1. Easy (1.45 stars, 119 notes)
2. Insane (3.71 stars, 301 notes)
3. Knotts' Hard (2.91 stars, 237 notes)
4. Normal (1.8 stars, 149 notes)

1. Your BG is 985x569, from RC and guildline, 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9 is recommanded.
2. From AImod, you need to recode your mp3 file.
3. From AImod, you need snap the KIAI green line.
4. You offset is 1/1 late. It doesn't matter in regular playing, while when you use Nightcore Mod, it will be a problem. You can set the offset (red) line at 4929.

1. 00:04:929 (1) - is it a mistake? remove the second point of this slider to make the slider smooth
2. 00:21:215 (3,4) - avoid overlap
3. 00:23:572 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - bad flow
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:28:929 (1,2,3,4,5) - do you want to make them in pentagon
5. 01:20:250 (2) - you can keep the 1/4 note, but by hearing the song under 25% speed, there is no sound at this time point
6. 01:35:834 - snap the time (green) line

[-Deemo-] wrote:

Cut the audio file or something because it's not like there's anything after 01:35:834 anyways

[-Deemo-] wrote:

Even though I can't post in your queue I'll still mod >.<

[Insane]

The timing point needs to start where the first beat is, not just at the start of the song. Offset at 00:03:215
Cut the audio file or something because it's not like there's anything after 01:35:834 anyways Song reduced by 3 secs.
You shouldn't put all of the map just solely in the center region of the mapping area, it's okay to have things around the edges too, it allows more patterns to be done
Soft hitsounds (like clap) aren't very distinguishable from regular soft hits just saying

Fix
00:32:786 (2,3,4) - I mean if you want to keep the pattern it's fine like below works too. Besides, the lyrics only start to do the two notes followed by a single note after that line so I left this as it is, it sounds better imo


Overall, change up the patterns. It's kinda boring otherwiseI'll consider this depending on other modders

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi KuroSenpai112, from your queue

[General]

1. Your BG is 985x569, from RC and guildline, 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9 is recommanded. Adjusted BG to proper size
2. From AImod, you need to recode your mp3 file. Fixed, no longer showing in AImod
3. From AImod, you need snap the KIAI green line. Fixed
4. You offset is 1/1 late. It doesn't matter in regular playing, while when you use Nightcore Mod, it will be a problem. You can set the offset (red) line at 4929.I will consider this again when other modders mention this.

[Insane]

1. 00:04:929 (1) - is it a mistake? remove the second point of this slider to make the slider smooth Fixed
2. 00:21:215 (3,4) - avoid overlap Adjusted 3 slightly
3. 00:23:572 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - bad flow Pattern altered to what you suggested
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:28:929 (1,2,3,4,5) - do you want to make them in pentagon This is supposed to be a star
5. 01:20:250 (2) - you can keep the 1/4 note, but by hearing the song under 25% speed, there is no sound at this time pointKeeping this for now unless told
6. 01:35:834 - snap the time (green) lineDone.

Good Luck! Thanks!

AsakuraNe wrote:

Heeey~ I just wanna help you

1. I converted your mp3 to 192 kbps for it to be rankable. Download it here: http://puu.sh/i2bvM/ef51d01007.mp3 or at my soundcloud: https://soundcloud.com/janelle-gimenez/ ... e-game-ver and use Offset: 4977. (I'm not that good a timing the offset so I suggest asking someone better to give the exact and right timing)
2. Your current background is unrankable. I'll give you the right size: Thanks alot for this! I never realized this was a requirement!
   
   BG

   
3. Use the following slider velocity:
   Easy - 0.90 (change your easy to this. your current slider velocity is too high)Chaged velocity
   Normal - 1.10
   Hard - 1.30
   Insane - 1.60
4. Use 1.0x spacing in your easy diff and Also, DON'T use the 0.80x slider velocity change. There's not exactly a change in the song so you better not use it. Removed velocity change
5. Use this difficulty in easy
   HP drain rate - 2 Changed
   Circle Size - 3
   Approach Rate - 3
   Overall Difficulty - 2
6. Uncheck widescreen support(use this when you have a storyboard) and letterbox in break(use this when you have breaks) on all diffs: http://puu.sh/i2cuh/c35c79b562.png
7. Change your combo colors to this: http://puu.sh/i2czJ/4790abfe4b.png
   How to put this code:
   1st - Click file and click "open .osu in notepad" like this: http://puu.sh/i2cEH/ae52312e7c.jpg
   2nd - Copy the code and paste at this part: http://puu.sh/i2cGs/e37c1befb5.png
   
   COLORS

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 7,188,152 [color=#40BF00]Pasted[/color]
   Combo2 : 164,72,247
   Combo3 : 255,85,85
   Combo4 : 0,128,255

Forum PM me or chat me in game if you have questions or anything that you need help with or just want a chatmate lol. I'll help you
Good Luck for ranking~ :3 Thanks for the modding!

[-Deemo-] wrote:

Cut the audio file or something because it's not like there's anything after 01:35:834 anyways

If you want a cut mp3 of this. I could cut this mp3 for you. Just message me

xChorse wrote:

Hi! M4M here


Insane

Either stack 00:08:376 (4) - with 00:07:091 (2) - or move it away so they don't touch Made it stacked.

