 171,00 - Offset: 2.895 (Make sure to resnap all notes, green lines, etc.)

Remember to do this change on all your difficulties, good luck.
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Andrea wrote:

Here goes your timing check.

BPM: 171,00 - Offset: 2.895 (Make sure to resnap all notes, green lines, etc.)

Remember to do this change on all your difficulties, good luck.
Thanks a lot, my idol~ <3
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
P o M u T a
[General]
  1. Add Letterbox durin breaks?
  2. Tag 'Cytus' delte plz o: because already Source!_!
  3. Why difficult name ~●●●●~? i think not need ~ ~.
[Easy]
  1. 01:20:263 (3,1) - oh, easy diff stack is very harder, unstack is good..
  2. 01:21:666 (2,3) - ^
  3. 01:25:351 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:45:526 (3,4) - ^
  5. 00:35:526 (4) - i don't like 2 reverse slider. because people confused.. so easy diff not good.my suggestion 1 reverse slider and circle is good.
  6. 00:44:298 (1) - ^
  7. 00:49:912 (1) - ^
  8. 01:51:666(1) - i don't like 2 reverse slider. because people confused.. so easy diff not good. my suggestion 1 reverse slider and circle is good.
  9. 01:57:280 (1) - ^
[Normal]
  1. OD+1
  2. 01:25:351 (2) - x:380. because (4) - x:380.
[Hard]
  1. HP+1 OD+1
  2. 00:02:894 (1,2) - fmm, use this sound?
  3. 00:13:596 (1) - spinner start is 00:13:509. i think good~.
  4. 00:18:859 (2,3) - overlaps fix better.
  5. 00:52:017 (1) - stopping is bad. my suggestion (2) head stack is good.
  6. 00:58:509 (6) - All repeat arrows on sliders must be visible.
  7. 01:06:579 (1) - Maybe read harder. so, (4) stack?
  8. 01:21:842 (3,4) - overlaps fix better.
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:298 (5) - (x:337 y:311) better. because (3) is (x:337 y:71)
  2. 01:01:491 (6) - i think (7) stack better.
  3. 01:22:719 (1) - Add note. and spinner start is 01:22:807.
all diff NC is bit random, so you need regularity~.
good luck :D
Broccoly
1,359 posts
Joined May 2012
Broccoly
Hi~~, M4M from your queue.

[Insane]
00:37:456 (2) - (nazi) perfect parallel?
01:07:456 (1) - how about making this blanket purple 4?
From 01:35:526 (1) ~ to the end - Don't you think sudden x1.5 is a bit fast? because nothing's happening in the music.. and I don't see why it has to be faster. Well,,you can go for x1.25, but yeah.
01:57:280 (1,2,3,4) - how about using the ctrl + G ed form of 01:51:666 (1,2,3,4) - this? Like you did here: 00:44:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)

[Hard]
00:07:807 (1,2) - how about making them fit vocal (lyrics) like in here: 00:04:824 (1,2,3), or 00:10:438 (1,2) - here.
00:11:316 (3,4) - move 4 to the right so that they don't touch? I know it's supposed to be distance snapped, but it doesn't look good imo..
00:18:859 (2,3) - ^ same
00:57:631 (1,2,3,4,5) - this sudden jump in distance is hard for hard players (nice wordplay, eh..). Try finding an easier pattern.
01:03:245 (3,4,5,6,1) - (nazi) make the pentagon better?
01:06:403 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - pretty confusing. too much overlapping going on..
01:33:070 (1,2) - these don't look very pleasant. Although I know they couldn't be blanketed very well, try adjusting their position so that it looks better.
Maybe like these?: 01:44:298 (1,2) -
01:51:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - pretty awkward ending. Try a diamond in the center.

[Normal]
00:13:421 (1,1) - The note is a bit far away for normal players (only one beat after a spinner)
00:24:824 (5) - (nazi) try x:258 y:246
00:56:930 - Add a note?

[Easy]
00:27:105 (2) // 00:38:333 (2) // 00:56:403 (1,3) // 00:59:210 (1) - Start a half beat later (start on the white tick). Right now it's pretty confusing for easy players. (refrain from putting sliderheads on red ticks on easy diff) Especially when there are no musical backgrounds to do that.
01:22:719 (1,1) - Too far after a spinner
01:34:473 (6) - Start half beat later, end on the white tick
*Easy diff is recommended to be mapped in 1/1 beat snap divisor


Well, that's it. :)
Hope this helps~
Good luck!!

EDIT: Hey, it's my 100th post lol 8-)
ZeroEightOne
240 posts
Joined August 2011
ZeroEightOne
Here is my mod :

[General]
(All diff) | Preview Point at 00:16:930 or 01:24:298
Not bad at all


[~Easy~]
Tickrate - 1
00:53:245 | Move the start of slider from (168,56) to (166,56)

[~Normal~]
Perfect!

[~Hard~]
HP change from 4 to 5 or higher

00:28:158 | Change the combo from pink to white
00:29:912 | ^ pink to blue or blue to pink
01:42:894 | ^

[~Insane~]
AR is so fast.

