ganad wrote:

Just wondering can I just make another difficulty in-between normal and hard?
And what do you mean "Since you start mapping here: 00:00:068 – in the Hard, why not place that red timing point on that white tick?" by this?

Keada wrote:

Hey! :> your mod as requested!

• 
  

  Normal

1. 00:01:798 (3) - dont stack try to place it on the side instead or where it fits you :>
   Changed it
   
   
2. 00:24:875 (3) - same here, suggestion: x:216 y:224
   Changed it
   
   
3. 00:43:048 (6) - could be blanketed like this
   Changed it
   
   
4. 00:46:798 (1,2,3,4) - try to have same DS between these
   Didn't change it cause i would have to change the distance snap distance which would change the whole map
   
   
5. 00:49:106 (2) - try not to stacku pleasu （＾∇＾）
   Changed it
   
   
6. 01:08:721 (3) - same here
   Changed it
   
   
7. 01:21:558 (1) - move forward one tick to the blue
   Changed it
   
   
   
   
   01:09:875 (1,2) - I love these <3
   Thank you

• 
  

  Hard

1. 00:07:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could improve this star, use ctrl+shift+D to make polygon shapes
2. 00:25:308 (1,2,3,4,5) - same with this one.
   I have no clue how to use it, i'll try and figure it out later if i get the time
   
   
3. 00:32:231 (2) - fix blanket
   Don't really know what the term 'blanket' means but i think i fixed it
   
4. 00:48:818 (1) - same here (if it was meant to be blanketed that is) around x:416 y:152
   Same as above
   
5. 00:52:856 (1,2,3) - consider placing this somewhere else, hard to read + overlap
   Changed it
   
6. 01:21:414 (1) - place this on blue tick instead to match the music
   Changed it
   
7. 01:23:000 (1) - you can make a 1/4 slider here instead
   Didn't change, I'll consider it

Good luck!

1. 00:15:933 (3,4) - I suggest to just copy 00:15:068 (1,2) - these and make them mirrored and move then so distant is 1,80x.
2. 00:16:077 (4) - if you didn't accept ^, then imo I like more not so curvy slider here
3. 00:20:548 (1) - why not just stack with 00:20:693 (2) - ? it feels odd when it's just partly stacked, and then 00:20:981 (3) - isn't.
4. 00:22:568 (1) - move slider's second dot little up, so it is lined with 00:23:145 (2,3) -
5. 00:29:202 (1) - make it not so curvy
6. 00:36:270 (7) - I recommend to do it not so agglomerate slider
7. 00:57:471 (6) - I suggest make replace this with copy of 00:56:606 (4) -
8. 01:06:991 (1) - make it look more smoothly, example: http://puu.sh/gTlxW/eec2d38a45.jpg

1. 00:03:241 (5) - I suggest to move under 00:02:375 (4) - x154 y176, so it's not confusing when circle is so close 00:03:241 (5) -
2. 00:03:529 (6) - If you accepted ^, then move this slider so it makes sense with distant
3. 00:09:875 (5) - add NC
4. 00:14:491 (4) - add NC
5. 00:20:260 (2) - I suggest to move x248 y24 to better flow
6. 00:23:145 (1) - remove NC
7. 00:23:721 (2) - add NC
8. 00:27:760 (1) - remove NC
9. 00:28:625 (2) - add NC
10. 00:32:087 (1) - remove NC
11. 00:33:241 (3) - add NC
12. 00:35:693 (1) - remove NC
13. 00:37:568 (5) - add NC
14. I won't tell you all points where you should start NC or delete it. Think again, when do you should start NC. Take to imitate me. Ask help if this doesn't help you. I'll help you in chat.
15. 00:40:451 (3) - move to x104 y160 so it makes salmiakki shape there.
16. 00:40:741 (4) - move to x160 y248, same reason ^
17. 01:09:010 (7) - move to x312 y200 and move slider's second dot one grip up so it keeps line

1. 00:14:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - this looks really boring when it is just straight to left. Make there shape.
2. 00:24:875 (3) - no need to jump here when it doesn't do it anywhere else. Keep 1,20x distant
3. 01:08:721 (3) - slider is too short, make it end at 01:09:298 -
4. 01:09:875 (1) - if you really want to keep this heart shape, then cut this slider by end it at 01:11:895 - ! Ending slider at 01:12:039 - is unexpected for starter or anyone else. It is really important imo, and also maybe unranked thing, because this is normal diff.
5. 01:20:837 (4,1) - poor polarity. Make slider from 01:20:837 (4) - and end it at 01:21:558 - and add note at 01:22:279 - . This part can be too hard for starters and unrankable thing. Dunno, but imo.

1. Didn't find anything, good diff!

smsh150 wrote:

Hello!
Came from my queue.

[Insane]

1. 00:15:933 (3,4) - I suggest to just copy 00:15:068 (1,2) - these and make them mirrored and move then so distant is 1,80x.
   Changed it
2. 00:16:077 (4) - if you didn't accept ^, then imo I like more not so curvy slider here
   Changed it
3. 00:20:548 (1) - why not just stack with 00:20:693 (2) - ? it feels odd when it's just partly stacked, and then 00:20:981 (3) - isn't.
   Changed it
4. 00:22:568 (1) - move slider's second dot little up, so it is lined with 00:23:145 (2,3) -
   Changed it
5. 00:29:202 (1) - make it not so curvy
   Changed it
6. 00:36:270 (7) - I recommend to do it not so agglomerate slider
   When i come up with a solution will change
7. 00:57:471 (6) - I suggest make replace this with copy of 00:56:606 (4) -
   Changed it
8. 01:06:991 (1) - make it look more smoothly, example: http://puu.sh/gTlxW/eec2d38a45.jpg
   Link doesn't work

[Hard]

1. 00:03:241 (5) - I suggest to move under 00:02:375 (4) - x154 y176, so it's not confusing when circle is so close 00:03:241 (5) -
2. 00:03:529 (6) - If you accepted ^, then move this slider so it makes sense with distant
   I'll consider it
3. 00:09:875 (5) - add NC
4. 00:14:491 (4) - add NC
5. 00:20:260 (2) - I suggest to move x248 y24 to better flow
6. 00:23:145 (1) - remove NC
7. 00:23:721 (2) - add NC
8. 00:27:760 (1) - remove NC
9. 00:28:625 (2) - add NC
10. 00:32:087 (1) - remove NC
11. 00:33:241 (3) - add NC
12. 00:35:693 (1) - remove NC
13. 00:37:568 (5) - add NC
    Changed all of the above
14. I won't tell you all points where you should start NC or delete it. Think again, when do you should start NC. Take to imitate me. Ask help if this doesn't help you. I'll help you in chat.
15. 00:40:451 (3) - move to x104 y160 so it makes salmiakki shape there.
16. 00:40:741 (4) - move to x160 y248, same reason ^
17. 01:09:010 (7) - move to x312 y200 and move slider's second dot one grip up so it keeps line
    Changed all of the above

[Normal]