Move 00:13:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - down because 00:13:519 (5) - touches 00:14:591 (7) - Moved

Move 00:22:091 (2) - and 00:22:948 (6) - on 00:21:019 (6) - I decided to leave this as it is

00:24:019 (3) - Move a bit to the top right Moved it slightly

Move 00:24:662 (5) - a bit to the left Moved by 1 grid

Make 00:25:091 (6) - symmetrical to 00:24:662 (5) - Making this symmetrical will cause an awkward flow, so I left is as it is.

Put 00:25:519 (7) - on 00:24:233 (4) - Left it as it is for the same reason as above.

Put 00:25:948 (9) - tail on 00:24:662 (5) - Left this as it is. After watching the auto-replay it seems fine without changing.

Put 00:27:019 (2) - on 00:24:233 (4) - I think it seems fine without it

Put 00:35:591 (2) - on 00:34:091 (3,4) - The placement there was supposed to be like that.

00:36:233 (5,6) - change placement as it overlaps with 00:35:591 (2) - ^

Move 00:43:948 (1) - so it's tail ends up on 00:42:876 (2) - This change again will make the flow awkward. No change.

Either move 01:02:590 (6) - 1 down, or put it on 01:01:733 (2) - Moved.

Put 01:24:019 (11) - on 01:23:162 (8) - Moved.

Curve 01:25:091 (5) - so it doesn't touch 01:23:162 (8,11) - Left this as it is. It looks fine on the auto without the change

Easy

General thing about this, is that all of the notes are so close to eachother, you should use a bigger distance snap. Increased distance snap from 0.5x to 0.7x

Move 00:27:243 (6,7) - up for better flow Moved

Move 00:32:815 (2) - down for better flow Moved

I really don't have much to say about this diff except for that all notes are too close for my liking.

MokouSmoke wrote:

hi! from #modreqs

Overall
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Maybe use 70% volume during kiai parts? Changed.

Insane
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00:12:555 (2) -Even after playing through several times, I still mistimed 2 because it's on a blue tick. I suggest changing 1 to a slider that lasts until the blue tick Changed.

SPOILER

00:26:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - could make a nicer star pattern here Altered these notes a bit
00:30:233 (1,2,3,4) - DS so rhythm is more apparentAltered these 4 notes a little instead
00:33:019 (5) - reposition slider to around [x=163 y=282] or fix shape for better flow Fixed shape

SPOILER

00:52:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - DS Decided to change the layout of these notes. There was supposed to be jumps here too.
01:01:733 (2,3,4,5,6) - could make nice pentagon here The 3,4,5,6 is supposed to be a square. No change.
01:24:233 (1,2,3,4) - DS here, it's hard to tell that 2 falls on the blue tick instead of the white one Made the note into slider instead.
01:28:511 (1,2,3,4) - ok, but i prefer if a higher DS was used to reflect the changing bpm DS increased.

Knotts' Hard
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It plays quite well, so I don't really have anything to add.
00:36:126 (3) - Why not just keep soft hitsound? Added.

Normal
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You could use DS=1.4 instead of 1.3 so that all the notes don't overlap which should help your map look cleaner!

00:14:590 (1) - Not sure about recommendations for spinners, but beginner players might have trouble hitting 00:16:519 (1) since it comes so quickly after spinner. Maybe replace with circles/sliders/break? Made it a slider
00:28:519 (1) - ^ ^
00:30:983 (3) - random note on a blue tick in normal dif is a no-no (even if it is following vocals). You could place a slider at 00:30:876 that extends to blue tick or remap with a basic 1/2 pattern. Blue tick notes removed.
00:32:697 (3) - ^ ^
00:33:662 (1,2,3) - you could use this pattern for the previous two comments. Best to keep the rhythm consistent in these parts
00:43:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - rework flow so it is more smooth. See example below reworked

SPOILER

SPOILER

00:48:876 (5) - blanket feels too tight. I really think using DS=1.4 will make things look a lot better! Fixed
01:02:600 (4) - from AImod: object's end not snapped Fixed
01:12:019 (5) - better if you stack on 01:12:233 (6) - Decided to leave this one as it is.

Easy
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00:12:672 (2) - blanket here Done.
00:14:600 (1) - Same problem with slider as normal difficulty, but in easy you need to give players even more time to recover from spinner Changed into slider
00:28:529 (1) - ^ ^
00:37:529 (2) - better blanket here Done.
00:44:386 (4) - ^ Done.
00:52:529 (3) - could maybe blanket around end of slider 1 00:50:815 (1) Changed the placements of notes instead.
00:59:386 (1) - same spinner problem This is already a slider
01:12:886 (1) - ^ ^
01:26:600 (1) - ^ ^

Hope that helps and good luck!

Knotts wrote:

Idk if it was because the mod for my diff was so short but usually you let the the GDer apply his own mods. Please don't apply changes to my diff without asking.