00:25:175 | Move the start of slider from (221,240) to (221,242)
01:28:684 | Move the combo 4 from (407,267) to (409,266)
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
Thanks everyone for modding.
I will update soon. Changed too much xD
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

0814587134 wrote:

Here is my mod :

[General]
(All diff) | Preview Point at 00:16:930 or 01:24:298 >> Fixed
Not bad at all


[~Easy~]
Tickrate - 1 I will think about it
00:53:245 | Move the start of slider from (168,56) to (166,56) Changed in another way

[~Normal~]
Perfect!

[~Hard~]
HP change from 4 to 5 or higher >> Fixed

00:28:158 | Change the combo from pink to white >> Fixed
00:29:912 | ^ pink to blue or blue to pink >> Fixed
01:42:894 | ^ >> Fixed

[~Insane~]
AR is so fast. BPM 171 with AR 9. I don't think that's problem.

00:25:175 | Move the start of slider from (221,240) to (221,242) >> Fixed
01:28:684 | Move the combo 4 from (407,267) to (409,266) >> Fixed
@broccoly and pomuta: Since i've changed too much from your mod so for now, i can't remember what i have done with my map, so can't tell you where to fix. Anyway, thanks for mod again :D

Updated~
Ayesha Altugle
3,052 posts
Joined October 2011
Ayesha Altugle

Yuki-kun wrote:

0814587134 wrote:

Here is my mod :
Tickrate - 1 I will think about it
DON'T CHANGE IT, ITS THE BEST!

[Normal]
Tick rate 2 please

that's all
EDIT: 60th post
Shana Aisaka
467 posts
Joined November 2010
Shana Aisaka
Hi hi ~~ Here is my mod ~~ >w<!

Red - Must Fix!
Black - Suggestion

[General]
Letterbox during breaks tick?
Kiai time no snap? http://puu.sh/2sw1C

[~Easy~]
00:16:930(1) - I don't think this should work... It might be too hard for beginner to play. Can you make the spinner end in 00:16:228 ? If you don't wanna change it then u must put your notes in the center after the spinner.

[~Normal~]
01:00:263(1) - remove NC
01:32:017(1) - ^
01:32:368(2) - NC here

[~Insane~]
00:38:333(3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - hmm ... I don't know about this.. http://puu.sh/2sw3O but well it looks fine i guess..


I guess this is all i got =w='' Go for ranked Yuki-kun ! >w<! Recheck are always welcome
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
:(

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi hi ~~ Here is my mod ~~ >w<!

Red - Must Fix!
Black - Suggestion

[General]
Letterbox during breaks tick?
Kiai time no snap? http://puu.sh/2sw1C Actually, i can't see any unsnapped timing, because when i check it, all timing is still snap.

[~Easy~]
00:16:930(1) - I don't think this should work... It might be too hard for beginner to play. Can you make the spinner end in 00:16:228 ? If you don't wanna change it then u must put your notes in the center after the spinner. I will think about it. Actually, newbie always spin very far from center of spin, so i think put the slider at that position will be better than in the centre. But i will notice this.

[~Normal~]
01:00:263(1) - remove NC >> Nope. Too long combo in normal is not recommend after all
01:32:017(1) - ^ >> >> Fixed
01:32:368(2) - NC here >> >> Fixed

[~Insane~]
00:38:333(3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - hmm ... I don't know about this.. http://puu.sh/2sw3O but well it looks fine i guess.. >> >> For now, i changed it a little bit, but i will find a better way for this stream


I guess this is all i got =w='' Go for ranked Yuki-kun ! >w<! Recheck are always welcome
Thanks a lot, my dear~ :3
@vahn10: sr but tick rate 1 in normal map is better than with me. :3
Hard
696 posts
Joined February 2013
Hard
Yeah... I tried to mod it, but i think i'm not very good with this, good luck :)

Easy

00:16:579 Maybe a clapping sound would fit.

Next:

Normal

01:57:280 I wouldn't change the pattern and still use repeating sliders. It feels much better.

Hard

01:06:754 I would swap the 3 and the 2. So that the 2 is on top. You look first to the top and then down. Otherwise it kinda destroys the flow.

01:13:245 The same. I would change 2 and 3.







I don't want to mod the Insane one, because i barely can play insane maps. It wouldn't be good I think.


Hope I could help somehow, i really like your map and the way you use those sliders. It isn't to easy and not to hard. All of them are fun to play. Hope it will get approved soon, yuki-kun :)
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

ChivaCookie wrote:

Yeah... I tried to mod it, but i think i'm not very good with this, good luck :)

Easy

00:16:579 Maybe a clapping sound would fit. >>Whistle instead of clap. Too loud for me

Next:

Normal

01:57:280 I wouldn't change the pattern and still use repeating sliders. It feels much better. For now, it's fine with me, but i will notice it.

Hard

01:06:754 I would swap the 3 and the 2. So that the 2 is on top. You look first to the top and then down. Otherwise it kinda destroys the flow. >> Fixed in another way. Swap it can destroy whole the pattern after that.