1. 00:14:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - this looks really boring when it is just straight to left. Make there shape.
   Changed it
2. 00:24:875 (3) - no need to jump here when it doesn't do it anywhere else. Keep 1,20x distant
   Changed it
3. 01:08:721 (3) - slider is too short, make it end at 01:09:298 -
   Changed it
4. 01:09:875 (1) - if you really want to keep this heart shape, then cut this slider by end it at 01:11:895 - ! Ending slider at 01:12:039 - is unexpected for starter or anyone else. It is really important imo, and also maybe unranked thing, because this is normal diff.
   I'll check it out first and will change it depending if it is a unranked thing
5. 01:20:837 (4,1) - poor polarity. Make slider from 01:20:837 (4) - and end it at 01:21:558 - and add note at 01:22:279 - . This part can be too hard for starters and unrankable thing. Dunno, but imo.
   Changed it

[Easy]

1. Didn't find anything, good diff!
   Thank you

Good luck with map! Good song btw :3

Thank you so much I really appreciate you putting the time in to look at my map

1. there is slightest delay in soft-hitfinish and soft-hitclap sound ( rankable but recommend to optimize a bit) , use this one for better effect imo soft-hitclap , soft-hitfinish
2. your bg is 1365x768 so use this instead for a little bit better in quality imo jpg
3. Do you have metadata confirmation ?
4. 01:21:414 - after this section the timing feel a bit off imo , you should ask some experience timing expert about that

1. 00:00:068 (1,2) - remove these and put one circle only at where you put red timing point , it play weird and too sudden for me unless you use negative offset instead which isn't that neccesary since you don't pur note before red timing point imo
2. 00:11:895 (1,2,3) - feel a bit too hard for insane and not suit for the intense of song
3. 00:15:068 (1,2) - , 00:15:933 (3,4) - stack would make these play better imo
4. 00:21:846 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think spaced stream is that good for this song , this song is pretty slow and calm that make spaced stream feel really awkward when play so consider the usage of this and others spaced stream that you use in this diff
5. 01:06:991 (1) - this look 100x more nice
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:09:875 (1) - use only one anchor point ( the white dot that use to create slider ) is enough
   
   probably need more work here , the rhythm choice is not really instresting for me , try to listen to music and think what do you want to follow , vocal or instrument , try play around with it a bit and you will find the right rhythm also those spaced stream is gonna be the things I don't like for this it doesn' play that naturally imo
   

1. 00:15:645 (3,4) - this play better imo
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:38:433 (2,3) - I think this play better if you unstack them
3. 00:43:048 (3,4) - ^
4. 00:49:971 (4,5) - this play better imo
   SPOILER

   
   
   need a bit work on flow and placement imo

• uhhh...what I need to say here (I'm not good at teaching people stuff lol :X) this normal is some doesn't looks like normal to me
  you need to try go see some ranked normal lol and try to see how they work , mostly normal still use some simple rhythm similiar to easy , just add some 1/2 beat and you need constant spacing that mean if you use 1.2x ds here you need to use it all the way till the end

1. 00:37:568 (1) - try place like this , it might flow better imo
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:43:914 (3) - this flow better imo
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:15:068 (2) - this flow better imo
   SPOILER

   
   
   this the best diff in this mapset imo , but you need a little more work on flow and placement here a bit imo

CelsiusLK wrote:

late , sorry
It's fine dw about it

[general]

1. there is slightest delay in soft-hitfinish and soft-hitclap sound ( rankable but recommend to optimize a bit) , use this one for better effect imo soft-hitclap , soft-hitfinish
   Changed it
2. your bg is 1365x768 so use this instead for a little bit better in quality imo jpg
   Changed it
3. Do you have metadata confirmation ?
   Still waiting on alacat's reply
4. 01:21:414 - after this section the timing feel a bit off imo , you should ask some experience timing expert about that
   Asked pishifat, he said it's fine and told me to get a better version of the song

[insane]

1. 00:00:068 (1,2) - remove these and put one circle only at where you put red timing point , it play weird and too sudden for me unless you use negative offset instead which isn't that neccesary since you don't pur note before red timing point imo
   I'll think about it
2. 00:11:895 (1,2,3) - feel a bit too hard for insane and not suit for the intense of song
   I'll try and figure out a solution
3. 00:15:068 (1,2) - , 00:15:933 (3,4) - stack would make these play better imo
   Changed it
4. 00:21:846 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think spaced stream is that good for this song , this song is pretty slow and calm that make spaced stream feel really awkward when play so consider the usage of this and others spaced stream that you use in this diff
   I tried putting them closer together
5. 01:06:991 (1) - this look 100x more nice
   SPOILER

   
   
   Change it
6. 01:09:875 (1) - use only one anchor point ( the white dot that use to create slider ) is enough
   Changed it
   
   probably need more work here , the rhythm choice is not really instresting for me , try to listen to music and think what do you want to follow , vocal or instrument , try play around with it a bit and you will find the right rhythm also those spaced stream is gonna be the things I don't like for this it doesn' play that naturally imo
   

[hard]

1. 00:15:645 (3,4) - this play better imo
   SPOILER

   
   Changed it
2. 00:38:433 (2,3) - I think this play better if you unstack them
3. 00:43:048 (3,4) - ^
   I'll think about it
4. 00:49:971 (4,5) - this play better imo
   SPOILER

   
   Changed it
   need a bit work on flow and placement imo

[normal]

• uhhh...what I need to say here (I'm not good at teaching people stuff lol :X) this normal is some doesn't looks like normal to me
  you need to try go see some ranked normal lol and try to see how they work , mostly normal still use some simple rhythm similiar to easy , just add some 1/2 beat and you need constant spacing that mean if you use 1.2x ds here you need to use it all the way till the end
  Still working on it

[easy]

1. 00:37:568 (1) - try place like this , it might flow better imo
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:43:914 (3) - this flow better imo
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:15:068 (2) - this flow better imo
   SPOILER

   
   
   this the best diff in this mapset imo , but you need a little more work on flow and placement here a bit imo
   Thank you changed everything in easy

good luck

m1223961117 wrote:

OKOK...I'm back to check sec time

No KD~~

Test play at 4/2 20:10

[Insane]

1. AR8 OD6.5 HP7
   00:15:068 (1,2) - Combine a slider?? I think more better
   Idk what you mean
   00:22:423 - add circle
   Added
   00:27:616 (3) - move to 00:27:471 -
   Changed
   00:37:568 (1,2) - Combine a slider
   Idk
   00:55:596 - add circle??
   Added
   01:00:501 (4) - remove circle, same 01:05:116 (4) - 01:06:269 (9) -
   Idk
   01:01:221 (5) - make like this: 00:56:606 (4,5) -
   Idk
   01:08:000 - add circle??
   Added
   
2. If you fix my suggestion, I think more better to play

[Hard]

1. HP5 AR5 OD4 If you don't change, it's unrankable
   00:26:895 - slider start 00:26:895 -
   Changed
   00:29:202 - add circle
   Added
   00:35:116 (3,5) - remove these circles
   Removed
   00:36:414 (7,8) - no stacking sliders and combine a 1/1 slider
   Idk if I did what you asked but made some changes
   00:39:154 (3) - move circle to 00:39:298 -
   Moved
   00:43:770 (4) - same^, 00:43:914 -
   Moved
   00:53:721 (5) - NC
   Changed

[Normal]

• 
  00:21:125 (4) - remove circle
  Removed
  01:09:875 (1) - slider end 01:11:606 - (I said "Slider don't end blue line in Normal diff", remember?? No anything can follow on this blue line... )
  I forgot soz, Changed

[Easy]

• 
  Fine.