1. 00:06:233 (2,3) - Flows a bit poorly for me... Also why not emphasize 5 instead? Pitch is increasing a smaller jump from 00:07:091 (2,3) - and a larger jump from 00:08:376 (4,5) - would make more sense.
2. 00:19:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Would be nice if you could keep your spacing consistent, because nothing really suggests a reduced spacing from the square into the triangle.
3. 00:25:091 (6) - NC. Start of new measure.
4. 00:26:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - Well, since you used some perfectly constructed polygons earlier, how about making this a perfect star too? Would look a bit cleaner too.
5. 00:30:983 - Since you're following the vocals with that double earlier, shouldn't the circle be here? This is when the vocal stars. This applies to the entire section coming after here. Your notes are 1/4 too late if you're following the vocals for the double right before them its kind of strange to have a 3/4 gap and then switch to following the drum
6. 00:45:448 (5) - How about shortening this slider? Weird to see such a long slider in an Insane when there are other sounds you can map to... maybe map toe "woohoo" in the back? Jump potential there.
7. 00:48:876 (4,5) - ^Yea, make your rhythm choice a bit more consistent. This one is good.
8. 01:05:805 (7,8,9) - Emphasis here could be improved. You should emphasize the drumbeat on 9 since you mapped this jump sequence to the drums. 7>8 should be a smaller jump and 8>9 should be larger.

1. 00:09:019 (4,5) - Err, you sure about this? Doesn't really follow the drums too well. 00:09:233 - Is the strongest beat, but its not mapped to anything. The 2nd repeat slider begins on a blue tick :S.
   
   Why not just something simple like this

   
2. 00:46:305 (1,2) - Make them parallel? Looks nicer lol
3. 01:03:876 (4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+G this rhythm? The triplet makes more sense beginning at 01:03:876 - . Most triplets begin on red-ticks anyways.
4. 01:11:376 (1,3) - Why not make them symmetrical.
5. 01:15:662 (3,4) - How about stacking these two instead, since they map the same note vocally. Pitch goes up on 5, not 4.

1. 00:03:662 (2,3,4) - Seems kind of odd to begin your Normal with such note density. How about making two of the circles into a 1/2 slider instead? This is the intro after all.
2. 00:04:947 (1) - Remove NC since you're NC"ing every 2 measures for this intro section.
3. 00:35:162 (6,1,2,3,4) - Too many circles in a row for a Normal imo ;P can you make some of them 1/2 sliders to reduce density?
4. 00:51:233 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Theyre not jumps, but you're still creating note density here for players .
5. 01:08:590 (3,4,5,6) - This is the largest number of circles you have in a row, In the Kiai section. It would be nice if you could reduce some of your other single-tap patterns that are non-Kiai so there is a bit less density. Right now your Normal is almost all 1/2 rhythm which is a concern.
6. 01:28:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This is even denser and more difficult than Knotts' Hard. You really need to simplify your rhythm here.

1. 00:14:601 (1,1) - You can't do this on Easy. You need a full measure of break in between a Spinner and the next object on lower difficulties. That means, if you end your spinner on 00:16:100 - You can't have any objects until 00:17:815 - . In other words, you'll need to remove the spinner and map a slider here instead. Otherwise it violates ranking criteria unfortunately.
2. 00:28:529 (1,1) - ^
3. 00:38:386 (3,2,5) - Might want to use 1/1 sliders instead of 1/2 repeats. I've seen other Easy maps getting dq'ed because 1/2 sliders on Easy are considered questionable. Making these sliders (at least some of them) 1/1 wouldn't hurt anyways.
4. 00:59:386 (1) - Slider too.
5. 01:12:886 (1) - ^
6. 01:19:100 (2,3) - Don't switch to red ticks here ;c.
   
   How about a rhythm like this, so all clickable beats are still on the white tick

   
7. 01:26:600 (1) -
8. 01:28:541 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is also too dense for an Easy. Make this even simpler please, you're using 1/2 rhythm here with a bpm of 104, vs the 1/1 rhythm on the rest of your map with 140 bpm. In terms of 1/2 rhythm density, thats 104 bpm vs 70 bpm...This section is actually even more difficult than your Kiai section lol.

monstrata wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:06:233 (2,3) - Flows a bit poorly for me... Also why not emphasize 5 instead? Pitch is increasing a smaller jump from 00:07:091 (2,3) - and a larger jump from 00:08:376 (4,5) - would make more sense. Increased distance between 4 and 5, left 2 and 3 as it is.
2. 00:19:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Would be nice if you could keep your spacing consistent, because nothing really suggests a reduced spacing from the square into the triangle. Spacing is now consistent
3. 00:25:091 (6) - NC. Start of new measure. Added
4. 00:26:805 (1,2,3,4,5) - Well, since you used some perfectly constructed polygons earlier, how about making this a perfect star too? Would look a bit cleaner too. I tried here >.<
5. 00:30:983 - Since you're following the vocals with that double earlier, shouldn't the circle be here? This is when the vocal stars. This applies to the entire section coming after here. Your notes are 1/4 too late if you're following the vocals for the double right before them its kind of strange to have a 3/4 gap and then switch to following the drum Added, no more 3/4 gaps
6. 00:45:448 (5) - How about shortening this slider? Weird to see such a long slider in an Insane when there are other sounds you can map to... maybe map toe "woohoo" in the back? Jump potential there. Shortened
7. 00:48:876 (4,5) - ^Yea, make your rhythm choice a bit more consistent. This one is good.
8. 01:05:805 (7,8,9) - Emphasis here could be improved. You should emphasize the drumbeat on 9 since you mapped this jump sequence to the drums. 7>8 should be a smaller jump and 8>9 should be larger.I think this is still fine, but I'll reconsider this

