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pkhg
osu! is our real world \:3/
Cloudchaser

pkhg wrote:

osu! is our real world \:3/
I'm the real world
Dariano
IRC thing (Spanish)
19:43 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313960 Subkulture feat. Klayton of Celldweller - Erasus [Normal]]
19:45 Dariano: verga que cool esta
19:46 Dariano: solo es la light insnae?
19:46 Dariano: insane
19:46 ErunamoJAZZ: es la normal realmente
19:46 Dariano: Okay
19:46 ErunamoJAZZ: aaunque si quieres ver el insane (light insane), dale :)
19:47 Dariano: Supongo que lo que viste en el ai mod fue el not snapped
19:47 Dariano: 01:37:696 (2) -
19:48 ErunamoJAZZ: si
19:48 ErunamoJAZZ: aunque creo que ya lo corregí :P
19:50 Dariano: 00:38:363 (3) - no te gustaria eso un poco mas hacia arriba?
19:50 Dariano: o sino un grid hacia abajo?
19:50 Dariano: para mi se ve rarito, pero no es nada
19:51 ErunamoJAZZ: hecho
19:51 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/icUNj/e6bd691c41.jpg
19:51 Dariano: perfect *-*
19:54 Dariano: 00:53:697 (1,2) - en este coro es en el unico que usas ese patron
19:55 Dariano: y para mi lo encuentro confuso
19:55 Dariano: en los demas usaste otras cosas, tal vez puedas copiar el patron de otro coro
19:55 Dariano: como un triple slider
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: es un problema eso
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: se que se pueden hacer cosas más cheveres ahí
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: pero ya empieza a quedar demasiado dificil también xD
19:56 Dariano: y si
19:57 ErunamoJAZZ: la ventaja que le veo a lo que hice...
19:57 Dariano: intentas poner un circulo ahi?
19:57 Dariano: 00:54:030 -
19:57 ErunamoJAZZ: ... es que es hasta cierto punto, intuitivo
19:58 Dariano: O sea, sigue la musica, solo es sugerencia
19:58 Dariano: cualquier cosa te lo mencionan luego si en verdad esta mal
20:03 Dariano: ugh
20:04 ErunamoJAZZ: ??
20:04 Dariano: 02:15:030 -
20:05 Dariano: creo que quedaria mejor
20:05 Dariano: http://puu.sh/icVv7/777c03f7f7.jpg
20:05 Dariano: algo asi
20:05 Dariano: o
20:05 Dariano: http://puu.sh/icVws/12a6f23d12.jpg
20:06 Dariano: ohhhh
20:06 Dariano: simplemente
20:06 Dariano: 02:16:197 (6) -
20:06 Dariano: eso no deberia estar ahi creo
20:06 ErunamoJAZZ: mm... pero... no entiendo por qué :P
20:06 Dariano: porque es que comienzas un patron 1/1
20:06 Dariano: luego de esa nota
20:06 Dariano: y entonces esa es 1/2
20:06 Dariano: y como que no pega porque en ese pedazo la cancion "se calma"
20:07 Dariano: ohhh
20:07 Dariano: espera
20:07 Dariano: tengo mucho que no hago esto
20:07 Dariano: estoy algo confundido
20:07 Dariano: creo que es el NC que esta mal
20:07 Dariano: 02:16:197 (1) - 02:16:197 (6) -
20:07 Dariano: 02:16:197 (6) - **
20:07 ErunamoJAZZ: nahh
20:07 Dariano: deberia estar NC como te andas llevando de la voz
20:07 ErunamoJAZZ: el nc está bien
20:07 Dariano: en ese pedazo
20:08 ErunamoJAZZ: mm...
20:08 ErunamoJAZZ: mmmm....
20:11 ErunamoJAZZ: no creo que lo cambie
20:11 ErunamoJAZZ: en cuanto al patron, no creo que haya proble, el cambio de polaridad es suave
20:11 Dariano: Bien
20:11 Dariano: 02:59:030 (1) -
20:11 ErunamoJAZZ: y con el combo
20:11 Dariano: whistle sound
20:11 Dariano: creo que falta?
20:11 ErunamoJAZZ: lo veo inconsistenmte sile cambio el sitio xD
20:12 ErunamoJAZZ: hecho.
20:14 Dariano: 03:34:530 (3,4) -
20:14 ErunamoJAZZ: o.o
20:14 ErunamoJAZZ: sin cambios ahí xD
20:14 Dariano: si lo arreglas asi se ve mejor http://puu.sh/icVYV/bb98b267bd.jpg
20:15 Dariano: y por ahi aprovechas y haces
20:15 Dariano: 03:35:030 (1,2) -
20:15 Dariano: simetrico? :O
20:15 Dariano: :o*
20:16 ErunamoJAZZ: voy a confiar en mi yo del pasado
20:16 ErunamoJAZZ: nahh
20:16 Dariano: xD
20:16 Dariano: ok
20:16 Dariano: que bueno esta le mapa
20:16 Dariano: el *
20:17 ErunamoJAZZ: gracias
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: omg
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: el bubble is coming
20:20 Dariano: :p
20:20 Dariano: oye
20:20 Dariano: por que esto esta separado de esta manera
20:21 Dariano: 01:07:697 (3,1) -
20:21 Dariano: si los que le siguen van mas lejos en el tiempo y tienen la misma distancia
20:21 Dariano: eso es la insane
20:21 Dariano: me confundio demasiado cuando lo jugué
20:21 Dariano: creo que ese 1 rosado deberia estar cercano al slider y los demas si mas lejos
20:23 ErunamoJAZZ: para sorprender xD
20:24 ErunamoJAZZ: el lugar está dado es por que, al momento de hacer el cuadrado/diamante con los circulos
20:24 ErunamoJAZZ: simplemente hice stack con 01:07:697 (3,4) -
20:25 ErunamoJAZZ: tendría que hacer ese cuadrado más horizontal entonces.. pero creo que queda feo
20:29 Dariano: 03:52:363 (1) -
20:29 Dariano: que tal dos grid a la izquierda?
20:29 Dariano: y eso seria todo
20:29 Dariano: i guess
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ

Dariano wrote:

IRC thing (Spanish)
19:43 *ErunamoJAZZ is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/313960 Subkulture feat. Klayton of Celldweller - Erasus [Normal]]
19:45 Dariano: verga que cool esta
19:46 Dariano: solo es la light insnae?
19:46 Dariano: insane
19:46 ErunamoJAZZ: es la normal realmente
19:46 Dariano: Okay
19:46 ErunamoJAZZ: aaunque si quieres ver el insane (light insane), dale :)
19:47 Dariano: Supongo que lo que viste en el ai mod fue el not snapped
19:47 Dariano: 01:37:696 (2) -
19:48 ErunamoJAZZ: si
19:48 ErunamoJAZZ: aunque creo que ya lo corregí :P
19:50 Dariano: 00:38:363 (3) - no te gustaria eso un poco mas hacia arriba?
19:50 Dariano: o sino un grid hacia abajo?
19:50 Dariano: para mi se ve rarito, pero no es nada
19:51 ErunamoJAZZ: hecho
19:51 ErunamoJAZZ: http://puu.sh/icUNj/e6bd691c41.jpg
19:51 Dariano: perfect *-*
19:54 Dariano: 00:53:697 (1,2) - en este coro es en el unico que usas ese patron
19:55 Dariano: y para mi lo encuentro confuso
19:55 Dariano: en los demas usaste otras cosas, tal vez puedas copiar el patron de otro coro
19:55 Dariano: como un triple slider
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: es un problema eso
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: se que se pueden hacer cosas más cheveres ahí
19:56 ErunamoJAZZ: pero ya empieza a quedar demasiado dificil también xD
19:56 Dariano: y si
19:57 ErunamoJAZZ: la ventaja que le veo a lo que hice...
19:57 Dariano: intentas poner un circulo ahi?
19:57 Dariano: 00:54:030 -
19:57 ErunamoJAZZ: ... es que es hasta cierto punto, intuitivo
19:58 Dariano: O sea, sigue la musica, solo es sugerencia
19:58 Dariano: cualquier cosa te lo mencionan luego si en verdad esta mal
20:03 Dariano: ugh
20:04 ErunamoJAZZ: ??
20:04 Dariano: 02:15:030 -
20:05 Dariano: creo que quedaria mejor
20:05 Dariano: http://puu.sh/icVv7/777c03f7f7.jpg
20:05 Dariano: algo asi
20:05 Dariano: o
20:05 Dariano: http://puu.sh/icVws/12a6f23d12.jpg
20:06 Dariano: ohhhh
20:06 Dariano: simplemente
20:06 Dariano: 02:16:197 (6) -
20:06 Dariano: eso no deberia estar ahi creo
20:06 ErunamoJAZZ: mm... pero... no entiendo por qué :P
20:06 Dariano: porque es que comienzas un patron 1/1
20:06 Dariano: luego de esa nota
20:06 Dariano: y entonces esa es 1/2
20:06 Dariano: y como que no pega porque en ese pedazo la cancion "se calma"
