1. Do you have more big bg? 893*600 is too small.

1. SV1.2 is better.
2. 00:47:239 add slider to unify with 00:42:439.
3. 01:55:189 (135,136) These notes are incomprehensible for beginner player. I recommend to consider to delete these.

1. 00:56:539 Try to change to slider in my option.
2. 01:55:039 (205,206,207) These notes follow incomplete the melody. I recommend to consider to delete these or put note to 01:55:639.
3. 01:58:039 Put note here to more follow the melody. I think kkd is better.
4. 02:00:439 -, 02:02:839 -, and other.

1. 00:34:535 (4) I think this note should be moved 1/16 behind. and, 00:34:085 (2) move 1/16 front.
   
2. 01:58:039 -, 02:00:439 -, etc. put note here. similar reasons as Futsuu.

1. 00:34:085 (2,4) same as Muzukashii.
2. 02:04:264 (530,531) Finish. same as 02:13:639 (611,612,613).

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi.
[ General]

1. Do you have more big bg? 893*600 is too small.

Changed :3! I enlarged the BG, is that fine XD?
[ Kantan]

1. SV1.2 is better. Changed :3!
2. 00:47:239 add slider to unify with 00:42:439. Changed :3!
3. 01:55:189 (135,136) These notes are incomprehensible for beginner player. I recommend to consider to delete these. Changed :3! Deleted 136!

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:56:539 Try to change to slider in my option. Unchanged, not quite sure what you mean ;w;
2. 01:55:039 (205,206,207) These notes follow incomplete the melody. I recommend to consider to delete these or put note to 01:55:639. Changed :3! Deleted 205
3. 01:58:039 Put note here to more follow the melody. I think kkd is better. Changed :3! I struggle on this one a bit because I was worrying that it might be too hard for futsuu:P
4. 02:00:439 -, 02:02:839 -, and other.

Changed :3!
[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:34:535 (4) I think this note should be moved 1/16 behind. and, 00:34:085 (2) move 1/16 front. Changed :3! wow very detailed on this one
   
2. 01:58:039 -, 02:00:439 -, etc. put note here. similar reasons as Futsuu.

Changed :3! I did k d k this time just to have something different :3!
[ Oni]

1. 00:34:085 (2,4) same as Muzukashii. Changed :3!
2. 02:04:264 (530,531) Finish. same as 02:13:639 (611,612,613).

Changed :3!
Good luck.

mrdumpling64 wrote:

RIP 69 priority ;w;

xtrem3x wrote:

Mod request via ...Queue

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General:


Don: d
Kat: k
Big don: D
Big kat: K

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Kantan:

01:55:189 - Move to 01:55:039 Changed :3!

01:55:639 - k Changed :3!

02:01:639 - Change to d Changed :3!

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Futsuu:

01:13:639 - Change to k and ... Changed :3!
01:13:789 - d (for repeat previous sequence) Changed :3!

01:55:189 - Move to 01:55:039- and Change to K Changed :3!

02:01:639 - Change to d (broken sequence) Changed :3!

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Muzukashii:

01:40:564 - Change to D (missing Big notes) (?) Changed :3!
01:45:440 - same Changed :3!

02:04:264 - Change to K (consistent with oni) (?) Changed :3!
02:04:489 - same Changed :3!

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Oni:

GOOD

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Ono's Ura:

Notes: 2nd kiai time is nessesary??


01:16:114 & 01:16:339 - Change to k (more harder in this part is good) (?)

01:54:439 - this -> for this -> (for sequence high sounds in this part)

01:57:964 - Change to d (variety) (?)
02:02:764 - same
02:07:639 - same

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Inner:

GOOD

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xtrem3x wrote:

SPOILER

Ono's Ura:

Notes: 2nd kiai time is nessesary?? Yes, want to emphasize this part more.


01:16:114 & 01:16:339 - Change to k (more harder in this part is good) (?) I think the way it works now is already good enough. Consistent don-kat use.

01:54:439 - this -> for this -> (for sequence high sounds in this part) Ah, I undertsnad the idea. But actually it would be dkkdkkdkk if I'm not wrong, butto have a consistent d k d k d afterwards I used the d at the end of the 1/4 stream. But I will think about it one more time.