[Normal]

1. 00:03:662 (2,3,4) - Seems kind of odd to begin your Normal with such note density. How about making two of the circles into a 1/2 slider instead? This is the intro after all. reduced density
2. 00:04:947 (1) - Remove NC since you're NC"ing every 2 measures for this intro section. removed
3. 00:35:162 (6,1,2,3,4) - Too many circles in a row for a Normal imo ;P can you make some of them 1/2 sliders to reduce density? added sliders in place of some notes
4. 00:51:233 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ Theyre not jumps, but you're still creating note density here for players . density reduced
5. 01:08:590 (3,4,5,6) - This is the largest number of circles you have in a row, In the Kiai section. It would be nice if you could reduce some of your other single-tap patterns that are non-Kiai so there is a bit less density. Right now your Normal is almost all 1/2 rhythm which is a concern. reduced
6. 01:28:512 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - This is even denser and more difficult than Knotts' Hard. You really need to simplify your rhythm here. simplified

[Easy]
ALL SPINNERS ARE REPLACED WITH SLIDERS

1. 00:14:601 (1,1) - You can't do this on Easy. You need a full measure of break in between a Spinner and the next object on lower difficulties. That means, if you end your spinner on 00:16:100 - You can't have any objects until 00:17:815 - . In other words, you'll need to remove the spinner and map a slider here instead. Otherwise it violates ranking criteria unfortunately.
2. 00:28:529 (1,1) - ^
3. 00:38:386 (3,2,5) - Might want to use 1/1 sliders instead of 1/2 repeats. I've seen other Easy maps getting dq'ed because 1/2 sliders on Easy are considered questionable. Making these sliders (at least some of them) 1/1 wouldn't hurt anyways.
4. 00:59:386 (1) - Slider too.
5. 01:12:886 (1) - ^
6. 01:19:100 (2,3) - Don't switch to red ticks here ;c. removed
   
   How about a rhythm like this, so all clickable beats are still on the white tick

   added
7. 01:26:600 (1) -
8. 01:28:541 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This is also too dense for an Easy. Make this even simpler please, you're using 1/2 rhythm here with a bpm of 104, vs the 1/1 rhythm on the rest of your map with 140 bpm. In terms of 1/2 rhythm density, thats 104 bpm vs 70 bpm...This section is actually even more difficult than your Kiai section lol. adjusted

Main problems i'm seeing is that Normal is almost completely 1/2 rhythm, but Easy is exclusively 1/1 rhythm. You need to bridge this rhythm gap a bit. Easy is good, aside from the Spinners, but you could nerf Normal a bit, introduce more 1/1 rhythm, and simplify single-tapping rhythm like extended circle usage... Anything over 3 circles in a row that are spaced 1/2 apart is too dense on a Normal imo.

Good luck!Thanks!

monstrata wrote:

[Knotts' Hard]

1. 00:09:019 (4,5) - Err, you sure about this? Doesn't really follow the drums too well. 00:09:233 - Is the strongest beat, but its not mapped to anything. The 2nd repeat slider begins on a blue tick :S. true, changed
   
   Why not just something simple like this

   
2. 00:46:305 (1,2) - Make them parallel? Looks nicer lol I sometimes like to make stuff unparallel, its more of a preference thing to me
3. 01:03:876 (4,5,6,7) - Ctrl+G this rhythm? The triplet makes more sense beginning at 01:03:876 - . Most triplets begin on red-ticks anyways. sure
4. 01:11:376 (1,3) - Why not make them symmetrical. fixed
5. 01:15:662 (3,4) - How about stacking these two instead, since they map the same note vocally. Pitch goes up on 5, not 4. done

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Chaoslitz wrote:

[Knotts' Hard]

1. 00:02:805 (1,2) - I don't suggest you to overlap two slider end together which may affect readability Ehh I'm becoming fond of these sliders in my hards. I've done it before and it didn't seem to cause any problems
2. 00:25:090 (1,2) - Same as above, and some more in this diff ^
3. 01:12:876 (1,2) - Try reverse in timeline, I would recommend you to use a slider head at downbeat 01:13:090 to emphasis more this beat instead of using a slider end imo the red tick is more significant here
4. 01:17:805 (5,6) - Add a note between to have a triplet as you did it in the first kiai tme 01:04:090 (5,6,7) for a consistence in this diff I removed the first triplet to keep it consistent
5. 01:28:529 - [b]Same thing about inherited point, map this with 1/3 instead I don't think 1/3 fits here unless it's timed wrong
6. Nice diff thanks c:

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Knott's Hard

1. 00:45:876 (1) - I am aware that this place has vocals climaxing, but I don't think there should be a new combo... Just my opinion. I did this to emphasize the jump and make it easier to read, i'll change if more people bring it up
2. 00:49:305 (1) - ^^ ^

