- Bad Apple - wrote:

-IT'S TIME TO MO-MO-MOD!

- Don't open me -

Everything mentioned in my Mods is subjective and should be treated as a suggestion. If I find an UNRANKABLE issue, it'll be marked RED.
When replying to the Mod, please consider telling me whether or not you've applied parts of the Mod and why you did/didn't.
If you have any further questions, feel free to ask me here or ingame.

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Hey there, Avalon :3
Here's your Mod from my queue!

- General -

- The Mp3 file you're using has a sample-rate of 181kbit, I'm not sure whether or not that could be an issue if you're trying to rank it, so I would search for an audiofile with 128kbit instead
- I think you should use "Bungaku Shoujo" as the source (I'm assuming that's where the song comes from )

- Lv.6 -

- I would suggest reducing OD and HP to 7, since the map is relatively easy :3 OK
00:03:954 - add on 4? it has the same sound as 00:03:240 - low pitch i think ._.
00:11:573 - add on 1? same as above ^
00:53:359 (53359|2,53359|3,53716|1,53716|0,53954|2,53954|3) - Ctrl+H for better balance? hmm, keep for special purpose xD. . .
01:10:859 - I hear a kick drum here, would suggest adding a note on 1 for it alright, OK
01:12:763 - ^ same as above, but this time on 4 OK
01:52:049 - kick drum here aswell, maybe add one (on 3 or 4) keep . . . i count the LN as 1 note in this diff
02:07:763 - you didn't map the snare drum here with two notes (like you did all the time), I would either add two on 1 and 3 or 1 and 4, or remove the single note on 02:07:644 - to keep pattern consistency avoid boring . . . so i map the piano xD
02:09:192 - again, kick drum and piano, so I would add a note it will make for more harder . . but maybe i will considered to change it xD

- Lv.10 -

00:03:954 - again, maps the same sound as the double-chords before, so maybe add one x) alright, now, its okay for Lv.10 xD
00:11:573 - ^ same OK
00:13:716 - there is a piano sound here you could map diffrerent piano sound . . . keep
00:39:668 - add one on 3 to keep pattern consistency (2 notes every second kick drum) i only put 2 note for drum that contain a clap sound here xD
00:41:573 - ^ same ^
02:01:930 - add note on 1 for the kick drum nice catch ! OK

I have to say, I really like the way you map and I really enjoyed playing the mapset. Best of luck for Ranked!
Apple oh thank you so much. . . . it's my pleasure

Thanks for your mod . . . Bad Apple-san

Spy wrote:

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2015-05-30 21:00 [ A v a l o n ]: XD  . . .  start now :3 ?
2015-05-30 21:00 Spy: OK
2015-05-30 21:00 Spy: np the map
2015-05-30 21:00 [ A v a l o n ]: wait . . i forgot da name . .LOL
2015-05-30 21:01 [ A v a l o n ]: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/703896 Koshimizu Ami - Hari no Sora]
2015-05-30 21:01 Spy: LOL
2015-05-30 21:01 [ A v a l o n ]: *slap myself . . btw start at lv.6 or 10 ?
2015-05-30 21:01 Spy: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/703897 Koshimizu Ami - Hari no Sora [Lv.6]]
2015-05-30 21:01 Spy: First
2015-05-30 21:01 [ A v a l o n ]: =w=)b
2015-05-30 21:02 [ A v a l o n ]: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/703897 Koshimizu Ami - Hari no Sora [Lv.6]]
2015-05-30 21:02 Spy: For general, how do you think about hitsounding
2015-05-30 21:02 Spy: I feel soft-hitnormal is a little loud
2015-05-30 21:02 Spy: I may recommend you take my soft-hitnormal
2015-05-30 21:03 [ A v a l o n ]: hmmm. . . .xD . . i just take from anither map . .. oki let see ur hitsound =w=
2015-05-30 21:03 [ A v a l o n ]: *another
2015-05-30 21:03 Spy: OK
2015-05-30 21:03 [ A v a l o n ]: wait . . . i didn't have soft-hitnormal on the mapset ._.
2015-05-30 21:04 Spy: Yes, so take mine to use may be better because my hitnormal adjusted the volumn
2015-05-30 21:04 [ A v a l o n ]: oki doki . . .
2015-05-30 21:06 [ A v a l o n ]: waiting . . . xD
2015-05-30 21:07 Spy: 00:01:097 (1097|2) - 
2015-05-30 21:07 Spy: 00:01:573 (1573|2,3478|2) - 
2015-05-30 21:07 Spy: Hitsounds like as these, well I think unnecessary
2015-05-30 21:08 Spy: Especially it is a quite calm song
2015-05-30 21:08 O_O . . . yea . . i think so . ..  * me noob
2015-05-30 21:09 [ A v a l o n ]: btw . . HS still in progress xD
2015-05-30 21:09 Spy: Remember, when we're doing hitsounding, at least in mania, we must find similar sound to do
2015-05-30 21:09 [ A v a l o n ]: similar sound . ..  =w=)b same sound at bgm right ?
2015-05-30 21:09 Spy: No need same since you can't find 100% same, just similar
2015-05-30 21:10 [ A v a l o n ]: oh ok . . . btw 00:00:621 - 00:13:954 - can left empty without HS ?
2015-05-30 21:10 [ A v a l o n ]: *until
2015-05-30 21:11 Spy: No problem
2015-05-30 21:12 [ A v a l o n ]: oki . . . i will left that empty =w=
2015-05-30 21:13 [ A v a l o n ]: :3 how's the pattern ?
2015-05-30 21:14 Spy: Patterns are fine actually
2015-05-30 21:14 [ A v a l o n ]: :3 ayy thanks xD
2015-05-30 21:16 Spy: 00:21:811 (21811|3,22049|0,22287|1,22525|2,22882|3) - 
2015-05-30 21:16 Spy: Actually I feel the pitches seems not like this..
2015-05-30 21:17 [ A v a l o n ]: hmmm . . . actually .. i get confused to place the LN here xD
2015-05-30 21:18 Spy: aw
2015-05-30 21:18 [ A v a l o n ]: xD . . . any suggestion for that part :3 ?
2015-05-30 21:19 Spy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190182 I may change like as this, aw, I feel first 3 LN are continuous, and fourth is not
2015-05-30 21:21 [ A v a l o n ]: omg . .. really nice when i test it xD . . .=w=)b
2015-05-30 21:21 Spy: :D
2015-05-30 21:21 [ A v a l o n ]: :D
2015-05-30 21:22 [ A v a l o n ]: applied as well :3
2015-05-30 21:22 Spy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190200
2015-05-30 21:22 Spy: Personally I suggest this
2015-05-30 21:23 [ A v a l o n ]: hmm. . .. wait xD
2015-05-30 21:24 [ A v a l o n ]: need to compare xD
2015-05-30 21:24 Spy: I just feel second one is better ~
2015-05-30 21:24 [ A v a l o n ]: YES . .  take the second suggestion :D
2015-05-30 21:24 Spy: OK :D
2015-05-30 21:24 [ A v a l o n ]: yea . .  really better :3
2015-05-30 21:25 Spy: Honestly patterns are really fine, just I think the instrument following can be better
2015-05-30 21:26 Spy: I'll point out later
2015-05-30 21:26 Spy: Let's continue
2015-05-30 21:26 Spy: 00:38:716 - This part
2015-05-30 21:26 [ A v a l o n ]: ah . .  my pleasure xD . . .yea i need some learning about following the instrument
2015-05-30 21:26 [ A v a l o n ]: yes ?
2015-05-30 21:26 Spy: You can see like as 00:39:192 - is getting heavy beats, so
2015-05-30 21:27 Spy: 00:39:192 - 00:39:668 - 00:40:144 - 00:41:097 - 00:41:573 - 00:42:049 - can just add one more
2015-05-30 21:28 Spy: 00:43:001 - 00:43:954 - Same but not important as latter
2015-05-30 21:28 [ A v a l o n ]: xD it make the pattern more harder i think :3 . . . and i just put 2 notes if contains a cymbal sound like finish sound i think . . .so it's okay ?
2015-05-30 21:29 [ A v a l o n ]: for this part only :3
2015-05-30 21:29 Spy: It's fine, just hm, I feel it may can makes the "feel" in this part
2015-05-30 21:30 Spy: 01:00:144 (60144|0,60859|2) - missed clap
2015-05-30 21:31 [ A v a l o n ]: yea . .  i think same too . . .  but i guess the noob player can't handle it xD
2015-05-30 21:31 Spy: 01:01:097 (61097|3) - Same
2015-05-30 21:31 Spy: You may think too much lol, due to BPM is low, I think it may be fine
2015-05-30 21:31 Spy: 01:03:001 (63001|2) - missed clap
2015-05-30 21:31 [ A v a l o n ]: ok . . btw . .. HS still BOOM . . not checked yet after ctrl G or ctrl H after modding . . i will check the HS later xD
2015-05-30 21:32 Spy: LOL OK
2015-05-30 21:32 [ A v a l o n ]: lol sorry xD
2015-05-30 21:32 Spy: 01:04:430 (64430|2) - 
2015-05-30 21:32 Spy: How do you think about if remove it
2015-05-30 21:32 Spy: After removed, just use 100% to review this part to check the effect after removed
2015-05-30 21:33 Spy: I think it may be better
2015-05-30 21:33 [ A v a l o n ]: oh . ..  so just following the kick only ?
2015-05-30 21:33 Spy: snares/kicks I think
2015-05-30 21:33 Spy: Sometimes
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: When you're mapping
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: Hm
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: After finished a part
2015-05-30 21:34 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: Review it
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: And use normal speed to check it
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: Whether it is the "feel" you want to make
2015-05-30 21:34 Spy: In such lower difficulity it is very obvious