01:57:964 - Change to d (variety) (?) Would be rather inconsistent compared to how I used the dons in this part.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Inner Oni]
00:38:239 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - don't you think k ddk d k d fits the pitch a lot more AND flows better? Fixed :3!
00:43:039 (36,37,38,39,40,41) - repeat the pattern ^ instead? instead of it being cut off and changed, the one that comes after can change for variety if you want though. Fixed :3!
00:45:439 (51) - k, since it's already close to the suggested pattern Fixed :3!
01:42:739 (416) - d, so it's like yeaaah d k d then next bar k k d so gangster Fixed :3!
02:01:039 (543) - k, for some reason, k here makes the next pattern a lot less tricky on the fingers lol Fixed :3!
02:05:839 (588,589,590,591,592,593,594,595,596,597,598,599,600,601,602,603,604,605,606,607) - - I noticed that around here you tried to follow the piano melodies here, how about trying this? Fixed :3!


Rest looks great! Gonna have to not choke at the 1/6 ;_; HT is always available for you :333.

[Oni]
00:40:639 (15) - it's weird if this one isn't a 'k' too Fixed :3!
00:42:439 (25,26,27,28,29,30) - k kkddd? Unchanged, it sounds a bit weird since here is low pitched ;w;
00:45:364 (44) - kind of a random note, delete? Fixed :3!
01:10:189 (218) - k? the k notes usually start at this tick Fixed :3!
01:40:189 (365) - shouldn't this note be... Removed :3!
01:42:739 (377) - same reason as inner, and there's a lot of kkd already haha Changed to d :3!

Rest is great!
[Muzukashii]
01:04:789 () - only part of the kiai without a note, maybe add 'd'? Fixed :3!
01:10:789 (154) - or maybe remove this note if you don't want ^ ^
01:49:189 (296,297,298,299) - thisis the only part with 4 notes in this part, maybe change it to be similar to other parts? OR 01:46:939 (287,288,289,290,291) - have this part have a 4 note part too? Fixed :3! Chose the first option and removed a d

There's a lot of big notes which make the map kind of hard, but it makes sense with the spread. Big note iz luv, big note iz lyfe
[Futsuu]
For the 4 intro patterns, how about making the first two the same, then then 3rd and 4th the same? This way they only vary twice. Lots of variation is not as recommended in futsuu diffs.
01:12:589 (105) - k? so much kd Fixed :3!
01:37:639 (35,40) - Fixed :3!
01:42:439 (45,50) - Fixed :3!
01:47:239 (55,60) - remove finisher on these, keep the big notes on the onbeats Fixed :3!
01:55:489 (73) - delete this note, part's good without it Fixed :3!
02:04:639 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110) - how about (K kkd kd k d) instead? that way it's different for the second half of kiai and it helps the pattern so that the big note can stay, but not lose feeling when there's a not right after. Same for 02:07:039 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119) - and 02:09:439 (120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128) - of course. Unchanged, sorry, I didn't get it ;w;w;w;w;w;

Weird rhythms, but it should be fine.
[Kantan]
00:42:139 (7) - move to 00:42:439 ()? Fixed :3!
00:46:939 (13) - to 00:46:939 (13) - etc., I think it's more 'kantan' to have them farther apart. Fixed :3!
00:56:539 (25) - delete this if you want to keep the finishers, d K or K d are bad for kantan
I think for the first kiai you will have to ignore rhythms and just go (d k d k k k) or something since the rhythms are too weird :S Fixed :3!
01:15:739 (62) - unneeded note Fixed :3!
01:15:739 (62) - i'm not gonna point these out, but these d K or K d that aren't on onbeats, remove the finishers, since it's actually hard for new players ;3;. Fixed :3!
01:52:939 (120) - don't need this 'd'

Rest looks fine. But yeah, first kiai will need to be mapped way simpler haha. GL with set!