Misure wrote:

[Knotts' Hard]
01:11:376 (1) - a little unbeautiful...maybe red point of slider(I don't know how to call it) to (120,208) better? I think it's fine how it is
01:12:233 (3) - ^ ^
01:28:512 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Maybe they keep a distance better here because of rhythm,like this Increased by 0.2x DS

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Title:Next Stage!!
TitleUnicode:Next Stage!!
Artist:Afilia Saga
ArtistUnicode:Afilia Saga
Creator:KuroSenpai112
Version:Knotts' Hard
Source:紙次元アイドルãƒãƒ—テューヌ
Tags:
BeatmapID:708600
BeatmapSetID:316497

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Knotts wrote:

Chaoslitz wrote:

[Knotts' Hard]

1. 00:02:805 (1,2) - I don't suggest you to overlap two slider end together which may affect readability Ehh I'm becoming fond of these sliders in my hards. I've done it before and it didn't seem to cause any problems
2. 00:25:090 (1,2) - Same as above, and some more in this diff ^
3. 01:12:876 (1,2) - Try reverse in timeline, I would recommend you to use a slider head at downbeat 01:13:090 to emphasis more this beat instead of using a slider end imo the red tick is more significant here
4. 01:17:805 (5,6) - Add a note between to have a triplet as you did it in the first kiai tme 01:04:090 (5,6,7) for a consistence in this diff I removed the first triplet to keep it consistent
5. 01:28:529 - [b]Same thing about inherited point, map this with 1/3 instead I don't think 1/3 fits here unless it's timed wrong
6. Nice diff thanks c:

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Knott's Hard

1. 00:45:876 (1) - I am aware that this place has vocals climaxing, but I don't think there should be a new combo... Just my opinion. I did this to emphasize the jump and make it easier to read, i'll change if more people bring it up
2. 00:49:305 (1) - ^^ ^

Misure wrote:

[Knotts' Hard]
01:11:376 (1) - a little unbeautiful...maybe red point of slider(I don't know how to call it) to (120,208) better? I think it's fine how it is
01:12:233 (3) - ^ ^
01:28:512 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Maybe they keep a distance better here because of rhythm,like this Increased by 0.2x DS

Image

Thanks for the mods!

Knotts' Hard

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35,265,65376,2,0,P|25:301|19:345,2,77.999997619629,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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89,24,66447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
178,51,66662,2,0,L|282:34,1,77.999997619629,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
347,26,67090,1,2,0:0:0:0:
347,26,67305,1,2,0:0:0:0:
402,101,67519,2,0,B|400:135|400:135|372:190,1,77.999997619629,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,195,67947,6,0,P|224:245|238:339,1,155.999995239258,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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469,339,69019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,258,69233,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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435,27,69876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,27,69983,1,0,0:0:0:0:
435,27,70090,1,8,0:0:0:0:
347,60,70305,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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98,75,70947,1,8,0:0:0:0:
98,75,71162,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,330,72019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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257,239,75662,1,2,0:0:0:0:
257,239,75876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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168,348,78019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,92118,12,2,93705,0:0:0:0:

Chaoslitz wrote:

the second red tick is actually not need but it is using first bpm with 1/3
as i explained in my mod General

Chaoslitz wrote:

Random mod (or I should say M4M?), I am here because of Afilia Saga x)

SPOILER

[General]

1. Combo Colours: Missing combo colours in Normal, Kontts' Hard and Insane Added
2. Diff name: I guess Kontts' Hard should be Kontts's Hard?
3. Tags: Add tags which is related to the music, add "Knotts" also since he is the mapper of the guest diff Added tags
4. AIMOD issues: (Captured from Easy diff)
   
5. Unused hitsound: soft-sliderslide2.wav, please remove it removed
6. Over usage of spinners in Normal diff: Generally 6 spinners in a tv size/short music map is too much, and it came out many unrankable issues about recovery time after spinners, may consider remove some Reduced to only 3 spinners now. Insane has the most with 5.
7. Unused timing points: Most of the green lines in the last part of music is not used, better to remove it Removed
8. Unsnapped object in Easy diff: Now it's snapped
   
9. Unnecessary inherited point: The inherited point is not needed in 01:27:965, the rhythm in the music actualy is 1/3 starting from 01:28:541 till the end, for example you can try to listen the last part of music 01:33:734, the spinner ends with a delay with the current bpm. you can map it using different beat snap rather than adding new points when multi-bpm is not necessary. Move the spinner to the correct timing and don't forget to fix the last timing points as well

Fixed.

[Easy]

1. 00:13:100 - Vocal here is quite strong in my opinion, so I would suggest to place either slider head or note instead of slider end to emphasis this beat
   Slider head added.
   
2. 00:41:386 (5) - A 1/1 slider will be enough in an Easy diff as it requires more simplified rhythm, however in my opinion it is acceptable to use in chorus which is the kiai part, generally kiai parts need a denser rhythm so it is suitable to use a reversed 1/2 slider, so it is fine to keep sliders like 01:01:957 (2) or 01:15:672 (2) and some more Keeping this repeater since follows the vocals very well.
   