Good luck for you again

1. Remove Characters name in the tag
2. 00:55:452 - preview point should at this section
3. Remove "Love Romance Comedy" and "2013" at the tag
4. MP3 Bitrate seems low, search another MP3 that has a 192kbps bitrate please?
5. The mapset needs a lot of Timings

1. Distance spacing should be 1.0x in Easy
2. 00:07:568 (1) - 1/1 with no reverse will be better imo
3. 00:09:298 (2) - 1/1 slider fits better
4. 00:30:645 (5) - 1/1 slider please
5. 01:23:000 (2) - you can add a note in blue tick! please

1. 00:02:664 (5,6) - oh my, dont do this please
2. 00:14:491 (1,2,3,4) - this really looks difficult
3. 00:21:414 (4) - this is so confusing >.> Reduce the Reverse please
4. 00:31:221 (2) - ^
5. 00:46:798 (1,2,3,4) - really looks difficult, please reduce them
6. 00:49:683 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
7. 00:53:721 (1,2,3,4) - ^

SoGa wrote:

UFF , sry for taking too looong , my apologies , (school work is too ****)
SAME!
[General]

1. Easy diff Tag != is not equal than the other 4 diff , fix it pls

[Easy]

1. 00:53:721 (1,1) - Blanket it proper , the current one seems a little bit weird ;w;
   Will consider it
2. 01:15:068 (2,3) - ^
   Changed it
3. 01:16:221 (3,4) - s
4. 01:21:414 (1,2) - ^
5. Well , not dat much major problem on this diff , but the quality of this diff is really low ,, i think u have to rework ..don't just use straght slide, try to have more variations ~

[Normal]

1. 00:15:645 (5) - Maybe try to move this one to 00:15:933 (5) - and then 00:15:645 (5) - this one change to a note ?
   Will consider it
2. 00:16:510 (1,1) - Hm , u have to ask someone else about this one , i think this one is consider Unrakable,in a Normal diff , u have to left like 2 gaps after a spinner for the next note/slider .but this seems low bpm so im not really sure ;w;
   I checked up with other modders and it seems it is alright
3. 00:28:625 (2,3,4,1) - Probably want u to change this rhythm , sound a little bit weird
   Will try
4. 00:49:683 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too hard.. Dont try to pass 5 notes ,,i think it's a little bit hard for a normal diff , even a hard diff not put rhythm like u do .
   Changed it
5. 00:51:991 (2,3,4) - Maybe try this rhythm ? is more ez and pretty much than the one u have rightnow tho
   I think i made a change
6. 00:53:721 (1,2,3,4) - Pls keep them at the same DS pls , it quite looks bad
   I checked and i think the DS put it like that
7. 00:58:914 (2,3,4) - I do recommend this rhythm for this part
   I think I made a change
8. 01:09:875 (1,2) - The aesthetics of this one is Baaad , pls fix it dude , u just have to copy 01:09:875 (1) - and paste it ..
   I curved the sliders instead
   Same as Easy diff , u need more work on this diff too

[Hard]

1. 00:03:241 (5,6) - Try to make some aesthetic things ,Just Blanket them , that is not hard tho ,and it improve the map playable and aesthetics and pattern lmao
   Will consider it
2. 00:07:568 (1) - Try to add Whistle on the slider head
   Added it
3. 00:10:452 (2,3,4) - pls , at least make something like this
   Changed it
4. 00:14:491 (1,2,3,4,5) - U can improve them copying half side and paste the other side , 00:15:356 (4) - to x152 y120 ,and 00:15:645 (1) - to x40 y72 .
   Will consider it
5. 00:35:837 (4,5,6) - This is weird and too hard for a hard diff lmao , change it pls
   I think i made it easier
6. 00:41:318 (5,6,1) - try to blanket 00:41:318 (5,2) - ,and move the 1 to form a triangle , this way feel more better and aesthetically tho
   Idk how to rearrange it
7. 01:01:221 (3,1,2) - Maybe try this instead?
8. 01:09:010 (4) - get this into a 1/2 slider pls
   Don't understand
   

[Insane]

1. 00:05:548 (3) - Delete this note , wasn't dat much necessary tho
   I think it's fine
2. 00:08:433 (4,3) - Try to blanket this group
   Maybe
3. 00:12:327 (2) - Delete this note pls , actually i dont hear anysound there
   Sounds odd if i remove the note
4. 00:33:673 (2) - ^
   I hear it maybe try listen again?
5. 00:50:260 (4,5) - stack them pls
   Stacked them
6. 01:20:260 wow , this is such a downbeat and u ignored it , put a note there as well pls
   Maybe
7. 01:23:145 Add a spinner here and end it here 01:28:048
   I've been thinking of adding a spinner to the add of the song but idk will consider it tho

Good luck

[Rei-tan] wrote:

Hello c: Modding from my Queue

General

*Please do consider checking your AiMod c:

Fixed it

Easy

00:47:952 (2) - Change the angle of this slider slightly.

Fixed

No problems :3

Normal

General:
>Please consider changing your CS to CS 3
>Please consider changing the AR to AR 5 too
> The OD Is fine
Will consider it

00:01:798 (3) - Move the hit circle further from the previous slider's end by a little. Like this

I made changes
00:42:183 (5) - Please do consider moving the slider above the hit circle and make the blanketing better, it's overlapping a little on the circle.
Can't do much about it otherwise the DS will be inconsistent
01:09:875 - 01:12:183 (1,2) - please try to make the sliders symmetrical, it turns out something like this when you look at it fully. http://puu.sh/hGYIL/0250a393d1.jpg
I've tried for quite some time and I just gave up , maybe when have some free time I will try and fix it again
01:23:145 - Remove the circle before this and start a spinner here and end it at 01:26:029.

Maybe

Hard

General:
>Make the HP drain a little lower.
>Change AR to AR7
>Change OD to OD5
>Change CS to CS4
I made small changes

00:09:587 - Put a note here, it keeps the consistency.
Added
00:24:010 - Add a note here.
Will consider it
01:23:000 - Move the time of this note to 01:23:145 it's too early.
I think I've changed it

Insane

*For the insane I suggest Accepting a guest difficulty from someone who can play insane maps better :3
Haha maybe if anyone is willing

It's a very nice mapset, I hope you revive it and get it ranked. I'll throw in a star c:

1. Offset is completely off. I recommend -1375
2. Timing in the end of the map is also wrong. Add these timing points so it can fit the real BPM:
   81856 - 78 BPM
   82427 - 99 BPM
   82784 - 54 BPM
3. If you want to use the video, please contact me in-game, here or with PM so I'd provide you a better quality and compression. Currently the quality is just terrible, thus high resolution users automatically have to turn it off.
4. I recommend you to use this file for soft-sliderslide to avoid weird noise on the sliders. It is really annoying in some parts of your map.