2015-05-30 21:35 [ A v a l o n ]: OK sensei . . . . owo / . . .
2015-05-30 21:35 Spy: We often follow obvious easy understandable instruments in Normal, or Hard(For me it is)
2015-05-30 21:36 [ A v a l o n ]: =w=)b
2015-05-30 21:36 Spy: So while mapping Easy/Normal diffs
2015-05-30 21:37 Spy: Just better not to follow unobvious sounds
2015-05-30 21:37 Spy: So according to what I said here, 01:04:430 (64430|2) - this one is kinda unobvious
2015-05-30 21:37 Spy: Especially it is unobvious and the sound be covered with your hitsound, if you noticed it
2015-05-30 21:38 [ A v a l o n ]: yea . .. so i will remove it xD
2015-05-30 21:39 Spy: 01:23:478 - I think it may really no reason only 1 note here
2015-05-30 21:39 Spy: Since you add 2 notes for same sound
2015-05-30 21:39 Spy: aw wait
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: misunderstand, lol
2015-05-30 21:40 [ A v a l o n ]: Xd
2015-05-30 21:40 [ A v a l o n ]: lol . . makes me scared
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: 01:24:192 (84192|1,84430|2) - 
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: You may can try to make it in same column
2015-05-30 21:40 Spy: You may know what I want to make here
2015-05-30 21:41 [ A v a l o n ]: col 3 is fine ?
2015-05-30 21:41 Spy: No problem
2015-05-30 21:41 Spy: 01:28:240 (88240|3) - NICE HITSOUND, LOL
2015-05-30 21:41 [ A v a l o n ]: really nice ? lol
2015-05-30 21:41 Spy: No
2015-05-30 21:41 Spy: ACTION slaps
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: fak yea
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: :v
2015-05-30 21:42 Spy: LOL
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: WTF is that
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: LOL
2015-05-30 21:42 Spy: You should ask yourself due to the map is yours
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: sampleset normal . . lol
2015-05-30 21:42 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 21:42 [ A v a l o n ]: changed
2015-05-30 21:43 Spy: 01:47:287 - 
2015-05-30 21:43 Spy: Then
2015-05-30 21:43 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 21:43 Spy: I think you can start to change the instruments here
2015-05-30 21:43 Spy: Follow the piano mainly
2015-05-30 21:44 [ A v a l o n ]: piano only is better /
2015-05-30 21:44 [ A v a l o n ]: ?
2015-05-30 21:44 Spy: Oh do you think drum only is better ?
2015-05-30 21:44 Spy: *Or
2015-05-30 21:44 Spy: 02:15:859 (135859|3,136335|2,136811|1,137287|0) - 
2015-05-30 21:45 [ A v a l o n ]: yes ?
2015-05-30 21:45 Spy: 02:17:763 (137763|3,138001|2,138240|1,138478|0,139430|1,139668|3,139906|2,140144|1,140382|0,140620|2,140859|1,141097|3,141335|0,141573|2,141811|1,142049|2,142287|3,142525|2,142763|1,143478|3,143597|0,143716|1,143835|2,143954|3,144073|0,144192|1,144311|2,144430|3,144549|0,144668|1) - You also followed piano hre
2015-05-30 21:45 Spy: Aren't you ?
2015-05-30 21:45 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 21:46 [ A v a l o n ]: yea i followed piano on that part o_o
2015-05-30 21:46 Spy: Yes, and I think uh
2015-05-30 21:47 Spy: You followed drums in much parts
2015-05-30 21:47 [ A v a l o n ]: bad :v ?
2015-05-30 21:47 Spy: If you keep it, it may be boring
2015-05-30 21:48 [ A v a l o n ]: hmmm . . . i totally get confused xD
2015-05-30 21:48 Spy: And follow piano may make it easier or just same, anyway it won't make it harder I'm sure
2015-05-30 21:48 Spy: Hm ?
2015-05-30 21:48 [ A v a l o n ]: so what's the best for that part :3 ?
2015-05-30 21:48 Spy: If for me, I may map piano
2015-05-30 21:49 Spy: 01:01:573 (61573|3,61573|0,61811|2,62049|0,62287|1,62525|3,62763|0,63001|2,63240|3,63478|1,63478|2,63716|0,63954|3,64192|0,64430|2,64668|1,64906|3,65144|0,65382|2,65382|3) - 
2015-05-30 21:49 [ A v a l o n ]: start here right ? 02:17:763 -
2015-05-30 21:50 Spy: Just like as these, you've done same thing here, in the end I think it may be better if you follow the piano since it is main sound and it can makes your diff be interesting more
2015-05-30 21:50 Spy: 01:47:287 - here
2015-05-30 21:51 [ A v a l o n ]: YOSH . . oki doki . . ..  (^ ^)7
2015-05-30 21:52 [ A v a l o n ]: wait i update diff . . .you can check it right or not xD
2015-05-30 21:53 Spy: OK~
2015-05-30 21:53 [ A v a l o n ]: updated ~
2015-05-30 21:54 Spy: 00:13:478 (13478|1) - 
2015-05-30 21:55 Spy: How about change to 00:13:478 - 00:13:716 - add one note and remove the LN ?
2015-05-30 21:55 [ A v a l o n ]: oki changed :3
2015-05-30 21:56 Spy: OK
2015-05-30 21:56 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:47:287 - the piano is right  ? . . or need more notes xD ?
2015-05-30 21:57 Spy: It depends on you, you can just add one more note
2015-05-30 21:58 [ A v a l o n ]: hmm . . . ok . . . so if it's following piano until the end . . .  is more interisting for you :3 ?
2015-05-30 21:59 Spy: Yea, at least for me :D
2015-05-30 22:00 [ A v a l o n ]: ok . . it'fine for mee too xD . . .
2015-05-30 22:01 Spy: OK ~
2015-05-30 22:03 [ A v a l o n ]: Lv.6 passed xD for now . . .:3 ? . . continue to lv 10 ?
2015-05-30 22:04 Spy: OK
2015-05-30 22:05 [ A v a l o n ]: testplay first pls xD /. . .lol
2015-05-30 22:06 Spy: Lv.10 ?
2015-05-30 22:09 [ A v a l o n ]: aw sorry spy . .. my internet is BOOM xD
2015-05-30 22:09 Spy: yea ?
2015-05-30 22:10 [ A v a l o n ]: already testplay the lv.10 ?
2015-05-30 22:10 Spy: You don't have the map ?
2015-05-30 22:10 [ A v a l o n ]: heee ? lol
2015-05-30 22:10 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 22:11 [ A v a l o n ]: "latest pending version" . . .xD
2015-05-30 22:11 [ A v a l o n ]: lv.10 xD
2015-05-30 22:13 [ A v a l o n ]: aaa
2015-05-30 22:13 Spy: 00:13:716 - Missed note
2015-05-30 22:14 [ A v a l o n ]: hmm ok . . .but i think it's different piano that i follow from the first xD
2015-05-30 22:15 [ A v a l o n ]: aww fak . .slaps my ear . .. OK applied
2015-05-30 22:16 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 22:17 Spy: 00:29:192 (29192|0,29311|2,29430|1,29668|3) - 
2015-05-30 22:17 Spy: You follow same as 00:27:287 (27287|2,27406|0,27525|3,27763|2) - 
2015-05-30 22:17 Spy: But
2015-05-30 22:18 Spy: 00:29:430 - 00:29:668 - 00:29:906 - has one more piano sound
