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Shinzo-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, September 11, 2015 at 7:00:23 PM

Artist: DJ Mashiro
Title: Prismatic Lollipops
Source: Cytus
Tags: Rayark chapter III Happy Hardcore Eon-
BPM: 202
Filesize: 4626kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lv.10 - 9Key (2.1 stars, 652 notes)
  2. Lv.15 - 9Key (3.02 stars, 946 notes)
  3. Lv.20 - 9Key (3.99 stars, 1340 notes)
  4. Lv.5 - 9Key (1.49 stars, 407 notes)
Download: DJ Mashiro - Prismatic Lollipops
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9K


Dj Mashiro

PRISMATICLOLLIPOPS



Re-Download after 9/11/15

Special Thanks to Eon- for the awasome BG !!!
Lv.5 : 100% Complete (14)
Lv.10 : 100% Complete (16)
Lv.15 : 100% Complete (12)
Lv.20 : 100% Complete (12)
-[ AmiShici ]-
Yooo Shin-san o/

here my mod

9K=|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|
little mod from me
[Lv. 5]00:33:593 - ini ga missing? atau emang sengaja?

[Lv. 10] 00:08:939 (8939|7) - pindah ke 7? biar simetris sama sebelum dan sesudahnya [00:08:345 (8345|6,8642|6,9236|6) - ]
00:15:326 (15326|4,15474|3) - geser satu kolom ke kiri (00:14:731 (14731|1,14880|0,15028|2,15177|1) - )
00:33:593 - keknya emang sengaja dikosongin dah. wkwkwk. ampun mastah -/\-
00:35:524 (35524|6) - move ke 6
00:36:860 (36860|3) - move ke 2 atau ke 3?
00:59:434 (59434|2) - ke 2?
00:59:731 (59731|3) - ke 3?

[Lv.15]00:12:801 (12801|1,12949|2,13098|3) - geser 1 kolom ke kiri
00:21:637 (21637|8,21637|0) - move ke 3 dan 7? soalnya menurutku suara sedikit beda sama 00:21:415 (21415|8,21415|0,21860|0,21860|8) -
00:28:098 - add note, drumnya ilang xD
00:36:266 (36266|8) - move ke 8?
00:42:801 (42801|3,43098|5) - nanya, katanya 9K ga boleh LN, lah ini kok pakek LN :lol:
01:10:870 (70870|5) - move ke 7
01:22:231 (82231|0,82231|8) - sama kek diatas :o

[Lv.20] 00:10:128 (10128|4) - move ke 4? avoid jack
00:19:038 - add note buat cymbal
00:20:227 - ^
00:20:821 - ^
00:43:395 (43395|3,43395|5,43543|5,43543|3,43692|1,43692|7,43840|1,43840|7,43989|3,43989|0,43989|5,43989|8) - how about this? http://puu.sh/irLXV/cbe5d7216b.jpg
00:45:771 (45771|6,45771|8) - geser 1 kolom ke kiri trus 00:45:920 (45920|4) - ke 9 dan 00:45:994 (45994|4) - ke 8 menghindari jack
01:10:722 (70722|4) - ke 4

Mungkin itu...
Gudelak senpai =w=)b
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:

Yooo Shin-san o/

here my mod

9K=|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|
little mod from me
[Lv. 5]00:33:593 - ini ga missing? atau emang sengaja? emang sengaja missing :p Added lol

[Lv. 10] 00:08:939 (8939|7) - pindah ke 7? biar simetris sama sebelum dan sesudahnya [00:08:345 (8345|6,8642|6,9236|6) - ] re-arranged
00:15:326 (15326|4,15474|3) - geser satu kolom ke kiri (00:14:731 (14731|1,14880|0,15028|2,15177|1) - ) nice
00:33:593 - keknya emang sengaja dikosongin dah. wkwkwk. ampun mastah -/\- added lol
00:35:524 (35524|6) - move ke 6 fine !
00:36:860 (36860|3) - move ke 2 atau ke 3? 3 =w=
00:59:434 (59434|2) - ke 2? re-arranged
00:59:731 (59731|3) - ke 3? re-arranged

[Lv.15]00:12:801 (12801|1,12949|2,13098|3) - geser 1 kolom ke kiri nice =w=)b
00:21:637 (21637|8,21637|0) - move ke 3 dan 7? soalnya menurutku suara sedikit beda sama 00:21:415 (21415|8,21415|0,21860|0,21860|8) - oiya, nice nice =o=
00:28:098 - add note, drumnya ilang xD ok lol
00:36:266 (36266|8) - move ke 8? nice
00:42:801 (42801|3,43098|5) - nanya, katanya 9K ga boleh LN, lah ini kok pakek LN :lol: katanya sih LESS ._.
01:10:870 (70870|5) - move ke 7 errr nice
01:22:231 (82231|0,82231|8) - sama kek diatas :o sama kek diatas :o

[Lv.20] 00:10:128 (10128|4) - move ke 4? avoid jack re-arranged
00:19:038 - add note buat cymbal no, 2 note kick, 1 note cymbal, no synt so just 3 note
00:20:227 - ^ i think its not loud enough but.. okay xD
00:20:821 - ^ ^
00:43:395 (43395|3,43395|5,43543|5,43543|3,43692|1,43692|7,43840|1,43840|7,43989|3,43989|0,43989|5,43989|8) - how about this? http://puu.sh/irLXV/cbe5d7216b.jpg no i love this one whuahuahaua
00:45:771 (45771|6,45771|8) - geser 1 kolom ke kiri trus 00:45:920 (45920|4) - ke 9 dan 00:45:994 (45994|4) - ke 8 menghindari jack re-arranged sbnrny gua suka jackny T_T
01:10:722 (70722|4) - ke 4 ok