   
3. 00:55:957 (5) - Same as above Decided to remove the 1/1 repeater and put in a 1/2 slider instead
   
   
4. 01:04:529 (1,3) - nazi, but they are stacked which looks untidy in the map
   
   
5. 01:19:100 (2) - To have a better consistense in this diff, I suggest you to change 01:19:100 (2) to two 1/1 slider like 01:05:386 (2,3) since they have similar vocal Done.
   
   
6. 01:28:529 - As i mentioned the inherited point is not needed in 01:27:965, this part should be in 1/3 instead, but it is an Easy diff, I would suggest to follow white ticks here to map instead of 1/3 which is difficult for beginners either predict the rhythm or hit correctly, you can try two sliders start at 01:28:529 and 01:30:243 as follow Removed inherit point.
   

[Normal]

1. Due to a slow bpm of the music, I don't suggest you to use 1.4x for distance snap since it is too high, those overlapping is untidy when it comes to a large spacing, 0.8-0.9x will suit Using a 0.8-0.9 DS will make the notes too close together. No change.
   
   
2. 00:12:233 (1,2,3) - Don't map objects in blue tick when this is a easier diff, it makes player difficult to hit it properly, a reverse slider reversed in the blue tick will help which provide same rhythm and it is far more easy to play with Removed, replaced with slider instead
   
   
3. 00:14:590 (1,1) - Recovery time after spinner is not enough, which is unrankable, at least 2 beat of recovery time is required, you can remove 00:16:519 (1) to resolve it Spinner removed, reduced to 3 for entire map.
   
   
4. 00:28:519 (1,1) - Same as above
   
   
5. 01:07:947 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Try a more circular flow rather then a zigzag flow like this, as the current patterns involves many turns which beginners may not react well I made a more simpler flow instead.
   
   
6. 01:12:876 (1,1) - As mentioned about recovery time after spinners
   
   
7. 01:24:233 (1,2) - Same as 00:12:233 (1,2,3), a reverse slider will suit a lot more Added
   
   
8. 01:26:590 (1,1) - Recovery time after spinner as well
   
   
9. 01:28:529 - Follow white ticks here to map instead of 1/3 as well in normal diff, but it is better to map a harder pattern than the one in easy diff

[Insane]

1. 00:07:733 (3) - The distance from 00:07:091 (2) is large compare to others in the inro, the intro of the music is soft, which doesn't need a jump between 00:07:091 (2,3), try to decrease the distance between it Decreased.
   
2. 00:13:090 - A downbeat here which is not suitable to use slider end to represent, I suggest you to shorten 00:12:662 (2) to 00:12:876 and then add a note at 00:13:090 to emphasis the beat more Done.
   
   
3. 00:27:662 (5) - NC here as what you did in 00:13:948 (1) Done.
   
   
4. 00:30:662 (2,3,4,5) - I dont suggest you to make two double patterns here since it is the only place you did, try to follow other parts like 00:31:948 (1,2,3) or 00:37:091 (1,2,3,4) or else in order to keep a constant pattern in this diff Fixed.
   
   
5. 00:32:162 (2) - Try a curve slider instead, it looks weird to have red anchor when the slider is short Slider now curved
   
   
6. 00:40:519 (1,2) - 00:41:269 (4,5) - It is not good to have a sharp turn of jump which point in the opposite direction when the music isn't that strong, the spacing here is quite large when it compared to other patterns, try to decrease it a bit Decreased.
   
   
7. 00:50:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Flow in this jump not really works well, especially in 00:51:233 (3,4,5), here is the only place you used a curved flow in this jump, while others are having zigzag movement, may consider to edit to build up a more constant flow instead so that it can be more playable Changed to a more consistent pattern
   
   
8. 01:01:733 (2,6) - nazi, but this two is overlapping which lack aesthetics Decided to change 1, stacked 2 and 6 together.
   
   
9. 01:25:091 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Flow can be improved as well, objects are moving right in 01:25:091 (4,5), so it is better to keep this flow in the next object with a right placement also, I would suggest you to place 01:25:947 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) on the right hand side curved on right side too to provide a smoother flow The flow here was intended to be like that, no change.
   
   
10. 01:28:529 - Same thing about inherited point, map this with 1/3 instead Removed inherited point, keeping this as 1/4
    
    
11. Generally this diff is fine, but it needs more attention to aesthetics in my opinion

Good luck!

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Hi there~

General

1. Uncheck widescreen support for Easy and Normal. Done
2. Uncheck letterbox during breaks in Easy, Normal and Insane. Done
3. Look at the AIMod in Easy:
   
   
4. Uninherited timing points (BPM changing lines;red lines) are in conflict with other difficulties for easy. Set the second red line/uninherited timing point's offset to 87963.
5. I cannot really help you with snapping 01:27:672 (7)... Managed to snap this
6. Add in tags for the difficulties you haven't, they must be constant on all difficulties.
7. Set the audio preview time the same like Normal, Hard and Insane. This MUST be the same throughout all difficulties. To solve this, go to File>Open .osu in Notepad>find for PreviewTime>Change the value to 61090.
   
