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SEREBRO - MALO TEBYA

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Marmowka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 27 мая 2015 г. at 17:50:51

Artist: SEREBRO
Title: MALO TEBYA
Tags: russian русский -bakari- electronica Серебро Silver Olga Seryabkina Elena Temnikova Dasha Shashina
BPM: 130
Filesize: 4159kb
Play Time: 02:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bakari's Hard (3,08 stars, 369 notes)
  2. Easy (1,59 stars, 174 notes)
  3. Normal (2,22 stars, 227 notes)
Download: SEREBRO - MALO TEBYA
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Огромное спасибо -Bakari- за то, что разрешил взять за основу его творение *о*

Easy by Marmowka
Normal by Marmowka
Hard by Bakari




Gordon123
ну как и обещал,я тута!
[General]
  • 1)поправь зелёные поинты
    2)поставь хитсаунды
    3) измени цвет первого комбо на >
[Easy]

  • 00:31:409 (4) - ну там точка стоит-ты пригни чутка > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3076853
    00:36:486 (9) - сделай софт-клап(там явно слышится этот удар,но всё же что бы приукрасить,сделай)
    00:36:948 (1) - конец слайдера-клап
    00:38:332 (3) - начало слайдера-вхистл
    00:42:025 (7) - клап
    00:42:948 (9) - стакни-а то аиммод ругается чего то
    00:44:794 (1) - тоже клап
    00:45:255 (2) - конец слайдера-вхистл
    00:46:640 (4) - клап
    00:48:486 (2) - ^
    00:51:255 (6) - на начало просто вхистл
    00:52:178 (1) - начало слайдера софт-вхистл
    00:56:794 (6) - клап
    01:01:409 (3) - ^
    01:03:255 (6) - ^
    (дальше не продолжу-так как сам должен слышать где удары,так что сам сделаешь)
    01:47:563 (1) - спин увеличь до 01:49:871 - ибо как я думаю именно там сама развязка песни начинается
    01:50:794 (1) - софт-финиш
    01:52:178 (3) - начало слайдера-софт-вхистл
    01:56:794 (5) - клап
    01:58:640 (1) - ^
    02:03:255 (3) - ^
    (опять же-удары слушай и стави хс)
    на последнем спинере в конце сделай поинт с громкостью 45% ибо софт даёт в конце по ушам
[Normal]

  • 00:24:486 (8) - новое комбо
    00:27:025 - поставь круг(все таки в ритм)
    01:21:255 (1) - убери вхистл-он ну никак не вкладывается в музыку ,ну,если,только на первую часть слайдера ставь вхистл
    01:30:025 (4) - точка там-так подогни чуть-чуть
    01:50:332 - чего круга нет?
[Hard]
  • вроде ни чё так-там конечно пару мест есть которые не понравились,но в общем нормально)я понял что это твоя задумка)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

ладно -доведи и эту до ранка!
Good Luck ;)
amusing_zero
Easy:
в целом всё норм, вот только:
00:35:101 (8) - сложно для изика, думаю
02:17:101 (2,3) - изик же
02:25:871 (2,3) - то же
- Размер нот покрупнее
- Тайминг лучше бы сделать одинаковый
И конечно сделать полегче сделать

Normal:
00:09:717 (4,5,6) - не думаю, что это элементы нормала
00:29:563 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - с дабл таймом я запутался
00:58:640 (3,4,1) - элементы нормала?
01:47:101 (1,2,3) - =)
02:03:717 (1,2,3,4) - здесь нет гридснапа
02:35:563 - 02:40:640 - тут можно спиннер)
С нормалом всё отлично)

Hard:
00:08:563 (4,5) - - такое обязательно ?
00:35:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - настоятельно прошу убрать, это элементы инсейна, а то и больше
00:39:255 (2,3) - (
00:41:563 (3,4,5) - (
00:46:871 (2,3,4) - (
00:53:563 (1,2) - все такие и 01:09:948 (5,1) - такие моменты не в тему что-ли
02:13:871 (2,3,4) и 02:24:948 (3,4,5) - ух
Возможно это такой стиль, вообще, для тех ,кто клацает клавой это думаю нормально, но ПОЖАЛУЙСТА убери 00:35:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12)

Надеюсь, что хоть немного помог :idea: )
Topic Starter
Marmowka
<strong>Gordon123</strong>, Короч , все предложения по поводу флоу я исправил кроме слайдера. Все что касается хс , дал идеи спасибо. Переделаю хсочку и будет все чики брики. :3

Кубик

Gordon123 wrote:

ну как и обещал,я тута!
[General]
  • 1)поправь зелёные поинты
    2)поставь хитсаунды
    3) измени цвет первого комбо на >
[Easy]