Mungkin itu...
Gudelak senpai =w=)b
Thanks for mod Amis ^.^
moni
hey i come for mod now lolol
pocky in your bg !!!
holy it's 9k wwww first mod with 9k
column = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|
[Lv.20]00:05:078 - add 8 hard drum
00:05:375 - delete 5 little drum
00:15:177 - http://puu.sh/is6cg/7802e43958.png i think this part is a bit hard ... press little finger triple time ? try to re pattern this hah
00:16:365 - add 1 hard drum
00:31:811 - http://puu.sh/is6CA/8be8f0767a.jpg ahh i have no idea about this stream .. i didn't listen any sound that can to be stream
01:03:890 - http://puu.sh/is6tk/f98f1e65b5.jpg alternate note among middle finger and little finger is really really hard to press ... try to re pattern lol
01:15:771 - like 00:15:177 -
[LV.15]00:52:826 (52826|0) - ... what's about this ? lol
really good diff didn't have anything to mod
i'm not good to mod easy and normal so i didn't mod lv 5 and 10 XDD
thx for req .. so this is my first time to mod 9k it's maybe useless for you ;) ;) ;)
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Fuji wrote:

hey i come for mod now lolol
pocky in your bg !!! its BOCKY lolololol
holy it's 9k wwww first mod with 9k
column = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|
[Lv.20]00:05:078 - add 8 hard drum aa seems u didnt get my my point hehe ._. 2 note kick/snare 1 note for the synt(mainsound)
00:05:375 - delete 5 little drum
00:15:177 - http://puu.sh/is6cg/7802e43958.png i think this part is a bit hard ... press little finger triple time ? try to re pattern this hah ok ^^
00:16:365 - add 1 hard drum
00:31:811 - http://puu.sh/is6CA/8be8f0767a.jpg ahh i have no idea about this stream .. i didn't listen any sound that can to be stream eyyy theres a sound
01:03:890 - http://puu.sh/is6tk/f98f1e65b5.jpg alternate note among middle finger and little finger is really really hard to press ... try to re pattern lol Ok >w<
01:15:771 - like 00:15:177 - fixed
[LV.15]00:52:826 (52826|0) - ... what's about this ? lol OMG my bad x,,x
really good diff didn't have anything to mod
i'm not good to mod easy and normal so i didn't mod lv 5 and 10 XDD
thx for req .. so this is my first time to mod 9k it's maybe useless for you ;) ;) ;) nope ^^ its helpfull actually, thanks :D
Thanks for mod Fuji xD hahaha
Aste-
Damn it... aku mo GD hueee~

ahh Mark for MOD

will mod after you mod my map


HI

MOD from A.C. Modding Team here (M4M)

What i MOD

General Setting, Beat Snap, Pattern, Balance, Comfortable, Flow, File inside your Folder


[General]

BG = OK

Audio = OK

HS = Soft-hit normal = too short, soft-hitwhistle = too short

AI MOD = Kiai.. ignored

Diff spread = Good

Timing = Good

other things = Tags... :add CYTUS(Chapter name)

[mod]

column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9

aku lelah dari tadi pake English... indo aja ye

-Lv.5-

00:05:821 (5821|4) - hmm... Flow nya rusak... pindah ke 7

00:06:266 (6266|8,6563|3) - pitch please... move ke 1 - 6
00:06:860 (6860|6) - pindah ke 9 for pitch.. kalo kesusahan ke 8 aja gpp

00:17:108 (17108|0,17256|2,17405|4,17553|6,17702|8) - jujur.. kalo aku dengerin sama lagunya.. ngga pass kalo di stair.. but up to you

00:20:821 (20821|1,20969|7) - pake jari tengah aja... jangan manis (you know pindah ke mana

00:21:415 (21415|5,21637|3,21860|5) - jack aja please... sama nadanya

00:26:761 (26761|7,26910|5,27058|3,27207|1) - not comfortable.. bikin kaya gini,

00:32:999 (32999|7) - gagal chain kalo gini... move ke 7
terus 00:33:147 (33147|2) - ke 4
dan 00:33:296 (33296|0,33296|6) - ke 3 dan 8

00:36:266 (36266|6,36563|2) - ke jari telunjuk dan 00:36:712 (36712|0) - ke 2

00:49:632 (49632|5,49781|7) - geser 1 column ke kiri - lebih nyaman

-Lv.10-

damn.. diff ini ngga terasa seperti Lv.10.. ikut main sound aja.. but kasi Chord

00:03:890 (3890|1) - wait.. ini kan suaranya sama kaya bawahnya.. yang di pindah harusnya di atasnya 00:04:187 (4187|2) -

00:04:781 (4781|8,4781|4) - not too loud.. harusnya ngga di kasi dual

dah cuman itu...


sorry kalo dikit
Dellvangel
Hai Shinzo- ~~ :)

Click me
Format: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9

[Lv.5]
00:24:385 (24385|4,24682|4) - kayaknya ga harus di kolom yg sama. bagus nya buat double note di kolom 4 sama 6.
01:10:870 (70870|3) - move to col 3.