1. 00:03:240 (3,4) - The rhythm is quite pointless. There are no sounds on the repeats, so these should be just 1/2 sliders.
2. 00:15:500 (2) - Similar issue as above, but more important. There is absolutely no reason to use 3/4 slider, when there is note on 00:15:644 - and fits perfectly for 1/2 slider, while there is nothing on 00:15:500 - in music. Just move it on 00:15:644 - and shorten it so it ends on 00:15:932 - .
3. 00:19:826 (2) - I also don't think this is cool. You mapped not really important sound on this place, but didn't map quite significant sound on 00:19:971 - . I suggest to move the circle on 00:19:971 - put there additional circle so it is more sensible to the song.
4. 00:27:326 (2) - The slider goes against the flow and additionally makes a not pretty overlap, I think something like screenshot below would be really fine.
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:37:855 (1,2) - Also a rhythm issue. You don't follow any sound on 00:38:000 - yet there is a sound on 00:38:144 - so I would use 1/2 slider on 00:37:855 - and a circle on 00:38:432 - . You can hear someting on 00:38:000 - because the sound starting on 00:37:855 - is fading out, thus changes pitch new sound on 00:38:144 - . That means there is no accurate point, because fading off is just each ms and there is no emphasized change which is on-beat.
6. 00:51:846 (2) - Same as above.
7. 01:04:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I know this is supposed to be 'pattern', but you if there isn't a change which is recognizable by ear, you should keep the spacing exactly the same on all these streams like 01:00:355 (1,2,3,4,5) - because these are exactly the same sounds and exactly the same melody, not more or less emphasized, just same, but one is bigger one is smaller, that doesn't make a sense.
8. 01:10:163 (1) - Avoiding these sliders would be cool. That's to improve overall design of the map, which is quite decreasing the quality when there is such an unsymmetry. If you wanted this kind of shape, what about using some red points like screenshot below?
   SPOILER

   
9. Check your new combos again, it doesn't really make sense because they seem to be put on random places.

1. 00:03:817 (6) - A little detail, but please, avoid these sliders unless it is really needed, it's shape is really unsymmetrical.
2. I think it would be more smart to put 01:04:682 (3) - on 01:04:971 - and add circle on 01:04:682 - because there actually isn't any sound which should be emphasized by repeat on 01:04:538 - , but it would follow the vocals nicely.
3. Check the whole map for the straight sliders. I think there are too many and at least low-angle on some short sliders whould be cool. For example 00:21:930 (4,5) - could look like this instead. Pretty simple, doesn't run the flow and looks pretty well.
   SPOILER

   

1. I would reduce spacing of all notes to 1,1x, because it plays and looks better for 1/4 notes.
2. 00:21:701 (4) - Many repeats on low difficulties is quite annoying and will confuse players many times because they won't notice the 2nd repeat because it is not visible when slider appears. I suggest to remake this to two sliders or one with repeat and note.
3. 00:42:471 (5,6,7) - Too much overlapping in not really aesthetic way. I recommend something like this so the cirlce is not covered around whole its body. That causes approach circle to be barely visible if we consider it will be covered also with 300/100/50 sign.
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:54:009 (1) - Same thing about sliders as I mentioned many times before. It doesn't look well when it's constructed from unsymmetrical shapes.

1. Not really much to mention, it is nice difficulty, but I recommend to add some nicer shapes to it. Mainly, there is quite a high count of straight sliders which would be nice with some shape, so try it

Wafu wrote:

Random mod

Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

General

1. Offset is completely off. I recommend -1375
2. Timing in the end of the map is also wrong. Add these timing points so it can fit the real BPM:
   81856 - 78 BPM
   82427 - 99 BPM
   82784 - 54 BPM
   Changed all of the above
   
3. If you want to use the video, please contact me in-game, here or with PM so I'd provide you a better quality and compression. Currently the quality is just terrible, thus high resolution users automatically have to turn it off.
4. I recommend you to use this file for soft-sliderslide to avoid weird noise on the sliders. It is really annoying in some parts of your map.

Added

Insane

1. 00:03:240 (3,4) - The rhythm is quite pointless. There are no sounds on the repeats, so these should be just 1/2 sliders.
   Removed note 3 but kept 4
2. 00:15:500 (2) - Similar issue as above, but more important. There is absolutely no reason to use 3/4 slider, when there is note on 00:15:644 - and fits perfectly for 1/2 slider, while there is nothing on 00:15:500 - in music. Just move it on 00:15:644 - and shorten it so it ends on 00:15:932 - .
   Fixed
3. 00:19:826 (2) - I also don't think this is cool. You mapped not really important sound on this place, but didn't map quite significant sound on 00:19:971 - . I suggest to move the circle on 00:19:971 - put there additional circle so it is more sensible to the song.
   Fixed
4. 00:27:326 (2) - The slider goes against the flow and additionally makes a not pretty overlap, I think something like screenshot below would be really fine.
   SPOILER

   
   Changed
5. 00:37:855 (1,2) - Also a rhythm issue. You don't follow any sound on 00:38:000 - yet there is a sound on 00:38:144 - so I would use 1/2 slider on 00:37:855 - and a circle on 00:38:432 - . You can hear someting on 00:38:000 - because the sound starting on 00:37:855 - is fading out, thus changes pitch new sound on 00:38:144 - . That means there is no accurate point, because fading off is just each ms and there is no emphasized change which is on-beat.
   Fixed
6. 00:51:846 (2) - Same as above.
   Removed
7. 01:04:971 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I know this is supposed to be 'pattern', but you if there isn't a change which is recognizable by ear, you should keep the spacing exactly the same on all these streams like 01:00:355 (1,2,3,4,5) - because these are exactly the same sounds and exactly the same melody, not more or less emphasized, just same, but one is bigger one is smaller, that doesn't make a sense.
   Changed
8. 01:10:163 (1) - Avoiding these sliders would be cool. That's to improve overall design of the map, which is quite decreasing the quality when there is such an unsymmetry. If you wanted this kind of shape, what about using some red points like screenshot below?
   SPOILER

   
   Will consider it
9. Check your new combos again, it doesn't really make sense because they seem to be put on random places.