  • 00:31:409 (4) - ну там точка стоит-ты пригни чутка > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3076853
    00:36:486 (9) - сделай софт-клап(там явно слышится этот удар,но всё же что бы приукрасить,сделай)
    00:36:948 (1) - конец слайдера-клап
    00:38:332 (3) - начало слайдера-вхистл
    00:42:025 (7) - клап
    00:42:948 (9) - стакни-а то аиммод ругается чего то
    00:44:794 (1) - тоже клап
    00:45:255 (2) - конец слайдера-вхистл
    00:46:640 (4) - клап
    00:48:486 (2) - ^
    00:51:255 (6) - на начало просто вхистл
    00:52:178 (1) - начало слайдера софт-вхистл
    00:56:794 (6) - клап
    01:01:409 (3) - ^
    01:03:255 (6) - ^
    (дальше не продолжу-так как сам должен слышать где удары,так что сам сделаешь)
    01:47:563 (1) - спин увеличь до 01:49:871 - ибо как я думаю именно там сама развязка песни начинается
    01:50:794 (1) - софт-финиш
    01:52:178 (3) - начало слайдера-софт-вхистл
    01:56:794 (5) - клап
    01:58:640 (1) - ^
    02:03:255 (3) - ^
    (опять же-удары слушай и стави хс)
    на последнем спинере в конце сделай поинт с громкостью 45% ибо софт даёт в конце по ушам
[Normal]

  • 00:24:486 (8) - новое комбо
    00:27:025 - поставь круг(все таки в ритм)
    01:21:255 (1) - убери вхистл-он ну никак не вкладывается в музыку ,ну,если,только на первую часть слайдера ставь вхистл
    01:30:025 (4) - точка там-так подогни чуть-чуть
    01:50:332 - чего круга нет?
[Hard]
  • вроде ни чё так-там конечно пару мест есть которые не понравились,но в общем нормально)я понял что это твоя задумка)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

ладно -доведи и эту до ранка!
Good Luck ;)

P.S amusing_zero и тебе спасибо за мод (Взял от туда не много)
Gordon123
01:53:101 (2) - НА НОРМАЛЕ - нафиг там точка? если уж там точка - то гни как берёзу! :)
Topic Starter
Marmowka

Gordon123 wrote:

01:53:101 (2) - НА НОРМАЛЕ - нафиг там точка? если уж там точка - то гни как берёзу! :)
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Rmdy_old
Привет :3
Как и обещал

Глобал
Чекни аимод

Изи
00:37:409 - лишний(?) тайминг поинт
01:50:794 - Почему нельзя поместить в один тайминг поинт?
00:05:101 (6,7) - бланкет
00:10:640 (5) - повернуть на 48-49
00:24:948 (4) - бланкет выглядит немного неровно ._. хотя может мне кажется (наверное зря я придираюсь до такого)
00:36:948 (1,2,3) - тоже поровнее
00:39:717 (4,5) - ^
00:44:794 (1,2) - ^
00:53:101 (2,3) - тоже бланкет херач
01:16:178 (1,2) - неровно
01:24:948 - чу тайминг поинт в брике? ._. хотя это не важно наверное
02:11:563 (8,9) - бланкет
02:33:255 (4,5) - поправить

Нормал
01:50:794 - Почему нельзя поместить в один тайминг поинт?
01:23:332 (5,6) - бланкет кривоват немного
02:34:178 (1,2,3) - повернуть на 10 и поставить в х:251 у:292

Надеюсь тебе поможет мой мод ^^
Русская попса~ мне мало, мало, мало тебя
ZinaMarina
Мимо проходил Я у мамы модер

Общее
В теги добавь что-нибудь типо 'pop' или 'pop-music'. Этожпопса


Изя

  • Спинер 01:47:563 (1) можно же до 01:50:332 продлить, а то больно долго следующего кружка ждать
    Слайдеры в глаза бросились: 02:05:101 (6) До этого момента все округлые были, а этот резкий. Потом снова нормальные. Потом 02:16:178 (1) и 02:30:025 (4) . Не к месту они, имхо.
Нормал

  • 02:17:101 (2,1) - опять эти красавцы. Слайдеры до и после округлые, а эти нет. Так надо?
Хард

  • 00:08:563 (4,5) - Они сознательно так расположены? Можно же их в одну точку пихнуть, зазор как-то неоч выглядит
    00:19:871 (3,1)
    00:23:563 (3,1)
    00:29:101 (5,1)
    01:58:409 (5,1) - аналогичные моменты (их там много)
Удачи, короче. Сделай как надо
Topic Starter
Marmowka
Спасибо , пару вещей годные

Ня

ZinaMarina wrote:

Мимо проходил Я у мамы модер

Общее
В теги добавь что-нибудь типо 'pop' или 'pop-music'. Этожпопса Да да


Изя

  • Спинер 01:47:563 (1) можно же до 01:50:332 продлить, а то больно долго следующего кружка ждать По правилам 4 белых тика, сорян
    Слайдеры в глаза бросились: 02:05:101 (6) До этого момента все округлые были, а этот резкий. Потом снова нормальные. Потом 02:16:178 (1) и 02:30:025 (4) . Не к месту они, имхо. Да, сделал другое флоу
Нормал

  • 02:17:101 (2,1) - опять эти красавцы. Слайдеры до и после округлые, а эти нет. Так надо? Хрю хрю я прибавил кс+1 и тупо перемаппал :D
Хард

  • 00:08:563 (4,5) - Они сознательно так расположены? Можно же их в одну точку пихнуть, зазор как-то неоч выглядит
    00:19:871 (3,1)
    00:23:563 (3,1)
    00:29:101 (5,1)
    01:58:409 (5,1) - аналогичные моменты (их там много) Жду баку :3
Удачи, короче. Сделай как надо
Topic Starter
Marmowka
P.S В моде Rmdy пришлось что то игнорировать (ремап). А так тоже спасибо.