[Lv.10]
00:04:187 (4187|2,4187|6) - sama 00:03:593 (3593|2,3593|6) - sound nya beda, mungkin bisa di bedain kolom nya biar sama kayak 00:13:098 (13098|1,13098|7,13692|6,13692|1) - ^^
00:08:939 (8939|0) - move ke col 3.
00:09:385 (9385|1) - kalo apply di atas, ini pindah ke col 1.
00:42:801 (42801|1) - di diff ini kayak nya ini udah boleh di ganti ke LN, buat sampai ke 00:43:098 -

Maaf ga terlalu banyak, fell free to reject if my mod isn't good, GL ya .. ^^
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Pharos21 wrote:

Damn it... aku mo GD hueee~

ahh Mark for MOD

will mod after you mod my map


HI

MOD from A.C. Modding Team here (M4M)

What i MOD

General Setting, Beat Snap, Pattern, Balance, Comfortable, Flow, File inside your Folder


[General]

BG = OK

Audio = OK

HS = Soft-hit normal = too short, soft-hitwhistle = too short

AI MOD = Kiai.. ignored

Diff spread = Good

Timing = Good

other things = Tags... :add CYTUS(Chapter name) sengaja kgk di taruh karna sourceny udah Cytus :)

[mod]

column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9

aku lelah dari tadi pake English... indo aja ye ok =w=)b

-Lv.5-

00:05:821 (5821|4) - hmm... Flow nya rusak... pindah ke 7 re-arranged

00:06:266 (6266|8,6563|3) - pitch please... move ke 1 - 6 re-arranged
00:06:860 (6860|6) - pindah ke 9 for pitch.. kalo kesusahan ke 8 aja gpp 7 aja yah xD

00:17:108 (17108|0,17256|2,17405|4,17553|6,17702|8) - jujur.. kalo aku dengerin sama lagunya.. ngga pass kalo di stair.. but up to you iya sih ._. ok fixeed

00:20:821 (20821|1,20969|7) - pake jari tengah aja... jangan manis (you know pindah ke mana kek dah bisa main 9K aja lu :p ok moved

00:21:415 (21415|5,21637|3,21860|5) - jack aja please... sama nadanya jangan ah xD

00:26:761 (26761|7,26910|5,27058|3,27207|1) - not comfortable.. bikin kaya gini, KAYA GIMANA ? T^T

00:32:999 (32999|7) - gagal chain kalo gini... move ke 7
terus 00:33:147 (33147|2) - ke 4
dan 00:33:296 (33296|0,33296|6) - ke 3 dan 8 oke =w= tapi di re-arrange dikit

00:36:266 (36266|6,36563|2) - ke jari telunjuk dan 00:36:712 (36712|0) - ke 2 jangan ah re-arranged btw

00:49:632 (49632|5,49781|7) - geser 1 column ke kiri - lebih nyaman oke

-Lv.10-

damn.. diff ini ngga terasa seperti Lv.10.. ikut main sound aja.. but kasi Chord

00:03:890 (3890|1) - wait.. ini kan suaranya sama kaya bawahnya.. yang di pindah harusnya di atasnya 00:04:187 (4187|2) - oiya ya xD

00:04:781 (4781|8,4781|4) - not too loud.. harusnya ngga di kasi dual

dah cuman itu...


sorry kalo dikit gk dikit ko :D
Thanks Modnya Pharos >o<

Dellvangel wrote:

Hai Shinzo- ~~ :)

Click me
Format: 1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9

[Lv.5]
00:24:385 (24385|4,24682|4) - kayaknya ga harus di kolom yg sama. bagus nya buat double note di kolom 4 sama 6. re-arranged
01:10:870 (70870|3) - move to col 3. ok

[Lv.10]
00:04:187 (4187|2,4187|6) - sama 00:03:593 (3593|2,3593|6) - sound nya beda, mungkin bisa di bedain kolom nya biar sama kayak 00:13:098 (13098|1,13098|7,13692|6,13692|1) - ^^ hehehe okeoke
00:08:939 (8939|0) - move ke col 3. moved
00:09:385 (9385|1) - kalo apply di atas, ini pindah ke col 1. ok
00:42:801 (42801|1) - di diff ini kayak nya ini udah boleh di ganti ke LN, buat sampai ke 00:43:098 - sebaiknya tidak x_x

Maaf ga terlalu banyak, fell free to reject if my mod isn't good, GL ya .. ^^
Makasih ya mod nya >w<
Aste-
00:26:761 (26761|7,26910|5,27058|3,27207|1) - not comfortable.. bikin kaya gini, KAYA GIMANA ? T^T

wait.. aku lupa Pict nya

kaya gini



and please.. emang aku bisa main 9K
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Pharos21 wrote:

00:26:761 (26761|7,26910|5,27058|3,27207|1) - not comfortable.. bikin kaya gini, KAYA GIMANA ? T^T

wait.. aku lupa Pict nya

kaya gini



and please.. emang aku bisa main 9K Keren O.O gua aj blum bisa T_T
OK
Kaito-kun
Hi Shinzo, requested mod on PM:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9

[General]

Why is Kiai Time divided in 4 sections? The time between 1st and 2nd Kiai is just as important as those, so why is it left out? Same happens with the 3rd and 4th Kiai. Please apply Kiai to the time in-between them.
Decrease OD and HP of Lv. 5 to 7 or 7.5. Maps of this category are mainly to let the player learn a new keymode, but with the high HP/OD, it makes it harder for begginers to learn, and may even forget about learning 9k at all.

[Lv. 5]
I'm taking in consideration you didn't mapped this Pop 'n Music style. If it is, then please say so in the description of the beatmap to avoid future trouble

00:03:296 (3296|4) - Make this an LN, sound ends at 00:03:593 -
00:24:682 (24682|3) - ^^^, sound ends at 00:24:979 -
00:42:801 (42801|1) - ^^^, sound ends at 00:43:395 -
00:53:197 (53197|1) - ^^^, sound ends at 00:53:494 -
01:03:890 (63890|4) - ^^^, sound ends at 01:04:187 -
00:27:652 - Add note here
00:37:157 - ^^^

[Lv. 10]
00:42:801 (42801|1) - Make this into an LN, ending on 00:43:098 -
00:43:098 (43098|7) - ^^^, ending on 00:43:395 -
01:16:365 - Maybe change it to THIS (feels more appropiate to the music imo)

Couldn't find anything to say about Lv. 15 (or maybe my brain is currently retarded, it happens sometimes lol).