01:13:245 The same. I would change 2 and 3. Actually, the current flow is better than your idea, press 3-4 in same position and then suddenly change it can make you miss the next slider, so i've choose this to make player's hand must move non-stop to avoid that.







I don't want to mod the Insane one, because i barely can play insane maps. It wouldn't be good I think.


Hope I could help somehow, i really like your map and the way you use those sliders. It isn't to easy and not to hard. All of them are fun to play. Hope it will get approved soon, yuki-kun :)

Ok thanks for your modding~
Foxxer_old
Foxxer_old
Hello, I'm from Foxxer's Modding Queue :D

~Hard~

00:02:894 (1,2) - Its strange start the beatmap with 2 notes together. Change the circle position, if you want.
00:12:193 (4) - Approach this from previous slider.
00:31:140 (2) - I would remove this circle and change the position of the previous circle.
01:00:789 (5) - Isn't this very far?

Good luck! ~
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Foxxer wrote:

Hello, I'm from Foxxer's Modding Queue :D

~Hard~

00:02:894 (1,2) - Its strange start the beatmap with 2 notes together. Change the circle position, if you want. >> Fixed
00:12:193 (4) - Approach this from previous slider. Actually, i intended to avoid overlaps with 00:11:316 (3) -
00:31:140 (2) - I would remove this circle and change the position of the previous circle. Nope. Still fine for me
01:00:789 (5) - Isn't this very far? >> Fixed in other ways

Good luck! ~
Thanks for your mod~
Updated.
Arrival
1,418 posts
Joined June 2012
Arrival
Hi ! M4M please :) !

[General]
Nice map !

[Easy]
Why did you used 2 on slider tick rate ? I think it's too much : Your Slider velocity is only 0.6 !
00:57:807 (3,4) - Move these 2 one grid (level 3) to the left, so (4) is symmetrical with (2)
01:01:842 (3) - Why not put this circle on y=160 ?
01:14:123 (2) - Try to put the end of this slider : 01:14:123 (2) - on y = 176

[Normal]
00:03:947 (2) - This one on y=192
00:20:438 (5) - This one on y=262
00:56:052 (1) - Put it on y=130
00:59:737 (1) - Why NC here ????

[Hard]
00:39:210 (8) - Put it on x = 311
00:52:894 (5) - Put the reverse of the slider symmetrical to the start.
01:10:087 (4) - I see this circle stacked on the slider instead of (3)
01:28:859 (5) - This one should be on x=224 and y=32

[Insane]
I find AR too high for this type of map. Just a suggestion, i would do -1
00:30:789 (5) - Put it on x=321
00:44:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I find this a bit too much :(
00:50:614 (1,2,3) - What about make a "reverse selcetion" on these 3 circles ? The movement is more natural after this pattern: 00:49:912 (1,2,3,4) -
01:02:017 (2) - Isn't symmetrical with 01:01:491 (6) -
01:02:368 (4) - This ont on y=128
01:35:877 (3) - I didn't unserstand the sudden acceleration on this slider. The Music hasn't change a lot and the multiplier is on x1,5 !
01:51:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same thing as before (00:44 secs)
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Arrival wrote:

Hi ! M4M please :) !

[General]
Nice map !

[Easy]
Why did you used 2 on slider tick rate ? I think it's too much : Your Slider velocity is only 0.6 ! i used for hitsound effect.
00:57:807 (3,4) - Move these 2 one grid (level 3) to the left, so (4) is symmetrical with (2)
01:01:842 (3) - Why not put this circle on y=160 ?
01:14:123 (2) - Try to put the end of this slider : 01:14:123 (2) - on y = 176

[Normal]
00:03:947 (2) - This one on y=192
00:20:438 (5) - This one on y=262
00:56:052 (1) - Put it on y=130
00:59:737 (1) - Why NC here ????

[Hard]
00:39:210 (8) - Put it on x = 311
00:52:894 (5) - Put the reverse of the slider symmetrical to the start.
01:10:087 (4) - I see this circle stacked on the slider instead of (3)
01:28:859 (5) - This one should be on x=224 and y=32

[Insane]
I find AR too high for this type of map. Just a suggestion, i would do -1 [color=#FF0000i tried to play in AR 8 and totally out of rhythm.[/color]
00:30:789 (5) - Put it on x=321
00:44:298 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I find this a bit too much :( >> Changed pattern.
00:50:614 (1,2,3) - What about make a "reverse selcetion" on these 3 circles ? The movement is more natural after this pattern: 00:49:912 (1,2,3,4) -
01:02:017 (2) - Isn't symmetrical with 01:01:491 (6) -
01:02:368 (4) - This ont on y=128
01:35:877 (3) - I didn't unserstand the sudden acceleration on this slider. The Music hasn't change a lot and the multiplier is on x1,5 ! [b]>> Reduced since too many complain about this.[/b]
01:51:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Same thing as before (00:44 secs)>> Changed pattern.
Fixed another~
Thanks.
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
Hi there.