P.S

Rmdy wrote:

Привет :3
Как и обещал

Изи
00:37:409 - лишний(?) тайминг поинт
01:50:794 - Почему нельзя поместить в один тайминг поинт?
00:05:101 (6,7) - бланкет
00:10:640 (5) - повернуть на 48-49
00:24:948 (4) - бланкет выглядит немного неровно ._. хотя может мне кажется (наверное зря я придираюсь до такого)
00:36:948 (1,2,3) - тоже поровнее
00:39:717 (4,5) - ^
00:44:794 (1,2) - ^
00:53:101 (2,3) - тоже бланкет херач
01:16:178 (1,2) - неровно
01:24:948 - чу тайминг поинт в брике? ._. хотя это не важно наверное
02:11:563 (8,9) - бланкет
02:33:255 (4,5) - поправить

Нормал
01:50:794 - Почему нельзя поместить в один тайминг поинт?
01:23:332 (5,6) - бланкет кривоват немного
02:34:178 (1,2,3) - повернуть на 10 и поставить в х:251 у:292

Надеюсь тебе поможет мой мод ^^
Русская попса~ мне мало, мало, мало тебя
riffy
Это же самая сложная дифа в сете, пусть оно остается. Для такого БПМ это вполне приемлемо должно быть. @amusing_zero
осу их все равно анстакнет, поэтому их положение в редакторе особой роли не играет. Пусть лучше будут так, хоть выглядит красивее @ZinaMarina

Спасибо за моды!
Darkxell_mc
Hey. Amazing song and very well mapped.
I'm lovin'it! ^^ (sorry about that bad joke...)

EASY

Some of your Inherited timing points are 1ms-2ms too soon, generating a warning in AImod. Even if you don't have to fix it, it makes the map feel even more polished for modders I guess ^^'

Also sorry but... I think the slider velocity is too high when it's 0.8*1.5 for an Easy diff. At least the transition from 0.8 to 1.2 is way too strong for beginners. After the first Kiai time it feels more like a Normal diff than an Easy one.
As exemple, 01:45:255 is not at all the same difficulty as 01:54:948 . Kiai time or not, I think that's a bit too much for someone who never played before.
Well I guess that's a Hard easy diff. (^^')

01:47:563 (1) - Maybe extend that spinner to 01:49:871 ? I feel that this is not disorienting for the player because of the loud beat at 01:50:332 before the next note, and it I feel like doing nothing for 4 beats is a bit too much. Not a big deal though.

01:50:794 - As said before, that transition is hard for a beginner. he get's used to 0.8 SV for one minute, and you put him in 1.2 SV after a spinner and a pause, making the beginner even less able to handle it.
Perhaps you should do a soft transition in SV at the begining of the Kiai time?

02:11:101 (7) - Move this note to x384 y176? I feel like the stacking of the note on the slider is hard to read for someone who never played even once.

Good difficulty anyways ^^

NORMAL

You have a few unsnapped objects, open AImod.

00:01:409 (3) - Change this to a 0.5beat slider?

00:07:640 - place a note here to fit the vocals?

00:09:255 (3) - Move this to 00:09:025 ? Also will feel a lot better in taiko.
Also add a not here 00:09:486 if you do it I guess.

00:26:101 (3) - This note doesn't make sense to me. Doesn't fit either the vocals or a beat, please remove.
This is actually a blank in the vocals, you should do a blank in your map too.

That's pretty slight, but I feel like the vocals release a bit at 00:47:678. Makes 00:47:101 (5,6) this transition pretty hard, as you tend to press the (6) slider too soon. I know this is a rare case, but you should move 00:47:794 (6) to 00:47:736 (1/8 of a beat before.) Try it, you'll see ^^

01:35:794 (8) - Remove this? THis is unexpected for the player, and a bit confusing in a Normal.

01:37:640 - Needs something here?
01:39:486 - same ^

02:35:101 (3) - Maybe remove? If you feel like doing it. Really, I'm not sure, but the slider probably should start where the not is.

Also a good diff... Preferred the easy one for once though ^^'

HARD

Same as before, some unsnaped objects and timing, please fix.

01:21:717 (3) - Special mention for that slider. Like the pattern, as simple as it is ^^'

Well I didn't find anything bad sorry :/ I guess that's actually a good thing, gratz ^^
Topic Starter
Marmowka
Thank you for mod , good mod.
O:

Darkxell_mc wrote:

Hey. Amazing song and very well mapped.
I'm lovin'it! ^^ (sorry about that bad joke...)

