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yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou [OsuMania|Osu]

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Topic Starter
AsakuraNe
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, July 22, 2015 at 10:58:34 PM

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Vidro Moyou
Source: Ano Natsu de Matteru
Tags: あの夏で待ってる Waiting in the summer Ending Tv_Size Frim4503
BPM: 131
Filesize: 16431kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Frim's HD - 5Key (2.86 stars, 712 notes)
  2. Frim's NM - 5Key (1.91 stars, 497 notes)
  3. Hard (2.89 stars, 191 notes)
  4. Normal (1.31 stars, 16 notes)
  5. Sh1n1's Easy (1.25 stars, 73 notes)
Download: yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou
Download: yanaginagi - Vidro Moyou (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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4th Map for Rank~ :3 Everything is still WIP :3
Just wanted to post a map exactly on my BIRTHDAY :D Wahaha. lol

゚・✿ヾ╲(。◕‿◕。)╱✿・゚
EASY by -Sh1n1-
NORMAL by me
HARD by me
INSANE by me
NM by Frim4503
HD by Frim4503
◕‿‿◕

I Just sooo Love the anime~ :)
Sc4v4ng3r
First? xD copy others' actions are the best

GL for ranked! :D
Topic Starter
AsakuraNe
2nd xD whahaha







@scavenger: Haha. THANKS :D
Sc4v4ng3r
A quick check on metadata, no kudos~

  1. Kanji song title is supposed to be ビードロ模様.
  2. Kanji artist name is supposed to be やなぎなぎ.
  3. The anime's kanji title is あの夏で待ってる.

You know what to do with the English texts, right?
GL!
Topic Starter
AsakuraNe

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

A quick check on metadata, no kudos~

  1. Kanji song title is supposed to be ビードロ模様.
  2. Kanji artist name is supposed to be やなぎなぎ.
  3. The anime's kanji title is あの夏で待ってる.

You know what to do with the English texts, right?
GL!
Searched all and all are correct :D Thanks~!
Sc4v4ng3r
I'm replying so much xD

Making Insane GD, had nothing to do with my life xD
XiMerx

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

I'm replying so much xD

Making Insane GD, had nothing to do with my life xD
Shit, stop making it xD AsakuraNe sais she want to do the whole mapset by herself (since it was her birthday)
Sc4v4ng3r

XiMerx wrote:

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

I'm replying so much xD

Making Insane GD, had nothing to do with my life xD
Shit, stop making it xD AsakuraNe sais she want to do the whole mapset by herself (since it was her birthday)
ohh never knew that xD
ok then let me keep it for myself xD

Instead gonna mod after the whole mapset is completed then.
Bara-


[General]
◾Song Folder: Good
◾Song Setup: Good (well, as it's WIP I can't say anything about the "difficulty" part
◾Timing: Good
◾Hitsounds: Good
◾AImod: Good
It's all good to go

[Hard]
00:04:993 (2,3,4) - I'm no fan of this flow, to movement from (2)->(3) and the slider (3) it self feels weird. Make (3) like this to greatly improve the flow

00:13:237 (5) - This slider feels a little weird. Sliders like this are usually mapped in strong Guitar solos (like DragonForce's, or many 280 BPM+ Vocaloid songs), it's best to keep this a normal slider. Mao once told me red nodes are used for strong scratchy type of sounds, while grey nodes (or grey + 1 red or something like that) is best for calm songs. Please simplify this slider a little (a normal wiggle would be better (grey nodes only))

00:13:237 (5,9) - Were these intended to be stacked? If so, they need to be stacked better, cause it looks really off. If not, either stack them better or move (9) away from (5)

00:18:962 (1,2,3) - The 1/4 feels really weird, as it doesn't like the way it's timed. It looks like (1) is a 3/4 slider and (2) is the 1/2 slider following it. Space (2,3) out a little, this way they are much better to read (after multiple times, I still have trouble reading these)

00:33:619 (1,2,3) - ^^

00:40:947 (1,2,3) - These slider feel well, but I find it a little weird they all end on the strong clap, I think they work even better if you make the slider a little shorter and add some circles, try to the following timing