20:07 Dariano: ohhh
20:07 Dariano: espera
20:07 Dariano: tengo mucho que no hago esto
20:07 Dariano: estoy algo confundido
20:07 Dariano: creo que es el NC que esta mal
20:07 Dariano: 02:16:197 (1) - 02:16:197 (6) -
20:07 Dariano: 02:16:197 (6) - **
20:07 ErunamoJAZZ: nahh
20:07 Dariano: deberia estar NC como te andas llevando de la voz
20:07 ErunamoJAZZ: el nc está bien
20:07 Dariano: en ese pedazo
20:08 ErunamoJAZZ: mm...
20:08 ErunamoJAZZ: mmmm....
20:11 ErunamoJAZZ: no creo que lo cambie
20:11 ErunamoJAZZ: en cuanto al patron, no creo que haya proble, el cambio de polaridad es suave
20:11 Dariano: Bien
20:11 Dariano: 02:59:030 (1) -
20:11 ErunamoJAZZ: y con el combo
20:11 Dariano: whistle sound
20:11 Dariano: creo que falta?
20:11 ErunamoJAZZ: lo veo inconsistenmte sile cambio el sitio xD
20:12 ErunamoJAZZ: hecho.
20:14 Dariano: 03:34:530 (3,4) -
20:14 ErunamoJAZZ: o.o
20:14 ErunamoJAZZ: sin cambios ahí xD
20:14 Dariano: si lo arreglas asi se ve mejor http://puu.sh/icVYV/bb98b267bd.jpg
20:15 Dariano: y por ahi aprovechas y haces
20:15 Dariano: 03:35:030 (1,2) -
20:15 Dariano: simetrico? :O
20:15 Dariano: :o*
20:16 ErunamoJAZZ: voy a confiar en mi yo del pasado
20:16 ErunamoJAZZ: nahh
20:16 Dariano: xD
20:16 Dariano: ok
20:16 Dariano: que bueno esta le mapa
20:16 Dariano: el *
20:17 ErunamoJAZZ: gracias
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: omg
20:18 ErunamoJAZZ: el bubble is coming
20:20 Dariano: :p
20:20 Dariano: oye
20:20 Dariano: por que esto esta separado de esta manera
20:21 Dariano: 01:07:697 (3,1) -
20:21 Dariano: si los que le siguen van mas lejos en el tiempo y tienen la misma distancia
20:21 Dariano: eso es la insane
20:21 Dariano: me confundio demasiado cuando lo jugué
20:21 Dariano: creo que ese 1 rosado deberia estar cercano al slider y los demas si mas lejos
20:23 ErunamoJAZZ: para sorprender xD
20:24 ErunamoJAZZ: el lugar está dado es por que, al momento de hacer el cuadrado/diamante con los circulos
20:24 ErunamoJAZZ: simplemente hice stack con 01:07:697 (3,4) -
20:25 ErunamoJAZZ: tendría que hacer ese cuadrado más horizontal entonces.. pero creo que queda feo
20:29 Dariano: 03:52:363 (1) -
20:29 Dariano: que tal dos grid a la izquierda?
20:29 Dariano: y eso seria todo
20:29 Dariano: i guess
Thank you Dariano, and also to Cloudchaser for see the normal :3

