let me say something here. Actually i don't want to say something like "eh why this map can but why my can't?" because it's something like copying or following the same pattern as other mapper did, but as i said, i DID NOT open any other mapper's map when i am mapping and placing those patterns have my reason. for 01:12:759 (3,4,5) - and other similar pattern, i already gave the reason in my previous post, i am following the vocal, and also slow bpm + slow sv don't too hard for the beginner. but please, if all normal diff are very easy then how are they gonna improve?Project Railgun wrote:
Hello ffstar0716,
I believe following the music (vocal, emphasis points, etc.) is more important than following simply the beats. For Gens' philosophy, see this.
I personally dislike patterns like 01:15:009 (2,3,4) - and 01:18:384 (3,4) - that have a non-stacked 1/2 circle->slider pattern, but we should not change what the mapper intends to keep. ///I don't have much comment about this, actually i don't think stacked pattern is good for normal diff so i didn't put much stack for this diff. btw, i found out stacking 01:15:384 (3,4) - isn't that bad so changed this.
For a song such as this one, I personally feel that more 1/1 notes would make more sense than trying to force a rhythm with 1/2s. For example, 00:21:009 (4,5,1) - can be replaced with a 1/1 slider at 00:21:009 -. It follows the beats exactly the same and does not feature a "dead sound" with no musical reference at 00:21:571 -. Parts like this 00:48:759 (5,6,7) - make sense because the musical beats are at emphasis. Do not do this for parts where the beats are not emphasized as this will not flow as well. ///nope, listen carefully to the piano, it actually do have sound at 00:21:196 - and 00:21:571 - , it's quite obvious too
I personally hate the slider on 01:28:509 (4) - because it does not follow any previous musical reference and has no flow whatsoever. I strongly suggest that you delete this slider and re-map. An object end should be at 01:29:259, not a repeat slider as this makes no connection to the music. ///i actually don't really feel like changing it because it isn't that necessary. you see 01:30:009 - actually has a drum which is a heavy beat here, connecting them using a repeat slider doesn't mean no connection to the music, still the same word, different people has different thought and idea, but nvm i will change this
Parts like 01:12:759 (3,4,5) - are over-complicated. This is a Normal, triple 1/2 sliders aren't very fun to the novice. Follow the same pattern as your previous 01:11:259 (1,2) - and change this to a 3/2 slider. ///hmm, i really don't understand why only my diff will let you guys mentioned about this kind of pattern, seriously i am getting annoyed now. i randomly download a map from the qualified map, and they have the exactly same pattern, but why no people mention about it...
01:32:259 (4,5) - I really don't like how these straight sliders look, colliding into one another. Why not make this look nicer? Going up then back down with sliders is also extremely hard to play. Consider making slider 4 curved like in i.e: 01:11:259 (1) - and move other objects if needed. ///ok then i will change this since both of you mentioned about this
Also teller: You have 3 repeat sliders in a row (see 01:12:759 (4,5,1,2,3) - ). Consider changing 01:15:759 (3) - to a 2/1 slider (no repeat) to match the song.
No kudosu.
i will say it again, i personally think normal diff should be a bit challenging but not that hard as Hard diff. also, my map is like each part is getting slightly harder than the previous part. So yea...
thanks for the mod and i apologize if i offended you
edit: tellertheworld gave me a IRC mod too, update again
updated
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