8. There is colours ONLY FOR EASY. Colours should be constant throughout, so add in the same colours like Easy.

Easy

1. 00:32:386 (1) - Remove NC Done
2. 00:34:100 (3) - Then add NC. These are for consistency ^
3. 00:39:243 (1) - Remove NC, ^
4. 00:40:529 (6) - Add NC, ^
5. 00:42:243 (1) - Remove NC, ^
6. 00:43:957 (6) - Then add NC. These makes the combos arranged more nicer. Done
7. 00:47:386 (1) - Rotate this by 28 degrees using selection centre Rotated
8. 00:48:672 (2) - Then move this to x=208 y=232. These will make the flow look nicer. done.
9. 00:54:243 (1,2,3,4) - I don't recommend you to put bunch of circles in succession. Try to use at least one 1/1 slider. Removed 2 and , replaced with slider.
10. 01:07:100 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - These are moving in a circle, and going in circle is very boring. Try to use other various patterns. No longer a circular flow.
11. 01:21:243 (1) - Remove NC then, Done
12. 01:21:672 (2) - Add a NC here. Likewise, this is also for consistency. Done
13. 01:26:815 (5) - Add a NC here. Combo should not be this long in Easy. Done
14. 01:27:672 (3) - This note is not snapped... Although I rly don't know how to snap this note... Sorry. Already snapped!
15. 01:28:541 (1,2,3) - These notes are off-beat. You can try this : I'm gonna have to leave this as it is. Other modders requested to avoid red ticks on easy.

Added one more 1/1 slider to match the instrument in the background.

Normal

1. Try to improve flow by adding in various shapes of sliders.
2. Distance spacing of 1.5x is Really big. Tone it down to 1.1x. Done
3. Doing this will make your pattern distorted, but instead try to use much more blankets. It's not that easy to create blankets with a 1.1x DS
4. 00:12:233 (1,2,3) - The beats are in the perfect spot, but why not use a slider instead? Slider is much more appropriate to express this beat.
5. 00:23:376 (1,2,3,4,5) - About flow, I was meaning something like this. It is bad to place 4 circles in a row, and in circle especially. Use two 1/2 sliders.
6. 00:28:090 (5) - This should be rotated -28 degrees clockwise, using selection centre. This will match the previous notes' flow. Done.
7. To generalize normal, you are using too much of 1/2 sliders. Consider using at least a few more 1/1 sliders, like what you did in easy.
8. 00:46:090 (6) - Add NC for consistency. Done.
9. 00:49:519 (6) - ^^ Done.
10. In the kiai time, since you are using lots of circles and 1/2 sliders, combos naturally become longer. Add some more 1/1 sliders here, if I would give an example : Added more 1/1 sliders within kiai
11. 01:01:947 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I made into something like this (was following the vocals here)
    
    
12. 01:07:733 (1) - Unnecessary note. Removed.
13. Try to change the patterns in the kiai time to something similar like above. It can greatly reduce combos.
14. 01:35:425 - Why is there a green line/inherited timing point here?

Insane

1. I see distance spacing is .5x... Maybe change it to 1.4x or 1.5x? It doesn't really go overboard in parts where the slider velocity is increased anyway. For the insane I just ignored using any DS. But, I'll set it to 1.5x anyways.
2. Pattern wise and playing wise, this diff is relatively good for me Thanks, although I have some room for improvement as always!
3. 00:26:805 (1) - Remove NC,
4. 00:27:662 (5) - Then add NC. Players can be alerted there is a stream incoming.
5. 00:36:876 (7) - I don't think overlapping this on the slider before this is a good choice to do... No longer overlapped.
6. 00:53:376 (5,6,7,8) - Jump is overdone here, make the spacing same like (1,2,3,4) Decreased from 2.00x to 1.69x
7. 01:04:519 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Combo is getting too long. Either add NC at (8) or (9). Done.
8. 01:19:733 (8) - Add NC here, as the combo is getting long again. Done.
9. 01:23:162 (8) - Add NC, yet again the combo is getting long. Done.
10. 01:25:947 (6) - NC to alert players that a stream is coming. Done.
11. 01:28:511 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing between (2) and (3) is not same like others. You should ctrl+g 01:29:089 (3,4). And also, after that you should make the spacing between (2) and (3) equal again. Fixed
12. 01:35:425 - Same case like Normal, why is there a inherited timing point/green line here?

That will be all for me. You will need to work hard GL!

trammiexo wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue.

Easy

00:05:386 (5) - Maybe bend it to give more variety.
Added http://i.imgur.com/yafEg9S.png
00:22:529 (7) - ^ Same as above, you also have it bend at 00:21:243 (5). It would make the flow more clean instead of choppy in my thought Made it symmetrical
00:28:529 (1) - The flow is good but I would probably make this slide bend the in the opposite direction. Combo 6 and 1 looks as if they were parallel to each other or close to parallel. It doesn't seem fitting with this type of shaping. Flipped
01:25:100 (3,4) - These are definitely almost touching each other. The distance snapping is fine but I'd make it a bit spaced from each other. made these seperated by a little bit.
01:27:672 (7,1) - ^ same as above but in this case, I suggest to remove the timing point as well. The ending BPM does not match the main song's. No change for now.
01:28:541 (1,2,3) - for these last sliders, I would make a long hybrid or a fun shape. It is easy after all ^^ Sliders are curved now

Another thing I saw in this difficulty were NC problems, but I'm pretty sure that the modder above me has already got to it so I don't want to be repetitive.