00:43:008 - Add a short reverse Arrow slider here, just as in 00:29:496 (8), there is a short string I believe it should be 1/8

00:48:733 (3) - This slider doesn't follow the vocals, it should be 1/2 instead of 1/1

00:57:435 (5) - Slider feels a little boring, as it's quite long and the background music completely changes (to a 1/4 string)
Try add some 1/4 or 1/2 in it to make it a little more special, youu can also keep it for the piano, but I really recommend you to change it

00:58:351 (6) - This sldier should be snapped to 1/8 instead of 1/6, also give each note either a drum hitclap or a soft-hitwhistle, as that follows the music pretty good

01:24:916 (1,2,3,4) - These sound better if they all had the soft-hitwhistle/drum-hitclap instead of the soft-hitclap (to emulate the beat even more)

01:28:466 - I think a circle here would work really good for the final sound

01:29:954 - Why is there a timing point here for a volume change if there are no objects after here? Shouldn't it be moved to 01:29:725 ?

Wow, I love this map!
Good luck ranking it!!!
Topic Starter
AsakuraNe

baraatje123 wrote:



[General]
◾Song Folder: Good
◾Song Setup: Good (well, as it's WIP I can't say anything about the "difficulty" part
◾Timing: Good
◾Hitsounds: Good
◾AImod: Good
It's all good to go

[Hard]
00:04:993 (2,3,4) - I'm no fan of this flow, to movement from (2)->(3) and the slider (3) it self feels weird. Make (3) like this to greatly improve the flow -Done

00:13:237 (5) - This slider feels a little weird. Sliders like this are usually mapped in strong Guitar solos (like DragonForce's, or many 280 BPM+ Vocaloid songs), it's best to keep this a normal slider. Mao once told me red nodes are used for strong scratchy type of sounds, while grey nodes (or grey + 1 red or something like that) is best for calm songs. Please simplify this slider a little (a normal wiggle would be better (grey nodes only)) -Removed the red points

00:13:237 (5,9) - Were these intended to be stacked? If so, they need to be stacked better, cause it looks really off. If not, either stack them better or move (9) away from (5) -Stacked them better

00:18:962 (1,2,3) - The 1/4 feels really weird, as it doesn't like the way it's timed. It looks like (1) is a 3/4 slider and (2) is the 1/2 slider following it. Space (2,3) out a little, this way they are much better to read (after multiple times, I still have trouble reading these) -Removed 2

00:33:619 (1,2,3) - ^^ -Removed 2

00:40:947 (1,2,3) - These slider feel well, but I find it a little weird they all end on the strong clap, I think they work even better if you make the slider a little shorter and add some circles, try to the following timing -Well, it's reasonable but I don't like the clicking circles on that part where the vocal part is long :3


00:43:008 - Add a short reverse Arrow slider here, just as in 00:29:496 (8), there is a short string I believe it should be 1/8 -Following the clap plays better :3 and i could hear that sound until 00:44:382

00:48:733 (3) - This slider doesn't follow the vocals, it should be 1/2 instead of 1/1 -Following the beat sounds and plays a lot better

00:57:435 (5) - Slider feels a little boring, as it's quite long and the background music completely changes (to a 1/4 string)
Try add some 1/4 or 1/2 in it to make it a little more special, youu can also keep it for the piano, but I really recommend you to change it -Yeah. I feel you~ but I can't find a substitute to it that plays good~

00:58:351 (6) - This sldier should be snapped to 1/8 instead of 1/6, also give each note either a drum hitclap or a soft-hitwhistle, as that follows the music pretty good -Used the Drum hitclap

01:24:916 (1,2,3,4) - These sound better if they all had the soft-hitwhistle/drum-hitclap instead of the soft-hitclap (to emulate the beat even more) -Same as above

01:28:466 - I think a circle here would work really good for the final sound -When I put circle there with a slider before it, it doesn't play good

01:29:954 - Why is there a timing point here for a volume change if there are no objects after here? Shouldn't it be moved to 01:29:725 ? -Oh. lol. Don't know :P Removed~