2015-05-30 22:18 Spy: I think these can add 
2015-05-30 22:18 [ A v a l o n ]: ok i changed . . . i put 2 note for heavy piano sound =w=)b
2015-05-30 22:19 Spy: 00:53:240 (53240|0,53359|1,53359|2,53478|3) - 
2015-05-30 22:19 Spy: About these
2015-05-30 22:19 [ A v a l o n ]: ;w;
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3190463 I may change like as these
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: Hmm I don't know how to explain
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: But a note with double note which has opening(?) can express this part well imo
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: I don't know what I am express now
2015-05-30 22:20 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 22:21 [ A v a l o n ]: lol . .. but i will understand when i play it :3
2015-05-30 22:21 Spy: lol ok
2015-05-30 22:21 [ A v a l o n ]: nah . .now i'm understand . . OK applied =w=)b
2015-05-30 22:22 Spy: 01:15:859 (75859|3,75859|2,75978|1,75978|0,76097|3,76097|2,76216|0,76216|1,76335|3,76335|2,76454|0,76454|1,76573|3,76573|2,76692|0,76692|1) - 
2015-05-30 22:23 Spy: aw wait, seems fine
2015-05-30 22:23 [ A v a l o n ]: eheheheee . . dat part ;w;
2015-05-30 22:23 Spy: But I may not to map like this lol
2015-05-30 22:24 [ A v a l o n ]: lol . . . i try the other ways . . . but seems not fit xD . . and finally i get that :v
2015-05-30 22:24 [ A v a l o n ]: readable :v
2015-05-30 22:26 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 22:26 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 22:26 [ A v a l o n ]: *slap my self
2015-05-30 22:27 Spy: Actually for such calm song I may use 3 notes less
2015-05-30 22:27 Spy: But it is reasonable when I saw your patterns
2015-05-30 22:27 [ A v a l o n ]: :3
2015-05-30 22:27 Spy: 01:26:573 (86573|1,86573|2) - any difference with 01:26:097 (86097|1) - ?
2015-05-30 22:28 [ A v a l o n ]: 01:26:573 - well ithink this is have more heavy piano sound . ..  depends on my headphone . .lol
2015-05-30 22:29 [ A v a l o n ]: wait . . .  maybe it's same . . .aaaa . . what about you ?
2015-05-30 22:30 Spy: lol I just can't hear any difference
2015-05-30 22:30 Spy: Maybe hitsounds covered with its sound
2015-05-30 22:31 Spy: Did you added hitnormal ?
2015-05-30 22:31 Spy: If so I may redl again and check again
2015-05-30 22:31 [ A v a l o n ]: btw . . .  i didn't receive the link of that HS . . lol
2015-05-30 22:32 Spy: ha ?
2015-05-30 22:33 [ A v a l o n ]: really . . .
2015-05-30 22:33 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 22:33 Spy: o.o ??
2015-05-30 22:35 [ A v a l o n ]: heee . . . i don't understand xD . . . you recommended to use your hitnormal . . right ?
2015-05-30 22:35 [ A v a l o n ]: o.o
2015-05-30 22:37 [ A v a l o n ]: wtf what is happen here xD . . . i just use the default HS for hitnormal . . .
2015-05-30 22:37 Spy: aw check QQ PM
2015-05-30 22:38 [ A v a l o n ]: aw nothing on there o_o
2015-05-30 22:38 [ A v a l o n ]: accepted ! .. lol
2015-05-30 22:39 Spy: Just use that, it is the hitsound which has been turn down the volumn
2015-05-30 22:40 [ A v a l o n ]: OK . . .wait
2015-05-30 22:42 [ A v a l o n ]: updated ~
2015-05-30 22:43 Spy: ok~
2015-05-30 22:43 [ A v a l o n ]: btw . .lv.6 is under construction . .ignore the last part xD
2015-05-30 22:43 Spy: Maybe in timing, all can change to S:1
2015-05-30 22:44 Spy: S:C1
2015-05-30 22:45 [ A v a l o n ]: ok~
2015-05-30 22:45 Spy: And then general volumn can be higher
2015-05-30 22:45 Spy: Because after you changed to that, we almost can't hear it lol
2015-05-30 22:45 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 22:45 Spy: Just adjust the volume to the appropriate one
2015-05-30 22:46 [ A v a l o n ]: hmm what the best volume level for that ? . . . well i just very noob at this xD
2015-05-30 22:47 [ A v a l o n ]: at least for lower volume
2015-05-30 22:47 [ A v a l o n ]: 40% is enogh for you :3 ?
2015-05-30 22:48 Spy: Adjust it until you can hear the hitsound and then it is not noisy or annoying~
2015-05-30 22:48 [ A v a l o n ]: oh oki . ..
2015-05-30 22:50 [ A v a l o n ]: i put it on 55% . .for this part 00:00:621 -
2015-05-30 22:51 [ A v a l o n ]: ok next ?
2015-05-30 22:51 Spy: OK, remember to change to S:C1
2015-05-30 22:52 [ A v a l o n ]: ok . . already changed all timing to S:C1 :3
2015-05-30 22:52 Spy: remember change Lv.6 too then ~
2015-05-30 22:53 Spy: OK let's continue after updated
2015-05-30 22:55 [ A v a l o n ]: updated xD
2015-05-30 22:56 Spy: OK~
2015-05-30 23:01 [ A v a l o n ]: . . . .
2015-05-30 23:01 [ A v a l o n ]: lol
2015-05-30 23:02 Spy: 01:48:478 (108478|2) - 
2015-05-30 23:02 Spy: Remove may be better
2015-05-30 23:03 Spy: 01:50:382 (110382|1) - Same, imo
2015-05-30 23:03 [ A v a l o n ]: hhmmm every of them ?
2015-05-30 23:03 [ A v a l o n ]: XD . . too many like that
2015-05-30 23:04 Spy: Just make it has pause feel
2015-05-30 23:04 Spy: nonstop here is weird, you know I mean
2015-05-30 23:05 [ A v a l o n ]: ok . . . removed all of them xD
2015-05-30 23:05 Spy: 01:57:287 (117287|2,117287|0,117287|1,117287|3) - Why sudden 4 notes ?
2015-05-30 23:05 Spy: 02:00:144 (120144|3,120144|0,120144|1) - ^ sudden 3 notes ?
2015-05-30 23:05 [ A v a l o n ]: LOL . ..
2015-05-30 23:05 [ A v a l o n ]: my mistake
2015-05-30 23:05 Spy: lol
2015-05-30 23:05 Spy: 02:05:859 (125859|3,125859|0,125859|2) - 
2015-05-30 23:06 Spy: 02:06:811 (126811|1,126811|0,126811|2) - 
2015-05-30 23:06 Spy: 02:08:716 (128716|3,128716|1,128716|0) - 
2015-05-30 23:06 Spy: 02:24:549 (144549|2,144668|1) - 
2015-05-30 23:07 Spy: These are different from piano you followed
2015-05-30 23:07 [ A v a l o n ]: piano + clap . . .. well i use 2 for calp xD
2015-05-30 23:07 Spy: if you want to follow it, you had better add 02:24:787 - and 02:24:906 - too
2015-05-30 23:07 Spy: Aw lol
2015-05-30 23:07 [ A v a l o n ]: xD
2015-05-30 23:08 [ A v a l o n ]: 02:05:859 (125859|2,125859|0,125859|3) - piano + clap xD . . .or maybe it will be nice if only 2 notes ?
2015-05-30 23:09 Spy: Oh it's fine
2015-05-30 23:09 Spy: Just these ~
2015-05-30 23:12 [ A v a l o n ]: mod end ?
2015-05-30 23:12 Spy: Yes