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Changes in normal => Ok really Im dont happy with all changes in normal... but okay, i really want to rank this, so, here we go:
- I changed all sections of short sliders... (in 00:48:363 (1) - 00:53:697 (1) - 00:59:030 (1) - 01:41:697 (1) - ). For me this was intuitive and i really dont see any problem, but everyone complained about it... so... okay (i hate to me bc this xDD dont worry, im fine u.u).
- Also, i changed the little slider with long repeat in 02:59:030 (1) - ... this was fine, seriously, but okay, community think this is bad and want bored stuffs, then i delete and change it >_>

Actually I dont want a drama with this... but I just want to write my point... for the "future self" xD


Okay, im ready for a bubble!!
Narcissu
good luck your 1st rank map - -
Cloudchaser

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Okay, im ready for a bubble!!
for god's sake
Nyukai

Cloudchaser wrote:

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Okay, im ready for a bubble!!
for god's sake
ZiRoX
Qué pasa aquí o3o
ddfgit
ok, i give you a star + please maybe kudosu :3:
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ
ZiRoX
Okay, given the circle posted by Gero p/4205489, and that the CTB difficulty is fine, let's bubble this!

However, to the next BN, I'd prefer you double check some stuff:

  1. Firstly, there's a stack on a slidertail on Normal at 02:25:697 (1,2) - , which was mentioned (although not directly) under additional modding in the DQ post (p/3914938), but wasn't a DQ reason itself. It has been mentioned by a few BN, but since it wasn't a DQ reason the mapper has been against changing it. If you feel it's an issue, though, keep insisting to the mapper, I guess there's a limit to how stubborn someone can be.

  2. Secondly, there's this stuff mentioned by Gero, specially the spinner thing.

    Gero wrote:

    ~ Circle'd ~


    For the BN who will qualify this: I suggest you double check the rhythms at the normal difficulty especially the kiai time due there are some 1/2 sliders that makes me worried so would be nice if you check them carefully to avoid any possible disqualification also about the spinners at 03:08:363 - this part, I think they're fine but please confirm that the length of this spinner is rankable for easier difficulties since this is quite long in my opinion.
Good luck!
pkhg
hyperino
Cloudchaser
i smell pop

/me pops the bubble
pkhg
i smell poop

/me poops the bubble
jonathanlfj
looks good to go for me
XinCrin
congratulado
Cloudchaser
IT'S HAPPENING AGAIN

Felicidades y ojalá perdure en ranked ;)
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ
OMG, WAAAAAAAAA THANKS JONATHAN!!
Cloudchaser
ARIGATOU JONA-SAN 3kawia5me
DakeDekaane

pkhg wrote:

/me poops the bubble
Hey, that's my job,

Congratulations Eru.
Dawns
pkhg
ķøňğŕåťūłä2
Neku Okazaki
Genial Erunamo ahora busca mods para tu gd (?
DeletedUser_4329079
Yayy
DaxMasterix
Congra tula tions! 8-)
CSLM
felicidades eru!
lo que tanto haz trabajado finalmente esta brindando frutos :D
Bakane es QAT!!!! D: /me run
Dawns
As much as I like this map it must be DQ'ed for a fix


Inyus Hard



This is an unwarranted finish which is unrankable.
(Hitsounds must be perfected)

/me summons DQ overlords
ZiRoX

[ C R O W N S ] wrote:

As much as I like this map it must be DQ'ed for a fix




This is an unwarranted finish which is unrankable.