General
  1. Tags?
~Easy~
  • - 01:01:842 (3) - I'd prefer unstack this note for avoid the confusion for newbies players
    - 01:17:982 (1) - This slider looks hidden to play, my suggestion is to move this in another place
~Normal~
  • -- Slider tick rate 2 like the others difficulties?
    - 00:38:333 (4) - This slider is not perfectly stacked
~Hard~
  • - 00:05:877 (3) - I'd would replace this slider for a note because doesn't fit well with the music, the note should be start here 00:06:052
    - 00:31:140 (2) - Same thing with the music, delete this note
~Insane~
  • --AR: 9? doesn't fit very well playing, I'd suggest reduce one tick
A bit overmapped but it's ok, good luck :)
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hi there.

General
  1. Tags?
Dunno what i should tag xD

~Easy~
  • - 01:01:842 (3) - I'd prefer unstack this note for avoid the confusion for newbies players >> Fixed
    - 01:17:982 (1) - This slider looks hidden to play, my suggestion is to move this in another place >> Fixed
~Normal~
  • -- Slider tick rate 2 like the others difficulties? Nope. In easy map, i use for hitsound effect, since it's lack of hitsound
    - 00:38:333 (4) - This slider is not perfectly stacked >> Fixed
~Hard~
  • - 00:05:877 (3) - I'd would replace this slider for a note because doesn't fit well with the music, the note should be start here 00:06:052
    - 00:31:140 (2) - Same thing with the music, delete this note

    >> Nope. Vocal is better with me in these part.
~Insane~
  • --AR: 9? doesn't fit very well playing, I'd suggest reduce one tick >> LoL, too many complain so ok, reduced to AR8
A bit overmapped but it's ok, good luck :)
Thanks for your mod~ :D
Verlaren
Verlaren
Hai Yuki~
From aincrad's Modding queue~

General

Deselect letterbox during breaks, because you haven't a storyboard.

~Easy~

  1. 00:44:298(1) - too hard for beginners. Replace him single long slider
  2. 00:49:912(1) - ^
  3. 01:37:631(2) - ^
  4. 01:40:438(4) - ^
  5. 01:43:245(1) - ^
  6. 01:56:666(1) - ^
  7. 01:57:280(1) - ^
  8. 01:45:526(3,4) - In easy should not be stacking notes.

~Normal~

  1. 00:02:894(1,2) - unsnapped distance. And then check others patterns on snap distance.
    Use distance snap tool in Normal and Easy please.
  2. 00:50:965(2) - NC. New vocal part.
  3. 01:19:210(5) - this slider must be end on 01:19:561
  4. 01:19:210(5) - In easy should not be hidden notes.
  5. 01:21:140(4) - remove note.

~Hard~

  1. 00:13:070(5) - remake slider. This slider is not beauty.
  2. 01:19:737(5) - remove note.
  3. 01:21:140(5) - ^

~Insane~

  1. 00:17:849(6) - remove note. So this part will be much better.
  2. 00:21:666(4,1) - this jump is too big. Reduce him.
  3. 00:31:228(8) - ^^

background - kawaiiii~
Good luck~ ;)
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
Fixed almost everything, except easy diff, i will re-map it later :D
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
Finished Easy map.
Thanks wcx19911123 for suggestion :3
Louis Cyphre
2,684 posts
Joined October 2009
Louis Cyphre
[General]

- remove "OST" from source, it's not needed
- add to tags: Rayark Games Android
- do not use poor white color. I highly suggest to use something like this:
[img]http://puu.sh/2zXTu
[/img]
- title is correct, but there are some mistake with small/big letters. Use official title, which is "Light up my LOVE"
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cytus proof.
- Many Kiai sections are not snapped correctly (just open AiMOD and fix them all)

[Insane]

I noticed, you like to use jumps where they don't really fit the song... Please next time avoid placing jumps on places, where music doesn't feel jumpy.
Just for example: 00:07:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:20:965 (2,3) - 00:23:947 (5) - 00:33:070 (1,2,3,4,5) - etc. So, not going to point all out, just take an accent.

00:44:649 (3,4) - ctrl + g
00:50:087 (2,3) - ^
01:07:105 (4,1) - '4' overlaps sliders, look really weird, i suggest to change this pattern.
01:27:982 (2,3) - heavy jump, but for what? :/
01:35:526 - i can't get why did you put 1.25 x...
01:37:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i like your imagination, but i'd liked it much more, if such patterns would fit with song.
01:52:017 (3,4) - ctrl + g
01:57:631 (3,4) - ^

[Hard]

Would be awesome, if your increase spacing by 0,1x, but i know, that's hard to realize
01:33:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move this construction a bit down to avoid weird overlap here 01:35:702 (1) -


[Normal]

There are not issues here, but there are lot of stuff that i don't like.
For example this 00:51:491 (3,1) - type of rhythm. Maybe that fits, but it plays and feels really weird. Maybe you should try something like this instead http://puu.sh/2zYNW (00:50:965 (1) - ~ 00:53:771 (3) - )
And these 01:00:263 (1,2,3) - . yea, it is consistent, but... stacky. It would fit if it would be wider, i mean spacing.
Alsot these 01:26:052 (4,5,6) - . Squares, i decribe them as being green in mapping. Improvise!
At final this type of sliders - 01:40:438 (1) - , i highly suggest to skip using additional points in such short sliders. Just linear.
Anyways, this is my opinion.