Good Luck with your beatmap :D
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Kaito-kun wrote:

Hi Shinzo, requested mod on PM:

1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9

[General]

Why is Kiai Time divided in 4 sections? The time between 1st and 2nd Kiai is just as important as those, so why is it left out? Same happens with the 3rd and 4th Kiai. Please apply Kiai to the time in-between them.
Decrease OD and HP of Lv. 5 to 7 or 7.5. Maps of this category are mainly to let the player learn a new keymode, but with the high HP/OD, it makes it harder for begginers to learn, and may even forget about learning 9k at all.

[Lv. 5]
I'm taking in consideration you didn't mapped this Pop 'n Music style. If it is, then please say so in the description of the beatmap to avoid future trouble

00:03:296 (3296|4) - Make this an LN, sound ends at 00:03:593 - No LN please
00:24:682 (24682|3) - ^^^, sound ends at 00:24:979 -
00:42:801 (42801|1) - ^^^, sound ends at 00:43:395 -
00:53:197 (53197|1) - ^^^, sound ends at 00:53:494 -
01:03:890 (63890|4) - ^^^, sound ends at 01:04:187 -
00:27:652 - Add note here ok
00:37:157 - ^^^ ok

[Lv. 10]
00:42:801 (42801|1) - Make this into an LN, ending on 00:43:098 - No LN
00:43:098 (43098|7) - ^^^, ending on 00:43:395 -
01:16:365 - Maybe change it to THIS (feels more appropiate to the music imo) nice..

Couldn't find anything to say about Lv. 15 (or maybe my brain is currently retarded, it happens sometimes lol).

Good Luck with your beatmap :D
Thanks For Mod >o<
MEGAtive
Yo Shin~
Mod req from PM

Dj Mashiro - Prismatic Lollipops

Column
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|

[Lv.20]
Mods
00:12:504 (12504|5,12578|6,12652|7) - Mungkin Ctrl+G trus geser k kanan sekali. Lebih enak liatnya.
00:17:776 - Tambah not d 2 atau 7? Sebenerny d sini ad suara lead synth. Coba dengerin lg.
00:24:682 (24682|1,24756|3,24830|1,24905|3) - Delete aja kali ya? D sebelum2ny satu2 doang notnya. Liat 00:11:019 yg Snare + Lead synth.
00:29:657 - Tambah not d sekitar 2, 4, 5, atau 6. Ad suara lead synth.
00:31:217 - Tambah not? Soalny d sini ad hihat sm Lead synth, kyk 00:30:771
00:33:444 (33444|2) - Coba pindah k kolom lain deh. kurang pas d jack soalnya....
00:39:162 - Tambah not? D sini ad lead synth juga.
00:45:994 (45994|1) - Delete? D sini cuman ad kick doang gk ad hihat ataupun lead synth.
00:47:850 - 00:48:147 - 00:48:444 - Mungkin 3 aj kli ya kyk 00:47:553 . D 00:48:741 instrumenny lebih banyak tpi cuman 4 not.
00:50:746 (50746|1) - Delete? Cuman ad kick, gk ad instrumen lain.
00:57:058 smp 00:57:949 - Kok d sini jumlah notny gk konsisten sm yg sebelumnya ya? Coba dibikin biar konsisten.
01:00:251 (60251|2) - Cuman kick, delete?
01:03:890 (63890|7,63964|5,64038|7,64113|5) - Gk d hitsound?
01:03:890 (63890|3,63964|1,64038|3,64113|1) - Mungkin ini d bikin model 1-2-3-4 gitu aj kli ya kyk pitchnya
01:13:098 (73098|5,73172|6,73246|7) - Ctrl+G trus geser k kanan sekali? Lebih enak diliat.
01:18:370 - D sini ad lead synth, tambah not?

[Lv.15]
Mods
00:29:657 - Tambah not? Kedengeran ad lead synth.
01:03:890 (63890|6,63964|2,64038|6,64113|2) - Kykny pattern 1-2-3-4 lebih fit ya....

Udh ya, segini doang~
And, Prismatic Lollipops XD
Good Luck~ :3
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

MEGAtive wrote:

Yo Shin~
Mod req from PM

Dj Mashiro - Prismatic Lollipops

Column
|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|

[Lv.20]
Mods
00:12:504 (12504|5,12578|6,12652|7) - Mungkin Ctrl+G trus geser k kanan sekali. Lebih enak liatnya. ok nice =w=
00:17:776 - Tambah not d 2 atau 7? Sebenerny d sini ad suara lead synth. Coba dengerin lg. iya !
00:24:682 (24682|1,24756|3,24830|1,24905|3) - Delete aja kali ya? D sebelum2ny satu2 doang notnya. Liat 00:11:019 yg Snare + Lead synth. iya yah x_x
00:29:657 - Tambah not d sekitar 2, 4, 5, atau 6. Ad suara lead synth. ok
00:31:217 - Tambah not? Soalny d sini ad hihat sm Lead synth, kyk 00:30:771 eh iya lupa kalo ada synt-nya
00:33:444 (33444|2) - Coba pindah k kolom lain deh. kurang pas d jack soalnya.... ok
00:39:162 - Tambah not? D sini ad lead synth juga. added
00:45:994 (45994|1) - Delete? D sini cuman ad kick doang gk ad hihat ataupun lead synth. ok
00:47:850 - 00:48:147 - 00:48:444 - Mungkin 3 aj kli ya kyk 00:47:553 . D 00:48:741 instrumenny lebih banyak tpi cuman 4 not. iya sih wkwkwk
00:50:746 (50746|1) - Delete? Cuman ad kick, gk ad instrumen lain. okay !
00:57:058 smp 00:57:949 - Kok d sini jumlah notny gk konsisten sm yg sebelumnya ya? Coba dibikin biar konsisten. iya karna udh kgk ada kick nya, tpai dibikin 3 3 aja kek sblmnya
01:00:251 (60251|2) - Cuman kick, delete? ok
01:03:890 (63890|7,63964|5,64038|7,64113|5) - Gk d hitsound? lel sblmny juga kagak xD thanks~
01:03:890 (63890|3,63964|1,64038|3,64113|1) - Mungkin ini d bikin model 1-2-3-4 gitu aj kli ya kyk pitchnya dipikir2 dulu deh xD
01:13:098 (73098|5,73172|6,73246|7) - Ctrl+G trus geser k kanan sekali? Lebih enak diliat. ok
01:18:370 - D sini ad lead synth, tambah not? yup, ok

