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schwarzvgrune

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schwarzvgrune 2015-06-01T09:59:39+00:00

[quote="[Shana Lesus]"]Hello schwarzvgrune
BN Check

[General]

BG :

Audio :

Timing :

Spread :

Metadata :

[Quiescent (Easy)]

02:57:341 (177341|0) - move to 4
ok. i moved 03:07:137 (187137|0) - to 4 as well because it's of the same pitch / phase.

[Tranquil (Normal)]

01:30:097 - add note to 4
01:32:546 - ^
i'd like to keep this without adding that note at 4...

01:28:260 (88260|3,88260|0,88872|0,88872|2,89484|2,89484|3) - these are following bg piano
01:30:709 (90709|2,90709|0,91321|0,91321|2,91933|3,91933|0) - and also these.... so i'd like to keep the phase consistent.
i don't follow that sound that you asked me to add... at all.. for the whole phase.. i don't think this is confusing because i did not follow that sound since the beginning...

01:40:046 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3106895
i'd like to keep it as it is because current arrangement is balanced and also follow PR perfectly, eventhough some might argue the pattern is boring (?).

03:04:076 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3106902
i'd like to keep it as it is because current arrangement reflects PR perfectly and does not break hand balancing

i'm so sorry no change for normal >_<

schwarzvgrune

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schwarzvgrune 2015-06-01T10:01:13+00:00

Kuo Kyoka wrote:
The SB seems fine to me at all
The map could feel free for any qualify

Goood luck, almost there

wow that was quick... thank you Kk >w<b

schwarzvgrune

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schwarzvgrune 2015-06-01T10:02:04+00:00

all updated... thanks shana >_<

Deep Sea

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Deep Sea 2015-06-01T10:16:52+00:00

Very nice song and map, no problems with patterns.

Congratulations

Aste-

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Aste- 2015-06-01T10:19:27+00:00

YAAYY!!!! FINALLY!!!!

GRATZ!!!!

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meii18

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meii18 2015-06-01T10:23:03+00:00

Congratulations for your first rank schwarzvgrune :3

schwarzvgrune

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schwarzvgrune 2015-06-01T10:30:09+00:00

[Shana Lesus] wrote:
Very nice song and map, no problems with patterns.

Congratulations

oh my... that's rather quick... i thought the higher diffs are going to be nuked ;w;
thank you for your time and help shana!

schwarzvgrune

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schwarzvgrune 2015-06-01T10:30:35+00:00

ByBy_ChAn wrote:
Congratulations for your first rank schwarzvgrune :3

thank you byby.... >_<

kagiii

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kagiii 2015-06-01T11:50:14+00:00

hueee gratz grune x'3 >w< ~~

Akasha-

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Akasha- 2015-06-01T12:12:57+00:00

Wow, fast lol
Congrats to your first rank

EFP

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EFP 2015-06-01T12:26:16+00:00

wow o.o
congrats grune ;3/

arviejhay

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arviejhay 2015-06-01T12:51:50+00:00

CONGRATZ GRUNE!!!!!

YunoFanatic

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YunoFanatic 2015-06-01T14:41:36+00:00

Wowowowowowwo grune its happening step by step! Grats

schwarzvgrune

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schwarzvgrune 2015-06-01T14:46:52+00:00

ExKagii- wrote:
hueee gratz grune x'3 >w< ~~

thanks >_<

Kuo Kyoka wrote:
Wow, fast lol
Congrats to your first rank

thanks for your help for clarifying the SB >_<b

EdrianFP wrote:
wow o.o
congrats grune ;3/

ty!!! O(∩_∩)O

arviejhay wrote:
CONGRATZ GRUNE!!!!!

thanks for your SB i really appreciate your help >_<

YunoFanatic wrote:
Wowowowowowwo grune its happening step by step! Grats

thanks for always supporting and help me, I couldn't make it without you Yuno ;w;
thank you for your help!!

Verniy_Chan

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Verniy_Chan 2015-06-01T14:53:56+00:00

Gratz Grune-san

Kyousuke-

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Kyousuke- 2015-06-01T15:39:18+00:00

Niceee Grats grune for 1st qualfied xD

Aste-

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Aste- 2015-06-01T16:01:17+00:00

Gratz Grune~

-[ AmiShici ]-

-[ AmiShici ]- 2015-06-01T16:10:01+00:00

Gratz o/

schwarzvgrune

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schwarzvgrune 2015-06-01T16:31:51+00:00

