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TwoThirds & Feint - Epiphany (feat. Veela)
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[General]
- add collab / collaboration in tags for obvious reasons o3o
- 00:24:210 (3,4) - the flow is a bit weird here, Ctrl+G them?
- 00:27:810 (2,3) - same?
- 01:15:637 (1) - the end of this seems not correctly snapped if I'm not mistaken.
- 02:09:295 (1) - add whistle at the end? it really fits with music imo.
- 02:55:752 (8) - this green line is unsnapped for 4 ms, you can check it by yourself.
- 03:39:637 (9) - NC? the music is more or less the same as 01:27:638 (5,6,7,8,1) - and there's a NC at the last note o3o
- 04:21:123 (2) - same as 01:15:637 (1) - ;w;
- 04:24:895 (6) - uh since this part I see another NC consistency, then here 04:46:838 (1) - you're back to the current consistency while the music doesn't change at all, not a big problem but better fix this because suddenly I see a big number of combos and I feel like the consistency is broken and it's really noticeable imo =w=
- 06:34:838 (4,5,6,7,1) - wow, this is kinda sudden and confusing, firstly I thought they had another rhythm o.o you always used more or less the same spacing when you map this rhythm, I suggest to change this because it could be a big problem for players
even for pro ones - 06:56:781 (1,5) - swap NC
Topic Starter
Thanks for the mod!Inyuschan wrote:
[General]
- add collab / collaboration in tags for obvious reasons o3o okay
[Revelation]yup
- 00:24:210 (3,4) - the flow is a bit weird here, Ctrl+G them? nah i think its fine
- 00:27:810 (2,3) - same?
- 01:15:637 (1) - the end of this seems not correctly snapped if I'm not mistaken.
- 02:09:295 (1) - add whistle at the end? it really fits with music imo.
- 02:55:752 (8) - this green line is unsnapped for 4 ms, you can check it by yourself.
- 03:39:637 (9) - NC? the music is more or less the same as 01:27:638 (5,6,7,8,1) - and there's a NC at the last note o3o
- 04:21:123 (2) - same as 01:15:637 (1) - ;w; yup fixed
- 04:24:895 (6) - uh since this part I see another NC consistency, then here 04:46:838 (1) - you're back to the current consistency while the music doesn't change at all, not a big problem but better fix this because suddenly I see a big number of combos and I feel like the consistency is broken and it's really noticeable imo =w= Yeah i fixed the ncing there
- 06:34:838 (4,5,6,7,1) - wow, this is kinda sudden and confusing, firstly I thought they had another rhythm o.o you always used more or less the same spacing when you map this rhythm, I suggest to change this because it could be a big problem for players
even for pro onesYeah illl reduce the spacing a bit- 06:56:781 (1,5) - swap NC
Awesome map o3o
Thanks for modding!Inyuschan wrote:
[Revelation]Awesome map o3o
- 01:15:637 (1) - the end of this seems not correctly snapped if I'm not mistaken. - Not sure what you mean, Slider looks fine to me
- 02:09:295 (1) - add whistle at the end? it really fits with music imo.
- 02:55:752 (8) - this green line is unsnapped for 4 ms, you can check it by yourself. - Fixed
- 03:39:637 (9) - NC? the music is more or less the same as 01:27:638 (5,6,7,8,1) - and there's a NC at the last note o3o - Added (pls don't hurt me hula)
Fixed some missing hitsounds, a small error of colors with the storyboard and some small patterns.
Bubble #1
Bubble #1
No kudosu, it's just a recheck.
- As I've said the OD seems a bit excessive for this kind of map. Maybe OD8.5?
- 03:39:295 (1) - This NC is unnecessary o3o
- 04:12:552 (1) - Missing whistle?
- 04:18:038 (1) - Same.
- 06:34:838 (1,2,3,4,1) - I thought you were going to fix this...
Bubbled #2~ 
Wheeeee~
EDIT : 2manyqualifiedmapsfortoday c:
come back tomorrow!
EDIT : 2manyqualifiedmapsfortoday c:
come back tomorrow!
smth smth mandatory post about how manual sbing is the dumest thing to exist smth smth post
Actually you can come back in 2 hours more or less wSecretpipe wrote:
Wheeeee~
EDIT : 2manyqualifiedmapsfortoday c:
come back tomorrow!