[Easy]

00:16:930 (1) - too fast after spinner
(01:18:684 - 01:22:368) - http://puu.sh/2zZLz i highly suggest to use such rhythm pattern to avoid so many 1/2 and use only 1/1.
01:45:175 (3) - increase slider length by 1/2

Good luck ~
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
the custom hitsound is not fits the song"
try to back to the default one(soft clap)

and don't forgot silence the sliderslide on openning

nice work

nokds
Niko-nyan
1,990 posts
Joined June 2011
Niko-nyan
another Ani song o3o
same song with https://osu.ppy.sh/s/87594 o3o
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

tsuka wrote:

the custom hitsound is not fits the song"
try to back to the default one(soft clap)

and don't forgot silence the sliderslide on openning

nice work

nokds
Default soft clap is really weird with me ):

Frans Niko wrote:

another Ani song o3o
same song with https://osu.ppy.sh/s/87594 o3o
Should i steal the map style ? :3
J/k
Meru
1,615 posts
Joined March 2012
Meru
well the other song was right
according to this site http://vgmdb.net/album/32987 the artist should be "Ani" and the title should be "Light Up My Love!! (feat. Moco)"

just sayin :3
DexFrild
304 posts
Joined December 2010
DexFrild
Hi Yuki!

MOD
[General]

Cool map and song ^_^ Nice work


[~Insane~]

Fail Here


[~Hard~]

00:05:877 (3) - New Combo
00:08:859 (4) - New Combo
00:19:912 (3) - New Combo
00:22:894 (5) - New Combo
00:25:702 (5) - New Combo (here as you like)

Sorry for the little mod.(u_u) :( I hope it will be a little bit useful.

Good Luck ;)

m4m please :3
buhei
567 posts
Joined February 2012
buhei
hi Yuki-kun~ from my queue

[Easy]
01:33:947 (2) - put the tail onto 01:34:473

[Normal]
CS-1 because you're not wcx.
you can put more notes on the red line like 00:19:210 and 00:22:017 etc

[Hard]
OD+1
00:07:807 (1) - not good. copy 00:08:333 (3) and Ctrl+G Ctrl+H and move it here
00:29:912 (3,1,2,3) - hard to see
01:40:614 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:26:052 (6,1) - really hard to know when to click (1)

[Insane]
00:05:877 (1) - move it farther from (6)
00:07:807 (1,2,3,4,5) - where is your jiecao
00:23:947 (5) - tails don't snap
00:29:035 (3) - put it onto (4)'s head
00:44:649 (3,4) - Ctrl+G
00:50:087 (2,3) - Ctrl+G
00:56:579 (2,4) - they don't snap
01:26:403 (1,2,3,4,5) - they don't look good
01:46:228 (6,7,8) - Ctrl+G
01:52:017 (3,4) - Ctrl+G
01:57:631 (3,4) - Ctrl+G

Good songww GL and i'm waiting for your mod
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
Fix some and re-edit some part.
Thanks for modding
@DexFrild: Inbox me if you want to make a M4M
@buhei: Modded yours~ :3
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
Added Taiko diff by 0gre
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
sorry that i haven't gotten to your map yet. i will mod it as soon as possible.
Niko-nyan
1,990 posts
Joined June 2011
Niko-nyan
since irc mod o3o
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun

Frans Niko wrote:

since irc mod o3o
Log
16:08 Frans Niko: let see
16:08 Yuki-kun: yes?
16:08 *Frans Niko is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/241297 Ani - Light Up My Love (feat. Moco)]
16:09 Frans Niko: another map maybe you can steal the title or bg (lol)
16:09 Yuki-kun: i have title base on Wiki and music database
16:09 Yuki-kun: xD
16:09 Yuki-kun: but i'm very confuse about artist
16:10 Yuki-kun: in database, they said Ani ft moco is singer
16:10 Frans Niko: did you forget about Letterbox during breaks?
16:10 Yuki-kun: huh?
16:10 Yuki-kun: ah yes
16:10 Yuki-kun: totally forgot it
16:11 Frans Niko: lets do from insane
16:12 Frans Niko: 00:15:526 - spinner end here and then add circles until kiai time start
16:13 Frans Niko: 00:17:894 - looks unsnapped
16:14 Yuki-kun: spinner is still good imo, i don't want follow bass here, and ok, fixed unsnap error
16:15 Frans Niko: 01:52:193 - move to the left (1 grid)
16:15 Frans Niko: 01:57:807 - ^
16:15 Yuki-kun: ok fixed
16:16 Frans Niko: for ~Hard~ now
16:17 Frans Niko: 01:02:544 - maybe make the SV lower ?
16:17 Frans Niko: and the sound lower
16:17 Yuki-kun: wait wait?
16:17 Yuki-kun: SV?
16:18 Yuki-kun: slider velocity?
16:18 Frans Niko: yup
16:18 Frans Niko: ya
16:18 Yuki-kun: you mean i should reduce speed that part?
16:18 Frans Niko: yup because its slow part
16:18 Yuki-kun: hmm
16:19 Yuki-kun: for now, it's ok with me, but i will consider about it, because current SV 1.4 slow enough for me
16:19 Yuki-kun: i will give it a try after your mod
16:21 Frans Niko: and for taiko diff please tell 0gre to don't use soft hitsound
16:21 Yuki-kun: ok i will tell him
16:22 Frans Niko: and maybe you can see Mako's Light Up My Love too
16:22 Yuki-kun: i watched it
16:22 Yuki-kun: (and stole some part)
16:22 Yuki-kun: :P
16:24 Frans Niko: so i post it?
16:24 Yuki-kun: of course, if you don't want to mod normal and easy :p