Thanks for your advice and lesson Spy . . .<3
i learned so much from that xD

btw . . .wtf long irc :v

from my queue:

your first image is fairly blurry and has a column of black pixels along the right side. the second one is pretty good, but it doesn't seem like it's as sharp as it could be (though I can't quite tell what the cause is; it might just be due to the texture of the image and the resizing method).

so, I remade the first bg using this as the source. The text previously on the bg is no longer there, so if that was necessary I can re-add it.I also made a sharper version of the second bg, using this as the base. It doesn't have the floral pattern of the current bg, but you can use the included png for editing it in if you want/can.no kds

waw . .. very nice =w=)b
thanks Ringating for the background :3

i take the number one bg :3
maybe i will take the number 2 bg for my dekstop wallpaper . . lol

btw . .. thanks again

Hi Avalon!~

here's my mod
1|2|3|4

[Lv.6]
00:28:240 (28240|2,28716|3) - move to left, to feel more the note presence in column 2 and to avoid contact with 00:29:430 (29430|3) - so it will became balance
01:04:192 (64192|2) - fix the hitsound of this
01:24:192 (84192|2,84430|2) - i think this two have different sound... correct me if im wrong..
01:47:525 (107525|0,107644|1,107763|2) - move to right, its sheilding the LN and for balance cuz column 2 have a long rest compared with the other column
01:53:954 (113954|0) - delete? i dont know if your only following piano here
01:59:668 (119668|1) - ^
02:03:001 (123001|0,123478|1) - ctrl + j, for better blance
[Lv.10]
00:03:954 (3954|1) - move to 4, to be consistent with 00:03:240 - and the others
00:21:692 - add note, it can be notice cuz with have the same loudness with 00:21:930 (21930|0) -
00:23:835 - not adding this?
00:28:835 (28835|1) - delete? its not the same sound your following (can't describe it xD), it's just same with this 00:36:454 - ; if you apply it, 00:28:954 (28954|3) - move this to 2 for balance
00:36:930 - not adding?, it's so hearable
00:48:240 (48240|0) - move to 2 for balance
01:00:501 (60501|0) - delete this? it's better while playing, its just focusing the presence of the beat
01:03:359 (63359|1) - move to 1 for balance
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i might destroy your pattern here, you can ignore it, cuz i dont know how you map it
why 01:26:097 (86097|1,86097|2) - and 01:26:573 (86573|1,86573|2) - has double notes while 01:28:001 (88001|2) - is louder which has only 1 note?
* 01:26:097 (86097|2,86573|1) - delete, cuz 01:26:335 (86335|2,86573|2) - has more potential to be a jack and add note here 01:28:001 -
same case with 01:18:478 (78478|1,78478|2,78954|1,78954|2) - and 01:20:382 (80382|1) -
01:35:620 - add?
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Awesome Map!!!
have a star...
Good Luck nya!~

-SoraGami- wrote:

[Lv.6]
00:28:240 (28240|2,28716|3) - move to left, to feel more the note presence in column 2 and to avoid contact with 00:29:430 (29430|3) - so it will became balance OK
01:04:192 (64192|2) - fix the hitsound of this HS still progress . . so don't mod the HS lol
01:24:192 (84192|2,84430|2) - i think this two have different sound... correct me if im wrong.. the better feeling when you play that . . considered
01:47:525 (107525|0,107644|1,107763|2) - move to right, its sheilding the LN and for balance cuz column 2 have a long rest compared with the other column keep . . overused in the right hand 01:46:811 (106811|3,107287|2,107287|3) -
01:53:954 (113954|0) - delete? i dont know if your only following piano here lol deleted
01:59:668 (119668|1) - ^
02:03:001 (123001|0,123478|1) - ctrl + j, for better blance ^ ^ OK
[Lv.10]
00:03:954 (3954|1) - move to 4, to be consistent with 00:03:240 - and the others keep . . . it's different pitch
00:21:692 - add note, it can be notice cuz with have the same loudness with 00:21:930 (21930|0) - OK . . i didn't notice it
00:23:835 - not adding this? no
00:28:835 (28835|1) - delete? its not the same sound your following (can't describe it xD), it's just same with this 00:36:454 - ; if you apply it, 00:28:954 (28954|3) - move this to 2 for balance keep desu
00:36:930 - not adding?, it's so hearable OK
00:48:240 (48240|0) - move to 2 for balance re arrange
01:00:501 (60501|0) - delete this? it's better while playing, its just focusing the presence of the beat keep . . it will be weird pattern . . cuz this 01:00:382 (60382|3) - is exist before
01:03:359 (63359|1) - move to 1 for balance keep . . btw, if moved to other it's not balanced too . . . i just want to keep the pitch here
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i might destroy your pattern here, you can ignore it, cuz i dont know how you map it
why 01:26:097 (86097|1,86097|2) - and 01:26:573 (86573|1,86573|2) - has double notes while 01:28:001 (88001|2) - is louder which has only 1 note?
* 01:26:097 (86097|2,86573|1) - delete, cuz 01:26:335 (86335|2,86573|2) - has more potential to be a jack and add note here 01:28:001 -
same case with 01:18:478 (78478|1,78478|2,78954|1,78954|2) - and 01:20:382 (80382|1) -
01:35:620 - add? btw usage 2 notes is to express the piano push here . . . maybe will changed in another time . . thanks for point that
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Awesome Map!!!
have a star...
Good Luck nya!~

thanks for mod and star xD

hi and 1 - 4 lets go

level 6

um, well, you see, I've goes through your map, and it seems that my suggestions regarding PR would be overkill and will definitely rip apart your pattern, but I guess it won't hurt to state my opinion, on rough basis. I'd put them in spoiler, so you can either close your eyes and pretend to see nothing, or if you're curious you can click onto the horizon line of spoiler.

first of all, from 00:00:621 (621|0) - to 00:03:954 (3954|0) - is good.

00:07:287 (7287|0) - being the loudest and highest pitch, try to exclude it from your stair notes, move it to 4
00:07:525 (7525|2,7763|3) - move them 1 time to the left

00:21:573 (21573|0,21573|1) - very weak and meaningless sound, there's no reason to put 2 notes here
00:25:382 (25382|0,25382|1) - same reason

00:26:573 (26573|1) - missing note, add note for consistency and readable pattern, refer 00:25:382 (25382|1,25620|2,25859|0) -
00:28:478 (28478|3) - same reason

00:30:144 (30144|0,30144|3) - well, instead of 2 notes here, i would delete 00:30:144 (30144|3) - , and move 00:30:144 (30144|0) - sync it with pr.
00:30:620 (30620|3) - obviously, moved to 1

00:37:049 (37049|0,37287|3,37525|0,37644|1) - looks quite random to me. well, i suggest:
00:37:049 (37049|0) - move to 2
00:37:287 (37287|3) - move to 1
00:37:525 (37525|0,37644|1) - shift them 2 times to the right
00:38:001 (38001|3) - move to 2

00:48:954 (48954|3,49192|2,49430|0,49668|1,49906|3,49906|2,50144|1,50144|0) - you know what, just press ctrl + H and they'll look better and sync, pr-wise as well

