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Kicco - Lucky Monster [Taiko]

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年8月20日 at 22:30:32

Artist: Kicco
Title: Lucky Monster
Source: 恋想リレーション
Tags: eroge Lump of Sugar ななろば華 Nanarobahana 萌木原ふみたけ Moekibara Fumitake Rensou Relation 水野大輔 Mizuno Daisuke
BPM: 160
Filesize: 25918kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.21 stars, 256 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.84 stars, 138 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (3.01 stars, 410 notes)
  4. Oni (4.21 stars, 590 notes)
Download: Kicco - Lucky Monster
Download: Kicco - Lucky Monster (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Big thanks tasuke912!!!epic video and advice
http://puu.sh/iN2jG/cd29566c14.zip(mania Another+)
その想像、叶います。選択肢が多すぎるわ!


ノムリッシュ
「大丈夫、ファイナルエデンには受かってる…馬鹿な……」

心配そう・・・、それはに訊ねる涼に、
“本物”を経験したことのある俺、桜坂慎之助は前向きな女神の神託を返した。

入学審判の合格発表が真っ盛り。
本命は残念な結果に終焉を迎えてしまったが、
それほど気を落としてはいなかった。
心の友と時代の刹那に踊らされるてしまうのは進化の過程と歓迎するが、
貮度と会えなくなってしまうわけじゃない。
其なるものよりも、A Realm Reborn出会いにプレギエーラしよう程度のものではないか。
物語の始まる季節といえばスキ=トゥキ=メキィ・ト=キスの季節!
俺にも死してなお、超絶想像を絶する魔力を有するジラートの幻影との邂逅の日が、
待っているはずなんだ、多分な。
と、ジョブアビリティの闇を切り裂くポジ・ティヴ=エスタシオン<プログラム>全開の“本物”を経験したことのある俺でヴァッた。

されども魔力が付けば、全ての合格大天使神勅が終焉を迎えても、
俺の手元に登第<ペルセウェーランティア>通知が無いと囁く超ビックリな事態。
あれその疑問が、私の心を掴んで離さないのだ・・・ これ…馬鹿な…………

「如何奏でるオプティマなの、お兄ちゃん?」

心配いかにもに訊ねてくる従妹の由羽子。
地母神ま、待て。あ、あああ、慌てるヒツ=ヨーウを一撃で倒した戦士は闇の中…んだ。
「人の心のキングダムハーツ」を心に光《きぼう》を感じろて考えれば、帝国の威信にかけて果ては見えてくる……
と、ゲン・ズィツ、とせせら笑うゆえ逃避しエンカウントしていた死に場所を求めて彷徨う俺に、
隊長の先生…その背後にある“闇”から電話がエンカウントしてくる。

「お前、天海高等魔導院の面接を享受して黄泉の泉へ誘え」

天海学院。
それは俺の住んでいる白葉町に新しい夜明け赦された、
ものすごくキョウソウ率の平面の速さなど問題ですらない人気の学校であった。
当然、超越者の学力じゃ合格は人類には不可能とされている。
だがどうやら、パルティクラーリスに設けられて在る…………かつてはそう幻想〈おも〉っていた…………地元黒耀門エルンゲロイデ推薦枠が、
…終焉の始まりは誰にも気付かれることなく穏やかに、そして突然1神に定められし“力”の限界空いたという話だ。

降って湧いた………と預言書にも記されているような幸運、
そのエクストリームエッジで剣をおさめている…(──だが、こいつは──!)のは一体どんな出来事か…? ご理解はいただけないようですな……
開かれたインフィニティアのイマジネーションは
もう収束することを知ら闇の中…!

あああああああああああああああああああああああああああああああ!!!!!!!!!!!(ブリブリブリブリュリュリュリュリュリュ!!!!!!ブツチチブブブチチチチブリリィリブブブブゥゥゥゥッッッ!!!!!!!)
tasuke912
YO
おすすめ→ t/163327
[ General]
  1. SV変化の緑線(x0.70~x0.90)は不要なのでKantan~Muzukashiiで全て削除。(KantanのみSlider Velocity 1.2だとgood)
  2. 00:00:572 -, 01:15:572 -, は変化が無いので削除。
  3. SEvolが小さすぎるので70~80%程度を推奨。太鼓の音ははっきり聞こえるくらい大きくてもOK
  4. TagsにRensou Relations Nanarobahanaを追加
  5. KantanのHP2.0だとほとんど叩かなくてもノルマのるのでKantan~MuzukashiiのOD、HPをそれぞれ+1.0
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:06:572 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - 全体を通してみるとKantan内ではかなり難易度の高い部類に入るので大幅に難易度を落とした方が良さそう。Kantanではメロディーを多少無視してリズムの取りやすい1/1にしてもOK
  2. 00:15:572 ~ 00:39:478Aメロも裏拍取った配置にすると前奏と被るから差別化するために表拍中心の構成することを推奨。例
  3. 00:48:572 (76,77,78,79,80,81) - この音の取捨選択だと初心者がリズムを理解するのにはかなり厳しい印象。Kantanでは満足できる音取りがほぼできないので音を拾わずにスピナーを置くとかもアリ。例
  4. 00:51:572 Aメロ同様表拍中心の配置の方が良い印象。
  5. 01:12:572 (1) - スピナーの終点を01:14:072に変更。Vocalに完全に合わせるよりは1拍目、3拍目にあわせることを重視した方が初心者にはわかりやすいリズムになるはず。
  6. 01:15:572 ここからも上と同じく表拍中心の譜面にすることを推奨。ここからの譜面はFutsuu相当だからこのままだとDQの可能性かなり高め
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:09:572 (29) - Spinnerに変更。太鼓のスライダーは16分音符を等間隔で叩かないといけないためFutsuuプレイヤーにはかなりHard。
  2. 00:06:947 (20) - Delete. この後Big3連打があるため休憩を。
  3. 00:23:447 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74) - Futsuuの割にパターンの変化が多すぎる印象。1/2自体Futsuuの中では割と難しい部類なので、削ることを推奨。(73,74)は1/2の休憩を入れるために削除。
  4. 00:40:134 (114,117) - 1/2後ろに移動。ボーカルよりはキックに合わせた方が個人的に曲に合うと感じたのと、前のパートまで難しめの配置が続いていたため2/1のスペースを作りたいという理由。
  5. 00:51:384 (144) - Delete, 00:51:572 (145) - Finish. パートごとの区切りをはっきりさせるため。(Finishは前の部分で多いから無くても良いかも)
  6. 01:00:947 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - Kiaiでここの前までは4つ打ちもをフォローしているから一貫させた配置にした方がgood
  7. 01:12:572 (1) - Kantanと同じ
  8. 01:17:259 (10,11,12,13,14,15) -, 01:20:259 (22,23,24,25,26,27) -, 6連打は難しすぎる印象。それぞれ5打目を削除するのが無難?
(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
Topic Starter
shionelove

tasuke912 wrote:

YO
おすすめ→ t/163327
一応存在自体は知ってたからそれ参考にmappingしてみた(つもり)
[ General]
  1. SV変化の緑線(x0.70~x0.90)は不要なのでKantan~Muzukashiiで全て削除。(KantanのみSlider Velocity 1.2だとgood)
    まじ?SV1って結構はやいけどいいのか了解
  2. 00:00:572 -, 01:15:572 -, は変化が無いので削除。
    OK
  3. SEvolが小さすぎるので70~80%程度を推奨。太鼓の音ははっきり聞こえるくらい大きくてもOK

    了解
  4. TagsにRensou Relations Nanarobahanaを追加
    Relationは単数にした(公式にもないからタイトルの音を尊重)あと原画がもう一人いたのでかわいそうだから追加した
  5. KantanのHP2.0だとほとんど叩かなくてもノルマのるのでKantan~MuzukashiiのOD、HPをそれぞれ+1.0
    OD5は難しいにとっては高いと思うので難しいのみHPだけ変更
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:06:572 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - 全体を通してみるとKantan内ではかなり難易度の高い部類に入るので大幅に難易度を落とした方が良さそう。Kantanではメロディーを多少無視してリズムの取りやすい1/1にしてもOK
    どうしてもここの大音符が置きたいっていうのと、1/1のパターンでその前後には空白を空けて、且つ曲の変わり目(いわゆるブレイク)にもあった難易度起伏で、曲のリズムにも合わせた最善手だと思ってるのでノーチェンジ、もし変えると前のパターンよりスカスカになってしまっていくら簡単と言っても不自然
    誰かプロがよりいい手をくれたら変える
  2. 00:15:572 ~ 00:39:478Aメロも裏拍取った配置にすると前奏と被るから差別化するために表拍中心の構成することを推奨。例

    歌詞の区切れにも合っていてTTMYI
  3. 00:48:572 (76,77,78,79,80,81) - この音の取捨選択だと初心者がリズムを理解するのにはかなり厳しい印象。Kantanでは満足できる音取りがほぼできないので音を拾わずにスピナーを置くとかもアリ。例

    歯抜けのさせかた今思うとmaniaの音取りでかすだったから変更 ただしスピナーは表拍に置いた
  4. 00:51:572 Aメロ同様表拍中心の配置の方が良い印象。はい
  5. 01:12:572 (1) - スピナーの終点を01:14:072に変更。Vocalに完全に合わせるよりは1拍目、3拍目にあわせることを重視した方が初心者にはわかりやすいリズムになるはず。
    どうせスピナーなんてみんな連打しかしないからリズムもくそもないと思う、それよりは放置したときに終わるタイミングを意識させたい
  6. 01:15:572 ここからも上と同じく表拍中心の譜面にすることを推奨。ここからの譜面はFutsuu相当だからこのままだとDQの可能性かなり高め
    多分普通相当にしてる部分が最後の5連と繋ぎの三連だけで、どのdiffも一貫してここを難しくしようと作ってるから、そこだけ直す 裏拍はどうしても曲に合わせたいのがあるので変えたくない変えさせられるくらいなら墓行かせる
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:09:572 (29) - Spinnerに変更。太鼓のスライダーは16分音符を等間隔で叩かないといけないためFutsuuプレイヤーにはかなりHard。
    OK
  2. 00:06:947 (20) - Delete. この後Big3連打があるため休憩を。
    個人的な経験だと、休憩のあとに発狂がくるより、発狂の前もそこそこ難しいほうが意外とできたりするってのがあるから変更なし
    ランニングマシンで徐々に速くなるのといきなり速くなるのではびっくりするってのも適応するってのも違いがありすぎる
  3. 00:23:447 (60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74) - Futsuuの割にパターンの変化が多すぎる印象。1/2自体Futsuuの中では割と難しい部類なので、削ることを推奨。(73,74)は1/2の休憩を入れるために削除。
    いくつか削除したり、ddd、kkkの認識易なパターンに変更
  4. 00:40:134 (114,117) - 1/2後ろに移動。ボーカルよりはキックに合わせた方が個人的に曲に合うと感じたのと、前のパートまで難しめの配置が続いていたため2/1のスペースを作りたいという理由。実はキックが2連で入っているってのがある、最初の音歯抜けさせるのもあれかなと
  5. 00:51:384 (144) - Delete, 00:51:572 (145) - Finish. パートごとの区切りをはっきりさせるため。(Finishは前の部分で多いから無くても良いかも)
    okok
  6. 01:00:947 (176,177,178,179,180,181,182) - Kiaiでここの前までは4つ打ちもをフォローしているから一貫させた配置にした方がgood
    どうしても最後の4連のために裏拍中心のリズムにしたい(しないと変に歯抜けが出てくる)し、8小節の結びの部分なので、少し変化を加えたい
  7. 01:12:572 (1) - Kantanと同じ 同じ
  8. 01:17:259 (10,11,12,13,14,15) -, 01:20:259 (22,23,24,25,26,27) -, 6連打は難しすぎる印象。それぞれ5打目を削除するのが無難?
    3打目を削除して、ドラムスでも馴染みのある叩きやすいリズムにした
(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧
moddingありがとう><
Deep Sea
がんばって shionelove (-‿‿-)
SKSalt
こんにチワワ :)