Combo colors are very bright and they are too similar to the background/storyboard. That might cause a disqualify if you ask me.
BTW OD9.3 pls so it's the same like AR and it gives a little bit more pp. You know, we should support players during their hard work, shall we? \WWWWWWWW/
EDIT: Instead of looking at cute songs and cute maps go back to my Kac (TV Size) and mod it & circle it as you promised 2 months ago you Baguette. : /
Combo2 : 183,70,123
Combo3 : 213,70,73
BTW OD9.3 pls so it's the same like AR and it gives a little bit more pp. You know, we should support players during their hard work, shall we? \WWWWWWWW/
EDIT: Instead of looking at cute songs and cute maps go back to my Kac (TV Size) and mod it & circle it as you promised 2 months ago you Baguette. : /
Secretpipe wrote:
Wheeeee~
niceeeeeee 
Congratulations 
Hello.
There could be a lot of improvements on this map. This map is fun to play, but there is a lot of weird and clunky things concerning its structure.
The quality could be improved a lot, imo the ranking process of that map is just messed up, seriously.
I don't really see a lot of mods, This kind of maps is a little challenging, and this kind of maps needs more testplays, more feedbacks and more mods from experienced persons. And also, as i said, the ranking process of this map is messed up, you must be joking...
There could be a lot of improvements on this map. This map is fun to play, but there is a lot of weird and clunky things concerning its structure.
The quality could be improved a lot, imo the ranking process of that map is just messed up, seriously.
Examples of weird things.
- 00:22:496 (3,4,5,6,7) - First, could you explain me why there is a different spacing here ? it looks more clunky than intentional. And also, the flow could be improved here, AR9.3 helps a lot the player to play this pattern naturally. And same for 00:23:182 (8) -
- 00:32:610 (5,6) - I don't really get your logic, sometimes there is a higher spacing, and sometimes there is a smaller. I mean, compared to the previous note of each streams. And that could be not comfortable to play for a player, and thanks to the OD9, when playing, you see that you're hitting the objects too early because the player gets 100.
- 00:39:467 (6,7,8) - Here too, this is really unfortable to play for a player, he is just helped with AR9.3. There is a different spacing, and the angle between these circles is near to 180*, everything that makes a pattern not comfortable to play.
- 05:47:524 (2,3) - Here the flow could be improved, the circle (3) doesn't allow players to play the previous slider properly, and they could get a 100 on this slider, Just see (3) is at the same place as (8) :
I don't really see a lot of mods, This kind of maps is a little challenging, and this kind of maps needs more testplays, more feedbacks and more mods from experienced persons. And also, as i said, the ranking process of this map is messed up, you must be joking...
Topic Starter
Sorry for placing notes 1mm off, never did use DS anyways. I think that part should be mapped with the flow breaks you mentioned because it fits the music, considering sliders don't even fit in that part anyways. Yes I know i still used them, but it's because of obvious reasons
I got no fucking idea what you just said, try hitting 300.
Also this is how you play that slider and it works p well imo:
And no I'm not joking, if you actually look at the map and listen to the song, you'll see that it's super repetitive, meaning that the map is super repetitive and patterns are repeating themselves over and over again, which means it doesn't really need a lot of modding. And for your information I did have a huge amount of testplays, I just never mention them in the description, because who the hell cares?
I got no fucking idea what you just said, try hitting 300.
Also this is how you play that slider and it works p well imo:
And no I'm not joking, if you actually look at the map and listen to the song, you'll see that it's super repetitive, meaning that the map is super repetitive and patterns are repeating themselves over and over again, which means it doesn't really need a lot of modding. And for your information I did have a huge amount of testplays, I just never mention them in the description, because who the hell cares?
あなたの両方がどうもうな
this is what i think he was tryna do ok ok o ko ko ko ko ko
Triangles are p nice imo.
this is what i think he was tryna do ok ok o ko ko ko ko ko
00:22:496 (3,4,5,6,7) - First, could you explain me why there is a different spacing here ? it looks more clunky than intentional. And also, the flow could be improved here, AR9.3 helps a lot the player to play this pattern naturally. And same for 00:23:182 (8) -
Triangles are p nice imo.