00:50:859 (50859|3,51097|2,51335|1,51573|2,51811|3,52049|2,52287|1,52525|0,52763|1,53001|3,53001|2) - copy-pasta clone notes, avoid excessively cloning your notes from 1 to another diff- Also, i suggest you to plot notes based on different sound base here.
Solution for above statement: Delete 00:51:335 (51335|1,52287|1) - and re-pattern the rest 00:50:620 (50620|1,50859|3,51097|2,51573|2,51811|3,52049|2) - use pr

00:53:001 (53001|2,53001|3) - is not equal to 00:53:359 (53359|2,53359|3) - , listen deeply, it's different sound. But, 00:53:716 (53716|0,53716|1) - is equal to 00:53:954 (53954|3,53954|2) - , so they should be in the same column instead- do something about them

01:02:406 (62406|2,62763|2) - , nah don't use jack pattern yet, for the time being implement different pattern variation. I suggest:
01:02:763 (62763|2) - move to 2
01:03:001 (63001|0) - move to 3

- 01:06:216 (66216|1) - starting at this point you may kept your jack notes -
01:08:120 (68120|1,68478|2) - you need to plot them in the same column, the same as you did with 01:06:216 (66216|1,66573|1) - to preserve notes consistency
01:08:716 (68716|0,68716|1) - gives wider gap, for pattern flow. suggest move them to 1 and 4 respectively
01:08:954 (68954|3) - move to 2
01:09:192 (69192|1) - move to 4

01:10:620 (70620|3) - um, put this to 1 for cow sake
01:10:859 (70859|0) - move to 2
01:11:097 (71097|1) - move to 4
01:11:573 (71573|0,72049|0) - move them to column 4, sequence repetition with 01:09:668 (69668|3,70144|3) -

Well, I'll stop here


Good luck with your map <:

Kruzon wrote:

hi and 1 - 4 lets go

level 6

um, well, you see, I've goes through your map, and it seems that my suggestions regarding PR would be overkill and will definitely rip apart your pattern, but I guess it won't hurt to state my opinion, on rough basis. I'd put them in spoiler, so you can either close your eyes and pretend to see nothing, or if you're curious you can click onto the horizon line of spoiler.

first of all, from 00:00:621 (621|0) - to 00:03:954 (3954|0) - is good.

Normally, i would ask you to align 00:01:097 (1097|2,1811|3,2525|0) - on the same column for better emphasizing the notes placement, fitting with the rhythm. Making your notes goes stair mode all the way is a good move as a pattern in a long term, but it's not a wise choice to ignore pr at this point, imo. i think i will keep the current pattern

00:07:287 (7287|0) - being the loudest and highest pitch, try to exclude it from your stair notes, move it to 4 OK
00:07:525 (7525|2,7763|3) - move them 1 time to the left i do some re-arrange

00:21:573 (21573|0,21573|1) - very weak and meaningless sound, there's no reason to put 2 notes here
00:25:382 (25382|0,25382|1) - same reason ^ ^ to express bass pressure here . . . to avoid being boring too . .well, considered

00:26:573 (26573|1) - missing note, add note for consistency and readable pattern, refer 00:25:382 (25382|1,25620|2,25859|0) - OK
00:28:478 (28478|3) - same reason OK

00:30:144 (30144|0,30144|3) - well, instead of 2 notes here, i would delete 00:30:144 (30144|3) - , and move 00:30:144 (30144|0) - sync it with pr.
00:30:620 (30620|3) - obviously, moved to 1 applied the deleted one

00:37:049 (37049|0,37287|3,37525|0,37644|1) - looks quite random to me. well, i suggest:
00:37:049 (37049|0) - move to 2
00:37:287 (37287|3) - move to 1
00:37:525 (37525|0,37644|1) - shift them 2 times to the right
00:38:001 (38001|3) - move to 2 ^ ^ ^ OK

00:44:430 (44430|0,44430|3,44906|1,44906|2,45382|0,45382|1,45859|3,45859|0,46097|2,46335|1,46335|3) - well.. it does look okay i suppose..
00:46:335 (46335|3,46335|1) - I agreed you put 2 notes here, because it's necessary to represent loudness here. But, you're making 00:44:430 (44430|0,44430|3,44906|1,44906|2,45382|0,45382|1,45859|3,45859|0) - having 2 notes as well, despite just being a kick sound. moreover, this is killing off meaning on 00:46:335 (46335|3,46335|1) - which have 2 notes to emphasize the loud sound.. I suggest to use only 1 note on 00:44:430 (44430|0,44430|3,44906|1,44906|2,45382|0,45382|1,45859|0,45859|3) - i would keep this . . . if someone point this again, i will change that

00:48:954 (48954|3,49192|2,49430|0,49668|1,49906|3,49906|2,50144|1,50144|0) - you know what, just press ctrl + H and they'll look better and sync, pr-wise as well OK

00:50:859 (50859|3,51097|2,51335|1,51573|2,51811|3,52049|2,52287|1,52525|0,52763|1,53001|3,53001|2) - copy-pasta clone notes, avoid excessively cloning your notes from 1 to another diff- Also, i suggest you to plot notes based on different sound base here.

00:50:859 (50859|3,51097|2,51335|1,51573|2,51811|3,52049|2,52287|1) - despite being a copy-pasta, you also did this wrong because it has the wrong base sequence. Actually, it should start 00:50:620 (50620|1) - . Deleting this doesn't mean you make this diff easier, but you made the pattern lose its balance re-arranged

Solution for above statement: Delete 00:51:335 (51335|1,52287|1) - and re-pattern the rest 00:50:620 i would not delete that, i will lose the instrumental sound here(50620|1,50859|3,51097|2,51573|2,51811|3,52049|2) - use pr i will re-arraange that

00:53:001 (53001|2,53001|3) - is not equal to 00:53:359 (53359|2,53359|3) - , listen deeply, it's different sound. But, 00:53:716 (53716|0,53716|1) - is equal to 00:53:954 (53954|3,53954|2) - , so they should be in the same column instead- do something about them i think no . . and it's already fit if you play it too

01:02:406 (62406|2,62763|2) - , nah don't use jack pattern yet, for the time being implement different pattern variation. I suggest:
01:02:763 (62763|2) - move to 2 OK
01:03:001 (63001|0) - move to 3 no . . but some re-arrange

- 01:06:216 (66216|1) - starting at this point you may kept your jack notes -
01:08:120 (68120|1,68478|2) - you need to plot them in the same column, the same as you did with 01:06:216 (66216|1,66573|1) - to preserve notes consistency
01:08:716 (68716|0,68716|1) - gives wider gap, for pattern flow. suggest move them to 1 and 4 respectively OK
01:08:954 (68954|3) - move to 2
01:09:192 (69192|1) - move to 4 ^ ^ re-arrange

01:10:620 (70620|3) - um, put this to 1 for cow sake no
01:10:859 (70859|0) - move to 2
01:11:097 (71097|1) - move to 4
01:11:573 (71573|0,72049|0) - move them to column 4, sequence repetition with 01:09:668 (69668|3,70144|3) -

Well, I'll stop here


Good luck with your map <:

thanks for mods :3
i prefer to enjoyable to play rather than pr xD . . . 60% : 40%

Hello, mod requested via pm

Just my 2 cents, hope it helps
Nice map and good luck on ranking it!