[Kantan]
  1. change SV to 1.2 - 譜面の密度が過疎なKantanではSVを下げて譜面のまとまり感を出しましょう。そうすることによって見栄えが良くなると思います。またSVを下げるとスライダーの長さが変わるのでもし変えるなら再調節しましょう。
  2. 1/2以上のリズム(赤線上)に置かれているノートがたくさんありますね。Kantanでは1/2以上のリズムを使うことは推奨されていないです。どうしてもここはこうする事しか出来ない!というところ以外は基本的にbeat snapを1/1にして再構成しましょう。もう少し使う場所を絞れるはずです。ちなみに具体例を挙げると
    1. 00:08:634 - move to 00:08:447
    2. 00:09:009 - move to 00:09:197
    3. 00:43:134 - move to 00:42:947
    4. 01:16:884 - move to 01:17:072
    5. 01:32:634 - move to 01:32:447
    6. 01:33:009 - move to 01:33:197
    等々。他にも改善できる箇所があると思うので自分で探してみてください。
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:23:822 ~ 00:24:197 - もしボーカルの音程で音を取るなら色を反転させた方がいいでしょう。基本的にdは低い音、kは高い音を取るのに使われます。ここは変更したほうが前後の配置とマッチングして良くなると思います。
  2. 00:39:009 - change to k, ここはギターの音程的にkに変えたほうがいいと思いました。あるいはこの3連をddkにしてもいいと思います。とりあえずxxyみたいな配置にすればOKかと。
  3. 01:18:009 - remove, ボーカル音がないのでここは削除したほうがいいかと。
  4. 01:18:759 - add to note(d or k),ここはボーカル音があるのでノートを追加したほうがいいかと。
  5. 01:15:384 - move to 01:15:759 - これもボーカル音の位置関係上変更推奨。
[Muzukashii]
  1. 1/2が連続しすぎている箇所が何箇所かありました。休符を設けて短くしましょう。以下、長すぎると思ったところ
    1. 00:02:259 ~ 00:04:134
    2. 00:36:947 ~ 00:39:572
    3. 00:51:947 ~ 00:57:572
[Oni]
pp farm譜面だぁああああwwwww
  1. 00:53:822 ~ 00:54:009 - ボーカル音がフラットなので単色に統一したほうがいいと思います。自分ならdddにしますね。
  2. 00:54:197 ~ 00:54:384 - ^ 自分ならkkkにします。
  3. 01:05:822 ~ 01:06:009 - ^ ddd
  4. 01:06:197 ~ 01:06:384 - ^ kkk
台湾のとある人に殺される予感がしたのでこの辺にしておきます。Good luck :oops:
Topic Starter
shionelove

SKSalt wrote:

こんにチワワ :)

[Kantan]
  1. change SV to 1.2 - 譜面の密度が過疎なKantanではSVを下げて譜面のまとまり感を出しましょう。そうすることによって見栄えが良くなると思います。またSVを下げるとスライダーの長さが変わるのでもし変えるなら再調節しましょう。二人目の意見ということでその通りにします
  2. 1/2以上のリズム(赤線上)に置かれているノートがたくさんありますね。Kantanでは1/2以上のリズムを使うことは推奨されていないです。どうしてもここはこうする事しか出来ない!というところ以外は基本的にbeat snapを1/1にして再構成しましょう。もう少し使う場所を絞れるはずです。ちなみに具体例を挙げると
    1. 00:08:634 - move to 00:08:447
    2. 00:09:009 - move to 00:09:197
    3. 00:43:134 - move to 00:42:947
    4. 01:16:884 - move to 01:17:072
    5. 01:32:634 - move to 01:32:447
    6. 01:33:009 - move to 01:33:197
    等々。他にも改善できる箇所があると思うので自分で探してみてください。
ええと 1/2以上のリズムって言うのは赤線に置いてあるやつじゃなくて、1/2で見たときに2つ以上連続しておいてあるやつだよ(ここで挙げられてるものは全て裏拍という)
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:23:822 ~ 00:24:197 - もしボーカルの音程で音を取るなら色を反転させた方がいいでしょう。基本的にdは低い音、kは高い音を取るのに使われます。ここは変更したほうが前後の配置とマッチングして良くなると思います。結構単調だけど普通だからいいか
  2. 00:39:009 - change to k, ここはギターの音程的にkに変えたほうがいいと思いました。あるいはこの3連をddkにしてもいいと思います。とりあえずxxyみたいな配置にすればOKかと。ギターではなく電子音のほうをとっているのでキープ ここでは電子音のほうがギター(ベーズ気味)より優先度が高い
  3. 01:18:009 - remove, ボーカル音がないのでここは削除したほうがいいかと。せっかく前までのパートとは違うスネアのパターンだからそれを取りたいし、ボーカルも伸ばしているだけでないわけではないのでキープ
  4. 01:18:759 - add to note(d or k),ここはボーカル音があるのでノートを追加したほうがいいかと。ここに追加すると、他の同じところにも追加しないといけなくなって、そうすると普通なのに1/2の複数個のラッシュが続いて疲れてしまう どこかに密度のゆるいところを置こうと考えたときに、スネアのパターンとボーカルの音運びを考慮するとここを減らすのが最適だと分かったのでこうしてる
  5. 01:15:384 - move to 01:15:759 - これもボーカル音の位置関係上変更推奨。
違うパターンにした
[Muzukashii]
  1. 1/2が連続しすぎている箇所が何箇所かありました。休符を設けて短くしましょう。以下、長すぎると思ったところ
    1. 00:02:259 ~ 00:04:134
    2. 00:36:947 ~ 00:39:572
    3. 00:51:947 ~ 00:57:572
これ以外にも何箇所か手直しした ちょっと適当すぎた
[Oni]
pp farm譜面だぁああああwwwww lepidon!リスペクト
  1. 00:53:822 ~ 00:54:009 - ボーカル音がフラットなので単色に統一したほうがいいと思います。自分ならdddにしますね。ええと、いわゆるテケテーテケテーを取ってるんだけど、dddばっかりだと単調なのでこうしてる あとPPもうまいし ただボーカルを考慮するのは一理あるので後ろ二つをdkkにした
  2. 00:54:197 ~ 00:54:384 - ^ 自分ならkkkにします。
  3. 01:05:822 ~ 01:06:009 - ^ ddd
  4. 01:06:197 ~ 01:06:384 - ^ kkk
前のやつと逆にdkkdkkddkddkにした

台湾のとある人に殺される予感がしたのでこの辺にしておきます。Good luck :oops:
(´ゝ౪◔`)<When the thing you think is ok, I always think it is not ok.
Thanks!
SKSalt

shionelove wrote:

SKSalt wrote:

こんにチワワ :)

[Kantan]
  1. 1/2以上のリズム(赤線上)に置かれているノートがたくさんありますね。Kantanでは1/2以上のリズムを使うことは推奨されていないです。どうしてもここはこうする事しか出来ない!というところ以外は基本的にbeat snapを1/1にして再構成しましょう。もう少し使う場所を絞れるはずです。ちなみに具体例を挙げると
    1. 00:08:634 - move to 00:08:447
    2. 00:09:009 - move to 00:09:197
    3. 00:43:134 - move to 00:42:947
    4. 01:16:884 - move to 01:17:072
    5. 01:32:634 - move to 01:32:447
    6. 01:33:009 - move to 01:33:197
    等々。他にも改善できる箇所があると思うので自分で探してみてください。
ええと 1/2以上のリズムって言うのは赤線に置いてあるやつじゃなくて、1/2で見たときに2つ以上連続しておいてあるやつだよ(ここで挙げられてるものは全て裏拍という)
I'm baka xDDD
Meow2
Hello there, random mod here
I'm trying to improve my modding skill

[General]
I think the gap between Kantan and Futsuu is close.

[Kantan]
00:00:947 (2) - Change to k
00:01:697 (3) - ^
00:02:447 (4) - ^
00:03:197 (5) - ^
00:03:572 - Add d
00:09:009 (15) - Change to D
00:09:572-00:11:634 - You can delete notes then add spinner here, just like what you did in futsuu.
00:15:572 (26) - Add finish
00:17:447 (29) - Change to k
00:18:572 (31,32) - Change to d
00:20:072 (33,34,35) - Change to d k k or d k d
00:23:447 (39) - Change to k
00:24:197 (40,41) - Swap these notes
00:27:572 (46) - Add finish
00:32:822 (55) - Change this to k if you changed 00:20:072 (33,34,35) to d k k
00:35:822 (60) - Move to 00:36:197
00:39:572 (66) - Add finish
00:44:822 (74,75) - Change to k?
00:48:947 (81) - Move to 00:49:134 ?
00:51:572 (1) - Add finish
00:56:447 (8) - Change to k?
00:56:822 (9) - Move to 00:57:197
00:59:447 (13) - Delete this
01:03:572 (20) - Add finish
01:15:572 (1) - ^
01:24:947 (18) - Change to k
01:25:697 (19) - ^
01:26:447 (20) - ^
01:27:197 (21) - ^
01:27:572 - Add d
01:33:009 (31) - Change to D

[Futsuu]
00:15:572 (9) - Add Finish
00:18:009 (16) - Move to 00:17:634
00:21:009 (25) - Move to 00:20:634
00:24:947 (37,38,39) - Change the second note (38) to k, then delete the third note (39)
00:26:447 (42,43,44) - change the first two notes (42 and 43) to d and k, then delete the last note (44)
00:27:572 (46) - Add finish
00:32:447 (60,61,62) - Change to k k d
00:38:072 (77,78,79,80,81) - How about this? http://puu.sh/iy2b9/a78dd6beea.png
00:39:572 (82) - Add finish
00:44:822 (92) - Change to k?
00:45:572 (94) - Add finish
00:51:572 (112) - ^
01:00:572 (143) - change to d
01:03:572 (154) - Add finish
01:06:197 (164) - Change to k
01:06:947 (166) - ^
01:24:947 (37) - ^
01:25:697 (39) - Change to k, then Move 01:26:072 (40) to 01:25:884
01:26:259 - Add note here and change 01:26:447 (41) to k
01:27:009 (43) - delete this note
01:27:197 (44) - Change to k
01:27:572 (45) - Change to d
01:28:322 (47) - ^
01:28:509 - Add k
01:28:697 (48) - move to 01:28:884
01:29:072 (49) - Move to 01:29:259 then change it to d
01:30:009 (52) - Move to 01:29:634 and change it to d

Well, that's all for me
Sorry if the mod don't help you
Good luck!
Topic Starter
shionelove

Meow2 wrote:

Hello there, random mod here
I'm trying to improve my modding skill

[General]
I think the gap between Kantan and Futsuu is close.