1. HP should be a lot higher (6+) for obvious reasons
   
2. Lots (and more lots) of useless green lines, delete them all unless they're kiai or volume change
   
3. I personally found the rhythm you use quite good, however you should try to avoid mapping offbeats in Kantan and stick to the main rhythm (which will make giving suggestions to this map useless, since it'd need an entire remap). IDK about this, let the BNs and QAT decide

1. OD4 is a bit high for a futsuu I think, try OD3,5 or even OD3
   
2. SV1.2 would be a better idea for a map of this BPM
   
   This diff is quite neat C:

1. Remove these useless green lines

1. All I can think of is to make the SV change at the end of the first kiai a bit less abrupt, it might cause reading problems (TL;DR: use more green lines and less spacing between SV multipliers)

1. That ninja note at the beginning... well it could be worse, could be at the end :^)
   
2. 01:56:539 (3,4,5,6) - I think it'd sound better as kdkd
   
3. 01:58:939 (3,4,5,6) - kdkk sounds way better I think
   
   There are several 1/3s at this kiai, my suggestion is the same for all of them (if they match the sound of the parts I gave you last 2 suggestions)
   
   Modding an Ono's diff is like trying to teach physics to Einstein

Raiden wrote:

Sup Sandy C: a m4m (I guess?)

[ General]

It's gud


[ Kantan]

1. HP should be a lot higher (6+) for obvious reasons Fixed :3! HP changed to 6
   
2. Lots (and more lots) of useless green lines, delete them all unless they're kiai or volume change Removed :3!
   
3. I personally found the rhythm you use quite good, however you should try to avoid mapping offbeats in Kantan and stick to the main rhythm (which will make giving suggestions to this map useless, since it'd need an entire remap). IDK about this, let the BNs and QAT decide I see why this might have been a problem, and I know this is way too hard for a kantan lol (same for futsuu). Removed some notes :3!

[ Futsuu]

1. OD4 is a bit high for a futsuu I think, try OD3,5 or even OD3 Unchanged ;w;. Following Dumpling-kun's suggestion
   
2. SV1.2 would be a better idea for a map of this BPM Changed :3! Agreed
   
   This diff is quite neat C: Thanks ><!

[ Muzukashii]

1. Remove these useless green lines Removed :3!

Map is already very polished - can't think of anything to suggest. I testplayed several times and it all seems okay to me Thanks again ><!


[ Oni]

1. All I can think of is to make the SV change at the end of the first kiai a bit less abrupt, it might cause reading problems (TL;DR: use more green lines and less spacing between SV multipliers) Unchanged ;w;. Personally I think those sv changes has been nerfed so well that I almost couldn't tell speeding up lol. Also it's the end and it's oni, so whateve XD.

[ Inner Oni]

I honestly don't really feel like I can suggest anything in here (those 1/6 tho), other than the SV changes being a bit too harsh at some points Same comment as oni. I miss the old eye raping sv changes qwq....

Modding an Ono's diff is like trying to teach physics to Einstein lmfao, this message is approved by me.


Sorry for not being too useful, the map is already very polished and I doubt I can really find any faults on it soo.. The mods are useful ! And ty again again ><!

Feel free to not kd *Passes the kd*

OzzyOzrock wrote:

SPOILER

[Ono's Ura Oni]
This looks like a classic Ono map, haha.
01:39:439 (2) -
01:44:239 (1) - i liked the consistent 'd', plays better anyways! keep it!! I will think about this. Probably plays better, but did it in tentionally to have variation in the don beat.
02:02:389 (1,2,3) -
02:02:389 (1,2,3) - ddd to emphasize the lower piano tones here? This could draw too much attention since ddd is pretty strong compared to the heavy kat use here and the dons which work as beat support.
02:05:539 (1) - d here both fits the faint piano sounds and plays better imo You are right. Forgot to place it here.
02:06:439 (1,2,1,2,1) - really feels a bit undermapped here lol I think you are right about this. Will make a change soon.

kkkkd kkkkd kkkkd kkkkd kkkkd kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

Raiden wrote:

SPOILER

[ Ono's Ura Oni]

1. That ninja note at the beginning... well it could be worse, could be at the end :^)
   
2. 01:56:539 (3,4,5,6) - I think it'd sound better as kdkd Since I use kats to fill the 1/3 and 1/4 in the map and use don only as beat supporting note, I would not make any change here. Else, idea is good.
   
3. 01:58:939 (3,4,5,6) - kdkk sounds way better I think ^
   
   There are several 1/3s at this kiai, my suggestion is the same for all of them (if they match the sound of the parts I gave you last 2 suggestions)
   
   Modding an Ono's diff is like trying to teach physics to Einstein lol

OnosakiHito wrote:

Hm. It would be good if you could add my name into the TAGs. I actually never see when updates happen. So I forget sometimes to check the map.