EASY

Some of your Inherited timing points are 1ms-2ms too soon, generating a warning in AImod. Even if you don't have to fix it, it makes the map feel even more polished for modders I guess ^^' Fixed

Also sorry but... I think the slider velocity is too high when it's 0.8*1.5 for an Easy diff. At least the transition from 0.8 to 1.2 is way too strong for beginners. After the first Kiai time it feels more like a Normal diff than an Easy one.
As exemple, 01:45:255 is not at all the same difficulty as 01:54:948 . Kiai time or not, I think that's a bit too much for someone who never played before.
Well I guess that's a Hard easy diff. (^^') Fixed

01:47:563 (1) - Maybe extend that spinner to 01:49:871 ? I feel that this is not disorienting for the player because of the loud beat at 01:50:332 before the next note, and it I feel like doing nothing for 4 beats is a bit too much. Not a big deal though. Fixed

01:50:794 - As said before, that transition is hard for a beginner. he get's used to 0.8 SV for one minute, and you put him in 1.2 SV after a spinner and a pause, making the beginner even less able to handle it.
Perhaps you should do a soft transition in SV at the begining of the Kiai time?

02:11:101 (7) - Move this note to x384 y176? I feel like the stacking of the note on the slider is hard to read for someone who never played even once. Fixed

Good difficulty anyways ^^

NORMAL

You have a few unsnapped objects, open AImod.

00:01:409 (3) - Change this to a 0.5beat slider? Fixed

00:07:640 - place a note here to fit the vocals? Fixed

00:09:255 (3) - Move this to 00:09:025 ? Also will feel a lot better in taiko.
Also add a not here 00:09:486 if you do it I guess. Fixed

00:26:101 (3) - This note doesn't make sense to me. Doesn't fit either the vocals or a beat, please remove.
This is actually a blank in the vocals, you should do a blank in your map too. Fixed

That's pretty slight, but I feel like the vocals release a bit at 00:47:678. Makes 00:47:101 (5,6) this transition pretty hard, as you tend to press the (6) slider too soon. I know this is a rare case, but you should move 00:47:794 (6) to 00:47:736 (1/8 of a beat before.) Try it, you'll see ^^ Fixed

01:35:794 (8) - Remove this? THis is unexpected for the player, and a bit confusing in a Normal. Fixed

01:37:640 - Needs something here? Fixed
01:39:486 - same ^ Fixed

02:35:101 (3) - Maybe remove? If you feel like doing it. Really, I'm not sure, but the slider probably should start where the not is. Fixed

Also a good diff... Preferred the easy one for once though ^^'

HARD

Same as before, some unsnaped objects and timing, please fix.

01:21:717 (3) - Special mention for that slider. Like the pattern, as simple as it is ^^'

Well I didn't find anything bad sorry :/ I guess that's actually a good thing, gratz ^^
riffy
Thanks for the mod. Host mapper will take care of snapping
Пофикси там @Marmowka
Darkxell_mc
WOW! So you did the whole kiai times in easy again! Impressive! ^^
Also you did change a lot the normal one too isn't it?

Just saying : Some of your kiai times are still unsnapped (maybe you just didn't publish yet)

NORMAL

01:37:409 (2) - This note is not on top of the stack, feel like it should be.
Topic Starter
Marmowka

Darkxell_mc wrote:

WOW! So you did the whole kiai times in easy again! Impressive! ^^
Also you did change a lot the normal one too isn't it?

Just saying : Some of your kiai times are still unsnapped (maybe you just didn't publish yet)

NORMAL

01:37:409 (2) - This note is not on top of the stack, feel like it should be. F-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-f-ff--f-ff-f-f-f-f-f-f-ff--ff-f--f-fixed
Mortem
hi.

General:
Consider fixing these unsnapped kiais and also there is a conflict with AudioLeadIn.
Also I can see some inconsistency in some NCs. For example the kiai part.
I don't quite understand, why did you left part 01:06:486 - In Normal unmapped but you mapped in Easy. It will be good if you could map it.

Easy:
00:19:409 (2,3) - How about this?
01:37:409 (2,3) - You should blanket it little bit better.
01:41:101 (2,3) - ^
02:08:332 (3) - Place it on x:471; y:241
02:29:563 (3,1) - You could stack these two.

Normal:
00:11:794 - I miss a note here. Add one here please.
00:30:948 (4,4) - Not stacked properly.
00:42:025 (1,2,3) - Fix blanket.
01:42:948 (5,2) - Not stacked properly.
01:47:794 (2,3) - Place these on x:292 y:74
01:48:948 (5,6,7,8) - Not symetrical.
02:35:101 (1) - Place a note here and move a spinner at 02:35:332 or 02:35:563

Bakari's Hard:
00:06:486 (3,2) - Not stacked properly.
00:39:601 (3) - Remove clap from the end of the slider.
02:32:563 (2) - Fits better imo.

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Marmowka
Fixed everything , but
02:32:563 (2) - Fits better imo.

Thank you helpful mod.

MegaBox

Pjecoo wrote:

hi.

General:
Consider fixing these unsnapped kiais and also there is a conflict with AudioLeadIn.
Also I can see some inconsistency in some NCs. For example the kiai part.
I don't quite understand, why did you left part 01:06:486 - In Normal unmapped but you mapped in Easy. It will be good if you could map it.