[Kantan]
00:00:947 (2) - Change to k
00:01:697 (3) - ^
00:02:447 (4) - ^
00:03:197 (5) - ^
00:03:572 - Add d
00:09:009 (15) - Change to D
00:09:572-00:11:634 - You can delete notes then add spinner here, just like what you did in futsuu.
00:15:572 (26) - Add finish
00:17:447 (29) - Change to k
00:18:572 (31,32) - Change to d
00:20:072 (33,34,35) - Change to d k k or d k d
00:23:447 (39) - Change to k
00:24:197 (40,41) - Swap these notes
00:27:572 (46) - Add finish
00:32:822 (55) - Change this to k if you changed 00:20:072 (33,34,35) to d k k
00:35:822 (60) - Move to 00:36:197
00:39:572 (66) - Add finish
00:44:822 (74,75) - Change to k?
00:48:947 (81) - Move to 00:49:134 ?
00:51:572 (1) - Add finish
00:56:447 (8) - Change to k?
00:56:822 (9) - Move to 00:57:197
00:59:447 (13) - Delete this
01:03:572 (20) - Add finish
01:15:572 (1) - ^
01:24:947 (18) - Change to k
01:25:697 (19) - ^
01:26:447 (20) - ^
01:27:197 (21) - ^
01:27:572 - Add d
01:33:009 (31) - Change to D

[Futsuu]
00:15:572 (9) - Add Finish
00:18:009 (16) - Move to 00:17:634
00:21:009 (25) - Move to 00:20:634
00:24:947 (37,38,39) - Change the second note (38) to k, then delete the third note (39)
00:26:447 (42,43,44) - change the first two notes (42 and 43) to d and k, then delete the last note (44)
00:27:572 (46) - Add finish
00:32:447 (60,61,62) - Change to k k d
00:38:072 (77,78,79,80,81) - How about this? http://puu.sh/iy2b9/a78dd6beea.png
00:39:572 (82) - Add finish
00:44:822 (92) - Change to k?
00:45:572 (94) - Add finish
00:51:572 (112) - ^
01:00:572 (143) - change to d
01:03:572 (154) - Add finish
01:06:197 (164) - Change to k
01:06:947 (166) - ^
01:24:947 (37) - ^
01:25:697 (39) - Change to k, then Move 01:26:072 (40) to 01:25:884
01:26:259 - Add note here and change 01:26:447 (41) to k
01:27:009 (43) - delete this note
01:27:197 (44) - Change to k
01:27:572 (45) - Change to d
01:28:322 (47) - ^
01:28:509 - Add k
01:28:697 (48) - move to 01:28:884
01:29:072 (49) - Move to 01:29:259 then change it to d
01:30:009 (52) - Move to 01:29:634 and change it to d

Well, that's all for me
Sorry if the mod don't help you
Good luck!
blue=change,green=arrange,others=not change

thanks!
newyams99
Hi from M4M
Great Song :D

Kantan

Suggestions:

00:06:197 (9,10) - Switch these two hits, since the pitch is going up from hit 9 to 10.

00:42:197 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - This part needs a break somewhere. It's too hard without one.

00:45:947 (56,57,58,59) - You could move these hits 1 beat back.

01:30:197 (25,26) - Switch these hits.

01:22:884 (13,14,15,16) - This is too hard too. I'd move these 1/2 a beat back, then remove the hit at 01:22:697. It doesn't sound as good as your rhythm, but I don't think it's a rhythm meant for a Kantan.

Optional:

00:07:134 (11) - This hit is fine the way it is, but changing it to d will make it easier for new players.

00:25:322 (22) - The hits before seem to match the vocals 探してた. You seem very precise on matching it with the vocals here, so instead of putting a hit here, maybe put a slider at 00:25:134 until 00:25:884 to put emphasis on the たーat the end. If you're going to do this, remove 00:26:072 (23).

01:16:322 (2,3,4) - I personally think this is too hard. It seems like you're matching the vocals here, but I think you should move the hit at 01:17:447 (4) to 01:17:822, and move 01:16:884 (3) to 01:17:072. So in the phrase 願いはいつか叶うのかな, you'd be matching with the かな.

01:19:322 (7,8,9) - Same thing here. Move 01:20:447 (9) to 01:20:822, and 01:19:884 (8) to 01:20:072 to match with だから.

Futsuu

I thought this difficulty lacked in short breaks for players, so I'll be mainly suggesting removal of hits.

Suggestions:

00:03:197 (9) - Remove for a short break.

00:06:197 (18,19) - Switch hits, like in Kantan.

00:18:947 (19) - Remove for a short break.

00:21:947 (28) - ^

00:27:947 (47) - ^

00:30:947 (56) - ^

00:33:947 (65) - ^

00:45:947 (96) - ^

00:53:259 (119) - This hit doesn't seem necessary to me. Remove.

00:54:009 (122) - ^

01:05:259 (161) - ^

01:06:009 (164) - ^

00:55:697 (128) - You could move this hit to 00:55:884 to make the hits match more with the vocals.

00:57:947 (135) - Remove for a short break.

01:24:947 (37) - ^

01:27:947 (45) - ^

01:30:197 (52,53) - Switch hits, the pitch is going up.

Muzukashii

I thought this was pretty hard for a Muzukashii, but the difficulty rating says otherwise -_-

Suggestions:

00:15:009 (64) - Remove this hit. For the beginning, this is too hard.

00:53:634 (238) - Remove this hit. You need a short break somewhere in here.

00:56:822 (256) - ^

01:06:009 (304) - ^

01:08:822 (320) - ^

01:24:009 (75,76,77,78,79,80) - This isn't any different from the Oni. Change.
Optional:

00:29:915 (130) - I think you should move this hit to 00:30:103 instead. I think it sounds better.

Oni

Suggestions:

00:04:790 (32) - Change to d.

00:06:572 (45) - Change to k.

01:00:759 (362,363,364,365,366,367) - Ctrl + G

01:21:009 (56) - Change to k.

Optional:

00:24:478 - It's possible to add a k.

00:33:665 (197) - Change to d.

This diff was pretty good.

That's all for now. If you don't understand something, feel free to PM me. Will be waiting for your mod. Good Luck on rank~ 8-)
Topic Starter
shionelove

newyams99 wrote:

Hi from M4M
Great Song :D

Kantan

Suggestions:

00:06:197 (9,10) - Switch these two hits, since the pitch is going up from hit 9 to 10. i take pattern,because this is Kantan diff,readable is more important than pitch

00:42:197 (49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - This part needs a break somewhere. It's too hard without one. i can't remove...all sounds are important and next pattern allows player heal

00:45:947 (56,57,58,59) - You could move these hits 1 beat back. it makes too big break,and i want to follow snare for next pattern

01:30:197 (25,26) - Switch these hits. same

01:22:884 (13,14,15,16) - This is too hard too. I'd move these 1/2 a beat back, then remove the hit at 01:22:697. It doesn't sound as good as your rhythm, but I don't think it's a rhythm meant for a Kantan. remove 01:23:259 (14) -

Optional:

00:07:134 (11) - This hit is fine the way it is, but changing it to d will make it easier for new players. dkd instead

00:25:322 (22) - The hits before seem to match the vocals 探してた. You seem very precise on matching it with the vocals here, so instead of putting a hit here, maybe put a slider at 00:25:134 until 00:25:884 to put emphasis on the たーat the end. If you're going to do this, remove 00:26:072 (23).

01:16:322 (2,3,4) - I personally think this is too hard. It seems like you're matching the vocals here, but I think you should move the hit at 01:17:447 (4) to 01:17:822, and move 01:16:884 (3) to 01:17:072. So in the phrase 願いはいつか叶うのかな, you'd be matching with the かな.
か=not important sound,due to low pitch and accent.and i follow drums

01:19:322 (7,8,9) - Same thing here. Move 01:20:447 (9) to 01:20:822, and 01:19:884 (8) to 01:20:072 to match with だから.add instead

Futsuu

I thought this difficulty lacked in short breaks for players, so I'll be mainly suggesting removal of hits.

Suggestions:

00:03:197 (9) - Remove for a short break.

00:06:197 (18,19) - Switch hits, like in Kantan.

00:18:947 (19) - Remove for a short break.

00:21:947 (28) - ^

00:27:947 (47) - ^

00:30:947 (56) - ^

00:33:947 (65) - ^

00:45:947 (96) - ^

00:53:259 (119) - This hit doesn't seem necessary to me. Remove.

00:54:009 (122) - ^

01:05:259 (161) - ^

01:06:009 (164) - ^

00:55:697 (128) - You could move this hit to 00:55:884 to make the hits match more with the vocals.

00:57:947 (135) - Remove for a short break.

01:24:947 (37) - ^

01:27:947 (45) - ^

01:30:197 (52,53) - Switch hits, the pitch is going up.

Muzukashii

I thought this was pretty hard for a Muzukashii, but the difficulty rating says otherwise -_-

Suggestions:

00:15:009 (64) - Remove this hit. For the beginning, this is too hard.

00:53:634 (238) - Remove this hit. You need a short break somewhere in here.

00:56:822 (256) - ^

01:06:009 (304) - ^

01:08:822 (320) - ^

01:24:009 (75,76,77,78,79,80) - This isn't any different from the Oni. Change.change oni instead
Optional:

00:29:915 (130) - I think you should move this hit to 00:30:103 instead. I think it sounds better.

Oni

Suggestions:

00:04:790 (32) - Change to d.

00:06:572 (45) - Change to k

01:00:759 (362,363,364,365,366,367) - Ctrl + G

01:21:009 (56) - Change to k

Optional:

00:24:478 - It's possible to add a k.

00:33:665 (197) - Change to d.

This diff was pretty good.