Log and give you KDS.

Jacob wrote:

sorry that i haven't gotten to your map yet. i will mod it as soon as possible.
Thanks. I'm looking for it :D
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
hello! m4m from my queue.

[General]
- why do the difficulty names have "~" before and after the actual name? a better idea would be to remove them due to it not making much sense. however, i think it would be cool to have the difficulty names match the title, such as "Easy!!", "Normal!!", "Hard!!", etc.
- add "taiko" (since there are taiko difficulties) and "iOS" (the game is released for iOS as well) into the tags.
- the Muzukashii difficulty is missing the "0gre" tag.
- the offset is inconsistent on both taiko difficulties; it should be 2895.
- if you would like, i could make the title text appear during the first break. it's a cool effect in my opinion since it's just after the most important part in the song (the chorus).
- the clap that you're using for this map is a bit too loud and lasts too long in my opinion. you should use this file as your clap and custom slidertick since it is much shorter and matches the music.
- please map out the last break. it feels awkward to have the map end with a break..

[~Easy~]
- please use tick rate 2 for this difficulty. it fits much better than tick rate 1.
00:13:596 (1,1) - there's not enough time between the spinner and the slider for a newer player to recover from the spinner. remember, this is an easy difficulty. a way to fix this would be to end the spinner at 00:16:930 and place the next circle at 00:17:631 (1) to give the player a bit more time to recover.
00:44:298 (1) - you should remove this slider and keep the break going for the entire duration of time. this is rather awkward to play and this isn't how breaks should be used.
01:22:719 (1,1) - once again, there's not enough time between the spinner and slider for a newer player. try doing the same thing i suggested previously to fix this.
01:51:666 (1) - same thing i suggested previously; remove this. also, please do this for the other difficulties as well for consistency.

[~Normal~]
- again, please use tick rate 2 for this difficulty. fits a lot better.
00:10:438 (1,2) - these are slightly out of line. align them
00:51:491 (1) - this slider shape is very odd and doesn't look good at all. i would just make it the same shape as 00:52:894 (2).
01:34:473 (1,2) - make the end of this slider and the circle more audible. i can't hear it at all.
01:45:702 (3) - same as above.

[~Hard~]
- +1 HP drain or OD. 5 for both is a bit too low for a hard difficulty.
00:27:280 (3,4,5,6) - make more audible
00:28:509 (2) - a slider that repeats twice is kind of boring here. i'm sure you could easily remap this with something more interesting and fun to play.
00:38:509 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - make more audible.
01:34:649 (4,5,6) - same as above
01:45:877 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - same as above

that's all i have. in my opinion, this map needs a bit more work to have it be ranked. currently, it's lacking in the fun-to-play factor and is overall a bit sub-par. however, you're making good progress. starred for now.
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Sagisawa-Yukari



[General]
Red: Must fix
Blue: Suggestion only

[~Easy~]
00:30:965 (5) - this circle now at x:368 y:191,and 00:30:263 (3) - at x:256 y:192.move it down a little at x:368 y:192.


[~Normal~]
00:10:614 (2) - move at x:464 y:139
00:12:719 (4) - I think you'll move to 00:12:544 -
00:30:263 (5,6) - change silder?
01:00:614 (2) - the same as 00:59:737 (1) - ?


[~Hard~]
Fine


[~Insane~]
00:27:280 - Volume 60%? Not 35%
00:27:280 - 1 grid right?
01:07:280 (5) - move to x:192 y:296?
01:22:017 (3) - stretched 1/2 length
01:22:368 (4,5) - move 1/2 tick later
01:22:719 (1) - this spinner start at 01:22:807 -
01:22:719 (1) - Default clap?
01:34:649 - Volume 60%? Not 35%
01:37:807 (3) - overlapped like 01:37:456 (1,5) - ?
01:45:877 - Volume 60%



nice song~good luck
Banana
794 posts
Joined October 2010
Banana
Hi~ Banana here for m4m

[General]
soft-slidertick3.wav is differ from soft-hitclap2 in volume (you can hear slidertick a bit louder in easy, and in cool edit you can see it clearer), plz check this over
The way you place break different between easy/normal and hard/insane, that is ok to me, though, imo, the last two breaks in hard/insane can be removed, for it's a bit boring to wait the last several notes come for advanced players.
Pattern arranging seems need some more work, compared with the other part of the map. I will try to give some suggestion on it.