Yeah i don't really know i've check several times, not really good with it

Hard

1. 00:03:817 (6) - A little detail, but please, avoid these sliders unless it is really needed, it's shape is really unsymmetrical.
   Will consider changing it
2. I think it would be more smart to put 01:04:682 (3) - on 01:04:971 - and add circle on 01:04:682 - because there actually isn't any sound which should be emphasized by repeat on 01:04:538 - , but it would follow the vocals nicely.
   Fixed
3. Check the whole map for the straight sliders. I think there are too many and at least low-angle on some short sliders whould be cool. For example 00:21:930 (4,5) - could look like this instead. Pretty simple, doesn't run the flow and looks pretty well.
   SPOILER

   [img]http://puu.sh/hUydQ/dcb89907e3.jpg[/img

Added more curves to the map

Normal

1. I would reduce spacing of all notes to 1,1x, because it plays and looks better for 1/4 notes.
   Will try and make the effort when I have time
2. 00:21:701 (4) - Many repeats on low difficulties is quite annoying and will confuse players many times because they won't notice the 2nd repeat because it is not visible when slider appears. I suggest to remake this to two sliders or one with repeat and note.
   Fixed
3. 00:42:471 (5,6,7) - Too much overlapping in not really aesthetic way. I recommend something like this so the cirlce is not covered around whole its body. That causes approach circle to be barely visible if we consider it will be covered also with 300/100/50 sign.
   SPOILER

   
   Fixed
4. 00:54:009 (1) - Same thing about sliders as I mentioned many times before. It doesn't look well when it's constructed from unsymmetrical shapes.

I think i fixed it?

Easy

1. Not really much to mention, it is nice difficulty, but I recommend to add some nicer shapes to it. Mainly, there is quite a high count of straight sliders which would be nice with some shape, so try it

Conclusion: Promising but needs more work

You should improve some shapes a bit, follow the music a bit smarter and don't forget to recheck new combos, they should fit to the song better. Putting new combo on each one or two downbeats (big white ticks) will most likely not ruin anything. Anyway, good luck. If you have any questions or need help, feel free to PM me in-game eventually on forums.

Just for further confirmation - Negative offset is fine.

1. Song Folder: You've got a video in the song folder but it didn't play when I ran the song (in either editor or play, and yes, I had video enabled) - might just want to recheck this quickly
2. Song Setup: All your combo colours are pale, except for (3) which is really bold and feels quite garish against the bg. I'd change this to a pale purple colour, perhaps something like RGB 160,140,200
3. Metadata: No issues
4. Hitsounds: Your custom soft-hitnormal is really quiet compared to your other hitsounds, almost to the point of being inaudible. I'd try and find a slightly louder soft cymbal hitsound to use here
5. AImod: Some notes and the kiai time green inherited points are unsnapped, probably from the recent offset change - might want to take a look at these
6. Timing: One issue, see below.

1. 01:21:856 - The timing point here is too late for the corresponding note in the music, it should be on the blue tick at 01:21:846 - offset -10ms
2. 01:22:427 - Same thing here, though not as much - move ths timing point back to 01:22:422 - offset -5ms, and change the BPM to 103.5, since this allows you to correctly snap the slider end on the blue tick at 01:22:566
3. Don't forget to copy the same timing over to the other diffs and resnap the circles there (though this will be simple since there are no sliders here in the other diffs)

1. 00:00:932 (1) - Consider moving this to [x-160,y-200] - it's closer to the centre of the screen, making it easier for new players to react to. Also, it makes a neat equilateral triangle pattern, and due to the low BPM, an overlap with 00:04:971 (4) isn't a problem
2. 00:04:971 (4) - NC here to follow a constant pattern of 1 NC every 2 downbeats, then remove NC from 00:07:855 (1)
3. 00:04:971 (4,5) - Consider rotating each of these by 10-15 degrees clockwise, since the movement between 00:06:125 (5,6) is quite sharp. This will create a smoother and more interesting flow whilst still being tidy and symmetrical
4. 00:07:855 (1) - Try rotating this about 25 degrees clockwise to create a smoother flow
5. 00:09:586 (2,3,4) - Angle these slightly or make it so that they're not in a horizontal line to make this more interesting to play
6. 00:15:932 (3) - There's no sound in the music on the slider end here, so this should be shortened to the previous white tick (and also NC to keep a constant pattern). However, to avoid an awkward long pause here, there's a snare drum sound at 00:18:240 that you could map with a circle instead
7. 00:19:971 (2,3,4) - Flow is really sharp here, so I would rotate (2) 60 degrees anticlockwise, then re-arrange the next two sliders (4,5) with a neat double blanket, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3165579. You'll need to move 00:24:009 (1,2) around a little if you do this, but I'll leave you to decide how to do this since I can't make your map for you
8. 00:26:894 (1,2) - Swap NC for the "2 downbeats per NC" pattern
9. 00:33:817 (2,3) - Flow is quite sharp here, so rotate (2) 35 degrees clockwise to smooth it out a little
10. 00:34:971 (3) - I feel like this slider doesn't really fir the music all that well as it covers a more interesting vocal pattern. For example, the prominent vocal notes are at 00:35:548 and the next two white ticks, but two of these are in the slider body and the other is a repeat. Strong sounds play much better when they're clickable, so I would do something like this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3165616 - (3) is where your repeat slider currently begins and (4,5) is blanketed. Again, it's up to you to decide how you reflow 00:37:855 (1,2) etc. if you do this, since it will leave a large gap currently
11. 00:43:048 (2,3,4,5) - Too linear, it doesn't flow all that well because of it and it's quite plain. I'd rotate (2) 25 degrees anticlockwise, and then try a pattern like this:
    
    Make sure you DS 00:47:086 (1) properly afterwards!
    
12. 00:51:125 (1) - I would slpit this up into a single circle and 1/1 slider, since the downbeat at 00:51:701 is a prominent sound and deserves to be clickable. If you do this, NC on the start of the new slider for the consistent 2 measure pattern and remove from 00:54:009 (1)
13. 00:57:471 (2,4) - I know the BPM is low, but I'd still avoid stacking in Easy after just one other note, as it can lead to some confusing overlaps. Try adjusting this pattern to avoid any risk of this, e.g. by Ctrl+J 00:59:778 (4,1,2)
14. 01:03:240 (3,5) - As above, try to avoid the stack here if you can
15. 01:04:971 (5,1) - Try angling these slightly (whilst still keeping them parallel) to make this slightly more interesting to play. You could try rotaing by 20 degrees clockwise or so
16. 01:09:009 (3,1,2) - It's nice that they're curved, but since they're all identical this is still a bit plain. You could try rotating these each a little for some varied flow, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3165765 - (3) is the outline you can see on the left, I didn't change it's position or orientation
17. 01:13:625 (4) - Personally I feel a 1/1 non-repeating slider fits the music better here, since the repeat falls on a weak note
18. 01:15:355 (2,3) - Spacing and blanket are slightly off here, try moving (3) to [x-160,y-256] and rotating the tail 2 degrees clockwise
19. 01:18:817 (4) - NC here to keep a consistent pattern
20. 01:18:817 (4,5,6) - Flow breaks down here, since your slider tails are pointing away from the next note. Since you're short on space here in the corner, it might be beneficial to try something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3165816 - for (1) I copied 01:13:625 (4) and Crtl+H'ed - as this gives you far more room to play with when placing 01:18:817 (4,5,6)
21. 01:21:701 (1,2) - I already gave you some suggestions for how to fix the unsnap in the Timing section, but make sure to create a nice blanket here whilst you're at it, since the current one looks a little messy. Rotating (1) 8 degrees clockwise should work.