[Lv.15]
Mods
00:29:657 - Tambah not? Kedengeran ad lead synth.
01:03:890 (63890|6,63964|2,64038|6,64113|2) - Kykny pattern 1-2-3-4 lebih fit ya.... mainstream o.o tapi... dipikir2 dulu deh xD

Udh ya, segini doang~
And, Prismatic Lollipops XD
Good Luck~ :3
wah Thanks so much for the mod MEGAAA !!!
>w<
Ibrahim
yo shin-san
here my mod
1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7 l 8 l 9

Lv.5
00:38:197 (38197|7) - move to 9 pitch nya
01:16:514 (76514|8) - move to 3
01:16:662 (76662|2) - move to 5

Lv.10
00:24:682 (24682|3) - suggest sih ganti sama LN
01:02:999 (62999|4) - move to 4 ?

Lv.15
00:09:533 (9533|4) - move to 6
00:20:227 - add 1 note
01:03:890 (63890|6,63964|2,64038|6,64113|2) - suggest sih lebih enak pake stairs disini
01:10:128 (70128|4) - move to 6
01:20:821 - add 1 note

Lv.20
00:09:830 - add 1
00:16:959 - ^
00:38:345 - ^
01:05:672 - ^
01:08:048 - ^
01:10:425 - ^
01:15:177 - ^
01:16:959 - ^

ok cuman segitu ._.
sorry dikit ya ._.
GL ;)
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

[Baim] wrote:

yo shin-san
here my mod
1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7 l 8 l 9

Lv.5
00:38:197 (38197|7) - move to 9 pitch nya
01:16:514 (76514|8) - move to 3
01:16:662 (76662|2) - move to 5 ^ Re-arranged ^

Lv.10
00:24:682 (24682|3) - suggest sih ganti sama LN no LN aaaa
01:02:999 (62999|4) - move to 4 ? moved

Lv.15
00:09:533 (9533|4) - move to 6 ok also re-arranged
00:20:227 - add 1 note no kick
01:03:890 (63890|6,63964|2,64038|6,64113|2) - suggest sih lebih enak pake stairs disini Fine ! karna udh byk yg minta stair
01:10:128 (70128|4) - move to 6 ok
01:20:821 - add 1 note no

Lv.20
00:09:830 - add 1 kgk ada synt D:
00:16:959 - ^
00:38:345 - ^
01:05:672 - ^
01:08:048 - ^
01:10:425 - ^
01:15:177 - ^
01:16:959 - ^ ^

ok cuman segitu ._.
sorry dikit ya ._.
GL ;)
Thanks modnya Baim >w<
Arzenvald
ok i just maybe, and this is sorta crazy but.. here's my mod so call me maybe (?)

[General & Pointless stuff based Ranking Criteria stuff]

- Folder -
(!)
i see you have 4 different BG at this map, but you know you could reduce the file size by asking the background author Eon- , to render the BG into JPG format.. it won't broke the bg quality lmao
also asks eon to put some letter, like "Lv.5" "Lv.10" etc etc, would be looks neater

- Misc / .osu setup -
(!)
untick all widescreen support.. idk, since you don't have .osb inside your set..

(!)
don't forget to adjust your HP / OD in your set
for No-LN set, i suggest you to follow this setup :

lv.5 // OD 6 HP 5 or 6
lv.10 // OD 7 HP 6 or 6.6
lv.15 // OD 8 HP 7 or 7.3
lv.20 // OD 9 HP 8

Higher OD will fit for no-LN maps like this, and HP 5 in easiest diff is suggested because.. you know.. 9K is not ordinary keymode.. you could either put HP 6 at all

- Hitsounds -
hmm... these hitsounds sounds familiar.. idk lel
soft-hitnormal has small delay on its waveform.. http://puu.sh/iDxoS.wav here's you replacement

- Spread -
this is the most vaguest stuff in mania around..
luckily, seems you make a constant and somehow linear difficulty curve inside your set, i could say it has good spread..
based object amount
1318 - 952 = 366
952 - 680 = 272
680 - 405 = 275
Object Gaps between each diff (lowest to highest) :
275 -- 272 ---- 366
neat enough although you can tone down lv.20, and maybe tone up both lv.10 & lv.15

- Mod each difficulty -

1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9

after you move the notes as i suggested, remember that you need to rearrange / keep the hitsound on its place...

[Lv.5]
not bad, the layering in this diff somehow better than the other diffs.. and since this is the easiest diff in set, i could suggest you something below
00:05:227 (5227|3,5375|5,5524|1,5672|8,5821|4,5969|0) - try 2-8-7-6-4-1 (make stairs pattern)
- why? easier judging & hand balance, plus follows the synthesizer

00:07:603 (7603|0,7751|3,8048|1,8197|4) - looks flipped for me lol
- 00:07:603 (7603|0,7751|3) - make 4 1 (ctrl + G, becareful with hitsound placement)
- 00:08:048 (8048|1,8197|4) - make 5 2 (^)

00:10:128 (10128|6,10276|3,10425|8,10573|4) - 9 6 5 4 (stairs pattern again)
00:14:731 (14731|3,14880|5,15028|2,15177|6,15326|1,15474|7) - not really coincident with the PR at all.. use suggestion above (stairs)
00:15:771 (15771|1,15920|7,16068|2,16217|6) - ^
00:17:108 (17108|0,17256|4,17405|8,17553|2,17702|4,17850|6,17850|1) - 1 3 6 4 7 91 ... oh my puush.. http://puu.sh/iDA35.png