Wow, I love this map! -THANKS! :D
Good luck ranking it!!!
Thanks for the 1st Mod ;)
Frim4503
GD as requested from PM
just HD and HS
for NMcan you wait until next week ?
i'm still working on it
and i'm pretty busy this week

http://puu.sh/iJghH/eb3f2f04a5.rar
Topic Starter
AsakuraNe

Frim4503 wrote:

GD as requested from PM
just HD and HS
for NMcan you wait until next week ?
i'm still working on it
and i'm pretty busy this week

http://puu.sh/iJghH/eb3f2f04a5.rar
UPDATED~
THANKS~! :D It's okay. I'm sooooooooooooo busy too T__T can't finish the STD diffs~
Frim4503
finally i'm back again
will finish NM dif this week
Topic Starter
AsakuraNe
Yey~ :D But it's exam week for me though :cry:
Frim4503
dont worry
just take your time

i'm not rushing you
Frim4503
GD Done :)

please fix the small stuff like tags or timing

http://puu.sh/iYTOm/ad1797abd3.rar

replace all old file with this one
DahplA
Yay, new map. Can't wait to see this completed. Also, Happy Birthday! (so late, lol)

PS: Enjoy some stars.
Topic Starter
AsakuraNe

Frim4503 wrote:

GD Done :)
UPDATED~! :D


DahplA wrote:

Yay, new map. Can't wait to see this completed. Also, Happy Birthday! (so late, lol) -Haha. But still, Thanks :D

PS: Enjoy some stars.
Thanks for the stars AlphaD \o/
NlHIL

Frim's NM
00:15:298 - add a note
01:10:260 - ^
Frim's HD
00:18:275 - delete the note
00:18:733 - add a note
00:29:038 - ^
00:30:183 - ^

idk about other parts, but here, I can hear drum sound.
00:33:561 - use 1/6 and move to 00:33:542

00:43:466 - add a note
01:28:351 - how about change
DarkSider2442
Hi! From random queue.

5K

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[General]

[Frim's NM]
Mod inside
  1. If you follow the piano, you have to add notes here 00:14:153 - , 00:14:611 - , 00:15:069 - . Try this — http://puu.sh/j4FtS/366ec18282.png
  2. 00:18:733 - add note to 1
  3. 00:27:893 - add note
  4. 00:49:191 - add note, here a piano sound
  5. 00:55:260 (55260|2) - delete, like this 00:14:382 -
  6. 01:06:596 (66596|0) - delete, there is no reason to put 3 notes
  7. 01:18:275 (78275|2) - ^
  8. 01:24:916 - add note with finish hitsound (drum-finish (mania))

[Frim's HD]
Mod inside
  1. 00:06:825 (6825|4,7283|3) - replace on 3 LN 1/2, like this 00:04:993 (4993|2,5222|3,5451|0) - (example — http://puu.sh/j4GBS/919a9231e3.png )
  2. 00:18:275 (18275|0) - replace on LN 1/2 (Be careful, this moment was considered in mod NlHIL)
  3. 00:18:733 - add LN 1/2 (Be careful, this moment was considered in mod NlHIL)
  4. 00:18:962 (18962|1) - delete
  5. 00:20:107 (20107|4) - end this LN at 00:20:565 -
  6. 00:20:794 (20794|1) - move to 1
  7. 00:21:252 (21252|3) - move to 3
  8. 00:21:939 (21939|2) - end this LN at 00:22:168 - , then 00:22:168 - add LN to 00:22:397 -
  9. 00:23:084 (23084|2) - move to 1
  10. 00:26:290 (26290|3) - end this LN at 00:26:519 - , then 00:26:519 - add LN to 00:26:748 -
  11. 00:29:954 (29954|1) - move to 1, more comfortably
  12. 00:43:695 (43695|0) - move to 2
  13. 00:51:710 (51710|0) - delete, there is no reason to put 3 notes
  14. 00:55:546 - add note (how about this? http://puu.sh/j4GYi/ccf3f77dcf.png )
  15. 01:18:275 - delete one note, there is no reson to pur 3 notes
  16. 01:24:916 - add note with finish hitsound (drum-finish (mania))
 

Good luck! :)
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