JBHyperion wrote:

Mod by PM request:

General Comments:

1. Song Folder: You've got a video in the song folder but it didn't play when I ran the song (in either editor or play, and yes, I had video enabled) - might just want to recheck this quickly
2. Song Setup: All your combo colours are pale, except for (3) which is really bold and feels quite garish against the bg. I'd change this to a pale purple colour, perhaps something like RGB 160,140,200
3. Metadata: No issues
4. Hitsounds: Your custom soft-hitnormal is really quiet compared to your other hitsounds, almost to the point of being inaudible. I'd try and find a slightly louder soft cymbal hitsound to use here
5. AImod: Some notes and the kiai time green inherited points are unsnapped, probably from the recent offset change - might want to take a look at these
6. Timing: One issue, see below.

01:21:701 (1) - This slider in Easy crosses multiple timing points with BPM changes and variable offset. Because of this, it will be almost impossible to snap properly, and is therefore unrankable. You can fix this by snapping these timing points a little better as I'll suggest below:

1. 01:21:856 - The timing point here is too late for the corresponding note in the music, it should be on the blue tick at 01:21:846 - offset -10ms
2. 01:22:427 - Same thing here, though not as much - move ths timing point back to 01:22:422 - offset -5ms, and change the BPM to 103.5, since this allows you to correctly snap the slider end on the blue tick at 01:22:566
3. Don't forget to copy the same timing over to the other diffs and resnap the circles there (though this will be simple since there are no sliders here in the other diffs)

I don't have a huge amount of time right now, and since you got a great mod on the hardest diff recently, I'll go from the other end of the scale.

Easy:

1. 00:00:932 (1) - Consider moving this to [x-160,y-200] - it's closer to the centre of the screen, making it easier for new players to react to. Also, it makes a neat equilateral triangle pattern, and due to the low BPM, an overlap with 00:04:971 (4) isn't a problem
2. 00:04:971 (4) - NC here to follow a constant pattern of 1 NC every 2 downbeats, then remove NC from 00:07:855 (1)
3. 00:04:971 (4,5) - Consider rotating each of these by 10-15 degrees clockwise, since the movement between 00:06:125 (5,6) is quite sharp. This will create a smoother and more interesting flow whilst still being tidy and symmetrical
4. 00:07:855 (1) - Try rotating this about 25 degrees clockwise to create a smoother flow
5. 00:09:586 (2,3,4) - Angle these slightly or make it so that they're not in a horizontal line to make this more interesting to play
6. 00:15:932 (3) - There's no sound in the music on the slider end here, so this should be shortened to the previous white tick (and also NC to keep a constant pattern). However, to avoid an awkward long pause here, there's a snare drum sound at 00:18:240 that you could map with a circle instead
7. 00:19:971 (2,3,4) - Flow is really sharp here, so I would rotate (2) 60 degrees anticlockwise, then re-arrange the next two sliders (4,5) with a neat double blanket, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3165579. You'll need to move 00:24:009 (1,2) around a little if you do this, but I'll leave you to decide how to do this since I can't make your map for you
8. 00:26:894 (1,2) - Swap NC for the "2 downbeats per NC" pattern
9. 00:33:817 (2,3) - Flow is quite sharp here, so rotate (2) 35 degrees clockwise to smooth it out a little
10. 00:34:971 (3) - I feel like this slider doesn't really fir the music all that well as it covers a more interesting vocal pattern. For example, the prominent vocal notes are at 00:35:548 and the next two white ticks, but two of these are in the slider body and the other is a repeat. Strong sounds play much better when they're clickable, so I would do something like this instead: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3165616 - (3) is where your repeat slider currently begins and (4,5) is blanketed. Again, it's up to you to decide how you reflow 00:37:855 (1,2) etc. if you do this, since it will leave a large gap currently
11. 00:43:048 (2,3,4,5) - Too linear, it doesn't flow all that well because of it and it's quite plain. I'd rotate (2) 25 degrees anticlockwise, and then try a pattern like this:
    
    Make sure you DS 00:47:086 (1) properly afterwards!
    
12. 00:51:125 (1) - I would slpit this up into a single circle and 1/1 slider, since the downbeat at 00:51:701 is a prominent sound and deserves to be clickable. If you do this, NC on the start of the new slider for the consistent 2 measure pattern and remove from 00:54:009 (1)
13. 00:57:471 (2,4) - I know the BPM is low, but I'd still avoid stacking in Easy after just one other note, as it can lead to some confusing overlaps. Try adjusting this pattern to avoid any risk of this, e.g. by Ctrl+J 00:59:778 (4,1,2)
14. 01:03:240 (3,5) - As above, try to avoid the stack here if you can
15. 01:04:971 (5,1) - Try angling these slightly (whilst still keeping them parallel) to make this slightly more interesting to play. You could try rotaing by 20 degrees clockwise or so
16. 01:09:009 (3,1,2) - It's nice that they're curved, but since they're all identical this is still a bit plain. You could try rotating these each a little for some varied flow, like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3165765 - (3) is the outline you can see on the left, I didn't change it's position or orientation
17. 01:13:625 (4) - Personally I feel a 1/1 non-repeating slider fits the music better here, since the repeat falls on a weak note
18. 01:15:355 (2,3) - Spacing and blanket are slightly off here, try moving (3) to [x-160,y-256] and rotating the tail 2 degrees clockwise
19. 01:18:817 (4) - NC here to keep a consistent pattern
20. 01:18:817 (4,5,6) - Flow breaks down here, since your slider tails are pointing away from the next note. Since you're short on space here in the corner, it might be beneficial to try something like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3165816 - for (1) I copied 01:13:625 (4) and Crtl+H'ed - as this gives you far more room to play with when placing 01:18:817 (4,5,6)
21. 01:21:701 (1,2) - I already gave you some suggestions for how to fix the unsnap in the Timing section, but make sure to create a nice blanket here whilst you're at it, since the current one looks a little messy. Rotating (1) 8 degrees clockwise should work.

Hopefully you found this helpful, but if you have any questions, please don't hesitate to get in touch with me and I'll do my best to help. If you still want me to, I'll come back to look at the other diffs later in the week.

Good luck! (:

Alarido wrote:

Hi (:

[General]
For the Easy diff: Snap kiai borders to their nearest big white ticks.
Fixed it

[Easy]
00:04:971 (1) - Curve it a bit with a middle node on (x:128 y:216). More pleasant.
Changed it

00:06:125 (2) - Its tail (repeating arrow) is so near from the (4)'s head. Suggestion is place its tail on (x:192 y:368) and place the middle node (used to curve it) at (x:216 y:352).
Changed it

00:40:163 (3) - Place the middle node at (x:424 y:224) and the tail node to (x:472 y:136) for better blanket with previous.
Changed it

00:43:048 (2) - Huge jump with previous note! Place it at (x:160 y:248), curve it a bit with a middle node on (x:144 y:256).
Changed it

00:54:009 (2) - Some adjustement to better blanket with the next.
Made changes

00:59:778 (4) - A copy from 00:57:471 (2) would make it visually better. The same could be said in relation of 01:00:932 (1) compared to 00:56:317 (1).
I think i fixed this already I'll check again later

[Normal]
Not much I could say, just pointing something.