/me summons DQ overlords
It doesn't make any difference.
Topic Starter
ErunamoJAZZ
hahahahahaha, man, the hitsounds are fine. Pls, find a real reason when you want to DQ a map :P
also, this was not a mistake o.o
Dawns

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

hahahahahaha, man, the hitsounds are fine. Pls, find a real reason when you want to DQ a map :P
also, this was not a mistake o.o
random cymbal smash out of nowhere isn't a mistake.
Bad hitsounding is a reason.
also it's not even your map; who are you to say it's not a mistake lmao
Nyukai
Don't feed the trolls guys.
phaZ
i think the song was taken in the symphony series because of a really well known dota1 video tho^^ i wanted to map this song since back then :P
nice map :>
ZiRoX

[ C R O W N S ] wrote:

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

hahahahahaha, man, the hitsounds are fine. Pls, find a real reason when you want to DQ a map :P
also, this was not a mistake o.o
random cymbal smash out of nowhere isn't a mistake.
Bad hitsounding is a reason.
also it's not even your map; who are you to say it's not a mistake lmao
Using your same logic: it's not even your map, who are you to say it's a mistake lmao.

Anyway, let the true QATs decide. Not some random QAT-wannabe-scrub
Nomination Assessment Team

Disqualification Notice



Hello!

Unfortunately, the Quality Assurance Team has decided to disqualify this beatmap. The following is a list of reasons and examples for the disqualification. We do not outline every issue in detail, so make sure to take the idea behind each reason and apply it to the entire beatmap as issues might be found in more than the spots mentioned below. If you have any questions, please reply to this post and we will do our best to clarify any misunderstandings.

  1. (M) Mapping Quality
    - Unpolished patterns in EraseUs difficulty. There are many instances in which the spacing is inconsistent (even visually). As a result your patterns often appear generally unpolished. Therefore your patterns not only appear unstructured but the flow is affected as well, making some spots have unnecessarily rough movements. In addition, there are some points where you have decided to use fairly large jumps even though the music barely changes, making them unreasonable. We recommend you to either rearrange them or to decrease the spacing between them.
    • Examples:
      00:52:363 (1,2,3,4,1) - The placement appears random as 00:53:363 - is emphasized while 00:53:697 - has the stronger cymbal note.
      01:03:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too large jumps without relation to the music building a difficulty spike.
      03:19:863 (6,7,8) - Similiar occasion to the one above.
      03:30:197 (2,3) - This stack causes a stop movement even though the beat on the red tick is quite strong.
    - Rhythm choices in the EraseUs difficulty are generally improvable. There are several spots where you tend to map strong beats like outstanding cymbals on downbeats with slidertails. Slidertails have the issue that in gameplay, they are no clickable elements, making these particularely strong notes feel underemphasized. This doesn't just cause a loss of impact on these beats but also makes them play unnatural due to them being spread throughout the whole difficulty. We recommend you to adjust these ones to actually get a higher emphasis on these strong beats in order to make feel more natural to play.
    • Examples:
      01:49:363 (1) - This and the following examples all have a rather strong beat like (e.g. 01:49:697 - in this case) followed with their tail making this feel unnatural to play as explained above.
      01:54:697 (1) -
      03:22:697 (10) -
      03:25:363 (1) -
    - Some sliders use an inappropriate speed in Kurokami's Rain. It'll be recommendable not to use edgy/fast sliders for calm parts, as in 02:39:697 (6) - or 02:45:030 (3) - for example.
    - Extreme distance/direction changes in some streams in Kurokami's Rain. It's okay to add direction changes when you place a stream, but specially the case of 00:41:697 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - must be softened. The last direction change is extreme and leads to expectable misses if the player isn't prepared for that.

If you happen to have concerns about this disqualification, you can contest the decision with this form. Before using this form, please read the instructions carefully.

We sincerely apologize for the inconvenience and hope your map will be requalified soon! The Beatmap Nominators will handle this mapset after the issues have been addressed.

Good luck and thank you for contributing to the osu! community with your efforts!

###M
Nyukai
Well.
meii18
second dq ;w;
HappyRocket88
Never give up. Eru. \(o.o)/
Dawns
Oh boy. What. Did. I. Say.
Kami Kun

[ C R O W N S ] wrote:

it's not even your map; who are you to say it's not a mistake lmao

^ That's what you said scrub.
Yuii-
Poor Eru. Let him live.
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