orioncomet wrote:

Add your BG in the folder/diff again, If you use different about BG on other diff When you uploadding, osu! will ask you like this

[attachment=0:564b5]bgbg.jpg[/attachment:564b5]

pass [No] If you don't want to delete them And Full submit again

Derfas13 wrote:

HitSounds suggestion.

1. You'll need an easier difficulty. Preferably below a 3.00 star rating.
2. You need a "hitcircleoverlay.png" as well.
3. Yeah, don't add your own name to the tags.
4. What's with the "star.png"? That's only used for the song selection screen. Delete it.

1. Don't be lazy. Map the whole song. You need an easier difficulty anyways.

1. You have too many Kiai Time fountains placed throughout this map. The worst part is that they pop up randomly.
2. 00:42:373 (3) - Snap this slider on 1/4 ticks instead of 1/6 ticks.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:49:432 (5) - Same concept as above. ^
4. 01:05:977 (1) - Mirror this horizontally with 4.
5. 01:06:860 (3) - Mirror this horizontally with 2.
6. 03:16:575 (1,2) - Move farther from 3 from the previous combo.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Overall things]

1. You'll need an easier difficulty. Preferably below a 3.00 star rating.
2. You need a "hitcircleoverlay.png" as well.
3. Yeah, don't add your own name to the tags.
4. What's with the "star.png"? That's only used for the song selection screen. Delete it.

[Normal]

1. Don't be lazy. Map the whole song. You need an easier difficulty anyways.

[Hard]

1. You have too many Kiai Time fountains placed throughout this map. The worst part is that they pop up randomly.
2. 00:42:373 (3) - Snap this slider on 1/4 ticks instead of 1/6 ticks.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:49:432 (5) - Same concept as above. ^
4. 01:05:977 (1) - Mirror this horizontally with 4.
5. 01:06:860 (3) - Mirror this horizontally with 2.
6. 03:16:575 (1,2) - Move farther from 3 from the previous combo.

Derfas13 wrote:

Easy difficulty for you =)

Mafiamaster wrote:

Wasn't there a [Normal]? It doesn't seem to be submitted.

Mafiamaster wrote:

[Other things]
"05.png" isn't needed for the SB. Just fade out "04.png" since the background is the same as "05.png"

Louis Cyphre wrote:

БГ для твоей мапы:[attachment=0:f3753]BG D.jpg[/attachment:f3753]

Larto wrote:

Firstly, use the storyboarding in the .osu that I uploaded.

Hard:
01:42:157 - What's with this Kiai fountain?
01:58:481 - ^
02:05:541 (4,1) - Fix the spacing.
02:50:103 - Make the Kiai start here instead of at 02:51:868 - maybe
03:32:459 - Make the Kiai start here instead of at 03:34:224 - maybe

Easy:
01:00:793 (1) - Spinner way too short for an easy. Remove.
01:04:323 (1) - ^
01:07:853 (1) - ^
01:11:382 (1) - ^
01:14:912 (1) - ^
01:18:442 (1) - ^
01:21:971 (1) - ^
01:53:738 (1) - ^
01:57:268 (1) - ^
02:00:798 (1) - ^
02:04:328 (1) - ^
02:07:857 (1) - ^
02:11:387 (1) - ^
02:14:917 (1) - ^
02:18:446 (1) - ^

Larto wrote:

Firstly, use the storyboarding in the .osu that I uploaded. In your version there's some shaking and shifting with the last fading.It's almost invisible,but it was noticed through Editor in CtB mode.

Hard:
01:42:157, 01:58:481- What's with this Kiai fountain? I wanted to pick this moments out.I'd like to leave them, if it's possible.
02:05:541 (4,1) - Fix the spacing. There's a NC.I was putting these 2 hitcircles right to the center through all the map in similar moments.Wouldn't it be a lil bit weird to move them further?

02:50:103 - Make the Kiai start here instead of at 02:51:868 - maybe Stood.
03:32:459 - Make the Kiai start here instead of at 03:34:224 - maybe Stood.

Easy:
01:00:793 (1) - Spinner way too short for an easy. Remove. It's quite readable.Derfas13,as well as me,thinks that there's nothing better to put instead of it.We can rename it to Normal,if you like '~'
01:04:323 (1) - ^
01:07:853 (1) - ^
01:11:382 (1) - ^
01:14:912 (1) - ^
01:18:442 (1) - ^
01:21:971 (1) - ^
01:53:738 (1) - ^
01:57:268 (1) - ^
02:00:798 (1) - ^
02:04:328 (1) - ^
02:07:857 (1) - ^
02:11:387 (1) - ^
02:14:917 (1) - ^
02:18:446 (1) - ^

1. You have the same image on the "SB" folder and in the root folder, working as a BG. Since I see no need for it, delete one and use the same editing the .osu files.
2. Add an approachcircle, even if it's the default.
3. Countdown is enabled in one difficulty and disabled on the other. Intentional?
4. Use BPM 136.00 and Offset 687.

1. You could reduce the use of the finish hitsound a bit, it seems like overtakes the song at times.
2. Some sliders could look better with less waypoints. Screenshots to show what I mean:

Gens wrote:

Things.

1. You have the same image on the "SB" folder and in the root folder, working as a BG. Since I see no need for it, delete one and use the same editing the .osu files.It's used in SBing.W/o it,after fading the pictrure shakes a little.And this one helps to do fading as more soft as it possible.
2. Add an approachcircle, even if it's the default.Added.
3. Countdown is enabled in one difficulty and disabled on the other. Intentional? Fixed.
4. Use BPM 136.00 and Offset 687.Fixed.All notes and timing sections are fully resnaped on both difficulties.

[Hard]

00:35:093 (4) - Why use 1/3 snap here? Fixed.

Overall improvement:

1. You could reduce the use of the finish hitsound a bit, it seems like overtakes the song at times.Removed some of them,but in general I'd like to keep them.
2. Some sliders could look better with less waypoints. Screenshots to show what I mean:Fixed many of them.

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Reduced to a star for now. Call me back when you fix everything.