00:45:355 (1,2) - Could be blanketed better if you use smaller grid (or by disabling grid snap).
Fixed it

01:21:125 (3) - Would be really nice if its tail was been snapped to the red line (timing), because of the beat in the song.
Changed it

[Hard]
00:15:932 (5) - Blanket better the previous note (as shown here → http://puu.sh/i63zy/4a6d39a50a.jpg ← that shows how approaching circles can be used as rules and compasses for making perfect blankets)
Changed it

00:28:913 (1) - Place it at (x:120 y:136), with the middle node at (x:136 y:104) and the tail at (x:168 y:72) for more consistent spacing (unless that jump was intentional).
Nah it wasn't intentional, didn't realise. Thanks for pointing that out

[Insane]
00:49:105 (1) - Move to (x:384 y:176) to better flow and blanket.

Moved it

Surely, it needs improvements, mainly on flow, possibly also in rhythms.
Getting more mods is recommended. (:

Att.

DreaM117er wrote:

Ugh...Why you no use color (not black) on your reply??
Confuse

1. I'm not sure about the timing at the end... The piano and bells play separately, so I recommend choosing only one of them to map, and set the timing based on that.
2. Combo usage could be improved. Try to get your combos starting on downbeats.

1. 00:12:471 (1,2) - Just for aesthetic, try to keep their edges a bit further apart: http://puu.sh/jcCDh/0c9762197d.jpg
2. 00:43:048 (2) - The sharp curve of this slider will confuse beginner players. Please try to straighten it a bit so the direction is more obvious. My recommendation: http://puu.sh/jcCKN/8e4fbba231.jpg
3. 00:51:701 (6) - Clap on end.
4. 00:56:317 (1) - Clap on end?
5. 00:57:471 (2,3,4) - Flow is quite awkward here. It doesn't play smoothly. I suggest changing the direction of (3) like so: http://puu.sh/jcCRJ/4cd7ed0381.jpg Making (2) and (4) the same shape might look nicer too.
6. 01:04:971 (5) - Should have a clap on head to match your hitsound pattern.
7. 01:19:971 (2,3,1) - The flow here feels unnatural because the curve of (1) does not follow from the movement of (2,3). Try this for better flow: http://puu.sh/jcDbZ/6a1906cd03.jpg

1. 00:03:528 (3) - Hard for the player to anticipate. I recommend doing this instead: http://puu.sh/jcDsq/7524ab1f05.jpg
2. 00:06:990 (4) - Unnecessary overmapping. It would be best to keep the rhythm simpler in this relatively calm section of the song.
3. 00:31:509 (2) - I recommend spitting this up. It's hard for players at the target level to read this.
4. 01:22:566 (1,2) - Refrain from using circles where the player can't predict the speed.
5. The map is a bit plain due to excessive use of straight 1/2 beat sliders.

1. 00:36:125 (4,5,6) - The overmapped slider ends don't go well with the music. I recommend shortening the sliders by 1/4 beat.
2. 01:09:586 - I think it would be nice to put something on this beat to highlight the significant drum beat in the music.
3. 01:19:971 (3) - I think it would show the beat emphasis better if you split this into two 1/4 beat sliders and added a circle on the following beat.

1. 00:00:644 (2) - I don't think the slider does a good job of emphasizing the downbeat here. It would probably be better to change the rhythm to place a click on the downbeat.
2. 00:03:240 (3,4) - Avoid adding extra beats where there are none in the music. They feel out of place.
3. 00:13:336 (1,2,1) - Flow is a bit rough. Try curving (2) to allow for smoother cursor movement.
4. 00:22:711 (5,1) - The sudden increase in distance doesn't make sense. I think you should keep it consistent with the stream.
5. 01:20:548 - Feels really empty here. Add a circle?
6. The map feels messy and unstructured because it lacks visual patterns.

DahplA wrote:

Hard

1. 00:00:355 - Hm, I find it strange that you've emphasised this noise in other instances like 00:04:971 (1,2,1,2) - , but not at the start.
   Thx for pointing it out never really noticed
   
2. 00:04:105 - There is a piano sound here which I think you should add.
   
   Added
3. 00:50:259 - It actually follows the vocals much better if you do this instead.
   
   SPOILER

   
   Changed
   
4. 01:20:548 - There is also a piano sound here which you miss out on.

Added

Normal

1. You haven't used consistent spacing throughout the difficulty.
   Not 100% sure if i fixed all of it
   
2. 00:46:221 (2) - The start is placed too close to it's previous object. The positioning here feels too forced. Just move it up to flow off of 1
   Changed
   
3. 00:58:625 (1) - Pretty sure you messed up some hitsounds here. Double check these.
   Fixed

Easy

1. Just double check to see if the spacing is consistent, like Normal.
   Not 100% sure if i fixed all of it

BetaStar wrote:

From my mod queue

• 
  Easy
  Since, there is a lot of modding on this, I would just point out on aesthetics over rhythms.

1. 00:12:471 (1,2) - Blanketing would work nicely and adds nice touch to overall "polished-ness." Basically the slider curve has equal radius from other objects.
   That's what i aimed for to begin with but made it look better since you pointed it out
2. 00:29:201 (3,4) - Same thing as above http://puu.sh/lew83/ae8021aad2.jpg
   Confused on what you want me to do here
3. 01:04:971 (5,1) - Same sounding rhythm as: 00:56:317 (1,2) - & 01:00:932 (1,2) - , but different slider patterns. I would strongly recommend being
   Attempted to make it similar
   
   Please check this out. Ctrl+Shift+A:
   
   I don't get this when i check aimod?

• 
  Normal

1. 00:36:990 (5) - Flow isn't good for this slider. It's moving towards complete opposite direction than next object. Try making that slider face to the next upcoming object for nicer flow. I like nicer flow rather than good aesthetics for Easy & Normal.
   Tried not sure if it's the best solution tho
2. 00:41:028 (3) - Looks weird while one before 00:40:451 (2) - is more asymmetric... Especially when you did it here asymmetric 01:03:240 (3,4) -
   Fixed

• 
  Hard

1. 00:04:971 (1) - Make this face to the next slider for easy reading
2. 00:06:125 (1) - ^
3. 00:09:586 (1) - ^
   Made some changes but not all
4. 00:08:432 (2,3) - Blanket can be better
   Changed
5. 00:23:432 (6,1,2) - Feels quite empty here. You should try other rhythms.
   Made some fixes
6. 00:33:817 (2,3) - Fix flow
   Not 100% sure if i fixed what you wanted
7. 00:36:125 (4,5) - Don't stack. It doesn't fit very well. I would do something like this http://puu.sh/lexnt/009e2c86c3.jpg
   Changed and tbh this layout is pretty cool thanks for introducing it to me
8. 00:42:471 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/lextX/4c1d59343d.jpg Works a bit nicer than slider bent other way and facing other way
   Maybe if other modders point it out as well
9. 00:54:875 (4) - Make this into a slider. It's nicer.
   Cut the whole sequence and made into a spinner instead
10. 01:00:355 (1,2) - Make it face next object like 01:01:509 (1,2) - .
    Changed

Nice map, good luck!