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Hello, mod requested via pm

[General]
The artist should be 小清水亜美 Koshimizu Ami
I couldn't find any official website but this is what most of the website wrote
There isn't really a reliable source available xD . .. i get confused for this . . . ok maybe i will ask other for more confirmation, cuz the newest 2015 ranked beatmap is using Satori-san for artist name . .

[LV.10]

00:13:478 - remove a note because it does not have the same kind of sound like all the double notes at 00:13:240 - or 00:12:525 - , it is same as 00:12:763 - and you have one note here ahh OK, if i listen deeper, it's same sound xD

00:37:882 - should be 2 notes like 00:38:001 - because they have the same kind of sound following different sound. . i put 2 for piano xD

00:46:573 - 00:48:478 - 00:50:382 - why are these left blank? same sound as 00:47:525 - Suggest you to add notes over here etto . . .for special purpose, i will let the player feel this part, hard to explain xD . . .but i will considered to change it later

00:54:192 - I won't point out the same kind of issues that I have mentioned above because it keeps coming up in the mapset marked, maybe i will make some re-arrange for this part

01:01:216 - really weak sound, suggest you to change it to one note since it is not as strong as 01:01:097 - or 01:01:335 - OK

01:20:382 - There should be only one note here like 01:20:859 - instead to be the same as 01:19:668 - and have two notes well, hard to explain these . . . i put additonal note, cuz it contains a strong instrumental -like synth sound here . . . well considered =w= marked

01:21:335 - Same thing as I mentioned the line above ok

01:22:763 (82763|1,82763|2) - these have the same problem as above, you can make the same sound with 2 notes or change these to a single note as others, and more in the map that I will not point out

01:48:478 - Why is this note missed when the same sound got mapped at 01:51:335 - , suggest to add a note to keep the map consistent

01:49:430 - 01:50:382 - Same as above, and more. well, for this part i focus to piano and drum kick snare only like spy's said to me in irc . . this will be better to follow that special on this part xD . . .but i will think it again =w=)b

For 02:09:192 - to 02:09:668 - , I think the piano is really special here and it would be nice if you show them out OK

02:09:192 - Here is a suggestion pattern for it

SPOILER

=w=)b

02:15:859 - I don't think you need two notes here because this sound is same as all other sounds before and after it such as 02:15:620 - or 02:15:978 - and they only have one note OK

[LV.6]

00:17:763 - Why are there 2 notes here? I don't think it should be 2 notes because it has the same instrument as other notes and it is not stronger than others. Should be one note like you have in lv.10

00:19:668 - 00:21:573 - same as I mentioned above ^OK

00:37:763 - suggest to add a note just like the ones before at 00:37:287 - OK

00:46:811 - add a note, this has the same sound as 00:47:763 - focus to piano here . . maybe i will do same for Lv.10

00:48:716 - ^ 00:50:620 - ^ Also has the same sound owo/

01:49:906 - this has the same sound as 01:49:668 - , and also 01:48:954 - 01:49:192 - are also similar in the piano part. I suggest you have one note here for only piano and two notes for drum sounds like 01:49:192 - and 01:49:668 - , so basiclly move one of the note from 01:49:906 - to 01:49:668 - OK

00:46:573 - 00:48:478 - 00:50:382 - why blank? same as 00:47:525 - focus to piano desu xD

00:54:192 - won't point out, it is the same part as ^

01:52:049 (112049|2,112525|0) - not suggested to use LN here because there is nothing for them. Mapping the piano here maybe be too hard for a lowest difficulty so I suggest you to map the 1/2 sound at 01:52:049 - 01:52:287 - 01:52:525 - 01:52:763 - OK... thanks, actually i get weird on this part xD

01:57:287 - Same thing as I mentioned before maybe i will re-arrange . . . specially for this part

02:01:573 (121573|3,122049|0) - same as what I suggest for 01:52:049 (112049|2,112525|0) -

OK
Just my 2 cents, hope it helps
Nice map and good luck on ranking it!

Thank you very much Sakura <3

Fixed some from Sakura's mod that i mark for it :3

totally confused about metadata xD

Mod arrived! :3

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[General]

Lv.10- amm... OD:9?
I suggest make OD "8"
Just my opinion :3

[Lv.6]


[Lv.10]



Nice map! I see that XDD
Good luck! :3

_FrEsH_ChICkEn_ wrote:

Mod arrived! :3

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[General]

Lv.10- amm... OD:9?
I suggest make OD "8"
Just my opinion :3 based on o!m ranking criteria, i need to put OD 9 or 10 bcuz Lv.10 has no LN desu xD

[Lv.6]

00:37:525 (37525|2,37644|3) - It's kinda hard in Lv.6 actually. 1/4 is so XD I suggest 00:37:644 (37644|3) - remove this but. That's will make awkward XD
So Second way is 00:37:763 (37763|1) - remove this. and 00:37:644 (37644|3) - move to 2 When I play this. 00:37:763 (37763|1) - If this will remove. nothing have problem :3 OK des . . . removed

00:45:859 (45859|3,46097|2) - Is this Base? It looks follow vocal XD it's kick sound :3

00:59:668 (59668|2,59668|1,59906|2,59906|1) - Follow the column pitch. that's good. but It's...hard in this diff I suggest rearrange this :3 sorry, no change desu xD
01:10:144 (70144|0) - Move to 2 for balance

01:12:049 (72049|3) - ^ 3 ^OK

01:28:001 - have more powerful sound

01:35:620 - ^ well keep . .. xD since the sound it's not same powerful as 01:24:430 -

01:45:859 (105859|1,106335|0,106811|3) - I suggest remove this. OK =w=)b

02:15:859 (135859|2,136335|1,136811|0,137287|3) - ^ hmm .. . keep

02:23:597 - How about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3270083 feels good . . OK

[Lv.10]

00:08:240 - Add one for pitch OK

00:13:716 (13716|2) - Move to 1 OK

00:21:097 (21097|0) - Move to 2 (1 col : 3 notes) (2 col : 1 note) 2 col is lonely ;_; OK

00:28:120 (28120|3) - Move to 3 Same reason :3 keep, for my special purpose xD

00:36:335 (36335|3) - Move to 2 ^ and 00:36:335 (36335|3,36573|3) - It's different pitch XD considered :3 . . . maybe will change later

01:11:930 (71930|3) - Move to 3 OK

01:18:716 - Why three notes? same pitch with 01:19:668 - it contains additional piano push here xD, so it's need 3 notes instead XD

01:20:620 - ^

01:26:335 - ^

01:33:954 - ^

01:35:859 - ^ ^ lol . . same reason as i pointed in above desu . . .