Easy:
00:19:409 (2,3) - How about this?
01:37:409 (2,3) - You should blanket it little bit better.
01:41:101 (2,3) - ^
02:08:332 (3) - Place it on x:471; y:241
02:29:563 (3,1) - You could stack these two.

Normal:
00:11:794 - I miss a note here. Add one here please.
00:30:948 (4,4) - Not stacked properly.
00:42:025 (1,2,3) - Fix blanket.
01:42:948 (5,2) - Not stacked properly.
01:47:794 (2,3) - Place these on x:292 y:74
01:48:948 (5,6,7,8) - Not symetrical.
02:35:101 (1) - Place a note here and move a spinner at 02:35:332 or 02:35:563

Bakari's Hard:
00:06:486 (3,2) - Not stacked properly.
00:39:601 (3) - Remove clap from the end of the slider.
02:32:563 (2) - Fits better imo.

Good Luck!
Sieg
tebya с большой буквы

дистанс снап на нормале местами не очень, проверь все и подправь

на изи 02:06:948 (2,3) - такого быть не должно
00:35:101 (8) - ^
02:18:025 (4,6) - ^
дистанс снап на изи возможно тоже местами не очень, проверь все и подправь

спиннер в конце озвучьте как-то более привлекательно, потому что вот на нормале просто хит-нормал звучит дико в конце

ну и бг отстойное

а так все отлично, зовите как-нибудь
Topic Starter
Marmowka
@<strong>Sieg</strong>: Эй :< Бг няша же :(
Topic Starter
Marmowka
@<strong>Sieg</strong>: Вообщем, все исправил.
В изи убрал стаки те на которые ты дал акцент.
Так же поправил дистанцию на своих диффах
В конце же решил поставить софт-финиш (он вписался :3)

БГ НЕ ГОВНО, БОЙКОТ11111

Воть

Sieg wrote:

tebya с большой буквы

дистанс снап на нормале местами не очень, проверь все и подправь

на изи 02:06:948 (2,3) - такого быть не должно
00:35:101 (8) - ^
02:18:025 (4,6) - ^
дистанс снап на изи возможно тоже местами не очень, проверь все и подправь

спиннер в конце озвучьте как-то более привлекательно, потому что вот на нормале просто хит-нормал звучит дико в конце

ну и бг отстойное

а так все отлично, зовите как-нибудь
Sieg
http://puu.sh/hSR6C/f3b6764799.jpg
в названии все с большой
Topic Starter
Marmowka
Угу сделано
Krfawy
ОМайГаaaаааааааааааааааaaaaаaa-Серебро бичес о3о Позови меня когда кто-нибудь забабли мапсет \w/
Topic Starter
Marmowka
@<strong>Krfawy</strong>: Хорошо :33333
Snaggletooth
Mod as requested. Late mod as requested. Sorry ~

  1. Silence the spinner-ends on the end of Normal and Easy

[Easy]
  1. Rhythmical Issues:
    1. 00:01:409 (2) - I suggest you to keep a simple 1/1 rhythm here. There isn't really a reason to
      have this repeatslider. the guitar gets ignored anyways 90% of the time for simplicity reasons +
      the base-line is only on 00:01:409 - 00:01:871 . You should map this with two circles or a 1/1 slider.
  2. Cosmetical Issues:
    1. 00:03:717 (4) - NC this to keep to Combos short for Easy
    2. 00:33:255 (6) - ^
    3. 00:41:101 (6) - ^
    4. 01:56:794 (5) - ^
    5. 02:24:025 (6,1) - Swap NC to match the upbeat

[Normal]
  1. Rhythmical Issues:
    1. 00:16:178 (2) - This personally bothers me. The Vocals stretch over a 1/1 beat which should
      be emphasized. This would also help a bit with simplicity. I'd really love to see a pattern like you did on
      00:19:409 (1,2,3)
    2. 00:17:794 (4,5) - Similar as above, we have vocals that stretch over a 1/1 beat starting on 00:18:025
      I suggest you to use a diffrent rhythm here to make it play out a lot nicer and more harmonic with the song.


  2. Cosmetical Issues:
    1. 00:09:486 (4) - I suggest you NC this for the simple reason to keep it a tad bit more readable. it
      could get confusing since (5) is rigth inbetween (4,3) which can lead to confusing while clicking.
    2. 00:22:178 (6) - NC to keep the Combos short on easier diffs.
    3. 00:26:332 (3) - You can either NC this or remove NC on 00:24:486 (1) - and add it on
      00:26:332 (6) - for consistency reasons.
    4. 00:34:178 (1) - Remove NC. There isn't really a need to NC here + NC's give player a signifficant boost
      in HP which could render the map too easy.
    5. 00:39:717 (1,2) - Swap NC to fit the musical beat better
    6. 00:47:794 (6,1) - ^
    7. 01:32:794 (5) - NC
    8. 01:48:486 (4) - NC as a new sections starts here (build-up)
    9. 01:50:794 (6,1) - Swap NC - Kiai Beginns here
    10. 01:53:564 (1,2) - Swap NC
    11. 02:01:640 (6,1) - ^
    12. 02:08:333 (1,2) - ^
    13. 02:16:410 (6,1) - ^
    14. 02:20:794 (6,1) - ^
  3. Nazi:
    1. 00:12:025 (4,5) - The sliderankers dont circulate the sliders automatically. Remove the points and
      add them again to get clean round sliders.
    2. 01:31:871 (3) - Move to x:4 y:248 to make a perfect square
    3. 02:27:717 (1) - if my eyes arent shitting me I belive this one goes to x:212 y:196