00:30:177 (30177|4,30326|5,30771|4,30920|3,31217|5) - ctrl + H.. PR please

00:32:405 (32405|0,32702|8,32850|0) - ctrl + H, wew y u use so many reversed PR here, it doesn't works well with hand movement & PR

00:33:890 (33890|8,34038|0,34187|2) - 5 3 1

00:49:038 (49038|3,49335|1) - 2 4
00:54:682 (54682|6,54830|1,54979|7,55128|3,55276|5) - 6 8 4 2 5
01:02:405 (62405|7,62702|1) - 9 1

and repeats again.. X___X

01:17:702 (77702|1,77850|2,77999|3,78147|4,78296|5,78444|6) - 1 3 6 4 7 9
01:24:385 (84385|2,84533|3,84682|6,84830|5,84979|4) - 1 3 5 7 9

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

for lv.10 until 20, its not that i don't like this diff, b-baka, but i suggest you to do some.. '8+1K' style, to keep your layering steady & your pattern would looks alot more neater...
for example :
in lv.10, like 1st verse 00:04:781 (4781|4,4781|8) - 00:05:078 (5078|3,5078|6) - you can move these notes to 1
these drum kicks notes, that placed as 'poly-rhythm' (multiple beat layering) doesn't flows well with the music, cuz it's placed in the main columns where you layers synthesizer..
tl;dr doing 8+1K style in certain spot / part would works alot more better...

OR ignore your layering away from drum kicks & keeps your layering into synthesizer for lesser poly-rhythm... it would works alot better too..

one more thing, remember old-rules of vsrg charting, Left columns for lower pitch, and Right column for higher pitch.. x__x this need lots works

for now, i could say this map is awesome, yet still looks unpolished in harder diffs (imo).. mostly because of these poly-rhythm stuff..
(this could answer why i leave some part in my Remote Control empty yet there's a sound.. i need to control some layering by doing less poly-rhytm in most part.. :v )

good luck shinzo!
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

ExUsagi wrote:

ok i just maybe, and this is sorta crazy but.. here's my mod so call me maybe (?)

[General & Pointless stuff based Ranking Criteria stuff]

- Folder -
(!)
i see you have 4 different BG at this map, but you know you could reduce the file size by asking the background author Eon- , to render the BG into JPG format.. it won't broke the bg quality lmao
also asks eon to put some letter, like "Lv.5" "Lv.10" etc etc, would be looks neater okay =w=)b

- Misc / .osu setup -
(!)
untick all widescreen support.. idk, since you don't have .osb inside your set.. done :)

(!)
don't forget to adjust your HP / OD in your set
for No-LN set, i suggest you to follow this setup :

lv.5 // OD 6 HP 5 or 6 ok and i choose HP 6 xD
lv.10 // OD 7 HP 6 or 6.6 ok and i choose HP 6
lv.15 // OD 8 HP 7 or 7.3 ok and i choose HP 7
lv.20 // OD 9 HP 8 ok

Higher OD will fit for no-LN maps like this, and HP 5 in easiest diff is suggested because.. you know.. 9K is not ordinary keymode.. you could either put HP 6 at all

- Hitsounds -
hmm... these hitsounds sounds familiar.. idk lel
soft-hitnormal has small delay on its waveform.. http://puu.sh/iDxoS.wav here's you replacement eyyy thanks

- Spread -
this is the most vaguest stuff in mania around..
luckily, seems you make a constant and somehow linear difficulty curve inside your set, i could say it has good spread..
based object amount
1318 - 952 = 366
952 - 680 = 272
680 - 405 = 275
Object Gaps between each diff (lowest to highest) :
275 -- 272 ---- 366
neat enough although you can tone down lv.20, and maybe tone up both lv.10 & lv.15 okay

- Mod each difficulty -

1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9

after you move the notes as i suggested, remember that you need to rearrange / keep the hitsound on its place...

[Lv.5]
not bad, the layering in this diff somehow better than the other diffs.. and since this is the easiest diff in set, i could suggest you something below
00:05:227 (5227|3,5375|5,5524|1,5672|8,5821|4,5969|0) - try 2-8-7-6-4-1 (make stairs pattern)
- why? easier judging & hand balance, plus follows the synthesizer okok

00:07:603 (7603|0,7751|3,8048|1,8197|4) - looks flipped for me lol
- 00:07:603 (7603|0,7751|3) - make 4 1 [/color](ctrl + G, becareful with hitsound placement)
- 00:08:048 (8048|1,8197|4) - make 5 2 (^)
ahh okay nice =w=)b

00:10:128 (10128|6,10276|3,10425|8,10573|4) - 9 6 5 4 (stairs pattern again) ok
00:14:731 (14731|3,14880|5,15028|2,15177|6,15326|1,15474|7) - not really coincident with the PR at all.. use suggestion above (stairs) okay re-arranged
00:15:771 (15771|1,15920|7,16068|2,16217|6) - ^ ^
00:17:108 (17108|0,17256|4,17405|8,17553|2,17702|4,17850|6,17850|1) - 1 3 6 4 7 91 ... oh my puush.. http://puu.sh/iDA35.png okay

00:30:177 (30177|4,30326|5,30771|4,30920|3,31217|5) - ctrl + H.. PR please aww my bad

00:32:405 (32405|0,32702|8,32850|0) - ctrl + H, wew y u use so many reversed PR here, it doesn't works well with hand movement & PR hehhe okay xD