That's all for now. If you don't understand something, feel free to PM me. Will be waiting for your mod. Good Luck on rank~ 8-)
blue=change,green=arrange,others=not change

thanks
[R]
from queue late
every "?" line just an opinion

[Muzukashi]
00:03:759 - add note, following 00:00:759 -
00:45:759 - add note, i hear pitch sound here
[Oni]
00:00:853 - delete , for small rest
00:03:853 - ^
00:04:790 - ^
00:06:759 (46,47) - ctrl+G ?
00:24:290 - add k
00:26:259 - add di hear sound, and delete 00:26:822 -
00:34:415 - delete , no drum sound
00:45:290 - delete ? or 00:46:040 (259,265,271,277) - delete
00:54:290 - delete ? symentric with 00:52:790 -
00:55:884 - k
01:15:009 - ^
01:19:790 - delete, for prepare stream
01:21:665 - ^
I like E VN( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
no much change in muzukashi :'D but hope helpfull
good luck
Topic Starter
shionelove

[R] wrote:

from queue late
every "?" line just an opinion

[Muzukashi]
00:03:759 - add note, following 00:00:759 -
00:45:759 - add note, i hear pitch sound here for pattern sorry
[Oni]
00:00:853 - delete , for small rest
00:03:853 - ^
00:04:790 - ^
delete other
00:06:759 (46,47) - ctrl+G ? both are d nothing happen lol
00:24:290 - add k 1/2 pattern here
00:26:259 - add di hear sound, and delete 00:26:822 -
00:34:415 - delete , no drum sound nonono this is taiko,i don't have to only follow sounds,i can make rhythm some now(of course i don't make much)
00:45:290 - delete ? or 00:46:040 (259,265,271,277) - delete quite important sounds and make PP
00:54:290 - delete ? symentric with 00:52:790 -
00:55:884 - kchange kdkkd
01:15:009 - ^
01:19:790 - delete, for prepare stream
01:21:665 - ^
I like E VN( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
no much change in muzukashi :'D but hope helpfull
good luck
blue=change,green=arrange,other=not change

thanks
OzzyOzrock
tasuke style video? :3

[Oni]
00:31:790 (184) - dkkkd so not ddkkd again?
00:38:259 (229,230,232) - these are not following guitar correctly :x
01:02:822 (377,378,379) - i think kkd is better?
01:13:322 (454,455,456,457,458,459) - change to kkddk d ?
01:14:072 (460) - maybe map this slider?
01:19:697 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - I think fits more

so many streams! ww
[Muzukashii]
01:05:072 (299) - delete?

good diff! :3
[Futsuu]
00:05:634 (16) - k?
01:07:134 (168,169) - k k?
- 01:07:884 (170) - d?
- 01:08:634 (173,174,175,176,177) - here make (k k k d d)? I think these changes fit nice :3

I think maybe you need some breaks where there are a lot of notes ><
たとえば:00:20:634 () - add k, 00:21:009 (25,26) - delete notes? 小さい"break"だ

But good diff!
[Kantan]
00:07:884 (13) - remove finisher (k D, hard for new players ;;)
00:36:572 (41) - d?
01:31:884 (29) - remove finisher too

GL with set! :3
Topic Starter
shionelove

OzzyOzrock wrote:

tasuke style video? :3 tasuke made for me and taught me how to make good god epic

[Oni]
00:31:790 (184) - dkkkd so not ddkkd again? well
00:38:259 (229,230,232) - these are not following guitar correctly :x i prefer drums here
01:02:822 (377,378,379) - i think kkd is better? good
01:13:322 (454,455,456,457,458,459) - change to kkddk d ? i don't want to use stream more than 5 here,for rest
01:14:072 (460) - maybe map this slider? "spinner" seems better changed
01:19:697 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57) - I think fits more
01:19:697 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - kkddd kkkkddkkdkd instead,11 stream good


so many streams! ww for pp myself <3
[Muzukashii]
01:05:072 (299) - delete? no thanks i prefer pattern to rest

good diff! :3 (ノ )ω( ヾ)
[Futsuu]
00:05:634 (16) - k? switched
01:07:134 (168,169) - k k?
- 01:07:884 (170) - d?
- 01:08:634 (173,174,175,176,177) - here make (k k k d d)? I think these changes fit nice :3 d kddd instead

I think maybe you need some breaks where there are a lot of notes ><
たとえば:00:20:634 () - add k, 00:21:009 (25,26) - delete notes? 小さい"break"だ ok ok ok

But good diff!
[Kantan]
00:07:884 (13) - remove finisher (k D, hard for new players ;;) ok
00:36:572 (41) - d? just for pattern d d dkd and k k kdk here
01:31:884 (29) - remove finisher too

GL with set! :3
blue=change,green=arrange,others=not change
really helpful!thanks
Surono
(`L_` )

[Kantan]
  1. 00:07:134 (11) - move to here 00:06:947 (11) -
  2. 00:08:634 (14) - move to here 00:08:447 (14) - and remove finish
  3. 00:14:634 (4) - delete lel
  4. 00:39:572 (46) - gib finish~
  5. 00:49:509 (62) - delete..
  6. 01:32:634 (30) - like in 00:08:447 (14) -
  7. aaa.. maybe is 2 hard 4 newbie... so plis make beat 1/1 and little 1/2.. and that star is 1.8 so high @_@
[Futsuu]
  1. already nice >_>
[Muzukashii]
  1. okay.. nice, me will in Oni..
[Oni]
  1. 00:04:134 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - make kkddk ddk or kkdkd ddk? yeah kkdkdis nice.. *okay is already nice.. keep for variant to before..
  2. 00:47:447 (270,271,272,273,274,275) - make kkd ddk
  3. 00:51:572 (293) - change kat, and this 00:51:947 (296) - change don
  4. 00:53:822 (310,311,312) - ctrl + g
  5. 00:59:634 (354) - change don?
  6. 00:59:822 (355,356,357,358,359,360) - make ddk kkd *this 01:00:384 (360) - is don because is same voice pitch like this 01:00:572 (361) -
  7. 01:01:509 (368,369,370,371,372) - kdddk?
  8. 01:02:634 (376) - kat?
  9. 01:09:572 (432) - this nice if kat?
  10. just it hehe..

hope helpful XD and sory if my mod u think bad `L_` forgive me hehe :lol:
Topic Starter
shionelove

Surono wrote:

(`L_` )

[Kantan]
  1. 00:07:134 (11) - move to here 00:06:947 (11) -
  2. 00:08:634 (14) - move to here 00:08:447 (14) - and remove finish ahh i don't like this rhythm...i don't wanna make common map even this is Kantan
  3. 00:14:634 (4) - delete lel really cool guitar
  4. 00:39:572 (46) - gib finish~
  5. 00:49:509 (62) - delete.. no thanks beginner easy to read this pattern
  6. 01:32:634 (30) - like in 00:08:447 (14) - same
  7. aaa.. maybe is 2 hard 4 newbie... so plis make beat 1/1 and little 1/2.. and that star is 1.8 so high @_@ i just use offbeat and there is no 1/2 pattern i think it's ok for Kantan,if this map is too hard what the hell osumania,EZ really hard hardest game
[Futsuu]
  1. already nice >_>
[Muzukashii]
  1. okay.. nice, me will in Oni..
[Oni]
  1. 00:04:134 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33) - make kkddk ddk or kkdkd ddk? yeah kkdkdis nice.. *okay is already nice.. keep for variant to before..
  2. 00:47:447 (270,271,272,273,274,275) - make kkd ddk nonono i want to repeat(for pp hhh)
  3. 00:51:572 (293) - change kat, and this 00:51:947 (296) - change don no thanks
  4. 00:53:822 (310,311,312) - ctrl + g no thanks repeat again
  5. 00:59:634 (354) - change don? repeat
  6. 00:59:822 (355,356,357,358,359,360) - make ddk kkd *this 01:00:384 (360) - is don because is same voice pitch like this 01:00:572 (361) -
    sorry i won't follow pitch always,if i wanna i map as mania.i wanna make fun map mania,other community never accept
  7. 01:01:509 (368,369,370,371,372) - kdddk? kdkkd instead
  8. 01:02:634 (376) - kat? don for hand balance
  9. 01:09:572 (432) - this nice if kat? okok
  10. just it hehe..

hope helpful XD and sory if my mod u think bad `L_` forgive me hehe :lol:
blue=change,green=arrange,other=not change

thanks!
Gemu-
Hi ^w^, from M4M

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

00:39:572 - Change to K is better.
00:47:447 - Change to k to follow the rhythm.
00:48:197 - ^
00:51:572 - Change to K is better for the rhythm in this part.
00:51:947 - Change to k because the rhythm is better in this part.
00:52:697 - ^
00:56:447 - Change to k.
00:59:447 - ^

[ Futsuu]

00:32:447 - Change to k for the rhythm and the consistency.
00:39:009 - ^
00:52:509 - Change to d and here 00:52:697 - Change to k.
00:56:634 - Change to k is better.

[ Muzukashii]

00:17:634 - Change to k for the rhythm.
00:20:447 - ^
00:51:478 - Remove this note and here 00:51:572 - Change to K.
01:24:478 - Remove this note.

[ Oni]

*O* OMG I LOVE THIS PARTS FROM HERE 00:09:572 - and 00:15:572 - *O*

00:53:447 - Change to k is better.
00:53:540 - ^
00:53:634 - Change to d.
00:54:290 - ^
00:56:447 - Change to k is better for the rhythm in this part.

Amazing Beatmap!, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
Topic Starter
shionelove

game rock wrote:

Hi ^w^, from M4M

d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)

[ Kantan]

00:39:572 - Change to K is better. 00:39:197 (45) - change k this instead
00:47:447 - Change to k to follow the rhythm. okok
00:48:197 - ^
00:51:572 - Change to K is better for the rhythm in this part. no
00:51:947 - Change to k because the rhythm is better in this part. ok
00:52:697 - ^ ok
00:56:447 - Change to k.
00:59:447 - ^
no thanks both pattern for pattern

[ Futsuu]

00:32:447 - Change to k for the rhythm and the consistency. dkk instead
00:39:009 - ^ no thanks
00:52:509 - Change to d and here 00:52:697 - Change to k. ok
00:56:634 - Change to k is better. 00:55:322 (126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133) - dk kd dd kk here

[ Muzukashii]

00:17:634 - Change to k for the rhythm.
00:20:447 - ^
no thanks both
00:51:478 - Remove this note and here 00:51:572 - Change to K. i need 5stream here
01:24:478 - Remove this note. keep if BN suggest to delete i will

[ Oni]

*O* OMG I LOVE THIS PARTS FROM HERE 00:09:572 - and 00:15:572 - *O*
god gave me

00:53:447 - Change to k is better.
00:53:540 - ^
00:53:634 - Change to d.
00:54:290 - ^
no tricky pattern here for PP
00:56:447 - Change to k is better for the rhythm in this part. ok

Amazing Beatmap!, I hope my mod has been helpful you :3, Good luck~ ~
well good thanks(ノ )ω( ヾ)
Marirose
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Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested.