Little wrote:

From my queue. Sorry Kibbleru is a loser.
It's alright

[General]

1. I'm not sure about the timing at the end... The piano and bells play separately, so I recommend choosing only one of them to map, and set the timing based on that.
   Will work on a solution
2. Combo usage could be improved. Try to get your combos starting on downbeats.
   Made some changes

[Easy]

1. 00:12:471 (1,2) - Just for aesthetic, try to keep their edges a bit further apart: http://puu.sh/jcCDh/0c9762197d.jpg
   Couldn't open link since i've been away for too long
2. 00:43:048 (2) - The sharp curve of this slider will confuse beginner players. Please try to straighten it a bit so the direction is more obvious. My recommendation: http://puu.sh/jcCKN/8e4fbba231.jpg
   I made changes but again can't use your example cuz the link is broken
3. 00:51:701 (6) - Clap on end.
   Added
4. 00:56:317 (1) - Clap on end?
   Added
5. 00:57:471 (2,3,4) - Flow is quite awkward here. It doesn't play smoothly. I suggest changing the direction of (3) like so: http://puu.sh/jcCRJ/4cd7ed0381.jpg Making (2) and (4) the same shape might look nicer too.
   Made changes link is broken can't make use of example
6. 01:04:971 (5) - Should have a clap on head to match your hitsound pattern.
   Added
7. 01:19:971 (2,3,1) - The flow here feels unnatural because the curve of (1) does not follow from the movement of (2,3). Try this for better flow: http://puu.sh/jcDbZ/6a1906cd03.jpg
   Made changes but could not follow your example sorry

[Normal]

1. 00:03:528 (3) - Hard for the player to anticipate. I recommend doing this instead: http://puu.sh/jcDsq/7524ab1f05.jpg
   I think it's better now
2. 00:06:990 (4) - Unnecessary overmapping. It would be best to keep the rhythm simpler in this relatively calm section of the song.
   Changed pattern
3. 00:31:509 (2) - I recommend spitting this up. It's hard for players at the target level to read this.
   I'll consider it
4. 01:22:566 (1,2) - Refrain from using circles where the player can't predict the speed.
   Alright
5. The map is a bit plain due to excessive use of straight 1/2 beat sliders.
   Did a lot of changes since i returned added a lot of curves and blankets

[Hard]

1. 00:36:125 (4,5,6) - The overmapped slider ends don't go well with the music. I recommend shortening the sliders by 1/4 beat.
   Another modder recommended me an different pattern and it looks really good so i went with that
2. 01:09:586 - I think it would be nice to put something on this beat to highlight the significant drum beat in the music.
   Added
3. 01:19:971 (3) - I think it would show the beat emphasis better if you split this into two 1/4 beat sliders and added a circle on the following beat.
   Fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:00:644 (2) - I don't think the slider does a good job of emphasizing the downbeat here. It would probably be better to change the rhythm to place a click on the downbeat.
2. 00:03:240 (3,4) - Avoid adding extra beats where there are none in the music. They feel out of place.
3. 00:13:336 (1,2,1) - Flow is a bit rough. Try curving (2) to allow for smoother cursor movement.
4. 00:22:711 (5,1) - The sudden increase in distance doesn't make sense. I think you should keep it consistent with the stream.
5. 01:20:548 - Feels really empty here. Add a circle?
6. The map feels messy and unstructured because it lacks visual patterns.

I'm very sorry having you mod insane and not making use of your advice. I felt that insane was too hard for a newbie mapper like me so i removed from the diff set

The maps seem technically okay, but lack the structure and polish to meet the ranking quality standards. Keep working to make the maps neater!

Yahuri wrote:

From my queue~

General
-For future reference I think you should use a faster slider velocity. The sliders are really short and it doesn't look as nice as it could be (especially for Normal). Also, try different slider shapes other than Vs, curves, and straights. I think waves would make a nice addition for this song.

Normal
-Some of the NCs look pretty disconnected (flow-wise) from the previous combos.
Yeah noticed that not sure on how to fix it

00:08:721 (3,1,2,3) - I think this would look nicer if you blanket the slider around 1
Fixed

00:21:701 (1,2,1) - good spot for blanket
Fixed

00:27:759 (4,1) - curve slider down so that it flows better into 1
Fixed

00:30:644 (1,2) - make a copy of 1 then flip/rotate it
Fixed

00:31:509 (2,3,4) - watch DS, turn off grid snap (I recommend not using grid snap unless you need perfect symmetry and DS wont be noticeable)
I'll do that next time i make a map, I have to ds the whole map again if i turn it off and i really don't want to do it

00:34:394 (1,2) - flow doesn’t look good
Fixed

01:12:471 (2,1,2) - try eliminate overlap
Attempted but too hard

01:20:548 (2,3) - I think it would look better if you curve the slider less so that it flows better
Made (3) blanket (1)

01:21:125 (3,1,2) - I think it would flow better if you move the circles down more
I'll consider it

Hard
00:00:932 (4) - I think this would look better if you moved it to the right and curved up more
Fixed

00:03:528 (2,3) - blanket
Added

00:08:432 (2,3) - improve blanket
Fixed

00:09:586 (1) - how about making the slider face the opposite direction?
Changed

00:15:932 (4) - you can also blanket the spinner
Not 100% sure if what I did is what you were looking for

00:20:259 (2,3) - improve blanket
Fixed

00:22:567 (7,1) - I think this jump is too big
Shorten'd it

00:33:528 (1,2) - blanket
Fixed

00:55:740 (1,3) - I think you should use the 1/4 beat pattern for both of these
I left it as it is because i feel that the 1/2 beat is better (if someone else thinks otherwise as well i'll change it)

Hope this helps, good luck!

1. Timing lines must be consistent in every diffs, please recheck your timing points in RE: Hard.
2. Video is missing in RE: Hard

1. Really not recommend to use AR 0 even it's a slow song, I would suggest to use about 1.5-2.5 for this diff.
2. 00:17:086 (1) - You need to leave at least 4 white ticks(or 2 on low bpm songs) after a spinner to be considered rankable, this is to provide enough recovery time for players. In this case, I suggest using a long sliderart instead of a spinner since the spinner itself is quite short already, like what you did on 00:54:009 (1) .
3. 00:28:625 (1,1) - Would be nice if you can make them pararell completely.
4. 01:05:548 (1,2) - Ctrl+G rhythm? This way a 1/1 repeat slider would match the vocal properly.

1. 00:17:086 (1) - Same as Easy, it's quite risky to leave just 1 tick at this bpm so better use a slider instead.