00:33:890 (33890|8,34038|0,34187|2) - 5 3 1 ok

00:49:038 (49038|3,49335|1) - 2 4 done
00:54:682 (54682|6,54830|1,54979|7,55128|3,55276|5) - 6 8 4 2 5 ok
01:02:405 (62405|7,62702|1) - 9 1 okay

and repeats again.. X___X hahahhaa xD

01:17:702 (77702|1,77850|2,77999|3,78147|4,78296|5,78444|6) - 1 3 6 4 7 9 ok done
01:24:385 (84385|2,84533|3,84682|6,84830|5,84979|4) - 1 3 5 7 9 okay

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

for lv.10 until 20, its not that i don't like this diff, b-baka, but i suggest you to do some.. '8+1K' style, to keep your layering steady & your pattern would looks alot more neater...
for example :
in lv.10, like 1st verse 00:04:781 (4781|4,4781|8) - 00:05:078 (5078|3,5078|6) - you can move these notes to 1
these drum kicks notes, that placed as 'poly-rhythm' (multiple beat layering) doesn't flows well with the music, cuz it's placed in the main columns where you layers synthesizer..
tl;dr doing 8+1K style in certain spot / part would works alot more better...

OR ignore your layering away from drum kicks & keeps your layering into synthesizer for lesser poly-rhythm... it would works alot better too.. hmmm okay then

one more thing, remember old-rules of vsrg charting, Left columns for lower pitch, and Right column for higher pitch.. x__x this need lots works hehehe okay xD

for now, i could say this map is awesome, yet still looks unpolished in harder diffs (imo).. mostly because of these poly-rhythm stuff..
(this could answer why i leave some part in my Remote Control empty yet there's a sound.. i need to control some layering by doing less poly-rhytm in most part.. :v ) lol thanks :3

good luck shinzo!
okay thanks so much for the mod Usagiiiii ~~~~ <3
>o<
dosyeru
☆ミ ;) ;)
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

dosyeru wrote:

☆ミ ;) ;)
whoa thanks for star D >w< <3
Verniy_Chan
Hi shin-san
NM/M4M as requested

9K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)

[Lv.5]
00:03:296 (3296|4) - change into LN for stream sounds?
00:03:593 (3593|6,3593|2) - move to 4,6 since diffirent from 00:03:890 - or 00:03:890 (3890|6) - move to 6, your choice
00:05:227 (5227|1) - it will be nice if here following low stair pattern like 00:05:375 (5375|7,5524|6,5672|5)
00:09:979 (9979|1,10128|8) - conflict pattern 00:05:227 (5227|1,5375|7) but same rhytim :3
00:13:395 (13395|5) - move to 5
00:24:682 (24682|3) - stream sounds
00:27:652 (27652|5) - ?
00:30:326 (30326|3) - move to 3, more space
00:30:920 (30920|5) - move to 7 ^
00:32:108 (32108|7,32405|8) - i think this pattern same rhytim
00:32:850 (32850|8,32999|6) - move to left 2x for variation, you can ignore here if you following pitch :P
00:39:830 (39830|3,40425|5) - you know i mean
00:42:207 - add note, since you add note here 00:41:613
00:46:959 (46959|2) - move 5 balance
00:51:118 (51118|6,51415|4) - move to left 1x
00:53:197 (53197|1) - stream :P
01:08:494 (68494|6) - move to 6, then 01:08:939 (68939|5,69236|5) - move to 7 or 8, balance

[Lv.10]
00:03:593 - kick + hithat & 00:03:890 - sare + hithat, please change pattern because diffirent rhytim
00:09:385 (9385|3) - move to 5, check 00:07:009
00:16:662 (16662|1) - move to 1, balance
00:17:553 (17553|5) - move to 5, then 00:17:850 (17850|7) - move to 9
00:21:266 (21266|2) - move to 5
00:30:474 (30474|2) - please change another collum, because 00:30:177 (30177|4,30326|3) - diffirent rhytim
00:38:642 (38642|5,38791|6) - move to left 1x
00:42:207 (42207|3) - move to 5
00:43:098 - add note?
00:50:672 - add note, since you add note here 00:45:920 - for consistency
00:50:969 - add note, since you add note here 00:46:217 - for consistency
00:53:345 (53345|3) - move to 5, balance
00:55:425 - & 00:55:722 - you know i mean :P
01:02:108 - add note, consistency
01:02:702 - ^
01:03:296 - ^
01:04:187 (64187|6,64187|2,64484|2,64484|6) - same reason like first
01:13:692 (73692|8,73692|0,73989|0,73989|8) - ^

[Lv.15]
00:20:227 - add note, check 00:19:038 - 00:17:850 -
00:24:682 (24682|7,24756|1,24830|7,24905|1) - i think stair pattern look great
00:33:741 (33741|4,33816|3) - i'am not sure here 1/4 :3
00:41:316 (41316|7,41464|6,41613|5) - move to right 1x, balance
00:53:197 (53197|3,53271|4,53345|5,53420|6,53494|7,53494|2) - move to right 1x
00:58:246 (58246|1) - move to 1, row balance
01:17:702 (77702|2,77850|7) - Ctrl + G

[Lv.20]
00:22:009 (22009|4,22009|0,22083|4,22083|1,22157|2,22157|4) - dafuq :v
00:50:746 - add note? or 00:50:672 - remove 1 note? for stream kick like 00:55:499
01:04:187 (64187|3,64187|7) - move to 1,7
01:07:306 (67306|3) - move to 9, row balance
01:19:632 - add note, since this sounds 4 note, check 01:18:444
01:22:603 (82603|4,82603|8,82677|7,82677|4,82751|6,82751|4) - dafuq season 2

this is my first time mod 9K, lel
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Topic Starter
Shinzo-

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi shin-san
NM/M4M as requested

9K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|


(Focus : Note Presence , Hand/Row Balance, Variation/Consistency Pattern)