[Bakari's Hard]
  1. Rhythmical Issues:
    1. 01:26:563 to me personally this should be playable. The vocals here aren't exactly
      'unnoticable' while playing which makes the 1/1 break feel forced and uncomfortable. I used a 1/2
      slider to fill the gap. + NC should be on 01:26:794 (5)
  2. Placement Issues:
    1. 00:36:025 (9,10) - The spacing in the stream isn't entirely equal which lead me to believe there
      would be a rhythmical change here while playing. Try to equalize it ~
  3. Cosmetical Issues:
    1. 00:51:255 (1) - I'm not entirely sure if NC is needed here. I personally would remove it.
    2. 00:59:101 (7,1) - Swap NC for Upbeat
    3. 01:38:794 (1) - To me this should be NC'd. Considering that it is still part of the same pattern while
      01:40:178 (2) - is already a diffrent section with a seperate pattern. In other words swap NC
      on 01:38:794 (1,2) -
Topic Starter
Marmowka
Thanks for the help. All combo correction, I think it is completely ready.


Click

Snaggletooth wrote:

Mod as requested. Late mod as requested. Sorry ~

  1. Silence the spinner-ends on the end of Normal and Easy

[Easy]
  1. Rhythmical Issues:
    1. 00:01:409 (2) - I suggest you to keep a simple 1/1 rhythm here. There isn't really a reason to
      have this repeatslider. the guitar gets ignored anyways 90% of the time for simplicity reasons +
      the base-line is only on 00:01:409 - 00:01:871 . You should map this with two circles or a 1/1 slider.
  2. Cosmetical Issues:
    1. 00:03:717 (4) - NC this to keep to Combos short for Easy
    2. 00:33:255 (6) - ^
    3. 00:41:101 (6) - ^
    4. 01:56:794 (5) - ^
    5. 02:24:025 (6,1) - Swap NC to match the upbeat

[Normal]
  1. Rhythmical Issues:
    1. 00:16:178 (2) - This personally bothers me. The Vocals stretch over a 1/1 beat which should
      be emphasized. This would also help a bit with simplicity. I'd really love to see a pattern like you did on
      00:19:409 (1,2,3)
    2. 00:17:794 (4,5) - Similar as above, we have vocals that stretch over a 1/1 beat starting on 00:18:025
      I suggest you to use a diffrent rhythm here to make it play out a lot nicer and more harmonic with the song.

      [box=Timeline]

  2. Cosmetical Issues:
    1. 00:09:486 (4) - I suggest you NC this for the simple reason to keep it a tad bit more readable. it
      could get confusing since (5) is rigth inbetween (4,3) which can lead to confusing while clicking.
    2. 00:22:178 (6) - NC to keep the Combos short on easier diffs.
    3. 00:26:332 (3) - You can either NC this or remove NC on 00:24:486 (1) - and add it on
      00:26:332 (6) - for consistency reasons.
    4. 00:34:178 (1) - Remove NC. There isn't really a need to NC here + NC's give player a signifficant boost
      in HP which could render the map too easy.
    5. 00:39:717 (1,2) - Swap NC to fit the musical beat better
    6. 00:47:794 (6,1) - ^
    7. 01:32:794 (5) - NC
    8. 01:48:486 (4) - NC as a new sections starts here (build-up)
    9. 01:50:794 (6,1) - Swap NC - Kiai Beginns here
    10. 01:53:564 (1,2) - Swap NC
    11. 02:01:640 (6,1) - ^
    12. 02:08:333 (1,2) - ^
    13. 02:16:410 (6,1) - ^
    14. 02:20:794 (6,1) - ^
  3. Nazi:
    1. 00:12:025 (4,5) - The sliderankers dont circulate the sliders automatically. Remove the points and
      add them again to get clean round sliders.
    2. 01:31:871 (3) - Move to x:4 y:248 to make a perfect square
    3. 02:27:717 (1) - if my eyes arent shitting me I belive this one goes to x:212 y:196

[Bakari's Hard]
  1. Rhythmical Issues:
    1. 01:26:563 to me personally this should be playable. The vocals here aren't exactly
      'unnoticable' while playing which makes the 1/1 break feel forced and uncomfortable. I used a 1/2
      slider to fill the gap. + NC should be on 01:26:794 (5)
  2. Placement Issues:
    1. 00:36:025 (9,10) - The spacing in the stream isn't entirely equal which lead me to believe there
      would be a rhythmical change here while playing. Try to equalize it ~
  3. Cosmetical Issues:
    1. 00:51:255 (1) - I'm not entirely sure if NC is needed here. I personally would remove it.
    2. 00:59:101 (7,1) - Swap NC for Upbeat
    3. 01:38:794 (1) - To me this should be NC'd. Considering that it is still part of the same pattern while
      01:40:178 (2) - is already a diffrent section with a seperate pattern. In other words swap NC
      on 01:38:794 (1,2) -
riffy
Applied everything, thank you!