  • [Kantan]

    Consider HP+1 ? HP 3 is a bit low as it would be too easy to pass.
    Please use SV 1.0x for the timing points like the other diffs.
  1. 00:23:447 (19,20) - consider deleting these notes for a 4/1 break ? Currently Kantan is too hard because of the non-stop patterns.
  2. 00:27:572 (26) - D would be better for pattern consistency as 00:15:572 (6) -
  3. 00:34:322 (37) - similar to 00:23:447 (19,20) - , this note could be deleted for a 4/1 break.
  4. 00:51:572 (1) - consider adding finish here for the stressed sound ?
  5. 01:02:447 (18,19) - same as 00:23:447 (19,20) -
  6. 01:03:572 (20) - same as 00:51:572 (1) -
  7. 01:12:572 (1) - try to end this spinner 1/1 earlier at 01:14:072 - . I could understand your intention to follow the stretched vocal, but a shorter spinner would result in a 4/1 break here.
  8. 01:18:197 (5) - you may delete this note since the snappings in this session is quite complicated.
  9. 01:21:197 (11) - same as ^
  10. 01:23:634 (15) - ^
  11. 01:31:884 (29) - maybe d to make it consistent with 00:07:884 (13) - ?
  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:05:822 (17,18) - consider deleting these notes for a break ? Futsuu is too dense due to the absence of 2/1 or longer rest moments.
  2. 00:21:197 (26) - same as ^
  3. 00:25:697 (40,45) - ^
  4. 00:33:197 (63) - ^
  5. 00:36:947 (74) - ^
  6. 00:40:134 (84) - k would be better if you want to follow vocal.
  7. 00:45:572 (95) - consider adding finish here for the stressed sound ?
  8. 00:45:947 (96) - maybe change to k and delete 00:46:322 (97) - for the snare ?
  9. 00:46:697 (98,99,100) - similar to ^ , try k d k and delete 00:47:822 (101) - ?
  10. 00:51:197 (112) - same as 00:05:822 (17,18) -
  11. From 00:51:572 to 01:24:572 - the kiai is like an easy Muzukashii due to the frequent use of 1/2 notes. Try to make this part less dense such as deleting 00:53:259 (119,120) and 00:57:572 (135,136) - for 2/1 breaks.
  12. 00:51:572 (113) - same as Kantan
  13. 01:03:572 (156) - ^
  14. 01:05:259 (162,163) and 01:09:572 (178,179) - same as ^
  15. 01:12:572 (1) - same as Kantan
  16. From 01:15:572 to 01:24:572 - try to lower note density here as well. There are too many 1/2 notes mapped in a consecutive way.
  • [Muzukashii]
  1. 00:18:197 (78,79) - consider deleting these notes for a 2/1 break ? There are no rest moments throughout the difficulty.
  2. 00:38:822 (175) - delete and change 00:39:197 (177) - to k ? I think it is a bit unnecessary to use long 1/2 pattern here.
  3. 00:43:509 (190) - similar to 00:18:197 (78,79) - , try to move this note to 00:44:259 - for a 2/1 break ?
  4. From 00:51:572 to 01:24:572 - The kiai is too dense because of the lengthy 1/2 + 1/4 patterns. You may shorten them a bit by removing notes like 00:53:072 (234,235) and 00:56:540 (255,257) -
  5. 01:05:072 (299) and 01:08:447 (319) - same as ^
  6. 01:12:665 (341,342) - ^
  7. 01:14:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ddd kkk would be better because of the pitch increase of vocal.
  8. 01:24:197 (53,54,55,56,57) - 1/4 pentaplet should stand alone like 00:51:197 (222,223,224,225,226) - in Muzukashii imo.

    Currently the difficulty is like an easy Oni because of the frequent use of 1/4 notes and the long 1/2 + 1/4 patterns. Try to lower the note density and put more 2/1 breaks at times to fit the level of difficulty.
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:04:415 (30) - maybe k to follow the guitar ?
  2. 00:20:072 (126,128) - consider swapping these notes to d k for the vocal ?
  3. 01:03:290 (383) - move to 01:03:103 - and change 01:03:009 (381) - to d for a better flow ?
  4. 01:24:947 (82,83) - swapping these notes to k d would fit the pitch in a way better.
  5. 01:27:572 (95,96) - similar to ^ , d k would be nice.
Oni is quite good, but lower difficulties need further improvement. That's all and good luck~ :D
Topic Starter
shionelove

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes a taiko mod as requested.

  • [Kantan]

    Consider HP+1 ? HP 3 is a bit low as it would be too easy to pass.  okok
    Please use SV 1.0x for the timing points like the other diffs. discussing with tasuke who gave me this idea,i think both idea are good so idk what to do
    PS.i just don't know what is SV hhh fixed
  1. 00:23:447 (19,20) - consider deleting these notes for a 4/1 break ? Currently Kantan is too hard because of the non-stop patterns.
    if non-stop patterns are so hard for beginner i think how mania,IIDX kills beginner hhh but change pattern to avoid 1/1 here
  2. 00:27:572 (26) - D would be better for pattern consistency as 00:15:572 (6) - ok and for beginner make rest
  3. 00:34:322 (37) - similar to 00:23:447 (19,20) - , this note could be deleted for a 4/1 break. different pattern
  4. 00:51:572 (1) - consider adding finish here for the stressed sound ? ok
  5. 01:02:447 (18,19) - same as 00:23:447 (19,20) - delete 19
  6. 01:03:572 (20) - same as 00:51:572 (1) - ok
  7. 01:12:572 (1) - try to end this spinner 1/1 earlier at 01:14:072 - . I could understand your intention to follow the stretched vocal, but a shorter spinner would result in a 4/1 break here. hmm this is hard question for me,i think if this is slider i fix.maybe player beats spinner as fast as possible so most,even beginner can finish this spinner faster than 4/1 and then there are more than4/1 rest
  8. 01:18:197 (5) - you may delete this note since the snappings in this session is quite complicated. for vocal keep next pattern has more notes for climax
  9. 01:21:197 (11) - same as ^ no thanks
  10. 01:23:634 (15) - ^ ok
  11. 01:31:884 (29) - maybe d to make it consistent with 00:07:884 (13) - ? add D instead
  • [Futsuu]
  1. 00:05:822 (17,18) - consider deleting these notes for a break ? Futsuu is too dense due to the absence of 2/1 or longer rest moments. delete 18
  2. 00:21:197 (26) - same as ^ ok
  3. 00:25:697 (40,45) - ^ ok
  4. 00:33:197 (63) - ^
  5. 00:36:947 (74) - ^
    both no thanks now i hate this song too consistent
  6. 00:40:134 (84) - k would be better if you want to follow vocal. drums
  7. 00:45:572 (95) - consider adding finish here for the stressed sound ? ok
  8. 00:45:947 (96) - maybe change to k and delete 00:46:322 (97) - for the snare ?
  9. 00:46:697 (98,99,100) - similar to ^ , try k d k and delete 00:47:822 (101) - ?
    no thanks here should be harder than previous pattern and i don't like dkdk spam in this diff...even if it's fit drums
  10. 00:51:197 (112) - same as 00:05:822 (17,18) - ok
  11. From 00:51:572 to 01:24:572 - the kiai is like an easy Muzukashii due to the frequent use of 1/2 notes. Try to make this part less dense such as deleting 00:53:259 (119,120) and 00:57:572 (135,136) - for 2/1 breaks. delete some notes,fix pattern and make a rest but i can't make some due to song,too consistent
  12. 00:51:572 (113) - same as Kantan
  13. 01:03:572 (156) - ^
    ok
  14. 01:05:259 (162,163) and 01:09:572 (178,179) - same as ^
    no thanks
  15. 01:12:572 (1) - same as Kantan same reason
  16. From 01:15:572 to 01:24:572 - try to lower note density here as well. There are too many 1/2 notes mapped in a consecutive way.
    for hard?here must be most difficult imo.if i delete some here i also have to delete other notes and then this map will be broken
    of course i try to avoid long 1/2 as i can
  • [Muzukashii]
    before i check this tasuke gave me irc mod(really thanks)and now SD is 2.87(-0.15)
  1. 00:18:197 (78,79) - consider deleting these notes for a 2/1 break ? There are no rest moments throughout the difficulty.
    remap overall,to make easier than mainpart
  2. 00:38:822 (175) - delete and change 00:39:197 (177) - to k ? I think it is a bit unnecessary to use long 1/2 pattern here.
    delete 00:38:634 (168) - instead
  3. 00:43:509 (190) - similar to 00:18:197 (78,79) - , try to move this note to 00:44:259 - for a 2/1 break ?
    no thanks but change d
  4. From 00:51:572 to 01:24:572 - The kiai is too dense because of the lengthy 1/2 + 1/4 patterns. You may shorten them a bit by removing notes like 00:53:072 (234,235) and 00:56:540 (255,257) - remapped with tasuke's advice
  5. 01:05:072 (299) and 01:08:447 (319) - same as ^
  6. 01:12:665 (341,342) - ^
  7. 01:14:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ddd kkk would be better because of the pitch increase of vocal. follow drums but i think both are ok
  8. 01:24:197 (53,54,55,56,57) - 1/4 pentaplet should stand alone like 00:51:197 (222,223,224,225,226) - in Muzukashii imo. remove one i'm afraid DQ

    Currently the difficulty is like an easy Oni because of the frequent use of 1/4 notes and the long 1/2 + 1/4 patterns. Try to lower the note density and put more 2/1 breaks at times to fit the level of difficulty.
  • [Oni]
  1. 00:04:415 (30) - maybe k to follow the guitar ? no thanks guitar same pitch
  2. 00:20:072 (126,128) - consider swapping these notes to d k for the vocal ? repattern
  3. 01:03:290 (383) - move to 01:03:103 - and change 01:03:009 (381) - to d for a better flow ? keep
  4. 01:24:947 (82,83) - swapping these notes to k d would fit the pitch in a way better. after stream i prefer simple dkdk pattern
  5. 01:27:572 (95,96) - similar to ^ , d k would be nice.if you wanna follow pitch kd is better...
Oni is quite good, but lower difficulties need further improvement. That's all and good luck~ :D
1st map quality rip i will reply alldone really thanks
and thanks tasuke i did ircmod with him and fixed some easy diff things
Marirose
選択肢が多すぎるわ!
Topic Starter
shionelove

Marirose wrote:

選択肢が多すぎるわ!
gg
OzzyOzrock
Honestly I think that the only thing holding this mapset back is that when Oni is hard, Muzu should be hard, and when Oni is easy, Muzu should be even easier.

For example the intro has a lot of 1/4 patterns, but Muzu has 1/2 and looks a lot like Futsuu. Also when Oni gets easy during slow parts, Muzu looks exactly the same.

Or in other cases, Kantan will have the same exact density as Futsuu for some parts, etc. Simply comparing the diffs by playing the song then switching through the difficulty selection box gives you a good idea of how the spread is.

gg.....
Topic Starter
shionelove

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Honestly I think that the only thing holding this mapset back is that when Oni is hard, Muzu should be hard, and when Oni is easy, Muzu should be even easier.

For example the intro has a lot of 1/4 patterns, but Muzu has 1/2 and looks a lot like Futsuu. Also when Oni gets easy during slow parts, Muzu looks exactly the same.