[Lv.5]
00:03:296 (3296|4) - change into LN for stream sounds? pop'n style ._. no LN
00:03:593 (3593|6,3593|2) - move to 4,6 since diffirent from 00:03:890 - or 00:03:890 (3890|6) - move to 6, your choice same pitch D:
00:05:227 (5227|1) - it will be nice if here following low stair pattern like 00:05:375 (5375|7,5524|6,5672|5) pitch hehe
00:09:979 (9979|1,10128|8) - conflict pattern 00:05:227 (5227|1,5375|7) but same rhytim :3 ahh fine then, re-arranged
00:13:395 (13395|5) - move to 5 same pitch
00:24:682 (24682|3) - stream sounds so what ? :P
00:27:652 (27652|5) - ? hm... actually theres a sound, but i didnt add it before, it because of a modding b-b-but.... ok then ill consider it :3
00:30:326 (30326|3) - move to 3, more space naisu =w=
00:30:920 (30920|5) - move to 7 ^ ^
00:32:108 (32108|7,32405|8) - i think this pattern same rhytim aaa ==a gagal faham
00:32:850 (32850|8,32999|6) - move to left 2x for variation, you can ignore here if you following pitch :P hmmm nice nice
00:39:830 (39830|3,40425|5) - you know i mean what ? awkakwakwkw okay
00:42:207 - add note, since you add note here 00:41:613 hmmm nice catch >w<
00:46:959 (46959|2) - move 5 balance moved to 4
00:51:118 (51118|6,51415|4) - move to left 1x ok nice =w=
00:53:197 (53197|1) - stream :P no :P
01:08:494 (68494|6) - move to 6, then 01:08:939 (68939|5,69236|5) - move to 7 or 8, balance nooo AAAAA

[Lv.10]
00:03:593 - kick + hithat & 00:03:890 - sare + hithat, please change pattern because diffirent rhytim FINE
00:09:385 (9385|3) - move to 5, check 00:07:009 susah gitu
00:16:662 (16662|1) - move to 1, balance ok
00:17:553 (17553|5) - move to 5, then 00:17:850 (17850|7) - move to 9 hmmmm nice nice
00:21:266 (21266|2) - move to 5 no ><
00:30:474 (30474|2) - please change another collum, because 00:30:177 (30177|4,30326|3) - diffirent rhytim actually, yes
00:38:642 (38642|5,38791|6) - move to left 1x jelek ah
00:42:207 (42207|3) - move to 5 okayyy
00:43:098 - add note? okok
00:50:672 - add note, since you add note here 00:45:920 - for consistency ok then
00:50:969 - add note, since you add note here 00:46:217 - for consistency ^
00:53:345 (53345|3) - move to 5, balance ok
00:55:425 - & 00:55:722 - you know i mean :P k then
01:02:108 - add note, consistency no this is normal D:
01:02:702 - ^ ^
01:03:296 - ^ ^
01:04:187 (64187|6,64187|2,64484|2,64484|6) - same reason like first ok
01:13:692 (73692|8,73692|0,73989|0,73989|8) - ^ ^

[Lv.15]
00:20:227 - add note, check 00:19:038 - 00:17:850 - sorry i think the sound is not loud like others, so.. ill keep it for now
00:24:682 (24682|7,24756|1,24830|7,24905|1) - i think stair pattern look great but mainstream :3
00:33:741 (33741|4,33816|3) - i'am not sure here 1/4 :3 its 1/8 but this is not insane so.... 1/4
00:41:316 (41316|7,41464|6,41613|5) - move to right 1x, balance very nice catch >w<
00:53:197 (53197|3,53271|4,53345|5,53420|6,53494|7,53494|2) - move to right 1x no for balance
00:58:246 (58246|1) - move to 1, row balance k then
01:17:702 (77702|2,77850|7) - Ctrl + G boom nice

[Lv.20]
00:22:009 (22009|4,22009|0,22083|4,22083|1,22157|2,22157|4) - dafuq :v AAAAA
00:50:746 - add note? or 00:50:672 - remove 1 note? for stream kick like 00:55:499 oh ye nice catch, deleted 1 note on 00:55:499 -
01:04:187 (64187|3,64187|7) - move to 1,7 no, its for continuing the flow with 01:03:890 (63890|3,63890|7,63964|1,63964|5,64038|3,64038|7,64113|1,64113|5) -
01:07:306 (67306|3) - move to 9, row balance okay, also re-arranged
01:19:632 - add note, since this sounds 4 note, check 01:18:444 yep, because the one is have a synt but the other one not
01:22:603 (82603|4,82603|8,82677|7,82677|4,82751|6,82751|4) - dafuq season 2 AAAAAa season 2

this is my first time mod 9K, lel SOMEBODY SCREAM !!! LOL
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Thanks so much for mod verniy >w< <3 <3
Fubukicat
Hi Shin
hope it will help :3

9K is Nine Knight
Collumn 9K = 1/2/3/4/5/6/7/8/9
9K !!!!! hhhnnnnnng go for it ! :3
[Lv.20]
00:22:083 (22083|4) - I think , maybe that could be better placed on 6th collumn instead of triple jack wich is kinda hard to press
00:25:128 (25128|3) - add note ( melody sound)
^really soft sound so I think maybe no need
01:22:677 (82677|4) - same suggestion as above but moving it to 4 this time
[Lv.10]
00:28:543 (28543|0) - you can add one more note here
00:30:474 (30474|0) - here aswell ^
00:42:801 (42801|6) - add note to 7
[Lv.05]
00:11:761 (11761|2,12058|2) - move to 2 so you don't have alot of time the 3rd collumn pressed cause of this > 00:12:652 (12652|2,12949|2) -
00:20:227 (20227|7) - (optional) you can add a note to 8 for cymbal sound

Nice diff , and BG are cute >////< hau~
Good Luck , have a nice day shin , here is a star :3/
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