Verniy_Chan wrote:
Gratz Grune-san

Kyousuke- wrote:
Niceee Grats grune for 1st qualfied xD

Pharos21 wrote:
Gratz Grune~

-[ AmiShici ]- wrote:
Gratz o/

a lot of red-white flags @@

thanks everyone o(≧v≦)o~~好棒

Avishay

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Avishay 2015-06-02T08:24:48+00:00

schwarz map on the qualified section?!
Wooho, congratulations!

schwarzvgrune

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schwarzvgrune 2015-06-02T08:56:21+00:00

Avishay wrote:
schwarz map on the qualified section?!
Wooho, congratulations!

need to wait for 6 more days to make sure everything is okay ;w;

Julie

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Julie 2015-06-02T17:14:07+00:00

恭喜恭喜！！

Gemu-

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Gemu- 2015-06-03T01:39:24+00:00

Congratulations! ;33

Galric

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Galric 2015-06-04T07:28:40+00:00

This song is Best canon!

Backstep

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Backstep 2015-06-07T11:26:16+00:00

Congratz about your qualified <3

But I have bad news to you orz ._.

Your metadata was wrong, artist name must be "DJ OKAWARI"

R.I.P. my old 2 years beatmap... LOL

//Cheer ༼ ༎ຶ ෴ ༎ຶ༽

Starry-

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Starry- 2015-06-07T17:53:59+00:00

Hiya schwarzvgrune! On behalf of the QAT, I must disqualify this mapset over the following issues:

Unused hitsounds in the map folder. Here is a list of hitsounds that are not used, and should be used or removed:
- LR_Drum Click.wav
- SCG_C#5.wav
- SCG_C6.wav
- SCG_G#5.wav

Incorrect artist. 'DJ Okawari' must be fully capitalised, like so: 'DJ OKAWARI'. Source: http://www.djokawari.com/profile.html

Duplicate inherited timing points. The timing point at 01:38:056 - is exactly the same as the one at 01:57:648 -. There is no purpose of having this second inherited timing point, as it does not change anything, so it should be deleted in all difficulties..

Also, I'd make sure to take a final look at the keysounds again. There are quite a few outlying issues with them consistently across all difficulties.
For example: 03:20:607 (200607|1) - in the Insane difficulty sounds like a 'C' rather than a C#. This actually may be the reason why the 'SCG_C6.wav' file is unused.
Furthermore, is there any reason why 03:29:484 (209484|1,209484|0) - (Insane) two of the same keysound is used here? It's really loud and unneeded.

The BNG will handle this mapset from now on. Goodluck~

###AB

Ayachi-

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Ayachi- 2015-06-07T17:54:39+00:00

Starry's 2nd dq

Fullerene-

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Fullerene- 2015-06-07T18:08:44+00:00

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:
Starry's 2nd dq

Blocko

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Blocko 2015-06-07T18:23:24+00:00

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:
Starry's 2nd dq

meii18

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meii18 2015-06-07T18:32:59+00:00

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:
Starry's 2nd dq

Kamikaze

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Kamikaze 2015-06-08T04:52:50+00:00

Stop stalking the poor fella

schwarzvgrune

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schwarzvgrune 2015-06-08T12:44:46+00:00

Starry- wrote:
Hiya schwarzvgrune! On behalf of the QAT, I must disqualify this mapset over the following issues:

Unused hitsounds in the map folder. Here is a list of hitsounds that are not used, and should be used or removed:
- LR_Drum Click.wav
- SCG_C#5.wav
- SCG_C6.wav
- SCG_G#5.wav
i delete all except C6, i am using it. note below

Incorrect artist. 'DJ Okawari' must be fully capitalised, like so: 'DJ OKAWARI'. Source: http://www.djokawari.com/profile.html
changed
Duplicate inherited timing points. The timing point at 01:38:056 - is exactly the same as the one at 01:57:648 -. There is no purpose of having this second inherited timing point, as it does not change anything, so it should be deleted in all difficulties..
changed

Also, I'd make sure to take a final look at the keysounds again.
thanks i'll be waiting >_<

There are quite a few outlying issues with them consistently across all difficulties.
For example: 03:20:607 (200607|1) - in the Insane difficulty sounds like a 'C' rather than a C#. This actually may be the reason why the 'SCG_C6.wav' file is unused.
this is a blunder on my part. i should have checked it more carefully, yes it should be C6 rather than C#6

Furthermore, is there any reason why 03:29:484 (209484|1,209484|0) - (Insane) two of the same keysound is used here? It's really loud and unneeded.

i did this on purpose because of the increase in emphasis of the BG piano.. please tell me if this is unrankable so i'll change it.. I'd like to keep this because I did this on purpose. the last part seems to suggest that this is your opinion so i'd like to reconfirm just in case.

The BNG will handle this mapset from now on. Goodluck~

###AB