Or in other cases, Kantan will have the same exact density as Futsuu for some parts, etc. Simply comparing the diffs by playing the song then switching through the difficulty selection box gives you a good idea of how the spread is.

gg.....
I notice my opinion is not for taiko
My opinion is song has its diff so some is oni(another) is hard,muzu(hyper) is easy for example 紅牡丹 in iidx hyper lv9 another lv12

GG taiko

Edit:i decided to fix kantan but i think i can only add 00:40:134 and 00:41:634 ,others have 1/2 in Futsuu so i can't add
and this song is not hard song(such as hardcore,speedcore,Yuugen no Mai etc) so i think i don't need to make muzu hard
a lot 1/2 patterns are enough
OzzyOzrock
[General]
  1. Preview points unsnapped :^)
[Oni]
  1. 00:18:947 (121) - k, so it's not dkd again?
  2. 00:22:134 (134) - ^
  3. 00:25:697 (150) - ^ just suggestions, if two of the same pattern each time is what you're looking for, that's ok.
  4. 00:20:072 (126) - delete, to fit vocals closer?
  5. 00:35:259 (210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217) - make this (d k k ddd kkk) then 00:36:572 (218,219,220) - just a simple k d? I think that fits a bit nicer.
  6. 00:40:134 - wwww this part, oni is the same as muzu and futsuu is the same as kantan gg
  7. 00:48:572 (280,281,282,283,284) - D D D D D? to fit vocals?
  8. 00:59:822 (356,357,358,359,360,361) - d ddkkk? I think it works better than ddd kkk again.
  9. 01:05:072 (396,397,398,399,400,401) - dkd kkk instead? dkk dkk doesn't seem to fit
  10. 01:25:884 (86,93) - k on these? emphasis on certain things could be nicer
  11. 01:28:509 (99,105) - ^
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:20:447 (86) - k? or actually whatever you made this part in Oni could be the same I guess

    found it hard to find stuff to point out, probably a good thing
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:33:197 (60) - delete, so it's the same length as the previous verse?
  2. 01:11:447 (171,172,173,174) - k d d k may work better
[Kantan]
  1. 00:37:322 (39) - delete for a holy break?
  2. 00:38:447 (41) - move to 00:38:822 ?
  3. 00:45:572 - D here, then delete 00:45:947 (55) - ? to not leave the onbeat empty
  4. 00:53:072 (4) - replace with simple d k?
  5. 01:05:072 (22) - ^

    there's other break spots possible, but spinners kiiiind of help that?
shit mod
asdfsdf
Topic Starter
shionelove
because i gave you kudosu once i can't give you another kudosu sorry ;w;

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[General]
  1. Preview points unsnapped :^)
hmm i do this by intention here is reason:if i fix as you say player maybe hear like "achamecha ni lucky"not "h"achamecha ni lucky"
when you selected song volume increase so it often lack first word
another example https://osu.ppy.sh/s/28240 maybe you will hear "ayosana" not "s"ayonara
anyway this is i'm so much careful about preview


[Oni]
  1. 00:18:947 (121) - k, so it's not dkd again? keep
  2. 00:22:134 (134) - ^ changed kdk kdk
  3. 00:25:697 (150) - ^ just suggestions, if two of the same pattern each time is what you're looking for, that's ok. keep
  4. 00:20:072 (126) - delete, to fit vocals closer? keep for consistent pattern
  5. 00:35:259 (210,211,212,213,214,215,216,217) - make this (d k k ddd kkk) d k d ddd kkk then 00:36:572 (218,219,220) - just a simple k d? keep I think that fits a bit nicer.
  6. 00:40:134 - wwww this part, oni is the same as muzu and futsuu is the same as kantan gg why not i think it's ok for this part because of sounds
    we don't need to make different pattern completely between different diffs

    (´ゝ౪◔`)<When the thing you think is ok, I always think it is not ok.
  7. 00:48:572 (280,281,282,283,284) - D D D D D? to fit vocals? keep due to drums
  8. 00:59:822 (356,357,358,359,360,361) - d ddkkk? I think it works better than ddd kkk again. thanks good idea ddd kkk ddkkk ddk here
  9. 01:05:072 (396,397,398,399,400,401) - dkd kkk instead? dkk dkk doesn't seem to fit reverse pattern 00:53:072 (307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315,316,317,318) -
  10. 01:25:884 (86,93) - k on these? emphasis on certain things could be nicer change 1st keep 2nd
  11. 01:28:509 (99,105) - ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3471293 repatterned
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:20:447 (86) - k? or actually whatever you made this part in Oni could be the same I guess
    dkkk
    found it hard to find stuff to point out, probably a good thing
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:33:197 (60) - delete, so it's the same length as the previous verse? ok
  2. 01:11:447 (171,172,173,174) - k d d k may work better ok
[Kantan]
  1. 00:37:322 (39) - delete for a holy break? no 1/1 so no need break but many k holy shit repattern
  2. 00:38:447 (41) - move to 00:38:822 ? ok
  3. 00:45:572 - D here, then delete 00:45:947 (55) - ? to not leave the onbeat empty d d k K instead and delete
  4. 00:53:072 (4) - replace with simple d k?
  5. 01:05:072 (22) - ^ blame me plz change dk and kd following pattern

    there's other break spots possible, but spinners kiiiind of help that?
shit good mod
asdfsdf
thanks i will check other diffs all done
Kantan 1.93 broken StarDiff hhh
when your map bubbled
Topic Starter
shionelove
self mod again again again i hope i don't make this worse
Renka
こんばんは for geme chat M4M

[Kantan]

00:39:197 をdelete,そして00:38:447を00:38:634に移動?- 00:34:322の地点と同じ感じにするなら
00:44:822(53,54) - Ctrl+G?でもいいかなと
01:33:384にスピナーの始点を移動? こっちの方が曲に合ってるかなと

[Futsuu]

00:38:259をd,00:39:009 - k? 00:32:447がdkkなので少し変化を入れた方がいいかなと思いました
00:41:822(83,84,85) - kdK? - 前との反転で少し変化を、私の好みというか、主観の部分が強いです
00:45:947 - delete? 長めの1/2が続くので少し休憩を入れた方がいいかなと
00:47:447 - delete? 上と理由は同じですが主観です
00:57:947 - ^


[Muzukashii]

00:38:259 - d? - Futsuuを採用するなら、同色にするという理由で
01:03:009 - d? - 音に合ってるかなと思います
01:13:134 - delete? - muzukashiiにしては1/4が入ってて少し配置が長いかなと思ったので少し休憩を

[Oni]

特にいうことはないです、いい譜面と思います!

ランプオブシュガーのゲームは学王しかしたことないにわかですがプレイしてみたさありますね~ななろば華先生最初karory先生かと思ったのは恥ずかしいことだ;;

ランク頑張って~☆1
Topic Starter
shionelove

chaica wrote:

こんばんは for geme chat M4M

[Kantan]

00:39:197 をdelete,そして00:38:447を00:38:634に移動?- 00:34:322の地点と同じ感じにするなら
34秒地点の音取りはボーカルのアクセントをとっていて、ここはドラムと電子音になんとか合わせた形にしてる 本当ならdkkkdってしたいけどこれは簡単の範疇を越えちゃうから苦肉の策
00:44:822(53,54) - Ctrl+G?でもいいかなと ここは全難易度共通でddkにしてるよ 音程の広がり方の問題
01:33:384にスピナーの始点を移動? こっちの方が曲に合ってるかなと 簡単だから採用した

[Futsuu]

00:38:259をd,00:39:009 - k? 00:32:447がdkkなので少し変化を入れた方がいいかなと思いました
この次のkddをkkdに変更
00:41:822(83,84,85) - kdK? - 前との反転で少し変化を、私の好みというか、主観の部分が強いです
ここも全難易度同じ感じにおいてる こんなBメロのしかも静かなところでいちいち反転させて面白みを与えるのも効果ないし
00:45:947 - delete? 長めの1/2が続くので少し休憩を入れた方がいいかなと
00:47:447 - delete? 上と理由は同じですが主観です
ごめんこの二つは1/1(4分音符)だよ
00:57:947 - ^ ここらへんはサビだしへんに歯抜けにさせてもあれかなと思っている 一応8小節おきに、歌詞の区切りに合わせて休みは置いてるけど
あとどっちかっていうとこの譜面全体難だから見た目ほどに難しくないと思う



[Muzukashii]

00:38:259 - d? - Futsuuを採用するなら、同色にするという理由で keep
01:03:009 - d? - 音に合ってるかなと思います 01:03:009 (273,274,275,276,277) - この5連でせっかくのスネアの好機を生かしたいのでkeep
01:13:134 - delete? - muzukashiiにしては1/4が入ってて少し配置が長いかなと思ったので少し休憩を ちょっとここが休憩とかじゃなくて普通に難しかったので、1/2の最初を5連にして、その後のパターンもddkkddkkと1/4をなくして構成にした

[Oni]

特にいうことはないです、いい譜面と思います!

ランプオブシュガーのゲームは学王しかしたことないにわかですがプレイしてみたさありますね~ななろば華先生最初karory先生かと思ったのは恥ずかしいことだ;;

ランク頑張って~☆1
難しいはあとで返信 あと残りのmodもします ありがと
EdamaMe411
こんにちわ。頼まれてないけど
勝手にmod失礼します。(好きな曲なので)

Kantan
00:12:009 - ここまでスピナー伸ばしてあげたほうがいいかと! 00:15:009 (5) - こことおんなじリフなので ;)
01:21:197 (11) - 無くてもいいかもっす。01:15:572 (1) - こことおんなじにしてもいいと思うんで01:21:572 (11) - Dで!
01:27:572 - add notes (d?)入れたほうがテンポ良かったんで!

Futsuu
00:05:447 - dついか?3連嫌ならいいですが00:08:259 (24,25,26) - この3連しかも大音符入ってるの許してるんで、入れてもいいかもしれないっす!
00:12:009 - ここまでスピンを伸ばしてあげてください。
00:26:447 (40) - これを00:26:259 - に移動。00:26:259 - delete。ここまでわかりやすいテンポで取ってたので、素直に音に合わせたほうが全体の譜面の流れを汲めると思います。
00:48:947 (99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106) - ここ全部大音符は避けたほうがいいかな~と、、、特に1/2ノ4つ連続大音符は変えたほうがいいですね。
01:27:009 - d追加?上に書いた理由とおんなじです
Muzu
00:18:384 (78) - を00:18:197 - に移動。そこ裏伯から入ると叩いてところに詰まった感じが出てしまうと思われます。潤滑油の意味合いを含め移動をお勧めします。
00:21:384 (89) - ここもですが、^でもよくて、変えなくてもどちらでも構いません。
00:48:947 (206) - ここfinishいらなくてもいいと思いました。後ろの大音符だけでおと引っ張れるので

Oni
1/4多いと会話荒れてたと思うんですが個人的には全然ありです。フルマッピングというものあるくらいなので問題なく見ていきたいと思います。
00:07:603 (54) - delete、、、00:07:884 (56) - ここを目立たせるため、イントロ部分では大音符前の1/4は無くていいですね!
00:36:665 (220) - delete? 結構1/4はいるとサビも緩急も考慮したいので、ここで1/2にしておいても全然いいかと!むしろ、次の5連が映えるのでおすすめです。
00:36:759 (220) - d  ^とセットです。
00:48:947 (281) - むずかしいと同じ理由です。大音符1/2でキマッてるほがかっこいい!
00:59:540 (354) - delete
01:00:478 (361) - ^ あくまで1/4に強調したほうがメリハリつくんで一度試してみてください。
さいごの畳みかける1/4の前に疲れないようにするためでもありますかねえ~!