00:32:610 (5,6) - I don't really get your logic, sometimes there is a higher spacing, and sometimes there is a smaller. I mean, compared to the previous note of each streams. And that could be not comfortable to play for a player, and thanks to the OD9, when playing, you see that you're hitting the objects too early because the player gets 100.this one actualyl makes spacing emphasis imo lol. You have 00:32:096 (2,3,4) - with lower spacing compared to 00:31:753 (1,2) - cuz u have the strong emphasis on the snare requiring more energy to play. 00:32:439 (4,5,6) - this has quite moderate spacing because 5 and 6 have stronger emphasis so it'd make sense to add more spacing on for them that is more than 00:32:096 (2,3,4) - but less than 00:31:753 (1,2) - cuz the emphasis is on 2 notes now and not 1, which evens it out kinda u feel.
00:39:467 (6,7,8) - Here too, this is really unfortable to play for a player, he is just helped with AR9.3. There is a different spacing, and the angle between these circles is near to 180*, everything that makes a pattern not comfortable to play.This looks structured idk wot ur talkin about. Also same thing w. spacing emphasis. Angle might not look nice but i havent seen anyone rip on it so.
05:47:524 (2,3) - Here the flow could be improved, the circle (3) doesn't allow players to play the previous slider properly, and they could get a 100 on this slider, Just see (3) is at the same place as (8) :thing aiceo did at above post k
u r a 少大豆Aiceo wrote:
あなたは、食器用洗剤のようなにおいVINXIS wrote:
あなたの両方がどうもうな
EDIT: New page and i have to make this ~related~ to the map agksfd
lotsa triangles in the map l0l
I get your first 3 points, and they do make sense. But if you get confused over a small change in spacing like that (not everyone maps perfectly with DS), then you are not good enough to play this map properly (not even passing it). Since you are a high ranked player, I suppose you can easily see that the time between is just 1/2 like the other objects, since that's the only logical timing it can have.Cherry Blossom wrote:
Hello.
There could be a lot of improvements on this map. This map is fun to play, but there is a lot of weird and clunky things concerning its structure.
The quality could be improved a lot, imo the ranking process of that map is just messed up, seriously.
Examples of weird things.I didn't check carefully the whole map, i just pointed out some examples to show you that this map could be improved a lot.
- 00:22:496 (3,4,5,6,7) - First, could you explain me why there is a different spacing here ? it looks more clunky than intentional. And also, the flow could be improved here, AR9.3 helps a lot the player to play this pattern naturally. And same for 00:23:182 (8) -
- 00:32:610 (5,6) - I don't really get your logic, sometimes there is a higher spacing, and sometimes there is a smaller. I mean, compared to the previous note of each streams. And that could be not comfortable to play for a player, and thanks to the OD9, when playing, you see that you're hitting the objects too early because the player gets 100.
- 00:39:467 (6,7,8) - Here too, this is really unfortable to play for a player, he is just helped with AR9.3. There is a different spacing, and the angle between these circles is near to 180*, everything that makes a pattern not comfortable to play.
- 05:47:524 (2,3) - Here the flow could be improved, the circle (3) doesn't allow players to play the previous slider properly, and they could get a 100 on this slider, Just see (3) is at the same place as (8) :
I don't really see a lot of mods, This kind of maps is a little challenging, and this kind of maps needs more testplays, more feedbacks and more mods from experienced persons. And also, as i said, the ranking process of this map is messed up, you must be joking...
That last suggestion is just a normal pattern, I don't see the issue. The circle behind that slider emphasizes the vocals a little, and a map with a full circular flow would be boring.