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TitleUnicode:Мало Тебя
Artist:SEREBRO
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Creator:Marmowka
Version:Bakari's Hard
Source:
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Krfawy
#ЗАПУЗЫРЕНО
22:17 Marmowka: :<
22:18 Krfawy: hello :3
22:18 Krfawy: а привет как я могу помочь тебе? :3
22:19 Marmowka: Бубликом
22:19 Marmowka: :(
22:19 Krfawy: А Я ЗНАЮ
22:19 Marmowka: Диа :(
22:19 Krfawy: К, давай, сделаем ИРЦ мода о3о
22:20 Marmowka: Давай
22:20 Marmowka: Круто ты по русски говоришь ;3
22:20 Marmowka: Тебе линк?
22:20 *Krfawy is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687766 SEREBRO - MALO TEBYA]
22:20 Krfawy: ? XD
22:21 Marmowka: Да
22:26 Krfawy: скажи, пожалуйста, если они Серебро, нет Serebro?
22:26 Krfawy: ты знаешь, метадата
22:27 Marmowka: Мне sieg говорил ну то такая метадата
22:27 Marmowka: И капсом
22:27 Marmowka: Вот
22:27 Krfawy: K
22:33 Krfawy: 02:09:717 (5) - может клапс на начале слайдера? потому что сейчас так слишко тихо D:
22:34 Krfawy: ты знаешь, второй кяй-тайм такий без хитсалндов D:
22:34 *Krfawy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/687763 SEREBRO - MALO TEBYA [Easy]]
22:35 Marmowka: Хм
22:35 Krfawy: вот очень плохо, знаешь РЦ, правда?
22:36 Marmowka: Нет, щас я поставлю хс
22:36 Marmowka: блин
22:36 Marmowka: толи обновилось так
22:37 Marmowka: мда
22:38 Krfawy: Я не знаю что произошло, ну сейчас так... ну... знаешь как :C
22:39 Marmowka: В плане хз
22:39 Marmowka: ?
22:39 Marmowka: Только
22:39 Krfawy: да?
22:39 Marmowka: В плане хс
22:39 Marmowka: только?
22:40 Marmowka: опеачатка
22:40 Krfawy: a
22:42 Marmowka: Сейчас поставлю все
22:42 Marmowka: -_-
22:43 Krfawy: хорошо
22:43 Krfawy: сделал апдейта?
22:43 Marmowka: Сделаю, в процессе
22:43 Marmowka: :)
22:44 Krfawy: K :3
22:46 Krfawy: За исключением хсов все хорошо в Изе
22:47 Marmowka: Фух
22:47 Marmowka: Заколотило беднягу
22:48 Krfawy: ;w;
22:48 Krfawy: я сказал что нибудь непрекрасного?
22:49 Marmowka: Все отлично :33
22:49 Krfawy: a
22:49 Krfawy: ок ;3
22:50 Krfawy: а ты использовал хс-ксероксов?
22:51 Marmowka: Нет о.о
22:53 Marmowka: Почти доделал
22:53 Marmowka: :)
22:54 Krfawy: ок, позови когда закончи о3о
23:06 Marmowka: Обновил
23:06 Krfawy: o
23:06 Krfawy: ладно о3о
23:14 Krfawy: хорошо, Изя и Хард хорошие
23:14 Krfawy: ну посмотри в нормале во вротой кяй-тайм х'D
23:15 Marmowka: 1 секунду
23:16 Krfawy: K
23:17 Krfawy: только листле :C
23:17 Marmowka: Извини не понял слово
23:17 Marmowka: последнее
23:17 Krfawy: а, и тоже первый кяй-тайм ;w;
23:18 Krfawy: свистки*
23:18 Krfawy: whistles XD
23:18 Marmowka: Понял :D
23:18 Krfawy: извините, мой русский такий хуевый .3.
23:19 Marmowka: :D
23:21 Marmowka: Это исправить я так понял? http://puu.sh/hZcIL.jpg
23:22 Krfawy: да, этот можно оставить
23:26 Marmowka: Извини , скажи еще раз что нужно исправить в нормал?
23:42 Krfawy: a
23:42 Krfawy: sorry stucked
23:43 Krfawy: хитсалнды в кяй-таймах
23:44 Marmowka: Я понял, все
23:44 Marmowka: Свистки лишние
23:45 Krfawy: I mean there are ONLY whistles .3.
23:45 Krfawy: and no claps ;3;
23:45 Krfawy: and drum HSs
23:46 Marmowka: Делаю ._.
23:47 Krfawy: ;w;
00:01 Marmowka: Почти закончил
00:02 Marmowka: Фух
00:02 Krfawy: oooooo
00:03 Marmowka: Обновил
00:04 Krfawy: hihihi хорошо о3о
00:05 Marmowka: all drum claps and whistles fixed :)
00:05 Krfawy: <3
00:07 Krfawy: K
00:07 Krfawy: только одна вещь
00:08 Krfawy: 00:19:178 (7,1) - спейсинг
00:08 Marmowka: А нельзя его так оставить?
00:09 Krfawy: можно XD
00:09 Krfawy: ол гей, сейчас я могу забаблить :3
00:09 Krfawy: ГОТОВАААЯЯЯЯЯ?!!!?!?!?!?!11!!!?
00:09 Marmowka: Kawaii

