[Inner Oni]
00:38:239 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - don't you think k ddk d k d fits the pitch a lot more AND flows better?
00:43:039 (36,37,38,39,40,41) - repeat the pattern ^ instead? instead of it being cut off and changed, the one that comes after can change for variety if you want though.
00:45:439 (51) - k, since it's already close to the suggested pattern
01:42:739 (416) - d, so it's like yeaaah d k d then next bar k k d so gangster
02:01:039 (543) - k, for some reason, k here makes the next pattern a lot less tricky on the fingers lol
02:05:839 (588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600,601,602,603,604,605,606,607) - - I noticed that around here you tried to follow the piano melodies here, how about trying this?
Rest looks great! Gonna have to not choke at the 1/6 ;_;
[Ono's Ura Oni]
This looks like a classic Ono map, haha.
01:39:439 (2) -
01:44:239 (1) - i liked the consistent 'd', plays better anyways! keep it!!
02:02:389 (1,2,3) -
02:02:389 (1,2,3) - ddd to emphasize the lower piano tones here?
02:05:539 (1) - d here both fits the faint piano sounds and plays better imo
02:06:439 (1,2,1,2,1) - really feels a bit undermapped here lol
kkkkd kkkkd kkkkd kkkkd kkkkd kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
[Oni]
00:40:639 (15) - it's weird if this one isn't a 'k' too
00:42:439 (25,26,27,28,29,30) - k kkddd?
00:45:364 (44) - kind of a random note, delete?
01:10:189 (218) - k? the k notes usually start at this tick
01:40:189 (365) - shouldn't this note be...
01:42:739 (377) - same reason as inner, and there's a lot of kkd already haha
Rest is great!
[Muzukashii]
01:04:789 () - only part of the kiai without a note, maybe add 'd'?
01:10:789 (154) - or maybe remove this note if you don't want ^
01:49:189 (296,297,298,299) - thisis the only part with 4 notes in this part, maybe change it to be similar to other parts? OR 01:46:939 (287,288,289,290,291) - have this part have a 4 note part too?
There's a lot of big notes which make the map kind of hard, but it makes sense with the spread.
[Futsuu]
For the 4 intro patterns, how about making the first two the same, then then 3rd and 4th the same? This way they only vary twice. Lots of variation is not as recommended in futsuu diffs.
01:12:589 (105) - k? so much kd
01:37:639 (35,40) -
01:42:439 (45,50) -
01:47:239 (55,60) - remove finisher on these, keep the big notes on the onbeats
01:55:489 (73) - delete this note, part's good without it
02:04:639 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110) - how about (K kkd kd k d) instead? that way it's different for the second half of kiai and it helps the pattern so that the big note can stay, but not lose feeling when there's a not right after. Same for 02:07:039 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - and 02:09:439 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128) - of course.
Weird rhythms, but it should be fine.
[Kantan]
00:42:139 (7) - move to 00:42:439 ()?
00:46:939 (13) - to 00:46:939 (13) - etc., I think it's more 'kantan' to have them farther apart.
00:56:539 (25) - delete this if you want to keep the finishers, d K or K d are bad for kantan
I think for the first kiai you will have to ignore rhythms and just go (d k d k k k) or something since the rhythms are too weird :S
01:15:739 (62) - unneeded note
01:15:739 (62) - i'm not gonna point these out, but these d K or K d that aren't on onbeats, remove the finishers, since it's actually hard for new players ;3;.
01:52:939 (120) - don't need this 'd'
Rest looks fine. But yeah, first kiai will need to be mapped way simpler haha. GL with set!