[~Insane]
00:21:842 (1,2,3,4) - these notes are reaching the top, which is strange when the left below of the playfield is empty, consider balance them
00:21:842 (1,2,3,4) - x:197 y:150 to avoid overlapping?
00:27:280 (1,2,3) - create a jump before these three notes to keep it consist, by the way, you may also polish up the fan pattern with rotate (copy and ctrl+alt+r)
00:31:140 (7) - stack with 00:33:070 (1) - to create a jump
00:35:351 (4,5,6) - stack for the consistency with 00:33:947 (6,7,1), just like 00:31:140 (7,8,1) and 00:32:544 (4,5,6)
00:54:824 (5) - try to avoid the overlap, it is possible to keep the distance snap at the same time. like this
00:55:526 (7,8,9) - i assumed here to have some jumps, it plays well in this section, connecting the two same parts with higher pitch.
00:57:807 (2,3) - overlap can be avoid if it curves not that much
00:59:386 (1) - suggestion on pattern like this, end the slider at 01:00:263 (3)'s head
01:21:491 (1) - this jump is hard to read, at the same time, plays not good for you follow the vocal in most parts
01:35:877 (3) - sv change is strange in playing, to balance it, use some more jumps in the previous section or make the 1.25* part even more harder, both need some work, though

[~Hard~]
00:02:894 (1) - move and re-arrange this combo, they are reaching the top. besides, the section before the first spinner is higher than average
00:34:649 (1) - use this as the first jump shown up in 1/2 is a bit hard, consider add jumps before here
00:38:859 (5,6,7,8) - keep the consistency with the next kiai, at there, here is no jump
01:26:228 (2,3,4) - "every" in vocal is between the sliders, which is strange, start the sliders on white ticks?

[~Normal~]
Circle Size 3? more friendly to newbies
00:51:491 - S:C3 green point volume->65 or 60 this section, slider point hitsound are relatively louder now
01:19:561 - this two clap hears not that good, remove the white tick one? same issue with 01:21:140
01:46:228 - this 35% vol. green line makes the 3/2 slider hard to recognize, reduce is ok, but 35 is too much

[~Easy~]
nothing but general issue, close grid snap to check the small differences such as 01:26:403 (1)

good luck
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
LoL I'm on my way to fix from Jacob mod, include hitsound volume xD
Anw, thanks for modding :D
0gre_old
367 posts
Joined January 2013
0gre_old

Jacob wrote:

hello! m4m from my queue.

[General]
- why do the difficulty names have "~" before and after the actual name? a better idea would be to remove them due to it not making much sense. however, i think it would be cool to have the difficulty names match the title, such as "Easy!!", "Normal!!", "Hard!!", etc.
- add "taiko" (since there are taiko difficulties) and "iOS" (the game is released for iOS as well) into the tags.
- the Muzukashii difficulty is missing the "0gre" tag.
- the offset is inconsistent on both taiko difficulties; it should be 2895.
- if you would like, i could make the title text appear during the first break. it's a cool effect in my opinion since it's just after the most important part in the song (the chorus).
- the clap that you're using for this map is a bit too loud and lasts too long in my opinion. you should use this file as your clap and custom slidertick since it is much shorter and matches the music.
- please map out the last break. it feels awkward to have the map end with a break..


that's all i have. in my opinion, this map needs a bit more work to have it be ranked. currently, it's lacking in the fun-to-play factor and is overall a bit sub-par. however, you're making good progress. starred for now.
Most of them is been fixed by Yuki-kun thx ><!

and I have updated by myself as well ~
I will be finding few mods on my map sooner !

http://puu.sh/2K6F9.zip

Im sorry some of tags or some extra is may not fixed properly with some errors
please have a check ;;

forgot fix offset at muzu ↓ this would be the latest for both diff

http://puu.sh/2K7q2.zip
Satilast
59 posts
Joined December 2011
Satilast
I don't forgive myself if I don't mod on this song :D ^.^

Red = Fixes
Blue = Suggestions
Green = Comments

General
Fine. Sweet hitsounds and BG~

~Easy~
00:03:947 (2,3) - first circle at x:264, y:120; second circle at x:336, y:144, because it will be better combined with the tilt slider.
296,272,55877,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,120,56579,6,0,P|256:104|176:120,2,160,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,216,58684,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,200,59386,2,0,P|198:233|320:322,1,320,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,61491,2,0,L|432:136,1,80,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
- IMHO, so it will look better :) and...
360,216,97631,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,296,97982,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,336,98333,6,0,P|211:351|131:335,2,160,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

~Normal~
01:36:579 (2) - flip it horizontal as well as the first slider, so http://puu.sh/2Kza7.JPG
01:52:544 - may be add a circle

~Hard~
00:35:877 (1) - NC
00:49:912 (1,2,3,1) - you can make the alternation of circles. Example: http://puu.sh/2KzvF.JPG
00:50:965 (2) - circle located too close to the slider. Away this a bit: http://puu.sh/2KzxH.JPG

