Hi All
Mod from PM Req
Linked Horizon - Guren no Yumiya (TV Size)
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[General]
Mapset: Gap between Muu's Special and Yoshi's Another are pretty high compared to other's gaps.
Pharos' Normal --> Hyper (0.68*)
Hyper --> Muu's Special (0.59*)
Muu's Special --> Yoshi's Another (0.87*)
Tags: Please delete the commas.
[Yoshi's Another]
Mods- 00:02:456 (2456|1) - Hmm, if you are following the guitar sound, it starts on 00:02:290
- 00:05:279 - Add note for the hihat, just like what you did on 00:02:954 (2954|0,3286|1,3618|1,3950|0) . Add on |1| should give more balance to the pattern.
- 00:10:094 - Add one more note for the hihat like before. Add on |2| should give more balance tho the pattern.
- 00:10:592 - Add note for the hihat, just like before. Add on |4| for some pattern-balance.
- 00:11:920 (11920|3,12252|3,12584|0,12917|2) - Suggest to change this into Normal Notes. These are sounds same as 00:07:271 , but with higher choir volume.
- 00:13:249 - Add one more note for the hihat. Sine you're already doing it from the start.
- 00:13:996 (13996|2) - Wrong snapped. Should be snapped on 00:14:079
- 00:14:162 (14162|0) - This' wrong snapped too. Should be snapped on 00:14:245
- 00:14:328 (14328|3) - Wrong snapped too. Should be snapped on 00:14:411
- 00:14:494 (14494|1) - Wrong snapped. Should be snapped on 00:14:577
- 00:15:407 - This just being double is fine, since this' sounds same as 00:15:075
- Actually from here until 00:24:705 the only sounding instruments are Kick and Hihat. So Triples aren't needed.
- 00:29:022 (29022|3) - Move this into |3|. It should give you more balance while playing.
- 00:35:498 (35498|3,35664|3) - Merge these LNs. It plays better than this and more relevant to the sounding instrument.
- 00:35:498 (35498|1) - Delete this LN. This aren't following anything.
- 00:35:996 to 00:38:653 - These 1/4s are unneeded. They are ghost notes, didn't have any instrument to cover. Delete them.
- 00:36:660 (36660|2) - This is ghost note. This didn't follow anything. Delete.
- 00:35:996 - After you delete those ghost notes, it's recommended to alternate the patterns
- 00:39:234 (39234|1,39234|3) - Wrong snapped, should be snapped on 00:39:151
- 00:40:977 (40977|1,40977|2) - Delete. ghost notes.
- 00:45:128 - Add one more note for the kick. This' sounds same as 00:44:630 and others. On |2| are better-balanced.
- 00:56:668 (56668|3,56751|1,56834|0,57000|1,57166|1) - These are ghost notes. Delete them.
[Muu's Special]
Mods- 00:14:411 (14411|0,14411|3) - Tuker kolom? Soalnya Bassnya d sini low pitch, biar lebih relevan sm pitchnya.
- 00:14:577 - Gk d map bassnya? Kan sama ad Bass juga. Klo mau d tambah bassnya, jadiin LN d |2| biar relevan sm pitch.
- 00:40:977 - D sini sebenernya gk kedengeran apa2 (lebih2 jadi double). Mending delete deh.
[Hyper]
Mods- 00:14:245 - 00:14:577 - Hmm, not mapped? Before this, you map the bass just like in 00:13:581 (13581|0,13747|1,13913|2)
- 00:35:498 (35498|2) - Hmm, if you mapped the vocal, it should ended on 00:35:830 . If you mapped the uplifting synth, it should started on 00:35:664
- 00:40:811 (40811|1) - This LN doesn't follow anything at all here. So, delete.
- 00:43:302 (43302|0,43634|2) - There's no instrument here. So delete.
- 00:46:456 - Not adding a note? For the hihat.
- 00:49:777 - There's a hihat here. Adding a note would be encouraged.
- 00:51:272 (51272|0,51770|0) - Hmm, no instrument here. Delete the note.
- 01:11:611 (71611|2) - Hmm, this should be started on 01:11:528 for the downlifting guitar sound.
- 01:25:476 - Missing note for the guitar. Add one.
- 01:26:472 - The 1/4 Snare sequences starts here.
- 01:27:136 (87136|3) - This LN are pretty long. Suggest to contract it until it ends on 01:29:129 . Check the other GDs.
[Pharos' Normal]
Mods- 00:14:743 (14743|0) - Hmm, ini ngikut apa? Suara hit abis d 00:15:075 , suara gemerincing bel abis d 00:16:071 . Gk ad yg abisnya d situ. Delete, pendekin, atau panjangin. Keknya delete deh. Dengan suara yg sama, d 00:25:369 gk pke LN.
- 00:35:498 (35498|1) - Knp vocal mapping? Sebelum ini gk vocal mapping kok. Atau klo mau ngecover suara upliftingnya, snap d 00:35:664 . Suara upliftingnya mulai d situ.
Hmm, pretty good. Good Job, All. Good Luck~