_Gezo_ wrote:

meep

[Kantan]
You have restless sections that could have more breaks, or densities that go higher than the music could carry.
Examples: 00:42:439 (7) - 00:47:239 (13) - could be deleted (the second one bring a higher impact on the next big note) Changed :3! Removed
01:26:239 (71,72,73,74,75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - That section should be rearranged a bit; Futsuu is the literal same. Changed :3! Removed from more notes

I wouldn't really be too much on long 3/2 patterns in the gogo sections for now due to the SR possibly going too high thus surpassing the maximal 2.0 stars limit. Ayyy lmao, I did it 1.97stars

[Futsuu]
y u have green line on first timing Because I can BISH, YOU DON"T TELL ME WAT TO DO KAY?I mean, sorry I removed it. It was because it used to have sv change and other modders killed it and this is what I was left with ;w;.
01:57:439 (78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - These feel a bit hard for a 200 BPM futsuu. Also, double notes probably should be bicolor when really needed. Changed :3! All changed to either all k or d

[Muzukashii]
null \:D/~

[Oni]
More baka greenlines at the beginning Yeh, removed ;w;..., and the 1.01x honestly feels useless (you barely change anything for a long period of time)Yep, it used to be +0.02x, but modders be like "no no no no no, that's too op and unreadable" so I had to remove them. Recommending OD6, but if you wish to keep a steady increase, you can keep 5. Fuck patterns, changing to OD6 because I would like to see more 1 x 100 on my ranking board lol
01:16:639 - You could change that to a flat 1.00x for a smoother transition. Changed :3! Indeed

01:26:039 - to Kiai time: I think it's better to refine this section a bit regarding SV changes. The transition between prekiai and kiai does not go well with the song and plays really awkward. Yeah ik ;w; This part of the song really is hard to map and I had to make shit patterns to make it look different. But anyway, improved it by a lot :3~

[Inner]
still baka green lines but gud Removed XD. Increase OD, OD5 and 300 1/4 do not go along well at all, notelocking will be really present. I personally recommend 7. Hohohohohoho Changed :3! OD7 MADAFAKAS. If Japanese DT FC this, then idek.


Tip: If you wish to reset the barlines speed, just use one at 1.00x. Don't need to change the speed in a progressive way if there are no notes! Ik this ;w;! Reason stated abovethis isnt stepmanias XDDDD It would look badass tho

OnosakiHito wrote:

No change in my Ura Oni. x4 is fine and easy to play. Fits perfectly to the sound. And OD 5 seems to be fine as well. At least for me.
I just did a little pattern change at 02:06:139 (1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3) - as I forgot to change it before.

http://puu.sh/kddj8/e70bf3031e.7z

Thanks!

Raiden wrote:

hi hi

no kd KD for you, u wot m8

[ General]

• AiMod

1. good
   Audio
2. Fix the volume throughout all difficulties. Inner Oni has 80% while the rest have 70% (and Ono has 100%). Make Inner 70% would be the easiest to do　Changed :3! Changed Inner to 70%. Awaiting for Ono to change his diff
   Background
3. both correct resolutions
   Inconsistencies
4. none
   Folder
5. neat

[ Kantan]

• Difficulty settings

1. okay
   Hitsounding and patterning
2. 01:55:939 (116) - Finisher? has strong kick
3. 02:10:639 (147) - Finisher? cymbal crash here
4. 02:11:839 (150,151,152,153) - Same to all 4
   All changed :3! Actually, before it was meant to be like that, but a lot of mods suggested that it would make kantan "too hard".
   Structure and spread
5. looks fine, the nature of the song calls for 3/2 rhythm and star rating is broken, no complaints YAY SOMEONE UNDERSTANDS <3
   Overall personal opinion
6. good

[ Futsuu]

• Difficulty settings

1. SV1.4? I think it is more appropiate due to the natural 3/2 rhythm which can cluster notes together a bit too much Changed :3! Agreed
   Hitsounding and patterning
2. looks well differentiated from Kantan
   Structure and spread
3. 00:56:839 - add a d here? the kick sounds a bit weird when it stands alone xD Changed :3! Actually, same reason as kantan ;w;...
   Overall personal opinion
4. fine

[ Muzukashii]