以上です、突然すいませんでした :o
Topic Starter
shionelove

EdamaMe411 wrote:

こんにちわ。頼まれてないけど
勝手にmod失礼します。(好きな曲なので)

Kantan
00:12:009 - ここまでスピナー伸ばしてあげたほうがいいかと! 00:15:009 (5) - こことおんなじリフなので ;)  マニアと違って同時押しの概念がないから次の小節の頭に終点を置くことが不可能なので、簡単というdiffに合うようにあえて多めに空白を取っている(仮に連打が間に合わなくても次のノーツを取り易くしている)
01:21:197 (11) - 無くてもいいかもっす。01:15:572 (1) - こことおんなじにしてもいいと思うんで01:21:572 (11) - Dで!
01:27:572 - add notes (d?)入れたほうがテンポ良かったんで!簡単の範囲を少し逸脱してしまうのでパス、ただでさえこれでも簡単の中では難しいほうなので

Futsuu
00:05:447 - dついか?3連嫌ならいいですが00:08:259 (24,25,26) - この3連しかも大音符入ってるの許してるんで、入れてもいいかもしれないっす!
明らかにメロディーが異なるし、2連の後に3連を置くと普通を少し逸脱するし、ここのパートは逸脱していい場面ではない
00:12:009 - ここまでスピンを伸ばしてあげてください。 1拍伸ばした
00:26:447 (40) - これを00:26:259 - に移動。00:26:259 - delete。ここまでわかりやすいテンポで取ってたので、素直に音に合わせたほうが全体の譜面の流れを汲めると思います。素直に音に合わせるために3連の最後を消した
00:48:947 (99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106) - ここ全部大音符は避けたほうがいいかな~と、、、特に1/2ノ4つ連続大音符は変えたほうがいいですね。
ここばっかりは曲が曲なので仕方がないと思っているし、BNにも指摘はされなかったよ 歯抜けにしても大音符じゃなくしてもどうしても演奏感を欠いてしまう
01:27:009 - d追加?上に書いた理由とおんなじです 同じ
Muzu
00:18:384 (78) - を00:18:197 - に移動。そこ裏伯から入ると叩いてところに詰まった感じが出てしまうと思われます。潤滑油の意味合いを含め移動をお勧めします。 難しいなので安定のボーカル取りに変更してる(modで直した)前のところはリズム違うけど手前に1/4あるから間を空けている
00:21:384 (89) - ここもですが、^でもよくて、変えなくてもどちらでも構いません。同じ
00:48:947 (206) - ここfinishいらなくてもいいと思いました。後ろの大音符だけでおと引っ張れるので 同じ音だから絶対大音符のほうがいい

Oni
1/4多いと会話荒れてたと思うんですが個人的には全然ありです。フルマッピングというものあるくらいなので問題なく見ていきたいと思います。
00:07:603 (54) - delete、、、00:07:884 (56) - ここを目立たせるため、イントロ部分では大音符前の1/4は無くていいですね!
手前がkだから十分目立っていると思うし、どちらかというとその次の3連大音符のほうが大事なので、ここは1/4パターンを継続させるためにkeep
00:36:665 (220) - delete? 結構1/4はいるとサビも緩急も考慮したいので、ここで1/2にしておいても全然いいかと!むしろ、次の5連が映えるのでおすすめです。
どうしてもここの三連は音の関係で残したいので、その前の三連を1/2にしてkkk連発を回避
00:36:759 (220) - d  ^とセットです。 同じ
00:48:947 (281) - むずかしいと同じ理由です。大音符1/2でキマッてるほがかっこいい!
00:59:540 (354) - delete
01:00:478 (361) - ^ あくまで1/4に強調したほうがメリハリつくんで一度試してみてください。
さいごの畳みかける1/4の前に疲れないようにするためでもありますかねえ~!今のリズムが気に入っているのでノーチェンジ

以上です、突然すいませんでした :o
Nardoxyribonucleic
Hi, here is the recheck as requested.

[General]

Try to put preview point at 00:51:478 - for all diffs so that the first syllable of vocal could be heard more clearly.

  • [Kantan]

    :idea: Suggestions regarding the insertion of breaks are important.
  1. 00:00:572 - you can remove the green timing point here as it is not in use.
  2. 00:07:509 (12) - consider deleting this note to simplify the pattern ? The snappings of 00:06:197 (9,10,11,12,13) - are in fact a bit hard for Kantan.
  3. 00:22:322 (17) - delete and move 00:22:884 (18) - to 00:23:072 - for a 4/1 break ? This is necessary because the pattern from 00:00:572 to 00:45:572 - are continuous.
  4. From 00:23:072 to 00:24:572 - try k dkd if you apply ^ . This would follow the vocal in a way better.
  5. 00:34:322 (35) - similar to 00:22:322 (17) - , you can delete this note and move 00:34:884 (36) to 00:35:072 - for another 4/1 break. Then, you can add k at 00:36:197 - for the vocal.
  6. 00:40:322 (44) - k would be better for the relatively high-pitched vocal imo.
  7. 00:44:447 (51) - similar to 00:07:509 (12) - , this note could be deleted for simplicity. There is no need to follow all the vocal at this level of difficulty.
  8. 00:46:697 (55) - move to 00:47:072 - and 00:47:447 (56) - move to 00:47:822 - ? This would accompany the vocal nicely and would be easier to follow. More importantly, it generates one more 4/1 break before the dense kiai.
  9. 01:02:447 (19) - you may move this note to 01:01:697 - so as to cohere with 00:59:447 -
  10. 01:12:572 (1) - as I suggested before, it would be better to end this spinner at 01:14:072 - for a longer break. It sounds more reasonable to end at that point because of the vocal too.
  11. 01:18:197 (5) - 01:20:822 (10) and 01:21:197 (11) - same as 00:44:447 (51) -
  12. 01:31:509 (27) - same as 00:07:509 (12) -
  • [Futsuu]

    :idea: Suggestions regarding the insertion of breaks are important.
  1. 00:06:197 (17) - this note could be removed to give a longer break. Currently the first 20 seconds are in fact quite dense.
  2. 00:09:572 (1) - try to end this spinner at 00:11:822 - so that it would be consistent with Kantan.
  3. 00:25:134 (37) - k and delete 00:25:322 (38) - ? This would follow the vocal in a way better.
  4. 00:40:322 (79) - same as Kantan
  5. 00:50:447 (104) - consider deleting this note for simplicity ? 1/2 DDDD is really hard for Futsuu.
  6. 00:53:447 (112) - move to 00:52:134 - for the vocal ? Currently the pattern from 00:51:572 to 01:02:634 - is a bit long, so a 2/1 break would work well.
  7. 00:57:947 (128) - similar to ^ , you may move this note to 00:58:509 - and change to d for one more break after the demanding pattern at 00:57:009 (124,125,126,127) -
  8. 01:05:447 (149) - same as 00:53:447 (112) -
  9. 01:06:947 (154,155) - swapping these notes to k d would fit the snare at 01:06:947 -
  10. 01:12:572 (1) - same as Kantan
  11. 01:18:009 (13,14) - consider deleting these notes for a better spread with Kantan ? The part from 01:14:822 to 01:24:572 - is much harder than that in Kantan, resulting in a noticeable difficulty gap.
  12. 01:21:009 (24,25) - same as ^
  13. 01:30:197 (17) - same as 00:06:197 (17) -
  • [Muzukashii]

    :idea: There are no breaks in the whole diff. It is strongly suggested to add some 2/1 breaks to allow time for intermediate players to rest.
  1. 00:02:447 (9) - k would fit both the pitch of music and the snare there.
  2. 00:04:509 (18,21) - swapping these notes to d k would maintain pattern consistency as 01:28:509 (71,74) -
  3. 00:05:822 (24,25) - this notes could be deleted to make a better spread with Futsuu. You may change 00:06:197 (26) - to k afterwards for a smoother flow.
  4. 00:11:822 (48) - delete and 00:12:009 (49,50) - change to d k ? Same reason as ^
  5. 00:18:384 (75) - this note could be deleted to give a 2/1 break. There is no need to follow all the vocal at this level of difficulty.
  6. 00:21:384 (85) - same as ^
  7. 00:24:384 (96) - changing this note to k would probably sound better.
  8. 00:25:134 (99) - k and delete 00:25:697 (101) - for one more 2/1 break ?
  9. 00:30:947 (125,126,127,128,129,130) - I think d k k d k d would flow better here.
  10. 00:37:509 (158,159) - same as 00:18:384 (75) - , these notes could be deleted for a break.
  11. 00:38:447 (160) - move to 00:38:634 - and change to d if you change ^ for a smoother flow.
  12. 00:40:322 (167) - same as Kantan
  13. 00:53:259 (218,219,220) - delete and add d at 00:54:009 - for a break ? This is a possible spot for a rest owing to the dense kiai.
  14. 01:05:259 (275,276,277) - same suggestion as 00:53:259 (218,219,220) -
  15. 01:06:384 (278) - k and 01:06:759 (280) - move to 01:07:322 - for a clearer structure ? Then you may change 01:06:947 (280) - to k as well.
  16. 01:26:447 (63) - same as 00:02:447 (9) -
  • [Oni]

    :idea: The note density at some parts is much higher than that in Muzukashii. I think you need to reduce the use of 1/4 notes by considering the spread with Muzukashii.
  1. From 00:00:572 to 00:07:884 - you can refer to how you mapped from 01:24:572 to 01:31:884 - . It would be much better if you use fewer 1/4 notes to reduce the gap between Muzukashii and Oni.
  2. 00:20:072 (126,127,128,129,130) - maybe try d d k k d ? This would flow better imo.
  3. 00:40:322 (240) - same as Kantan
  4. From 00:45:197 to 00:48:572 - Again, the gap with Muzukashii is quite obvious. You may either use fewer 1/4 notes in Oni or add some in Muzukashii.
  5. From 00:51:572 to 00:57:572 - same as ^ , the spread should be tuned as well.
  6. From 01:02:259 to 01:09:572 and from 01:15:947 to 01:21:197 - same as ^
That's all I can help out. You may call me back after fixing the issues as stated above.
Topic Starter
shionelove

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here is the recheck as requested.

[General]

Try to put preview point at 00:51:478 - for all diffs so that the first syllable of vocal could be heard more clearly.
yeah but no thanks,of course i usually put like this but this time there's 1/8 snare,which will be weird preview...