Удачи!
Topic Starter
Marmowka
@Krfawy: ДАУСЛЫШАНЫМОЛИТВЫ , Спасибо ;)
Gordon123
Го Го ранк)) :) :) :)
Topic Starter
Marmowka
Zzz...
Natsu
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General:

  1. Eh there is a .osb in your folder if you are not using it pls remove
  2. Preview point is unsnapped, not sure if is on pupose or not, anyways snap it to 00:37:409 or 00:37:294 (I prefer 00:37:294 - but up tou you)
Easy:

  1. AR +1 (3), your current one seems really slow to me
  2. 00:35:101 (3,4,1) - If you look at this the spacing is not the same so you have to manually fix this, move 00:36:486 (4) - to x:244 y:104
  3. 02:17:101 (2,3) - I feel this too hard for an easy diff, pls unstack it and use a properly spacing, stack circle --> slider play nice, but circle ---> circle don't play nice in an easy diff.
  4. 02:35:563 (1) - reduce volume gradually in the spinner, actually sound really bad >:
Normal:

  1. AR 5.5 is better here, AR 6 seems too fast for how you mapped this.
  2. 00:18:025 (5,6) - spacing, this is too confused to play and ya I think you should fix this, since it doesn't seems intencional plus make the gameplay really hard
  3. 00:58:640 (5,2) - ugly overlap, if possible try to avoid this
  4. 01:05:101 (3,5) - same as above
  5. 02:02:333 (2,2) - ^
  6. 01:47:101 (1,2,3) - this kind of patterns play bad in a normal diff, avoid hidden objects under slider ends for easy/normal diffs, since it make the gameplay confused for non experienced players
  7. 02:35:563 (1) - reduce volume gradually in the spinner, actually sound really bad >:
Bakari's Hard:

  1. AR 7,5 is better, your map is not that fast and bpm is slow and maybe reduce hp by 1 too
  2. 00:35:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I dont think this is a good idea for spread, also can be considered as a difficulty spike, I suggest you to use repeat sliders instead of the stream.
Let me know when you and bakari reply to this
Topic Starter
Marmowka
@<strong>Natsu</strong>: I fiх all, eхcept bakari.

Thank you

mods

Natsu wrote:

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General:

  1. Eh there is a .osb in your folder if you are not using it pls remove
  2. Preview point is unsnapped, not sure if is on pupose or not, anyways snap it to 00:37:409 or 00:37:294 (I prefer 00:37:294 - but up tou you)
Easy:

  1. AR +1 (3), your current one seems really slow to me
  2. 00:35:101 (3,4,1) - If you look at this the spacing is not the same so you have to manually fix this, move 00:36:486 (4) - to x:244 y:104
  3. 02:17:101 (2,3) - I feel this too hard for an easy diff, pls unstack it and use a properly spacing, stack circle --> slider play nice, but circle ---> circle don't play nice in an easy diff.
  4. 02:35:563 (1) - reduce volume gradually in the spinner, actually sound really bad >:
Normal:

  1. AR 5.5 is better here, AR 6 seems too fast for how you mapped this.
  2. 00:18:025 (5,6) - spacing, this is too confused to play and ya I think you should fix this, since it doesn't seems intencional plus make the gameplay really hard
  3. 00:58:640 (5,2) - ugly overlap, if possible try to avoid this
  4. 01:05:101 (3,5) - same as above
  5. 02:02:333 (2,2) - ^
  6. 01:47:101 (1,2,3) - this kind of patterns play bad in a normal diff, avoid hidden objects under slider ends for easy/normal diffs, since it make the gameplay confused for non experienced players
  7. 02:35:563 (1) - reduce volume gradually in the spinner, actually sound really bad >:
Bakari's Hard:

  1. AR 7,5 is better, your map is not that fast and bpm is slow and maybe reduce hp by 1 too
  2. 00:35:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I dont think this is a good idea for spread, also can be considered as a difficulty spike, I suggest you to use repeat sliders instead of the stream.
Let me know when you and bakari reply to this
riffy
Мне мало-мало-мало тебя.

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Natsu
ya looks fine now <3 GL
Topic Starter
Marmowka
Thank you all , I'm happen :lol:
ddfgit
МНЕ МАЛО МАЛО ЕДЫ
Topic Starter
Marmowka

ddfgit wrote:

МНЕ МАЛО МАЛО ЕДЫ
Кушай зая, кушай ;3
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