~Insane~
Very nice!~
01:22:544 (5) - may be make a small jump? x:280 y:272
00:28:158 (1) - NC and - 00:28:333 (2) - delete NC

0gre's Muzu
00:52:543 (1,1) - K D
00:58:332 (1) - D
01:44:648 (2) - K
_____________________
I hope that you rank it :)
Good luck ;)
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
Done all~
Thanks everyone for modding.
Hard to say where i fixed because changed to much. xD
0gre_old
367 posts
Joined January 2013
0gre_old

Satilast wrote:

I don't forgive myself if I don't mod on this song :D ^.^

Red = Fixes
Blue = Suggestions
Green = Comments

General
Fine. Sweet hitsounds and BG~

0gre's Muzu
00:52:543 (1,1) - K D
00:58:332 (1) - D
01:44:648 (2) - K
_____________________
I hope that you rank it :)
Good luck ;)
I dont think want change any for now but thx in advice :)
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
hey yuki, here my little irc mod! i didn't save the other, but i hope this is enough
i really think you improved alot, and this map is fun!

SPOILER
17:27 Yuki-kun: haii~
17:28 Yuki-kun: ;D
17:28 Irreversible: hiii
17:28 Yuki-kun: thanks for your suggestion
17:28 Irreversible: what suggestion?
17:28 Irreversible: xD
17:28 Yuki-kun: LoL 
17:28 Yuki-kun: xD
17:28 Irreversible: XDD
17:28 *Yuki-kun is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/231244 Ani feat. Moco - Light Up My Love!!]
17:28 Yuki-kun: you told me make it more fun
17:28 Yuki-kun: xD
17:28 Irreversible: ohh wit hte jumps right?
17:28 Irreversible: i wanna see
17:29 Yuki-kun: well, not sure if it's good
17:29 Yuki-kun: also i added
17:29 Yuki-kun: sb/skin
17:29 Yuki-kun: :D
17:29 Irreversible: ok i redownload
17:33 Irreversible: eh
17:33 Irreversible: i have some number suggestions
17:33 Irreversible: but
17:33 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/2PjHP.jpg look what happened
17:33 Irreversible: where the numbers are
17:33 Irreversible: oO
17:33 Yuki-kun: @@
17:33 Irreversible: ohh it's because of this hitcircle.png
17:33 Irreversible: well i really recommend some other numbers
17:34 Yuki-kun: i think i added custom number @@
17:34 Irreversible: yeah
17:34 Irreversible: i changed it
17:34 Yuki-kun: look at my skin
17:34 Irreversible: because i didn't like them
17:34 Irreversible: it's hard to read
17:34 Yuki-kun: LoL
17:34 Yuki-kun: xD
17:34 Irreversible: so i wanted to look for other ones
17:34 Irreversible: *O3
17:34 Irreversible: because 
17:34 Yuki-kun: ok ignore about skin
17:34 Irreversible: i think this 
17:34 Irreversible: uhm
17:34 Irreversible: modern thing
17:34 Irreversible: doesn't fit the song
17:34 Irreversible: it's more nightcore thing
17:34 Yuki-kun: :P
17:34 Irreversible: you can take my skin if you want
17:34 Irreversible: from dreamin
17:35 Irreversible: many people said OMG FIRST TIME A SKIN IS GOOD 
17:35 Yuki-kun: i have that already
17:35 Irreversible: :d
17:35 Yuki-kun: those number collected from some touhou skin xD
17:35 Irreversible: lol xD
17:35 Irreversible: i really like my numbers
17:35 Yuki-kun: yeah
17:35 Yuki-kun: i used it too
17:35 Yuki-kun: for a long time
17:35 Yuki-kun: but now i used
17:35 Yuki-kun: osu! stream skin
17:35 Yuki-kun: :D
17:38 Irreversible: ohh :O
17:38 Irreversible: well its really better now
17:38 Irreversible: good job <3
17:38 Yuki-kun: <3
17:39 Yuki-kun: thanks 
17:39 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/2PjRy.jpg
17:39 Irreversible: i stole some idea from you
17:39 Irreversible: :DD
17:39 Irreversible:  xDD
17:39 Yuki-kun: hehe
17:40 Yuki-kun: then you are a thief 
17:40 Yuki-kun: wahahaa
17:40 Yuki-kun: :P
17:48 Irreversible: i love to mod irc
17:48 Irreversible: ._.
17:49 Irreversible: forummods are so annoying
17:49 Irreversible: xD
17:49 Irreversible: i savelogegd our last conversation
17:49 Yuki-kun: go ahead
17:49 Yuki-kun: xD
17:49 Irreversible: yay <3


take this star :D
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
Thanks Irr-chan~ :3
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka
Hello Yuki-kun~ here's my GD you've been waiting for: Kirino's Hard!!
I hope you like it~ =w=
Yuki-kun
568 posts
Joined December 2010
Topic Starter
Yuki-kun
Updated~ <3
0gre_old
367 posts
Joined January 2013
0gre_old
ummm I tryed move the bg down and changed few notes at Oni ~

http://puu.sh/2PTNT.zip
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