  • [Kantan]

    :idea: Suggestions regarding the insertion of breaks are important.
  1. 00:00:572 - you can remove the green timing point here as it is not in use. my mistake
  2. 00:07:509 (12) - consider deleting this note to simplify the pattern ? The snappings of 00:06:197 (9,10,11,12,13) - are in fact a bit hard for Kantan.
    fixed because some others also says
  3. 00:22:322 (17) - delete and move 00:22:884 (18) - to 00:23:072 - for a 4/1 break ? This is necessary because the pattern from 00:00:572 to 00:45:572 - are continuous.
  4. From 00:23:072 to 00:24:572 - try k dkd if you apply ^ . This would follow the vocal in a way better.
    considering both thing https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3546965
  5. 00:34:322 (35) - similar to 00:22:322 (17) - , you can delete this note and move 00:34:884 (36) to 00:35:072 - for another 4/1 break. Then, you can add k at 00:36:197 - for the vocal.
    same^
  6. 00:40:322 (44) - k would be better for the relatively high-pitched vocal imo.
    not follow vocal and i make s1mple pattern sry
  7. 00:44:447 (51) - similar to 00:07:509 (12) - , this note could be deleted for simplicity. There is no need to follow all the vocal at this level of difficulty.
    i won't delete any notes here good vocal for notes,so i put long break after this,isn't it enough?
  8. 00:46:697 (55) - move to 00:47:072 - and 00:47:447 (56) - move to 00:47:822 - ? This would accompany the vocal nicely and would be easier to follow. More importantly, it generates one more 4/1 break before the dense kiai.
    1st accepted 2nd rejected only 1st vocal is nice for me...and change d
  9. 01:02:447 (19) - you may move this note to 01:01:697 - so as to cohere with 00:59:447 -
    01:02:072 (18) - instead
  10. 01:12:572 (1) - as I suggested before, it would be better to end this spinner at 01:14:072 - for a longer break. It sounds more reasonable to end at that point because of the vocal too.
    change between i and you,1/2 shorter for vocal
  11. 01:18:197 (5) - 01:20:822 (10) and 01:21:197 (11) - same as 00:44:447 (51) -
    changed totally https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3547042
  12. 01:31:509 (27) - same as 00:07:509 (12) - same
  • [Futsuu]

    :idea: Suggestions regarding the insertion of breaks are important.
  1. 00:06:197 (17) - this note could be removed to give a longer break. Currently the first 20 seconds are in fact quite dense.
    delete 00:06:947 (19) - instead
  2. 00:09:572 (1) - try to end this spinner at 00:11:822 - so that it would be consistent with Kantan. ok
  3. 00:25:134 (37) - k and delete 00:25:322 (38) - ? This would follow the vocal in a way better.
    okok
  4. 00:40:322 (79) - same as Kantan same not follow vocal
  5. 00:50:447 (104) - consider deleting this note for simplicity ? 1/2 DDDD is really hard for Futsuu.
    keep i don't think it's really hard,of course hard but a bit because of s1mple pattern
  6. 00:53:447 (112) - move to 00:52:134 - for the vocal ? Currently the pattern from 00:51:572 to 01:02:634 - is a bit long, so a 2/1 break would work well.
    i prefer vocal's phrase,which is long 8 measure
  7. 00:57:947 (128) - similar to ^ , you may move this note to 00:58:509 - and change to d for one more break after the demanding pattern at 00:57:009 (124,125,126,127) -
    changed a bit
  8. 01:05:447 (149) - same as 00:53:447 (112) - same
  9. 01:06:947 (154,155) - swapping these notes to k d would fit the snare at 01:06:947 -
  10. 01:12:572 (1) - same as Kantan same
  11. 01:18:009 (13,14) - consider deleting these notes for a better spread with Kantan ? The part from 01:14:822 to 01:24:572 - is much harder than that in Kantan, resulting in a noticeable difficulty gap.
    on the other hand i'm afraid gap with muzu become more if i fix them no thanks
  12. 01:21:009 (24,25) - same as ^ same
  13. 01:30:197 (17) - same as 00:06:197 (17) - same
  • [Muzukashii]

    :idea: There are no breaks in the whole diff. It is strongly suggested to add some 2/1 breaks to allow time for intermediate players to rest.
  1. 00:02:447 (9) - k would fit both the pitch of music and the snare there. no thanks
  2. 00:04:509 (18,21) - swapping these notes to d k would maintain pattern consistency as 01:28:509 (71,74) -
    k k instead
  3. 00:05:822 (24,25) - this notes could be deleted to make a better spread with Futsuu. You may change 00:06:197 (26) - to k afterwards for a smoother flow.
    follow 01:30:197 (77,78,79,80) -
  4. 00:11:822 (48) - delete and 00:12:009 (49,50) - change to d k ? Same reason as ^
    no thanks
  5. 00:18:384 (75) - this note could be deleted to give a 2/1 break. There is no need to follow all the vocal at this level of difficulty.
    no thanks i need this
  6. 00:21:384 (85) - same as ^ same
  7. 00:24:384 (96) - changing this note to k would probably sound better.
    ddkdk instead
  8. 00:25:134 (99) - k and delete 00:25:697 (101) - for one more 2/1 break ?
    changed k and not delete
  9. 00:30:947 (125,126,127,128,129,130) - I think d k k d k d would flow better here.
    dkdkdk instead and fixed same part
  10. 00:37:509 (158,159) - same as 00:18:384 (75) - , these notes could be deleted for a break.
    no thanks
  11. 00:38:447 (160) - move to 00:38:634 - and change to d if you change ^ for a smoother flow.
    good
  12. 00:40:322 (167) - same as Kantan
    no thanks
  13. 00:53:259 (218,219,220) - delete and add d at 00:54:009 - for a break ? This is a possible spot for a rest owing to the dense kiai.
    rearranged with some 1/4 i wrote the reason in Oni
  14. 01:05:259 (275,276,277) - same suggestion as 00:53:259 (218,219,220) -
    same
  15. 01:06:384 (278) - k and 01:06:759 (280) - move to 01:07:322 - for a clearer structure ? Then you may change 01:06:947 (280) - to k as well.
    ^
  16. 01:26:447 (63) - same as 00:02:447 (9) - same
  • [Oni]

    :idea: The note density at some parts is much higher than that in Muzukashii. I think you need to reduce the use of 1/4 notes by considering the spread with Muzukashii.
  1. From 00:00:572 to 00:07:884 - you can refer to how you mapped from 01:24:572 to 01:31:884 - . It would be much better if you use fewer 1/4 notes to reduce the gap between Muzukashii and Oni.
  2. 00:20:072 (126,127,128,129,130) - maybe try d d k k d ? This would flow better imo. ddkdk same as muzu
  3. 00:40:322 (240) - same as Kantan same
  4. From 00:45:197 to 00:48:572 - Again, the gap with Muzukashii is quite obvious. You may either use fewer 1/4 notes in Oni or add some in Muzukashii.
  5. From 00:51:572 to 00:57:572 - same as ^ , the spread should be tuned as well.
  6. From 01:02:259 to 01:09:572 and from 01:15:947 to 01:21:197 - same as ^
    about all gap things:i will make muzu harder
That's all I can help out. You may call me back after fixing the issues as stated above.
thanks again
i also ircmodded with tasuke(he's god) thanks too
sorry for 1stmap quality rip
OzzyOzrock
LET'S DO THIS

maybe my memory is bad but things look much nicer lol EDIT: ah... nardo mod, I see now hahaha

[Oni]
  1. 00:38:259 (231,232,234) - Maybe follow the guitar with big notes? These 3 seem unfitting no? D D k D k D K d D could work. Maybe too many big notes? lol
  2. 00:52:697 (304,305) - if this was also a triplet but 00:53:072 (306,307,308,309,310,311) - was like x xxx x, that'd flow much nicer imo.
  3. 01:04:697 (396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403) - ^ same situation, xxx xxx xxx xxx feels kinda off.

    dense, but you made it work with other diffs it seems!
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:259 (8,9,10,11) - k d k k d k? then delete 00:03:384 (12) - . lack of break is to buff this section a little (isnt that contradicting), as it's the only place i think may need it
  2. 01:12:009 (317,318) - swap? since 01:10:884 (312,313) - are already d k, plus there's a sort of lower tone here until the long note
  3. 01:26:447 (64,65,66) - since oni isn't hard here, my suggestion is maybe k d k k if you followed the first suggestion
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:48:197 (95) - maybe delete so the player can prepare for big notes a bit?

    seems fine to me! while some breaks aren't particularly long (1/1 and a half) it helps even spread out with muzu.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:44:447 (49) - remove? for a kantan this is kind of a fast er... change-back to the normal rhythm.
  2. 01:02:447 (19) - kinda sounds weird. maybe delete as a huge break lol
set actually is pretty nice now haha, maybe i've gotten experience.... nah we both did. i should be able to bubble after!

sksalt you are next
Topic Starter
shionelove

OzzyOzrock wrote:

LET'S DO THIS

maybe my memory is bad but things look much nicer lol EDIT: ah... nardo mod, I see now hahaha

[Oni]
  1. 00:38:259 (231,232,234) - Maybe follow the guitar with big notes? These 3 seem unfitting no? D D k D k D K d D could work. Maybe too many big notes? lol
    change 1/4 both,idk how to map this sounds then
  2. 00:52:697 (304,305) - if this was also a triplet but 00:53:072 (306,307,308,309,310,311) - was like x xxx x, that'd flow much nicer imo.
  3. 01:04:697 (396,397,398,399,400,401,402,403) - ^ same situation, xxx xxx xxx xxx feels kinda off.
    add k then 1st:kkddk ddk dkk dkk 2nd:kkdkk dkk ddk ddk

    dense, but you made it work with other diffs it seems!
    star becomes 4.22,EZ PP myselfs (՞ةڼ◔)
[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:02:259 (8,9,10,11) - k d k k d k? then delete 00:03:384 (12) - . lack of break is to buff this section a little (isnt that contradicting), as it's the only place i think may need it
    00:03:197 - added d here
  2. 01:12:009 (317,318) - swap? since 01:10:884 (312,313) - are already d k, plus there's a sort of lower tone here until the long note
    01:11:634 (315,316) - instead(dkddk)
  3. 01:26:447 (64,65,66) - since oni isn't hard here, my suggestion is maybe k d k k if you followed the first suggestion
    make same pattern for consistent
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:48:197 (95) - maybe delete so the player can prepare for big notes a bit?
    good for vocal but change https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3556280,i feel i should follow vocal completely here
    seems fine to me! while some breaks aren't particularly long (1/1 and a half) it helps even spread out with muzu.
    thanks,this is my expected answer
[Kantan]
  1. 00:44:447 (49) - remove? for a kantan this is kind of a fast er... change-back to the normal rhythm.
    hmmmmmm 00:45:572 (52) - move this to 00:45:947 (52) - and remove finish,this vocal...i should map this so i make break
  2. 01:02:447 (19) - kinda sounds weird. maybe delete as a huge break lol ok
set actually is pretty nice now haha, maybe i've gotten experience.... nah we both did. i should be able to bubble after!

sksalt you are next
thanks ozzy sksalt you are next
rip i can't give kudosu gg
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