These things could be improved (the spacing "issues"), but imo it's not mandatory if the mapper cares less about these things. Is it readable? Yes. Does it bother me? No. Maybe it bothers you when playing, which is completely fine, but if that is true then there are a lot of recently qualified maps with the same issues.
first off, want to improve the map? find it and mod it before its qualified.
secondly, the things/flow "failures" you mentioned are not clunky and don't play bad, not in 180< bpm.
thirdly, why would different spacing confuse the player.. as long as it's similar to what was used before. give me a break, the song/map is already consistent as hell, if it was all mapped using 1,4x DS for verses and 1,7x DS for choruses i'd die from boredom.
secondly, the things/flow "failures" you mentioned are not clunky and don't play bad, not in 180< bpm.
thirdly, why would different spacing confuse the player.. as long as it's similar to what was used before. give me a break, the song/map is already consistent as hell, if it was all mapped using 1,4x DS for verses and 1,7x DS for choruses i'd die from boredom.
no, that's not how it works. as long as a map is not ranked it can still recieve mods, and in case it gets disqualified those mods should still be looked at and responded to.Mazzerin wrote:
first off, want to improve the map? find it and mod it before its qualified.
Awh well, I guess i didn't have to talk here.
It's useless to talk with you, all. Can't defeat circlejerking.
I just hope something on DAY6 won't happen to you, it will be sad and frustrating, you've been warned.
It's useless to talk with you, all. Can't defeat circlejerking.
I just hope something on DAY6 won't happen to you, it will be sad and frustrating, you've been warned.
The thing is, I don't think it's worth DQ'ing for, unlike other, bigger issues with maps that get qualified way too fast. I agree that it could have received more mods, but I doubt it would have a large enough impact on the quality it currently has.Cherry Blossom wrote:
Awh well, I guess i didn't have to talk here.
It's useless to talk with you, all. Can't defeat circlejerking.
I just hope something on DAY6 won't happen to you, it will be sad and frustrating, you've been warned.
sinisterCherry Blossom wrote:
It's useless to talk with you, all. Can't defeat circlejerking.
Considering the lack of stream jumps and the common frequency of circles under sliderends, players aren't going to be taking shortcuts on most of the sliders.
I do agree with the spacing points though, it's oddly inconsistent.
I do agree with the spacing points though, it's oddly inconsistent.
fated day6
Disqualification Notice
Hello!
Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.
Revelation
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Unused Files
There are unused files in the "safe" folder. Please remove them.
There are several spots with inconsistent spacing, which results in a flow that is uncomfortable to play.
- 00:22:152 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
- 00:25:582 (4,5,6) -
- 02:32:438 (1,2,3,4) -
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The Beatmap Nominators may handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.
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The red tick on 02:32:438 (1,2,3,4) - (2) felt like a stronger beat (there is some kind of tone, a voice and a bass-kick, so I though emphasizing that a little bit, so the anti-flow is completely intentional. A map full of circular flow is simply boring, especially in a song like this.
I don't see a problem at all with (3,4) so idk why you linked that as well.
The inconsistent spacing does not make it uncomfortable to play imho, but it might look weird.
Aiceo stay calm pls :^)
The red tick on 02:32:438 (1,2,3,4) - (2) felt like a stronger beat (there is some kind of tone, a voice and a bass-kick, so I though emphasizing that a little bit, so the anti-flow is completely intentional. A map full of circular flow is simply boring, especially in a song like this.
I don't see a problem at all with (3,4) so idk why you linked that as well.
The inconsistent spacing does not make it uncomfortable to play imho, but it might look weird.
Aiceo stay calm pls :^)
9.3 is slow tooSyrte wrote:
Ar9 would be way to slow... 9,3 is perfect in my opinion.
10 is perfect in my opinion
I think AR 69 is bettercr1m wrote:
9.3 is slow tooSyrte wrote:
Ar9 would be way to slow... 9,3 is perfect in my opinion.
10 is perfect in my opinion
united has nearly the same jumps (5,4 star rating without streams) and its ar9,2 but it's somehow fine
fucking vinxis made me lose pp gg
fucking vinxis made me lose pp gg
offset +5 to +10ms! (i used +7ms, but you should check yourself. azer also confirmed this onstream)
regarding flow and spacing, i disagree with the DQ but ok.
ar9.3 is fine as well due to the rather jumpy map IMO
good luck with the rerank!
regarding flow and spacing, i disagree with the DQ but ok.
ar9.3 is fine as well due to the rather jumpy map IMO
good luck with the rerank!
Topic Starter
Remapping some parts since the map didn't look pretty enough for qats, sadly.
THANKS VINXIS - 2 PP XD
jk i love u. gl on rerank xdd
jk i love u. gl on rerank xdd
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I don't even hav the safe folder in mine d