• Difficulty settings

1. OD4,5? to differentiate from Futsuu Unchanged ;w;! Mhm? The OD was already at 4 though?
   Hitsounding and patterning
2. good good
   Structure and spread
3. 02:03:364 (371) - i think you can safely delete this, two 1/4s in a row might choke players Changed :3! Choking players to death was a great idea tho
4. 02:11:314 (417) - move to 02:11:014 - and change to k? i think it would be quite more consistent considering what you've done in 02:06:214 (389) - Changed :3! Agreed~
   Overall personal opinion
5. gr8

[ Oni]

• Difficulty settings

1. OD5? Changed :3! God damn it, it was reverted back again
   Hitsounding and patterning
2. fine
   Structure and spread
3. add a green line with 0,93x SV multiplier at 01:26:039 - , the SV change at 01:26:239 - looks too edgy and a bit overlapping imo Changed :3! ~
4. 02:03:439 (521,522,523,524,525,526,527) - longest pattern hmm? you haven't used 7plets in all the song why now? D: Changed :3! Added there for a better twist but I guess it didn't work ;w;...
   Overall personal opinion
5. well patterned

[ Inner Oni]

• Difficulty settings

1. okay (but if you changed to OD5 in Oni, maybe this should be OD6) Changed :3! ~
   Hitsounding and patterning
2. okay
   Structure and spread
3. 01:26:039 - same as Oni, add green line but with 0,85x this time Changed :3! Yep
   Overall personal opinion
4. edgy 1/6s, but justified

Call back Gezo.

I'll be waiting in the shadows.

edit: maybe reverse diff names in Inner and Ura?

like "Ono's Inner Oni" and "Ura Oni" ? Changed too :3!

Raiden wrote:

[ Ono]

• Difficulty settings

1. OD6? even tho OD5 is understandable due to the high amount of 1/3 patterns which can lead to frustrating 100s using OD 6. Better for "OD spread" in this set I guess.
   Hitsounding and patterning
2. 00:52:189 (3,4) - kk? would make a more interesting pattern imo and sounds different from both previous and following notes Good suggestion, as I wanted to use it previously too, but at the end I rather wanted to keep it simple. In this way it is also consistent with previous stream.
   Structure and spread
3. 00:47:239 (20,21,22,23,25,26,27,28) - I don't hear clear 1/6 but I guess you used the background buzzing Exactly.
4. 01:18:439 (1,2,3,4) - I want you to convince me about why you should keep these 1/6s These follow their own structure, put into an consistent beatsnapping. I didn't wanted to only follow the sound in the song, as it could become monotonically, so I thought for something else by myself which lead to this. The use 1/6 of wasn't lead by making this harder, that's why it mostly stands alone with some 1/2 patterns. So in short: It's improvised mapping bounded to the song as it is put into a consistent way by also following the pace.
5. 01:35:839 - Does it really deserve kiai? It's not a must, indeed. Yet, I'm sure it fits here really well in connection with the lower SV. The tone is naturaly already pretty high, which is why it supports the use of the kiai, while lowering the SV prevents this part to be way too much emphasized (though, I also like having slower SV on 1/3 parts). In this way, I can still have some impact at 01:45:439, as the SV is higher and prevent by having no kiai that part 01:56:239 doesn't lose any impact either.
   Overall personal opinion
6. simplicity is beauty. Lovely diff

1. 01:56:239 - kiai should have been toggled here in the Ura Oni, while it's not.
2. Additional to this, I'm sure that volume in most diffs are too quiet. The song is already pretty loud and since the mp3 is loud anyway, 70% appears to be low here.

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Only use the Source field if the song comes from or was made famous by a video game, movie, or series. Website names are not an acceptable Artist nor Source.

_Gezo_ wrote:

je suis suisse

(hope nobody minds this bub

god dammit i wanted to qualify)

OnosakiHito wrote:

Just make sure to have "u.n. owen was her" in the tags before rank. Doesn't need a rebubble for tag stuff. But wait for BN. Else it is a self-pop.

Raiden wrote:

OnosakiHito wrote:

Just make sure to have "u.n. owen was her" in the tags before rank. Doesn't need a rebubble for tag stuff. But wait for BN. Else it is a self-pop.

Add these tags and call me back Sand

_Gezo_ wrote:

je suis suisse

Manimani wrote:

恭喜~然而欠摸到現在