01:43:478 - Three notes but 01:43:954 - Here's only two notes. 01:44:906 - here's too. it's these guys more powerful pitch 3 notes bcuz piano :3 really strong piano here

02:11:930 - Empty :3 ayy . . added xD

Nice map! I see that XDD
Good luck! :3

Thanks for mod ChICkEn

finalised pattern and other stuff . . . xD
ready now :3

HS all okay
BG all okay
Tags all okay i think

about timing, check if each time point is effective effective, http://puu.sh/iwKkW/71fcdba804.png

lemme check patterns

col=1-4

GJ and GL,shoot a star

Marirose wrote:

HS all okay
BG all okay
Tags all okay i think

about timing, check if each time point is effective effective, http://puu.sh/iwKkW/71fcdba804.png XD i use costum hitnormal set

lemme check patterns

col=1-4

LV7

00:08:001 (8001|0,8240|1) - same sound,i recommend to make them same col ayy it's different xD
00:13:716 - about here,its okay to leave out this sound but,it will be a bit strange for playing,check this ok added
00:30:620 (30620|2,31097|1) - try my advice http://puu.sh/iwKKo/3c35687981.jpg okay
00:37:049 (37049|1) - move to 1 then 00:37:287 (37287|0) - to 2,compare the sound here 00:37:525 (37525|3,37644|1) - OK
00:37:882 (37882|2) - remove,better if you ignore this sound OK
00:47:049 (47049|3,47287|2,47525|1,47763|0,48001|1,48240|2) - you catch bass sound here,so i recommend u ignore these 2 sounds 00:49:192 (49192|1,49668|2) - ,and change 00:48:954 (48954|0,49430|3) - to LN,just like http://puu.sh/iwL12/ca89011484.jpg
00:51:573 (51573|0) - remove
00:54:906 (54906|0,55382|2) - remove , i mean all bass sound this part, raemove and repattern OK all
00:56:811 (56811|2,57287|1) - and 00:56:573 (56573|3,57049|0) - ,do wat i said as http://puu.sh/iwL81/2216ab6ba6.jpg ^OK
01:15:382 (75382|0) - remove this,neednt double here it's contains similar sound as imo 01:15:382 (75382|0) -
01:31:573 - why not add for clap sound here? added
01:56:811 (116811|3) - move this to 3 OK
02:24:787 - and 02:24:906 - had sound,why not catch? or end at 02:24:430 - ,remove all notes afterwards big echo is exist here if you playing that . . . so, i will keep that 02:24:549 (144549|2,144668|1) -

nothing else

LV10

00:02:287 - try double at col4,for strong piano sound,then ignore this piano sound afterwards thsi part cuz it is not strong as this later OK
00:36:811 (36811|1,36930|0) - ctrl+g OK
00:36:811 (36811|1,36930|0) - from here,make this part same as LV7 as i said ,until 00:59:668 - i make it different now . . . =w=)b
01:00:501 - youd better remove keep desu . . feel weird if i delete that . .it contains sound too
01:22:168 (82168|2,82406|1) - try to ignore and remove,that will be fun to play ,btw compare with 01:20:382 - ,you did good here well . . keep, it contains a little piano sound . . i try to make it different xD
02:24:787 - and 02:24:906 - had sound,why not catch? or end at 02:24:430 - ,remove all notes afterwards same reason as lv 7 desu :3

HS

00:38:716 (38716|3) - W miss both diff
00:40:382 (40382|0) - W miss both diff
00:40:620 (40620|2) - W miss both diff
00:42:525 (42525|1) - W miss both diff
00:43:478 (43478|0) - W miss both diff

any question? compare with 00:46:335 (46335|1) - ALL OK xD

01:45:382 - remove one soft-finish for LV10 diff

GJ and GL,shoot a star

ayy thank you very much for check and star it xD
note: i don't really clear to hear the bass sound on lv 7 . . so i make LN instead for that . . .

good,bubbled

Marirose wrote:

good,bubbled

ahh . . . thank you very much Mari . . . T_T
now i can study for my exam in peace . . .

go go!
加油咯o(≧v≦)o~~好棒

Thank you so much KK . . . <3
and all modder for caring my map xD

schwarzvgrune wrote:

go go!
加油咯o(≧v≦)o~~好棒

ayy =w=)b

Gratz Avalon

i don't know where i found this gif

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Gratz Avalon

i don't know where i found this gif

thanks verniy . . . also for your great bg on lv.13 XD
lel . . . that's so creepy

gratz avalon :3




anyway suggest to remove this gif, the epilepsy is strong

Harbyter wrote:

gratz avalon :3
anyway suggest to remove this gif, the epilepsy is strong

thanks harby . . .
ayy . . . forgot to turn on epilepsy warning :v

Uwaaa.. Gratz avalon

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Gratz Avalon

i don't know where i found this gif

ayy epilepsy warning lolol

grats avalon!!

Kyousuke- wrote:

grats avalon!!

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Uwaaa.. Gratz avalon

thanks bro

恭喜o(≧v≦)o~~好棒

Congratz, Avalon!

Gratz Alavon~~

Ichigaki wrote:

Gratz Alavon~~

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

Congratz, Avalon!

schwarzvgrune wrote:

恭喜o(≧v≦)o~~好棒

Thanks for support . . . i love you all xD

gratz

Critical_Star wrote:

gratz

thanks CS-san =w=

Woooohhh >w<)/
Gratz! xD

-SoraGami- wrote:

Woooohhh >w<)/
Gratz! xD

uwahh . . .sorry late replies xD
thanks sora.

Edit : already passed, thanks for the help and support all