Normal

The notes are quite close to each other. If possible, I would change the distance snap to 1.0 or 1.10, or something that allows decent spacing for the notes
00:12:233 (1,2,3) - At first glance, this would seem like whole notes or at least notes that are in equal beats, but since there's a whole, half, and another different beat, I wouldn't use just circles to map this part of the song Added a slider here
01:01:733 - Something could work nicely here Another modder mentioned this, already changed!
01:09:447 (7,8) - it's very tricky to stack a circle right under a slider. I actually missed seeing this until I realized something was there xD. It's more acceptable if you stacked it on top of a slider, but move the circle somewhere else that is not on the slider, or change up the pattern. and this type of placement would be appropriate for later difficulties Note moved out
01:11:376 (4,5) - ^Same as above ^
01:15:447 - same as 01:01:733 (but it's your choice) Done!
01:20:590 (7,8) - same as 01:09:447 Fixed
01:27:936 - timing point isn't necessarily needed, so please adjust the objects that follow after if you remove it.

Insane

00:04:090 (3,4) - blanket can be improved
00:04:947 (5) - Stack this on top of 00:03:876 (2) Makes it look clean and it's only the beginning of insane, so it should be fine
And like all the other diffs, remove the timing point(red) and adjust the rest of the objects following after Fixed

If you do plan to change the distance snapping for your Normal, you can call me back to check it again , other than that, this mapset was nice but needs some working. best of luck to you!

Misure wrote:

hihi~
M4M from your queue >.<
[General]

First,try to make:
Easy:below 1.5 1.46
Normal:1.5~2.25 2.15
Hard:2.25~3.75 2.93
Insane:above 3.75 3.66
That will be better than now.

Besides,you'd better keep a fixed distance snap in E/N diff,seems like a rule
[Easy]

First,I think lower the sound volume in Easy diff is unnecessary,or at least make volume after lowered 50%
00:19:529 (2,3,4,5) - I think this is better Another modder has already mentioned this.

Image

00:34:100 - better like this Fixed

00:37:100 - ^ fixed

01:21:243 (1,2,3,4,5) - better Another modder has mentioned this.

Image

01:24:672 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ ^

Image

01:28:541 (1,2,3) - curve them all and consider the right place
btw,this is my 3 pc scores <3 nice!

Image

The first two pc I missed at the last two sliders,and I think it's not my fault
there must be something wrong,maybe the diatance,just fix that~
And you need some blanket I think when playing

[Normal]

Increase the distance,it's a little hard now,a 140BPM songs shouldn't be so difficult like this
And don't put objects in such crowded time interval,because it's a NORMAL diff.
Because the points above,I can't understand you Normal any longer,sorry ;_;
[Knotts' Hard]
01:11:376 (1) - a little unbeautiful...maybe red point of slider(I don't know how to call it) to (120,208) better?
01:12:233 (3) - ^
01:28:512 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Maybe they keep a distance better here because of rhythm,like this

Image

[Insane]

00:03:876 (2,5) - not stack? stacked
00:07:733 (3) - move to (296,160) to avoid crowded It was supposed to be like this
00:08:376 (4) - this stack is unnecessary,maybe (248,336)or around is OK Did something different
00:08:591 (5) - ends at 00:09:019 - and add a note after that Fixed
00:09:662 (1) - move to here is better surely,in my opinion(considering about flow) I think this is already fine

Image

and have to move other objects after that
00:23:376 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - awkward position really...before that you'd better change 00:24:662 (5) - to two notes
and then consider position changing The flow here was intended to be like this
00:27:662 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - rotate appropriately,flow to bottom more Done.
00:46:733 (9) - to (240,336) 00:46:948 (10) - to (288,168) 00:47:162 (11) - (400,280) I think this is fine
00:52:519 (1,2,3,4) - change to two sliders I don't think this matters
01:14:376 - kiai ends here? I ended it here so the particles of the KIAI activate again for the 2nd part.
01:21:019 (12,2) - not stack? I think this is fine
01:28:511 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I think terrible here...I prefer: another modder has mentioned this.
01:28:511 (1) - (48,96) 01:28:800 (2) - (152,224) 01:29:089 (3) - (376,144)
01:29:378 (4) - (264,264) 01:29:666 (1) - (64,304) 01:29:954 (2) - (168,104)
01:30:243 (3) - (152,224) 01:30:820 (4) - (240,168) 01:31:397 (5) - (264,264)
The last green line is useless,delete it.

Above,I think the mainlly problem in your Insane is dull flow and abuse of stack
(My map also has the two problem so I can feel that in your map,though I can deal with that well for now )
But try to overcome~ For example,add some jumps


Although I'm new in mapping now,I do hope my mod help ~
Good luck to you